grumd wrote:

Hi.

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  00:02:245 (3) - The biggest problem about these sliders is that the distance between (3) and (4) is the same as the distance between (3) and (2). I'll refer to basic osu! standard guideline "Beat placement should follow the time-distance equality rule". So, to be sure nobody misunderstands your rhythm, nobody thinks that (4) is another 1/4, either make (2) and (3) closer (http://puu.sh/57qv7.jpg) or (3) and (4) farther (http://puu.sh/57qx7.jpg)
  00:03:900 (3,4) - Same here.
  00:05:969 (4) - Same here.
  00:07:831 (6) - Same here, even though it doesn't seem to be too close, still the heads of sliders are close enough. You should separate 1/4 combo (00:06:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) from 1/2 combo (00:07:831 (6,1) - ). Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1077406
  00:43:314 (2,3) - This is a quite bad rhythm. You're not used to play offbeat 1/4 sliders. Here they both start at blue tick, which is not that hard as white and red. 00:43:418 - for example, at this point, at the white tick, sounds a bass sound, which should have been emphasized, but it is placed on a slider end, when player doesn't hit a button. In this case, you can try these rhythms instead: http://puu.sh/57qPe.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQa.jpg http://puu.sh/57qQz.jpg
  00:44:969 (2,3) - Same
  00:51:280 - I really doubt that this speedup is needed here. I don't think the song gets 1.5 times faster or harder in kiai, it barely gets a 10% increase in tensity. I'd not make it 1.5x, but 1.2x at maximum.
  01:04:004 - This is again a blue-tick problem. You start a stream from an offbeat note, so it's quite hard to understand when to start presing buttons after the repeating slider. This should look much better: http://puu.sh/57r17.jpg
  01:11:142 - This slowdown looks even worse than the speedup. It feels that you just have set the kiai end artificially, since almost nothing changes in the song itself. But you make a huge difference in the SV. If you want to keep the speedup, let it last until 01:24:487 - , same for kiai time.
  01:17:245 (1) - Same blue tick stuff here as at 01:11:142 -

Everything should be fixed But I'm not sure whether I applied it correctly. But I think it was correctly Changed kia time to 1.20x
Easy is good, no problems there :3

xChippy wrote:

Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....

grumd wrote:

Hi.

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  00:49:625 - Maybe follow synth instead of vocals here? It has more interesting rhythm: http://puu.sh/57sdh.jpg it was already like this before, but i changed my mind and preferred not use blue tick here, so no change

xChippy wrote:

Thx for the support :3/! But I'm kinda starting to doubt whether this will be ranked....

jonathanlfj wrote:

good guy dadkun here to save the day

dkun wrote:

Okay, re-bubble!

Just kidding, have a heart.

dkun wrote:

Okay, re-bubble!

Just kidding, have a heart.

happy623 wrote:

gratz o/! (late

koreapenguin wrote:

<3