Thanks Snepif.Snepif wrote:
Hi, my part of m4m
Hello
[General]
Offset +8 sounds much better to me.
Folder seems fine.
tried, and this works better, fixed
[Daydreaming]
00:03:355 (2) - This slider should follow the vocal better, it feels kinda bad right now. End it on 00:04:021 (3) - and add a repeat if you want (which imo is better) or simply leave that note where it is.
ok
00:13:363 (1,2,3,4) - This curve could be better... try making a pentagon with 00:13:363 (1,2,3,4,1) - these notes?
fixed a bit
00:21:363 (3) - Add a note here, it's a big white tick and kinda super necessary, and I see no reason to leave it unmapped.
eh? But there is a note already http://puu.sh/2AnPO
00:34:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you want this to flow better do this:
then rearrange the next notes obviously.
I think current one placement is fine
00:46:696 (5) - The angle of this slider doesn't flow quite well... Look, I tried something that flows well but maybe it's too confusing. Disclaimer: i'm not sure whether this is totally okay or not. I tried testplaying it and it's readable with the standard skin. This is it:
yep, I'm not sure though changed for mow
[BCI]
I like the diff a lot except for the hitsounds, so mostly hitsound mod:
I'll take Bakari part from here
00:03:355 (2) - Whistle should be on start, not on the end, to follow the vocals.
00:04:688 (4) - Add whistle
00:04:688 (4) - Add whistle at start
00:07:355 (4) - I would remove whistle from here, since it's like... more quiet than the previous note
00:08:688 (2) - Whistle should be here
00:09:021 (3) - And remove from here
00:10:021 (5) - Whistle
00:18:688 (3) - Remove whistle from the end
All this whistles follows piano and sounds ok as for me
00:24:105 (1) - Uhhhh this is weird. I know the piano sounds in the blue tick, but for a normal diff player maybe he will prolly 100 it. Hm, maybe you can arrange this pattern so that the blue tick is on a slider end? Like this:
Kind of a must-do, imo.
Yep this note is a pain but, such slider will be unsuitable. So I'm still in wonder wtd. But this is Hard and I guess such 1/4 placement for 1 note not so horrible.
[Waking Up]
AR 9 in the diff that is NOT the hardest is really bad imo.. use 8
The main point in AR9 here is the fast part that plays with AR8 super bad because of lot of 1/4 on 180bpm.
OD 8 is a super bad idea considering the map is slow and relaxing, meaning it doesn't have a constant beat in the music which helps you follow the notes and beats that you press. I would use 7 maximum in a diff that is not the hardest of the mapset.
ok
00:03:355 (2) - Delete whistle from the end, add it at the start.
whistles here only follows piano
00:04:021 (3) - Ugly shape, move the mid point (the one that is not red) a bit down.
oh I don't think so
00:06:855 (5) - Really unnecessary and unfitting note. Delete it please.
follows end of lus"t"
00:14:688 (3) - The shape of this slider looks too forced, it is unnecessarily super curved. Change it like this:
or something like that.
but this was intended to compress pattern into top left, sometimes I fell I need balance in such things...
00:21:355 (6) - This note should be on 00:21:438 (x) -
Actually there is a sound on 00:21:355 (6) - too. I changed this into 1/1 slider.
00:27:021 (5) - Move a few grids down.
yep
00:29:605 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is hard to follow all of a sudden, I suggest putting a slider somewhere here so you know what to press afterwards, when the next patterns come.
oh, this is Insane btw, and I don't think that flows so strong bass sound is hard
00:30:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This whole thing flows really poorly, do this:
I moved 00:31:021 (3,4,5) - up and 00:30:355 (4,5,1,2) - up to make this more natural, and I can say such http://puu.sh/2AoLc flows works really good.
00:41:355 (1) - Move ending 1 grid right or 2
moved
00:44:021 (1,2,3,4) - Wow this plays, flows and looks really bad. Change it like this:
seriously, I cant get how this http://puu.sh/2AoQ1 can be bad flow and plays bad
Then rearrange 00:44:937 (5,6,7,8) - so it doesn't look weird.
Uhhh the streamy part was kinda unpolite but the rest is okay, and the rhythm is good too :3
haha :3
I think Kei could take a look at the map (not a straight bubble since it's 2 weeks old only). If you change the stuff I told you, I can call Kei, since some things that I told you are really necessary.[/b]
nice, so I can I can disturb you when all diffs will be updated?
Good map, good luck!
edit: I'll update this later.