1. AR3 (5 stars, 384 notes)
2. Easy (2.56 stars, 118 notes)
3. Hard (4.79 stars, 307 notes)
4. Sweet Vanilla's Normal (3.83 stars, 153 notes)

mintong89 wrote:

hi

[Hard]

00:38:081 - 加note 感觉不加
00:43:081 (6) - +NC
00:50:224 - 可以加个5%的绿线来弄小声 好耶
00:57:605 (1) - 去NC, 00:58:319 (3) - 加NC
01:18:319 (1) - 不要NC吧 后面都Spinner了

NC排放不是很好, 建议再重新放 NC重新排了

[Easy]

可以, 只是CS会不会太大了点？这么大爽吧平

Good Luck~

mintong89 wrote:

hi

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[Normal]
00:35:462 (1) - 不需要NC, 而且太上面了Unrankable 嗯 已经改正> <
00:55:462 (1,2) - 太弯了吧不是很美 嗯 已修正
01:34:986 - 为啥要break 已添加> <
01:43:557 (1) - 太弯 嗯
01:54:986 (1,2) - 这个对normal太难了吧 已修正> <

感谢米桶的mod~~
Good Luck~

OSUtoto wrote:

[Ar3's Insane]
break time后的能放whistle的地方怎么不跟伴奏放？不好玩

00:37:486 (2,3) - +whistle 好
00:41:057 (6,1) - ^ 好
00:50:700 (2) - +finish 好
01:05:224 (10) - remove clap 不好
01:05:700 (3) - +clap 好
01:05:938 (5) - +finish 好
01:09:748 (1) - 这里别插绿线，因为其他节奏相同的地方也没插， 好
01:18:319 (5) - NC，end+finish fin不好
01:19:034 (4) - top+finish 不好
01:19:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 除了5的尾，其他红白线处都+whistle？ 好
01:24:034 (7) - 尾别放finish嘛 好
01:33:796 (5,6) - top+finish 好
01:38:557 (6) - remove finish 好
01:53:557 (6) - NC 好
01:54:510 (4) - end remove clap 不好
01:55:224 (2) - +clap 不好
02:10:819 (1) - +finish 好

01:48:796 (4) - 这样？ http://puu.sh/3dX3h.jpg 我把滑条放上去了
01:49:986 (2,3,4) - 现在这个三连间距算是比较大的了， http://puu.sh/3dX4L.jpg 这样flow比较好吧？ 好

大概这样吧，其他两个难度没看出什么问题（我可没偷懒哦）

CET 6 wrote:

刚开始mod图 如有冒犯见谅！

Easy

1· 00:16:415 (1) 或许可以用 00:16:415 放note 00:16:653 放note 00:17:129 - 00:17:843 放滑条（不会截图···就用打的了
改成了1/2滑条加一个1/2折返，截图可以用puush，国内网站比如poco外链也可以

Hard

1· 00:34:986 或许可以加个note 不太好
2· 00:50:581 (6) 这个或许可以NC到后面一个颜色去 好的
3· 01:20:462 - 01:28:319 或许可以 SVx0.5 然后 01:28:319 - 01:36:415 SVx0.75 哎呦这个当时没考虑，不过SV本来只有1.6，改了以后滑条太短了看着丑
而且间距问题比较麻烦就不变速了

大概就这样~
祝早日Ranked ！

CET 6 wrote:

Ar3 Insane

1· 00:23:557 (6) 或许可以放远点 ( x:128 Y:144 左右吧 那样不是更近了吗..
2· 00:34:986 或许可以加个note 容我三思
3· 00:27:843 (1) 间距或许可以远点 不好!
4· 01:04:034 (5) NC 好
5· 01:04:510 (7,9) 或许可以加 Whistle 加了后面的, 这个有clap不需要了吧
6· 01:20:462 - 01:28:319 或许可以 SVx0.6 然后 01:28:319 - 01:36:415 SVx0.8 你太鬼畜了!
7· 02:10:700 (6) 或许可以放再远一点 这个倒是可以远一点 不过没什么好点位..


