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ReySHeL

TKSalt wrote:

hi~ /

[ReySHeL's Oni]
  1. 00:01:831 - このあたりの音取りはMuzukashiiとの差別化のために変更しても良いと思います。
    00:02:195 (1) - を 00:02:377 - に移動させて、00:02:740 - に k を追加する形とかどうでしょう… nice! kを追加するところをdにしてfixed :)
    その後に続く同じパターンも同様に…
  2. 00:06:649 - add d
  3. 00:18:377 (1) - K ok
  4. 00:20:740 (1) - を 00:20:922 - に移動
  5. 00:30:468 - add d
  6. 00:36:286 - ^
  7. 00:45:649 - ^ ok
  8. 00:50:649 (2) - del
  9. 00:59:286 (1) - K
  10. 01:03:286 - add k ok
一部のbig noteとadd noteについては保留で


[ReySHeL's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:10:013 (3,4) - del ? ok
  2. 00:18:013 (2) - d ? no
  3. 00:18:377 (1) - K もしここをそのままでキープするなら、上記の通りに変更した方が音にメリハリが付きそうです。 ok
  4. 00:23:104 (2) - del ? ボーカルをフォローしているため
  5. 00:42:013 (1) - ^ 繋がりがほしいです
  6. 00:45:013 - ^ Muzukashiiなので無理に音を取らなくても良い気もします。 保留で
  7. 00:50:377 - このあたりは本当に微かにしかドラムが聞こえないので、ボーカルにフィットさせても良いかも知れないです…
    00:50:377 (3) - を1/4で右にある青線に移動させて00:50:558 (1) - を削除で… 盛り上がりがほしいので
  8. 00:54:013 (5) - del ( 00:56:922 - に合わせて 保留で
  9. 00:57:649 (4) - を 00:58:195 - に移動 d追加しました
  10. 00:59:286 (1) - K ? 保留で
  11. 00:59:831 (2) - del 音ほしいです
  12. 01:14:377 (2) - ^ ^
叩きやすい良い譜面ですが、もう少し難易度の差別化をしても良い気がしました。
good luck!! 8-)
良い指摘ありがとうございます!
変更するかすごい迷うところばかりでした。
とても参考になりました :)
thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/30ujZ.zip
S e e U
[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound :D
[Nomal]
00:08:740 (2,3) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781257
00:16:013 (1) - ^
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272
Topic Starter
xChippy

S e e U wrote:

[Genaral]
add 'finish' hit sound :D
[insane]
00:29:468 (1) - add 'clap' hit sound
00:30:195 (3) - ^
00:50:922 (1,2) - Get the slider to change the appearance of this >>http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781272
All fix thanks for your mod :3
Shohei Ohtani
LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music.
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3.

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3)
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier.
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end?
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early.

Normal:
00:21:831 (4) - Could you make this a bit more symmetric with (3)? Right now it looks really wrong D:
00:53:468 (3) - ew um like. Make this more appealing :3. Right now the second tick is WAY too high so it looks hunchbacked.
01:11:286 (1) - Make this tilde slider's curves larger.
01:21:104 (3) - I'd suggest not trying to use a tilde slider going up because it usually never looks good ;A;
01:23:649 (2) - Same as other tilde sliders like I can't tell what this is supposed to be

Easy:
00:23:286 (3) - Remove the clap like it's so unfitting ;a:

Cool stuff going on. Whee.
Aunxfb
Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[yanlu's Easy]
00:07:286 (1,2,3) - how about make it into: http://puu.sh/33AEx/721d52b542.png ? (rotating them 18 degree clockwise seems to almost do the job)

hitsounds
00:24:377 (4) - drum whistle? or a suitable custom hitsound
00:24:740 (1) - remove clap
00:25:831 (2) - add clap
00:26:195 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:27:286 (4) - add clap
00:27:649 (1) - remove clap
00:28:740 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:29:468 (3) - remove clap on second circle, add clap to first and last circle
00:30:558 (1) - remove clap
00:31:649 (2) - add clap
00:32:013 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:33:104 (4) - add clap
00:33:468 (1) - remove clap
00:34:558 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:39:286 (1) - add finish
00:42:195 (1) - ^
00:48:013 (1) - remove clap
00:49:831 (2) - add clap
00:50:195 (3) - remove clap on first circle, add clap to second circle
00:53:831 (1) - remove clap
00:55:649 (3) - add clap
00:56:013 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:56:740 (1) - remove clap
00:58:558 (3) - add clap
00:58:922 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:59:649 (1) - remove clap
01:01:468 (3) - add clap
01:01:831 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:04:740 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:05:468 (1) - remove clap
01:07:286 (3) - add clap
01:07:649 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:08:377 (1) - remove clap
01:09:831 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:11:286 (1) - remove clap
01:12:377 (2) - add clap
01:12:740 (3) - remove clap
01:13:831 (4) - add clap
Note:There's quite some 'claps' being 'in' the sliders, use custom slidertick perhaps?

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:09:468 (3) - add clap to first circle maybe?
00:18:922 (1) - add clap to last circle
00:21:104 (3) - add clap to first circle
00:22:558 (1) - add clap to first circle
00:42:195 (1) - remove NC?
01:09:649 (1) - how about splitting this into one circle and a 1/2 beat slider with 1 repeat?
01:28:740 (3) - add finish?
00:24:377 (1) -remove NC?


