1. Hard (4.77 stars, 203 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 301 notes)
3. Rainbow's Normal (3.95 stars, 123 notes)
4. ReySHeL's Muzu (4.82 stars, 345 notes)
5. ReySHeL's Oni (4.83 stars, 406 notes)
6. yanlu's Easy (2.87 stars, 95 notes)

Nadeku wrote:

Hi hi, timing check o/
Hmm, i think your timing is already good. But i notice something that you should change.

First, your bg is stretched from original image, and tbh, it doesnt look good. Dont force 4:3 image to be 16:9 image. Just use your original image. Its looks more good. Fixed
Second, kiai time should start at 00:53:831 - because the downbeat is at that time.Fixed
Third, i feel your hard is almost as easy as normal, try to make it more harder. I suggest HP Drain, AR, OD +1 Fixed

Have fun mapping ^^

neonat wrote:

Insane

00:32:558 - add a note
00:32:649 - ^
00:55:195 - ^
01:03:831 - ^
01:03:922 - ^
01:06:104 - ^
01:11:104 - ^
01:11:195 - ^

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi~! from your m4m queue:

Hard

00:09:649 (6) - Add note
00:10:377 (2) - Remove note
00:18:013 (4) - Add note
00:18:558 (5) - Remove note
00:20:013 (2,3) - Maybe make this a repeat slider like the last one? This way the pattern will be repeated like the vocals
00:21:649 (5) - Remove note
---
00:24:377 (1,2) - Replace these two sliders with the following:
00:24:377 (1) - Circle here
00:24:740 (2) - Full beat (white line to white line) Slider here
00:25:468 (3) - Either put another circle here, or repeat the last slider
---
00:31:468 (3) - Unrepeat this slider so there's a small pause before the next circle
00:50:922 (1,2) - Extend these two sliders a half beat each
01:01:649 (10,1) - The spacing between these is too small and awkward. Move the second slider a little bit further away so it's clear there's a small pause between the two notes (right now the spacing is exactly the same between this and the note before the first slider, which is very confusing to read when the timing is not the same)
01:10:195 (2,3) - Same thing with these two, just move the second one a little further away to show the pause
01:13:468 (9) - Add note
01:14:740 (3) - I think this feels better as just a circle
01:23:286 (1) - Add note?
01:26:558 (1) - Make this a circle and a slider instead, like the previous circle/slider pattern on the timeline - again the vocals repeat, and it feels better in the map if the pattern repeats as well

Insane

00:04:013 (9) - Add note
00:06:922 (7) - Add note
00:09:649 (8) - Remove note
00:09:468 (8) - Put a full beat slider here instead (white line to white line)
00:17:104 (2,3) - Swap the circle and the slider on the timeline
00:17:649 (4,5) - This feels better if you get rid of the second slider, make the first a repeat, and add a note after the repeated first slider.
00:28:740 (5) - Snap the end of this to 1/4
00:29:286 (7) - Add note
00:29:468 (8) - Add note
00:30:195 (11) - Add note
00:37:468 (2,3,4,5) - This section is very weird, I'm not sure if you're trying to follow the vocals or the guitar here - it seems to switch between both, which makes it very confusing. I'll give suggestions for both following vocals or following guitar, pick one!:

Guitar:
00:38:195 (4) - Remove slider
00:38:195 (4) - Add circle
00:38:377 (5) - Add circle
00:38:922 (6) - Remove slider (or just move it to where this next slider is supposed to be)
00:38:558 (6) - Add full beat slider
00:39:286 (7) - Add circle

Picture of what the timeline should look like : http://puu.sh/2Q3Gj.png

Vocals:
exactly the same as above, but don't add the first "Add circle," instead just extend the slider before it 1/2 beat

Picture: http://puu.sh/2Q3Im.png

00:40:377 (2,3,4,5) - Same thing for these notes
00:43:286 (2,3,4) - And these notes
00:49:468 (3,4,5) - This would feel better as a repeat slider
00:50:195 (6,7,8) - ^
00:52:922 (1,2) - Swap the slider and the circle on the timeline ( so the circle comes before the slider )
00:58:013 (1,2) - ^
00:55:104 (6,1,2) - Stack these
00:58:922 (2) - This feels better as just a circle
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - Make the distance snap on these 1.0, to be consistent with the other streams (or just stack them)
01:09:649 (1,2,3,4) - Compared to the rest of the song, the jumps here seem too large - I'd suggest making them smaller a bit (Maybe ~1.8 - 2.0? maybe even smaller)
01:10:558 (5,6,7) - Make the distance snap on these 1.0, to be consistent with the other streams (or just stack them)
01:28:740 (11) - Maybe make this last note a spinner to the end?

I'm not sure if you're working on one or not, but there should be an Easy/Normal difficulty at least~

Nice mapset, GL!

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi :3

Can i make easy diff ? I know i'm a beginner, but i'm not so bad hehe :3

1. plz move Wip
2. you are AudioLeadIn: 1996 change 2000 plz
3. BG code had little misalignment.
   

