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Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)

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AsprikaQ
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AsprikaQ
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 พฤษภาคม 2557 at 17:44:58

Artist: Fujiwara Marina
Title: Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)
Source: Yumekui Merry
Tags: Dream Eater IOSYS void OP opening
BPM: 206
Filesize: 8973kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.9 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 241 notes)
  3. Insane (4.9 stars, 332 notes)
  4. Normal (4.2 stars, 126 notes)
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)
Download: Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Oh well feel free to read, Don't ban me for this, this doesn't meant to offense anyone
I don't know what to say at this point. I try to quit many times, however, something always bring me back. Sometimes, I just run Osu! just to listen to music, then when I recall myself I end up playing this game for 1-2 hours already. This is like drugs.
Okay so let's us begin!
MP3 and Video took from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24595. Since he quited, I don't know how to contact him to ask for permission and I, personally, think it's okay since I didn't copy any other things from him (well, except the offset).
Ready 4 MOD!
-18/10/2013 : Biggest changes after 5 months!
- ___/4/2014 : Revive and rework on most stuff
- 22/4/2014 : Edit video to fit into ranking criteria
This BG is better really..
Hehehee
http://konachan.com/post/show/161524/dennryuurai-merry_nightmare-nipple_slip-panties-po
Last edited by AsprikaQ , edited 48 times in total.
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
Hi ! from #modreqs

General
ahh nice bg

Easy
ar+1? because the bpm is high
I think the siliders speed is a bit high/hard for the easiest diff.
00:04:242 - u can add note here and make it like
img
00:21:135 (5,1) - try this pattern for make (5) blanket (1) also
img
00:23:465 (1) - ctrl+j , ctrl+g ? for blanket 00:25:796 (2)
img
00:39:631 (1) - fix the distance please. newbie absolutely miss here for sure
00:41:961 (1,2) - try this pattern. looks better for me
img
00:48:951 - try this
00:55:504 (4) - delete note
01:07:155 - well.. when u end at white tick, its bad to start from red tick because its confuse. (end at red tick and start at white tick also)
like this

Normal
ar+1 same as easy
00:08:029 - maybe add note here
00:10:359 - try
00:14:582 - add slide here end at 00:14:728 instead
00:32:786 (5) - ctrl+j
00:41:961 (4) - make this tail stack with 00:40:796 (1) perfectly
00:47:640 (4) - a bit overlap. its better to avoid that

Hard
00:15:164 - maybe add note here and start spinner at 00:15:237 sound better for me
00:52:009 (3,4) - I think this jump is a bit far for hard
01:25:213 (1) - move tail to 348|208 looks better. imo

Insane
well, I dont know is it overmap. so wait for another modder about this
00:18:077 - delete note
01:17:931 (3,4) - just make it opposite site as before is good
img

bye go to sleep
3 a.m. when I mod here
Good Luck ปาปริก้า
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

P A N wrote:

Hi ! from #modreqs

General
ahh nice bg

Easy
ar+1? because the bpm is high
I think the siliders speed is a bit high/hard for the easiest diff.
00:04:242 - u can add note here and make it like
img
00:21:135 (5,1) - try this pattern for make (5) blanket (1) also
img
00:23:465 (1) - ctrl+j , ctrl+g ? for blanket 00:25:796 (2)
img
00:39:631 (1) - fix the distance please. newbie absolutely miss here for sure
00:41:961 (1,2) - try this pattern. looks better for me
img
00:48:951 - try this
00:55:504 (4) - delete note
01:07:155 - well.. when u end at white tick, its bad to start from red tick because its confuse. (end at red tick and start at white tick also)
like this

Normal
ar+1 same as easy
00:08:029 - maybe add note here
00:10:359 - try
00:14:582 - add slide here end at 00:14:728 instead
00:32:786 (5) - ctrl+j
00:41:961 (4) - make this tail stack with 00:40:796 (1) perfectly
00:47:640 (4) - a bit overlap. its better to avoid that

Hard
00:15:164 - maybe add note here and start spinner at 00:15:237 sound better for me
00:52:009 (3,4) - I think this jump is a bit far for hard
01:25:213 (1) - move tail to 348|208 looks better. imo

