Leader wrote:

It's simple

Armin wrote:

....but it's not impossible
Try with uploading the map after you changed the title WITHOUT saving it.

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) -
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好
6. 01:31:685 (2) -
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack
   Good stuff

Chloe wrote:

hi there, as your pm request~

And just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[Hard]

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD 这里要改什么。。。顺便，这个图移动不算小吧，多塞拍子也感觉有点多余。。。有些梗normal也不能有的吧，我再观望一下

[Insane]

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置 reject，这就是个梗
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) - 蓝线开打大丈夫？和8 stack因为有人说看不见8所以特意分开了，不过更多人建议stack，所以还是叠起来吧
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373 我也觉得这么摆比较好，奈何前面有人叫我改近一点。。。既然你这么说了那我就改回来
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好 前面又有人说3/4不好。。。orz，我琢磨了一下这里相比3/4还是用1/2比较好，所以还是这样吧
6. 01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D:

[HW``]

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack fixed
   Good stuff

GL thx for modding

Hollow Wings wrote:

Chloe wrote:

hi there, as your pm request~

And just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[Hard]

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD 这里要改什么。。。顺便，这个图移动不算小吧，多塞拍子也感觉有点多余。。。有些梗normal也不能有的吧，我再观望一下

[Insane]

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置 reject，这就是个梗
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) - 蓝线开打大丈夫？和8 stack因为有人说看不见8所以特意分开了，不过更多人建议stack，所以还是叠起来吧
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373 我也觉得这么摆比较好，奈何前面有人叫我改近一点。。。既然你这么说了那我就改回来
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？ 啊 这个http://puu.sh/3gWQD.png
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好 前面又有人说3/4不好。。。orz，我琢磨了一下这里相比3/4还是用1/2比较好，所以还是这样吧
6. 01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？ 这边我想了下应该是建议取消滑条后面的那个NOTE 然后滑条移到后面的白线 红线加个单点
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D: 对 我的意思是这里换成一根滑条

[HW``]

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz 这边.. 我想不起来了
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack fixed
   Good stuff

GL thx for modding

Chloe wrote:

[*]01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？ 啊 这个http://puu.sh/3gWQD.png 唔，不太想要这么下节奏呢，保留意见
[*]01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？ 这边我想了下应该是建议取消滑条后面的那个NOTE 然后滑条移到后面的白线 红线加个单点 滑条接滑条是个梗，reject
[*]01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D: 对 我的意思是这里换成一根滑条 这个感觉没太大必要，如果这里改了的话01:47:771 (4,5) - 也要改，当时搞成单点貌似是为了好看(?),这个保留意见


[*]00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz 这边.. 我想不起来了 orzzz

暂时就先这样吧 好的多谢

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:

Normal
扫描
没什么UNRANKABLE问题

Hard
扫描
没什么UNRANKABLE问题
01:09:729 (1) to (3) - 4星半的，三圈跳的距离还是近点比较好 因为感觉作为hard来说本来就很简单了，跳大一点应该没什么

Insane
扫描
没什么UNRANKABLE问题
后期如果RANK不了又没什么实质性的问题，但又想把精力投在歌上的话，INSANE蛮多滑条可以提升
00:54:077 (1) - 既然覆盖了就全覆盖-，- 你肯定没update。。。
01:27:120 (7) - 滑条要尽量避免尖角的出现，除非你是刻意对称的 fixed
01:31:033 (1),(2) - 这个我觉得肯定要改的 fixed

HW''
精细MOD

美观：
因为 138BPM的关系，加上滑条很短，都是单小直条，所以无明显问题
00:28:424 (4) - 因为同点有三个圈，所以STACK把(5)往左边移了点，可以调整STACK但是不建议（可能影响其他地方，所以滑条(5)可以另外设置位置 老实说没看懂orz
01:08:859 (5) to (9) - 这5个圈各自覆盖的距离不一样，不应该吧-，- fixed D:

Hitsound：
没神马问题

Combol：
00:28:424 (4) - 开始，和前面那段00:23:207开始一样的音乐为什么，前面都NEW了，这里却一口气“黄”下去了？ fixed D:
00:51:033 (5) - NEW COMBOL fixed
01:14:837 (15) - 你以为你缩在一起，别人就看不出这里超过15COMBOL了吗？^ ^ fixed D:

