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StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size)

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wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
wmtokok
Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good :)

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:23:224 (4) - stack on 00:22:424 (3) tail

00:23:624 (1) - y:288

00:31:224 (5) - y:340

00:31:424 (6) - y:356

01:11:224 (5) - y:28

SSS's Hard+
00:33:624 (2) - too down can do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726370

01:15:224 (2) - y:232

Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332

done :)

I very like your map
good lucky :)
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

wmtokok wrote:

Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good :) thanks :D

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525 I make a star there, so not fix >_>


Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332 that's on my purpose

done :)

I very like your map
good lucky :)
thanks for modding and checking >_>
P A N
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
Update HS and SSS

Edit: Update AsprikaQ's Hard and Insane !!
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Sorarei
[Insane]
at this time 00:29:624 it looks like 2 note pressed at same time ..
i thinks you must change that
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
omg.. that is not press at the same time 0.0

anyway thanks for check ><
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
Hello , from M4M

General

suggest to make hitsound more louder , I feel a little bit hard to hear the hitsound.

It may need to add "Opening" in Tag.


Easy

Seems great.


Normal

00:47:624 - Try this?
SPOILER
01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^


AsprikaQ's Hard

This diff didn't set viedo yet. Need to fix.

01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^


SSS's Hard+

Seems great.


Insane

00:10:424(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use whisle or special hitsound on this part?

00:53:024 - Add NC here.

00:55:424(2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too straight this part. I think it isn't a good flow.

01:22:824(1) - Maybe change this note by a slider from 01:22:824 - 01:23:024
Nice map.

Good lock~
captin1
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2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
Hey! From my queue~
sorry for delay, shit exams are shit

Easy

Replay
Not much to say from a play I guess hehe, just some nazi patterning things

00:02:424 (3) - should be the same slider as (1), you can just copy+paste and rotate 180 and it'll be in basically the right place
00:20:024 (1,2,3) - This could be a little more interesting, try this maybe?
SPOILER
00:24:024 (4) - node 1 to x320 y84, node 2 to x256 y112, node 3 to x180 y80, little better symmetry (adjust notes around for spacing ;))
00:33:224 (1,3) - symmetry on these two is off too, I'd recommend using ^this slider to improve them
01:03:624 (2) - move up to y324, looks a bit better compared to (3,4,1)
01:15:224 (3,1,2) - x412 y92, x428 y228, x344 y316 in that order for symmetry over x axis
01:21:224 (3) - one grid right

Normal

Replay
oh noes, a couple 100's. I'm so bad ;_;

00:03:624 (4) - oh why not, grid right, pattern/spacing
00:08:424 (3) - x164 y144 for the triangle
00:09:824 (5) - second point to x480 y48, so that it's on the same angle as (1) after
00:16:024 (3) - grid space left for blanket
00:52:824 (2,3,4) - x212 y264, x304 y208, x376 y124 in that order. This puts 5 along a similar upwards curve as (1,2,3,4) which I think makes more sense
01:04:824 (4) - clap on tick here is considerably softer than the claps around it
01:07:224 (2,3,4) - clean up the blanket pattern here, it's off and not symmetrical
01:25:024 (4,1) - I would recommend ending (4) on 01:25:424 (silenced if you want) and starting (1) on the downbeat for consistency

AsprikaQ's Hard
Replay
Very nice, some of the early stacking beats are just a little uncomfortable to play, specifically 00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5), but overall great

00:00:224 (1) - I think you could start this on the blue tick where the actual drum starts, there's no tempo beforehand so it shouldn't make that big of a difference
00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend this rhythm to ease up on this part
SPOILER
00:22:424 (3) - up a grid for patterning
00:32:424 (6) - x228 y120 for triangle
01:01:424 (4,1) - Jump seems a little out of place. I'd recommend having (3,4) be x164 y260 and x140 y180, so it's less jarring
01:12:224 (5,1) - While this does fit well with the music, I feel like for this being the "easier" hard, it might be a bit much, and a lot of less skilled players will end up breaking combo here. Consider taking it down to around 2.20x or so
01:25:624 (1,2) - why don't you do this rhythm for all three closing notes? so 01:26:824 and 01:28:024

