S e e U wrote:

[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272

CDFA wrote:

LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music. fixed I put in whistles instead
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown? well since I dont like the look of a ridiculous long slider >< I'll change if more people suggest ^^
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3. fixed

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3) Changed into something else :3
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo fixed

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier. fixed
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end? fixed
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early. fixed

Cool stuff going on. Whee.

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196) fixed
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286) fixed
fixed the hitsound at the previous mod already =w= Did put in your finishes :3
[Insane]
Nothing spotted
Glad to hear :3

[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map.
Good luck for rank

Weez wrote:

Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.
Okay :3

[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here. fixed
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

Up to yanlu :3

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.
fixed
[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.
all fix

[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -
all fix
Thats all and good luck

1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?

1. 00:16:013 (1) - The pattern here would look neater if you make the slider look like this.
2. 00:26:195 (3) - Move the red node to (148,240) so that the blanket-ish pattern of 00:25:831 (2,3) would look better?
3. 00:30:558 - Finish? There's a heavy sound here.
4. 00:51:649 (1) - ^
5. 00:59:286 - Add whistle here...
6. 00:59:649 - ...and finish here to emphasize the vocal?
7. 01:05:104 - 01:05:468 - Same as the two suggestions above.
8. 01:10:922 (3) - I don't think the clap is necessary here. Remove?
9. 01:11:286 - Finish?
10. 01:14:740 - ^
11. 01:15:104 (2) - ^
12. 01:15:468 - ^
13. 01:22:195 - Add clap here to make the hitsound pattern consistent?

1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
6. 00:29:468 - ^
7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?

1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.

1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?

it's the same BG but took a bigger one and resized it :3

>Rainbow's Normal

1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
6. 00:29:468 - ^
7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?

>Hard

1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.

>Insane

1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^

k that's it.

Good luck on the way

baldrace wrote:

Hi Hi~from my queue
nm-w-

normal

00:45:834(5,1) not good What is not good here?

00:22:558 I guess rainbow wanted to catch the piano so no change

00:41:377(5) strange shape... I'll leave this up to Rainbow

01:15:949(1)^ fixed this one put a spinner instead

01:22:558(1)move to 01:22:922 and add a note at 01:22:558 fixed

01:28:013 We'll consider

hard

01:21:286(5)remove This note indicates that a spinner is coming

insane

00:45:831 you can use ctrl+shift+d draw star , use ctrl+shft+d change their distance then ctrl g fixed
good luck!

BoWAct wrote:

hi. from t/131705
I tried to play the difficulty of all

[Normal]
00:59:286 (2,3,4) - I think this is better matching fixed


[Hard]
00:34:558 (1,2,3) - Try drawing a triangle? I'll consider, for now I'll use mine

example

That close, it can be said from me to complete the form is over.
I hope Ranked!

1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd
2. 00:43:286 (2) - k?
3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound

1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k?

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, from my m4m queue.

Rainbow's Normal:

00:02:922 (1,2,3,4): Something is wrong with this diamond pattern, you will notice it if you see spacing between 00:04:013 (4,1) which is 0,94x, and it should be 0,99x.
00:09:468 (3): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:18:922 (4,1): Is this spacing decrease intentional?, if it is I would recommend you to change it to the constant spacing. (1x)
00:26:558 (3,4): I know that you're following vocal with (4) but sounds like (3) is not following anything, you should change rhythm like this instead.
00:35:468 (3): CTRL+J will give this pattern a better flow.
00:43:649 (3): Bad overlap, it ruins the pattern a bit, this slider will look better in x:104 y:72 instead.
00:45:104 (5): NC should be here.
00:46:558 (1): And this NC is unnecessary, remove it.
00:59:649 (3): NC to keep consistency with 00:56:740 (1).
01:09:649 (1): This may be confusing for some players, I would recommend to remove a repeat and add a note in 01:10:195, fits better imo.
01:14:195 (4): Add NC?
01:19:286 (4): Again, this is not following anything, make it a 1/1 slider instead and will fit better.
01:23:649 (1,2): 1,99x spacing? lol are you kidding me?, I don't think this could be intentional, and if it is let me say that this is terrible for a Normal diff, use 1,0x spacing like you did in the whole diff please.
01:23:649 (2,3): Remove both Whistles from sliders, there aren't any music here, sounds bad.

Hard:

00:02:922 (5): I know you can improve this blanket.
00:17:195 (4): Remove this note, music doesn't sound like this could be necessary.
00:17:468 (6): Add NC?
00:18:922 (10,1): Little spacing issue?, use 1,1x instead.
00:25:831 (1): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:34:558 (1): Not well stacked with tail of the previous slider, move to x:415 y:268.

Insane:

00:06:377 (3,1,2): Seems really boring like you did, try to change rhythm like this.
00:16:740 (3): Try to move it to x:188 y:288 instead, it won't be a jump but the pattern seems really better like that. (If you do remember to fix spacing on the next notes)
00:36:013 (3): Make this slider like this ?
00:40:377 (2,3): What's this?, you were using 1,4x spacing and suddenly increased to 2,6x.. just no, this seems really bad.
00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9): Same here, reduce spacing a bit.
00:58:558 (1): Unnecesary NC, remove it.
01:22:922 (5): NC should be here, and not in the next note.

I couldn't mod this diff very well because it doesn't look good for me, it has many things that can be improved, you have many weird patterns/spacing uses and stuff, and 1,4x spacing as the constant one is too much imo.

That's all for me, mapset still needs more work.

Good luck!

mingmichael wrote:

hello xChippy here the taiko mods that you requested to me
almost perfect! @-@ i almost can't find any misses there @A@
but, here my suggestion >,<//

[Muzu]

1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd want to easy
2. 00:43:286 (2) - k? no
3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound ok

[Oni]

1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k?

i follow the sound of the beat

Cream Vie wrote:

I am coming...

General .nothing

D=big red
d=small red
K=big blue
k=small blue

ReyShel-Muzu:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:10:013 (3) - k
00:23:649 - add d
00:38:922 (2) - d
00:42:195 (2) - K
00:48:013 (1,1,1) - K D K
01:04:558 (1) - k
01:28:740 (1) - D

ReyShel-oni:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:23:286 (1) - ddd
00:46:922 (1) - K
01:05:286 (3) - d
01:28:740 (1) - D

It's OK...