大概就这样~
祝早日Ranked ！

Flower wrote:

我看看他咋玩的 然后report 好

[Hard]
00:17:129 - whistle 加上了
00:19:272 (6,7,8) - 柑橘这里三联不是很舒服 要不删掉7看看？我还是喜欢三个个连起来的音效
00:19:748 - +note然后whistle看看？
这两个不改，我觉得原来这样比较有段落感

00:30:462 - 去whistle？去掉了
00:30:938 - whistle 去掉了
00:49:748 (5) - 减少一个repeat 减掉了
01:07:962 (2) - 感觉在 01:08:200 - 比较好 移过去了
01:17:367 (1,2) - 1延长到2，去掉2，这对中等玩家来说比较友好 改好了不过感觉滑条长了有些难看QAQ
01:29:391 (2) - 感觉在 01:29:629 - 比较好 移过去了
01:31:891 (4) - 试着改成在01:32:010 - 的一个单点？气氛烘托起来 恩，好的
01:34:272 (1,2) - 同01:17:367 (1,2) - 改好了
01:37:367 (4,1,2) - 4和1交换NC，改成一个正三角形 好的
01:42:367 (2) - 不应该在白线而应该推迟1/4起 恩，前面的单点也改成滑条了
01:47:248 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 要么减少间距 要么删掉01:47:486 (7) - ，感觉这里不是很友好 缩小了间距，里面有鼓声所以不好分啊
01:56:415 (3) - 缩短1/4 缩短了
01:58:319 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 不是很友好 前面的五连改成滑条加2连了
02:01:176 (1,2,3) - 放远一些，auto stack导致间距变小 好的，往右下角挪了一点
02:04:034 (5,6,7) - 把5延长到6的位置，在02:04:867 - 加note 好长好难看。。缩短了在前面补了个三连



[Easy]
00:29:748 (3,1) - 交换NC
00:46:891 (2) - 加NC，如果这样的话，去掉00:47:843 (1,1,1) - 的NC，00:44:986 (3) - 加NC
01:06:415 (1) - 去掉NC
01:32:605 (5,1) - 交换NC
01:42:129 (4,1,2) - 交换1和任意一个的NC
01:46:415 (5) - NC
不能再说了 感觉这个难度的NC整个非常乱 请注意Easy的combo是不必长的，两三个note一个combo也是可以的。请重新NC
NC重新加了;w;两条长白线一次

Good luck~

Flower wrote:

[AR3]
这里都是我个人的看法，如果你不采纳，请详细的写出原因，如果简单地一个“不好”或者“懒”，那么青泥池殿石
OD-1 感觉这么低的BPM用OD8太掉了 OD7 acc太好打了 不要不服
00:34:986 - 不加个clap？ 好
00:36:415 (5,6,7,8) - 做成正三角 我把5移了几个格, 差不多了大概
00:41:415 (2) - 去掉clap并加上whistle，这里的pattern如果不换的话去掉00:41:415 (2) - 才更舒服。如果你采纳前者，那么可以在00:42:248 - 或者00:42:367 - 加上clap 我觉得还是两个clap好听 不改
00:46:296 - 加个whistle以体现更好的效果？
00:47:129 (2) - 改成whistle，理由同上
00:49:748 (4) - ^ clap多好听为什么要改
00:49:867 (5,6) - 00:50:105 - 加上whistle，这里可以给一个骤停的感觉 唔 加了
00:50:105 (7) - （可选）改成单点，空出最后一格 我要放音在那里 233
01:28:796 (7) - 我觉得这里的长音可以改成3/4来体现得更好 3/2的长音不需要用3/4体现吧
01:55:224 (2) - 从blanket或者难度来讲放到224,196比较好 好
02:09:748 (5) - 改成三个节点全部finish看看？并不会与最后的finish重复 不会重复是什么意思 我改成normal fin了

Good luck~

CET 6 wrote:

刚开始mod图 如有冒犯见谅！

Sweet Normal因为对normal规则不太熟悉所以可能会有很多错误希望大大们指出> < 香草一定改正

1· 00:45:938 (5) 间距 或许可以放宽点 好的
2· 01:05:938 (2) 同上 已经修正
3· 01:12:605 (7,1) 这遮挡感觉有点不好读图 已经修正遮挡和距离
4· 01:24:986 (3) 间距 或许可以放宽点 好的
5· 01:27:605 或许可以加个note 嗯 好
6· 02:08:557 或许可以加个finish好


