-Umi- wrote:

hi hi :3

Can i make easy diff ? I know i'm a beginner, but i'm not so bad hehe :3

1. plz move Wip
2. you are AudioLeadIn: 1996 change 2000 plz
3. BG code had little misalignment.
   

   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0

   you should change above
   check all diff

you submit Normal or Easy
I can modding recheck call me back

Satellite wrote:

hi~~~
from my queue

[General]

1. plz move Wip
2. you are AudioLeadIn: 1996 change 2000 plz
3. BG code had little misalignment.
   

   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0

   you should change above
   check all diff

Fixed all

[Insane]
HP-1 and many add hitsound plz
00:09:649 (8) - this note is many risk.. use Distance snap or move 00:09:286 (7) - here stack plz
00:23:104 (1) - I think spin start 00:23:286 - here?
00:25:104 (1) - remove nc
00:53:831 (3) - nc
00:58:013 (1) - remove nc and 00:58:195 (2) - nc
00:59:649 (5) - nc and 01:00:377 (1) - remove nc
01:25:831 (6) - nc
fixed all
[Hard]
OD+1
00:30:195 - add note
00:53:831 (3) - nc
01:05:467 (3) - ^
fixed all

you submit Normal or Easy
I can modding recheck call me back Hehe Thanks~! sure I will :3

good luck ~~

yanlu wrote:

Hi~my easy is done :3
hope you like it!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Grow Slowly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 52922
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
Creator:xChippy
Version:yanlu's Easy
Source:To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
Tags:Ending
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S ED.avi"
0,0,"rsz_to_aru_kagaku_no_railgun_1.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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12740,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
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85831,-100,4,2,0,35,0,0
87286,-100,4,2,0,20,0,0
88013,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 0,255,255
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Sun Rainbow wrote:

Don't Give Normal!?
http://puu.sh/2VJSd.osu

[Hard]

1. 00:28:922 (8) What an odd time to end this slider. And the rest after this sounds really empty. You can end the slider at 00:29:468 and add a note at 00:29:831
2. 00:44:195 (5) Extend this slider to 00:44:740. It doesn't follow the vocals.

[Insane]

1. 00:54:558 (3) No need for the finish here.
2. 01:28:740 (1) Remove the finish here
   Pretty good.

fixed all :3 Thanks for your mod!

[Hard]
00:31:468 (3) - Reverse once fixed
00:52:377 (3) - I suggest to change circle with either 1/2 beat slider (emphasizing instrument) or 1 beat sldier (emphasizing vocal) I think it's okay like this though :3
Thanks for your mod I'll mod yours ASAP

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/2Wuop.osu
All Fixed>W<

Satellite wrote:

recheck

[General]
check tag Please all same
why AudioLeadIn: 1996? change 2000 check plz

[ Insane ]

00:02:558 (3) - NC
00:03:831 (6) - NC
00:05:468 (1) - NC
00:06:740 (4) - NC
00:08:377 (3) - NC
00:09:649 (8) - NC
00:14:195 (6) - NC
00:29:649 (2,3) - NC of each
00:47:649 (6) - NC
00:56:013 (4) - NC
01:08:377 (4) - NC
01:19:286 (8) - NC
01:25:104 (4) - NC
01:26:558 (2) - NC
01:28:013 (4) - NC
01:28:740 ~ 01:29:831 - Hit sound 5%
all fix
nice pattern so i adviced comboing and sound only. ^.^

[ Hard ]

00:03:649 (6) - NC
00:06:922 (6) - NC
00:15:286 (6,1) - UMM..too close..?
00:23:286 (5,6) - dont need spin -> http://puu.sh/2WAcf.jpg
00:24:377 (1) - add circle -> http://puu.sh/2WAd3.jpg
00:25:831 (4) - NC
01:20:740 (4,1) - Like this -> http://puu.sh/2WAfF.jpg
01:28:740 - song didn't finish..but it might not be matter~
all fix

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hi again~ Hi :3

General: Really good map, but rainbow difficulty need some more improvement ^^

HARD

00:06:922 (1) - No need for NC, if same combo, then it could be more of a challenge for hard difficulty because it is camouflaged stack

00:44:195 (5) - The slider should be curved more to the right, but keep the coordinates the same



Add a circle note between 00:59:286 (4) - & 00:59:649 (1) - Hmm, I dont think it's neccessary to put one here :3

The note will then become 00:59:468 (5) - if you choose to follow this mod ^

Perhaps finish the difficulty with a short slider, that ends at 01:30:195? Put a spinner instead :3
fixed the rest ^^
GOOD LUCK~

[Hard]

00:08:195 (3,4,5) - try this. looks much better for me

img/code

52,120,8195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,8377,2,0,P|108:36|144:40,1,65
124,108,8740,2,0,P|136:167|191:218,2,130

00:09:831 (1,2,3) - make it more blanket like

img

00:30:558 (1) - make it perfect stack
00:34:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:36:377 (1) - add finish
00:43:649 (4) - move to 192|204
00:49:468 (4) - move to 136|96
00:50:922 (1) - move to 188|72 then 00:51:649 - copy from 00:50:922 and ctrl+j ctrl+g and remove nc. done looks much better
00:58:195 (2) - better for me

img

01:18:558 (3,4) - look weird. move both to 384|114
01:26:558 - I have the nice one for you

code/img

256,68,85104,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,85468,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,192,85831,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86558,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,86922,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,192,87286,2,0,P|120:271|67:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,88013,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,192,88377,2,0,P|392:271|445:294,1,130,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:03:649 - add note :/ smoothly to play if you dont want to spam the note so try this example: I'm following the instrument :/ but if more people complain I'll change~ :3

img

00:06:558 - ^
00:09:468 - ^
00:18:377 - put note instead (normal note) and add finish also
00:29:468 - try this rhythm. sounds better and easier to play
00:30:195 (4) - what about make green line with 40% volume here and add finish. also make volume 60% and add finish at 00:30:558
00:33:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:34:922 (1) - add finish or add it instead
00:36:013 (3) - add finish on tail
00:36:740 (4) - ^
00:38:558 (9) - add finish on head
00:39:286 (10) - add finish
00:41:468 (5) - add finish on head
00:42:195 (6) - add finish
00:42:922 (1) - add finish on tail
00:47:649 (1) - add finish on head
00:50:922 (1,2) - add both finish on head instead 00:52:377 (3) - add finish instead
00:59:286 (3) - add finish
01:04:558 (5) - ^
01:04:740 (6) - add finish on tail (01:05:104)
01:05:468 (1) - add finish on head
01:11:286 (3) - ^
01:13:649 - add note
01:14:195 (3) - remove clap add finish on head
01:14:740 (5) - ^
01:15:468 (7) - add finish
01:17:104 (1) - add finish on head
01:17:831 (3) - ^
01:19:286 (1) - add finish
01:20:013 (2) - add finish on arrow
01:21:286 (3) - add finish on tail

