hello, as promised
[General]
Normal & 233's diff have different combo colours, you should fix them.
change "Sweel Vanilla" in tags to "Sweet_Vanilla" since this tag doesnt work as it should work w/o "_"
[233]
HP Drain +1 for better balance between diffs?
Why you dont silence soft-sliderside here? Imo it sounds pretty bad on such quiet song.
00:19:748 (5,6,1) - disable drind snap & stack them perfectly
00:24:510 (4) - Touch HP bar, move it down a bit
00:34:986 (1) - how about make a little kiai fountain here?
01:04:748 (4,5) - Spacing. Jumps like this playes extremely bad on such low AR, you should change this pattern.
00:41:653 (3) - Touch HP bar, move it down a bit
01:45:819 (10) - delete this note, it doesnt fit here imo
02:06:415 (5) - nc due to jump
Diff is nice itself, but imo overjumped - too many & too huge jumps for a such quiet song.
[Hard]
00:34:986 (1) - how about make a little kiai fountain here?
00:41:891 (2) - try to add note at 00:41:891 and begin slider at 00:42:129 - it will cover more drum rhytm what more understandable here
00:50:224 - add note, you missing strong beat here
00:50:700 (2) - add finish to the beginning of slider instead of whistle
00:53:081 (2) - dont really get your rhytm here. if you want focusing on lyrics here - try this, imo it fits much more better:
00:57:605 (4) - are you focusing on drums here? if yes, try this rhytm:
01:05:938 (1) - remove new combo, its unnesessary here
01:09:272 (6,7) - Replace (6) & (7) on timeline here, jumps like this plaeys really bad on such low AR
01:10:462 (3) - for better playability & rhytm remove this note and make 01:10:224 (2) - ends at 01:10:462 (3) -
01:21:176 (3) - clap to the end of slider
01:25:462 (2) - remove clap, it sounds bad
01:26:891 (1) - ^
01:39:748 (1,2,3,4) - for this and all similiar parts: this triple (01:39:748 (1,2,3)) really fits here too bad. 233's diff keep woth much better rhytm, so i suggest you did as he made on his diff - replace first two notes with short slider
01:40:938 (5) - whistle instead of clap fits better
01:43:081 (3) - clap to the beginning of slider
01:48:796 (3,4) - disable grind snap & stack them perfectly
01:52:605 (3) - clap to the beginning, end & reverse?
01:54:986 (7,8,9,1) - same rhytm as at 01:39:748 (1,2,3,4)
02:07:367 (3,4) - why claps here? x_x
imo needs more work on rhytm. and i dont really get your logic at hitsounds here: if you begin set claps follow vocals/drums then you should keep them for a whole part, if not, replace them with whistles & dont set claps for vocal. hitsounds look broken orz.
[Sweet Vanilla's Normal]
Ugly huge circles & suddenly AR 5? Diff looks unbalanced, change CS to 4 and AR to 4 for better balance between diffs.
Silencing both sliderticks & sliderside at the same time is unrankable, make ticks audible & use 5% volume sectios for every tick here.
Tickrate 1 fits better for this diff.
00:16:415 (1) - hitfinish to the beginning of slider instead of whistle?
00:48:081 (1) - this spinner should starts at 00:48:319 -
01:03:557 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:367 (3) - new combo?
[Easy]
HP Drain +1
why easiest diff keep with more huge spacing then Normal?
silence all ticks here?
00:16:415 (1) - hitfinish to the beginning of slider instead of whistle?
00:49:748 (1) - cancel new combo
01:31:653 (4,1,2) - spacing
01:39:748 - add note/slider? feels too empty imo
01:54:986 (5) - nc begins here, not at 01:55:462 (1) - follow lyrics
Good luck.