大概就这样~
祝早日Ranked ！

Flower wrote:

我看看他咋玩的 然后report

[xiangcao] 不要用拼音呀 喂> < 会让人误解的
00:24:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 间距不统一，很容易读错嗯 已修正 初始间距因为out of field 香草就不管它惹>v<
00:31:653 - 加break，这个图不是空气人 呜 咱忘记这个惹 对不起> <
呃我接下来看了半天还是觉得不再看下去了……请让同一屏幕内的note间距保持的时间-距离比例相同，一个好的例子是DSx1.2或者x1.3嗯 这条很多人和咱提过 已经一一校准
漏finish：呜 好厉害 有的地方咱不太敢加 谢谢乃>v<
00:35:462 -
01:05:938 -
01:31:653 -
01:33:796 - 去掉finish
01:36:415 -
01:38:796 -
01:40:224 -
01:55:462 -

推荐加note：
00:50:700 - 并加finish 赞同

02:08:796 (1) - 延长到02:12:605 - 并加finish赞同> <
谢谢大大mod~~

Good luck~

1. CS+1
2. 00:38:081 -clap
3. 00:43:081 (1) +finish
4. 00:54:986 +clap
5. 01:01:653 (2) ^
6. 01:38:796 -whistle -clap
7. 01:44:034 (1) -finish
8. 01:56:415 (2) ^

1. 00:24:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) 在Beat Snap Divisor 1/2時(右上角)，
   在00:24:034按ctrl+shift+D 跑出 http://puu.sh/3fjg7.jpg ，
   把Points調成8，然後在把note移到白線上。
2. 00:37:367 (4,5,6,7) http://puu.sh/3fjlx.jpg
3. 00:40:700 +clap
4. 01:08:796 (2) http://puu.sh/3fjpk.jpg
5. 01:28:319 (7) -NC
6. 01:28:796 (8) NC
7. 01:40:700 +clap
8. 02:03:081 (3) +finish
9. 02:04:986 (6) ^ NC
10. 02:05:700 (1) -NC
11. 02:06:891 +finish NC
12. 02:07:605 -clap

1. 你有沒有發現這個難度的走向一直試順時鐘走ww
2. 00:24:510 (3,4,5,6,1,2) 總覺得不要疊在一起比較好......
   如果要疊在一起，包括前面00:23:915 (1,2) 擺成一個大四角形，00:27:367 (3,4) 擺在四角形中心
3. 00:58:796 (2) 往下移一點 (X:168, Y:356)
4. 00:59:153 (4) 弧度大點
5. 01:01:653 這樣好點? http://puu.sh/3fiSu.jpg
6. 01:47:367 (5,6,7,8,1) 擺好看點......

1. 00:34:986 加跟75%綠線
2. 00:35:462 加跟65%綠線
3. 00:41:057 (6,1) 擺近一點? http://puu.sh/3fhQo.jpg
4. 00:41:653 (3) (x:312 , y:4)
5. 00:43:081 (1) +finish
6. 00:43:557 (3) 這樣? http://puu.sh/3fhWE.jpg
7. 00:46:891 (1) +finish
8. 00:48:796 (1) ^
9. 00:53:438 (2) 往右移一點 http://puu.sh/3fij3.jpg
10. 01:04:034 綠線5% 01:04:153 綠線刪掉 01:05:462 加S:C4 60%綠線 (很有趣(不))
11. 01:01:176 (2) -clap
12. 01:17:367 (1,2,3,4) 這樣好看點? http://puu.sh/3finV.jpg
13. 01:28:796 (1) +finish / NC
14. 01:29:748 -NC
15. 01:30:700 NC
16. 01:33:796 (5) 倒U弧形
17. 02:06:891 (8) +finish

Azure wrote:

[Ar3's Insane]

