14:21 Momochikun: hai irre
14:21 Irreversible: hey momochi
14:21 Irreversible: huh why aren't you in my fl.. lol
14:21 Momochikun: well.. i love you same as i love your mods.. then, can i ask for irc ?
14:21 Momochikun: lol
14:22 Irreversible: k
14:22 Irreversible: added
14:22 Irreversible: yes you can ^^ you can be my 200th kd.
14:22 Momochikun: lol
14:22 Irreversible: btw, QAT has some new mods for you
14:22 Momochikun: oh.. i haven't check it.. okay i'll check it soon
14:22 *Momochikun is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313130 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - My Sweet Lady]
14:22 Momochikun: if you don't mind <3
14:23 Irreversible: yup. ^^ I'll send you the maps of QAT
14:24 Momochikun: k
14:25 Irreversible: i'll pm them
14:25 Momochikun: no need to bother.. i can check it on the document
14:25 Momochikun:
14:25 Irreversible: ah it's wrong there
14:25 Irreversible: i want to change smth but i forgot my password
14:25 Momochikun: wut o.o
14:25 Momochikun: orz
14:26 Irreversible: sorry :b
14:26 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313130 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - My Sweet Lady [Normal]]
14:27 Momochikun: let's go ~
14:27 Irreversible: 00:20:536 (3) - i would rotate this by something like 12°. currently it seems a bit odd, if you apply this it'll follow the flow much better
14:28 Momochikun: sounds nice.. k
14:28 Irreversible: 00:25:758 (4) - move this a bit closer to slider end of 3 to keep consistency DS of those 00:23:981 (2,3) -
14:28 Irreversible: a bit nazi but w/e
14:29 Momochikun: yeah
14:30 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53KRW.jpg try to get this? 00:33:869 (1,2,3) - a triangle pattern looks less random and makes your map neater. it also affects the gameplay abit, it's much more smooth if there are specific patterns most of the time.
14:31 Irreversible: 00:38:314 (3) - i would make this on the same axis as 00:37:425 (1) - , so it would look like this:
http://puu.sh/53KUz.jpg14:32 Momochikun: k
14:33 Momochikun: but i disagree with the triangle one.. i think it's fine
14:33 Irreversible: 00:48:758 (2) - move this one to 152 56 and you'll get a smoother line, it doesn't look that edgy
14:33 Irreversible: alright
14:34 Momochikun: aha smoother line.. nice catch
14:34 Irreversible: 00:49:869 (3,4,1) - I kinda don't like these three sliders ... they really don't compliment each other. it's curvy straight and straight again
14:34 Irreversible: 00:51:647 (1) - if you make this one curvy isntead, the whole build would look much .. friendlier xDD
14:34 Momochikun: but.. blanket o.o
14:35 Irreversible: 00:50:981 (4) - and so this one gets emphasized more (the only one straight)
14:35 Irreversible: i wouldn't care about it here
14:35 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53L39.jpg looks good imo
14:35 Irreversible: 00:53:647 (3,1) - compare; you have curvy straight curvy here as well
14:36 Irreversible: 01:07:425 (3) - move 1 grid up to avoid going over the line
http://puu.sh/53L5e.jpg14:36 Irreversible: 01:08:536 (4) - move the white point to the slider tick to improve this blanket. this one is looking weird if you leave it, not as the other.
14:37 Irreversible: tell me when to stop xD
14:37 Momochikun: you're too fast.. orz
14:37 Irreversible: i stop haha tell me when you have a question
14:37 Momochikun: but yeah.. fixed
14:38 Irreversible: you only have to fix if you agree, i don't force you
14:38 Momochikun: yeah i know
14:39 Irreversible: good let's go on then
14:40 Irreversible: 01:15:536 (4,3) - i've testplayed it before and i thought this overlap looks a bit weird to me. to beh onest: 01:14:647 (3,4) - thois whole thing bothers me, the flow is .. not round but not straight
14:40 Irreversible: well, i like things like that:
14:40 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53LfH.jpg this follows the flow very good, but it means that you would have to replace kinda many things.
14:40 Irreversible: so it's up to you.