Note: Copy-pasted from above :P:
hitsounds
00:24:377 (4) - drum whistle? or a suitable custom hitsound
00:24:740 (1) - remove clap
00:25:831 (2) - add clap
00:26:195 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:27:286 (4) - add clap
00:27:649 (1) - remove clap
00:28:740 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:29:468 (3) - remove clap on second circle, add clap to first and last circle
00:30:558 (1) - remove clap
00:31:649 (2) - add clap
00:32:013 (3) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:33:104 (4) - add clap
00:33:468 (1) - remove clap
00:34:558 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:39:286 (1) - add finish
00:42:195 (1) - ^
00:48:013 (1) - remove clap
00:49:831 (2) - add clap
00:50:195 (3) - remove clap on first circle, add clap to second circle
00:53:831 (1) - remove clap
00:55:649 (3) - add clap
00:56:013 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:56:740 (1) - remove clap
00:58:558 (3) - add clap
00:58:922 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
00:59:649 (1) - remove clap
01:01:468 (3) - add clap
01:01:831 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:04:740 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:05:468 (1) - remove clap
01:07:286 (3) - add clap
01:07:649 (4) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:08:377 (1) - remove clap
01:09:831 (2) - remove clap, add clap to second circle
01:11:286 (1) - remove clap
01:12:377 (2) - add clap
01:12:740 (3) - remove clap
01:13:831 (4) - add clap
^The postions of claps shold be the same

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196)
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286)

[Insane]
Nothing spotted :D


[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map. :)
Good luck for rank :)
Topic Starter
xChippy

CDFA wrote:

LOL I WAS GONNA DO MOD4MOD BUT I DIDN'T READ THE RULES UNTIL AFTER I MODDED SO UM HERE'S A MOD.

Overall:
00:13:104 - Don't have claps in this beginning section since there are none in the music. fixed I put in whistles instead
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown? well since I dont like the look of a ridiculous long slider >< I'll change if more people suggest ^^
00:36:377 - For this section, the drums hit on beat 3, so change the claps accordingly :3. fixed

Insane:
00:17:649 (4) - Make this symmetrical to (3) Changed into something else :3
00:50:740 (6) - Make this symmetrical owo fixed

Hard:
Tick Rate 2? This makes the quarter note triplet sliders read MUCH easier. fixed
00:16:013 (1) - Why the slowdown?
00:23:104 (6) - Extend to white tick with a whistle at the end? fixed
00:27:649 (4,5,6) - Why the slowdown?
01:28:831 (1) - Start this on the red tick. If it starts on the blue tick it'll appear way too early. fixed

Cool stuff going on. Whee.
Hehe thanks for your mod :3 !

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi, from M4M
-------------------------------------------------------------
All are just suggestions :)

[Hard]
00:11:649 (5) - change clap to finish
00:12:377 (6) - add finish
00:16:013 (1) - remove clap
00:17:104 (2) - add clap to first circle
00:17:831 (3) - change whistle to clap
00:18:377 (5) - change clap to finish
00:24:377 (1) - overlap with 00:25:468 (3) - (x:136, y:196) fixed
00:34:558 (1) - rotate 180 degree clockwise, move to (x:367, y:286) fixed
fixed the hitsound at the previous mod already =w= Did put in your finishes :3
[Insane]
Nothing spotted :D
Glad to hear :3

[Other Suggestions]
None.

That's all I can find,good map. :)
Good luck for rank :)
Thanks for your mod! :3
JudgeTheDude
Hi, recheck time

[Easy]
No problems, nice map ^^

[Normal]
00:32:558 (3) - Why not aligned ? It's at y:156 and the previous and next note are at y:152

[Hard & Insane]
Nothing to say, it's very good ^^

[Muzu]
00:19:286 (2,3,1) - A kdk would be better

That's not that much, it's well mapped and well modded, good job :)

Good luck for rank ^^
Oyatsu
hi, M4M IRC mod,
chatlog
16:16 Oyatsu: hi chippy-chan ><
16:16 Oyatsu: sorry I forgot your map because my map bubbled but it is wrong bubble pop and need bubble again
16:16 Oyatsu: so
16:16 xChippy: Hihi Oyatsu chan :3
16:16 Oyatsu: Are you free?
16:17 Oyatsu: IRC now
16:17 xChippy: ok :3
16:17 Oyatsu: ^^
16:17 xChippy: Did you update my map ? :3
16:17 Oyatsu: I'm, updating
16:18 Oyatsu: ok
16:18 Oyatsu: Hard, go
16:18 xChippy: ok :3
16:19 Oyatsu: 00:13:104 (2) -
16:19 Oyatsu: i think add finish better
16:19 xChippy: Fixed :3
16:20 Oyatsu: 00:26:740 (2) - Move to 132/280 to balance
16:21 Oyatsu: 00:26:922 (3,4,5) - Distance problem
16:22 xChippy: fixed
16:22 Oyatsu: 00:31:468 (3) - I think remove repeat to better about vocal
16:23 xChippy: I'll keep it like this for now ><
16:25 Oyatsu: ah
16:25 Oyatsu: ok
16:26 Oyatsu: 00:49:104 (5) - ugly pattem
16:27 xChippy: fixed
16:27 xChippy: Copyed (3) and ctrl H
16:28 Oyatsu: 01:09:649 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/36wMQ
16:30 xChippy: Im sure the Ki-mi-no is red white red o_O
16:31 Oyatsu: Why don't you add sliderslide?
16:32 Oyatsu: 01:28:377 (5) - Add whistle
16:32 Oyatsu: at end
16:32 xChippy: fixed
16:34 Oyatsu: 01:21:468 (1) - ^
16:34 xChippy: fixed
16:35 Oyatsu: 00:24:377 (1) - I think should add clap?
16:36 xChippy: fix
16:36 Oyatsu: 01:04:013 - Add finish?
16:37 Oyatsu: 01:17:104 - ^
16:37 xChippy: fixed
16:37 Oyatsu: 01:15:468 (1) - Add clap better
16:38 Oyatsu: 01:28:377 - Add whistle, Rthym is best
16:38 xChippy: I'll consider clap, fixed the whistle
16:38 Oyatsu: ok
16:39 Oyatsu: 00:18:195 (5) - Add whistle before finish, Great!
16:40 xChippy: fixed
16:40 Oyatsu: 00:28:740 (6) -
16:40 Oyatsu: I think you should creat a slider start at 00:28:740 -
16:40 Oyatsu: end at 00:28:922 -
16:41 Oyatsu: ( make as vocal)
16:44 xChippy: fixed
16:45 Oyatsu: oh , i must go out. i will come back soon
16:45 Oyatsu: about 5 ms
16:45 xChippy: ok
16:48 Oyatsu: ok
16:48 Oyatsu: i comeback
16:48 xChippy: ok :3
16:48 Oyatsu: Isane-plz
16:48 xChippy: :3
16:49 Oyatsu: 00:13:104 (3) - Finish
16:49 Oyatsu: 00:23:286 (1) - clap
16:49 xChippy: fixed
16:51 Oyatsu: 00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - this is a pattem
16:51 Oyatsu: but why (9) is out?
16:51 Oyatsu: Move (9) to (4)
16:51 Oyatsu: overlap good pattem
16:51 xChippy: fixed :3
16:52 Oyatsu: 00:52:922 (1,2) - Add whistle complete
16:52 Oyatsu: let hear hitsound
16:52 Oyatsu: Great!!
16:52 xChippy: All whistle O_O?
16:53 Oyatsu: yes
16:53 Oyatsu: circle and slider
16:53 Oyatsu: all
16:53 Oyatsu: let hear hitsound
16:53 xChippy: hmm okay :3
16:54 Oyatsu: I think should NC:01:15:468 (1) -
16:54 xChippy: fixed
16:54 Oyatsu: 01:15:649 (1) - Whistle
16:55 Oyatsu: 01:26:922 (2) - ^
16:55 xChippy: fixed
16:56 Oyatsu: 00:15:286 (3) - 240/224 to balance with (2)
16:56 Oyatsu: 204/224*
16:57 xChippy: fixed
16:57 Oyatsu: 00:16:740 (3) - Ctrl+G will better
16:58 Oyatsu: 00:21:831 - Add finish
16:58 xChippy: Uuhm I'll consider ><
16:58 Oyatsu: ok
16:58 xChippy: fixed
16:59 Oyatsu: 00:29:468 - Why NC?
16:59 Oyatsu: 00:49:286 (2) - 124/144 to balance (3)
17:01 xChippy: The NC cuz other modders said it ><
17:01 xChippy: fixed the (2)
17:01 Oyatsu: ok
17:01 Oyatsu: --------------------Finish---------
17:01 Oyatsu: This is a good map
17:01 Oyatsu: Good ranked!!!
17:02 Oyatsu: ^^
17:02 xChippy: Hehe thanks :3
Good luck!!!
Weez
Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.