1. 00:02:013 (2) - the single clap doesn't feel good, i suggest changing into a finish
2. 00:04:922 (2) - ^
3. 00:07:831 (2) - ^
4. 00:03:831 (7) - add whistle at end?
5. 00:06:740 (1) - ^
6. 00:09:649 (7) - ^
7. 00:12:013 (5) - add clap to slider head w
8. 00:18:377 (8) - i think here is better flow~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826509
9. 00:42:195 (6) - put here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826515
10. 00:49:468 (3) - this blanket seems off, you need to lift the end a little bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826517
11. 01:04:195 (1,5) - it crossed the spacing, i think it doesn't look good, you could try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826559 (it's my style, though)
12. 01:05:468 (1,4) - i suggest making a symmetry or copy (1) and rotate some degrees..
13. 01:22:922 - since the music goes slower, i suggest lowering the slider speed from this point on to 0.75x

1. 00:24:377 (1) - clap -> whistle o.o
2. 00:40:558 (3) - move to x:392 y:212? it looks better o.o

1. 00:04:922 (2) - slider end doesn't need whistle
2. 00:15:649 (5,1) - the distance 5-1 is wrong
3. 00:46:558 (3) - i suggest this way, it would not get overlapped for (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826542
4. 01:12:013 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826544 ?

1. 01:02:558 (1) - ...为什么要这样 虽然好像问题不大
2. 01:05:468 (1) - 这圈往外面一点 有点紧 233

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue~


Insane

1. 00:02:013 (2) - the single clap doesn't feel good, i suggest changing into a finish
2. 00:04:922 (2) - ^
3. 00:07:831 (2) - ^
4. 00:03:831 (7) - add whistle at end?
5. 00:06:740 (1) - ^
6. 00:09:649 (7) - ^
7. 00:12:013 (5) - add clap to slider head w
8. 00:18:377 (8) - i think here is better flow~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826509
9. 00:42:195 (6) - put here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826515
10. 00:49:468 (3) - this blanket seems off, you need to lift the end a little bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826517
11. 01:04:195 (1,5) - it crossed the spacing, i think it doesn't look good, you could try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826559 (it's my style, though)
12. 01:05:468 (1,4) - i suggest making a symmetry or copy (1) and rotate some degrees..
13. 01:22:922 - since the music goes slower, i suggest lowering the slider speed from this point on to 0.75x

Hard

1. 00:24:377 (1) - clap -> whistle o.o
2. 00:40:558 (3) - move to x:392 y:212? it looks better o.o

Normal

1. 00:04:922 (2) - slider end doesn't need whistle
2. 00:15:649 (5,1) - the distance 5-1 is wrong
3. 00:46:558 (3) - i suggest this way, it would not get overlapped for (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826542
4. 01:12:013 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826544 ?

Fixed all :3
:3

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi xchippy >3< ! From my queue ;3

let'su go !

Rainbow's Normal

- 00:02:922 (1,1) - stack better '-'
- 00:05:831 (1,3) - align them
- 00:20:013 (2) - move middle point to x:200,y:252 and end point x:284,y:248
- 00:24:377 (1) - why this note NC ? remove NC here 00:24:740 (1) -
- 00:30:558 (1) - move to x:408,y:128 and then ..
- 00:30:558 (1,2,3) - Make sometinh like that I'll let this open for Sun :3

SPOILER

- 00:40:013 (2,4) - align them ?
- 00:52:922 (1,2,3) - it's a bit hard to read for a normal try that

SPOILER

- 01:06:922 (1) - stack perfectly with 01:05:468 (1) -'s end or move somewhere else,
- 01:12:013 (2) - middle point x:44,y:340, end point x:-20,y:316
Fixed the rest

Hard

- 00:26:740 (2) - move to x:120,y:180
- 00:42:195 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
- 01:11:104 (4) - delete this note ?
- 01:15:468 (1) - remove finish
- 01:22:922 - from here to the end volume 10% or 15% is pretty nice :3
fixed all except the volume i lowered it to 30% :3 since I want to hear the whistles ^^

Insane

- 00:02:013 (2) - what about add a jump like this I'll consider

SPOILER

- 00:04:922 (2) - same here ^
- 00:13:468 (4) - move to x:284,y:60 and then ..
- 00:13:831 (5) - ^ to x:252,y:244
- 00:31:104 (2) - better in this way

SPOILER

- 00:35:468 (2) - move to x:336,y:284
- 01:01:649 (7,8) - put the same spacing as 01:01:468 (6,7) -
- 01:06:922 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, delete this 3 notes and instead, put the same slider as 01:06:195 (2) - ?
Actually I want to follow the vocal here ><
- 01:22:922 - same as hard diff volume to 10% or 15%
Fixed the rest~! :3

that's all, good mapset, and good song, you get my star, go go xchippy ;3 !

Smoothie wrote:

Hi again xP
From my modding queue~

[Insane]
00:03:831 (7) - How about adding a reverse here? I'm following the instruments o-o
00:06:740 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? Don't forget to swap your hitsounds too if you did that. imo it flows good now o-o
00:09:649 (7) - Add a reverse and place it like that? It's pretty nice imo. http://puu.sh/3my1l.jpg ^
00:12:922 (2) - Stack it on 00:12:740 (1) instead~
00:17:649 (6) - Ctrl+G for a better flow? Imo it's already good o-o
00:23:286 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap~
00:29:649 (3) - Should end on the red line.
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap on the start and add a finish? :3
00:36:013 (3) - ^
00:52:377 (3) - Add a finish?
00:55:831 - Add a note here for a better flow? following vocal
01:07:468 - ^ ^
01:15:649 (1) - I think it sound better without the whistle.
01:25:831 (1) - Remover the NC
fixed the rest
[Hard]
00:02:013 (2) - The clap on the slider start sounds a bit odd. How about adding a finish instead?
00:04:922 (2) - ^
00:07:831 (2) - ^
00:24:377 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap?
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap and add a finish?
00:36:013 (3) - ^
01:09:468 - I recomment you to add a note here.
fixed all
[Rainbow's Normal]
00:35:468 (3) - Add a finish no the slider start instead?
00:36:013 (4) - Finish~
00:38:558 (5) - The clap sould be on the slider start.
00:46:558 (3) - Add a whistle on the slider start?

fixed all
That's all~
Good luck!

Verlaren wrote:

all diffs must be started & ended in equal time

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Grow Slowly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52922
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
Creator:xChippy
Version:yanlu's Easy
Source:To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:Ending yanlu Sun Rainbow a certain scientific とある科学の超電磁砲 ReySHeL
BeatmapID:251497
BeatmapSetID:91504

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S ED.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
1468.00525445979,363.636363636364,4,1,0,40,1,0
9831,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
12740,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
53831,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
77104,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
82195,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
82922,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
85831,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
87286,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
88013,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,150,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 0,128,255
Combo5 : 128,0,255

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Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Alarido wrote:

A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

[Hard]
♥ No complaints here too Yay

[Insane]
A part I felt a bit harder to read than the average level on the diff is 01:21:286 (3,1,2,3) - could make something like http://puu.sh/3sW6a.jpg ?
fixed

And that's it ^^

GOOD LUCK RANK !!! and take a star *

Att.

1. Tags in Rainbow's Normal were garbled, please correct it o/
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:33:468 (1) - finish at the head?
2. 00:45:104 (1) - ^
3. 01:12:377 (2,3) - no stack in Easy diff
4. 01:13:831 (4,1) - ^
5. 01:19:649 (3,1) - ^

1. 00:42:195 (1) - finish?