Insane
well, I dont know is it overmap. so wait for another modder about this
00:18:077 - delete note
01:17:931 (3,4) - just make it opposite site as before is good
img

bye go to sleep
3 a.m. when I mod here
Good Luck ปาปริก้า
Thx for Mod. However, I don't see the point why you used English for modding me even though your mother tongue is available :shock:
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
เพราะเวลากด timing ข้างหน้าเส็ดเเล้วต้องเสียเวลาเปลี่ยนภาษาอีกเเล้วผมต้องกด 2 ทีเพราะมียุ่นด้วย บางทีเลยทำให้เปลี่ยนเป็นไทยวืด เเล้วก็ต้องลบที่พิม เเล้วกว่าจัเปลี่ยนกลับเป็น Eng อีก lol ดูความเสียเวลา เเละเเน่นอนว่ามันเร็วกว่า เเล้วดูเท่กว่า 555
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

P A N wrote:

เพราะเวลากด timing ข้างหน้าเส็ดเเล้วต้องเสียเวลาเปลี่ยนภาษาอีกเเล้วผมต้องกด 2 ทีเพราะมียุ่นด้วย บางทีเลยทำให้เปลี่ยนเป็นไทยวืด เเล้วก็ต้องลบที่พิม เเล้วกว่าจัเปลี่ยนกลับเป็น Eng อีก lol ดูความเสียเวลา เเละเเน่นอนว่ามันเร็วกว่า เเล้วดูเท่กว่า 555
เกรียน 555
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Hi~ M4M from my queue
Sorry I'm late :? Busy with school ><

Easy
SV is kinda high for easy ><
Puush is acting stupid so I cant send pics ><
All suggestions :3
00:05:990 add note
00:13:563 (2) - Curve the end a little more to make it prettier :3
00:18:514 (4) - add note
00:50:407 (3) - Unstack it
00:53:757 (1,2) - Make the blanket prettier :3
01:26:669 add note

Normal
00:09:194 add note
00:11:524 ^
00:13:854 ^

Insane
Couldn't find something usefull to suggest in hard so I'm trying this one :3
00:08:902 (3) - It's off 1 grid =w=
00:15:164 (4) - ^
00:24:194 (4,1) - Make the blanket more prettier ^^
00:41:232 (5) - Move the end a little up
01:01:038 (2) - Off 1 grid =w=

That's all srry for the bad mod >< new/noob modder here =w= and the bpm was kinda high too ><
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

xChippy wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my queue
Sorry I'm late :? Busy with school ><

Easy
SV is kinda high for easy >< It's fine :)
Puush is acting stupid so I cant send pics ><
All suggestions :3
00:05:990 add note OK
00:13:563 (2) - Curve the end a little more to make it prettier :3 It's fine :)
00:18:514 (4) - add note OK
00:50:407 (3) - Unstack it OK
00:53:757 (1,2) - Make the blanket prettier :3 It's fine :)
01:26:669 add note OK

Normal
00:09:194 add note
00:11:524 ^
00:13:854 ^

Nothing fixed for Normal. Sorry :(

Insane
Couldn't find something usefull to suggest in hard so I'm trying this one :3
00:08:902 (3) - It's off 1 grid =w= OK
00:15:164 (4) - ^ OK
00:24:194 (4,1) - Make the blanket more prettier ^^ OK
00:41:232 (5) - Move the end a little up OK
01:01:038 (2) - Off 1 grid =w= OK

That's all srry for the bad mod >< new/noob modder here =w= and the bpm was kinda high too ><
Ty for modding. It's not bad at all all confidence! :)
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Airtist: "藤原鞠菜"
[Easy]
  1. For Easy-diff, SV is too fast. 0.8~0.9 suits, imo
  2. For Easy-diff, it is better to refrain from changing SV
  3. 00:17:058 (2,3) - how about changing for 1 slider?
  4. 00:38:465 (2) - end at 00:39:194
  5. 01:14:728 (1) - it is better to divide into 2 sliders
  6. 01:17:058 (3) - ^
  7. 01:28:271 (4) - I prefer slider: 01:28:126~01:28:271
[Normal]
  1. For Normal-diff, SV is too fast. 1.0~1.1 is better, imo
  2. 00:08:029 (3,2) - how about stack on the slider-start?
  3. 00:11:524- add a note
  4. 00:14:145 (6) - NC
  5. 00:23:465 (1) - it is better to divide into 2 sliders
  6. 00:47:786 (5) - end at 00:48:514
  7. 00:55:941 (1) - end at 00:56:378
  8. 01:03:951 (5) - I prefer to end at 01:04:097
[Hard]
  1. 01:15:893 (1,2,3) - blanket correctly
    SPOILER

