Kuria wrote:

for anything regarding with timings, i'm decided to keep it as the current one for a time being, because i'm quite sure that this one is accurate enough already to be played (bunch of pros 99% acc's the insane with dt)

thanks for your check though, i'll keep it on my consideration :3

eldnl wrote:

It shouldn't be accurate enough, it should be perfect!

Trainer_Gold wrote:

Why in the world this is not ranked.

AnreFM wrote:

[EASY]

00:19:701 (1) - Avoid overlap and Make a neater blanket by moving it up a few grid. on x332 y316 to be precise orz sorry but this overlap is intended, at least i'm not covering the slider's top
00:41:796 (3,4) - Avoid stacks on easy? ill keep it like this for a while, i don't think this stack is too hard to play for the newbies

[NORMAL]

00:56:272 (2) - Put the repeat on 00:56:748 instead? more fit with the music the repeat part will be not fit if i do that :3
01:03:891 (1) - ^ Put the repeat on 01:04:367 to make it fit better with the vocal? same as above


[HARD]

00:37:986 (1) - ctrl + G? Better flow dont think so, i think make it round like the current one is better xD

Trainer_Gold wrote:

Why in the world this is not ranked.

yuuki0310 wrote:

thx taiko mod rep

...sorry this bad map...

this is mod Unreasonable

sorry... orz

(nokds)

beatmap Remake plese...

As this Can not Ranked...

fight:3

1. 00:03:250 (12) - overmapped. 1/6 is not required. i won't mention again other part.
2. 00:45:606 - SV 1.5x... felt overkill as an accent. try 1.3x

1. 00:00:970 (2,3) - del. 1/3+finisher is so hard for beginner. i won't mention again other part.
2. 00:45:606 - SV 1.0x

Naryuga wrote:

I really want to hear why you say "this Can not Ranked", thanks ;3

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue

[Easy]
01:02:367 (2) - how about ending it 1/2 later? up to you tho naah, wanna keep the beatpattern here xD


[Hard]
00:31:891 (1,2) - hm, how about using soft whistle here to fit the piano? feels good imo ~ no, i feel this part is still quite loud so im prefer use the normal one

[Insane]

00:31:892 (1,2) - same as Hard same xD

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~


Insane

1. 00:55:321 (4,5) - increase a little spacing here..? about 1.25x nah, dont wanna make some jumpy stuff on tat spot
2. 01:07:892 (5) - ^ this for about 1.35xsame

Hard

1. 01:26:367 (3) - remove this note..dont wanna there's a beat played from bg voice there D:

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
where is your approachcircle.png? i'm use the default one for this, i'm do this on guren no yumiya and im not find any problem with it b4 so i guess it's ok to do it again now :3

[Hard]
01:25:225 (1,2,3,4) - the sudden use of 2.0x spacing is gonna throw alot of people off, how bout 1.5x here instead? i do this to avoid overlap on 01:25:034 (6,2) - , i guess it's not that bad since this is the strongest part ;3;

[Insane]
00:26:368 (3,4) - why not use some circles here? poses some extra challenge to rhythm grasping and gives a good preparation for the 5-let at 00:26:940 (5,6,7,8,1) cuz i prefer using 2 slapping slider like this instead 2 tap pattern, i feel this way is more smooth lol

00:45:226 (1,2,3,4,5) - do a manual stack or compressed stream here, since stack leniency shifts all the circles to the left which is flow breaking changed that part a bit, i still not sure with manually stacked it since the effect of the flow breaking isn't so vital even by the stack leniency
01:26:559 (5) - maybe its just me, but this flows better for me if its placed at the buttom of the screen, e.g. x:172 y:284 just you xD, i prefer the pattern goes up from down like this instead

Hinsvar wrote:

>General

1. Err, pake title kanji (自由の翼) buat kolom Title di map ini?nanti, di warnet ga bisa nulis kanji lol

>Easy

1. 01:14:558 (1,3) - Swap NC untuk ngejaga konsistensi pola combo? nah
2. 01:17:606 (1) - Lalu remove NC di sini? Alasannya... udah jelas mungkin? (Kalau yang 01:19:129 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2) sih pas deh~)g begitu yakin, nggak deh orz

>Hard

1. 00:37:986 (1,2) - Slidernya terlalu melengkung IMO. Flow di sini jadi gak enak gara-gara bentuk dan posisi keduanya gini, jadi paling tidak... mungkin (2) dinaikin sampai seenggaknya dikit lebih tinggi dari posisi ekor (1)?sengaja lol, sebenarnya aku rada cinta sama slider tipe begini xD
2. 01:25:225 (1,2) - ^podo le

>Insane

1. Pattern kayak 00:57:797 (3,4,5,6) sama 00:59:321 (1,2,3,4) buat saya dikit terlalu sering dipake lol. Cuma kerasa aneh sih; sebenernya nggak ada masalah, pengen ngomong aja.emang di bagian ini kusengajain pake pattern itu buat full perkusi, gantinya di 01:03:891 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - ikutin vokal :3
2. 00:26:844 - Kayaknya perlu ditambahin satu circle lagi deh di sini... Kerasa kosong banget sumpah, dan malah bikin kesan kalau 00:26:654 (4,5) itu jaraknya cuma 1/4 ketukan doang. udah kucoba sejak awal, dan hasilnya jadi rada ga masuk akal pas dimaenin jadi kuhapus lol.
   ga kosong2 banget kok, lagian disitu juga volumenya jadi kecilan dikit jadi ga terlalu memaksa buat full beatpattern

1. Still, the timing is iffy. It would be nice if you can invite a timing expert to check it.

Aoko wrote:

Good luck Kuria! Looking forward to the lyrics SB if ever your planning to put it ♥

Shingeki no Kuria

ykcarrot wrote:

Downbeats go wrong in intro section. The first offset should be 00:01:265, not 00:00:824.

LaceWingfield wrote:

intended to mod but dunno what to mod here
anyways just have my star.
and rank soon
*shooting star* (?)