1. 00:38:558 (5) - the sv was changed, put a NC on it?
2. 00:41:468 (6) - ^
3. 00:41:286 (5,6) - Putting like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:22:558 (3) - move 1 grid right to make it a perfect blanket?
2. 00:59:104 - missing a drum hit?
3. 01:05:377 - ^
4. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - how about arranging like this? :
   
   SPOILER

   

happy623 wrote:

sorry for late ;w;
Request via PM
I cant mod taiko diff so I have to skip them, sorry OwQ

[General]

1. Tags in Rainbow's Normal were garbled, please correct it o/
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:38:558 (5) - the sv was changed, put a NC on it?
2. 00:41:468 (6) - ^
3. 00:41:286 (5,6) - Putting like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:22:558 (3) - move 1 grid right to make it a perfect blanket?
2. 00:59:104 - missing a drum hit?
3. 01:05:377 - ^
4. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - how about arranging like this? :
   
   SPOILER

   

Sorry for the shortness
nice map
ヽ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ Star and Good Luck

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good >.o /

Please check the tags, they are different fixed

[Hard]
00:24:377 (7) - New Combo (looks not related with the previous notes) fixed
01:21:286 (5) - Remove circle Why?

[Insane]
>.o)b

Good luck on ranking!

Tur00 wrote:

A mod From my queue :3

[Hard]

Nice Diff! it's mapped really nice :3

01:24:013 (3) - delete the reverse arrow , there's no beat in the last part
And add timing point to change the Sound to "Soft" the slider sounds really weird in this relax part.
01:25:831 (3,3,5) - the same of above , about the Sound "Soft" .
01:28:922 (1) - delete this spinner , is really short so , is not necessary to put it there.
Fixed the Soft sounds, and I'll consider about the spinner

[Insane]

00:10:195 (1,2,3,4) - These beats sound a bit weird.. try to put "soft" hitsound . fixed
00:32:558 (2,3,4) - why don't you try a Curved stream ? The map is Funniest when the streams are in curve. I'll consider as well

Good Luck!

1. tags are not same every diffs. Normal had garbage characters.
2. source: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
   many maps do not have its source. however it is wrong, "toaru (とある)" is one word. but I guess if you think do not need it, be able to not change.
3. soft-hitclap1.wav and soft-hitwhistle1.wav are unused? if these sounds are unused, must remove.

1. 00:10:195 (1) - remove clap and add drum-hitwhistle at end.
   
   would be better to use it because instruments do not have sound like soft-hitclap.
2. 00:11:649 (2) - ^
3. 00:21:831 (1) - why does not this note follow vocal? there is vocal at 00:22:377.
   
   
   1. 00:21:831 (1) - 3/2 slider and a repeat
   ^my suggestion
4. 00:35:468 - add finish. there is sound what is same as 00:34:922 - . so would be better to do it.
5. 00:59:286 - I guess this whistle is mistake... that did not exist on 01:02:195 - . in addition, not have strange instrument than other parts. so I think should remove it.
6. 01:05:104 - ^
7. 01:15:468 (3) - extend end to 01:16:558? I felt this end is little early. this vocal was extended, so may be hard to understand correctly the end.
   if you worry this suggestion, you can also extend to 01:16:740 - because there is instrument.
8. 01:22:922 (1) - why does not follow vocal? should be end at 01:29:468 - imo.

1. 00:02:013 - add whistle. because there is sound what is same as 00:01:468 - and 00:04:922 - .
2. 00:14:195 (3,4) - why did you stack here? imo, not makes sense to stop flow because .
   
   
   

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   336,144,13831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   248,222,14195,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   320,318,14558,2,2,P|260:358|196:374,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   408,240,15649,1,2,0:0:0:0:

   this affects to 00:13:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - . so need to remove those
   try this
3. 00:21:831 (1) - rhythm suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:21:831 (1) - circle
   2. 00:22:013 (2) - 1/1 slider
4. 00:35:468 (3,2) - (nazi) I think this overlap is not good appearance.
   
   
5. 00:41:286 (5) - slider end at 00:41:831 - . would be better to follow instrument in this map.
6. 00:43:649 (3,4,1) - (nazi) not be symmetry...
7. 01:26:558 (1,2,1,2,3) - (DS) why did you use x1.1? this is quiet part, so at least x1.1 would not fit here. should use x1.0.

1. 00:17:831 (6,7,8) - three circles are bit hard in quiet part imo. would be better to be more easier.
   
   1. change (6,7) to 1/2 slider.
2. 00:32:013 (5,6,7) - follow instrument here?
   
   
   1. 00:32:013 (5) - circle
   2. 00:32:195 (6) - circle
   3. 00:32:377 (7) - circle
   4. 00:32:558 (8) - circle
   5. 00:32:740 (9) - 1/1 slider
   try this
   maybe double stack fits this section.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/48063
   
   
   like this circles.
3. 00:50:922 (1,2,3) - add jump here. this section have most volume on this song, so it makes sense to do it imo.
   
   
4. 01:28:013 (4) - forgot to add NC?

1. 00:06:195 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large on this melody. this part is bit quiet, so would be better to change to be smaller.
   
   
   like this size
2. 00:08:377 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
3. 00:22:377 (2,3) - ctrl+G ?

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.


[General]

1. tags are not same every diffs. Normal had garbage characters.
2. source: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
   many maps do not have its source. however it is wrong, "toaru (とある)" is one word. but I guess if you think do not need it, be able to not change.
3. soft-hitclap1.wav and soft-hitwhistle1.wav are unused? if these sounds are unused, must remove.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:831 (6,7,8) - three circles are bit hard in quiet part imo. would be better to be more easier.
   
   1. change (6,7) to 1/2 slider.
2. 00:32:013 (5,6,7) - follow instrument here?
   
   
   1. 00:32:013 (5) - circle
   2. 00:32:195 (6) - circle
   3. 00:32:377 (7) - circle
   4. 00:32:558 (8) - circle
   5. 00:32:740 (9) - 1/1 slider
   try this
   maybe double stack fits this section.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/48063
   
   
   like this circles.
3. 00:50:922 (1,2,3) - add jump here. this section have most volume on this song, so it makes sense to do it imo.
   
   
4. 01:28:013 (4) - forgot to add NC?