1. 00:34:986 加跟75%綠線 太高了点, 我加了60
2. 00:35:462 加跟65%綠線
3. 00:41:057 (6,1) 擺近一點? http://puu.sh/3fhQo.jpg 这样不够难_(:3 」∠ )_
4. 00:41:653 (3) (x:312 , y:4) 这里往左点比较好..
5. 00:43:081 (1) +finish 好
6. 00:43:557 (3) 這樣? http://puu.sh/3fhWE.jpg 那样太直了吧..
7. 00:46:891 (1) +finish 好
8. 00:48:796 (1) ^
9. 00:53:438 (2) 往右移一點 http://puu.sh/3fij3.jpg 这是左还是右..
10. 01:04:034 綠線5% 01:04:153 綠線刪掉 01:05:462 加S:C4 60%綠線 (很有趣(不))
11. 01:01:176 (2) -clap 好
12. 01:17:367 (1,2,3,4) 這樣好看點? http://puu.sh/3finV.jpg 那样就撞上滑条了
13. 01:28:796 (1) +finish / NC 想了想还是没改
14. 01:29:748 -NC
15. 01:30:700 NC
16. 01:33:796 (5) 倒U弧形 好
17. 02:06:891 (8) +finish

1. CS+1 我感觉最大号的爽
2. 00:38:081 -clap 好的
3. 00:43:081 (1) +finish 好的
4. 00:54:986 +clap 好的
5. 01:01:653 (2) ^ 好
6. 01:38:796 -whistle -clap 好
7. 01:44:034 (1) -finish 咦加了啊
8. 01:56:415 (2) ^^

1. 你有沒有發現這個難度的走向一直試順時鐘走ww 没。。我做的时候挺注意这个的
2. 00:24:510 (3,4,5,6,1,2) 總覺得不要疊在一起比較好......
   如果要疊在一起，包括前面00:23:915 (1,2) 擺成一個大四角形，00:27:367 (3,4) 擺在四角形中心 这样比较有段落感啊感觉flow也可以
3. 00:58:796 (2) 往下移一點 (X:168, Y:356) 好，不过间距不对了，于是就移了一点
4. 00:59:153 (4) 弧度大點 好
5. 01:01:653 這樣好點? http://puu.sh/3fiSu.jpg 好
6. 01:47:367 (5,6,7,8,1) 擺好看點......

Fycho wrote:

[Ar3's Insane]
基本摸不出什么了，做的不错

• 00:43:081 (1) - finish，四段旋律一三两段开头finish比较好 有了啊
  00:52:129 (6) - 放滑条圆心里;w; w
  00:58:319 (7,8,9,10) - whistle？好
  01:14:272 (5) - 改成直滑条？不好玩
  01:19:629 (4) - whistle 好
  01:27:605 (1) - finish？好
  01:53:557 (1) - 似乎没包好前面的 这还挑, 人性呢
  01:54:986 (1) - 我觉得没必要加速了，效果没前面的加速好 嘛, 还是加一下比较配套
  后面还可以再map点吧，感觉空了好多好可惜

gxytcgxytc wrote:

[Ar3]
01:54:986 (1) - 要不要考虑换个方向..稍微有点难了.前一个这个梗是顺着的的OAO

这个嘛.. 顺着不好看.. 所以就放到了哪里

gxytcgxytc wrote:

[Easy]
00:57:129 (4) - 这样的节奏大丈夫?slider结束在前面的红线,然后空一拍或者加个note 好评
01:22:129 (2) - slider身上有一个whistle,是手误吗
01:37:367 (1) - ^
懒得点头尾中间了，已改
02:09:034 (1) - 感觉延长到后面的长白西线好一些? 好
01:15:938 (1) - finish有点违和 加到后面的滑条头了

[Normal]
00:24:034 (1,2,3,4) - 没有whistle?
02:04:986 (6) - 没包好,尾巴往左
00:53:081 (2) - x240 y84
00:35:462 (2,3) - 2和3不一样啊= =做对称的话最好ctrl c v
00:39:272 (1,2) - ^
01:22:367 (4) - 应该在01:22:486处的蓝线开头
00:37:367 (4,5,6,7) - 这4个歪了,最好由一个复制出来3个然后各转90度