距离，节奏：
00:46:251 (1) to (3) - 别这样，大哥。我建议把(1)和前面(4)组成滚轮，2,3跳 好想法，多谢，fixed
00:48:859 (1) to (3) - 同上 ^

29SP应该也没什么UNRANKABLE的问题了，那么接下来大多是RP了。以及自己对RANK这件事情的理解和坚持了。大爱东方 抓紧搞sb然后就看造化了orz

祝早日RANK thx for modding

LKs wrote:

liuming

xChippy wrote:

Hihi~ M4M from my queue >w<

General
All fine~
Really nice map you have here thank u :3

Normal
I'll just be really nazi here lol =w= it's already very good imo >w< lolol
01:42:772 (2) - 179|108 fixed
01:45:816 (1) - 256|248fixed
01:50:598 (5) - 378|80fixed
01:53:642 (3) - Maybe Align this with (1) end to make the triangle prettier :3? (You'll have to fix the spacing after this =w=) ok~ fixed

Hard
00:29:511 (4) - Looks better if you place it at 380|107 good, fixed
00:51:903 (8) - There should be another repeat imo. hmm... i know this is a 3/4 repeat part in main song's violin... i just make it a slider easier for catching rhythm... ok, I'll fix it :3
01:15:381 (1) - Remove this NC fits the music better imo hmm... actually it's an other modder suggest me nc here, but now i want to take urs. fixed and remove 00:54:511 (3) - 's nc as well :3

Insane
OD +1fixed
00:34:946 (1) - NC fixed
01:01:033 (6) - Don't really like how this looks, try to make them symm lol, sry idk what is "symm", u mean "symmetry"? hmm... that's just like that, actually i like slider's shape like this... maybe it's not the perfect fit here thou... let's see what other modders say... D:
01:34:077 (3) - Lower distance a little? its 9.00 here coz slider speed change to 0.5x here, actually it's 3.0x in distance just same to 01:33:641 (1,2) - . So don't worry about it, it's just a big jumping pattern. :3
01:37:990 (1) - Looks better this way imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824740 oh no... look at 01:37:990 (1,2,3) - , u will see. btw, u really should redowload my map and take a look at my storyboard. :3

That's all for me >w<
Great map :3
(╯°□°)╯︵
Good Luck ^^

Nymph wrote:

第二个红线应该是114548

别的懒得说 改完走起


This map is so amazing that I can't say too much about it, the storyboard, hitsounds and stuff are just awesome that I can hardly know this is a 1st map by a new mapper. However, there seems to be some parts, we can call it, overmap. But it did feel nice during playing, and the hitsounds make them didn't feel awkward at all. So, let's give it a try.

bubbled.

DarkDunskin wrote:

I should have returned earlier to map a Taiko for this map dangit :/

Scorpiour wrote:

irc mod log

the map is pretty well made and impressive sb work.