[Insane]

1. 00:06:195 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large on this melody. this part is bit quiet, so would be better to change to be smaller.
   
   
   like this size
2. 00:08:377 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
3. 00:22:377 (2,3) - ctrl+G ?

gl

Xinely wrote:

Hi xChippy
mod from my queue
gratz, you are nice ninja
[General]
tags conflict in Normal, or we called it broken kanji http://puu.sh/3uTsO.png
soft-hitclap1 and soft-hitwhistle1 found from http://puu.sh/3vkB2.png didn't give any custom hitsound, change "1" to "2" or remove it if you not use it

[Hard]
OD+1? it's so easy LOL
00:18:922 (1) - it's better if you follow vocal here, try http://puu.sh/3vknu.jpg
00:20:013 (2) - ^
00:21:831 (1) - add finish too?
00:36:740 (2,3) - it's more neat if you make branket in here
00:43:649 (4) - 1 grid up for branket
01:13:831 (1,2) - try http://puu.sh/3vkNj.jpg ? it's more follow vocal
01:18:558 (3) - itentional spacing?
i just say it's need more jump to make this diff become fun
Fixed all =w=
TBH i can't mod insane so that's all
Good Luck ~

1. 00:06:558 (3) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint: x172 y336
2. 00:32:013 (3) - ^? x312y220 Midpoint
   
   It's mostly hitsounds, I know you are making a pattern, and if you don't want to change it just ignore the rest:
   
3. 00:24:377 (2) - Clap?
4. 00:25:468 - Remove clap
5. 00:26:563 - Clap
6. 00:26:922 - Remove clap
7. 00:27:286 (4) - Clap
8. 00:28:740 - Clap
9. 00:30:195 - Maybe a very low finish?
10. 00:33:468 - Finish?
11. 00:55:649 (3) - Clap
12. 00:56:740 - I think you could get away with a finish here.
13. 00:58:558 (3) - Clap
14. 01:01:468 (3) - Clap
15. 01:01:831 - Tbh I feel this doesn't fit, do a clap on 01:01:468 (3), and on sliderend maybe?
16. 01:02:558 - Clap
17. 01:03:286 - Clap
18. 01:07:286 (3) - Clap
19. 01:07:649 - Remove clap
20. 01:08:013 - Clap
21. 01:08:377 - Clap
22. 01:10:195 - Clap
23. 01:10:922 (3) - Clap
24. 01:12:377 (2) - Clap
25. 01:13:831 (4) - Clapu

1. Please remove all the slider noise from 00:12:740 - 00:18:558. The bassdrum is cool, but slidernoise kinda ruins the song imho.
   
   Oh and ye, you should probably use the custom sampleset on some parts instead, it fits better than claps tbh ;;
   
2. 00:20:740 - Remove Clap and add one at 00:21:104, sounds better imo
3. 00:22:558 - Heavy beat, make a clap please
4. 00:32:377 (2) - Clappu
5. 00:55:649 (5) - Blanket this a bit better? Endpoint to x292 y132
6. 01:00:740 (3) - Clappu
7. 01:06:922 (3) - Make this one go like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850173
8. 01:18:922 (3) - Soft custom clap?

1. 00:02:558 (3) - Remove this, lengthen (2) to 00:02:558, it follows the guitar, and keeps the tempo up.
2. 00:09:831 (1) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint to x312 y192, this isn't that great, but I couldn't find a good one.
3. 00:22:558 - Maybe do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850200
4. 00:46:922 - Imo this clap here is a bit overkill, even for a buildup.
5. 01:26:922 - You can hear ''Toooo'' here, remove (2), move (3) to 01:26:922 then stack a note ontop of (1) at 01:27:649, then RNC on (1) and NC on the new circle.

1. imo CTRL-G 00:10:377 (2,3) these two :p
2. 00:22:558 - I think you could have done this more circular. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850237
3. 00:53:286 - I think something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850243 could have been a very good and explosive start for the chorus.
4. 01:02:013 - Maybe something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850248 This might be better due to not having to stack on sliderend, atm it looks kinda weird imo, and it'll make small jumps :p
5. 01:05:013 - Another suggestion; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850258 Make it jumpy like this and it'll also flow well imo

f e a r wrote:

I wish I were a bird

[Hard]

1. 00:02:558 (3) - Remove this, lengthen (2) to 00:02:558, it follows the guitar, and keeps the tempo up.
2. 00:09:831 (1) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint to x312 y192, this isn't that great, but I couldn't find a good one.
3. 00:22:558 - Maybe do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850200
4. 00:46:922 - Imo this clap here is a bit overkill, even for a buildup.
5. 01:26:922 - You can hear ''Toooo'' here, remove (2), move (3) to 01:26:922 then stack a note ontop of (1) at 01:27:649, then RNC on (1) and NC on the new circle.

fixed all except the first one IMO it fits the instrument now :3
About the hitsound changed to the custom one =w= (actually I forgot to change =w=)
I would do hitsounds too, but tbh, I would rather you change to use the custom ones like the others, if you decide to do that then PM me and I'll come back (y)

[Insane]

1. imo CTRL-G 00:10:377 (2,3) these two :p
2. 00:22:558 - I think you could have done this more circular. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850237
3. 00:53:286 - I think something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850243 could have been a very good and explosive start for the chorus.
4. 01:02:013 - Maybe something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850248 This might be better due to not having to stack on sliderend, atm it looks kinda weird imo, and it'll make small jumps :p
5. 01:05:013 - Another suggestion; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850258 Make it jumpy like this and it'll also flow well imo

Fixed all except the last jump suggestion,imo it flows well as it is tho and the last circle should be blue tick (since there is a drum hit)
That is all! Good luck on your mapset!

1. 00:09:831 - imo this really feels heavier than it needs, lower the hitsounds to 40%, do the same at 00:12:740, and 00:17:104 if you could, as they are the ''slow'' part of the song.
2. 00:10:558 (3) - Remove clap at sliderstart, add a clap at the repeat
3. You could add a whistle at every white tick from 00:13:468 to 00:18:377 if you want to, and get away with it as it compliments the song imho.
4. 00:18:907 - Whistle
5. 00:19:649 (3) - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
6. 00:21:104 - ^
7. 00:22:558 - Clap
8. 00:23:286 - Soft sampleset a whistle here if you'd like, remove new combo too while you're at it.
9. 00:42:922 - I know theres a sound here, but idk if it's important enough for a finish. Just pointing it out, pay attention to it incase other modders point it out you might wanna change it. :p
10. 00:45:104 - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
11. 00:45:831 - ^
12. 00:46:558 - ^
13. 00:46:922 - ^
14. 00:47:653 - Personally I would add a finish here.
15. 00:48:377 - Clap
16. 00:49:104 - ^
17. 01:02:558 - You could do a buildup here, add clap at sliderend and 3, imo that would fit quite a lot.
18. 01:17:104 - Dunno if this sampleset is intentional xD
19. Since I'm an idiot and forgot this the last time; Move 01:25:831 (3) to 01:25:468, and hitcircle 01:26:195. Same reasoning as last time.
20. If you did ^that, remove new combo at 01:26:558 (1), add new combo at 01:26:195 (3) and remove new combo at 01:28:013 (1)

f e a r wrote:

Kay I'm back, no KD.