SSS's Hard+

Replay
Hmm..not sure what to think of this diff. Imo it's very nearly harder than the insane, due to the jumps here being more jarring and quite a bit higher. Couple spacing things that didn't agree with me either

00:09:624 (2,3) - Didn't like this at all. I'd suggest rotating it 90 so that it leads to and from the previous notes better
00:31:224 (1,2,3) - mmmmmmmmm rough to play. and not exactly fun either. the slow slider speed contrasts the pretty quick jump
00:59:824 (8,1) - this doesn't flow well, I think a ctrl+g on (1) feels better
01:07:224 (2,1) - still isn't fun to play this
01:22:224 (2,3,4) - this jump would make sense if you delete (2) and shift (3,4) over a red tick, so that the jump happens on the trumpet note

Insane

Replay
Some nice things happening here. I like the use of short slider to long slider like 00:01:424 (2,3), plays well and gives it a pretty interesting rhythm without resorting to excessive triplet streams

00:03:024 (3,4) - Here I would recommend going with this rhythm, as it fits better with the vocal and gives you a little more variation. (feel free to apply this wherever you feel it fits well)
SPOILER
00:28:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here, this pattern should have two clean-looking stars :3
SPOILER
224,320,28024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,352,28224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,269,28424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,186,28624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,218,28824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,139,29024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,55,29224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,83,29424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:52:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
SPOILER
254,104,52224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,80,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,139,52624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,202,52824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,178,53024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,239,53224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,301,53424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,279,53624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:55:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't you gradually increase the spacing here, like the first set one 1.2 like it is and maybe the second at 1.4? would work with the buildup in music
01:26:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have less spacing than you did for 01:25:624 (1,2,3,4)! it's so anti-climatic haha

All I got. Good luck!
P A N
2,349 posts
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Topic Starter
P A N
thanks leon1341414

fix 75% of your mod

and thanks captin1 for test play and mod :D

change most of your mod

Update my diff! (Easy Normal Insane)

and SSS diff
Arrival
1,418 posts
Joined June 2012
Arrival
Ok let's go,
From my queue.

[General]
You have to put the same tags on all of your diffs !

[Insane]
00:04:624 (2,3) - What about a better blanket, like this : http://puu.sh/2LW4M.jpg
00:34:424 (1) - A bit offscreen, but it's maybe not a problem
00:40:424 (6) - Strange, when you use 2 beats with 1/4 of time time spacing, you always take more space between them. What about something like this :
http://puu.sh/2LW9T.jpg Like this, you have a better flow, and you respect the spacing you used all along the map
00:44:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern has no real reason, i mean the music doesn't really change, ans star patterns are generally used when it's the case.
But this is just my personnal opinion.
01:12:824 (1) - Personnal opinion : Put this slider a bit to the left, so the (3) is totally blanketed
01:14:224 (4) - If you did what i wrote just before, stack this scircle with the start of the slider.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?

[SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS's Hard +]
00:08:824 (1,2) - It's me, or the two sliders should have their reverse arrow on a white tick to fit with the vocal ? Listen carefully, i think this will look better.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
01:01:624 (1) - NAZI : Place this slider a bit down so it's stacked with 01:00:024 (1) -
Nice diff here

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
01:24:424 (3) - What about place this circle like this : http://puu.sh/2LWnV.jpg , i find this better than 3 stacks
01:25:624 (1,2) - Here you can do a "two reverses slider" like you do here : 01:26:824 (3) - and here 01:28:024 (4) - , or change the two lasts sliders with a "circle-slider reverse", like this : http://puu.sh/2LWq7.jpg
Really nice diff !