[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.

[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.


[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -

Thats all and good luck
Topic Starter
xChippy

Weez wrote:

Sorry for the long wait >.<

[General]
- Please use the silent sliderslide sound throughout this map, makes it sound much better especially at the end.
Okay :3

[yanlu's Easy]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here. fixed
01:22:922 (1) - This slider is really tiring for newer players, just map this out like in other diffs, its pretty easy...

Up to yanlu :3

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of all the whistles, change them to finishes to be more dramatic here.
fixed
[Hard]
00:39:286 (1) - Finish here.
00:50:922 (1,2) - Instead of claps, finishes work much much better here.
01:03:286 (3) - Remove the clap, seems like you are over using it here.
01:21:286 (5) - Place a hit circle here to help with the transition to the spinner.
all fix

[Insane]
00:09:468 - Add a note here to follow the change in the music. Fits much better than a pause.
00:38:377 (5,6) - The placement on these could be done better. Place 5 on the head of 3 and fix 5 according to spacing. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/797576
00:51:649 (2) - Add a finish here.
01:06:014 (2,3,4) - This stream should all be stacked on the slider like you did throughout the song. Much more easier to read like this.
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Having 2 different streams separated by a 1/4 pause is really awkward to read. Strongly advise that you remove 01:11:195 (2) -
all fix
Thats all and good luck
Thanks for your mod!
Hinsvar
Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
  2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?
>yanlu's Easy
  1. 00:16:013 (1) - The pattern here would look neater if you make the slider look like this.
  2. 00:26:195 (3) - Move the red node to (148,240) so that the blanket-ish pattern of 00:25:831 (2,3) would look better?
  3. 00:30:558 - Finish? There's a heavy sound here.
  4. 00:51:649 (1) - ^
  5. 00:59:286 - Add whistle here...
  6. 00:59:649 - ...and finish here to emphasize the vocal?
  7. 01:05:104 - 01:05:468 - Same as the two suggestions above.
  8. 01:10:922 (3) - I don't think the clap is necessary here. Remove?
  9. 01:11:286 - Finish?
  10. 01:14:740 - ^
  11. 01:15:104 (2) - ^
  12. 01:15:468 - ^
  13. 01:22:195 - Add clap here to make the hitsound pattern consistent?
>Rainbow's Normal
  1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
  2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
  3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
  4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
  5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
  6. 00:29:468 - ^
  7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
  8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
  9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
  10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
  11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
  12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
  13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
  14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
  15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?
>Hard
  1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
  2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
  3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
  5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
  6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
  7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
  8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
  9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.
>Insane
  1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
  2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
  3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
  4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
  5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
  6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
  7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^
k that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
yanlu
all fixed!!

thank you for modding >v</
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Title:Grow Slowly (TV Size)
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Artist:Iguchi Yuka
ArtistUnicode:Iguchi Yuka
Creator:xChippy
Version:yanlu's Easy
Source:To Aru Kagaku no Railgun S
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Topic Starter
xChippy

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. The BG's aspect ratio is 4:3 while the video is 16:9. The BG will appear fine if you use a resolution with 4:3, but the video will look weird, and vice versa at 16:9. Make the aspect ratio of them the same? The easiest solution is to find another BG with 16:9 ratio.
  2. There are two "railgun" on the tags. I know one is for the romaji, and one is for the English title, but still... Oh, and since "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" is already in the source, remove the one on the tags?
it's the same BG but took a bigger one and resized it :3

