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red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.
[General]
gl
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.
[General]
- tags are not same every diffs. Normal had garbage characters.
- source: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
many maps do not have its source. however it is wrong, "toaru (とある)" is one word. but I guess if you think do not need it, be able to not change. - soft-hitclap1.wav and soft-hitwhistle1.wav are unused? if these sounds are unused, must remove.
- 00:10:195 (1) - remove clap and add drum-hitwhistle at end.
would be better to use it because instruments do not have sound like soft-hitclap. - 00:11:649 (2) - ^
- 00:21:831 (1) - why does not this note follow vocal? there is vocal at 00:22:377.
- 00:21:831 (1) - 3/2 slider and a repeat
- 00:35:468 - add finish. there is sound what is same as 00:34:922 - . so would be better to do it.
- 00:59:286 - I guess this whistle is mistake... that did not exist on 01:02:195 - . in addition, not have strange instrument than other parts. so I think should remove it.
- 01:05:104 - ^
- 01:15:468 (3) - extend end to 01:16:558? I felt this end is little early. this vocal was extended, so may be hard to understand correctly the end.
if you worry this suggestion, you can also extend to 01:16:740 - because there is instrument. - 01:22:922 (1) - why does not follow vocal? should be end at 01:29:468 - imo.
- 00:02:013 - add whistle. because there is sound what is same as 00:01:468 - and 00:04:922 - .
- 00:14:195 (3,4) - why did you stack here? imo, not makes sense to stop flow because .
try this - 00:21:831 (1) - rhythm suggestion
- 00:21:831 (1) - circle
- 00:22:013 (2) - 1/1 slider
- 00:35:468 (3,2) - (nazi) I think this overlap is not good appearance.
- 00:41:286 (5) - slider end at 00:41:831 - . would be better to follow instrument in this map.
- 00:43:649 (3,4,1) - (nazi) not be symmetry...
- 01:26:558 (1,2,1,2,3) - (DS) why did you use x1.1? this is quiet part, so at least x1.1 would not fit here. should use x1.0.
- 00:17:831 (6,7,8) - three circles are bit hard in quiet part imo. would be better to be more easier.
- change (6,7) to 1/2 slider.
- 00:32:013 (5,6,7) - follow instrument here?
- 00:32:013 (5) - circle
- 00:32:195 (6) - circle
- 00:32:377 (7) - circle
- 00:32:558 (8) - circle
- 00:32:740 (9) - 1/1 slider
maybe double stack fits this section.
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/48063 - 00:50:922 (1,2,3) - add jump here. this section have most volume on this song, so it makes sense to do it imo.
- 01:28:013 (4) - forgot to add NC?
- 00:06:195 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large on this melody. this part is bit quiet, so would be better to change to be smaller.
like this size - 00:08:377 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
- 00:22:377 (2,3) - ctrl+G ?
gl