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Hard]
Placement
00:26:922(3) change the direction of the slider like this, it would be more nice flow

SPOILER

01:11:286(5) NC here
Rhythm
00:16:013 unnecessary green line
and more
00:18:377(5) extend at 00:18:740 to follow the music
00:59:468 add a note here to follow the vocal
Hit Sonud
00:48:013(2) add finish at head
00:53:831(1)^
01:05:468(1)^
[Insane]
AR8 looks fine
Placement
00:30:195(1) useless NC I suppose
00:36:740(4) NC here
00:37:831(6) Ctrl+G
Rhythm
00:18:377 unnecessary green line
and more
00:03:649 I'll expect a note here because of the drum sound
00:34:013(6) to follow the vocal, maybe it would be better

SPOILER

01:10:558(5) stream better since the back drum sounds so.

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:43:286(2) delete finish at end

needs more work I suppose. good luck and star

1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
   00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう…
   その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
2. 00:06:649 - add d
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K
4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
5. 00:30:468 - add d
6. 00:36:286 - ^
7. 00:45:649 - ^
8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
10. 01:03:286 - add k

1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ?
2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ?
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。
4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ?
5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^
6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。
7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
   00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で…
8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて
9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動
10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ?
11. 00:59:831 (2) - del
12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^

TKSalt wrote:

hi~ /

[ReySHeL's Oni]

1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
   00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう… nice! kを追加するところをdにしてfixed
   その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
2. 00:06:649 - add d
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K ok
4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
5. 00:30:468 - add d
6. 00:36:286 - ^
7. 00:45:649 - ^ ok
8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
10. 01:03:286 - add k ok

一部のbig noteとadd noteについては保留で


[ReySHeL's Muzukashii]

1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ? ok
2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ? no
3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。 ok
4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ? ボーカルをフォローしているため
5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^ 繋がりがほしいです
6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。 保留で
7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
   00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で… 盛り上がりがほしいので
8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて 保留で
9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動 d追加しました
10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ? 保留で
11. 00:59:831 (2) - del 音ほしいです
12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^ ^

叩きやすい良い譜面ですが、もう少し難易度の差別化をしても良い気がしました。
good luck!!

S e e U wrote:

[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272

CDFA wrote:

LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music. fixed I put in whistles instead
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown? well since I dont like the look of a ridiculous long slider >< I'll change if more people suggest ^^
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3. fixed

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3) Changed into something else :3
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo fixed

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier. fixed
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end? fixed
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early. fixed

Cool stuff going on. Whee.

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196) fixed
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286) fixed
fixed the hitsound at the previous mod already =w= Did put in your finishes :3
[Insane]
Nothing spotted
Glad to hear :3

[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map.
Good luck for rank

Weez wrote:

Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.
Okay :3

[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here. fixed
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

Up to yanlu :3

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.
fixed
[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.
all fix

[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -
all fix
Thats all and good luck

1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?

1. 00:16:013 (1) - The pattern here would look neater if you make the slider look like this.
2. 00:26:195 (3) - Move the red node to (148,240) so that the blanket-ish pattern of 00:25:831 (2,3) would look better?
3. 00:30:558 - Finish? There's a heavy sound here.
4. 00:51:649 (1) - ^
5. 00:59:286 - Add whistle here...
6. 00:59:649 - ...and finish here to emphasize the vocal?
7. 01:05:104 - 01:05:468 - Same as the two suggestions above.
8. 01:10:922 (3) - I don't think the clap is necessary here. Remove?
9. 01:11:286 - Finish?
10. 01:14:740 - ^
11. 01:15:104 (2) - ^
12. 01:15:468 - ^
13. 01:22:195 - Add clap here to make the hitsound pattern consistent?

1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
6. 00:29:468 - ^
7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?

1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.

1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?

it's the same BG but took a bigger one and resized it :3

>Rainbow's Normal

1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
6. 00:29:468 - ^
7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?

>Hard

1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.

>Insane

1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^

k that's it.

Good luck on the way

baldrace wrote:

Hi Hi~from my queue
nm-w-

normal

00:45:834(5,1) not good What is not good here?

00:22:558 I guess rainbow wanted to catch the piano so no change

00:41:377(5) strange shape... I'll leave this up to Rainbow

01:15:949(1)^ fixed this one put a spinner instead

01:22:558(1)move to 01:22:922 and add a note at 01:22:558 fixed

01:28:013 We'll consider

hard

01:21:286(5)remove This note indicates that a spinner is coming

insane

00:45:831 you can use ctrl+shift+d draw star , use ctrl+shft+d change their distance then ctrl g fixed
good luck!

BoWAct wrote:

hi. from t/131705
I tried to play the difficulty of all

[Normal]
00:59:286 (2,3,4) - I think this is better matching fixed


[Hard]
00:34:558 (1,2,3) - Try drawing a triangle? I'll consider, for now I'll use mine

example

That close, it can be said from me to complete the form is over.
I hope Ranked!

1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd
2. 00:43:286 (2) - k?
3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound

1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k?

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, from my m4m queue.