   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0

   you should change above
   check all diff

you submit Normal or Easy
I can modding recheck call me back

Satellite wrote:

hi~~~
from my queue

[General]

1. plz move Wip
2. you are AudioLeadIn: 1996 change 2000 plz
3. BG code had little misalignment.
   

   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0

   you should change above
   check all diff

Fixed all

[Insane]
HP-1 and many add hitsound plz
00:09:649 (8) - this note is many risk.. use Distance snap or move 00:09:286 (7) - here stack plz
00:23:104 (1) - I think spin start 00:23:286 - here?
00:25:104 (1) - remove nc
00:53:831 (3) - nc
00:58:013 (1) - remove nc and 00:58:195 (2) - nc
00:59:649 (5) - nc and 01:00:377 (1) - remove nc
01:25:831 (6) - nc
fixed all
[Hard]
OD+1
00:30:195 - add note
00:53:831 (3) - nc
01:05:467 (3) - ^
fixed all

you submit Normal or Easy
I can modding recheck call me back Hehe Thanks~! sure I will :3

good luck ~~

yanlu wrote:

Hi~my easy is done :3
hope you like it!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Grow Slowly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52922
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
Creator:xChippy
Version:yanlu's Easy
Source:To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:Ending
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Sun Rainbow wrote:

Don't Give Normal!?
http://puu.sh/2VJSd.osu

[Hard]

1. 00:28:922 (8) What an odd time to end this slider. And the rest after this sounds really empty. You can end the slider at 00:29:468 and add a note at 00:29:831
2. 00:44:195 (5) Extend this slider to 00:44:740. It doesn't follow the vocals.

[Insane]

1. 00:54:558 (3) No need for the finish here.
2. 01:28:740 (1) Remove the finish here
   Pretty good.

fixed all :3 Thanks for your mod!

[Hard]
00:31:468 (3) - Reverse once fixed
00:52:377 (3) - I suggest to change circle with either 1/2 beat slider (emphasizing instrument) or 1 beat sldier (emphasizing vocal) I think it's okay like this though :3
Thanks for your mod I'll mod yours ASAP

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/2Wuop.osu
All Fixed>W<

Satellite wrote:

recheck

[General]
check tag Please all same
why AudioLeadIn: 1996? change 2000 check plz

[ Insane ]

00:02:558 (3) - NC
00:03:831 (6) - NC
00:05:468 (1) - NC
00:06:740 (4) - NC
00:08:377 (3) - NC
00:09:649 (8) - NC
00:14:195 (6) - NC
00:29:649 (2,3) - NC of each
00:47:649 (6) - NC
00:56:013 (4) - NC
01:08:377 (4) - NC
01:19:286 (8) - NC
01:25:104 (4) - NC
01:26:558 (2) - NC
01:28:013 (4) - NC
01:28:740 ~ 01:29:831 - Hit sound 5%
all fix
nice pattern so i adviced comboing and sound only. ^.^

[ Hard ]

00:03:649 (6) - NC
00:06:922 (6) - NC
00:15:286 (6,1) - UMM..too close..?
00:23:286 (5,6) - dont need spin -> http://puu.sh/2WAcf.jpg
00:24:377 (1) - add circle -> http://puu.sh/2WAd3.jpg
00:25:831 (4) - NC
01:20:740 (4,1) - Like this -> http://puu.sh/2WAfF.jpg
01:28:740 - song didn't finish..but it might not be matter~
all fix

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi again~ Hi :3

General: Really good map, but rainbow difficulty need some more improvement ^^

HARD

00:06:922 (1) - No need for NC, if same combo, then it could be more of a challenge for hard difficulty because it is camouflaged stack

00:44:195 (5) - The slider should be curved more to the right, but keep the coordinates the same



Add a circle note between 00:59:286 (4) - & 00:59:649 (1) - Hmm, I dont think it's neccessary to put one here :3

The note will then become 00:59:468 (5) - if you choose to follow this mod ^

Perhaps finish the difficulty with a short slider, that ends at 01:30:195? Put a spinner instead :3
fixed the rest ^^
GOOD LUCK~

[Hard]

00:08:195 (3,4,5) - try this. looks much better for me

img/code

52,120,8195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,8377,2,0,P|108:36|144:40,1,65
124,108,8740,2,0,P|136:167|191:218,2,130

00:09:831 (1,2,3) - make it more blanket like

img

00:30:558 (1) - make it perfect stack
00:34:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:36:377 (1) - add finish
00:43:649 (4) - move to 192|204
00:49:468 (4) - move to 136|96
00:50:922 (1) - move to 188|72 then 00:51:649 - copy from 00:50:922 and ctrl+j ctrl+g and remove nc. done looks much better
00:58:195 (2) - better for me

img

01:18:558 (3,4) - look weird. move both to 384|114
01:26:558 - I have the nice one for you

code/img

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256,68,85468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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344,192,88377,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:03:649 - add note :/ smoothly to play if you dont want to spam the note so try this example: I'm following the instrument :/ but if more people complain I'll change~ :3

