StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size)‬ · forum‬

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-18T13:22:39+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 พฤษภาคม 2556 at 16:09:18

Artist: StylipS
Title: Choose me Darling (TV Size)
Source: Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags: asprikaq opening
BPM: 150
Filesize: 15667kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

AsprikaQ's Hard (4.89 stars, 232 notes)
Easy (2.21 stars, 92 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 299 notes)
Normal (3.84 stars, 123 notes)

Download: StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size)
Download: StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap ><
Easy - me
Normal - me
AsprikaQ's hard - AsprikaQ
Insane - me
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special thank MEENSSS for offset
and scanter for video !!
redownload if you download it before 05/02/13

Last edited by P A N 2013-05-16T09:09:45+00:00, edited 128 times in total.

vey_old_1

vey_old_1 2013-03-20T12:05:52+00:00

some suggestion:
offset:790
maybe better.

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-20T15:46:38+00:00

It's better, thanks

Fluabu

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Fluabu 2013-03-21T00:32:43+00:00

The song's bitrate is pretty high

Audio

The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT; they will be more than happy to help find an mp3 for you.

Source: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-21T08:07:13+00:00

ok will fix it

KantoKun

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KantoKun 2013-03-21T09:51:10+00:00

Oh!! I like this map. Can I do Insane GD? ;w;

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-21T10:00:37+00:00

เดี๋ยวขอตัดสินใจก่อนนะคับ

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-21T10:02:30+00:00

The song's bitrate is pretty high

is it ok? :3 i'm not sure

xHappy-

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xHappy- 2013-03-22T01:55:49+00:00

http://puu.sh/2lIdD
เอาอันใหม่ไปนะครับ พี่ปัง ^^

xHappy-

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xHappy- 2013-03-22T02:06:57+00:00

ระดับ SSS นี่่ผมขอmodก่อนเสร็จนะ อิอิ
00:03:990(1) - Nc
00:05:590(1) - อันนี้ใส่ nc ก็ได้ไม่ใส่ก็ได้แล้วแต่
00:07:190(1) - Nc
00:08:790(1) - Nc
00:10:390(1) - Nc
00:15:190(1) - Nc
00:16:990(1) - Nc
00:19:390 - add note
ที่เหลือทำต่อเลยครับ ^^

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-22T06:39:22+00:00

ใจเยนสิเผื่อเขาทำใหม่อีก

Edit: easy 00:12:810 (1) - จบที่เส้นขาวนะครับ หรือที่ 00:13:610

StickyPicky

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StickyPicky 2013-03-24T05:32:34+00:00

hi ~

#modreqs

EASY

01:26:210 finish your Kiai Time here ~
00:29:610 / 00:50:410 (1) - / add finish here ~

NORMAL

00:29:590 (1) - add finish ~
00:31:110 / 00:31:190 remove this 2 "green line" (Inherited Points) then Add Finish here 00:31:190 (5) - ~

AsprikaQ's HARD

01:26:790 / 01:27:990 a whistle here please >.<

INSANE

none ~ good job! XD

SSS

SPOILER

i just notice, why is the Kiai Time here are not the same with the other diffs? >.<

SPOILER

Nice Beatmap! Goodluck ~ For rank!

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-24T06:17:39+00:00

All fixed, thanks

Betsuto

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Betsuto 2013-03-24T14:31:36+00:00

SPOILER

20:44 Betsuto: [Easy]
20:45 Betsuto: ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้ LOL
20:45 P A N: - -
20:47 Betsuto: [Normal]
20:47 Betsuto: 00:29:590 - ลองวางโน๊ตรูปดาวใหม่ ให้มันงามกว่านี้นิดนึง =,=(มันเบี้ยวนิดนึง)
20:49 Betsuto: 00:49:990 - แก้เป็นแบบนี้ดีปะ http://puu.sh/2n5g3
20:50 Betsuto: 01:17:990 - ลองวางรูปดาวใหม่ มันเบี้ยวนิดหน่อย
20:51 Betsuto: หมดละ Normal
20:53 Betsuto: [AsprikaQ's Hard]
20:54 Betsuto: 00:15:990 - ตรงรัว 2 ตัว ท้ายสไลด์มันอยู่สูง มันเลยดูยาก เอาโน๊ต 7 ตัวสุดท้ายเลื่อนออกมาจาก 6
20:55 Betsuto: 00:38:690 - ย้าย (5) มาที่ x:296 y:288
20:58 Betsuto: 01:26:490 - ลองเปลี่ยนเป็นแบบนี้ดูน่าจะดี http://puu.sh/2n5rH ตัวข้างหลังด้วยนะด้วยนะ
21:00 P A N: normal 00:49:990 งี้ปะ http://puu.sh/2n5wD
21:04 Betsuto: แปปนะ
21:07 Betsuto: อืม งั้นก็ได้อยู่
21:07 Betsuto: Hard หมดละ
21:07 P A N: โอเคๆ
21:07 P A N: เช
21:07 Betsuto: [Insane]
21:14 Betsuto: โทษที แม่ดราม่า เลยมาช้า.. ต่อ
21:14 P A N: omg
21:15 Betsuto: 00:18:890 - New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:19:390 - Del New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:19:990 - New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:20:990 - Del New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:21:790 - New Combo
21:17 Betsuto: 00:23:390 - New Combo
21:17 Betsuto: 00:23:790 - Del New Combo
21:18 Betsuto: 00:50:390 - ลองเปลี่ยนเป็นอย่างนี้ http://puu.sh/2n5Xe แล้วใส่ New Combo ด้วย
21:19 Betsuto: 01:12:190 - New Combo
21:19 Betsuto: 01:12:390 - Del New Combo
21:19 Betsuto: 01:12:790 - New Combo
21:19 Betsuto: 01:13:990 - Del New Combo
21:20 Betsuto: 01:14:990 - Newcombo
21:20 Betsuto: 01:15:590 - Del New Combo
21:20 Betsuto: 01:15:990 - New Combo
21:22 Betsuto: 01:21:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - กด Ctrl + H แล้วก็ Ctrl + J จะกลับด้าน แล้วเอา (1) เลื่อนมาที่ x:252 y:204
21:22 Betsuto: 01:27:990 - New Combo
21:23 Betsuto: แค่นี้แหละ Insane
21:24 Betsuto: [SSS]
21:24 Betsuto: 00:02:790 - New Combo
21:25 Betsuto: 00:05:990 - New Combo
21:26 Betsuto: 00:44:990 (5) - เลื่อนมาทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง
21:26 Betsuto: 00:46:390 - Del New Combo
21:27 Betsuto: 00:47:990 - Del New Combo
21:27 Betsuto: 00:50:590 - Del New Combo
21:27 Betsuto: 00:53:590 - New Combo
21:28 Betsuto: 01:11:390 - New Combo
21:28 Betsuto: 01:25:590 - New Combo

แมพดีอ้ะ !
เดี๋ยวปั๊ดแปะดาวซะเลย lol
// แปะ

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-24T14:32:13+00:00

แปะสิ 5555

All fixed, thanks! :3

edit: thanks!!! star

aonkub555

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aonkub555 2013-03-24T14:46:55+00:00

แวะมาช่วยดูครับPAN

hitsound
เพลงนี้เสียงนกหวีดท่าจะเข้าได้ดี sampelset normal ใช้ เสียงhit กับ whistleสลับกันในช่วงที่เพลงมีเสียงกลอง
เสียงclapมันได้ยินตรงช่วงไม่มีเสียงกลอง อย่าง 00:20:410 ถึง 00:29:210 ส่วนช่วงเสียงกลองใส่เสียงนกหวีดอย่างที่ว่าดูเหมาะกว่า