>Rainbow's Normal
  1. I'm quite confused with the usage of claps on the kiai time. There are very little of them and they sound inconsistent...
  2. 00:13:104 - I think you can add a finish here since there seems to be a cymbal's sound.
  3. 00:14:558 (4,5,1) - The spacing is all around 1x here, but (1) is actually slowed down, so the spacing is visually incorrect. Fix this please.
  4. 00:23:649 - There's no need to make this spot almost silent. 20% volume should do fine.
  5. 00:28:013 (1) - Is the whistle here intentional? I can't hear anything on the song that supports it.
  6. 00:29:468 - ^
  7. 00:33:468 - Finish to follow the cymbal's sound?
  8. 00:36:377 (5,1) - Swap NC since it's (5) that is placed at the beginning of the stanza?
  9. 00:42:195 (6,1) - ^
  10. 00:48:013 (1,2) - Is it intentional that these sliders only have claps at their ends? idk why; sounds... strange to me.
  11. 00:49:831 - 00:50:195 - I don't really like how the double-clap sounds here.
  12. 00:53:104 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - The combo pattern would be more fitting if they're made like this.
  13. 01:06:377 (2,3) - I'm afraid that this kind of pattern might confuse Normal players. Try this?
  14. 01:13:104 (3) - Move the anchor on the tail to (80,104)? The map somehow looks neater like that.
  15. 01:19:286 (1,2) - Swap NC since (2) is the one that is placed at the beginning of a stanza?
>Hard
  1. 00:13:104 (2) - Move the middle anchor point to (160,228) and the one on the tail to (192,172) so the pattern of 00:12:740 (1,2) will look neater?
  2. 00:30:558 - Finish? We can clearly hear the cymbal being played there...
  3. 00:46:195 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:195 (7) - Make it look like this?
  5. 00:59:649 - Finish to emphasize the vocal?
  6. 01:04:013 (5,1) - Swap NC to go with the beginning of the stanza?
  7. 01:11:286 - Finish to emphasize the vocal here, too?
  8. 01:14:740 (3) - Replace the claps with finishes? The instrument is heavy enough to the point where it needs finishes, not claps.
  9. 01:28:377 - The whistle here is unnecessary. Remove it so the whistle at 01:28:740 can be more emphasized and this calming and silent spot sounds... well... silent.
>Insane
  1. 00:16:740 (3) - Make it look like this to follow 00:16:013 (1,2)'s curve?
  2. 00:29:468 (1) - This NC is unnecessary. I don't see why should it be NC'd, even if it's supposed to emphasize 00:29:104 (1)...
  3. 00:58:013 (6) - Add a finish here? I'm sure enough there's a heavy sound on the music that supports it.
  4. 00:58:558 (3) - NC to indicate that there is going to be a change on the spacing? It kinda break the flow the first time I attempted to go through the pattern.
  5. 01:15:104 (6,1) - The claps are unnecessary since they just don't fit with the music, so remove them and only keep the finishes?
  6. 01:27:286 - Remove the whistle? Constant whistles just won't do on this silent part.
  7. 01:28:377 (2) - ^
k that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
fixed all =w=
Thanks for your mod!!~
Topic Starter
xChippy
Updated~ =w=
Kinomi
Hi Hi~from my queue
nm-w-

general
a sliderslide ?

easy
00:41:377(3) um...imo its not pretty..and there are some same parts to this

01:11:468(1,2,3,4) avoid stack in easiest diff

01:19:649(3,1)^

01:23:492 spinner start at 01:24:740 end at 01:30:195 ,and add objects from 01:22:922 to 01:24:377

01:01:558(3,1)not good

normal

00:45:834(5,1) not good

00:22:558

00:41:377(5) strange shape...

01:15:949(1)^

01:22:558(1)move to 01:22:922 and add a note at 01:22:558

01:28:013

hard

01:21:286(5)remove

insane

00:45:831 you can use ctrl+shift+d draw star , use ctrl+shft+d change their distance then ctrl g

good luck!
Topic Starter
xChippy

baldrace wrote:

Hi Hi~from my queue
nm-w-

normal

00:45:834(5,1) not good What is not good here?

00:22:558 I guess rainbow wanted to catch the piano so no change

00:41:377(5) strange shape... I'll leave this up to Rainbow

01:15:949(1)^ fixed this one put a spinner instead

01:22:558(1)move to 01:22:922 and add a note at 01:22:558 fixed

01:28:013 We'll consider

hard

01:21:286(5)remove This note indicates that a spinner is coming

insane

00:45:831 you can use ctrl+shift+d draw star , use ctrl+shft+d change their distance then ctrl g fixed
good luck!
Thanks for your mod!~ :3
Kinomi
the note or slider cover the arrowhead maybe it is not so good 0.0

about sliderslide 0.0,I think sliders' hitsound is noisy,especially at the end of the song,so a custom sliderslide is necessary imo.;w;
BoWAct
hi. from t/131705
I tried to play the difficulty of all

[Easy]
01:20:013 (1,2,3) - Symmetrically slider

[Normal]
00:59:286 (2,3,4) - I think this is better matching


[Hard]
00:34:558 (1,2,3) - Try drawing a triangle?

That close, it can be said from me to complete the form is over.
I hope Ranked!
Topic Starter
xChippy

BoWAct wrote:

hi. from t/131705
I tried to play the difficulty of all

[Normal]
00:59:286 (2,3,4) - I think this is better matching fixed


[Hard]
00:34:558 (1,2,3) - Try drawing a triangle? I'll consider, for now I'll use mine

That close, it can be said from me to complete the form is over.
I hope Ranked!
Thanks for your mod :3
Darksonic
Hello, from my m4m queue.

yanlu's Easy:

01:05:468 (2,1): Why you increased spacing here?, this is not recommendable to do in an Easy diff, use 0,8x spacing like you did in the whole map.
01:09:831 (2): Shouldn't the middle tick be a red one instead white?, the slider seems ugly like this.

Rainbow's Normal:

00:02:922 (1,2,3,4): Something is wrong with this diamond pattern, you will notice it if you see spacing between 00:04:013 (4,1) which is 0,94x, and it should be 0,99x.
00:09:468 (3): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:18:922 (4,1): Is this spacing decrease intentional?, if it is I would recommend you to change it to the constant spacing. (1x)
00:26:558 (3,4): I know that you're following vocal with (4) but sounds like (3) is not following anything, you should change rhythm like this instead.
00:35:468 (3): CTRL+J will give this pattern a better flow.
00:43:649 (3): Bad overlap, it ruins the pattern a bit, this slider will look better in x:104 y:72 instead.
00:45:104 (5): NC should be here.
00:46:558 (1): And this NC is unnecessary, remove it.
00:59:649 (3): NC to keep consistency with 00:56:740 (1).
01:09:649 (1): This may be confusing for some players, I would recommend to remove a repeat and add a note in 01:10:195, fits better imo.
01:14:195 (4): Add NC?
01:19:286 (4): Again, this is not following anything, make it a 1/1 slider instead and will fit better.
01:23:649 (1,2): 1,99x spacing? lol are you kidding me?, I don't think this could be intentional, and if it is let me say that this is terrible for a Normal diff, use 1,0x spacing like you did in the whole diff please.
01:23:649 (2,3): Remove both Whistles from sliders, there aren't any music here, sounds bad.