[Normal]
00:31:424 (2) - A bit offscreen
00:39:624 (1,2,3) - I think you can do a better blanket on (2) here

[Easy]
00:14:424 (1,2,3) - A bit offcreen, try to respect the area of play.
That's all o/

Really nice mapset, it won't take time to be ranked anymore imo !
P A N
2,349 posts
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Topic Starter
P A N
thanks Arrival for modding :D

fix 78% of your mod

tags fixed

Update : Easy Normal SSS Insane
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
from my queue

[Hard]
don't you think it too difficult?
00:00:824 (2) - NC
00:07:824 (3,4) - change into slider
00:16:424 (5) - delete
00:28:424 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:38:124 (3,4,5) - make them closer
00:46:424 (3) - delete finish and add clap at 00:46:824
00:55:224 (1) - move the head of this slider to 00:55:124
01:12:224 (5,1) - it's not fun
01:01:524 and01:03:124 and01:04:724 - add notes
01:14:324 and01:15:924 and01:17:524 - add notes
01:26:824 (3,4) - don't use too many reverses

[SSS]
hard+ --> insane
SV up
00:13:524 - miss a note
00:31:424 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:31:924 - ^
00:32:224 - ^
00:32:424 - ^
01:05:924 - ^
01:22:424 (3,4) - offbeat
need more work

GL
captin1
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2011
captin1
>.< forgot to mention a couple things, no kd

AsprikaQ's Hard

00:20:424 (2) - nc bug cause it's after a spinner, Q on it (even though it's already there lol)

Insane

01:00:024 (2) - same thing as ^
P A N
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P A N
ok fixed ><
kuronotsubasa
23 posts
Joined August 2010
kuronotsubasa
Hi! From my queue.
I'm a new modder so you can choose if follow my advice. It's ok.
General
Pls fix the tags the same as different difficult.
http://puu.sh/2MFUy.jpg
Pls reference about AIMOD(you don't need to fix some special promblems be shown on it)

actually I even can't come up with any problem. An excellent map!
Sorry :X
Hope your map can be ranked soon! :3
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for checking :3
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
xD

[Easy]
ช่วงเริ่มเพลงตั้งแต่ 00:00:824 - 00:04:824 รู้สึกว่าเสียงสไลติกมันเบากว่าเสียงตบมือที่ใส่แยกตั้งห่าง (ลองเพิ่มเสียงที่ใส่สไลติกสัก 5-8 %)

[Normal]
เรื่องเสียงสไลติกเหมือนของดิฟeasy
00:58:424 : try add spin to 01:00:024 (ถ้าไม่ใช้สปินก้ลบเสียงตบมือในสไลติกออก ตรงนี้ไม่ต้องใช้ ใส่เสียงแค่ 15 %)

[Insane]

00:29:624 : สไลเดอร์ลงเส้นแดงดีกว่าไหม (อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ)
00:30:024 : ^
00:30:424 : ^
00:30:824 : ^

ม๊อดแค่นี้แหละ :D :lol:
P A N
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P A N
thanks indyinyou for modding ><
orioncomet
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2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[Generel]
- Please change background of [SSS's Hard+] and [Easy]. (They're NFSW)
- Make sure all tag are same, maybe you don't need to add 'opening', but if you do, please do it on [SSS's Hard+] too.
- จริงๆ silence "normal-sliderslide" มันไม่ได้อ่ะ แต่เห็นมีคนได้แมพแรงค์ไปเร็วๆนี้ก็มี ไม่รู้ยังใส่ใจกันอยู่เปล่า
- Maybe use 824 as offset, so first note on [AsprikaQ's Hard] won't place before timing.
- New soft-slidertick2.wav
• Tips: Try to make slidetick volume when you hear it as same level as normal one,ปรับเสียงให้มันฟังดูแล้วความดังเท่าๆกับโน๊ตปกติด้วยนะ
- In fact, you don't have to use another green line 'on' red line, you can change volume and custom sound on red line too.

[Easy]
Neat ~

[Normal]
00:09:224 (4) - Missing clap at the start of slider?
00:11:624 (3) - Try finish instead of clap? It's like clap out of nowhere when there was kinda silence.
00:12:824 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? (The start of Kiai).

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- Resnap all notes.
00:00:224 (1) - This, a little bit off. Maybe start at 00:00:324 instead?

[SSS's Hard+]
Not bad.

[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - Anti-jump?
00:20:824 (5) - Add new combo? Make it easier to tell spacing changed.
00:44:824 (5) - ^
01:04:424 (3) - Suggestion, remove new combo and add new combo here 01:04:824 (1)? It's like wrong spacing to me, plus it looks better with song too.
01:22:824 (1) - Add clap at the start of slider? Like missing sound here.