    255,199,75893,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    255,199,76038,2,0,P|222:128|255:58,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,128,76475,2,0,L|128:128,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:902 (3) - move to x;419 y:246
  2. 00:33:660 (1) - remove NC?
  3. 00:56:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular pentagon?
    SPOILER

    248,208,56378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    250,112,56524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    342,86,56669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    395,164,56815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,240,56961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:16:475 (3,4,5,6) - regular triangle is better, imo
    SPOILER

    215,190,76475,1,0,0:3:0:0:
    343,247,76621,1,0,0:3:0:0:
    332,108,76766,1,0,0:3:0:0:
    214,190,76912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
resume mapping? WTG!
~Good Luck~
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Airtist: "藤原鞠菜"
[Easy]
  1. For Easy-diff, SV is too fast. 0.8~0.9 suits, imo
  2. For Easy-diff, it is better to refrain from changing SV
  3. 00:17:058 (2,3) - how about changing for 1 slider?
  4. 00:38:465 (2) - end at 00:39:194
  5. 01:14:728 (1) - it is better to divide into 2 sliders
  6. 01:17:058 (3) - ^
  7. 01:28:271 (4) - I prefer slider: 01:28:126~01:28:271
[Normal]
  1. For Normal-diff, SV is too fast. 1.0~1.1 is better, imo
  2. 00:08:029 (3,2) - how about stack on the slider-start?
  3. 00:11:524- add a note
  4. 00:14:145 (6) - NC
  5. 00:23:465 (1) - it is better to divide into 2 sliders
  6. 00:47:786 (5) - end at 00:48:514
  7. 00:55:941 (1) - end at 00:56:378
  8. 01:03:951 (5) - I prefer to end at 01:04:097
[Hard]
  1. 01:15:893 (1,2,3) - blanket correctly
    SPOILER

    255,199,75893,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    255,199,76038,2,0,P|222:128|255:58,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,128,76475,2,0,L|128:128,2,160,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Insane]
  1. 00:08:902 (3) - move to x;419 y:246
  2. 00:33:660 (1) - remove NC?
  3. 00:56:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about regular pentagon?
    SPOILER

    248,208,56378,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    250,112,56524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    342,86,56669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    395,164,56815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,240,56961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:16:475 (3,4,5,6) - regular triangle is better, imo
    SPOILER

    215,190,76475,1,0,0:3:0:0:
    343,247,76621,1,0,0:3:0:0:
    332,108,76766,1,0,0:3:0:0:
    214,190,76912,1,2,0:0:0:0:
resume mapping? WTG! Not really haha, just try to finish what I've done
~Good Luck~
Thx for modding. So much helpful!! :) :)

Arigatou !
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
ไหนว่าเลิกเล่นละงัย
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

regenz wrote:

ไหนว่าเลิกเล่นละงัย
เล่นกับทำแมพไม่เหมือนกันนิ 555
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic


thanks mod! your mod check. so. here is my mod~

[Easy]

00:08:029 - add note?
00:09:194 - ^
00:10:359 - ^
00:11:524 - ^
00:21:135 (5) - NC Here please and 00:23:465 (1) - delete NC
00:25:796 (2) - And here in New combo of the above when modified
01:20:262 (3) - NC
01:26:378 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:09:194 - add clap
00:09:485 (5) - NC
00:10:359 (7,8) - Awkward rhythm. how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1519646
00:50:116 (4) - NC
00:52:009 (7) - ^
01:21:718 (4) - ^

[Hard]

00:51:718 (2) - very high jump;; Fixed please
00:52:300 (4) - ^

[Insane]

gratz!

that all good luck~
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

HabiHolic wrote:



thanks mod! your mod check. so. here is my mod~

[Easy]

00:08:029 - add note?
00:09:194 - ^
00:10:359 - ^
00:11:524 - ^
00:21:135 (5) - NC Here please and 00:23:465 (1) - delete NC
00:25:796 (2) - And here in New combo of the above when modified
01:20:262 (3) - NC
01:26:378 (4) - ^