Hard:

00:02:922 (5): I know you can improve this blanket.
00:17:195 (4): Remove this note, music doesn't sound like this could be necessary.
00:17:468 (6): Add NC?
00:18:922 (10,1): Little spacing issue?, use 1,1x instead.
00:25:831 (1): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:34:558 (1): Not well stacked with tail of the previous slider, move to x:415 y:268.

Insane:

00:06:377 (3,1,2): Seems really boring like you did, try to change rhythm like this.
00:16:740 (3): Try to move it to x:188 y:288 instead, it won't be a jump but the pattern seems really better like that. (If you do remember to fix spacing on the next notes)
00:36:013 (3): Make this slider like this ?
00:40:377 (2,3): What's this?, you were using 1,4x spacing and suddenly increased to 2,6x.. just no, this seems really bad.
00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9): Same here, reduce spacing a bit.
00:58:558 (1): Unnecesary NC, remove it.
01:22:922 (5): NC should be here, and not in the next note.

I couldn't mod this diff very well because it doesn't look good for me, it has many things that can be improved, you have many weird patterns/spacing uses and stuff, and 1,4x spacing as the constant one is too much imo.

That's all for me, mapset still needs more work.

Good luck!
mingmichael
hello xChippy :) here the taiko mods that you requested to me
almost perfect! @-@ i almost can't find any misses there @A@
but, here my suggestion >,<//

[Muzu]
  1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd
  2. 00:43:286 (2) - k?
  3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound
[Oni]
  1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k? :D
Topic Starter
xChippy

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, from my m4m queue.

Rainbow's Normal:

00:02:922 (1,2,3,4): Something is wrong with this diamond pattern, you will notice it if you see spacing between 00:04:013 (4,1) which is 0,94x, and it should be 0,99x.
00:09:468 (3): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:18:922 (4,1): Is this spacing decrease intentional?, if it is I would recommend you to change it to the constant spacing. (1x)
00:26:558 (3,4): I know that you're following vocal with (4) but sounds like (3) is not following anything, you should change rhythm like this instead.
00:35:468 (3): CTRL+J will give this pattern a better flow.
00:43:649 (3): Bad overlap, it ruins the pattern a bit, this slider will look better in x:104 y:72 instead.
00:45:104 (5): NC should be here.
00:46:558 (1): And this NC is unnecessary, remove it.
00:59:649 (3): NC to keep consistency with 00:56:740 (1).
01:09:649 (1): This may be confusing for some players, I would recommend to remove a repeat and add a note in 01:10:195, fits better imo.
01:14:195 (4): Add NC?
01:19:286 (4): Again, this is not following anything, make it a 1/1 slider instead and will fit better.
01:23:649 (1,2): 1,99x spacing? lol are you kidding me?, I don't think this could be intentional, and if it is let me say that this is terrible for a Normal diff, use 1,0x spacing like you did in the whole diff please.
01:23:649 (2,3): Remove both Whistles from sliders, there aren't any music here, sounds bad.

Hard:

00:02:922 (5): I know you can improve this blanket.
00:17:195 (4): Remove this note, music doesn't sound like this could be necessary.
00:17:468 (6): Add NC?
00:18:922 (10,1): Little spacing issue?, use 1,1x instead.
00:25:831 (1): CTRL+G for a better flow?
00:34:558 (1): Not well stacked with tail of the previous slider, move to x:415 y:268.

Insane:

00:06:377 (3,1,2): Seems really boring like you did, try to change rhythm like this.
00:16:740 (3): Try to move it to x:188 y:288 instead, it won't be a jump but the pattern seems really better like that. (If you do remember to fix spacing on the next notes)
00:36:013 (3): Make this slider like this ?
00:40:377 (2,3): What's this?, you were using 1,4x spacing and suddenly increased to 2,6x.. just no, this seems really bad.
00:45:468 (4,5,6,7,8,9): Same here, reduce spacing a bit.
00:58:558 (1): Unnecesary NC, remove it.
01:22:922 (5): NC should be here, and not in the next note.

I couldn't mod this diff very well because it doesn't look good for me, it has many things that can be improved, you have many weird patterns/spacing uses and stuff, and 1,4x spacing as the constant one is too much imo.

That's all for me, mapset still needs more work.

Good luck!
Fixed all, and for insane fixed alot of the patterns and spacing, I'll maybe reduce the spacing later ><
Thanks for the mod it was really helpfull! :3
ReySHeL

mingmichael wrote:

hello xChippy :) here the taiko mods that you requested to me
almost perfect! @-@ i almost can't find any misses there @A@
but, here my suggestion >,<//

[Muzu]
  1. how about 00:09:922 (3) - d? so make triplet there. ddd want to easy
  2. 00:43:286 (2) - k? no
  3. 00:49:468 (2) - k. for vocal sound ok
[Oni]
  1. how about move 01:18:013 (1) - to 01:18:195 (1) - . and then 01:18:377 (2) - k and 01:18:740 (1,1) - d k? :D
i follow the sound of the beat
thanks for mod :3

diff name changed~
http://puu.sh/3fPVs
Snowy Heart
I am coming...

General .nothing

D=big red
d=small red
K=big blue
k=small blue

ReyShel-Muzu:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:10:013 (3) - k
00:23:649 - add d
00:38:922 (2) - d
00:42:195 (2) - K
00:48:013 (1,1,1) - K D K
01:04:558 (1) - k
01:28:740 (1) - D

ReyShel-oni:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:23:286 (1) - ddd
00:46:922 (1) - K
01:05:286 (3) - d
01:28:740 (1) - D

It's OK...
ReySHeL

Cream Vie wrote:

I am coming...