Obligatory I wish I were a bird

[Hard]

1. 00:09:831 - imo this really feels heavier than it needs, lower the hitsounds to 40%, do the same at 00:12:740, and 00:17:104 if you could, as they are the ''slow'' part of the song.
2. 00:10:558 (3) - Remove clap at sliderstart, add a clap at the repeat
3. You could add a whistle at every white tick from 00:13:468 to 00:18:377 if you want to, and get away with it as it compliments the song imho.
4. 00:18:907 - Whistle
5. 00:19:649 (3) - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
6. 00:21:104 - ^
7. 00:22:558 - Clap
8. 00:23:286 - Soft sampleset a whistle here if you'd like, remove new combo too while you're at it.
9. 00:42:922 - I know theres a sound here, but idk if it's important enough for a finish. Just pointing it out, pay attention to it incase other modders point it out you might wanna change it. :p
10. 00:45:104 - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
11. 00:45:831 - ^
12. 00:46:558 - ^
13. 00:46:922 - ^
14. 00:47:653 - Personally I would add a finish here.
15. 00:48:377 - Clap
16. 00:49:104 - ^
17. 01:02:558 - You could do a buildup here, add clap at sliderend and 3, imo that would fit quite a lot.
18. 01:17:104 - Dunno if this sampleset is intentional xD
19. Since I'm an idiot and forgot this the last time; Move 01:25:831 (3) to 01:25:468, and hitcircle 01:26:195. Same reasoning as last time.
20. If you did ^that, remove new combo at 01:26:558 (1), add new combo at 01:26:195 (3) and remove new combo at 01:28:013 (1)

fixed all =w=
GL further and hope my mod was useful \o

Otonashi Yuzuru wrote:

Hi From IJO's mod queue ~ :3

[Hard]

*It's great too

00:23:286 (6) - imo it's better if you make it end on 00:23:649
Well it's following the piano in the background :3

[Insane]

00:52:377 - remove nc. you can add nc at v fixed
00:52:922 - NC fixed
01:28:740 - imo the spinner is too hard with OD 7? D:
errr I'll consider changing it ^^
That's all, sorry for the bad mod D:
Nice map and Good Luck!

mintong89 wrote:

hi :3

[Insane]

00:10:558 (3,4) - +whistle
00:17:286 (1) - put slider at here little weird, i prefer 00:17:468 - to 00:17:649 - as a slider and 00:17:286 as a circle.
00:24:740 (1) - too curve
00:27:649 (1) - i think it would more fun if you like this

SPOILER

00:44:922 (3) - It would be better if you nc here and 00:45:104 (1) - remove nc, it seem more clear~
00:52:922 (1) - i think NC here, because DS sudden changed and player may confused.
01:02:377 (6) - you can put at 01:03:286 (3) - slider ends, it will more fun~
01:09:649 (1,2) - CTRL+G
01:15:468 (1) - remove NC, because after is a spinner so no need.
01:22:922 (1) - i think straight slider is better at here.imo this fits music better :3

Fixed the rest =w=

[Hard]no problem, but just wonder beginning part's hitsound why didn't same with Insane diff.

Oops o-o changed it~
good luck~

1. Add Unicode Artist? 井口裕香
2. Add "Biribiri" to tags.

1. 00:13:104 - Try adding whistle on 2nd and 4th beat: 00:13:468 - 00:14:195 - 00:14:922 - etc . Currently it sounds a bit empty to me.
2. 00:18:922 (1,2,3) - Imo, you should try using the regular soft whistles here. No hitsound always makes me sad
3. 00:18:922 (1) - Oh yeah, add a finish on the head.
4. 00:51:649 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here, and removing it also makes it easier to see the triangle between (3,4,5)
5. 01:02:558 (1) - Intentionally no normal sampleset on repeat? Also, the repeat is being covered. I think it's probably fine with the amount of time you have on this, but it is an Easy, so maybe you want to move it a bit.
6. 01:17:104 - Soft custom sampleset 1? The default claps sound really off to me.
7. 01:22:922 (1) - End this at 01:28:740 - , makes more sense since the song ends there as well; currently the map ends a little before the song itself, so it feels off.
8. Generally I wish there were more hitsounds in this actually, especially the chorus I think would work better with a 2nd and 4th beat pattern of hitsounding. Still, the map itself is well done, and plays well for Easy.

1. 00:14:558 (4) - and 00:16:013 (1,2) - Intentional sliderbody whistles? I don't really think the fit, so I would remove them.
2. 00:18:922 (1) - Possibly use a finish instead on the head?
3. 00:18:195 (4) - Imo, it works better if you tilt it so that it points towards 00:18:922 (1).
4. 00:20:013 (2) - Swap so that whistle is on head instead of repeat.
5. 00:22:558 (2) - Needs some hitsound, like normal-hitnormal or something similar.
6. 00:22:922 (3) - Whistle on end.
7. 00:45:104 (1) - Make this an exact flip from 00:43:649 (3). Also center 00:44:740 (4)
8. 00:53:831 - I think the chorus is a wee bit loud, maybe lower the volume a bit?
9. 01:07:649 (4) - Might wanna move this more to the left so it's not overlapped by (2). Just looks a bit sloppy imo.
10. 01:11:286 - For this part I think you should use normal-hitnormal as the clap sound, just so you don't transition so suddenly from normal sampleset to soft.
11. 01:28:013 (1,2,3) - It doesn't really matter, but move this so it's completely centered?
12. Mostly just some hitsound suggestions. The map itself looks fine as a Normal.

1. 00:01:468 - Change this to Soft sampleset custom 1, then lower volume at 00:02:558 - 00:04:377, and use the whistle sound on every white tick (or every other white tick if every tick sounds too much for you). Same for 00:05:468 - etc.
2. 00:18:922 (1) - Either use finish or a regular soft whistle on the head here.
3. 00:23:286 (6) - Regular soft whistle on head and tail.
4. 00:41:286 (5,1) - Unstack? Follows 00:38:377 (4,1) - , and flows better as well imo.
5. 00:52:922 (4,5) - Because of the symmetrical nature of the pattern right before, this just feels really randomly placed. I would just try to work it into the symmetry like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851888 It also makes sense that this is symmetrical since it's part of the same combo.
6. 01:14:195 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on head.
7. Actually I like this quite a lot due to how simple it feels as well as it being fairly appropriate as a Hard.