the only issue left now is the timing that still need to confirm, don't worry :>

SPOILER

02:38 Scorpiour: 1
02:39 Hollow Wings: ok了~
02:40 Scorpiour: 别急
02:40 Scorpiour: 着急睡觉去么。。？
02:40 Hollow Wings: 不着急
02:40 Hollow Wings: 慢慢来吧~
02:40 Scorpiour: Audio Lead-in放回到0，感觉前面有点长了
02:41 Scorpiour: 全diff的
02:42 Hollow Wings: 网实在太破
02:42 Hollow Wings: 我可能会不时掉一下线。。。所以可能有正好没看到你说的话的情况出现，见谅一下哦QVQ
02:42 Scorpiour: Audio Lead-in放回到0，感觉前面有点长了<--有收到?
02:42 Scorpiour: 看到的就给我回一句
02:42 Hollow Wings: 没收到，我现在去改
02:42 Hollow Wings: 好
02:45 Scorpiour: 00:29:511 - 这里我倾向于加一个note，放在398:134
02:45 Scorpiour: 看下效果
02:47 Hollow Wings: 唔，那样的话干脆连着00:29:729 (4) - 一起甩出去比较好吧？
02:47 Hollow Wings: 感觉也顺手一点？
02:47 Scorpiour: 也可以
02:47 Hollow Wings: 好的
02:47 Scorpiour: 向右上拉出去
02:47 Hollow Wings: 嗯
02:48 Scorpiour: 00:40:164 (1) - 直觉上停在白线上会更舒服一点……吗估计弄起来会比较麻烦所以你自己决定把只是个小建议:>
02:49 Hollow Wings: 这个地方很多人都跟我说过，我也改了很多次。。。不过我觉得现在这样是最好的节奏了
02:50 Scorpiour: ok
02:50 Hollow Wings: 好了吗，别的diff不需要看吗
02:51 Scorpiour: 还没完
02:51 Scorpiour: 别急。。。
02:51 Scorpiour: 01:05:381 (3) - 这里
02:51 Scorpiour: 如果是我的话我会把这个放在(7)的那里
02:51 Scorpiour: 284:176
02:52 Hollow Wings: 唔，这个折返的梗整个高潮都有。。。
02:52 Hollow Wings: 我想统一都是这个样子的0.0
02:53 Scorpiour: 我明白，只是建议试下，把后面7放到300:64，把这个放到原先7的位置，如果你自己觉得舒服就改一下，不喜欢跳过即可
02:57 Hollow Wings: 又掉了QVQ
02:57 Hollow Wings: 关于01:05:381 (3) - 那里还有7
02:57 Scorpiour: 恩？
02:57 Hollow Wings: 我觉得还是不改吧
02:57 Hollow Wings: 因为这个梗后面接滑条都不是大跳
02:57 Scorpiour: 这没所谓啦纯属建议自己拿捏
02:57 Hollow Wings: 想统一一下
02:57 Hollow Wings: 好的~
02:57 Hollow Wings: 跟你说一下
02:58 Scorpiour: 恩
02:58 Scorpiour: 必须要改的东西你不想改我也会逼你弄的www
02:58 Hollow Wings: wwww
02:58 Scorpiour: Insane
02:59 Scorpiour: 00:57:772 (3) - 这个滑条“听起来不舒服”，尾巴压在了鼓点重音上而略过了00:58:207 - 的音
02:59 Hollow Wings: insane，嗯
02:59 Scorpiour: 如果可能的话我会期待这样的节奏，稍等截图
02:59 Hollow Wings: 好，等你截图
02:59 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/3lDMn.jpg
03:00 Scorpiour: (3)缩短到红线，然后从长白线拉一个滑条出来
03:00 Hollow Wings: 嗯，我看一下
03:00 Scorpiour: 可以考虑的排列：
03:00 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/3lDO8.jpg
03:01 Hollow Wings: 我明白了，确实感觉不错
03:01 Scorpiour: 恩
03:01 Scorpiour: 如果改的话注意音效别丢了
03:02 Hollow Wings: 嗯嗯
03:02 Scorpiour: 01:02:772 (1) - 这里
03:02 Scorpiour: 把这个向后挪动1/2放到01:02:990 -
03:02 Scorpiour: 然后
03:02 Scorpiour: 01:02:772 - 加note叠到slider头，NC相应移动
03:03 Scorpiour: 音效在01:02:772 - 保留Finish+Clap,01:02:990 - 只留finish
03:03 Scorpiour: 试试看？
03:04 Scorpiour: 这种地方我个人会更倾向于使用切分音来让节奏的变化感多一些而不是使用1/1的slider
03:04 Hollow Wings: 嗷，如果这样改的话我想把滑条的形状变了，而且别让它和1叠在一起
03:04 Scorpiour: 这随意
03:05 Hollow Wings: 这样跳过去也算有个缓冲，直接stack感觉很奇怪
03:05 Hollow Wings: 嗯
03:05 Scorpiour: 重点是节奏，排列相对比较随意一些
03:05 Hollow Wings: 好的
03:05 Scorpiour: 01:05:381 (1,2,3) - 这里也类似，比较倾向于note->slider->note的切分音节奏，而不是slider->note->note
03:05 Scorpiour: 你自己可以试试看然后决定怎么弄
03:07 Hollow Wings: 哦哦
03:07 Hollow Wings: 那这边的改动会有点大呢
03:07 Scorpiour: 没事
03:07 Scorpiour: 所以说自己决定
03:08 Hollow Wings: 我把2拖到1前面去，位置也改一下吧
03:08 Scorpiour: 我认为这2个节奏可以比较明显的提升质量，不过没有到非改不可的程度
03:08 Scorpiour: 嗯
03:08 Hollow Wings: 嗯，跟你说一下怎么改
03:08 Hollow Wings: 好的
03:08 Scorpiour: 改好后给我发截图就可以
03:08 Scorpiour: 你改你的我看有问题会直接和你说
03:09 Hollow Wings: 好的
03:12 Scorpiour: Hard和Normal没什么问题
03:12 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/3lEa9
03:13 Hollow Wings: 你看这样行吗
03:13 Hollow Wings: 好的~
03:13 Scorpiour: 应该可以
03:13 Scorpiour: 等下我还要confirm一下timing
03:13 Hollow Wings: 1是307,156
03:13 Hollow Wings: 嗯，我再改一下前面那里
03:17 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/3lEhm.jpg
03:17 Hollow Wings: 前面我改成了这样
03:17 Scorpiour: 恩……
03:17 Scorpiour: 有个问题现在
03:17 Scorpiour: timing好像有点不准…………
03:17 Hollow Wings: 是吗0.0
03:17 Scorpiour: 我自己初测-12....
03:17 Hollow Wings: 是整个timing吗
03:18 Scorpiour: 恩…………
03:18 Scorpiour: 别急…………
03:18 Hollow Wings: 唔，好，那我等你的结果
03:26 Scorpiour: 稍等下吧我需要找人确认
03:26 Hollow Wings: 好的QVQ
03:39 Scorpiour: 嗯…………你先更新一下吧