[Hard]
00:53:081 (2) - 按照节奏应该是结束在红线 故意搞个3/4，别人挑了再看看吧
01:37:724 (2) - moved whistle 好
01:50:462 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不太好看,尝试摆开点或者1note+2slider? 摆五角星了
顺便NC好乱;_;应该没事吧。。

[Ar3]
01:54:986 (1) - 要不要考虑换个方向..稍微有点难了.前一个这个梗是顺着的的OAO

xD找不出来了

Zero__wind wrote:

some small issue found in test play
Normal
01:21:176 (2) - and 01:23:081 (4) -
remove the whistles on their body, if you didn't add it on purpose
It's kind of noisy imo

• ds=0.8
  HP+1 AR+1 OD+1
  00:22:605 (5) - 拉拉对称
  00:24:510 (2) - 同上
  00:43:081 (1) - whistle
  00:44:034 (3) - whistle
  00:47:129 (2) - whistle？
  01:05:462 (1) - whistle或者clap随便选个，空着感觉不好
  00:55:938 (2,3) - 间距
  00:59:748 (4) - 形状0.0
  01:32:605 (3) - Finish音应该在滑条首而不是尾
  01:35:224 (3) - delete note
  01:47:843 (1) - 滑条首finish
  01:53:557 (4) - 同上
  01:57:367 (6) - 同上
  02:03:081 (2) - 同上
  02:06:891 (3) - 同上
  01:50:462 (1) - 这个滑条改为01:50:700 - note
  01:52:129 (1,2) - 交换NC

1. How about mapping symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

   276,60,64034,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   216,152,64510,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   156,60,64986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   96,152,65462,2,0,L|52:200,2,50,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:16:415 (2) - no Finish
3. 01:55:462 (1,2) -How about mapping symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

   128,140,115462,6,0,L|204:60,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,68,116415,2,0,L|388:144,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 02:07:843 (2,3,4,1) - I suggest to change the rhythm on the pattern of vocal like the follow.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

1. 01:04:034 (1,2,3,4) - it is better not to stack
2. 01:52:962 (2) - How about extending the slider like the following?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:05:938 (1,2) - How about mapping symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

   292,116,125938,6,0,L|208:75,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   160,84,126415,2,0,L|97:114,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:46:653 (4,1) - DS should be 1.1x
2. 00:46:891 (1,3) - not stack
3. 00:49:629 (4) - delete
4. 01:16:415 (3) - no Finish
5. 01:37:367 (1) - crap
6. 01:38:557 (1) - no crap, add Finish

1. 00:43:081 (1,2,3,4) - DS should be uniformed
2. 00:46:891 (1,2,3,4) - ^
3. 01:12:486 (6) - delete
4. 01:22:129 (3,4,5) - DS should be uniformed
5. 01:26:891 (7) - no finish
6. 01:31:653 (1) - no crap, add finish
7. 01:33:319 (4) - finish
8. 02:00:819 (6) - delete

1. How about mapping symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

   276,60,64034,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   216,152,64510,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   156,60,64986,1,0,0:0:0:0:  [color=#0000FF]I think it's right now[/color]
   96,152,65462,2,0,L|52:200,2,50,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:16:415 (2) - no Finish ok
3. 01:55:462 (1,2) -How about mapping symmetrically like this?
   
   SPOILER

   

   128,140,115462,6,0,L|204:60,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,68,116415,2,0,L|388:144,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   OK
4. 02:07:843 (2,3,4,1) - I suggest to change the rhythm on the pattern of vocal like the follow.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Maybe,but now I don't wangt to change it
   

1. 00:46:653 (4,1) - DS should be 1.1x It's a jump
2. 00:46:891 (1,3) - not stack I think it is not very hard in hard
3. 00:49:629 (4) - delete sorry..I don't want to delete it
4. 01:16:415 (3) - no Finish I think finish here is fitted
5. 01:37:367 (1) - crap OK
6. 01:38:557 (1) - no crap, add Finish OK

Fycho wrote:

既然re了那咱就再来一发mod，just suggestions，feel free to ignore them
[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]谢谢乃的关注> < ~~~

