no mod is too bad! there could've been nice suggestions.
well anyway, hi miya!
[General]
128 kbit/s .mp3 isn't recommended! 192 is better. Try to get another one, just for the quality, well it's not that necessary i suppose xD
Is it on purpose that the bg is 1280x720? If yes leave it, if no, try to convert it to 1024,768 o:
[Insane]
First impression: Well, looks like a good map! The jumps are a big, but I think that's ok. I have some problems with the white combo color, it makes everything a bit hard to read! Also the combos seem extreeemely long o.o but for now, nice c:
Suggestions:
00:05:019 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Instead of making this combo so straight, i suggest something round. Because i have an idea for 00:06:191 (10,11,1) - : you could make the DS between them the same, so you get a jump there, instead from 11 to 1. My suggestion: http://puu.sh/39FSB.jpg Warning: it looks very ugly, but it's just for the idea. xD
00:26:347 (12) - NC? This combo is waaay to high imo. And it looks weird, because there is a little break in it as well, i recommend it ^^
00:32:910 (5) - If you could move this a bit to the bottom you could create a nice looking-blanket. just like 1-2 grids
00:35:956 (4) - http://puu.sh/39FYb.jpg I think you could create a better flow moving the slider like this. How it is now is .. kind of weird to play
00:40:410 (5) - http://puu.sh/39FZT.jpg Try this rhythm once! IT fit's the 'my little glory' part better, because this jump you created .. well it makes sense, but it's just my opinion
00:43:222 (4) - Extend this slider to the blue tick? dunno if you like it though, but i kinda do :3
00:51:660 (7) - Mostly you added a NC on the white tick, did you just miss this or is it on purpose? The combo gets pretty long again
01:12:988 (2) - Blanket again - move it a bit to the left to fix it
01:13:925 (5,6) - Bad flow, the fact that the slider goes left and the circle interrupts it with going down - you can think of a better solution i guess
-> I don't wanna stick to a NC mod, so if you see a very long combo, please fix it.
01:43:456 (4) - Remove this jump, there is no reason for doing it here.. it doesn't fit with the lyrics and stuff.. i think it's too confusing xD
01:47:441 (5,6,7) - boring rhythm, try to emphasize the 'my little glory' lyric-part a bit more O:
[Sekai's Hard]
00:03:847 (4) - This slider, can you make it going to the left? so it doesn't touch the next circle o.o this kinda bothers me xDD
00:23:535 (1) - 1 grid to the left and the blanket looks better, dunno why i always mention this :C well, if you don't want to, leave it. xD
00:33:378 (7) - Can you explain me this slider? o: why does it reverse on the blue tick? xD Don't really get it
01:01:035 (1) - What do you think of this rhythm? :http://puu.sh/39Gkk.jpg , i think it would fit the lyrics pretty well, it's just that you have to put the reverse slider a biit erlier
01:39:472 (4) - Moving the slider like this will create a better flow with the next slider http://puu.sh/39Gn6.jpg
nice diff, pretty patterns, speciul CS ! great~
[Hard]
00:06:660 (1) - Again NC, it gets too big u.u
00:48:613 (8) - Nc xD
01:10:175 (6) - :c NC? xD
hm, looks pretty good for me sorry for that cheap mod! hope i helped a bit more at your insane xD
[Andrea's Normal]
00:45:097 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/39Gya.jpg If you could move these things like this it would look pretty cool. but up to you
[Sekai's Easy]
00:01:035 (1,2) - What about claps on the reverses here? o_o As far as i know they used them there as well.. or not? i forgot XD
00:31:035 (1,1) - Stack them, just for gloryness
00:40:878 (3) - blanket? D: http://puu.sh/39GEJ.jpg Looks pretty too.. but it's ok if you don't move it, i mean you would have to fix pretty many things.
01:23:535 (4) - rotating this a bit to the right would look pretty good, wouldn't it?
great mapset, good luck! ) i hope i helped a bit hurrdurr~
well anyway, hi miya!