Rainbow's Normal:

00:02:922 (1,2,3,4): Something is wrong with this diamond pattern, you will notice it if you see spacing between 00:04:013 (4,1) which is 0,94x, and it should be 0,99x.
00:09:468 (3): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:18:922 (4,1): Is this spacing decrease intentional?, if it is I would recommend you to change it to the constant spacing. (1x)
00:26:558 (3,4): I know that you're following vocal with (4) but sounds like (3) is not following anything, you should change rhythm like this instead.
00:35:468 (3): CTRL+J will give this pattern a better flow.
00:43:649 (3): Bad overlap, it ruins the pattern a bit, this slider will look better in x:104 y:72 instead.
00:45:104 (5): NC should be here.
00:46:558 (1): And this NC is unnecessary, remove it.
00:59:649 (3): NC to keep consistency with 00:56:740 (1).
01:09:649 (1): This may be confusing for some players, I would recommend to remove a repeat and add a note in 01:10:195, fits better imo.
01:14:195 (4): Add NC?
01:19:286 (4): Again, this is not following anything, make it a 1/1 slider instead and will fit better.
01:23:649 (1,2): 1,99x spacing? lol are you kidding me?, I don't think this could be intentional, and if it is let me say that this is terrible for a Normal diff, use 1,0x spacing like you did in the whole diff please.
01:23:649 (2,3): Remove both Whistles from sliders, there aren't any music here, sounds bad.

Hard:

00:02:922 (5): I know you can improve this blanket.
00:17:195 (4): Remove this note, music doesn't sound like this could be necessary.
00:17:468 (6): Add NC?
00:18:922 (10,1): Little spacing issue?, use 1,1x instead.
00:25:831 (1): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:34:558 (1): Not well stacked with tail of the previous slider, move to x:415 y:268.

Insane:

00:06:377 (3,1,2): Seems really boring like you did, try to change rhythm like this.
00:16:740 (3): Try to move it to x:188 y:288 instead, it won't be a jump but the pattern seems really better like that. (If you do remember to fix spacing on the next notes)
00:36:013 (3): Make this slider like this ?
00:40:377 (2,3): What's this?, you were using 1,4x spacing and suddenly increased to 2,6x.. just no, this seems really bad.
00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9): Same here, reduce spacing a bit.
00:58:558 (1): Unnecesary NC, remove it.
01:22:922 (5): NC should be here, and not in the next note.

I couldn't mod this diff very well because it doesn't look good for me, it has many things that can be improved, you have many weird patterns/spacing uses and stuff, and 1,4x spacing as the constant one is too much imo.

That's all for me, mapset still needs more work.

Good luck!

mingmichael wrote:

hello xChippy here the taiko mods that you requested to me
almost perfect! @-@ i almost can't find any misses there @A@
but, here my suggestion >,<//

[Muzu]

1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd want to easy
2. 00:43:286 (2) - k? no
3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound ok

[Oni]

1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k?

i follow the sound of the beat

Cream Vie wrote:

I am coming...

General .nothing

D=big red
d=small red
K=big blue
k=small blue

ReyShel-Muzu:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:10:013 (3) - k
00:23:649 - add d
00:38:922 (2) - d
00:42:195 (2) - K
00:48:013 (1,1,1) - K D K
01:04:558 (1) - k
01:28:740 (1) - D

ReyShel-oni:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:23:286 (1) - ddd
00:46:922 (1) - K
01:05:286 (3) - d
01:28:740 (1) - D

It's OK...

1. 00:02:013 (2) - the single clap doesn't feel good, i suggest changing into a finish
2. 00:04:922 (2) - ^
3. 00:07:831 (2) - ^
4. 00:03:831 (7) - add whistle at end?
5. 00:06:740 (1) - ^
6. 00:09:649 (7) - ^
7. 00:12:013 (5) - add clap to slider head w
8. 00:18:377 (8) - i think here is better flow~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826509
9. 00:42:195 (6) - put here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826515
10. 00:49:468 (3) - this blanket seems off, you need to lift the end a little bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826517
11. 01:04:195 (1,5) - it crossed the spacing, i think it doesn't look good, you could try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826559 (it's my style, though)
12. 01:05:468 (1,4) - i suggest making a symmetry or copy (1) and rotate some degrees..
13. 01:22:922 - since the music goes slower, i suggest lowering the slider speed from this point on to 0.75x

1. 00:24:377 (1) - clap -> whistle o.o
2. 00:40:558 (3) - move to x:392 y:212? it looks better o.o

1. 00:04:922 (2) - slider end doesn't need whistle
2. 00:15:649 (5,1) - the distance 5-1 is wrong
3. 00:46:558 (3) - i suggest this way, it would not get overlapped for (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826542
4. 01:12:013 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826544 ?

1. 01:02:558 (1) - ...为什么要这样 虽然好像问题不大
2. 01:05:468 (1) - 这圈往外面一点 有点紧 233

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue~


Insane

1. 00:02:013 (2) - the single clap doesn't feel good, i suggest changing into a finish
2. 00:04:922 (2) - ^
3. 00:07:831 (2) - ^
4. 00:03:831 (7) - add whistle at end?
5. 00:06:740 (1) - ^
6. 00:09:649 (7) - ^
7. 00:12:013 (5) - add clap to slider head w
8. 00:18:377 (8) - i think here is better flow~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826509
9. 00:42:195 (6) - put here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826515
10. 00:49:468 (3) - this blanket seems off, you need to lift the end a little bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826517
11. 01:04:195 (1,5) - it crossed the spacing, i think it doesn't look good, you could try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826559 (it's my style, though)
12. 01:05:468 (1,4) - i suggest making a symmetry or copy (1) and rotate some degrees..
13. 01:22:922 - since the music goes slower, i suggest lowering the slider speed from this point on to 0.75x

Hard

1. 00:24:377 (1) - clap -> whistle o.o
2. 00:40:558 (3) - move to x:392 y:212? it looks better o.o

Normal

1. 00:04:922 (2) - slider end doesn't need whistle
2. 00:15:649 (5,1) - the distance 5-1 is wrong
3. 00:46:558 (3) - i suggest this way, it would not get overlapped for (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826542
4. 01:12:013 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826544 ?

Fixed all :3
:3

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi xchippy >3< ! From my queue ;3

let'su go !