General .nothing

D=big red
d=small red
K=big blue
k=small blue

ReyShel-Muzu:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:10:013 (3) - k
00:23:649 - add d
00:38:922 (2) - d
00:42:195 (2) - K
00:48:013 (1,1,1) - K D K
01:04:558 (1) - k
01:28:740 (1) - D

ReyShel-oni:
00:04:377 (1) - D
00:07:286 (1) - D
00:23:286 (1) - ddd
00:46:922 (1) - K
01:05:286 (3) - d
01:28:740 (1) - D

It's OK...
some fixed
thanks for mod~
http://puu.sh/3krWz
Topic Starter
xChippy
Updated >w<
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue~


Insane

  1. 00:02:013 (2) - the single clap doesn't feel good, i suggest changing into a finish
  2. 00:04:922 (2) - ^
  3. 00:07:831 (2) - ^
  4. 00:03:831 (7) - add whistle at end?
  5. 00:06:740 (1) - ^
  6. 00:09:649 (7) - ^
  7. 00:12:013 (5) - add clap to slider head w
  8. 00:18:377 (8) - i think here is better flow~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826509
  9. 00:42:195 (6) - put here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826515
  10. 00:49:468 (3) - this blanket seems off, you need to lift the end a little bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826517
  11. 01:04:195 (1,5) - it crossed the spacing, i think it doesn't look good, you could try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826559 (it's my style, though)
  12. 01:05:468 (1,4) - i suggest making a symmetry or copy (1) and rotate some degrees..
  13. 01:22:922 - since the music goes slower, i suggest lowering the slider speed from this point on to 0.75x
Hard

  1. 00:24:377 (1) - clap -> whistle o.o
  2. 00:40:558 (3) - move to x:392 y:212? it looks better o.o
Normal

  1. 00:04:922 (2) - slider end doesn't need whistle
  2. 00:15:649 (5,1) - the distance 5-1 is wrong
  3. 00:46:558 (3) - i suggest this way, it would not get overlapped for (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826542
  4. 01:12:013 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826544 ?
Yanlu's Easy

  1. 01:02:558 (1) - ...为什么要这样 虽然好像问题不大
  2. 01:05:468 (1) - 这圈往外面一点 有点紧 233
:3
Topic Starter
xChippy

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue~


Insane

  1. 00:02:013 (2) - the single clap doesn't feel good, i suggest changing into a finish
  2. 00:04:922 (2) - ^
  3. 00:07:831 (2) - ^
  4. 00:03:831 (7) - add whistle at end?
  5. 00:06:740 (1) - ^
  6. 00:09:649 (7) - ^
  7. 00:12:013 (5) - add clap to slider head w
  8. 00:18:377 (8) - i think here is better flow~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826509
  9. 00:42:195 (6) - put here..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826515
  10. 00:49:468 (3) - this blanket seems off, you need to lift the end a little bit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826517
  11. 01:04:195 (1,5) - it crossed the spacing, i think it doesn't look good, you could try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826559 (it's my style, though)
  12. 01:05:468 (1,4) - i suggest making a symmetry or copy (1) and rotate some degrees..
  13. 01:22:922 - since the music goes slower, i suggest lowering the slider speed from this point on to 0.75x
Hard

  1. 00:24:377 (1) - clap -> whistle o.o
  2. 00:40:558 (3) - move to x:392 y:212? it looks better o.o
Normal

  1. 00:04:922 (2) - slider end doesn't need whistle
  2. 00:15:649 (5,1) - the distance 5-1 is wrong
  3. 00:46:558 (3) - i suggest this way, it would not get overlapped for (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826542
  4. 01:12:013 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826544 ?
Fixed all :3
:3
Thanks for your mod Ar3sgice~! >w<
Umi
hi hi xchippy >3< ! From my queue ;3

let'su go !

Yanlu'easy

- 00:07:286 (1) - what about this ?
- 00:20:013 (2) - move end point to x:52,y:216 for perfect blanket
- 00:37:831 (3) - try to make like this
- 01:18:922 (2) - move to x:324,y:288
that's all good easy ;3

Rainbow's Normal

- 00:02:922 (1,1) - stack better '-'
- 00:05:831 (1,3) - align them
- 00:20:013 (2) - move middle point to x:200,y:252 and end point x:284,y:248
- 00:24:377 (1) - why this note NC ? remove NC here 00:24:740 (1) -
- 00:30:558 (1) - move to x:408,y:128 and then ..
- 00:30:558 (1,2,3) - Make sometinh like that
- 00:40:013 (2,4) - align them ?
- 00:52:922 (1,2,3) - it's a bit hard to read for a normal try that
- 01:06:922 (1) - stack perfectly with 01:05:468 (1) -'s end or move somewhere else,
- 01:12:013 (2) - middle point x:44,y:340, end point x:-20,y:316

Hard

- 00:26:740 (2) - move to x:120,y:180
- 00:42:195 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
- 01:11:104 (4) - delete this note ?
- 01:15:468 (1) - remove finish
- 01:22:922 - from here to the end volume 10% or 15% is pretty nice :3

Insane

- 00:02:013 (2) - what about add a jump like this
- 00:04:922 (2) - same here
- 00:13:468 (4) - move to x:284,y:60 and then ..
- 00:13:831 (5) - ^ to x:252,y:244
- 00:31:104 (2) - better in this way
- 00:35:468 (2) - move to x:336,y:284
- 01:01:649 (7,8) - put the same spacing as 01:01:468 (6,7) -
- 01:06:922 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, delete this 3 notes and instead, put the same slider as 01:06:195 (2) - ?

- 01:22:922 - same as hard diff volume to 10% or 15%

that's all, good mapset, and good song, you get my star, go go xchippy ;3 !
Topic Starter
xChippy

-Umi- wrote:

hi hi xchippy >3< ! From my queue ;3

let'su go !

