Blue Dragon wrote:
SPOILERI'm presenting these points as someone who
can play the map properly and
has the skills/experience to know what's good. Any troll posts like 'omg but ur maps are le shitty XD' or 'omg bat noobs cant pley' will be ignored.
[Scorpiour]
- AR10 is kinda forced in here. There are no jumps that are unreadable with AR9. Honestly, it seems like you're only using AR10 because of the self-proclaimed "pros" that don't know how to play anything AR9 or below.
- 01:10:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - You can hear it on 25%. It's 1/2. You can not deny it. It's overmapping. Not even gonna argue about it, it's unrankable.
- 01:14:666 (9) - Why isn't this 1/2? Doesn't even make sense rhythmically.
- 01:17:435 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - There aren't 1/4 sounds here. There are actually barely any 1/2s. Unrankable as well. Also, it plays very badly.
All of the 1/4 streams that don't have 1/4 sound in the music are unrankable. - 03:45:358 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Plays horribly bad and doesn't make any sense while playing.
- 04:18:942 (1) - I'm... really unsure about this slider. I'm pretty sure it's unrankable but needs a lot of discussion.
- 04:30:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16 until the rest of the stream) - Plays horribly bad, it's only clearable by the best players there and isn't any fun to smash your keyboard hopelessly. May want to replace some notes with repeating kicksliders.
- 05:06:127 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - *nazi* stream isn't properly aligned, cough
- 05:46:280 (1,2,3,4) - The sliderends don't follow the song.
The end is just a grambled mess of 1/2 sliders that don't follow the song. I'm being honest here. osu! is a rhythm game, not a "1/2 tap away + spam your keyboard when you want" game. If you want a good map, then follow the song properly.
Just pointing out:
01:17:435 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - There aren't 1/4 sounds here. There are actually barely any 1/2s. Unrankable as well. Also, it plays very badly.
This should make sense. Please consider making some change.
those wrote:
SPOILER不服不要玩
If what you said in
p/2492499 you should just pull a Justice Breaker. It's hard for anyone to feel better when all you do is shoot down suggestions to improve your map and your way of mapping.
I'm not a moderator, but I believe that you are not making actual sense to this thread. Please be more contributing.
Other things to mention:
01:06:589 (1) - it will be better if more symmetric. try this:
352,195,66589,6,0,B|253:191|182:146|182:146|216:114|216:114|204:69|204:69|238:37|238:37|226:-7|226:-7|310:-8|396:41,1,540
01:16:627 (9,10,1) - doesn't make sense, tbh. stack 01:16:627 (9,10,1) - or delete 10 should be much better.
01:26:897 (1,2) - I support the idea that you change this two into 1/2 sliders. won't hurt but makes more sense imo, since there is no 1/4 beat in background.
02:06:127 (3,4,5) - it will feel better if you make a stop, since the piano (?) is more intense. Continue on bass may interrupt the player's thoughts.
02:06:820 (5,6) - it's ok, but I don't really like the feeling of this 3/4 slider.
02:40:743 - add some more green lines from here to make a crescendo.
03:03:762 (7) - fmpov, deleting this and add NC to 03:03:820 (8) - should play better. this creates a better sense of sections.
03:38:897 (4,5,6,7) - unlike BD, I think it should be ok.
03:45:358 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I agree with the point that this plays bad as it would be better if every group is 4/2 instead of 3/2. It is not unrankable, though.
04:18:942 (1) - I understand this, but it would be better if you replace it with a spinner. Player won't be delighted or get any rest holding a single slider for too long.
04:28:742 - you should have forgot adding claps here. even if you were intended, it is not deniable that adding claps to this bar sounds a lot better.
04:30:588 - I agree with BD that it is not a good idea anyway to p*ss off the player with this big-money stream, on nearly 3/4 way of this superlong gauntlet. However the choice remains the mapper, you can decide.
06:03:588 (3) - that's weird tbh. why not using a simple 1/2 slider which sounds better and plays better?
Anyway don't give up. Time shall tell the truth.