Rainbow's Normal

- 00:02:922 (1,1) - stack better '-'
- 00:05:831 (1,3) - align them
- 00:20:013 (2) - move middle point to x:200,y:252 and end point x:284,y:248
- 00:24:377 (1) - why this note NC ? remove NC here 00:24:740 (1) -
- 00:30:558 (1) - move to x:408,y:128 and then ..
- 00:30:558 (1,2,3) - Make sometinh like that I'll let this open for Sun :3

SPOILER

- 00:40:013 (2,4) - align them ?
- 00:52:922 (1,2,3) - it's a bit hard to read for a normal try that

SPOILER

- 01:06:922 (1) - stack perfectly with 01:05:468 (1) -'s end or move somewhere else,
- 01:12:013 (2) - middle point x:44,y:340, end point x:-20,y:316
Fixed the rest

Hard

- 00:26:740 (2) - move to x:120,y:180
- 00:42:195 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
- 01:11:104 (4) - delete this note ?
- 01:15:468 (1) - remove finish
- 01:22:922 - from here to the end volume 10% or 15% is pretty nice :3
fixed all except the volume i lowered it to 30% :3 since I want to hear the whistles ^^

Insane

- 00:02:013 (2) - what about add a jump like this I'll consider

SPOILER

- 00:04:922 (2) - same here ^
- 00:13:468 (4) - move to x:284,y:60 and then ..
- 00:13:831 (5) - ^ to x:252,y:244
- 00:31:104 (2) - better in this way

SPOILER

- 00:35:468 (2) - move to x:336,y:284
- 01:01:649 (7,8) - put the same spacing as 01:01:468 (6,7) -
- 01:06:922 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, delete this 3 notes and instead, put the same slider as 01:06:195 (2) - ?
Actually I want to follow the vocal here ><
- 01:22:922 - same as hard diff volume to 10% or 15%
Fixed the rest~! :3

that's all, good mapset, and good song, you get my star, go go xchippy ;3 !

Smoothie wrote:

Hi again xP
From my modding queue~

[Insane]
00:03:831 (7) - How about adding a reverse here? I'm following the instruments o-o
00:06:740 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? Don't forget to swap your hitsounds too if you did that. imo it flows good now o-o
00:09:649 (7) - Add a reverse and place it like that? It's pretty nice imo. http://puu.sh/3my1l.jpg ^
00:12:922 (2) - Stack it on 00:12:740 (1) instead~
00:17:649 (6) - Ctrl+G for a better flow? Imo it's already good o-o
00:23:286 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap~
00:29:649 (3) - Should end on the red line.
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap on the start and add a finish? :3
00:36:013 (3) - ^
00:52:377 (3) - Add a finish?
00:55:831 - Add a note here for a better flow? following vocal
01:07:468 - ^ ^
01:15:649 (1) - I think it sound better without the whistle.
01:25:831 (1) - Remover the NC
fixed the rest
[Hard]
00:02:013 (2) - The clap on the slider start sounds a bit odd. How about adding a finish instead?
00:04:922 (2) - ^
00:07:831 (2) - ^
00:24:377 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap?
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap and add a finish?
00:36:013 (3) - ^
01:09:468 - I recomment you to add a note here.
fixed all
[Rainbow's Normal]
00:35:468 (3) - Add a finish no the slider start instead?
00:36:013 (4) - Finish~
00:38:558 (5) - The clap sould be on the slider start.
00:46:558 (3) - Add a whistle on the slider start?

fixed all
That's all~
Good luck!

Verlaren wrote:

all diffs must be started & ended in equal time

osu file format v12

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Title:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
Creator:xChippy
Version:yanlu's Easy
Source:To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
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Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

Alarido wrote:

A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

[Hard]
♥ No complaints here too Yay

[Insane]
A part I felt a bit harder to read than the average level on the diff is 01:21:286 (3,1,2,3) - could make something like http://puu.sh/3sW6a.jpg ?
fixed

And that's it ^^

GOOD LUCK RANK !!! and take a star *

Att.

1. Tags in Rainbow's Normal were garbled, please correct it o/
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:33:468 (1) - finish at the head?
2. 00:45:104 (1) - ^
3. 01:12:377 (2,3) - no stack in Easy diff
4. 01:13:831 (4,1) - ^
5. 01:19:649 (3,1) - ^

1. 00:42:195 (1) - finish?

1. 00:38:558 (5) - the sv was changed, put a NC on it?
2. 00:41:468 (6) - ^
3. 00:41:286 (5,6) - Putting like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:22:558 (3) - move 1 grid right to make it a perfect blanket?
2. 00:59:104 - missing a drum hit?
3. 01:05:377 - ^
4. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - how about arranging like this? :
   
   SPOILER

   

happy623 wrote:

sorry for late ;w;
Request via PM
I cant mod taiko diff so I have to skip them, sorry OwQ

[General]

1. Tags in Rainbow's Normal were garbled, please correct it o/
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:38:558 (5) - the sv was changed, put a NC on it?
2. 00:41:468 (6) - ^
3. 00:41:286 (5,6) - Putting like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:22:558 (3) - move 1 grid right to make it a perfect blanket?
2. 00:59:104 - missing a drum hit?
3. 01:05:377 - ^
4. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - how about arranging like this? :
   
   SPOILER

   

Sorry for the shortness
nice map
ヽ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ Star and Good Luck

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Good >.o /

Please check the tags, they are different fixed

[Hard]
00:24:377 (7) - New Combo (looks not related with the previous notes) fixed
01:21:286 (5) - Remove circle Why?

[Insane]
>.o)b

Good luck on ranking!

Tur00 wrote:

A mod From my queue :3

[Hard]

Nice Diff! it's mapped really nice :3

01:24:013 (3) - delete the reverse arrow , there's no beat in the last part
And add timing point to change the Sound to "Soft" the slider sounds really weird in this relax part.
01:25:831 (3,3,5) - the same of above , about the Sound "Soft" .
01:28:922 (1) - delete this spinner , is really short so , is not necessary to put it there.
Fixed the Soft sounds, and I'll consider about the spinner

[Insane]

00:10:195 (1,2,3,4) - These beats sound a bit weird.. try to put "soft" hitsound . fixed
00:32:558 (2,3,4) - why don't you try a Curved stream ? The map is Funniest when the streams are in curve. I'll consider as well

Good Luck!

1. tags are not same every diffs. Normal had garbage characters.
2. source: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
   many maps do not have its source. however it is wrong, "toaru (とある)" is one word. but I guess if you think do not need it, be able to not change.
3. soft-hitclap1.wav and soft-hitwhistle1.wav are unused? if these sounds are unused, must remove.

1. 00:10:195 (1) - remove clap and add drum-hitwhistle at end.
   
   would be better to use it because instruments do not have sound like soft-hitclap.
2. 00:11:649 (2) - ^
3. 00:21:831 (1) - why does not this note follow vocal? there is vocal at 00:22:377.
   