Easy
เลื่อนสไลเดอร์ตรง 00:02:410 มาไว้ตรง 00:02:010 ดีกว่ามั้งคับ คำร้องเพลงมันเริ่มไปแล้วรู้สึกมันขาดช่วง แล้วใส่sliderเพิ่มตรงนี้? 00:03:210
ใส่โน๊ตเพิ่ม 00:08:010 ตรงนี้00:10:410เปลี่ยนเป็นสไลเดอร์สั้นๆ เข้ากับคำร้องดี http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670136
ช่วง 00:29:610 เปลี่ยนเป็นสไลเดอร์2สั้น2อัน http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670169 add finish 00:30:410 กับ 00:31:210 และ 00:32:010 มันยังอยู่ในช่วงส่งเสียงฉาบอะ

Normal
ช่วง00:56:790 ถึง 00:59:590 เปลี่ยนเป็นspinก็เข้าดี
ช่วงkiai time เพิ่มความไวไสเดอร์เป็นx1.10 น่าจะดี

AsprikaQ's Hard
หนุกดี แต่MVหายปายหนาย

Insane
nothing say

SSS
MV หายปายหนาย too

ทั้งหมดนี้แค่ความคิดเห็นผมนะครับ ถ้าไม่ถูกใจก็Ignoreเลย

Wataru

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Wataru 2013-03-25T13:19:31+00:00

Hi modding
General : วิดีโอ easy ไม่มีครับ แก้ที

EASY

*พยายามทำให้จุดต้นและจุดจบอยู่บน y หรือ x เดียวกันนะครับ เพื่อความสมมาตรและสวยงาม*
00:00:824 (1) - เลื่อนจุดจบมาที่ y 256
00:02:424 (2) - y 124

ทำเท่าที่ทำได้ อันไหนคิดว่าไม่เวิร์คก็ไม่ต้องทำ

01:19:624 (3) - จุดจบ y 124
01:19:624 (3) - จุดจบ y 264 แล้วเลื่อนคอมโบถัดมาให้มันถูก Distance
ไม่มีอะไรมาก easy

NORMAL

00:06:224 (1) - เอาโค้งลงดีกว่าครับ จุดตรงกลางเลื่อนลงมา x 364 y 252
ไม่มีอะไรจริงๆ -____- แมพดีเกิน

HARD

เป็น hard ที่เกิน hard ไปนิด
00:52:424 (2,3) - แบบนี้ดีกว่านะ

แบบเก่าเดี๋ยวคนงง ลืมโดด
ไม่มีอะไรจะแก้จริงๆ

SSS

ลด Approach Rate เหลือ 8 พอ
00:08:424 (3,4,5,6) - Hitsound แปลกชะมัด แก้ที
00:37:424 (6,7,8) - รัวห่างไปม้างงงงงงงงงง
00:59:824 (6) - x392 y100
ไม่มีอะไรละแต่ยากเว่ออออออออออ แนะนำให้ทำแมพแข่งกับ 0108 ฮา

insane

00:06:024 (1,2,3) -

ไม่มีอะไรแก้ละ

Thanks

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-25T13:34:33+00:00

ok fixed something D:, thanks

AsprikaQ

AsprikaQ 2013-03-28T18:08:05+00:00

http://puu.sh/2pBjZ

Fixed something.

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-29T00:55:06+00:00

thanks star ><

nattap_old

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nattap_old 2013-03-29T06:55:47+00:00

//ลอยมาหาพร้อมถือดาวมาด้วย
โหลดแบบ no video มาครับไม่ได้เช็ค video ให้นา
ถ้าผิดภาษาไปแปลเอาเองละกัน

[Easy]
ไม่อยากทำให้เละนะ

[Normal]
tick rate 1?

[Hard]
00:24:990 (5) - make the red waypoint centered to the slider or make it parallel with 00:25:990 (6,7) but If it's just visual aid that 4 is longer than 3 It's okay
00:57:190 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion : can you make a square with 00:56:390 (3) tail as a starting point and make it like this http://puu.sh/2pZG1
01:26:790 (3,4) - a circle stack on 3 beat repeat slider may be better.

[SSS]
01:20:590 (1,1) - ต้องการ NC เหรอ ผมว่าไม่นะ
01:28:590 (2) - finish sound มั้ย

[Insane]
01:15:390 (2,3,4) - 2ไป3 กับ 3ไป4 มันคนละระยะกันอะ

จะเก่งไปไหนเนี่ย
//ยิงดาวใส่หัว P A N //เผ่น

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-29T07:56:56+00:00

Normal, Insane, SSS all fixed !

คนทำ hard คนไทยคับ 55

thanks!

AsprikaQ

AsprikaQ 2013-03-29T09:13:11+00:00

nattap wrote:
[Hard]
00:24:990 (5) - make the red waypoint centered to the slider or make it parallel with 00:25:990 (6,7) but If it's just visual aid that 4 is longer than 3 It's okay
I don't really get what you mean but it's okay the it looks now.
00:57:190 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion : can you make a square with 00:56:390 (3) tail as a starting point and make it like this http://puu.sh/2pZG1 Fixed.
01:26:790 (3,4) - a circle stack on 3 beat repeat slider may be better. It's okay the way it's now

Thx for modding!

http://puu.sh/2q1Vb Fixed diff

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-29T09:15:59+00:00

Updated !

Mikkuri

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Mikkuri 2013-03-29T10:51:37+00:00

~random from #modreqs~

*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
combo color ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
audio lead in ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
จะเอา countdown ใส่หรือออกให้มันเหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย
ใส่ tag ให้เหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย
offset ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
ปรับ offset แล้วอย่าลืม resnap เส้นเขียว โดยเฉพาะ kiai time
Easy Normal ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปดิ ตรง break อะ

[Easy]
hitsound ไม่มีปัญหา
แต่เสียงช่วง 20 วิแรกที่มันเพลงมันเบาๆก็ลดเสียงเส้นเขียวหน่อยดิ เสียง hitsound มันดัง

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy เบา hitsound ช่วงนั้นหน่อย
ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อดเหมือนกัน

00:25:190 (2) - add clap head
00:25:790 (3) - add clap tail

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
เบาเสียง hitsound ช่วง 20 วิแบบที่เพิ่งม็อด Easy Normal ไป
เริ่มโน้ตให้มันเหมือนชาวบ้านหน่อย วางหลังเส้นแดงไม่ได้นะแจ้ะ :3
ม็อด hitsound ยากสัส
จะ remix ใช่ปะ? ก็ได้ จัดไป ม็อดแบบ remix

00:06:790 (2) - add clap
00:08:590 (1) - ^
00:09:490 (5) - remove clap tail
00:17:190 - add note แล้วใส่ clap ไปก็ได้ เสียงมันหาย
00:17:590 (5) - add clap tail
00:39:990 (4) - remove whistle tail
00:57:590 (2) - remove finish มันไม่ได้เข้ากับเพลงเลย -_-
01:27:990 (4) - remove clap at 2nd reverse

[SSS]
clap แรกๆก็โอเคอยู่หรอก หลังๆทำไมมันหนวกหูจัง 5555 ให้ปังใส่ให้ก็ได้

00:07:190 (1) - add finish head
00:08:390 (3) - add clap
00:45:590 (2) - add finish head

โอยปวดตับ

[Insane]
เบาช่วง 20 วิเหมือนที่ม็อดมา

00:05:990 (1,2,3) - แปลกๆว่ะไอ 3 ตัวนี้ ก็อบโค้ดนี่ไปลง

256,72,5990,6,0,L|280:24,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,148,6390,2,0,L|256:192,3,42.5
352,120,6790,2,0,L|372:80,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:17:990 (2) - add clap
00:19:390 (3) - add clap tail
00:18:390 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - จังหวะแม่งมั่วไปหมด ขี้เกียจทำโค้ดให้ จัดเองละกัน
00:31:790 (4) - remove finish tail
00:31:990 (5) - add finish head
00:42:390 (1) - ^
00:50:590 (2) - add clap tail
00:58:590 (1) - add clap? เหมือนจะไม่เข้า ปล่อยไว้งั้นแหละ
01:16:590 (2) - add whistle tail
01:22:190 (5) - ^
01:25:190 (9) - add clap head
01:25:390 (10) - add whistle head
01:25:790 (2) - remove whistle