• ds=0.8 咦 Distance snap咩 不要吧。。。
  HP+1 AR+1 OD+1 嗯 好> <
  00:22:605 (5) - 拉拉对称 呜 好> <
  00:24:510 (2) - 同上 嗯
  00:43:081 (1) - whistle 嗯
  00:44:034 (3) - whistle 咦 咦 有的丫。。。
  00:47:129 (2) - whistle？ 这里有clap呀。。
  01:05:462 (1) - whistle或者clap随便选个，空着感觉不好 也有clap的> <
  00:55:938 (2,3) - 间距 没有问题的说> <
  00:59:748 (4) - 形状0.0 感觉这样最好惹 可以移动出节奏感 又不会看起来太难看> < 其实咱真不知道这里该如何改动惹> <
  01:32:605 (3) - Finish音应该在滑条首而不是尾 嗯 感觉前后都要加> <
  01:35:224 (3) - delete note 其实不是不可以去掉 咱也考虑过 但是去掉把滑条拉长会很难看的说> <
  01:47:843 (1) - 滑条首finish 咦 改了一下 试试看> <
  01:53:557 (4) - 同上 这个不好吧> <
  01:57:367 (6) - 同上 好的
  02:03:081 (2) - 同上 好的
  02:06:891 (3) - 同上 好的
  01:50:462 (1) - 这个滑条改为01:50:700 - note 这个会缺一个歌词的字音 但是从节奏的角度又是可以的 还是改动了
  01:52:129 (1,2) - 交换NC咦 不太懂> < 不过 从美感上考虑 把1的nc去掉了 改成了2的> <

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]

1. 01:04:034 (1,2,3,4) - it is better not to stack ok~ it may be a defect in this map， fixed
2. 01:52:962 (2) - How about extending the slider like the following? it‘s best not to do this, first, time between 1 and 2 would be shorter. second, symmetry would be broken.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:05:938 (1,2) - How about mapping symmetrically like this?yeah I lilke it thanks~~~
   
   SPOILER

   

   292,116,125938,6,0,L|208:75,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   160,84,126415,2,0,L|97:114,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

thank you !~~~

nice song!
~good luck~

ts8zs wrote:

AR
00:49:748 (4,5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824458 第一条绿线5%第二条回来 不好.. 那里有个音不是空的
01:39:986 (2) - 直接放在1的头可以么 不可以!
01:44:748 (5) - NC？ 太短了吧
01:51:653 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824465 。。为什么觉得这么作死还是不改了
01:54:986 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824470 不好!
02:08:796 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824473 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824474 莫名.. 我先不改了看看。。

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

。。最后一个为什么是空的因为不把前面去掉看不懂……

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[easy]
00:57:129 (4) - 头和中间加whistle 好的

[hard]
00:34:986 - 加note 感觉不需要加
00:41:057 - 加note并加whistle 好
00:45:938 (3) - 头还是和2stack在一起吧，复读前面的排列 故意的啊，有点变化

感觉已经很完善了，祝早日rank

ts8zs wrote:

[/strike]

NM
01:24:034 (5) - 尾部clap？ 嗯 背景音是有的 Fixed
01:34:272 (2) - 头部finish fixed
02:06:415 (2) - 尾whistle? 凸显接头的话也是可以的 fixed
02:07:843 (5) - Whistle……感觉有点乱…… 嗯 去掉了中部的finish 添加了开头的whistle
谢谢包包子的mod~~

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[Sweet Vanilla's normal]
01:12:605 (7) - 建议与01:11:653 (5) - 的滑条尾stack stack不太好吧... 但是对第二个滑条的位置修改了一下 看起来更美观了...

Hollow Wings wrote:

[AR3]
OD+1：作为一个打了N多图的家伙表示，insane的标配绝对是OD7，OD6的insane除非是很难很难，或者很简单的insane图（这还是insane？），而事实上即使是很难的insane也会用od7，至于od8就需要衡量一下了，这图OD6明显太低（难道是刷分图？那就无视我吧orz 我用的od8啊..