Scorpiour wrote:

confirmed, -12ms to first uninherited timing point, please fix that in All Diffs and ensure the snapping. Call me back when you finish all :>

edit : rebubbled~

rezoons wrote:

Go rank ^^

Gloria Guard wrote:

well...


I don't know this timing point.. why red line volume 100% and add green line volume down 20%?

i think it is remove imo.

ampzz wrote:

How the heck was this even remotely close to rankable as there are a LOT issues with the mapset... including the biggest one which was incorrect timing.

Requested mod as given in my modding queue.

GeneralWhy is the difficulty spread so poor? It's a low BPM song so explain how you could only make a N, I, I, I spread? It should have been quite simple to produce an Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane spread... no, its just N, H, I, I mapset

Seriously, shouldn't the BATs have been picking on this fact alone?

Offset is out by 4, should be 2330 instead for the first point. In actual fact you're missing out on a BPM change at the end completely as it changes from 138 > 134 > 123... bat had checked the timing, and there's no problem with it

Timing

Note: All of these mods are after the timing correction has been implemented.

NormalWhy does this have so many overlapping patterns considering this is supposed to be the easiest difficulty of the set... Your comboing makes little sense as well. this is normal diff and where is overlapping

1. 00:08:416 (2) - This and every other slider you have within this map; why do you map over the stanzas? There isn't enough emphasis on it by having a slider end here. I'm not going to point out all of these since you should be able to go through the difficulty and change their arrangement yourself as they are quite frequent. i can't see any problem thou
2. 00:23:199 (1) - Same reason as above, you're mapping over a highly audible downbeat which fairly audible stanza and then have the slider itself end completely inaudible? Shrink this by 2 white ticks and actually place circles on the remaining ticks that are free afterwards. i follow the violin and this is a queit part as well, but i'll consider turning the volume up
3. 00:26:677 (1,2) - Same as (00:08:416), you've gone and mapped this in an unintuitive way such that the actual tone which players should be tapping isn't available to play. Same as (00:08:416)
   