That's all

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-29T12:01:51+00:00

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:
~random from #modreqs~
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
combo color ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
audio lead in ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย เท่ากันอยู่เเล้วหนิ -0-
จะเอา countdown ใส่หรือออกให้มันเหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
ใส่ tag ให้เหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
offset ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
ปรับ offset แล้วอย่าลืม resnap เส้นเขียว โดยเฉพาะ kiai time fixed
Easy Normal ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปดิ ตรง break อะ fixed

[Easy]
hitsound ไม่มีปัญหา
แต่เสียงช่วง 20 วิแรกที่มันเพลงมันเบาๆก็ลดเสียงเส้นเขียวหน่อยดิ เสียง hitsound มันดัง fixed

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy เบา hitsound ช่วงนั้นหน่อย fixed
ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อดเหมือนกัน
00:25:190 (2) - add clap head fixed
00:25:790 (3) - add clap tai fixed
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
เบาเสียง hitsound ช่วง 20 วิแบบที่เพิ่งม็อด Easy Normal ไป
เริ่มโน้ตให้มันเหมือนชาวบ้านหน่อย วางหลังเส้นแดงไม่ได้นะแจ้ะ :3
ม็อด hitsound ยากสัส
จะ remix ใช่ปะ? ก็ได้ จัดไป ม็อดแบบ remix
00:06:790 (2) - add clap
00:08:590 (1) - ^
00:09:490 (5) - remove clap tail
00:17:190 - add note แล้วใส่ clap ไปก็ได้ เสียงมันหาย
00:17:590 (5) - add clap tail
00:39:990 (4) - remove whistle tail
00:57:590 (2) - remove finish มันไม่ได้เข้ากับเพลงเลย -_-
01:27:990 (4) - remove clap at 2nd reverse
[SSS]
clap แรกๆก็โอเคอยู่หรอก หลังๆทำไมมันหนวกหูจัง 5555 ให้ปังใส่ให้ก็ได้
00:07:190 (1) - add finish head fixed
00:08:390 (3) - add clap fixed
00:45:590 (2) - add finish headfixed
โอยปวดตับ

[Insane]
เบาช่วง 20 วิเหมือนที่ม็อดมา fixed
00:05:990 (1,2,3) - แปลกๆว่ะไอ 3 ตัวนี้ ก็อบโค้ดนี่ไปลง fixed
256,72,5990,6,0,L|280:24,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,148,6390,2,0,L|256:192,3,42.5
352,120,6790,2,0,L|372:80,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:17:990 (2) - add clap fixed
00:19:390 (3) - add clap tail fixed
00:18:390 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - จังหวะแม่งมั่วไปหมด ขี้เกียจทำโค้ดให้ จัดเองละกัน fixed
00:31:790 (4) - remove finish tail fixed
00:31:990 (5) - add finish head fixed
00:42:390 (1) - ^ fixed
00:50:590 (2) - add clap tail fixed
00:58:590 (1) - add clap? เหมือนจะไม่เข้า ปล่อยไว้งั้นแหละ D:
01:16:590 (2) - add whistle tail fixed
01:22:190 (5) - ^ fixed
01:25:190 (9) - add clap head fixed
01:25:390 (10) - add whistle head fixed
01:25:790 (2) - remove whistlefixed
That's all

Thank you Mickey ><

moonlightleaf

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Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2013-03-30T16:38:34+00:00

From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

General

if has not special meaning ,suggest using one BG

Easy

00:11:624(2) end at 00:12:024

00:45:624(1) a general silder is better than this

01:17:624(1) ^

01:20:824 add note

00:02:039 ^ ?

00:08:024 ^

00:26:824 ^

00:34:424 ^

00:40:824 ^ pefer 00:36:024(3)

Normal

AR-1

00:05:624(3)(1) is not so link up,just try → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681006

00:15:624(5) change to note , 00:16:224(6) move to 00:16:024

00:25:824(3)(4) pefer ↑

00:31:224(5)(1)(2) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681023

put note at 00:37:624 and 00:38:024 and 00:38:424 replace00:37:624(1)(2)

00:50:643(6)delete,00:51:024(7) move to 00:50:824

01:26:824overlap is not so good, just pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681093

Insane

00:02:224(5) it's head and end exchange (Ctrl+G)

00:05:424(5) ^

00:14:624(3) ^

00:35:424(8) ^

01:12:424(2) ^

00:04:624(2) rotate80((Ctrl+Shift+R) then move to x|128 y|320

00:19:809(13)delete 00:19:424(12) add a return

00:20:824(5) five-pointed star , maybe movt to x|188 y|316 ? acc can use Polygon Creator(Crtl+Shift+D)

00:21:424(7) the same place as (5)

00:21:624(8) x|104 y|172

00:28:024to00:29:424five-pointed star can make better

00:44:024 ^

00:53:024(5)(6)(7)(8) ^

01:09:824(6) move behind (4) ?

SSS

00:45:424(1) 2notes replace

01:05:924(9)delete http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681257

01:20:024to01:21:424 maybe better → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681269

AsprikaQ's Hard

00:00:424(2)(4) delete

00:03:124(4) move to 00:03:224 end at00:03:424

00:04:624(2)(3) http://puu.sh/2qHIL

00:05:424(5)(6)(7)(1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681289

00:08:124(5) delete

00:33:624(1) end at 00:33:824

00:35:224(4) end at 00:35:424

00:40:024(4) end at 00:40:224

00:41:624(1) end at 00:41:824

don't hide slider's head and end

P A N

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P A N 2013-03-30T18:19:39+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

General
if has not special meaning ,suggest using one BG

Easy
00:11:624(2) end at 00:12:024 the rhymth a bit weird

00:45:624(1) a general silder is better than this fixed

01:17:624(1) ^ fixed

01:20:824 add note fixed

00:02:039 ^ ? fixed

00:08:024 ^ fixed

00:26:824 ^ fixed

00:34:424 ^ fixed

00:40:824 ^ pefer 00:36:024(3) I like the old one

Normal
AR-1 fixed

00:05:624(3)(1) is not so link up,just try → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681006 fixed

00:15:624(5) change to note , 00:16:224(6) move to 00:16:024 fixed

00:25:824(3)(4) pefer ↑ I like the old one ><

00:31:224(5)(1)(2) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681023 fixed

put note at 00:37:624 and 00:38:024 and 00:38:424 replace00:37:624(1)(2) the rhymth a bit weird

00:50:643(6)delete,00:51:024(7) move to 00:50:824 hmm I try the new rhymth

01:26:824overlap is not so good, just pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681093fixed

Insane
00:02:224(5) it's head and end exchange (Ctrl+G) fixed

00:05:424(5) ^ fixed

00:14:624(3) ^ fixed

00:35:424(8) ^ fixed

01:12:424(2) ^ fixed

00:04:624(2) rotate80((Ctrl+Shift+R) then move to x|128 y|320 fixed but a bit left

00:19:809(13)delete 00:19:424(12) add a return fixed

00:20:824(5) five-pointed star , maybe movt to x|188 y|316 ? acc can use Polygon Creator(Crtl+Shift+D) fixed

00:21:424(7) the same place as (5) fixed

00:21:624(8) x|104 y|172 fixed

00:28:024to00:29:424five-pointed star can make better fixed

00:44:024 ^ fixed

00:53:024(5)(6)(7)(8) ^ fixed

01:09:824(6) move behind (4) ?fixed

ok thanks for your mod ><

xHappy-

443 posts

Joined May 2012

xHappy- 2013-04-06T12:48:10+00:00

Easy
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
Normal
01:10:824- 01:11:424- มือใหม่กดไม่ทันแน่ๆ =__=
AsprikaQ's Hard
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
SSS
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
Insane
01:23:024- add note
Good luck อาจ mod ได้แค่นี้ =w=

Foxxer_old

Foxxer_old 2013-04-06T18:15:54+00:00

SSS

00:08:624 (4,5,6) - These notes are strange, change this.
00:14:824 (3,4,5) - Approach these notes a little bit.
00:16:424 (8,9,1) - ^
00:44:624 (2,3,4) - ^
00:50:624 (3) - Its far on the time line, so, its confused if it is on the slider. Move this.
01:02:824 (9,1) - I think its very far.
01:21:624 (1,2,3) - A slider with reverse arrow will be better.

