もちもち
yoHere's the mod you requested like, 200 years ago.
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[General]
oh god this song is amazing with NC mod
I'm not too sure about mapping the intro as you've done in all of your difficulties. This isn't a very long map, and having players click only a couple circles then have to sit through two fairly large breaks every time they play your map seems a bit mean ;_;it's a pending man..
[Mochi]
00:22:536 (3) - For things like this, consider adding a new combo here. In my opinion it makes the 00:21:425 (1,2,3) rhythm which you use all throughout your map much easier to read. Splitting this combo like this would also match your transition from vocal to percussive rhythm, and makes this section look more organized and color-coordinated. This suggestion applies for the rest of these sorts of patterns in your map, like at 01:19:425 (3) for example.
seems okay to pointed the anti jump.. added00:47:425 (3) - Consider stacking onto the end of 00:46:758 (2) . Not doing so seems inconsistent with the pause stacks you use throughout the rest of your map, and makes similar-spaced 1/2 timings in this section, such as at 00:56:314 (3,4,5,6) , potentially confusing.
em.. i think it's fine..01:00:314 (6) - This might be overmapping. Sometimes overmapping is fine as long as it's for the purpose of making the map play more smoothly, but here it's really awkward to hit this triple and only hear two snare hits. You can fix this in two ways, I think:
- 1. Delete the note at 01:00:314 (6) so 01:00:425 (7,1) becomes a double
2. Add a drum-normal hitsound to 01:00:314 (6) (Shift+Q) to force the audio of 3 snare hits.
<The first option is the safest; the second option is more stable for the flow.
01:00:536 (1) - Consider extending by 1/4 and deleting the 01:00:981 (2) circle. Currently the end of this slider lands on nothing, and plays somewhat awkwardly. I think you'd match the drum rhythm here better if you made this slider release at 01:00:981 .
i want to make the doubled slider effect here.. i think it's making much sense01:28:869 (1,2) - This is a somewhat unexpected 3/4 gap. I think this would play better if you turned 01:28:869 (1) into a 1/2 slider, or stacked (2) on (1) to at least make the spacing more readable, though I think the first option is much, much better.
idk.. i think it's clearly readable01:40:981 (5,6,7,8,1) - Nitpicky but the curve of (1) really doesn't fit well with the curve of the previous stream. Maybe delete the midpoint of (1) to make it a straight slider?
changed curved a bit.. lolIn general, your streams could be neater for this difficulty. Some of them aren't noticeable but there are a few which you should consider making neater using the
Convert slider to stream... option.
- 00:36:981 (7,8,9,10,1)
- 00:58:314 (3,4,5,6,1) - Straighten this, maybe
- 01:19:647 (4,5,6,7,1) - This curve flattens near the middle
- 01:32:981 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The angle on (2,3,4) is really weird; (4,5,6) is straight and (7,8,9) looks like it's bent upwards a bit? Just remake this using Convert slider to stream... with a single curved slider.
^ rearranged all01:25:203 (1,2) - Mutual blanket?
nice01:25:203 (1) - midpoint 279,242, endpoint 210,289.
on similiar way ~01:25:647 (2) - midpoint 254,355, endpoint 200,360.
^[Hard]
01:18:314 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is a bit disorienting. Skipping over two vocal syllables at 01:18:536 and 01:18:647 feels strange when you've been following the vocals up until now. Consider using a repeat slider:
This repeat slider matches the percussion well and avoids the potential confusion of having two 1/1 stacks here.
harder to the last01:32:536 (1,2) - Same as above, though I'd especially recommend it here because of how strange 01:33:203 (3,4,5,6) would feel after a 1/1 pause.
rearranged pattern here[Normal]
01:29:758 (4) - endpoint to 333,295 to fix this blanket. okay
01:43:203 (4) - midpoint 73,199, endpoint 145,273 to fix this blanket. good..
[Closing]
Overall, great work! The rhythm you've chosen to work with is really interesting, and you've handled it quite well in a way that plays smoothly. There aren't any outstanding issues as far as I can tell, though I do personally think that your patterns could be arranged a bit more neatly.
Good luck!
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