[Normal]

00:09:194 - add clap
00:09:485 (5) - NC
00:10:359 (7,8) - Awkward rhythm. how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1519646
00:50:116 (4) - NC
00:52:009 (7) - ^
01:21:718 (4) - ^

[Hard]

00:51:718 (2) - very high jump;; Fixed please
00:52:300 (4) - ^

[Insane]

gratz!

that all good luck~
Thank you every much!! ALL FIXED :) :) :)
hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
hi my friend :D

[Insane]
DR+1?
00:57:106 (1,2) - like this? it's more fun to play!
　00:57:106 - add finish and delete end's finish
00:58:271 (1,2,3) - ^ plz see Img
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1520539[/img]
00:58:999 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
01:07:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:611 (6,1) - ^

All hitsound like 00:55:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

[Hard]
AR OD DR +1?

[Normal]
01:12:689 - 01:14:728 - it's more fit than spinner

01:19:388 - like this?
01:19:388 (1,2) -
01:21:135 (3,1) -
01:22:592 (2,3) -

and I think 01:24:048 - 01:28:271 - this part can change to spinner

That's all :) plz call me if you can't understand about Pics

gl!!
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

hopperhtkn wrote:

hi my friend :D

[Insane]
DR+1?
00:57:106 (1,2) - like this? it's more fun to play!
　00:57:106 - add finish and delete end's finish
00:58:271 (1,2,3) - ^ plz see Img
[img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1520539[/img]
00:58:999 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
01:07:592 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:08:611 (6,1) - ^

All hitsound like 00:55:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

[Hard]
AR OD DR +1?

[Normal]
01:12:689 - 01:14:728 - it's more fit than spinner

01:19:388 - like this?
01:19:388 (1,2) -
01:21:135 (3,1) -
01:22:592 (2,3) -

and I think 01:24:048 - 01:28:271 - this part can change to spinner

That's all :) plz call me if you can't understand about Pics

gl!!
Thank bro :) :) So much help for Normal's mod
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
m4m here

i agree with u osu is like drugs man lmfao

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:495 - honestly playing that with a spinner end?? i would absolutely NOT recommend that. shorten the spinner to 00:02:203 - and add note here
  2. 00:02:931 (3,4) - u know just a thought, an antijump would actualy be VERY good here. and same applies to similar places
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:825 (1,2,3) - this is not a good stack let me explain, stacking and antijumps can be used to emphasize certain notes, however here, 00:04:825 (1,2) - these 2 sounds are stacked, however 00:05:116 (3) - these 2 sounds are not stacked, the difference makes it feel awkward.
  4. 00:09:412 (5) - this is a bit overmapped
  5. 00:12:834 (1,2) - these patterns are not recommended as they are hard to read
  6. 00:58:271 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:17:640 (1,2) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm
  8. 00:19:533 (3,4) - ^same
  9. 00:28:271 (2) - i don't recommend a passive slider here (strong sound on the end) doesnt sound/feel right. Perhaps you can ctrl g 00:28:126 (1,2) - and use that rhythm
  10. 00:30:747 - don't put strong sounds on slider reverses..
  11. 00:44:145 (7,8,9,10,1) - stream doesn't really fit music
  12. 00:47:786 (6) - ctrl g for better flow!
  13. placement is good, check your rhythm though >_<
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:495 - same as in insane
  2. 00:05:844 (5) - stack (5) on (4) instead
  3. 00:13:271 (2) - curve other way looks nicer
    SPOILER
  4. 00:22:883 (3,4) - make rhythm more consistent with your other parts, move this 1/2 back
  5. 00:39:631 (1,2) - how does this look :o?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:47:786 (4) - ctrl g? better flow
  7. 01:00:310 (6,7,8,9,1) - i wouldnt put a stream in hard
  8. 01:00:601 (1,4) - bad overlap
  9. 01:08:757 (3,6) - ^
  10. 00:55:941 (1,3) - bad overlap i suggest stacking
  11. 01:02:786 (8,9,10) - don't really feel triplet is appropriate
  12. 01:18:368 (7,1) - space out
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:815 (1,2) - blanket?
  2. 00:14:291 (5,6,7) - how bout this dw about it going off screen it'll be fixed in gameplay
    SPOILER
  3. 00:23:465 (1) - reversing more than once confusing to read for normal
  4. 00:50:116 (1,3) - copy one of these sliders for the other one?
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i feel like too many circles for easy, put some sliders man
  2. 00:23:465 (3) - same as in normal
  3. 00:35:116 (1,1) - bad overlap, also fix all those sliders repeating more than once >_<
    00:40:359 (2,1) - overlap.
  4. 00:49:679 (2,4) - ^
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m here