Good Luck~

787B

769 posts

Joined November 2010

787B 2013-04-07T21:08:50+00:00

Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that.

Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns?
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume.
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ?

Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .
00:52:824 - Add a note here?
00:53:624 - ^

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even though this is an Hard, I wouldn't recommed doing this in the very beginning of the map. As far as I know, on 00:00:224 - is the first beat I can hear, so this is actually confusing to read.
00:16:324 (6,7) - I wouldn't stack those notes, they kinda ruin the flow here, consider doing a triplet: http://puu.sh/2vQBn
00:20:224 (1,2,3) - Try placing them on a different line, feels kinda weird to play them after the spin.

SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here.

Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo.
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good.

Good luck!

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-08T09:29:23+00:00

ok, I will come to fix it >< thanks

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-08T14:55:33+00:00

Wolf wrote:
Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that. fixed

Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns? fixed
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume. fixed
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ? no, the rhymth a bit weird and the note will approach while it spin

Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .fixed to another thing
00:52:824 - Add a note here? fixed
00:53:624 - ^ fixed

SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here. fixed

Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo. fixed
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo fixed
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo fixed
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo fixed
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good. fixed

Good luck!

thanks ><

niceplayer

33 posts

Joined July 2010

niceplayer 2013-04-09T14:31:18+00:00

from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help.

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good.
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same.

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
Hard... With 00:00:424 (1,2,3,4), that's more than a insane. Remove them.
I guess you like to put most difficult in front. OK, your will is permitted.
00:04:624 (2,3,4) - Death pattern which I'd like to call. Even that 3 didn't catch the accents! Pass it is able ,but rhythm is terrible
00:10:224 (7) - Right down make it same distant to 6 and to next tag.

SPOILER

00:16:295 - (6,7) put them in the end of slider or drag 7 out. No such pattern before.
00:41:624 (2) - Vocal in 00:41:824 but tag end in 00:41:924
01:03:224 (1) - 01:06:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK these are fun. And others are boring in Kiai.

[SSS]
You can't change the pattern in everywhere of the map. Hitcircle and slider type is good in the beginning. But strangely changed after.
00:15:124 (4,5) - 00:16:745 - 00:29:934 - 00:51:124 - 00:51:524 - 00:55:124
I guess it will feel better if you put the slider back the same position of circle.

00:52:224 (1) - Not good flow.
01:13:224 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 is easier to read to be together imo.

[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset?
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume.
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound.
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4.

A random place suggestion

SPOILER

I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns.

I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-10T00:18:12+00:00

niceplayer wrote:
from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help. thanks but i'm afraid the postion of note will bad (lazy to remap D:)

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good. m-maybe u not update normal yet? D:
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same. fixed

[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset? fixed
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume. fixed
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound. fixed
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4. no its look a bit weird

A random place suggestion
SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224
256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85
01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns. fixed

I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.

thank you niceplayer

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-10T12:15:31+00:00

Easy Normal SSS and Insane Updated

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2013-04-12T05:55:19+00:00

Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH

AsprikaQ's Hard:
this is too overmapped to be hard, I won't mod this, sorry orz

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) -

SSS:
seems fine

Good Luck!

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-13T06:20:40+00:00

Sieg wrote:
Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder ok delete

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm ok
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better ok

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2 ok
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH ok

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1 ok
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc ok
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit ok
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) - fixed

Good Luck!

thank for modding Sieg ><

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-13T09:53:19+00:00

All Update!

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-14T02:13:55+00:00

~~http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83699~~

ah fail wating someone to delete it

Last edited by P A N 2013-04-14T02:24:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-14T02:16:08+00:00

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Totoro 2013-04-15T22:22:41+00:00

Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x?

00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC

00:32:824 (3) - NC

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:28:024 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle would look better

00:29:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket

00:40:624 (5,6,1,2) - square would fit better

00:47:224 (1,2) - this blanket doesnt fit imo

01:12:024 (1) - Remove NC

01:12:824 (3) - NC

01:18:824 (1) - remove NC

01:19:224 (3) - NC

[SSS]

00:53:624 (1) - ctrl+g

00:54:024 (2) - ^

00:54:424 (3) - ^

00:54:824 (4) - ^

01:20:024 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - slanted shape

[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical

nice diff

Azer

World Cup Organiser

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Azer 2013-04-16T01:27:57+00:00

Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane

00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders.
00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
00:11:924 (6) - Unstack
00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924
00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion
00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section.
00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong.
00:55:024 (5,1) - ^
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to
01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency.
01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider.

AsprikaQ's Hard

01:12:024 (1) - Remove this note
There's honestly nothing else I can see that could be improved, good job all around.

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-16T01:53:46+00:00

sorry for delay but I will come to fix it and give u kds, please wait ><

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-16T03:43:05+00:00

-iCo- wrote:
Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

thank you

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x? I want 1.0x because it look basic? I think..
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error fixed

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^ fixed

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^ fixed

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance the (2) is flip horizontally from 00:25:624 (3) - already

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error fixed

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape ok I will wait for another one talk about this the i will fix

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell ok

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error no

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC ok

00:32:824 (3) - NC ok

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error no

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^ no

I dont want to fix the distance of Normal because I have Easy already and thank you :3

[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered ok

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical how to symmetrical D:

nice diff

thank you for mod ><

AzerFrost wrote:
Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders. b-but I love this
00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little :(
00:11:924 (6) - Unstack ok
00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924 ok
00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion ok
00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section. ok
00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong. :/
00:55:024 (5,1) - ^ ok
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to ok
01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency. ok
01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider. hmm.. I think it's ok :/

thanks both for modding ><

AsprikaQ

AsprikaQ 2013-04-17T16:27:06+00:00

http://puu.sh/2BQ5F Everything from -iCo- and AzerFrost's mod fixed.

P A N

2,357 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-18T02:15:10+00:00

All Updated!!

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-04-20T09:13:12+00:00

Hi P A N (:
from m4m in game

[General]
1. use Choose me♡ダーリン (TV Size) in title? and Romanised title is Choose me Darling (TV Size)
2. Remove letterbox during breaks in all diff , no need this because this map without break time
3. in SSS diff. Rename become SSS's Hard+? First i think it's Insane+ (read as S.S diff oh lol)
4. 00:13:624 - kiai on and off in 00:13:724 - (kiai fountain)

[Easy]
00:02:024 (2) - 1 grid left?
00:08:424 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:11:924 - clap?
00:11:624 - ^
00:15:624 (2) - 1 grid left or remap the position, i think newbie hard to catch if circle in up on slider's tail
00:20:824 (2) - ^
00:17:224 (4) - NC and remove 00:18:424 (1) -
00:20:024 (2) - NC this
00:24:024 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712806 , if yes 00:25:224 (2) - x:116 y:64
00:36:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:48:824 (4,1) - ^
00:39:624 (4) - NC
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - hard to catch. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712818?
00:55:224 (1) - whistle in slider's body?
01:05:624 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712826?
01:16:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:19:624 (3) - NC for consistency
01:22:424 (1) - x:156 y:188 for same line with 01:20:824 (4) -, fix the spacing after this note if you follow this