1. Maaybe OD8 if you want to, but considering the overall difficulty of the mapset, OD7 works pretty well.
2. 00:05:831 (1) - Remove whistle from head, and add whistle on tail. And remove whistle from 00:06:195 (2) and 00:06:558 (4) to follow the same whistlepattern as 00:02:558 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
3. 00:09:104 (7) - Remove whistle, same reason^
4. 00:10:740 (4,5) - This part feels pretty awkward because of how the music doesn't really change, but the spacing does change just here. Imo following the same 1.5x spacing like before would work better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851912
5. 00:18:922 (1) - Add either regular soft whistle or soft finish here on head.
6. 00:46:922 (2,3,4,5) - Arrange like this to avoid overlap with 00:46:195 (7) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851915
7. 00:48:377 (3,2) - Add clap on this. The squares have no hitsound
8. 00:49:468 (4,1) - This part is confusing because of how the spacing between here and 00:49:740 (1,2) - is different, and the use of new combo. It really looks like (4,1) is actually in 1/1. It actually tripped me up causing me to 100 on it, so you pobably should change this somehow. Also swap new combo for 00:49:468 (4,1) - .
9. 01:02:558 (1) - Add clap on head here, as well as 01:04:013 (1) - for a kin dof build-up effect before the chorus repeats.
10. 01:05:104 (3,4) - I don't think this plays very well, because this whole part is kind of like a build-up to the repeated chorus, having to stop for 3/4 really feels weird. Imo, using a slider works much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851924
11. 01:10:377 - Add note at 248;288? You'll have to rearrange the stream after it, but I really think it fits for this pattern.
12. 01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Intentional different spacing? It doesn't look or feel that good tbh, so you should just space all of it at 1.4x
13. 01:14:558 (2) - Clap.
14. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - Are you able to make this stream's curve look nicer? also fix the spacing on the last slider there, since it looks ugly when the stream isn't even. I know the slider slows down, but it isn't really that hard to read anyway, so it should be fine.
15. 01:28:377 (2) - Whistle.
16. Good job here, I enjoyed this map.

CXu wrote:

Yo, mod request from my queue. =3=~

[General]

1. Add Unicode Artist? 井口裕香 fixed
2. Add "Biribiri" to tags.

Gogo Biribiri >w<

[Hard]

1. 00:01:468 - Change this to Soft sampleset custom 1, then lower volume at 00:02:558 - 00:04:377, and use the whistle sound on every white tick (or every other white tick if every tick sounds too much for you). Same for 00:05:468 - etc.
2. 00:18:922 (1) - Either use finish or a regular soft whistle on the head here.
3. 00:23:286 (6) - Regular soft whistle on head and tail.
4. 00:41:286 (5,1) - Unstack? Follows 00:38:377 (4,1) - , and flows better as well imo.
5. 00:52:922 (4,5) - Because of the symmetrical nature of the pattern right before, this just feels really randomly placed. I would just try to work it into the symmetry like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851888 It also makes sense that this is symmetrical since it's part of the same combo.
6. 01:14:195 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on head.
7. Actually I like this quite a lot due to how simple it feels as well as it being fairly appropriate as a Hard.

fixed all :3.
[Insane]

1. Maaybe OD8 if you want to, but considering the overall difficulty of the mapset, OD7 works pretty well.
2. 00:05:831 (1) - Remove whistle from head, and add whistle on tail. And remove whistle from 00:06:195 (2) and 00:06:558 (4) to follow the same whistlepattern as 00:02:558 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
3. 00:09:104 (7) - Remove whistle, same reason^
4. 00:10:740 (4,5) - This part feels pretty awkward because of how the music doesn't really change, but the spacing does change just here. Imo following the same 1.5x spacing like before would work better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851912
5. 00:18:922 (1) - Add either regular soft whistle or soft finish here on head.
6. 00:46:922 (2,3,4,5) - Arrange like this to avoid overlap with 00:46:195 (7) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851915
7. 00:48:377 (3,2) - Add clap on this. The squares have no hitsound
8. 00:49:468 (4,1) - This part is confusing because of how the spacing between here and 00:49:740 (1,2) - is different, and the use of new combo. It really looks like (4,1) is actually in 1/1. It actually tripped me up causing me to 100 on it, so you pobably should change this somehow. Also swap new combo for 00:49:468 (4,1) - .
9. 01:02:558 (1) - Add clap on head here, as well as 01:04:013 (1) - for a kin dof build-up effect before the chorus repeats.
10. 01:05:104 (3,4) - I don't think this plays very well, because this whole part is kind of like a build-up to the repeated chorus, having to stop for 3/4 really feels weird. Imo, using a slider works much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851924
11. 01:10:377 - Add note at 248;288? You'll have to rearrange the stream after it, but I really think it fits for this pattern.
12. 01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Intentional different spacing? It doesn't look or feel that good tbh, so you should just space all of it at 1.4x
13. 01:14:558 (2) - Clap.
14. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - Are you able to make this stream's curve look nicer? also fix the spacing on the last slider there, since it looks ugly when the stream isn't even. I know the slider slows down, but it isn't really that hard to read anyway, so it should be fine.
15. 01:28:377 (2) - Whistle.
16. Good job here, I enjoyed this map.

Fixed all, Hehe glad that you enjoyed it >w<
Generally I really like the general diffspread here, especially Hard and Insane. I didn't have all too much to say, so that's good!
Good job, and good luck!

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue
yay, railgun =w=

[Hard]
00:13:104 ~ 00:23:286 - use same hitsound pattern as insane? Prefer to keep this diff like this :3
00:23:286 (6) - imo whistle on end doesn't fit given it's more of a "stop" feeling, remove it? Well it follows the pianjo ><, I'll consider
01:22:922 - use slowdown here? there's a slowdown in insane 0.0 fixed

[Insane]
00:10:377 (2) - I only hear one cymbal here, remove finish?
00:38:558 (4) - add finish on start? don't think it's needed a clap is enough :3
00:41:468 (4) - add finish on start? ^
00:49:740 (2) - spacing is confusing cause you just used this spacing for 1/2s
00:51:468 - imo add note here with jump would feel good and fit strong vocals ~
00:53:286 (3) - make a perfect triangle (x: 360 y: 120)
00:58:195 (1) - move it up to make it equidistant (x: 440 y: 192)
01:09:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a really big jump out of nowhere, perhaps reduce it a bit? Taken into consider
01:22:922 (1) - start whistles here plz
Fixed the rest :3
nice map, good luck

_Tokage_ wrote:

random mod \:D/ since Senritsu is here

[Hard]

00:23:286 (6) - change it into circle, its more enjoyable to hear imo orz i'll consider :3
00:37:831 (3) - add Whistle at end of slider fixed
00:38:377 (4) - ^ fixed

[Insane]

00:49:468 (1) - Remove NC here, put NC at 00:49:740 (2) fixed
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle here? and Clap here 01:10:922 (5) did all whistle instead =w=

well since your map is neat, thats all~
sorry i cant mod Easy and Normal nicely ;___; Good Luck btw~

lkx_Shore wrote:

hi

[Insane]
00:56:740 (1) - slider head add finish? added whistle
01:04:013 (1) - remove whistle,add finish? fixed
01:08:377 (1) - slider head add finish? I prefer whistle
01:10:558 (1) - add finish added
01:28:377 (2) - x256 y244 prefer to stack

[Hard]
00:23:286 (6) - slider tail silencer
00:45:104 (1) - slider head add finish?
fixed all

MMzz wrote:

[Insane]
00:27:286 (7,1) - This is a bad idea let me explain why. Before this stack out have three stacks that are 1/2 speed, then this stack is directly after it in 1/1 speed. Players will react to seeing this 4th stack and automatically think it is 1/2 because of the previously placed stacks. It is very confusing. You should try and move these notes around so they are not stacked.
00:55:104 (5) - Why not start the combo here instead of under the stack, looks a lot nicer.
01:03:831 (5) - ^
01:19:286 (3,4) - The same stacking issue as before.
fixed all
[Hard]
00:23:286 (6) - This needs to be a single note. There is not two notes in 1/4 here.
fixed
[Normal]
Tags, Unicode, and other things conflict with the other diffs. Run AIMod/BAT to find these and fix them
fixed

MMzz wrote:

[Oni]
00:06:104 (1) - This feels really weird to play. I suggest you delete it or add a kat here: 00:06:013
00:36:377 (2) - finisher?