i agree with u osu is like drugs man lmfao LMAO :o

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:495 - honestly playing that with a spinner end?? i would absolutely NOT recommend that. shorten the spinner to 00:02:203 - and add note here
  2. 00:02:931 (3,4) - u know just a thought, an antijump would actualy be VERY good here. and same applies to similar places
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:825 (1,2,3) - this is not a good stack let me explain, stacking and antijumps can be used to emphasize certain notes, however here, 00:04:825 (1,2) - these 2 sounds are stacked, however 00:05:116 (3) - these 2 sounds are not stacked, the difference makes it feel awkward.
  4. 00:09:412 (5) - this is a bit overmapped
  5. 00:12:834 (1,2) - these patterns are not recommended as they are hard to read
  6. 00:58:271 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:17:640 (1,2) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm
  8. 00:19:533 (3,4) - ^same
  9. 00:28:271 (2) - i don't recommend a passive slider here (strong sound on the end) doesnt sound/feel right. Perhaps you can ctrl g 00:28:126 (1,2) - and use that rhythm
  10. 00:30:747 - don't put strong sounds on slider reverses..
  11. 00:44:145 (7,8,9,10,1) - stream doesn't really fit music
  12. 00:47:786 (6) - ctrl g for better flow!
  13. placement is good, check your rhythm though >_<
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:495 - same as in insane
  2. 00:05:844 (5) - stack (5) on (4) instead
  3. 00:13:271 (2) - curve other way looks nicer
    SPOILER
  4. 00:22:883 (3,4) - make rhythm more consistent with your other parts, move this 1/2 back
  5. 00:39:631 (1,2) - how does this look :o?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:47:786 (4) - ctrl g? better flow
  7. 01:00:310 (6,7,8,9,1) - i wouldnt put a stream in hard
  8. 01:00:601 (1,4) - bad overlap
  9. 01:08:757 (3,6) - ^
  10. 00:55:941 (1,3) - bad overlap i suggest stacking
  11. 01:02:786 (8,9,10) - don't really feel triplet is appropriate
  12. 01:18:368 (7,1) - space out
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:815 (1,2) - blanket?
  2. 00:14:291 (5,6,7) - how bout this dw about it going off screen it'll be fixed in gameplay
    SPOILER
  3. 00:23:465 (1) - reversing more than once confusing to read for normal
  4. 00:50:116 (1,3) - copy one of these sliders for the other one?
[Easy]
  1. 00:03:368 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i feel like too many circles for easy, put some sliders man
  2. 00:23:465 (3) - same as in normal
  3. 00:35:116 (1,1) - bad overlap, also fix all those sliders repeating more than once >_<
    00:40:359 (2,1) - overlap.
  4. 00:49:679 (2,4) - ^
Thanks for mod lots of help!
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-
Hihihi :)
thank you for request :D

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
  1. Tags:add opening or op
  2. All Diff uncheck Letterbox during beaks
[Easy]
  1. Aimod error
  2. 01:14:728 (1) - 01:17:058 (1) -
    avoid the Folded twice Easy in Normal better is good in the recent trend
    Example
[Normal]
  1. Aimod error
  2. 00:14:291 (5) - NC
  3. 00:21:135 (5) - ^
  4. 00:41:524 (4) - ^
  5. 00:43:854 (7) - ^
  6. 01:00:164 (4) - ^
  7. 01:04:097 (5) - ^
  8. 01:06:427 (4) - ^
  9. 01:07:737 (4) - ^
  10. 01:11:087 (5) - ^
  11. 01:16:475 (3) - ^
  12. 01:18:805 (4) - ^
  13. 01:24:048 (4) - ^

  14. 00:03:368 (1,2,3) -I think better to give bend is good
  15. 00:35:698 (4) - ^
    Example