[Normal]
AR+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:824 (2) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712834 imo
00:05:624 (3) - last node x:312,y:316
00:06:824 - clap?
00:09:224 (4) - curved for consistent with 00:08:424 (3) - ?
00:12:824 (1) - curved? ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712861
00:15:224 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:23:624 (6,1) - ^
00:19:624 (4) - 1 grid right
00:22:824 (5) - straight same as 00:21:224 (3) - ?
00:26:824 (1) - spacing issue (1,04x)
00:31:424 (6) - spacing issue (1,22)
00:32:624 (9) - x:56 y:144
00:48:824 (4) - NC for consistency
00:51:624 (4) - 1 grid right better imo
00:53:224 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:54:624 - add note for follow vocal?
01:00:024 - kiai time on in here, in timing point 01:00:044 (unsnapped)
01:09:624 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:28:624 - finish

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
HP+1 and OD+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:624 (2) - x:280 y:332, better flow imo
00:05:824 (6) - x: 380 y:160?
00:05:424 (5,1) - swap NC? because you NC always in downbeat
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:07:824 (3) - remove clap?
00:08:624 (1,2) - use 0,6 spacing same as 00:07:824 (3,4) - ?
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - you can make jump in here.. ex : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713004
00:13:624 (4) - NC? because you NC in every downbeat
00:24:824 (4) - ^
00:15:824 (4) - unstack please, maybe in x:392 y:40 for make jump too
00:15:024 (1,3) - swap NC?
00:23:624 (1) - spacing issue (0,87x)
00:38:424 (4) - ctrl+G? better imo
00:56:024 (2) - ^
00:46:424 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713017
00:47:224 - remove finish.. i think not follow the music
01:04:424 (3) - spacing issue (1,04x)
01:12:224 (4) - ctrl+G? to avoid jump 2,74x too QAQ
01:15:224 (1) - better if stacked with 01:14:024 (3) -
NC problem which must give NC in every downbeat (long white tick) or every 2 downbeat

[SSS]
hmmm little crazy normal spacing is 2,00 (opinion)
00:00:824 - Finish
00:08:824 (5,6) - omg... jump 4,17x (more than insane imo)
00:13:624 - Finish and remove clap
01:00:024 - ^
in here too. NC problem.. if you NC every downbeat. NC them.. like 00:13:624 - until 00:20:024 - you NC every 2 downbeat.
And in00:21:824 - until 00:26:424 - you NC every downbeat.
And also about Finish.. you need them heavy music. you can look which one need finish in Easy diff

[Insane]
00:08:824 - NC please because u NC in everydownbeat
00:24:824 (6) - ^
00:34:424 (5) - ^
00:47:224 (4) - ^
00:58:424 (5) - ^
01:09:424 (5) - ^
01:14:424 (5) - ^
01:24:024 (6) - ^
00:21:624 (8,1) - swap NC
00:36:024 (10,1) - ^
00:39:824 (1,6) - ^
00:45:624 (9,1) - ^
00:53:624 (8,1) - ^
00:52:024 (7,1) - ^
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
01:17:624 (5,1) - ^
here SS that i play.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713036
Comment : nice insane.. fun to play.. i enjoy play this diff

Well, i love this song.. Star for it
Good Luck All!! >3<

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-20T11:00:10+00:00

thanks Xinely for modding ><

Update my diffs!

Gloria Guard

2,277 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-04-21T03:15:23+00:00

Hi P A N (:3 」_)=3

From my m4m queue

[General]

Tag conflict with SSS's Hard+ diff
SSS's Hard Tag = asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
All diff Tag = asprikaq imouto meensss
Hit sound used in the song does not go with the song,
please put the sound and hit

[Easy]

00:00:824 remove green line why this line volume 40% red line volume down here
00:03:624 i think this part add note because very awkward sound is feels hollow.
00:26:424 (6,7,1) hmm.. In my opinion, this pattern is hard.
I wish you smooth flow a little more, making the slider example this -> http://puu.sh/2E2iW
00:30:824 (1,2) If you have the above modifications, equally.
00:48:824 (1) This is slider unbalance i think 2 red point move x:220 y:32 is really perfect here

[Normal]

00:16:024 (2,3) I think this pattern blanket here -> http://puu.sh/2E2rr
00:20:824 (1,2,3) hmm this pattern can make a more unique shape -> http://puu.sh/2E2uf <- Triangular-shape
00:24:024 (2) This is slider move please x:344 y:96 really pretty Triangular-shape
00:27:624 (2,3) Ineligible pattern read by normal users i think this pattern change here -> http://puu.sh/2E2yi
00:31:224 (5) New combo
01:15:624 (4,1) Please this pattern normal users read is hard i think change this pattern -> http://puu.sh/2E2CS
01:19:424 (4,5,1,2,3) I think this pattern shape is pentagon? -> http://puu.sh/2E2EN

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:45:224 (1) remove NC
00:51:624 (6,7,8,9,10) hmm.. This is pattern distance check please i don't understand this pattern specing
00:55:024 (2,3) I think this pattern beat awkward because 00:55:124 make sure to adjust the tempo to match lyrics

[SSS's Hard]

00:54:824 (4,5,1) Please change the direction of the slider to the natural flow Ctrl+G
01:21:624 (1) ^

[Insane]

00:31:924 I think this part add note becasue this part of the drum sound is heard
00:46:224 (7,8,1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern really awkward
It is recommended that you change the tempo -> http://puu.sh/2E30G
00:47:824 (1,2,3,4,5) Don't go with the beat of the song. please this beat change here -> http://puu.sh/2E33U

Good luck

Mythiax

637 posts

Joined August 2012

Mythiax 2013-04-21T06:12:38+00:00

Hi P A N

mafia here

[General]
Why different bg for all diffs? Just curios.

[Easy]
00:25:624 (6) - Male this slider straight? dunno, that shape looks ugly imo.
00:30:824 - Add note w/ clap

Hitounds:

It's really empty without these claps imo. At least you can add a few of them.
00:18:824 - Add clap in slider tick.
00:24:424 - ^
00:26:024 -
00:27:625 - ^
00:30:024 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:38:024 - ^
00:38:824 - ^
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:024 - ^
00:47:624 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:51:624 - ^
00:55:624 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:11:624 - ^
01:13:224 - ^
01:18:024 - ^
01:26:024 - ^
01:28:424 - ^

[Normal]
00:11:624 (3) - Add clap here.
00:12:824 (1) - Add clap at slider's arrow.
00:15:624 (2) - Move to x:320 y:140
00:16:024 (3) - Move to x:364 y:240
00:16:824 (4) - Move to x:160 y:248
Whit those 3 you make a better triangle there.
00:50:824 (3) - Add clap at slider's head.
01:06:024 (1) - Ctrl + J? Better flow.
01:18:424 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - How about this pattern? The current one looks akward imo

The code:

132,96,78424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,78824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,79224,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,120,79624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80024,2,0,L|344:296,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,80824,2,0,L|208:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,81624,2,0,L|128:288,2,99.9999999999999,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hitsounds:

Same as easy diff.
00:24:424 - Add clap in slider's tick.
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:824 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:57:224 - ^
00:58:824 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:05:224 - ^
01:12:424 - ^
01:24:424 - ^
01:25:224 -

Nice map o.o Good luck with it, Bye~

P A N

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-21T07:36:25+00:00

thank GG and Zero hentai for modding ><

Update my Diff ! (again)

Edit: Update SSS's Hard diff

Drianel

38 posts

Joined July 2011

Drianel 2013-04-23T01:24:21+00:00

Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator

this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2)
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too
01:15:724 Add circle?

>>>> SSS's Hard+ <<<<

01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you separate them a bit? hmm... dunno... something like this?