   
   1. 00:21:831 (1) - 3/2 slider and a repeat
   ^my suggestion
4. 00:35:468 - add finish. there is sound what is same as 00:34:922 - . so would be better to do it.
5. 00:59:286 - I guess this whistle is mistake... that did not exist on 01:02:195 - . in addition, not have strange instrument than other parts. so I think should remove it.
6. 01:05:104 - ^
7. 01:15:468 (3) - extend end to 01:16:558? I felt this end is little early. this vocal was extended, so may be hard to understand correctly the end.
   if you worry this suggestion, you can also extend to 01:16:740 - because there is instrument.
8. 01:22:922 (1) - why does not follow vocal? should be end at 01:29:468 - imo.

1. 00:02:013 - add whistle. because there is sound what is same as 00:01:468 - and 00:04:922 - .
2. 00:14:195 (3,4) - why did you stack here? imo, not makes sense to stop flow because .
   
   
   

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   this affects to 00:13:104 (1,2,3,4,5) - . so need to remove those
   try this
3. 00:21:831 (1) - rhythm suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:21:831 (1) - circle
   2. 00:22:013 (2) - 1/1 slider
4. 00:35:468 (3,2) - (nazi) I think this overlap is not good appearance.
   
   
5. 00:41:286 (5) - slider end at 00:41:831 - . would be better to follow instrument in this map.
6. 00:43:649 (3,4,1) - (nazi) not be symmetry...
7. 01:26:558 (1,2,1,2,3) - (DS) why did you use x1.1? this is quiet part, so at least x1.1 would not fit here. should use x1.0.

1. 00:17:831 (6,7,8) - three circles are bit hard in quiet part imo. would be better to be more easier.
   
   1. change (6,7) to 1/2 slider.
2. 00:32:013 (5,6,7) - follow instrument here?
   
   
   1. 00:32:013 (5) - circle
   2. 00:32:195 (6) - circle
   3. 00:32:377 (7) - circle
   4. 00:32:558 (8) - circle
   5. 00:32:740 (9) - 1/1 slider
   try this
   maybe double stack fits this section.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/48063
   
   
   like this circles.
3. 00:50:922 (1,2,3) - add jump here. this section have most volume on this song, so it makes sense to do it imo.
   
   
4. 01:28:013 (4) - forgot to add NC?

1. 00:06:195 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large on this melody. this part is bit quiet, so would be better to change to be smaller.
   
   
   like this size
2. 00:08:377 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
3. 00:22:377 (2,3) - ctrl+G ?

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.


[General]

1. tags are not same every diffs. Normal had garbage characters.
2. source: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S
   many maps do not have its source. however it is wrong, "toaru (とある)" is one word. but I guess if you think do not need it, be able to not change.
3. soft-hitclap1.wav and soft-hitwhistle1.wav are unused? if these sounds are unused, must remove.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:831 (6,7,8) - three circles are bit hard in quiet part imo. would be better to be more easier.
   
   1. change (6,7) to 1/2 slider.
2. 00:32:013 (5,6,7) - follow instrument here?
   
   
   1. 00:32:013 (5) - circle
   2. 00:32:195 (6) - circle
   3. 00:32:377 (7) - circle
   4. 00:32:558 (8) - circle
   5. 00:32:740 (9) - 1/1 slider
   try this
   maybe double stack fits this section.
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/48063
   
   
   like this circles.
3. 00:50:922 (1,2,3) - add jump here. this section have most volume on this song, so it makes sense to do it imo.
   
   
4. 01:28:013 (4) - forgot to add NC?

[Insane]

1. 00:06:195 (2,3,4,5,6) - this jump is too large on this melody. this part is bit quiet, so would be better to change to be smaller.
   
   
   like this size
2. 00:08:377 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
3. 00:22:377 (2,3) - ctrl+G ?

gl

Xinely wrote:

Hi xChippy
mod from my queue
gratz, you are nice ninja
[General]
tags conflict in Normal, or we called it broken kanji http://puu.sh/3uTsO.png
soft-hitclap1 and soft-hitwhistle1 found from http://puu.sh/3vkB2.png didn't give any custom hitsound, change "1" to "2" or remove it if you not use it

[Hard]
OD+1? it's so easy LOL
00:18:922 (1) - it's better if you follow vocal here, try http://puu.sh/3vknu.jpg
00:20:013 (2) - ^
00:21:831 (1) - add finish too?
00:36:740 (2,3) - it's more neat if you make branket in here
00:43:649 (4) - 1 grid up for branket
01:13:831 (1,2) - try http://puu.sh/3vkNj.jpg ? it's more follow vocal
01:18:558 (3) - itentional spacing?
i just say it's need more jump to make this diff become fun
Fixed all =w=
TBH i can't mod insane so that's all
Good Luck ~

1. 00:06:558 (3) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint: x172 y336
2. 00:32:013 (3) - ^? x312y220 Midpoint
   
   It's mostly hitsounds, I know you are making a pattern, and if you don't want to change it just ignore the rest:
   
3. 00:24:377 (2) - Clap?
4. 00:25:468 - Remove clap
5. 00:26:563 - Clap
6. 00:26:922 - Remove clap
7. 00:27:286 (4) - Clap
8. 00:28:740 - Clap
9. 00:30:195 - Maybe a very low finish?
10. 00:33:468 - Finish?
11. 00:55:649 (3) - Clap
12. 00:56:740 - I think you could get away with a finish here.
13. 00:58:558 (3) - Clap
14. 01:01:468 (3) - Clap
15. 01:01:831 - Tbh I feel this doesn't fit, do a clap on 01:01:468 (3), and on sliderend maybe?
16. 01:02:558 - Clap
17. 01:03:286 - Clap
18. 01:07:286 (3) - Clap
19. 01:07:649 - Remove clap
20. 01:08:013 - Clap
21. 01:08:377 - Clap
22. 01:10:195 - Clap
23. 01:10:922 (3) - Clap
24. 01:12:377 (2) - Clap
25. 01:13:831 (4) - Clapu

1. Please remove all the slider noise from 00:12:740 - 00:18:558. The bassdrum is cool, but slidernoise kinda ruins the song imho.
   