  16. 01:01:330 (5) - whistle(head)
  17. 01:12:980 (1) - 1Clap 2whistle 3Clap
[Hard]
  1. AR+1　because the bpm is high
  2. ReCheck　NC
  3. 00:11:232 (5,6,1) - Shape is bad
    Example
  4. 00:13:271 (2) - ^
  5. 00:31:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I think the bad flow Please try Code
    180,180,30747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    120,120,30893,2,0,L|44:124,2,60.0000022888184,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,31330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    268,144,31475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,224,31621,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,224,31766,2,0,P|228:280|252:348,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,284,32203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    268,144,32349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32495,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32640,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    200,96,32713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32786,6,0,P|280:76|352:120,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,132,33223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:32:495 (1,2,3,4) - High bpm I think 5 Hit severe
    Example
    I was worried about not even Stream from here further
    3Hit Kiai Time etc

  7. 01:14:582 (4) - Ctrl+G?
[Insane]
  1. 00:54:922 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Bad flow Please try Code
    256,48,54922,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    312,188,55067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,100,55213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    336,100,55504,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    168,100,55650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    168,100,55941,6,0,P|136:184|184:264,1,190,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    224,180,56378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    312,272,56524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    404,168,56669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    456,300,56815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    372,360,56961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    268,320,57106,6,0,L|164:324,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:03:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Bad flow Try in this way?
    Example
  3. 01:07:592 (5) - Bad flow Move x420 y192
  4. 01:11:815 (5,6,7,8) - I want to personally narrowed lol

    nice Insane :)
good luck :)
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
AsprikaQ

-Nanaka- wrote:

Hihihi :)
thank you for request :D

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
  1. Tags:add opening or op
  2. All Diff uncheck Letterbox during beaks
[Easy]
  1. Aimod error
  2. 01:14:728 (1) - 01:17:058 (1) -
    avoid the Folded twice Easy in Normal better is good in the recent trend
    Example
[Normal]
  1. Aimod error
  2. 00:14:291 (5) - NC
  3. 00:21:135 (5) - ^
  4. 00:41:524 (4) - ^
  5. 00:43:854 (7) - ^
  6. 01:00:164 (4) - ^
  7. 01:04:097 (5) - ^
  8. 01:06:427 (4) - ^
  9. 01:07:737 (4) - ^
  10. 01:11:087 (5) - ^
  11. 01:16:475 (3) - ^
  12. 01:18:805 (4) - ^
  13. 01:24:048 (4) - ^

  14. 00:03:368 (1,2,3) -I think better to give bend is good
  15. 00:35:698 (4) - ^
    Example

  16. 01:01:330 (5) - whistle(head)
  17. 01:12:980 (1) - 1Clap 2whistle 3Clap
[Hard]
  1. AR+1　because the bpm is high
  2. ReCheck　NC
  3. 00:11:232 (5,6,1) - Shape is bad
    Example
  4. 00:13:271 (2) - ^
  5. 00:31:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I think the bad flow Please try Code
    180,180,30747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    120,120,30893,2,0,L|44:124,2,60.0000022888184,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,31330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    268,144,31475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,224,31621,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    248,224,31766,2,0,P|228:280|252:348,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,284,32203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    268,144,32349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32495,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32640,1,0,3:0:0:0:
    200,96,32713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,96,32786,6,0,P|280:76|352:120,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,132,33223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:32:495 (1,2,3,4) - High bpm I think 5 Hit severe
    Example
    I was worried about not even Stream from here further
    3Hit Kiai Time etc

  7. 01:14:582 (4) - Ctrl+G?
[Insane]
  1. 00:54:922 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Bad flow Please try Code
    256,48,54922,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    312,188,55067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,100,55213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    336,100,55504,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    168,100,55650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    168,100,55941,6,0,P|136:184|184:264,1,190,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    224,180,56378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    312,272,56524,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    404,168,56669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    456,300,56815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    372,360,56961,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    268,320,57106,6,0,L|164:324,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:03:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Bad flow Try in this way?
    Example
  3. 01:07:592 (5) - Bad flow Move x420 y192
  4. 01:11:815 (5,6,7,8) - I want to personally narrowed lol

    nice Insane :)
good luck :)
Thxks for mod! very good one :)
Betsuto
395 posts
Joined August 2011
Betsuto
M4M