SPOILER

>>>> AsprikaQ's Hard <<<<

00:23:624 (1) - Move down y=288
01:07:224 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
01:25:624 (1,2) - hmmm this is ok but you can follow the other pattern like 01:26:824 (3,4) - (1 slider only)

That's all i think, i can't mod more cause it's almost done

Good luck with your map P A N^^

P A N

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-23T02:54:19+00:00

Drianel wrote:
Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall thanks ><

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? ok
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell ok
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid I think this one is ok :/
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2) ok
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too ok
01:15:724 Add circle? ok

thanks for modding Drianel
by the way thanks for the Shana pic
Update Insane!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2013-04-23T08:43:54+00:00

m4m~

[General]

Kiai 1 start on 01:00:024 ~ 01:11:224
Kiai 2 start on 01:12:824 ~ 01:25:624

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:20:024 ~ 00:29:424 - nothing hitsound?! add some hitsound like whistle..like here whistle00:20:024,00:21:624,00:23:224,00:24:024....
00:53:224 (2) - move to (388,268)
01:15:224 (1) - overlap on 01:14:024 (3)

[SSS's Hard+]

00:24:024 (4) - Clap on start of slider

i can't find any problem!

[Insane]

00:21:624 (1) - Perfectly Overlap on 00:20:024 (1)
00:26:424 (3) - finish
00:29:624 (1,2,3,4) - add finish on start slider
01:02:824 (5) - add whistle start slider
01:05:624 (4) - add whistle
01:06:424 (11) - finish
01:09:424 (5) - NC
01:22:224 (5) - add whistle body slider

Easy and Normal Diff is good
Good luck for Rank

P A N

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-23T11:51:01+00:00

thank for modding Pisces ><
Insane and SSS update
Easy Normal update for kial time

Erylex

Erylex 2013-04-24T08:40:00+00:00

Hi.

Mod via my queue.

I think offset=820
Resnap kiai.

Easy Diff

00:25:220 (5) - NC
00:29:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:820 (4) - Add NC
01:02:820 (4) - ^
01:03:220 (1) - Remove NC

Normal

00:19:624 (7) - Move to x=408 y=228
00:30:024 (2) - Move to x=312 y=216
00:32:424 (4) - NC
00:32:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:624 (4) - NC
00:54:624 (6) - NC
00:54:824 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:224 (3) - Move to x=160 y=168 (For symmetric)

AsprikaQ's Hard

Change circle stack to http://puu.sh/2G5FF.png
00:42:824 (5) - NC
00:45:624 (1) - Remove NC

01:21:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:424 (7) - Add NC

SSS`Hard

Many hard spacing.

Good luck. :3

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2013-04-24T09:13:41+00:00

okay lets go

from my queue

kinda good map so I found few points sorry..

MAKE YOUR AUDIO LEAD-IN SAME BY OPENING YOUR OSU FILE IN NOTEPAD
http://puu.sh/2G60O.png MATCH ALL OF YOUR DIFFS 1000

Easy

00:14:424 (1) - spacing
00:15:624 (2) - ^
00:36:424 (2,3) - ^
00:50:824 (3,1) - ^

Normal

00:09:224 (4,5) - spacing

omg good diff

Hard

00:23:624 (1,2,3) - make this more smooth-ly.. a bit too straight
01:14:024 (3,1) - stack you can move circle 3
01:16:624 (4,1) - make these same?
01:26:824 (3,4) - to give more fun, consistency, why don't you put same rhythm with the former one? 01:25:624 (1,2) - here

Hard+

00:12:024 (1) - just giving time for players to rest is better idea. remove
00:54:824 (4) - ctrl G? im not sure

Insane

00:10:024 (5,5) - stack you can move former slider
00:49:424 (2,1,3) - stack

kinda good job hope your map ranked

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-24T12:15:27+00:00

thank Clique and Erylex for modding ><

Easy Normal SSS Insane Updated

mercury2004

629 posts

Joined February 2010

mercury2004 2013-04-25T12:55:57+00:00

~~M&M~~ oops M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
you dont need to put another source name into the tag. remove Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!

Easy
HP drain - 1 . beat is pretty dense for easy difficult. if any newbie miss a part . he / she will fail the mapให้คนที่บ้านเล่นแล้วเฟล พลาดสไลตัวเดียวหายทั้งแถบ
AR-1
00:10:424 (1,2) - use 1 long slider
00:24:024 (4) - slightly unsymetrical
00:55:224 (1) - remove this and start spinner from there. end at 00:58:424

Normal
00:54:624 (6) - better nc here
00:54:824 (1) - and remove nc here

AsprikaQ's Hard
sliders shapes can still be improve, i'm not going to point it out. you should know it well
the first part note arrangement is kinda random, would be great of you arrange it in a symetrical way
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - good to avoid this pattern in hard dif
00:45:624 (1) - remove nc
01:11:224 (5,1,2,3) - pretty cunfusing jump. nc ing would fix
01:22:424 (5) - nc

SSS's Hard+
better like this. old one disrupt the flow

SPOILER

Insane
00:04:624 (2) - point this head to the another slider head
00:15:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - form star shape jump? like this ?

SPOILER

00:32:324 (6) - add note here. flow better
00:53:624 (9) - remove nc
00:53:824 (1) - nc

nothing much to say. this map were modded many time and most error are fixed. a bat attention would rank this soon\
แปะคุโด้ตามมารยาท

edited : spelling check

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-25T16:08:24+00:00

thanks for modding

Easy Normal and Insane Updated

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-25T18:26:57+00:00

hi P A N

General
add SSS in tags

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
- [Easy] : asprikaq meensss
- [Insane] : asprikaq meensss
- [Normal] : asprikaq meensss
- [SSS's Hard+] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [AsprikaQ's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [SSS's Hard+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:014, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

[easy]
00:03:624 (4) - Move to x:132 y:160
00:04:024 (1) - Move node to x:64 y:160
00:05:224 (2) - Move node to x:124 y:316 , move node #2 to {x:192 y:328}.

[normal]
00:05:624 (3) - Move node #2 to x:440 y:132, move node #3 to x:428 y:172, move node #9 to x:324 y:316
00:22:824 (5) - is out of the screen

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:20:424 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:42:424 (4) - Add NC.
01:14:424 (5) - Add NC.
01:15:224 (1) - remove NC.
01:16:024 (3) - Add NC.

[Insane]

01:00:024 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[SSS's Hard+]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:06:814 - snap to 00:06:824
00:20:214 - snap to 00:20:224
00:25:014 - snap to 00:25:024
00:26:614 - snap to 00:26:624
01:00:014 - snap to 01:00:024

nice mapset *.*

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-04-26T01:35:39+00:00

thanks for modding eLtigreXXx

my diff Update
Edit: Update SSS's Hard+

CrystilonZ

1,569 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2013-04-27T05:54:07+00:00

ดีครับ
จาก #thai นะ

General
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - พี่น่าจะทำเสียงให้เบาลงหน่อย ให้เข้ากับอารมณ์เพลงนิสนึง แล้วค่อยๆ ดังขึ้น

Easy
แค่แนะนำนะๆ
00:29:624 (1) - ทำเป็นครึ่งนึง แล้วย้อนเอา มันเข้ากับเนื้อร้องฝ่านะ

Normal
00:53:824 (5) - เอ้ะ ? จงใจให้เบี้ยว หรือยังไง
00:37:224 (3) - เลื่อนขึ้น ช่องนึง จะได้ดูดีขึ้นหน่อย มั้ง ?
พอจบแต่ละท่อน ใส่ Finish เข้าไปหน่อย น่าจะดูดีนะ(ทุกดิฟเลยแหล่ะ )

Asprika's Hard
00:20:224 (1) - ใส่โน้ตตัวนี้ตัวนึงไหม ? เนื้อร้องมามาตรงนี้ (หรือติ้กสีฟ้าก็ได้)

SSS's Hard
01:26:224 (2,2) - Finish หน่อย น่าจะดูดี

Insane
ดูดีแล้วแหล่ะ

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wmtokok

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wmtokok 2013-04-28T03:46:40+00:00

Hi
from #mod request

easy

very good

Normal

00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525

AsprikaQ's Hard

00:23:224 (4) - stack on 00:22:424 (3) tail

00:23:624 (1) - y:288

00:31:224 (5) - y:340

00:31:424 (6) - y:356

01:11:224 (5) - y:28

SSS's Hard+

00:33:624 (2) - too down can do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726370

01:15:224 (2) - y:232

Insane

00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332

done

I very like your map
good lucky

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-28T04:13:02+00:00

wmtokok wrote:
Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good thanks

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525 I make a star there, so not fix >_>

Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332 that's on my purpose

done

I very like your map
good lucky

thanks for modding and checking >_>

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-29T00:01:33+00:00

Update HS and SSS

Edit: Update AsprikaQ's Hard and Insane !!

