Bakari
Thanks for the mod Bakari -Bakari- wrote:
ok, as requested. I hope I'm not that slow ._.
[General][Insane]
- Please do not use short words like op in tags. It's too short and search engine won't work with this properly. Instead, you can add more tags like ost (short from Original SoundTrack), Gakuoh (people call this novel like this A LOT) and probably Lump of Sugar (it's their visual novel, after all) OP is for in game, i can use op to search my map in in-game. But added Lump of Sugar and Gakuoh.
[Hard]
- 00:25:644 (9) - consider placing a New Combo here, so players will read this pattern easier and it will fit with music, also. Or you can try to swap NCs between 00:26:347 (12,1) - to follow vocals better. Feel free to chose one of these variants, but it's totally up to you. Nope nope nope, its not my style to add NC for better readability in a jump.
- 01:05:722 (3) - nazi - this slider kinda breaks your flow, I strongly recommend you to Ctrl+G this slider.Try to reverse this slider, so you will get cute triangle-flow between (1,2,3) which flows much better than you current pattern. I don't think so, i make this jump for a finish sounds on that 4 slider. Besides it's consistant jump with 01:06:660 (5) -
- 01:16:972 (13) - you're kinda overmapping here. That 1/8 sound disappears at 01:17:441 - so, you should finish your slider here. Oh, and if you apply this suggestion, place a circle at 01:17:675 - to follow vocals. No, the 1/8 don't end there, there is clearly 1/8 note at this time 01:17:675 -
- 01:31:035 (5) - blargh, please place a New Combo here to follow vocals better. It will point out end of previous pattern and start of a new one. So, NC here will fit with music, pattern + it makes flow a bit more understandable. Cmon, 01:29:628 (2,3) - jump, 01:30:565 (4,5) - jump, 01:31:503 (6,7) - jump. It's consistant.
- 01:56:113 - you shouldn't ignore that drum sound there. It's regular 1/2 sound and it's kinda confusing that you're ignoring it. Try to map it and you'll hear that something like this sounds good here. ok, changed~
- 00:06:191 - loud clap here is ignored. Can't you map it? :V Simple circle with clap hitsound will be enough, but you can make something more interesting, tho ok
- 00:44:863 (10) - do NOT use sliders like this one, Second reverse appears too late and players have no time to read it, what's more this kind of sliders is very uncommon, so players don't ecven EXPECT to see it there. Why not? I think player can expect that.
- 01:17:206 (2) - when you return back to normasl SV and DS you'd better lace a New Combo, too! So, players will know that slowdown/speedup is over. Place a NC here to make pattern easier-understandable for players Oh, right, ok, added~
- 01:34:081 - place a circle here, to follow vocals and to keep rhythm consistent. Triplet here will help players to understand and read your rhythm easier + it will make this diff a bit more challenging. Ok, added~
Same as Sekai's diff, I guess. [Hard] should be a little bit more relaxing, imo. Not really, Hard can be challenging too.
hero
xxheroxx wrote:
GeneralHard
- • Your BG is almost nsfw, mind using another one? There is a lot of Bikini bg out there, and this BG doesnt show panty shot and almost like bikini one. So i think it's okay
Insane
- • 00:06:660 (8) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 00:06:894. There is a beat on this time, so i don't want to skip it.
• 00:07:363 (x) - Add a circle. Nope.
• 00:14:863 (6) - Curve this slider a little, also try this pattern: I like this pattern
• 00:30:097 (7) - 2 1/4 repeating sliders fit much better here imo. No, there is 1/8 beat there
• 00:55:410 (6) - End this slider 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 00:55:878. I don't hear any 3/4 rhythm hear. No, it will be weird later, better to use triplet. Besides a little variety doesn't hurt.
• 01:26:581 (3) - Delete this circle to keep a consistency with 01:19:199 (2,3).
• 01:33:613 (5) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier... No, if you hear clearly there is a beat here.
• 01:33:964 (7) - ...and this circle 1/2 earlier. Following Bakari mod, so believe this have been taking care of.
• 01:52:363 (6) - Start this slider at 01:52:597. Fixed on my own way~
- • 00:01:738 (x) - Add a circle like you did at 00:03:613 (7). Added~
• 00:26:816 (13) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise. Nope.
• 00:30:097 (9) - Same as Hard, use 2 1/4 repeating sliders. Nope.
• 00:45:449 (12,13) - I don't like flow here, rotete (13) a little: Ok, direction changed.
• 01:07:128 (6) - Rotate this slider 15° anticlockwise. Nope.
• 01:31:503 (6) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise. Nope.
• 01:33:613 (5) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier and add a circle at 01:33:730. Same as hard
• 01:51:191 (5) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise. Nope.
Get a few more mods and call me again for a recheck. Thanks~
Thanks for the mod hero o/
Added back again Short Ver. since some BAT said its fine.