[General]
128 kbit/s .mp3 isn't recommended! 192 is better. Try to get another one, just for the quality, well it's not that necessary i suppose xD
Is it on purpose that the bg is 1280x720? If yes leave it, if no, try to convert it to 1024,768 o:
[Insane]
First impression: Well, looks like a good map! The jumps are a big, but I think that's ok. I have some problems with the white combo color, it makes everything a bit hard to read! Also the combos seem extreeemely long o.o but for now, nice c:
Suggestions:
00:05:019 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Instead of making this combo so straight, i suggest something round. Because i have an idea for 00:06:191 (10,11,1) - : you could make the DS between them the same, so you get a jump there, instead from 11 to 1. My suggestion: http://puu.sh/39FSB.jpg Warning: it looks very ugly, but it's just for the idea. xD
00:26:347 (12) - NC? This combo is waaay to high imo. And it looks weird, because there is a little break in it as well, i recommend it ^^
00:32:910 (5) - If you could move this a bit to the bottom you could create a nice looking-blanket. just like 1-2 grids
00:35:956 (4) - http://puu.sh/39FYb.jpg I think you could create a better flow moving the slider like this. How it is now is .. kind of weird to play
00:40:410 (5) - http://puu.sh/39FZT.jpg Try this rhythm once! IT fit's the 'my little glory' part better, because this jump you created .. well it makes sense, but it's just my opinion
00:43:222 (4) - Extend this slider to the blue tick? dunno if you like it though, but i kinda do :3
00:51:660 (7) - Mostly you added a NC on the white tick, did you just miss this or is it on purpose? The combo gets pretty long again
01:12:988 (2) - Blanket again - move it a bit to the left to fix it
01:13:925 (5,6) - Bad flow, the fact that the slider goes left and the circle interrupts it with going down - you can think of a better solution i guess
-> I don't wanna stick to a NC mod, so if you see a very long combo, please fix it.
01:43:456 (4) - Remove this jump, there is no reason for doing it here.. it doesn't fit with the lyrics and stuff.. i think it's too confusing xD
01:47:441 (5,6,7) - boring rhythm, try to emphasize the 'my little glory' lyric-part a bit more O:
[Sekai's Hard]
00:03:847 (4) - This slider, can you make it going to the left? so it doesn't touch the next circle o.o this kinda bothers me xDD
00:23:535 (1) - 1 grid to the left and the blanket looks better, dunno why i always mention this :C well, if you don't want to, leave it. xD
00:33:378 (7) - Can you explain me this slider? o: why does it reverse on the blue tick? xD Don't really get it
01:01:035 (1) - What do you think of this rhythm? :http://puu.sh/39Gkk.jpg , i think it would fit the lyrics pretty well, it's just that you have to put the reverse slider a biit erlier
01:39:472 (4) - Moving the slider like this will create a better flow with the next slider http://puu.sh/39Gn6.jpg
nice diff, pretty patterns, speciul CS ! great~
[Hard]
00:06:660 (1) - Again NC, it gets too big u.u
00:48:613 (8) - Nc xD
01:10:175 (6) - :c NC? xD
hm, looks pretty good for me sorry for that cheap mod! hope i helped a bit more at your insane xD
[Andrea's Normal]
00:45:097 (6,1) - http://puu.sh/39Gya.jpg If you could move these things like this it would look pretty cool. but up to you
[Sekai's Easy]
00:01:035 (1,2) - What about claps on the reverses here? o_o As far as i know they used them there as well.. or not? i forgot XD
00:31:035 (1,1) - Stack them, just for gloryness
00:40:878 (3) - blanket? D: http://puu.sh/39GEJ.jpg Looks pretty too.. but it's ok if you don't move it, i mean you would have to fix pretty many things.
01:23:535 (4) - rotating this a bit to the right would look pretty good, wouldn't it?
great mapset, good luck! ) i hope i helped a bit hurrdurr~