Sorarei

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Sorarei 2013-04-30T02:36:27+00:00

[Insane]
at this time 00:29:624 it looks like 2 note pressed at same time ..
i thinks you must change that

P A N

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P A N 2013-04-30T03:02:53+00:00

omg.. that is not press at the same time 0.0

anyway thanks for check ><

Xinchii

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Xinchii 2013-05-01T17:33:29+00:00

Hello , from M4M

General

suggest to make hitsound more louder , I feel a little bit hard to hear the hitsound.

It may need to add "Opening" in Tag.

Easy

Seems great.

Normal

00:47:624 - Try this?

SPOILER

01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^

AsprikaQ's Hard

This diff didn't set viedo yet. Need to fix.

01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^

SSS's Hard+

Seems great.

Insane

00:10:424(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use whisle or special hitsound on this part?

00:53:024 - Add NC here.

00:55:424(2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too straight this part. I think it isn't a good flow.

01:22:824(1) - Maybe change this note by a slider from 01:22:824 - 01:23:024

Nice map.

Good lock~

captin1

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captin1 2013-05-01T22:40:26+00:00

Hey! From my queue~
sorry for delay, shit exams are shit

Easy

Replay
Not much to say from a play I guess hehe, just some nazi patterning things

00:02:424 (3) - should be the same slider as (1), you can just copy+paste and rotate 180 and it'll be in basically the right place
00:20:024 (1,2,3) - This could be a little more interesting, try this maybe?

SPOILER

00:24:024 (4) - node 1 to x320 y84, node 2 to x256 y112, node 3 to x180 y80, little better symmetry (adjust notes around for spacing

)
00:33:224 (1,3) - symmetry on these two is off too, I'd recommend using ^this slider to improve them
01:03:624 (2) - move up to y324, looks a bit better compared to (3,4,1)
01:15:224 (3,1,2) - x412 y92, x428 y228, x344 y316 in that order for symmetry over x axis
01:21:224 (3) - one grid right

Normal

Replay
oh noes, a couple 100's. I'm so bad ;_;

00:03:624 (4) - oh why not, grid right, pattern/spacing
00:08:424 (3) - x164 y144 for the triangle
00:09:824 (5) - second point to x480 y48, so that it's on the same angle as (1) after
00:16:024 (3) - grid space left for blanket
00:52:824 (2,3,4) - x212 y264, x304 y208, x376 y124 in that order. This puts 5 along a similar upwards curve as (1,2,3,4) which I think makes more sense
01:04:824 (4) - clap on tick here is considerably softer than the claps around it
01:07:224 (2,3,4) - clean up the blanket pattern here, it's off and not symmetrical
01:25:024 (4,1) - I would recommend ending (4) on 01:25:424 (silenced if you want) and starting (1) on the downbeat for consistency

AsprikaQ's Hard
Replay
Very nice, some of the early stacking beats are just a little uncomfortable to play, specifically 00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5), but overall great

00:00:224 (1) - I think you could start this on the blue tick where the actual drum starts, there's no tempo beforehand so it shouldn't make that big of a difference
00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend this rhythm to ease up on this part

SPOILER

00:22:424 (3) - up a grid for patterning
00:32:424 (6) - x228 y120 for triangle
01:01:424 (4,1) - Jump seems a little out of place. I'd recommend having (3,4) be x164 y260 and x140 y180, so it's less jarring
01:12:224 (5,1) - While this does fit well with the music, I feel like for this being the "easier" hard, it might be a bit much, and a lot of less skilled players will end up breaking combo here. Consider taking it down to around 2.20x or so
01:25:624 (1,2) - why don't you do this rhythm for all three closing notes? so 01:26:824 and 01:28:024

SSS's Hard+

Replay
Hmm..not sure what to think of this diff. Imo it's very nearly harder than the insane, due to the jumps here being more jarring and quite a bit higher. Couple spacing things that didn't agree with me either

00:09:624 (2,3) - Didn't like this at all. I'd suggest rotating it 90 so that it leads to and from the previous notes better
00:31:224 (1,2,3) - mmmmmmmmm rough to play. and not exactly fun either. the slow slider speed contrasts the pretty quick jump
00:59:824 (8,1) - this doesn't flow well, I think a ctrl+g on (1) feels better
01:07:224 (2,1) - still isn't fun to play this
01:22:224 (2,3,4) - this jump would make sense if you delete (2) and shift (3,4) over a red tick, so that the jump happens on the trumpet note

Insane

Replay
Some nice things happening here. I like the use of short slider to long slider like 00:01:424 (2,3), plays well and gives it a pretty interesting rhythm without resorting to excessive triplet streams

00:03:024 (3,4) - Here I would recommend going with this rhythm, as it fits better with the vocal and gives you a little more variation. (feel free to apply this wherever you feel it fits well)

SPOILER

00:28:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here, this pattern should have two clean-looking stars :3

SPOILER

224,320,28024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,352,28224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,269,28424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,186,28624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,218,28824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,139,29024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,55,29224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,83,29424,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:52:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

SPOILER

254,104,52224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,80,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,139,52624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,202,52824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,178,53024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,239,53224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,301,53424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,279,53624,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:55:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't you gradually increase the spacing here, like the first set one 1.2 like it is and maybe the second at 1.4? would work with the buildup in music
01:26:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have less spacing than you did for 01:25:624 (1,2,3,4)! it's so anti-climatic haha

All I got. Good luck!

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-02T01:26:05+00:00

thanks leon1341414

fix 75% of your mod

and thanks captin1 for test play and mod

change most of your mod

Update my diff! (Easy Normal Insane)

and SSS diff

Arrival

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Joined June 2012

Arrival 2013-05-03T11:26:22+00:00

Ok let's go,
From my queue.

[General]
You have to put the same tags on all of your diffs !

[Insane]
00:04:624 (2,3) - What about a better blanket, like this : http://puu.sh/2LW4M.jpg
00:34:424 (1) - A bit offscreen, but it's maybe not a problem
00:40:424 (6) - Strange, when you use 2 beats with 1/4 of time time spacing, you always take more space between them. What about something like this :
http://puu.sh/2LW9T.jpg Like this, you have a better flow, and you respect the spacing you used all along the map
00:44:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern has no real reason, i mean the music doesn't really change, ans star patterns are generally used when it's the case.
But this is just my personnal opinion.
01:12:824 (1) - Personnal opinion : Put this slider a bit to the left, so the (3) is totally blanketed
01:14:224 (4) - If you did what i wrote just before, stack this scircle with the start of the slider.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?

[SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS's Hard +]
00:08:824 (1,2) - It's me, or the two sliders should have their reverse arrow on a white tick to fit with the vocal ? Listen carefully, i think this will look better.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
01:01:624 (1) - NAZI : Place this slider a bit down so it's stacked with 01:00:024 (1) -
Nice diff here

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
01:24:424 (3) - What about place this circle like this : http://puu.sh/2LWnV.jpg , i find this better than 3 stacks
01:25:624 (1,2) - Here you can do a "two reverses slider" like you do here : 01:26:824 (3) - and here 01:28:024 (4) - , or change the two lasts sliders with a "circle-slider reverse", like this : http://puu.sh/2LWq7.jpg
Really nice diff !

[Normal]
00:31:424 (2) - A bit offscreen
00:39:624 (1,2,3) - I think you can do a better blanket on (2) here

[Easy]
00:14:424 (1,2,3) - A bit offcreen, try to respect the area of play.
That's all o/

Really nice mapset, it won't take time to be ranked anymore imo !