00:20:700 (2,3,4,5) - 虽然我有ds强迫症，但是这几个obj为什么给我一种random notes的感觉。。。或许可以再排一下？（后面那两段跳就稍微好点 2是blanket的00:19:748 (5) - .. 还好吧
01:54:986 (1,2) - 之前是01:39:748 (1,2) - 这样，这边突然来这么一发大丈夫？读图弱一点就出100了，当然其实也看懂了你为啥这样排，难道正因为如此这才是insane吗orz，我是个人建议摆成这样：

SPOILER

没关系可以打的, 我试过很多次了233
后面的01:55:938 (2) - 可以头贴着(1)的尾向1点或者4点的方向戳，当然只是建议啦。。。

其实本来就没啥问题了QVQ
至于01:37:724 (4,5) - 的stack，其实我也觉得没问题，如果不想stack的话，或许能跳回01:37:129 (1,2,3) - 的地方 和后面距离就小了。。不过可以考虑

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi :3
Mod as requested a bit long time, sorry for delay, but I prefer doing mods when I'm in a good mood :3 XD

[General]
Fix your tags, there's a double space between "GIGA" and "BALDR" tags. fixed

[Easy]
00:22:129 (4) - How about doing this, it's less stressful for beginners than multiple repeats. I snap nothing after it..so I think it is ok

00:26:891 (4) - You can do this, is a simple rhythm and fits nicely with the song.
00:37:367 (4) - I'd make this a 1/2 beat slider, sounds better in my opinion.
00:45:938 (3) - Make this a 1/1 beat slider and remove the repeat, 3/4 sliders sound a bit weird here.
02:04:034 (2) - I'd make this a 1/2 slider, follows better the music.
02:06:891 (1) - ^
In this map I try to use 3/4 rhythm and find it sounds good so I use them
01:02:129 (3) - Remove clap? OK,a mistake
01:12:843 (3,1) - How about making this rhythm instead, I think it sounds better.

strange D:
01:56:415 (2,3) - Remove the finishes here? OK,try another way put hitsound
02:00:224 (3) - Shorten this to 02:00:700, sound better in my opinion. great,fixed


[Hard]
00:19:272 (6,7) - I'd delete these two, this triple is quite unexpected and doesn't go along with the song.
It's a bit strange but I make a same rhythm later,I will consider to change it

00:34:986 - A note is missing here :c you all tell me to add a note,so I add a note QAQ
00:53:081 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider instead, the vocals hit in the red tick.
00:57:605 (4) - ^
01:04:034 (1,2,3) - Same for these, make them 1/2 beat sliders, as you have now sounds a bit weird.
01:12:129 (2) - Delete this and end the previous slider here.
01:17:129 (6) - Delete and end the previous slider here.
01:22:843 (7) - ^
01:26:415 (5) - ^
01:28:319 (3) - Make this a 1/2 beat slider.
01:33:081 (2) - Delete and end the previous slider here.
02:02:129 (4,5) - Try this rhythm instead? You can also add a circle between (4) and (5) in the pattern I suggest.

In this map
AR3 make Insane diff,so I don't want my hard diff to be too easy,so I try a lot of hard rhythm.
01:08:200 (3) - Maybe remove this, I think it sounds better without it.OK,I think it is strange too
01:13:557 (1,2,3,4) - This part plays very bad, maybe try a rhythm like this
I try another rhythm here

That'd be all from my part, good luck \:3/ thank you Dake>///<

Kodora wrote:

[233]

HP Drain +1 for better balance between diffs? no, high hpdrain is hard to pass regarding high od
Why you dont silence soft-sliderside here? Imo it sounds pretty bad on such quiet song. ? it doesn't matter for me.. it's quiet too

00:19:748 (5,6,1) - disable drind snap & stack them perfectly k
00:24:510 (4) - Touch HP bar, move it down a bit k
00:34:986 (1) - how about make a little kiai fountain here? storyboard is enough..
01:04:748 (4,5) - Spacing. Jumps like this playes extremely bad on such low AR, you should change this pattern. 126bpm ar8 isn't low, baka
00:41:653 (3) - Touch HP bar, move it down a bit k
01:45:819 (10) - delete this note, it doesnt fit here imo why doesn't fit! it's just like triple stream people add in 1/2s
02:06:415 (5) - nc due to jump ? it's all jump, do you mean (6)..