Rainbow's Normal

- 00:02:922 (1,1) - stack better '-'
- 00:05:831 (1,3) - align them
- 00:20:013 (2) - move middle point to x:200,y:252 and end point x:284,y:248
- 00:24:377 (1) - why this note NC ? remove NC here 00:24:740 (1) -
- 00:30:558 (1) - move to x:408,y:128 and then ..
- 00:30:558 (1,2,3) - Make sometinh like that I'll let this open for Sun :3
- 00:40:013 (2,4) - align them ?
- 00:52:922 (1,2,3) - it's a bit hard to read for a normal try that
- 01:06:922 (1) - stack perfectly with 01:05:468 (1) -'s end or move somewhere else,
- 01:12:013 (2) - middle point x:44,y:340, end point x:-20,y:316
Fixed the rest

Hard

- 00:26:740 (2) - move to x:120,y:180
- 00:42:195 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
- 01:11:104 (4) - delete this note ?
- 01:15:468 (1) - remove finish
- 01:22:922 - from here to the end volume 10% or 15% is pretty nice :3
fixed all except the volume i lowered it to 30% :3 since I want to hear the whistles ^^

Insane

- 00:02:013 (2) - what about add a jump like this I'll consider
- 00:04:922 (2) - same here ^
- 00:13:468 (4) - move to x:284,y:60 and then ..
- 00:13:831 (5) - ^ to x:252,y:244
- 00:31:104 (2) - better in this way
- 00:35:468 (2) - move to x:336,y:284
- 01:01:649 (7,8) - put the same spacing as 01:01:468 (6,7) -
- 01:06:922 (1,2,3) - just a suggestion, delete this 3 notes and instead, put the same slider as 01:06:195 (2) - ?
Actually I want to follow the vocal here ><
- 01:22:922 - same as hard diff volume to 10% or 15%
Fixed the rest~! :3

that's all, good mapset, and good song, you get my star, go go xchippy ;3 !
Thanks for the mod and star Umi >w<
Smoothie
Hi again xP
From my modding queue~

[Insane]
00:03:831 (7) - How about adding a reverse here?
00:06:740 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? Don't forget to swap your hitsounds too if you did that.
00:09:649 (7) - Add a reverse and place it like that? It's pretty nice imo. http://puu.sh/3my1l.jpg
00:12:922 (2) - Stack it on 00:12:740 (1) instead~
00:17:649 (6) - Ctrl+G for a better flow?
00:23:286 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap~
00:29:649 (3) - Should end on the red line.
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap on the start and add a finish? :3
00:36:013 (3) - ^
00:52:377 (3) - Add a finish?
00:55:831 - Add a note here for a better flow?
01:07:468 - ^
01:15:649 (1) - I think it sound better without the whistle.
01:25:831 (1) - Remover the NC

[Hard]
00:02:013 (2) - The clap on the slider start sounds a bit odd. How about adding a finish instead?
00:04:922 (2) - ^
00:07:831 (2) - ^
00:24:377 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap?
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap and add a finish?
00:36:013 (3) - ^
01:09:468 - I recomment you to add a note here.

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:35:468 (3) - Add a finish no the slider start instead?
00:36:013 (4) - Finish~
00:38:558 (5) - The clap sould be on the slider start.
00:46:558 (3) - Add a whistle on the slider start?

[yanlu's Easy]
00:11:649 (2) - Add a finish on the slider start.
00:18:195 (3) - Finish on the slider end?
00:35:468 (3) - Finish on the start and end?
01:15:468 (3) - Finish on the slider start~
01:22:922 (1) - The spinner should end at 01:28:740

That's all~
Good luck!
Topic Starter
xChippy

Smoothie wrote:

Hi again xP
From my modding queue~

[Insane]
00:03:831 (7) - How about adding a reverse here? I'm following the instruments o-o
00:06:740 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? Don't forget to swap your hitsounds too if you did that. imo it flows good now o-o
00:09:649 (7) - Add a reverse and place it like that? It's pretty nice imo. http://puu.sh/3my1l.jpg ^
00:12:922 (2) - Stack it on 00:12:740 (1) instead~
00:17:649 (6) - Ctrl+G for a better flow? Imo it's already good o-o
00:23:286 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap~
00:29:649 (3) - Should end on the red line.
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap on the start and add a finish? :3
00:36:013 (3) - ^
00:52:377 (3) - Add a finish?
00:55:831 - Add a note here for a better flow? following vocal
01:07:468 - ^ ^
01:15:649 (1) - I think it sound better without the whistle.
01:25:831 (1) - Remover the NC
fixed the rest
[Hard]
00:02:013 (2) - The clap on the slider start sounds a bit odd. How about adding a finish instead?
00:04:922 (2) - ^
00:07:831 (2) - ^
00:24:377 (1) - Sampleset: Drum and add a clap?
00:35:468 (2) - Remove the clap and add a finish?
00:36:013 (3) - ^
01:09:468 - I recomment you to add a note here.
fixed all
[Rainbow's Normal]
00:35:468 (3) - Add a finish no the slider start instead?
00:36:013 (4) - Finish~
00:38:558 (5) - The clap sould be on the slider start.
00:46:558 (3) - Add a whistle on the slider start?

fixed all
That's all~
Good luck!
Thanks for your mod Smoothie~ :3
Sun Rainbow
I am sorry for late,,,
If have mod plz tell me ...
And plz mutual
Topic Starter
xChippy
Oh np :3
00:30:558 (1,2,3) - Make sometinh like that
00:22:558
00:41:377(5) strange shape...

I Guess this is all :3

Mutual~
Evil_Twilight
From my queue

[Insane]
00:02:558 (1) - add soft whistle
00:03:286 (4) - ^
00:05:468 (1) - ^
00:06:377 (2) - ^
00:06:740 (1) - remove NC
00:06:922 (2) - use finish here ?
00:08:377 (1) - add soft whistle
00:09:104 (4) - ^
00:10:195 (1) - add finish
00:11:649 (3) - ^
00:36:740 (1) - ~ 00:44:377 (5) - use 0.75x speed ?
00:38:013 (3) - add clap
00:38:558 (6) - ^
00:38:922 (6) - add normal hitsound
00:41:831 (5) - ^
00:45:104 (3) - add finish
00:45:468 (4) - add normal hitsound
00:46:195 (8) - ^
00:46:922 (2) - ^
00:47:286 (4) - ^
00:48:013 (1) - ^
00:48:377 (3) - ^
00:48:740 (5) - ^
00:49:104 (1) - ^
00:49:468 (3) - ^
00:50:195 (4,5,6) - ^
00:53:286 (3) - move to x:356 y:108
00:56:740 (3) - add finish
01:02:558 (2) - add normal hitsound
01:02:922 (3) - ^
01:03:286 (4) - ^
01:03:649 (5) - ^
01:03:831 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add normal hitsound
01:05:104 (8) - changed clap to finish
01:06:103 (1) - remove NC
01:06:195 (2) - remove finish
01:08:377 (1) - add finish
01:09:649 (1,3,4) - add normal hitsound
01:10:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:15:468 (1) - remove NC ?
01:21:831 (1) - add NC?
01:22:558 (1,2,3,4) - add normal hitsound
01:22:922 (1) - add whistle