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-03T12:15:41+00:00

thanks Arrival for modding

fix 78% of your mod

tags fixed

Update : Easy Normal SSS Insane

buhei

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Joined February 2012

buhei 2013-05-03T12:45:15+00:00

from my queue

[Hard]
don't you think it too difficult?
00:00:824 (2) - NC
00:07:824 (3,4) - change into slider
00:16:424 (5) - delete
00:28:424 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:38:124 (3,4,5) - make them closer
00:46:424 (3) - delete finish and add clap at 00:46:824
00:55:224 (1) - move the head of this slider to 00:55:124
01:12:224 (5,1) - it's not fun
01:01:524 and01:03:124 and01:04:724 - add notes
01:14:324 and01:15:924 and01:17:524 - add notes
01:26:824 (3,4) - don't use too many reverses

[SSS]
hard+ --> insane
SV up
00:13:524 - miss a note
00:31:424 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:31:924 - ^
00:32:224 - ^
00:32:424 - ^
01:05:924 - ^
01:22:424 (3,4) - offbeat
need more work

GL

captin1

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captin1 2013-05-04T01:01:16+00:00

>.< forgot to mention a couple things, no kd

AsprikaQ's Hard

00:20:424 (2) - nc bug cause it's after a spinner, Q on it (even though it's already there lol)

Insane

01:00:024 (2) - same thing as ^

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-04T15:54:31+00:00

ok fixed ><

kuronotsubasa

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kuronotsubasa 2013-05-04T15:56:10+00:00

Hi! From my queue.
I'm a new modder so you can choose if follow my advice. It's ok.
General
Pls fix the tags the same as different difficult.
http://puu.sh/2MFUy.jpg
Pls reference about AIMOD(you don't need to fix some special promblems be shown on it)

actually I even can't come up with any problem. An excellent map!
Sorry :X
Hope your map can be ranked soon! :3

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-05T00:05:12+00:00

thanks for checking :3

indyinyou

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indyinyou 2013-05-05T05:17:57+00:00

xD

[Easy]
ช่วงเริ่มเพลงตั้งแต่ 00:00:824 - 00:04:824 รู้สึกว่าเสียงสไลติกมันเบากว่าเสียงตบมือที่ใส่แยกตั้งห่าง (ลองเพิ่มเสียงที่ใส่สไลติกสัก 5-8 %)

[Normal]
เรื่องเสียงสไลติกเหมือนของดิฟeasy
00:58:424 : try add spin to 01:00:024 (ถ้าไม่ใช้สปินก้ลบเสียงตบมือในสไลติกออก ตรงนี้ไม่ต้องใช้ ใส่เสียงแค่ 15 %)

[Insane]

00:29:624 : สไลเดอร์ลงเส้นแดงดีกว่าไหม (อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ)
00:30:024 : ^
00:30:424 : ^
00:30:824 : ^

ม๊อดแค่นี้แหละ

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-05T07:26:45+00:00

thanks indyinyou for modding ><

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2013-05-05T14:20:20+00:00

[Generel]
- Please change background of [SSS's Hard+] and [Easy]. (They're NFSW)
- Make sure all tag are same, maybe you don't need to add 'opening', but if you do, please do it on [SSS's Hard+] too.
- จริงๆ silence "normal-sliderslide" มันไม่ได้อ่ะ แต่เห็นมีคนได้แมพแรงค์ไปเร็วๆนี้ก็มี ไม่รู้ยังใส่ใจกันอยู่เปล่า
- Maybe use 824 as offset, so first note on [AsprikaQ's Hard] won't place before timing.
- New soft-slidertick2.wav
• Tips: Try to make slidetick volume when you hear it as same level as normal one,ปรับเสียงให้มันฟังดูแล้วความดังเท่าๆกับโน๊ตปกติด้วยนะ
- In fact, you don't have to use another green line 'on' red line, you can change volume and custom sound on red line too.

[Easy]
Neat ~

[Normal]
00:09:224 (4) - Missing clap at the start of slider?
00:11:624 (3) - Try finish instead of clap? It's like clap out of nowhere when there was kinda silence.
00:12:824 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? (The start of Kiai).

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- Resnap all notes.
00:00:224 (1) - This, a little bit off. Maybe start at 00:00:324 instead?

[SSS's Hard+]
Not bad.

[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - Anti-jump?
00:20:824 (5) - Add new combo? Make it easier to tell spacing changed.
00:44:824 (5) - ^
01:04:424 (3) - Suggestion, remove new combo and add new combo here 01:04:824 (1)? It's like wrong spacing to me, plus it looks better with song too.
01:22:824 (1) - Add clap at the start of slider? Like missing sound here.

Overall looks good, good luck!

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-05T15:12:34+00:00

thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-05-05T18:55:14+00:00

P A N wrote:
thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod

แล้ว 0.1 คือตรงไหน - -*

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-06T01:27:36+00:00

anti-jump งับไม่รู้เปลี่ยนดีไหมเพราะ mod ที่ผ่านมาเขาก็บอกให้วาง 6 ไว้ตรงกลางดาว

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-05-09T07:57:36+00:00

m4m

Insane
OD8 ;omg; -1 please ;w;
02:22:224 - looks bad maybe try with the 00:21:024 -
01:25:624 - clap maybe
01:26:824 - ^
01:28:024 - ^

SSS's Hard+
i suggest to change the SSS's to SSS' or Meen's
01:25:624(1,2) - clap maybe (end of slider) and the (2) delete finish and clap
01:26:824 - clap (end of slider) and delete clap at (2)

you just ask me to mod 2 diffs so there is it

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-09T08:34:32+00:00

sorry not fix ><

thanks for checking !

OEvil

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OEvil 2013-05-09T18:07:25+00:00

[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[General]

No Errors IMO
P.S: No Kudosu Plz

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-10T02:19:21+00:00

LOLLLLL

thanks for checking

Umi

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Umi 2013-05-10T16:55:17+00:00

hi hi from #Friends :3

Easy

- Well, really good diff, just 2-3 suggestion
- 00:54:024 (3,4) - align
- 00:55:224 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:824 (4,2) - align
nothing else

Normal

- 00:05:624 (3) - move to 408,88
- 00:26:824 (1) - ^ 108,76
- 00:28:824 (4) - ^ 400,192
- 00:36:424 (2,3) - align
- 00:56:824 (1,2) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748304
- 01:08:024 (3) - move to 176,180

Hard

- 00:07:824 (3,4) - little slider ?
- 01:14:024 (3) - move to 320,120 and so adjust 01:15:224 (3) - for stack

Insane

Fiuu - my favorite diff, just nothing to say >.< good job :3

That's all, really love this map take this (>'-')>

go go ranked

Kanari

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Kanari 2013-05-10T23:18:25+00:00

Haii ~
You requested via queue ~

[Normal]
- This difficulty should at least have one spinner to have some differences in score.
00:24:024 (2) - Line with (5) (x:68) 2nd point on x:372 y:148 and 3rd point on x:300 y:240
00:28:024 (3) - Make it the same as (1)

[Hard]
00:24:824 (1) - Remove new combo to keep the same pattern as the previous one.
00:25:224 (5) - New combo.

[Insane]
00:10:024 (5) - Place at the same place 00:11:624 (5) is? owo
00:24:024 (3) - New combo to follow your pattern.
00:27:024 (5) - ^
00:31:924 (5) - Place where 00:30:424 (3) was and move the last point up one grid.
00:35:024 (3) - Make this a staight slider and mvoe two grids to the right.
00:35:424 (4) - Move to x:312 y:204
00:35:624 (5) - One grid down.
01:05:824 (5) - New combo? owo

Nicely mapped!
Good luck and star! >w<

P A N

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P A N 2013-05-10T23:46:54+00:00

thanks -Umi- and xXCrystalMoonAnimXx for modding ><

-Umi- fix some
xXCrystalMoonAnimXx fix about 70%

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