[Insane]
00:29:145 (1) - คิดว่าวางตามเสียงกีตาร์น่าจะดีกว่า
00:42:398 (2) - ทำเป็นโน๊ตขาไปขาเดียว แล้ววางโน๊ตเดี่ยว แทนที่ 00:42:834 - ใส่ Whistle , 00:42:980 -
00:44:291 (9) - เอา Whistle ออกเข้ากว่า
00:48:660 (1) - วางโน๊ตแบบท่อนที่แล้วน่าจะบาลานซ์กว่า (เดี๋ยวโดนทัก) 00:39:339 (8) -
00:55:504 (1,2) - เอาเป็นเสียง Soft แล้วใส่ Whistle แทนดีป่าว ?
00:56:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - จะพยายามอธิบายให้เข้าใจ ... เอา 2 ไปวางแทน 4,เอา3 ไปวางแทน 2, เอา4 ไปไว้แทน 5, เอา 5 ไปวางแทน 3 แล้วเอา 6 ไปวางที่ x:244 y:112
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1535864
00:59:145 (4,5) - เลื่อนลงไปไกล ๆ (แนะนำ : x:464 y:152) แล้วกด Ctrl+G ทั้ง 2 ตัว
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1535866
01:02:203 (2,3) - กด Ctrl + G
01:03:951 (6,7) - กด Ctrl + G
01:12:106 (7,8) - เลื่อนโน๊ตทั้งสอง ลง4 ซ้าย1 จะทำให้โน๊ตอ่านง่ายขึ้น (สวยด้วย)
01:16:621 (4) - เลื่อนไปวางไว้ที่ x:340 y:248
01:18:368 (7) - หางสไลด์ เอา Whistle ออก

[Hard]
00:10:067 (3) - เลื่อนลงมา1 แล้วขวาไป 2-3 จะสวยขึ้น
00:21:427 (7) - ใส่ New Combo ด้วย
00:22:300 (1) - เอา New Combo ออก
00:23:029 (4) - ลง 1 แล้วหางจะไปทับโน๊ตเลข 7 พอดี
00:32:349 (4,1) - โดดไกลไปสำหรับ Hard + BPM 200 up เอาเข้ามาใกล้กว่านี้หน่อย
00:42:398 (2) - ^ เอาใกล้เข้ามาอีก
00:44:291 (6) - เอา Whistle ออกน่าจะเข้ากว่า
00:50:553 (4) - ไกลโคตร lol
01:00:310 (6) - เอาไปวางที่ x:384 y:132 ระยะโน๊ตจะห่าง 1.23x ทั้ง 2 ข้าง
01:13:563 (1) - เอา New Combo ออก
01:14:436 (3) - ใส่ New Combo ตรงนี้แทน
01:15:893 (1) - เอา New Combo ออก
01:16:475 (3) - ใส่ New Combo แทน
01:18:368 (7) - หางสไลด์ เอา Whistle ออก

Insane มันส์มาก ... ขอให้แรงค์ได้ไว ๆ
waxman
467 posts
Joined February 2012
waxman
HI

[Insane]

00:09:485 (1,2,3) - spacing? I want you to change to the same distance. or take more distance.
00:14:728 (3) - NC? But sometimes it don't need it. You can choose.
00:25:504 (5) - put on the end of 00:25:213 (4)
00:35:043 - (Suggestion) add Circle? it looks good for me. yours is not too bad tho.
00:47:786 (6,7) - I guess this jump is too hard. Not really.
00:58:271 (1,2) - I think you like this pattern. nvm its your map. :D same as 00:25:504 (5).
01:17:495 (2,3) - get more distance.
01:27:252 (4,5) - same as 00:25:504 (5).

[Hard]

00:11:232 (5,6,1) - wrong spacing. 00:11:669 (6) move to x:256 y:56
00:30:747 (2) - NC
00:31:621 (1) - remove NC
00:47:786 (4,5) - spacing. be :) cause its hard diff. So I'm taking about spacing.
00:59:873 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:06:427 (6,7) - ^
01:09:194 (4) - ^ you like this?
bad stuff
01:28:126 (3,4) - change fine spacing as same as 01:27:252 (1,2) or add NC.

[Normal]
00:06:572 (4) - spacing.

[Easy]
It's strange for me.

OK, Good map 4 ever.
Good Luck!
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