   Oh and ye, you should probably use the custom sampleset on some parts instead, it fits better than claps tbh ;;
   
2. 00:20:740 - Remove Clap and add one at 00:21:104, sounds better imo
3. 00:22:558 - Heavy beat, make a clap please
4. 00:32:377 (2) - Clappu
5. 00:55:649 (5) - Blanket this a bit better? Endpoint to x292 y132
6. 01:00:740 (3) - Clappu
7. 01:06:922 (3) - Make this one go like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850173
8. 01:18:922 (3) - Soft custom clap?

1. 00:02:558 (3) - Remove this, lengthen (2) to 00:02:558, it follows the guitar, and keeps the tempo up.
2. 00:09:831 (1) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint to x312 y192, this isn't that great, but I couldn't find a good one.
3. 00:22:558 - Maybe do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850200
4. 00:46:922 - Imo this clap here is a bit overkill, even for a buildup.
5. 01:26:922 - You can hear ''Toooo'' here, remove (2), move (3) to 01:26:922 then stack a note ontop of (1) at 01:27:649, then RNC on (1) and NC on the new circle.

1. imo CTRL-G 00:10:377 (2,3) these two :p
2. 00:22:558 - I think you could have done this more circular. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850237
3. 00:53:286 - I think something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850243 could have been a very good and explosive start for the chorus.
4. 01:02:013 - Maybe something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850248 This might be better due to not having to stack on sliderend, atm it looks kinda weird imo, and it'll make small jumps :p
5. 01:05:013 - Another suggestion; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850258 Make it jumpy like this and it'll also flow well imo

f e a r wrote:

I wish I were a bird

[Hard]

1. 00:02:558 (3) - Remove this, lengthen (2) to 00:02:558, it follows the guitar, and keeps the tempo up.
2. 00:09:831 (1) - Blanket this one a bit better? Midpoint to x312 y192, this isn't that great, but I couldn't find a good one.
3. 00:22:558 - Maybe do something like this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850200
4. 00:46:922 - Imo this clap here is a bit overkill, even for a buildup.
5. 01:26:922 - You can hear ''Toooo'' here, remove (2), move (3) to 01:26:922 then stack a note ontop of (1) at 01:27:649, then RNC on (1) and NC on the new circle.

fixed all except the first one IMO it fits the instrument now :3
About the hitsound changed to the custom one =w= (actually I forgot to change =w=)
I would do hitsounds too, but tbh, I would rather you change to use the custom ones like the others, if you decide to do that then PM me and I'll come back (y)

[Insane]

1. imo CTRL-G 00:10:377 (2,3) these two :p
2. 00:22:558 - I think you could have done this more circular. Example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850237
3. 00:53:286 - I think something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850243 could have been a very good and explosive start for the chorus.
4. 01:02:013 - Maybe something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850248 This might be better due to not having to stack on sliderend, atm it looks kinda weird imo, and it'll make small jumps :p
5. 01:05:013 - Another suggestion; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/850258 Make it jumpy like this and it'll also flow well imo

Fixed all except the last jump suggestion,imo it flows well as it is tho and the last circle should be blue tick (since there is a drum hit)
That is all! Good luck on your mapset!

1. 00:09:831 - imo this really feels heavier than it needs, lower the hitsounds to 40%, do the same at 00:12:740, and 00:17:104 if you could, as they are the ''slow'' part of the song.
2. 00:10:558 (3) - Remove clap at sliderstart, add a clap at the repeat
3. You could add a whistle at every white tick from 00:13:468 to 00:18:377 if you want to, and get away with it as it compliments the song imho.
4. 00:18:907 - Whistle
5. 00:19:649 (3) - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
6. 00:21:104 - ^
7. 00:22:558 - Clap
8. 00:23:286 - Soft sampleset a whistle here if you'd like, remove new combo too while you're at it.
9. 00:42:922 - I know theres a sound here, but idk if it's important enough for a finish. Just pointing it out, pay attention to it incase other modders point it out you might wanna change it. :p
10. 00:45:104 - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
11. 00:45:831 - ^
12. 00:46:558 - ^
13. 00:46:922 - ^
14. 00:47:653 - Personally I would add a finish here.
15. 00:48:377 - Clap
16. 00:49:104 - ^
17. 01:02:558 - You could do a buildup here, add clap at sliderend and 3, imo that would fit quite a lot.
18. 01:17:104 - Dunno if this sampleset is intentional xD
19. Since I'm an idiot and forgot this the last time; Move 01:25:831 (3) to 01:25:468, and hitcircle 01:26:195. Same reasoning as last time.
20. If you did ^that, remove new combo at 01:26:558 (1), add new combo at 01:26:195 (3) and remove new combo at 01:28:013 (1)

f e a r wrote:

Kay I'm back, no KD.

Obligatory I wish I were a bird

[Hard]

1. 00:09:831 - imo this really feels heavier than it needs, lower the hitsounds to 40%, do the same at 00:12:740, and 00:17:104 if you could, as they are the ''slow'' part of the song.
2. 00:10:558 (3) - Remove clap at sliderstart, add a clap at the repeat
3. You could add a whistle at every white tick from 00:13:468 to 00:18:377 if you want to, and get away with it as it compliments the song imho.
4. 00:18:907 - Whistle
5. 00:19:649 (3) - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
6. 00:21:104 - ^
7. 00:22:558 - Clap
8. 00:23:286 - Soft sampleset a whistle here if you'd like, remove new combo too while you're at it.
9. 00:42:922 - I know theres a sound here, but idk if it's important enough for a finish. Just pointing it out, pay attention to it incase other modders point it out you might wanna change it. :p
10. 00:45:104 - Remove whistle and add clap? Or both.
11. 00:45:831 - ^
12. 00:46:558 - ^
13. 00:46:922 - ^
14. 00:47:653 - Personally I would add a finish here.
15. 00:48:377 - Clap
16. 00:49:104 - ^
17. 01:02:558 - You could do a buildup here, add clap at sliderend and 3, imo that would fit quite a lot.
18. 01:17:104 - Dunno if this sampleset is intentional xD
19. Since I'm an idiot and forgot this the last time; Move 01:25:831 (3) to 01:25:468, and hitcircle 01:26:195. Same reasoning as last time.
20. If you did ^that, remove new combo at 01:26:558 (1), add new combo at 01:26:195 (3) and remove new combo at 01:28:013 (1)

fixed all =w=
GL further and hope my mod was useful \o

Otonashi Yuzuru wrote:

Hi From IJO's mod queue ~ :3

[Hard]

*It's great too

00:23:286 (6) - imo it's better if you make it end on 00:23:649
Well it's following the piano in the background :3

[Insane]

00:52:377 - remove nc. you can add nc at v fixed
00:52:922 - NC fixed
01:28:740 - imo the spinner is too hard with OD 7? D:
errr I'll consider changing it ^^
That's all, sorry for the bad mod D:
Nice map and Good Luck!

mintong89 wrote:

hi :3

[Insane]

00:10:558 (3,4) - +whistle
00:17:286 (1) - put slider at here little weird, i prefer 00:17:468 - to 00:17:649 - as a slider and 00:17:286 as a circle.
00:24:740 (1) - too curve
00:27:649 (1) - i think it would more fun if you like this

SPOILER

00:44:922 (3) - It would be better if you nc here and 00:45:104 (1) - remove nc, it seem more clear~
00:52:922 (1) - i think NC here, because DS sudden changed and player may confused.
01:02:377 (6) - you can put at 01:03:286 (3) - slider ends, it will more fun~
01:09:649 (1,2) - CTRL+G
01:15:468 (1) - remove NC, because after is a spinner so no need.
01:22:922 (1) - i think straight slider is better at here.imo this fits music better :3

Fixed the rest =w=

[Hard]no problem, but just wonder beginning part's hitsound why didn't same with Insane diff.

Oops o-o changed it~
good luck~

1. Add Unicode Artist? 井口裕香
2. Add "Biribiri" to tags.

1. 00:13:104 - Try adding whistle on 2nd and 4th beat: 00:13:468 - 00:14:195 - 00:14:922 - etc . Currently it sounds a bit empty to me.
2. 00:18:922 (1,2,3) - Imo, you should try using the regular soft whistles here. No hitsound always makes me sad
3. 00:18:922 (1) - Oh yeah, add a finish on the head.
4. 00:51:649 (1) - I don't think you need a new combo here, and removing it also makes it easier to see the triangle between (3,4,5)
5. 01:02:558 (1) - Intentionally no normal sampleset on repeat? Also, the repeat is being covered. I think it's probably fine with the amount of time you have on this, but it is an Easy, so maybe you want to move it a bit.
6. 01:17:104 - Soft custom sampleset 1? The default claps sound really off to me.
7. 01:22:922 (1) - End this at 01:28:740 - , makes more sense since the song ends there as well; currently the map ends a little before the song itself, so it feels off.
8. Generally I wish there were more hitsounds in this actually, especially the chorus I think would work better with a 2nd and 4th beat pattern of hitsounding. Still, the map itself is well done, and plays well for Easy.

1. 00:14:558 (4) - and 00:16:013 (1,2) - Intentional sliderbody whistles? I don't really think the fit, so I would remove them.
2. 00:18:922 (1) - Possibly use a finish instead on the head?
3. 00:18:195 (4) - Imo, it works better if you tilt it so that it points towards 00:18:922 (1).
4. 00:20:013 (2) - Swap so that whistle is on head instead of repeat.
5. 00:22:558 (2) - Needs some hitsound, like normal-hitnormal or something similar.
6. 00:22:922 (3) - Whistle on end.
7. 00:45:104 (1) - Make this an exact flip from 00:43:649 (3). Also center 00:44:740 (4)
8. 00:53:831 - I think the chorus is a wee bit loud, maybe lower the volume a bit?
9. 01:07:649 (4) - Might wanna move this more to the left so it's not overlapped by (2). Just looks a bit sloppy imo.
10. 01:11:286 - For this part I think you should use normal-hitnormal as the clap sound, just so you don't transition so suddenly from normal sampleset to soft.
11. 01:28:013 (1,2,3) - It doesn't really matter, but move this so it's completely centered?
12. Mostly just some hitsound suggestions. The map itself looks fine as a Normal.

1. 00:01:468 - Change this to Soft sampleset custom 1, then lower volume at 00:02:558 - 00:04:377, and use the whistle sound on every white tick (or every other white tick if every tick sounds too much for you). Same for 00:05:468 - etc.
2. 00:18:922 (1) - Either use finish or a regular soft whistle on the head here.
3. 00:23:286 (6) - Regular soft whistle on head and tail.
4. 00:41:286 (5,1) - Unstack? Follows 00:38:377 (4,1) - , and flows better as well imo.
5. 00:52:922 (4,5) - Because of the symmetrical nature of the pattern right before, this just feels really randomly placed. I would just try to work it into the symmetry like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851888 It also makes sense that this is symmetrical since it's part of the same combo.
6. 01:14:195 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on head.
7. Actually I like this quite a lot due to how simple it feels as well as it being fairly appropriate as a Hard.

1. Maaybe OD8 if you want to, but considering the overall difficulty of the mapset, OD7 works pretty well.
2. 00:05:831 (1) - Remove whistle from head, and add whistle on tail. And remove whistle from 00:06:195 (2) and 00:06:558 (4) to follow the same whistlepattern as 00:02:558 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
3. 00:09:104 (7) - Remove whistle, same reason^
4. 00:10:740 (4,5) - This part feels pretty awkward because of how the music doesn't really change, but the spacing does change just here. Imo following the same 1.5x spacing like before would work better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851912
5. 00:18:922 (1) - Add either regular soft whistle or soft finish here on head.
6. 00:46:922 (2,3,4,5) - Arrange like this to avoid overlap with 00:46:195 (7) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851915
7. 00:48:377 (3,2) - Add clap on this. The squares have no hitsound
8. 00:49:468 (4,1) - This part is confusing because of how the spacing between here and 00:49:740 (1,2) - is different, and the use of new combo. It really looks like (4,1) is actually in 1/1. It actually tripped me up causing me to 100 on it, so you pobably should change this somehow. Also swap new combo for 00:49:468 (4,1) - .
9. 01:02:558 (1) - Add clap on head here, as well as 01:04:013 (1) - for a kin dof build-up effect before the chorus repeats.
10. 01:05:104 (3,4) - I don't think this plays very well, because this whole part is kind of like a build-up to the repeated chorus, having to stop for 3/4 really feels weird. Imo, using a slider works much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851924
11. 01:10:377 - Add note at 248;288? You'll have to rearrange the stream after it, but I really think it fits for this pattern.
12. 01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Intentional different spacing? It doesn't look or feel that good tbh, so you should just space all of it at 1.4x
13. 01:14:558 (2) - Clap.
14. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - Are you able to make this stream's curve look nicer? also fix the spacing on the last slider there, since it looks ugly when the stream isn't even. I know the slider slows down, but it isn't really that hard to read anyway, so it should be fine.
15. 01:28:377 (2) - Whistle.
16. Good job here, I enjoyed this map.

