Hi! Mod4mod
General:Maybe you could add the album name (The 2nd Law) to the tags, so that it won't stay empty, and don't forget to add D33d because of his guest difficulty!
Check AiMod on each difficulty, because it says unsnapped Kiais and objects. but it might be bugged, so I'm not sure...>.<Calm:00:11:106 (3,4) - the distance is too big, it should be the same on an easy diff, you could just move 00:09:963 (1,2,3) - all of these a bit to the right, so they will be closer
00:12:249 (4,1) - again, these are too far, but because of the music it does fit and I think it's not really confusing, but it still should be at least 0.1 closer than it is right now
00:23:678 (1) - it would fit better to the music if this slider was 1/1, both because of the big beat and because of the lyrics, make the slider shorter and add one more repeat or make it shorter and add a hit circle
00:28:249 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider? so that you can emphasize his singing better
00:36:249 (3,1) - these are a bit too far
00:36:820 - add hit circle? he sings there and also beat in the music
01:00:249 (4,1) - 1.4 that is really too far, I'm sure you can figure out something to keep symmetry and distance (it's not that hard, since there was a break before), just example (and still not perfect):
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670853http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/67085501:09:392 (3,1) - again too far, you could just put the slider end closer to the y axis, or rotate it a bit
01:12:820 (3,1) - why not stack the two end of the sliders?
it might not be perfect, but looks better -->
http://puu.sh/2nneCSPOILER01:24:249 (3,1) - already mentioned it before, they are too far
01:24:820 - add hit circle?
01:49:392 (6,1) - too far, maybe you could place these 01:48:820 (5,6) - differently, so that the distance will be fine and pattern wil not change much
SPOILER02:21:392 (3,1) - already mentioned it before, they are too far
02:40:820 (1,2,3,4) - these are a bit too close, why not try this? -
http://puu.sh/2nnzn - and changing these 02:43:106 (1,2) - two of course, there is a spinner afterwards, so it shouldn't be too much trouble
02:54:820 (4) - this is a bit too close, it is not THAT close, but you could make it better, so maybe try this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670883http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670885It is still symmetric, it's not so much different from yours, but distance is better
Stress:00:11:678 (4,4,4) - I wonder why these end on a blue tick, it's a bit weird imo and also a bit confusing because of the upcoming hit circles, so try to end them either on the white or red tick, and he starts singing on the white tick anyway
00:30:249 (2) - it would fit better if this was placed here 00:29:963 (2) - because of the beat and here 00:30:249 - he is still NOT singing
make it a nicer blanket -
http://puu.sh/2no6u and after that look out for the distance here - 00:35:963 (2,3,4) - you can change them without touching (5)
00:38:820 (2) - remove hit circle, I think it's unnecessary, I cannot really hear anything in the music which would make me put anything at that point
00:39:392 (3) - same as I mentioned before, put it on the white tick
00:59:678 (4) - make it longer? (like I already mentioned)
01:04:250 (4) - ^
01:05:963 (4) - remove, and add only a hit circle, and after that add a wave shaped slider? it would fit better imo, and those repeats are kind of unnecessary, OR remove (4) and only add a slider like this -
http://puu.sh/2nokB - but it's just an alternative and it would ruin your symmetry a bit >.<
01:10:535 (4) - maybe you could make this a better blanket for (1)?
01:17:678 (2,3) - already mentioned these
01:22:535 (4,1) - ^ - make it a better blanket
01:26:820 (2) - this one is okay because I can actually here him singing "uuuuuuuuuuuuh"
01:27:392 (3) - put on white tick?
02:00:820 - why didn't you put anything here? to bring variety? it's not that necessary to add anything but it would make it more consistant
02:03:106 - ^
02:45:678 (2) - try to put this somewhere else, it is kind of ugly because of the overlap -
http://puu.sh/2noFs - something like this could work too -
http://puu.sh/2noGjiNiD33d:00:12:106 (5) - this plays weird, I think you should put it on the white tick, it feels better because of the lyrics (or at least stack it with the slider end, so that it won't be so confusing)
00:20:820 (4) - this should last until the white tick because of the lyrics
00:25:392 (4) - ^
00:27:392 - add a hit circle, it would fit so well to that "uhhh" sound >.< (and make it a soft sound)
00:34:678 (2) - stack it with the slider end? or put it closer
01:01:535 (11,12) - a slider would fit better here because of "sooooo" (or whatever he sings) -
http://puu.sh/2np5D01:08:820 (4) - mentioned already, it should last until the white tick
01:13:392 (4) - place this a little bit earlier (to the blue tick) and leave the end like that (so it will end on the red one) it will fit more to the lyrics! and add hit circle because he sings there - 01:13:963
I would prefer if these were placed closer to the previous sliders:
01:50:535 (1) -
01:57:249 (8) -
01:59:535 (7) -
Panic:Well in general it was a bit disturbing that the sound was always(?) normal and very loud, so at least turn down the volume a bit? or you can might as well use some soft hitsounds if you want.
00:21:249 (7) - why not put this on the white tick which is right after the blue?
would fit better to lyrics and sounds better, OR actually add a hit circle on the white tick 00:21:392 (8) - it doesn't sound bad!
00:24:535 (3,4) - this might sound nazi, but you could put (3) a bit to the right? even if you don't make a blanket, so that it will look better -
http://puu.sh/2nXof (and you could also make slider a bit nicer, if you removed it and remade it with only 3 points, it would be nicer and easier
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01:03:678 (4,5) - this is not that appealing, you could try to make (4) a blanket for (5), or place it in another way, or rotate (4) a bit..etc.? or maybe put (5) down? like this (just an example) -
http://puu.sh/2nXG001:16:535 (2) - flip this horizontally and place it back to it's original place for better flow -
http://puu.sh/2nXIV01:20:249 - add hit circle
01:20:392 (8) - remove this slider and add hit circle here 01:20:678 (8) - it would sound a lot better, and that repeat slider feels unnecessary
01:26:963 (1,2) - I would rather make a slider here instead of two hit circles, since he sings "uuuuuuh" and it feels long
01:51:392 (5) - add hit circle? or something...it feels empty
01:54:106 (3) - add hit circle maybe? there is clearly a beat there
01:58:106 (4) - put this a little bit later, on the red tick? it would be consistent with 01:55:106 (2,3) - and it would sound better imo
02:13:678 (2) - same as suggested before, flip and replace to it's original place for better flow
02:17:106 (6,7) - already mentioned too, since it's basically the same patterns as before, try to do the same that I already mentioned
02:19:820 (8) - this sounds really weird, maybe you could try this? -
http://puu.sh/2nY7n (remove repeat from the slider, put it earlier then add hit circle on blue tick) he sings "and it's" (or something like that, I'm not sure, so that's why the slider without repeat would fit better, of course while placing it earlier)
02:24:106 (1,2) - mentioned too, slider instead of hit circles
02:28:963 (1) - this feels weird (and might as well play weird), I would put this on the white tick and 02:29:106 (2) - on the red tick
02:38:820 (2) - oh btw, it might be just my screen, but it looked as if this slider went out of the osu screen (but it really might have been only on my screen) and sorry, I might not have managed to take a good picture of it, but here -
http://puu.sh/2nZ85 - and putting it a bit to the right wouldn't hurt anyway
just to make sure it's not something unrankable
02:47:249 (9) - put this earlier? on the white tick
02:47:678 - add hit circle with a finish sound to emphasize the sound better, and put the spinner a little bit later
Done finally! Uff well sorry, I think you'll reject most of the things, the map was okay, but tbh it was a bit weird to play sometimes, but it's just my opinion ;D Good Luck!