I don't like how the difficulty takes a big jump in the kiai. Add a few more 1/4 in the previous sections to even out the difficulty?

[Muzukashii]
00:06:104 (2) - Same as the Oni.

jonathanlfj wrote:

Here is the mod (m4m?) i promised a while back

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
cool BG (derp) :3

[Hard]
00:11:649 (4) - clap sounds a bit out of place on the end, maybe remove it
00:13:104 (1) - add finish on start?
00:26:922 (5) - fix spacing (kinda looks bad with 00:25:831 (3,4))
00:44:195 (5) - try to stack this on 00:43:468 (3) if possible (and then fix later spacing)
00:52:922 (4) - NC here will be swag
01:08:194 (7,1) - try something like this for a better flow:

SPOILER

01:18:740 (4) - clap here and take clap off 01:18:922 (5)
01:25:468 (2) - whistle on end
01:26:922 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:09:286 (1,2,3) - arrange it like this:

SPOILER

00:10:922 (5) - clap start
00:22:377 (2,3,4,5) - lower this for a clear pattern:

SPOILER

00:29:286 - i was suspecting a note here
00:36:013 (3) - raise this a few grids for a more natural flow (and dont overlap 00:34:922 (1))
00:47:649 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - the flow here feels delayed by 1/2; rid the repeat on 00:47:649 (1), move 00:48:195 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) to 00:48:013, and add a note at 00:49:468 stacked on (4), NC on this note instead of 00:49:740 (1)
00:52:922 (1,2,3,4) - move this so 00:53:468 (4) stacks on 00:52:377 (4)
00:58:922 (4,5,6) - this feels like it sound be increased spacing instead of decreased compared to 00:58:195 (1,2,3)
01:04:922 (2) - move this up so you get a nice zig-zag flow here:

SPOILER

01:06:195 (4) - whistle sounds better than finish on the start
01:09:649 (1) - finish should be here instead of 01:09:831 (2)
01:11:195 - add note
01:13:104 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - why not make a jump somewhere here? e.g. ctrl+g on 01:13:831 (7,8) to emphasis the vocals
01:20:740 (1,2) - this may be misleading to play, because the music here indicates something to be pressed at 01:20:922, but you have a 1/1 stack instead (This is where i failed on hidden since i went 1/2 too early). Consider adding a note or remove the stack
Went ham on the Insane cause its freshly remapped ><

Here is a star to help with the cause, good luck ranking this~

1. 00:36:740- remove clap
2. 00:39:649- ^
3. 00:42:558- ^

1. 00:41:286 (5) - end at 00:41:831
2. 01:02:195 (1) - no reverse is better, I think
3. 01:14:195- add finish?

1. 00:50:922 (1,2) - How about reducing SV?
2. 01:28:922 (1) - this spinner is unnecessary, I think

1. 00:50:922 (1,3) - How about reducing SV?
2. it is better to add a note instead of spinner

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Hard]

1. 00:50:922 (1,2) - How about reducing SV?
2. 01:28:922 (1) - this spinner is unnecessary, I think

[Insane]

1. 00:50:922 (1,3) - How about reducing SV?
2. it is better to add a note instead of spinner

I hardly wait to watch the climax of this Anime!
~Good Luck~

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[ReySHeL's Oni]

1. The volume is a bit high, I would suggest using normal - 70% instead. ok
2. 00:01:104 (1) - I would suggest removing this note since the drum is off the timing there. ok
3. 00:50:740 (3) - how about changing this note to don so that it can be fitted to the pitch? 00:50:195 - sound gradually high from here
4. 00:50:922 (1,2,3) - I would suggest using K D K here to fit the pitch there. i changed D D K
5. 01:05:286 (3) - Don here? Personally feeling only. no
6. 01:15:831 (1,2,1,2,1) - Highly suggest removing these notes because there are no music precence, therefore, it is weird that you place some notes there. small sound is heard i changed to 50% volume

[ReySHeL's Muzu]

1. Rename the diffiuclty to ReySHeL's Muzukashii i want to ReySHeL's Muzu
2. 00:01:104 (1) - Same as oni. I would suggest removing this note since the drum is off the timing there. ok
3. 00:35:468 (2) - Changing this to big don to follow the pitch? K K K is fine
4. 00:52:377 (3) - Kat here to follow the pitch. As it fits the music and drum pretty well. ok
5. 01:02:377 (2,3,4) - ddk sounds better for me. ddk is too hard in Muzu diff i use only ddd kkk
6. 01:03:649 (1,2,3) - Sorry but I don't think triplet fits the music well, what I mean is, the triplet sounds weird here, and I think simple 1/2 is enough. ok
7. 01:15:831 (1,2,1,2,1) - Highly suggest removing these notes because there are no music precence, therefore, it is weird that you place some notes there. same as Oni

General

yanlu's Easy

Rainbow's Normal

Hard

Insane

That's all sry my poor English. GL anyway

scanter wrote:

Hello everyone ~

Hard

1. 00:35:468 (4,5) - This notes are really hard to play for hard players. I recommend add NC.
2. 00:53:843 - this timing point is unsnapped. snap to 00:53:831
3. 00:44:922 (7,8,1) - Same. how about this tempo? I'd rather keep the triplet :3
   
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4. 01:15:468 (1) - How about this? to ignore strong sound is not good idea. if followed this, add finish.
   
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5. 01:21:468 (1) - ^. if followed this, add NC & finish.
   
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fixed the rest

Insane

1. 00:02:922 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this is good flow. how about this rhythm?
   
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   This is code.
   

   408,220,2558,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   477,100,2740,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   338,99,2922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   477,180,3104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   408,60,3286,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   338,180,3468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   260,204,3649,6,0,L|180:228,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   27,226,4013,2,0,L|104:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:12:377 (2,3) - Add NC? because, this is anti-jump. players might better to see this note.
3. 00:20:377 (1) - Move this to x:208, y:208
   00:20:740 (2,3) - And Ctrl + G. your pattern is well not visible.
   