   SPOILER

   00:26:677 (3) - Circle. nope
   00:27:112 (4) - 1/1 slider.
   00:27:982 (5) - Circle.
   00:28:416 (1) - 1/1 slider.
4. 00:41:895 - Why is this beat not mapped? Makes little sense that it isn't. that's the hitsound style maybe, why i need to add all of the song's beat even in normal diff? thou, i'll take some of ur suggesion
5. 00:54:069 (1) - Wouldn't have even bothered with placing a circle here at all and just let the players start from the next stanza. ???
6. 00:54:938 - Remove NC. actually i don't think there's any nc problem with this diff, reject all nc suggestion as well, sry D:
7. 00:58:416 (3) - Make this into a 2/1 lengthed slider.
8. 00:59:721 - This should have been the NC instead.
9. 01:01:025 - Remove NC, there is nothing here that demands the use of one.
10. 01:02:329 - NC here instead.
11. 01:09:721 - Again, why are beats just completely missing for?
12. 01:14:938 - Considering the rhythm you have been mapping, this should have been a circle or
13. 01:19:286 (3,1,2) - Same as the previous section aforementioned.
14. 01:29:721 (3,4,5) - Just swap these out for a 2/1 slider, sounds really plain and boring playing the 1/1 mapped notes here. hmm, i think it's more borning playing hmm, this is good, fixed.
15. 01:35:373 - Another missing beat?
16. 01:35:808 - Remove NC.
17. 01:36:243 - NC here instead.
18. 01:37:982 - Remove NC.
19. 01:38:851 - NC here instead.
20. 01:36:243 (2,2) - Another random overlap section that would be confusing for beginners.
21. 01:41:460 (1,2) - Just no, almost any beginning player would screw reading this up instantly.
22. 01:44:069 - NC here.
23. 01:45:373 - Another missing beat.
24. 01:45:808 - Remove NC.
25. 01:46:677 - NC here.
26. 01:48:416 - Remove NC.
27. 01:49:286 - NC here.

Hit me up when you've done all of this and I'll do the other difficulties as they all need work done to them.

lolcubes wrote:

I can't time well currently, but I can see it's off. that's all right, i'm just waiting for timing checking :3

First offset is good (2326), but you're missing more of them.
01:53:195 - BPM 132
01:54:558 - BPM 126
01:56:008 - Metronome reset. all of these were fixed, resnaped objs and moved green line as well, thank u :3

Generally, all of the hitsounds are too quiet. They sound nice but it's not really good to play with. You are creating a map that is supposed to be played, so you need louder hitsounds. is that so? sry for that, and already fixed hitsound issues by turning up the volume everywhere. D:

01:43:086 - silencing slider ends in this manner is not rankable. Since you are already overmapping to add to the music, make them audible. If you are overmapping to add to the music and then silencing hitsounds, you are doing it wrong. This is not allowed, sorry. do u mentioned the sliders here in insane diff? i thouhgt they're 3/4 sliders together so i made the hitsounds silence at their ends... alright, already fixed this. D:

I have to pop this over timing. I don't have time for rechecks currently, so if possible try to find someone else, sorry. ;_; OvQ
I might check it somewhere next week if noone gets to it though. as a newbie mapper i should say that i'm so poor in timing, thx for ur timing and modding~ i hope there's no problem with my map when bats recheck this, with rebubbling supposing :3

Light Usagi wrote:

wow, it has SB now, cool

and the background is always getting darker each time I made a visit

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request, no kd plz
the current timing is fine to me(maybe offset need to +3~5, tiny thing)
btw, it seems lolcubes haven't time to finish his rechecking, I can help him to handle this if you don't mind

Hollow Wings wrote:

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request, no kd plz
the current timing is fine to me(maybe offset need to +3~5, tiny thing)
btw, it seems lolcubes haven't time to finish his rechecking, I can help him to handle this if you don't mind

hmm, so is this map ready for rebubble or even rank? idk what to do next to get forward... just waiting some bat noticed this? or can u rebubble this right now? 0.0

Chloe wrote:

I think it meaned rebub will coming soon 0.0
Gl to rank it.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Amazing drawing for a nice song, and good maps.
Have a star from me.
Too bad there is no Taiko... if you should be interested in having one, you may contact me.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Amazing drawing for a nice song, and good maps.
Have a star from me.
Too bad there is no Taiko... if you should be interested in having one, you may contact me.

ts8zs wrote:

OnosakiHito wrote:

Amazing drawing for a nice song, and good maps.
Have a star from me.
Too bad there is no Taiko... if you should be interested in having one, you may contact me.

It's too late:3
I want make one too:3