Hi; modding by request lol
Just wanting to note that I'll mod Kuria's diffs in Indonesian *rolls*
*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
Map-nya udah oke banget ah w
Good luck on the way
Just wanting to note that I'll mod Kuria's diffs in Indonesian *rolls*
*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.
>General
- Err, pake title kanji (自由の翼) buat kolom Title di map ini?
- 00:41:796 (3,4) - Err, gak apa-apa ini dua di-stack? 157,5 BPM loh; khawatirnya yang main susah ngebaca pola kayak gini (karena yang biasa main Easy itu pemain baru)...
- 00:52:844 (1,2) - IMO, gak pas banget kalau pola combo di sini ngikut pattern, jadi bagusan swap NC aja buat ngikutin stanza-nya... (Berlaku ke semua yang kayak gini, btw.)
- 01:09:606 (2) - Mundurin setengah ketukan (ke 01:09:415) biar ngikut sama vokal? Suara instrumen di 01:09:606 gak gitu jelas sih, jadi terasa aneh kalau disuruh nekan circle di sana.
- 01:11:510 (3) - NC ini? Pas aja sama lagunya... Susah dijelasin lol
- 01:14:558 (1,3) - Swap NC untuk ngejaga konsistensi pola combo?
- 01:17:606 (1) - Lalu remove NC di sini? Alasannya... udah jelas mungkin? (Kalau yang 01:19:129 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) sih pas deh~)
- 00:31:891 (3) - Uh, NC ini? Aneh aja, soalnya dari awal NC diletakin tiap awal stanza.
- 01:07:320 (3,6) - Swap NC di sini? IMO gak perlu ada NC di (3); lagian lama combo 01:06:367 (1,2) juga kependekan (3/2 ketukan doang)...
- 01:22:939 (1,3) - ^
- 00:31:891 (1) - Err, coba tarik anchor point di tengah satu grid ke kiri, lalu yang di repeat sana satu ke kanan biar 00:31:701 (6,1) kelihatan lebih rapi?
- 00:37:986 (1,2) - Slidernya terlalu melengkung IMO. Flow di sini jadi gak enak gara-gara bentuk dan posisi keduanya gini, jadi paling tidak... mungkin (2) dinaikin sampai seenggaknya dikit lebih tinggi dari posisi ekor (1)?
- 01:25:225 (1,2) - ^
- Pattern kayak 00:57:797 (3,4,5,6) sama 00:59:321 (1,2,3,4) buat saya dikit terlalu sering dipake lol. Cuma kerasa aneh sih; sebenernya nggak ada masalah, pengen ngomong aja.
- 00:26:844 - Kayaknya perlu ditambahin satu circle lagi deh di sini... Kerasa kosong banget sumpah, dan malah bikin kesan kalau 00:26:654 (4,5) itu jaraknya cuma 1/4 ketukan doang.
- Your diff is mostly fine (and this is probably the easiest 0108-labeled diff that you've made ever lol), but the combo pattern looks pretty inconsistent. It can be an NC every stanza, and then every two stanzas. Those NCs that are placed at the beginning of a jumpy patterns are okay, but not for those that aren't placed at one. To simplify this: Just make the combo pattern consistent, either by only placing NCs every one or two stanzas.
Map-nya udah oke banget ah w
Good luck on the way