img

00:06:558 - ^
00:09:468 - ^
00:18:377 - put note instead (normal note) and add finish also
00:29:468 - try this rhythm. sounds better and easier to play
00:30:195 (4) - what about make green line with 40% volume here and add finish. also make volume 60% and add finish at 00:30:558
00:33:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:34:922 (1) - add finish or add it instead
00:36:013 (3) - add finish on tail
00:36:740 (4) - ^
00:38:558 (9) - add finish on head
00:39:286 (10) - add finish
00:41:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:42:195 (6) - add finish
00:42:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:47:649 (1) - add finish on head
00:50:922 (1,2) - add both finish on head instead 00:52:377 (3) - add finish instead
00:59:286 (3) - add finish
01:04:558 (5) - ^
01:04:740 (6) - add finish on tail (01:05:104)
01:05:468 (1) - add finish on head
01:11:286 (3) - ^
01:13:649 - add note
01:14:195 (3) - remove clap add finish on head
01:14:740 (5) - ^
01:15:468 (7) - add finish
01:17:104 (1) - add finish on head
01:17:831 (3) - ^
01:19:286 (1) - add finish
01:20:013 (2) - add finish on arrow
01:21:286 (3) - add finish on tail

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Hard]
Placement
00:26:922(3) change the direction of the slider like this, it would be more nice flow

SPOILER

01:11:286(5) NC here
Rhythm
00:16:013 unnecessary green line
and more
00:18:377(5) extend at 00:18:740 to follow the music
00:59:468 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
00:48:013(2) add finish at head
00:53:831(1)^
01:05:468(1)^
[Insane]
AR8 looks fine
Placement
00:30:195(1) useless NC I suppose
00:36:740(4) NC here
00:37:831(6) Ctrl+G
Rhythm
00:18:377 unnecessary green line
and more
00:03:649 I'll expect a note here because of the drum sound
00:34:013(6) to follow the vocal, maybe it would be better

SPOILER

01:10:558(5) stream better since the back drum sounds so.

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:43:286(2) delete finish at end

needs more work I suppose. good luck and star

1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
   00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう…
   その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
2. 00:06:649 - add d
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K
4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
5. 00:30:468 - add d
6. 00:36:286 - ^
7. 00:45:649 - ^
8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
10. 01:03:286 - add k

1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ?
2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ?
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。
4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ?
5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^
6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。
7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
   00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で…
8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて
9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動
10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ?
11. 00:59:831 (2) - del
12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^

TKSalt wrote:

hi~ /

[ReySHeL's Oni]

1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
   00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう… nice! kを追加するところをdにしてfixed
   その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
2. 00:06:649 - add d
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K ok
4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
5. 00:30:468 - add d
6. 00:36:286 - ^
7. 00:45:649 - ^ ok
8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
10. 01:03:286 - add k ok

一部のbig noteとadd noteについては保留で


[ReySHeL's Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ? ok
2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ? no
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。 ok
4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ? ボーカルをフォローしているため
5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^ 繋がりがほしいです
6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。 保留で
7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
   00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で… 盛り上がりがほしいので
8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて 保留で
9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動 d追加しました
10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ? 保留で
11. 00:59:831 (2) - del 音ほしいです
12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^ ^

叩きやすい良い譜面ですが、もう少し難易度の差別化をしても良い気がしました。
good luck!!

S e e U wrote:

[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272

CDFA wrote:

LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music. fixed I put in whistles instead
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown? well since I dont like the look of a ridiculous long slider >< I'll change if more people suggest ^^
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3. fixed

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3) Changed into something else :3
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo fixed

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier. fixed
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end? fixed
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early. fixed

Cool stuff going on. Whee.

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196) fixed
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286) fixed
fixed the hitsound at the previous mod already =w= Did put in your finishes :3
[Insane]
Nothing spotted
Glad to hear :3

[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map.
Good luck for rank

Weez wrote:

Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.
Okay :3

[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here. fixed
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

Up to yanlu :3

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.
fixed
[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.
all fix

[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -
all fix
Thats all and good luck

1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?

1. 00:16:013 (1) - The pattern here would look neater if you make the slider look like this.
2. 00:26:195 (3) - Move the red node to (148,240) so that the blanket-ish pattern of 00:25:831 (2,3) would look better?
3. 00:30:558 - Finish? There's a heavy sound here.
4. 00:51:649 (1) - ^
5. 00:59:286 - Add whistle here...
6. 00:59:649 - ...and finish here to emphasize the vocal?
7. 01:05:104 - 01:05:468 - Same as the two suggestions above.
8. 01:10:922 (3) - I don't think the clap is necessary here. Remove?
9. 01:11:286 - Finish?
10. 01:14:740 - ^
11. 01:15:104 (2) - ^
12. 01:15:468 - ^
13. 01:22:195 - Add clap here to make the hitsound pattern consistent?

1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
6. 00:29:468 - ^
7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?

1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.

1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?

it's the same BG but took a bigger one and resized it :3

>Rainbow's Normal

1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
6. 00:29:468 - ^
7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?

>Hard

1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.

>Insane

1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^

k that's it.

Good luck on the way