Diff is nice itself, but imo overjumped - too many & too huge jumps for a such quiet song. 233

Kodora wrote:

[General]

Normal & 233's diff have different combo colours, you should fix them.
change "Sweel Vanilla" in tags to "Sweet_Vanilla" since this tag doesnt work as it should work w/o "_"
why,if i add "_" nothing can be found when searching

[Hard]

00:34:986 (1) - how about make a little kiai fountain here? I think it's unnecessary
00:41:891 (2) - try to add note at 00:41:891 and begin slider at 00:42:129 - it will cover more drum rhytm what more understandable here OK
00:50:224 - add note, you missing strong beat here no,a feeling of stopping
00:50:700 (2) - add finish to the beginning of slider instead of whistle I think finish here is strange
00:53:081 (2) - dont really get your rhytm here. if you want focusing on lyrics here - try this, imo it fits much more better:

SPOILER

I think this rhythm is good

00:57:605 (4) - are you focusing on drums here? if yes, try this rhytm:

SPOILER

I try another rhythm

01:05:938 (1) - remove new combo, its unnesessary here stress finish
01:09:272 (6,7) - Replace (6) & (7) on timeline here, jumps like this plaeys really bad on such low AR vocal from big to small
01:10:462 (3) - for better playability & rhytm remove this note and make 01:10:224 (2) - ends at 01:10:462 (3) -
I think it's not very hard to play..
01:21:176 (3) - clap to the end of slider it sounds strange
01:25:462 (2) - remove clap, it sounds bad
01:26:891 (1) - ^
why,whihout clap it sounds strange..
01:39:748 (1,2,3,4) - for this and all similiar parts: this triple (01:39:748 (1,2,3)) really fits here too bad. 233's diff keep woth much better rhytm, so i suggest you did as he made on his diff - replace first two notes with short slider OK
01:40:938 (5) - whistle instead of clap fits better why whistle,clap is great
01:43:081 (3) - clap to the beginning of slider it sounds strange
01:48:796 (3,4) - disable grind snap & stack them perfectly fixed
01:52:605 (3) - clap to the beginning, end & reverse? add clap in reverse
01:54:986 (7,8,9,1) - same rhytm as at 01:39:748 (1,2,3,4) change a bit
02:07:367 (3,4) - why claps here? x_x sounds great!
imo needs more work on rhytm. and i dont really get your logic at hitsounds here: if you begin set claps follow vocals/drums then you should keep them for a whole part, if not, replace them with whistles & dont set claps for vocal. hitsounds look broken orz.
I think hitsound is logical when it sounds great.rhythm too,when I feel it's better to follow vocal ,I will follow vocal,otherwise i will follow drums

[Easy]

HP Drain +1 WHY..
why easiest diff keep with more huge spacing then Normal? I think it's no problem..
silence all ticks here?

00:16:415 (1) - hitfinish to the beginning of slider instead of whistle? it's a bit noisy
00:49:748 (1) - cancel new combo stress finish
01:31:653 (4,1,2) - spacing fixed
01:39:748 - add note/slider? feels too empty imo OK
01:54:986 (5) - nc begins here, not at 01:55:462 (1) - follow lyrics OK

Good luck.

baldrace wrote:

why,if i add "_" nothing can be found when searching

Tsumetaku wrote:

NaN
(老實說01:36:415 (8) - 的那個SB圈圈在AR3 DIFF讓我以為他是Hitcircle...)
Easy
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
00:37:367 (4) - 音好像沒在藍線上... 也不是說不好 只是怪怪的ww *(後面的vocal段放藍線就不錯 这我感觉不错
00:45:938 (3) - ^ & 換邊?

SPOILER

00:56:415 (3) - 醬子

SPOILER

02:05:938 (4) - ctrl+H.J 然後醬子

SPOILER

都改了
okˊˇˋ

Hard
=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=
00:37:367 (8) - 第一個tick往左x1格
01:16:415 (3) - 減F
01:19:034 (5) - 醬子

SPOILER

01:35:938 (7) - +clap
01:46:891 (4) - 醬子? blanket

SPOILER

除了这个不好看都改了。。
01:51:653 (1) - x468 y312 順便讓01:52:129 (2) blanket 01:50:462 (2)~~



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