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4. 00:47:649 (1) - Add clap on slider's first. you can hear it.
5. 00:50:195 (4) - Add NC. tempo was changed.
6. 00:55:286 (3) - Add whistle.
7. 01:02:013 (5,6) - How about put this to reverse rhythm? it will become more fit about 01:02:195 this points strong beat with vocals.
   
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8. 01:14:013 (8) - Clap is not here, but 01:13:831 (7) here. your hitsound pattern of this point is really strange IMO.
9. 01:15:104 (4,5) - Add NC. if you want emphasize here.
10. 01:28:740 (3) - Same. Sound was almost muted.

fixed all =w=That's all sry my poor English. GL anyway

LunaticP wrote:

Accepted mod request from Ono's baka taiko modding team

[ReySHeL's Oni]

1. Background image need to be adjusted

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Suggestion : You can open the .osu file

And change this number

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Under event, from 0,0 to 0,90 and will look like this

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2. Notes

00:01:104 - add d

00:01:468 (1) - K

00:25:286 - add d

00:56:831 (2) - d

01:20:740 (1,2,3,4) - d d d d ( 01:21:468 (5) - this note have accent, so change color from here)

[ReySHeL's Muzu]
1.BG(see above)
2.Notes

00:10:195 (4) - k

00:22:922 (1) - d

[Navy] wrote:

Hi~M4M

(sorry for bad english..)

Rainbow's Normal
00:18:195 (1) - no whistle fixed

00:30:558 (1,2,3) - a little boring? what do you think about deleteing reverse slider ? I'll let Sun do this Him/her self

00:53:104 (1) - spinner will be great Doesn't fit imo

01:28:377 (2,3) - slider~ it's fine

Hard
00:27:468 - add circle fixed

Insane
00:07:104 - 00:07:195 - add 2 notes on 00:07:286 (1) - fixed

00:27:649 (1) - intentionally..? yep it's intentionally

00:42:013 (5) - reverse slider prefer the triplet ><

01:03:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - strange..? what's strange o-o?, If you mean why it's not a full stream, it's because it's missing a drum so I had to do a triplet and a stream =w=

wonderful map! i love it

RikiH_ wrote:

m4m from your queue :< NOTE: I am on my laptop now, so I can't testplay maps because of the massive lag and so my mod can be wrong, sorry for that :/
I'll fix the stuff for Sun =w=
Rainbow's Normal

00:02:013 (2) - You can try to make something better instead of a straight slider, maybe. Also, move it 1 grid up
00:04:922 (2) - ^ (Don't move it 1 grid up)
00:09:468 (3) - Use ctrl+g on this, it flows better
00:16:740 (2) - Last sliderpoint 1 or 2 grids up
00:32:377 (2) - Move it 1 grid up or down for a better-looking pattern
00:41:286 (5) - Move 1 grid right
01:15:468 (1) - The next object is a bit too near to the spinner... You have two options: First: You end the spinner 1/1 earlier or Second: You make this 01:17:104 (1) start near to the center, so the player can reach it easier. I suggest the second...
fixed all and took the second suggestion indeed~
Hard

00:43:649 (4) - Ctrl+g would be better because of the flow, but you will have a little jump with the following note fixed
00:45:013 (8) - I suggest to remove this note, this is the only triplet in the whole diff, so the player, when he/she sees this, can get confused. So, remove this note I'll see what a BAT say~ =w=

Insane

00:04:013 (2,1) - This is really, really flow-breaking... The next slider should be like this, in order to have an oval flow Err.. Actually don't want a jump there err... I'll consider since the others with the same sound doesn't have a jump

01:01:649 (3,4) - Select both notes and use ctrl+g for a better flow fixed
01:10:195 (4,5) - The same fixed the whole jump :3
01:18:195 (4) - Clap fixed
01:28:740 (1) - This is 5% volume, so it's not audible. Remember: All objects MUST be audible, except for spinners, so this note is unrankable if you don't raise the volume and make it audible! fixed

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That's all, the map should be ok for bubble, I just suggest to improve some sliders in the Normal, bye!

1. 00:01:468 (1) - finish + whistle at slider end fits better
2. 00:04:377 (1) - same here^ finish + whistle at slider end
3. 00:07:286 (1) - same here^ finish + whistle at slider end
4. 00:10:195 (1) - add whistle at the slider body fits with the guitar
5. 00:53:831 (1) - remove the normal sampleset at the end of the slider and add a clap
6. 00:56:740 (1) - same here ^
7. 01:05:468 (1) - same here^
8. 01:08:377 (1) - add a finish on slider start and remove the normal sampleset at the end of the slider and add a clap

1. 01:01:468 (3,1) - try to don't cover the reversearrow since is the easier diff and the new players have not so much time to see the reverse
2. 01:12:377 (2,3,4,1) - and 01:19:649 (3,1) - try to don't stack objects in the easier diff

1. 00:16:013 (1) - try to do this slider like this: to improve the flow
   
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2. 00:17:831 (3,1) - this can confuse many players,what about to move this 2 like:
   
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3. 00:45:104 (1,3) - try to improve this little overlap
4. 01:04:740 (5,1) - do a better blanket here:
   
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5. 01:07:649 (4,5) - improve the line of this slider,place (5) some grind up

1. 00:18:922 (1) - whistle at slider end
2. 00:20:740 (3) - whistle here
3. 01:09:649 (4) - whistle on slider start fits not so good

1. 00:38:558 (1) - and 00:41:468 (1) - i don't see the reason of this 2 slow slider .w.

Lally wrote:

yo req from my queue

[Rainbow]
Placement:

1. 00:16:013 (1) - try to do this slider like this: to improve the flow
   
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2. 00:17:831 (3,1) - this can confuse many players,what about to move this 2 like:
   
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3. 00:45:104 (1,3) - try to improve this little overlap
4. 01:04:740 (5,1) - do a better blanket here:
   
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5. 01:07:649 (4,5) - improve the line of this slider,place (5) some grind up

[Hard]
Hitsounds:

1. 00:18:922 (1) - whistle at slider end
2. 00:20:740 (3) - whistle here
3. 01:09:649 (4) - whistle on slider start fits not so good

Placement:

1. 00:38:558 (1) - and 00:41:468 (1) - i don't see the reason of this 2 slow slider .w.

hope this can help ^^)/ good luck

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. Make all Kiai times unified.

[Insane]

1. 00:05:468 (3,1) - Switch new combo between these two sliders.
2. 00:08:377 (3) - New combo.
3. 00:12:377 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 01:24:377 (1) - Delete this slider.
5. 01:10:649 (2,3,4,5) - Better as clap then whistle.

[Rainbow's Normal]

1. 00:09:468 (3,1) - Too close for a Normal.
2. 00:16:377 - Add whistle.

not much to say~ o.o
Good luck~