14:41 Momochikun: hm.. i think it's fine
14:41 Irreversible: 01:31:647 (2,3) - press on this and move them to 322 175 to fix 2 blankets at once
14:41 Momochikun: that eyes lol
14:41 Irreversible: that eyes? D:
14:42 Momochikun: hmm i mean.. this pattern ()
14:42 Irreversible: ah
14:42 Irreversible: well it looks odd
14:42 Irreversible: it doesn't fit to your map
14:42 Momochikun: lol..
14:42 Irreversible: because look
14:42 Irreversible: until now, you always have smooth stuff and nothing with a really tight angle
14:42 Irreversible: except there
14:43 Irreversible: and the song is kinda the same so i expected .. something similar u know? :3
14:43 Irreversible: you can think about it.
14:43 Momochikun: that graceful
14:43 Momochikun: anyway.. lol
14:43 Irreversible: o: ?
14:43 Momochikun: nothing.. let's go ~
14:44 Irreversible: 01:48:981 (1,2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/53LoA.jpg stick to simple squares like this. if you apply them, your maps will look much more neat
14:45 Irreversible: 01:52:092 (1,2,3,4) - and for the end maybe something like this:
http://puu.sh/53Lqz.jpg ? :3
14:45 Irreversible: that's just aesthetic stuff, if you don't like it it's fine :3
14:46 Momochikun: yo
14:46 Irreversible: rhythm is fine, and placing is better now if you applied this stuff
14:46 Irreversible: ^-^~
14:46 Momochikun:
14:46 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313128 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - My Sweet Lady [Hard]]
14:47 Irreversible: 00:19:203 (6) - this finish seems overused, remove it please
14:47 Momochikun: um.. if i change that.. it means i should change it in all part of hard and insane.. -w-
14:48 Momochikun: it not overused imo o.o
14:48 Irreversible: finish is there to emphasize stuff not to use it like so many times ;w;
14:48 Irreversible: you can leave it in the kiai
14:48 Irreversible: but at the begin it's too much.
14:48 Momochikun: i'll think that again..
14:49 Irreversible: i can see many blanket mistakes, but i don't wanna point all of those out
14:49 Irreversible: can you fix them yourself afterwards?
14:50 Irreversible: 00:19:425 (1) - move this one to 232 324 to get a pattern again, the jump might be increased but imo it looks ways better
14:50 Momochikun: yes..
14:50 Irreversible: 00:20:092 (3) - i'd rotate this one by 6°, smoother line again same as normal
14:50 Momochikun: hmm.. it's too big.. orz
14:51 Irreversible: then move 3
14:51 Momochikun: k
14:51 Irreversible: 00:19:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - something here has to be done
14:51 Irreversible: it looks a bit untidy
14:51 Momochikun: um.. that'
14:51 Momochikun: a kind of jump style on my hard xD
14:51 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53LEA.jpg 00:20:758 (5,6) - make sure those are in a line
14:51 Momochikun: k
14:52 Irreversible: hm, i got an idea
14:52 Irreversible: 00:19:203 (6) - why don't you stack this with 00:19:869 (2) - and move 00:19:425 (1) - to 232 324, so you have a stack instead of a jump which also fits, and makes it a bit easier too, because i think the gap between normal > hard is really big
14:53 Irreversible: 00:22:758 (3,4,5) - how about moving this a bit to the left so it's at 104 248? the zick-zack pattern seems cool to me :3 i prefer it to straight, boring stuff
14:54 Irreversible: 00:27:647 (3,4,5) -
http://puu.sh/53LKp.jpg compare yours to this once, you can see that mine goes a bit curvy, to fit the slidershape best.
14:54 Irreversible: 00:31:869 (5) - 276 272, same reason as said before
14:56 Momochikun: okay.. fixed
14:56 Momochikun: (5) i move to something that align correctly to next slider
14:56 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53LQ8.jpg 00:33:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - what do you think of this? It has an improved flow and the things don't look to tight together, which is very important imo
14:57 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53LSc.jpg 00:36:536 (2,3,4,1) - and as a further suggestion i have this, so you don't have too much trouble.
14:57 Irreversible: 00:36:981 (1) - also, if you put a jump there (which fits because of the claps) i would apply a NC here.
14:58 Momochikun: i wouldn't use jump.. >.<
14:59 Momochikun: and.. i prefer my old style xD
14:59 Irreversible: well but you should apply the rest imo, but you should change this part
14:59 Irreversible: it looks crumpy
14:59 Irreversible: uhm.. ok
15:00 Irreversible: 01:45:869 (3,4,5,1,2) - make something like this then, it's the same part.