[Hard]
00:02:558 (3) - add whistle
00:03:286 (5) - ^
00:04:013 (7) - ^
00:05:468 (3) - ^
00:06:195 (5) - ^
00:06:922 (6) - add finish
00:08:377 (3) - add whistle
00:09:104 (4) - ^
00:10:558 (3) - add clap on start and end
00:12:013 (5) - add clap
00:56:740 (3) - add finish
01:08:376 (3) - ^
01:14:195 (1) - ^
01:28:922 (1) - add muted green line?


[Rainbow's Normal]
00:02:558 (2) - 尾巴的whistle拿掉
00:56:740 (1) - 加finish
01:02:558 (1,2,3) - 加normal hitsound ?
01:08:377 (3) - 加finish

[yanlu's Easy]
00:18:377 (3) - 加finish
00:21:104 (3) - 我覺得這裡不用放clap
00:56:740 (1) - 加finish
01:08:377 (1) - ^
01:22:922 (1) - 只有一個轉圈感覺怪怪的
Verlaren
From Aincrad's Modding queue.
Sorry for so long.

[General]
pls change background, because yours bg is distended.
all diffs must be started & ended in equal time

[yanlu's easy]
DR -1?
00:44:740 (4,3,2) - overlap here
01:12:377 (2,3) - in easy not recommended stacked notes
01:13:831 (4,1) - ^
01:19:649 (3,1) - ^

[Rainbow's normal]
01:23:649 (2,3) - spacing
01:24:377 (3,4) - ^
00:02:013 (2) - remove whistle from body, sounds is ugly
00:04:377 (1,2) - ^
00:52:922 (1,2,3,1) - broken rhytm flow, try this (IMO is better flow)

00:58:195 (1) - remove NC. I imperatively recommend this, because you broke a sequence here of NC.
01:00:740 (1) - ^
01:04:013 (1) - ^
01:06:922 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:38:377 (4) - move on 327|303 looks much better
00:38:558 (5) - move on 400|304 ^
00:40:558 (3) - move on 404|216 for symmetrical spacing between other patterns

[insane]
00:21:649 (8) - add note for a smooth flow
00:27:468 (8) - ^
00:29:286 (2) - ^
00:30:377 (6) - ^

That's all, Good lick with rank ;)
Topic Starter
xChippy
Moved back to WIP remapping some parts in Insane..
@Verlaren fixed the things in hard
@Evil_Twilight ^
Thanks for the mod both of you ^^
Sun Rainbow
yanlu
thx all for modding >_</
fixed some mini snap..~

Verlaren wrote:

all diffs must be started & ended in equal time
i think in gds it's fine o.o
so.


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331,172,18195,2,0,L|283:213,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,18922,6,0,P|196:288|172:212,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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162,288,21104,2,0,L|258:320,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,240,22922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,23286,2,0,B|300:112|228:88|228:88|200:32|148:60,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,24377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,80,24740,6,0,P|28:168|64:260,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,316,25831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,26195,2,0,B|184:256|148:240|148:240|128:212,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,260,27286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,206,27649,6,0,P|342:298|258:338,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,28740,2,0,L|168:192,1,100
92,220,29468,2,0,L|64:124,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,30558,6,0,B|56:340|56:340|156:356,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,31649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,236,32013,2,0,P|308:236|348:264,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,33104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,33468,6,0,B|200:68|160:128|176:180|176:180|124:192,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,192,34558,2,0,B|52:228|72:252|100:264|100:264|104:276,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,35468,2,0,B|228:300|212:256|212:256|256:244|268:212,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,172,36377,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,128,36740,2,0,P|312:136|344:176,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,208,37831,2,0,B|285:261|346:254|346:254|404:244|429:293,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,38922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,39286,5,4,0:0:0:0:
212,284,39649,2,0,P|188:244|184:192,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,244,40740,2,0,P|268:180|360:204,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,41831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,188,42195,5,4,0:0:0:0:
408,116,42558,2,0,P|368:84|320:76,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,43649,2,0,P|334:225|252:178,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,100,44740,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,45104,6,0,P|176:244|244:312,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,82,46922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,71,47286,2,0,B|256:60|256:60|304:72,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,48013,6,0,P|336:244|268:312,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,49831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,50195,2,0,P|164:196|176:244,2,100,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,51649,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,228,52377,1,4,0:0:0:0:
24,92,53831,6,0,L|24:192|72:280,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,55286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,55649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,200,56013,2,0,B|104:172|104:172|104:104,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,56740,6,0,L|256:44|344:92,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,24,58195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,58558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,58922,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|336:168|300:176,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,59649,6,0,P|396:268|464:336,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,61104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,300,61468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,220,61831,2,0,P|184:188|132:184,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,220,62558,6,0,P|132:288|232:300,2,200,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,144,64740,2,0,L|304:144,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,65468,6,0,P|396:112|328:44,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,66922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,67286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,67649,2,0,P|152:236|196:260,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,240,68377,6,0,P|252:324|148:328,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,208,69831,2,0,B|40:176|4:176|28:148|8:116,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,70922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,156,71286,6,0,P|292:192|292:288,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,322,72377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,322,72740,2,0,P|134:286|134:190,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,73831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,132,74195,6,0,P|300:128|328:112,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,76,75104,1,4,0:0:0:0:
468,120,75468,2,0,P|504:240|440:340,1,250,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,212,77104,6,0,P|260:180|196:252,2,200,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,287,78922,2,0,P|372:291|408:263,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,79649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,324,80013,6,0,P|506:238|480:144,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,88,81104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,108,81468,2,0,P|294:194|320:288,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82922,12,0,88013,0:0:0:0:
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