1. Collab (4.92 stars, 483 notes)
2. Hard (4.5 stars, 331 notes)
3. Normal (2.86 stars, 217 notes)

Ayu wrote:

Reiji-RJ YOU ARE MY HERO

1. The files sb\nemis.png and sb\reiji-rj.png seems to be unused, remove them.
2. Make the kiai consistent between the difficulties, it would be nicer.

1. This difficulty is good, the only thing is that you spammed 1/2 all the way, it's kinda boring to play.

1. 00:34:700 (5) - New combo due to the pattern change, to make it easier to read for players.
2. 00:37:405 (1) - Why did you end this slider on blue tick? It sounds really bad, end it on red instead.
3. 01:01:011 (1) - Same as above, please consider changing this.
4. 01:42:323 (1) - Once again, this slider plays really bad if you end it on the blue tick.
5. 02:05:929 (1) - Same as above, please consider changing this.
6. 02:29:536 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try moving it down a bit possible.
7. 02:37:405 (1) - Same stuff once again about the blue tick.
8. 03:01:011 (1) - Guess what? Yeah, you know.
9. 03:07:896 (1,1,1,1,1) - This new combo spam doesn't make sense at all, please remove it.

1. 00:34:454 (3,4) - This pattern is pretty tricky and hidden imo, try making it a bit more visible.
2. 02:36:667 (1) - I'd prefer if you silence the slidertick here, it sounds loud and annoying on such a calm part of the song.
3. 02:53:388 - It feels like you're missing a note here, add it maybe? Your choice though.
4. 03:08:880 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's useless.

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hey~ I can make Easy? e.e

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304,152,40355,2,0,P|336:188|432:180,1,143.999995605469,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,40847,2,0,P|406:103|378:63,1,95.9999970703126
352,52,41216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,36,41339,6,0,L|172:52,1,143.999995605469,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:

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1. 00:42:814 (3,4) - Boh, sposta il (3) più in giù e fixa lo slider in modo che escano meglio esteticamente tipo questo q.q
2. 02:03:962 (4) - NC maybe?

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  As others said, you could have the same break as other diffs

1. 00:33:716 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ugh, kinda bad. Consider doing something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/770524
2. 01:39:372 (3,4) - x:16 y:144 fits better imo

1. 00:30:519 (3) - Do like this (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/770531), it plays much better! :3
2. 01:01:011 (1) - Flip slider? For example moving anchor point to x:200 y:324 or something like that
3. 01:24:618 (5) - Stack on 01:23:634 (3) - beginning?

1. Try to keep kiais consistent between diffs. It feels quite wierd that kiais on [Collab] are a bit different
2. Enable letterboxes during breaks. No need to keep them disabled here!
3. Only one break for 3 minutes long song? Are you sure? Try to add one more at least on [Normal]!
4. Consider using Slider Tick Rate 2 because it fits with music better, imo.

1. Well, sinceyou're using 1/1 patterns only, try to reduce HP Drain and OD by 1 tick. It will keep mapset more balanced.
   Note: in fact, I'd recommend to use AR5 and HP/OD: 4 here because song is quite energetic.
2. 01:09:372 (1,2) - let's try to emphasize drums here by re-arranging your pattern a bit. It will look like cirle and 1/2 slider with repeat. examle
3. 01:22:159 (6) - nazi - you can make this slider kinda symmerical with (5) by making cute blanket slider. uguuuu
4. 02:30:028 (1) - isn't it too soon after spinner for the easiest diff? Beginners will be confused.
   Note: this is the easiest diff, so it should be passable for beginners
5. 02:35:437 - you need a circles here to follow vocals ('but') and to make previous combo a bit longer. (02:33:962 (1) - ) one object long combo may confuse players a bit :<
6. 02:36:913 (3) - try to replace this slider with two circles? Or at least remove that drum finish from this slider because it sounds too awkward here.

1. 00:35:191 (6) - I guess you'd better place a new combo here to make comboing consistent. What's more it will help us to read this stacked pattern.
2. 00:37:405 (1) - You don't use 3/4 patterns a lot, do you? Well, this slider feels quite awkward here, how about making 1/4 shorter? At least try to silince it's tail because loud normal hitsound is too loud there :<
   Note: 01:01:011 (1) -01:42:323 (1) - 02:05:929 (1,2) 02:37:896 (2) - same happens here. Now I'm pretty sure that you need to reduce volume on slider's tail.
3. 00:51:175 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - nazi - how about unstacking them a bit, to make thm look better? I'm pretty sure that something like this will make your patterns even more awesome.
   Note: 01:56:093 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:51:175 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same happens here. Apply this suggestion for all similar patterns or ignore it.
4. 02:29:536 (1) - try to avoid overlaps with skin elements. THis overlap with HP-Bar looks messy and kinda ruins this amazing diff. The whole diff has awesome flow wih cute patterns, dn't ruin it with one silly overlap :< overlap.jpg
5. 03:07:896 (1,1,1,1,1) - for some reason this NC Spam annoys me so much. Well.. you have no actual reason to place so many NCs here :< can you remove it?

1. 00:21:421 (4,5,1) - nazi - almost every following 1/4 triplet is stacked, consider stacking these notes, too. You know, it's better to keep patterns consistent :<
2. 00:25:847 (1,2) - I can't say that this jump flows god here. It's kinda unexpected for a calm part of the map. At least try to rreduce DS here a bit :< That jump would PERFECTLY fit during kiai, but not here :<
   Note: same 00:28:552 (3) - here and so on. I wion't even point out every pattern like this. If you'll want to fix it - you can do it yourself.
3. 02:06:421 (2,3,4) - nazi - this kind of stacks is kinda unusual for this diff. Stack them with 2's tail or unstac 'em all! It will make pattern easier-readable.

Nemis wrote:

Updated, added roxas's sb