15:00 Irreversible: :b
15:00 Irreversible: and it looks better.
15:01 Momochikun: oh.. that one.. i fixed it
15:01 Momochikun: lol
15:01 Irreversible: 01:17:869 (5) - move a bit up to fix the line
15:02 Momochikun: k
15:03 Irreversible: well mostly the hard looks good, but you should work a bit on the crumpy parts as said above
15:03 Irreversible: but there aren't too many.
15:03 Irreversible: and the rhythm is okay
15:03 Momochikun: yay
15:03 Irreversible: you should take care of triangle stuff, it makes your map much neater
15:03 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313129 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - My Sweet Lady [Mochi]]
15:06 Irreversible: First impression: okayish, but you can definetly work on the polishment. that's the main point i guess, it flows pretty well.. the jumps might be a bit big, but that's not my business i guess uhm.. yeah
15:06 Momochikun: i copied wcx's sister noise insane diff for that diff.. lol
15:07 Momochikun: the BPM it's quite low.. so i think big jump wouldn't bother much
15:07 Irreversible: wait a second XD
15:07 Momochikun: i mean the style.. not the whole mapset io.o
15:09 Momochikun: If you get an IRC mod from me, please tell me when I should stop writing, I tend to spam you with suggestions.
15:09 Momochikun: ^LOL
15:09 Irreversible: XDDDDDD
15:09 Irreversible: i wrote this becuase of you xDDD
15:09 Momochikun: i'm legend
15:09 Irreversible: to be honest, everyone told me
15:09 Irreversible: irc: omg you're too fast can you wait
15:09 Irreversible: yes o.o
15:09 Irreversible: irc: omg wait
15:09 Irreversible: D:
15:09 Irreversible: irc: YOU'RE SO FAST?!!
15:09 Irreversible: ok i wait D:
15:09 Irreversible: xDD
15:10 Momochikun: i'm ready... let's go
15:10 Irreversible: wait. xD
15:10 Momochikun: oh.. okay :3
15:13 Irreversible: kk we can go on xD
15:14 Momochikun: letsu go xD
15:14 Irreversible: huh
15:14 Irreversible: somehow your map looks so different now
15:14 Momochikun: o.o
15:15 Irreversible: i'm sure it was CS 5?
15:15 Irreversible: omg. XD
15:15 Momochikun: CS 5 ?
15:15 Momochikun: woah
15:15 Irreversible: the circles seemed so small, ok i'm stupid
15:15 Irreversible: /np
15:15 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313129 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - My Sweet Lady [Mochi]]
15:15 Irreversible: it was this map right?
15:15 Momochikun: yeah
15:16 Irreversible: 00:25:758 (4) - please move this one a bit down. this touches the HP bar i assume and that's something i can't stand at all
15:16 Momochikun: i should change the CS to 7 /sh1t
15:16 Irreversible: even if it's rankable, change it please
15:16 Irreversible: 00:26:758 (1) - check your insane of those: you can see 00:26:536 (7,8) - this DS is bigger than 00:26:647 (8,1) -
15:17 Momochikun: k
15:17 Momochikun: omg..
15:18 Momochikun: fixed ><
15:18 Irreversible: 00:47:647 (4,5,6) -
15:19 Irreversible: 00:47:647 (4,5,6) - remember the triangleee
15:19 Momochikun: o.o
15:19 Momochikun: i changed the spacing a bit.. lol
15:20 Irreversible: oh wait
15:20 Irreversible: i have a screen
15:20 Irreversible:
http://puu.sh/53MFF.jpg15:20 Irreversible: haha
15:21 Momochikun: i changed it opposite o3o
15:21 Irreversible: ih yeah that 's good
15:22 Irreversible: 00:58:758 (1) - here as wel
15:22 Irreversible: well*
15:22 Irreversible: just change that through the whole map please :3
15:22 Irreversible: the map overall is enjoyable just those untidy things
15:24 Irreversible: and i kinda like the flow as well
15:24 Momochikun: k fix
15:24 Irreversible: sorry i instantly don't have ideas anymore lol
15:24 Momochikun: lolz
15:24 Irreversible: we can do it like this
15:24 Irreversible: after you've fixed untidy stuff
15:24 Momochikun: you should apply for the Bat application
15:24 Irreversible: ask me for a recheck in insane?