CXu wrote:

Yo, mod request from my queue. =3=~

[General]

1. Add Unicode Artist? 井口裕香 fixed
2. Add "Biribiri" to tags.

Gogo Biribiri >w<

[Hard]

1. 00:01:468 - Change this to Soft sampleset custom 1, then lower volume at 00:02:558 - 00:04:377, and use the whistle sound on every white tick (or every other white tick if every tick sounds too much for you). Same for 00:05:468 - etc.
2. 00:18:922 (1) - Either use finish or a regular soft whistle on the head here.
3. 00:23:286 (6) - Regular soft whistle on head and tail.
4. 00:41:286 (5,1) - Unstack? Follows 00:38:377 (4,1) - , and flows better as well imo.
5. 00:52:922 (4,5) - Because of the symmetrical nature of the pattern right before, this just feels really randomly placed. I would just try to work it into the symmetry like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851888 It also makes sense that this is symmetrical since it's part of the same combo.
6. 01:14:195 (2) - Finish instead of whistle on head.
7. Actually I like this quite a lot due to how simple it feels as well as it being fairly appropriate as a Hard.

fixed all :3.
[Insane]

1. Maaybe OD8 if you want to, but considering the overall difficulty of the mapset, OD7 works pretty well.
2. 00:05:831 (1) - Remove whistle from head, and add whistle on tail. And remove whistle from 00:06:195 (2) and 00:06:558 (4) to follow the same whistlepattern as 00:02:558 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -
3. 00:09:104 (7) - Remove whistle, same reason^
4. 00:10:740 (4,5) - This part feels pretty awkward because of how the music doesn't really change, but the spacing does change just here. Imo following the same 1.5x spacing like before would work better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851912
5. 00:18:922 (1) - Add either regular soft whistle or soft finish here on head.
6. 00:46:922 (2,3,4,5) - Arrange like this to avoid overlap with 00:46:195 (7) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851915
7. 00:48:377 (3,2) - Add clap on this. The squares have no hitsound
8. 00:49:468 (4,1) - This part is confusing because of how the spacing between here and 00:49:740 (1,2) - is different, and the use of new combo. It really looks like (4,1) is actually in 1/1. It actually tripped me up causing me to 100 on it, so you pobably should change this somehow. Also swap new combo for 00:49:468 (4,1) - .
9. 01:02:558 (1) - Add clap on head here, as well as 01:04:013 (1) - for a kin dof build-up effect before the chorus repeats.
10. 01:05:104 (3,4) - I don't think this plays very well, because this whole part is kind of like a build-up to the repeated chorus, having to stop for 3/4 really feels weird. Imo, using a slider works much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851924
11. 01:10:377 - Add note at 248;288? You'll have to rearrange the stream after it, but I really think it fits for this pattern.
12. 01:12:740 (1,2,3) - Intentional different spacing? It doesn't look or feel that good tbh, so you should just space all of it at 1.4x
13. 01:14:558 (2) - Clap.
14. 01:22:558 (5,6,7,8,1) - Are you able to make this stream's curve look nicer? also fix the spacing on the last slider there, since it looks ugly when the stream isn't even. I know the slider slows down, but it isn't really that hard to read anyway, so it should be fine.
15. 01:28:377 (2) - Whistle.
16. Good job here, I enjoyed this map.

Fixed all, Hehe glad that you enjoyed it >w<
Generally I really like the general diffspread here, especially Hard and Insane. I didn't have all too much to say, so that's good!
Good job, and good luck!

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, from my queue
yay, railgun =w=

[Hard]
00:13:104 ~ 00:23:286 - use same hitsound pattern as insane? Prefer to keep this diff like this :3
00:23:286 (6) - imo whistle on end doesn't fit given it's more of a "stop" feeling, remove it? Well it follows the pianjo ><, I'll consider
01:22:922 - use slowdown here? there's a slowdown in insane 0.0 fixed

[Insane]
00:10:377 (2) - I only hear one cymbal here, remove finish?
00:38:558 (4) - add finish on start? don't think it's needed a clap is enough :3
00:41:468 (4) - add finish on start? ^
00:49:740 (2) - spacing is confusing cause you just used this spacing for 1/2s
00:51:468 - imo add note here with jump would feel good and fit strong vocals ~
00:53:286 (3) - make a perfect triangle (x: 360 y: 120)
00:58:195 (1) - move it up to make it equidistant (x: 440 y: 192)
01:09:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is a really big jump out of nowhere, perhaps reduce it a bit? Taken into consider
01:22:922 (1) - start whistles here plz
Fixed the rest :3
nice map, good luck

_Tokage_ wrote:

random mod \:D/ since Senritsu is here

[Hard]

00:23:286 (6) - change it into circle, its more enjoyable to hear imo orz i'll consider :3
00:37:831 (3) - add Whistle at end of slider fixed
00:38:377 (4) - ^ fixed

[Insane]

00:49:468 (1) - Remove NC here, put NC at 00:49:740 (2) fixed
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle here? and Clap here 01:10:922 (5) did all whistle instead =w=

well since your map is neat, thats all~
sorry i cant mod Easy and Normal nicely ;___; Good Luck btw~

lkx_Shore wrote:

hi

[Insane]
00:56:740 (1) - slider head add finish? added whistle
01:04:013 (1) - remove whistle,add finish? fixed
01:08:377 (1) - slider head add finish? I prefer whistle
01:10:558 (1) - add finish added
01:28:377 (2) - x256 y244 prefer to stack

[Hard]
00:23:286 (6) - slider tail silencer
00:45:104 (1) - slider head add finish?
fixed all