Overall looks good, good luck!
P A N
2,349 posts
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P A N
thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne

P A N wrote:

thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><

fix 99.9% of your mod
แล้ว 0.1 คือตรงไหน - -*
P A N
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P A N
anti-jump งับไม่รู้เปลี่ยนดีไหมเพราะ mod ที่ผ่านมาเขาก็บอกให้วาง 6 ไว้ตรงกลางดาว
Niko-nyan
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Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
m4m

Insane
OD8 ;omg; -1 please ;w;
02:22:224 - looks bad maybe try with the 00:21:024 -
01:25:624 - clap maybe
01:26:824 - ^
01:28:024 - ^

SSS's Hard+
i suggest to change the SSS's to SSS' or Meen's
01:25:624(1,2) - clap maybe (end of slider) and the (2) delete finish and clap
01:26:824 - clap (end of slider) and delete clap at (2)

you just ask me to mod 2 diffs so there is it
P A N
2,349 posts
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P A N
sorry not fix ><

thanks for checking !
OEvil
299 posts
Joined December 2012
OEvil
[Hey, From My ♫♪♫♪♫ "OEvil" ♫♪♫♪♫ Modding Queues ]

[General]

No Errors IMO
P.S: No Kudosu Plz
P A N
2,349 posts
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P A N
LOLLLLL

thanks for checking
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Umi
hi hi from #Friends :3

Easy

- Well, really good diff, just 2-3 suggestion
- 00:54:024 (3,4) - align
- 00:55:224 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:824 (4,2) - align
nothing else :)

Normal

- 00:05:624 (3) - move to 408,88
- 00:26:824 (1) - ^ 108,76
- 00:28:824 (4) - ^ 400,192
- 00:36:424 (2,3) - align
- 00:56:824 (1,2) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748304
- 01:08:024 (3) - move to 176,180

Hard

- 00:07:824 (3,4) - little slider ?
- 01:14:024 (3) - move to 320,120 and so adjust 01:15:224 (3) - for stack

Insane

Fiuu - my favorite diff, just nothing to say >.< good job :3

That's all, really love this map take this (>'-')> go go ranked
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari



Haii ~
You requested via queue ~


[Normal]
- This difficulty should at least have one spinner to have some differences in score.
00:24:024 (2) - Line with (5) (x:68) 2nd point on x:372 y:148 and 3rd point on x:300 y:240
00:28:024 (3) - Make it the same as (1)


[Hard]
00:24:824 (1) - Remove new combo to keep the same pattern as the previous one.
00:25:224 (5) - New combo.


[Insane]
00:10:024 (5) - Place at the same place 00:11:624 (5) is? owo
00:24:024 (3) - New combo to follow your pattern.
00:27:024 (5) - ^
00:31:924 (5) - Place where 00:30:424 (3) was and move the last point up one grid.
00:35:024 (3) - Make this a staight slider and mvoe two grids to the right.
00:35:424 (4) - Move to x:312 y:204
00:35:624 (5) - One grid down.
01:05:824 (5) - New combo? owo


Nicely mapped!
Good luck and star! >w<
P A N
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P A N
thanks -Umi- and xXCrystalMoonAnimXx for modding ><

-Umi- fix some
xXCrystalMoonAnimXx fix about 70%
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Caught this map at #modreqs! I only test played the map! Some unique patterns you got there!
NO kudosu please!



/me runs
P A N
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P A N
thanks for play BeatofIke ><
[LikeSmile]
[LikeSmile]
Good map :3
Give star ~
P A N
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P A N
thanks for starrrrrr ><
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears.
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.)
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music.
SPOILER
[Insane]

Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely
01:05:424(2,3)^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this?
SPOILER

already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
P A N
2,349 posts
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P A N

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line fixed
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears. no, it will break the pattern after this
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this no, the current one maybe easier for FL player
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.) fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music. no, I want to have break after spinner
SPOILER
[Insane]

Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely no, I don't want it more hard D:
01:05:424(2,3)^ ^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this? sure
SPOILER

already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
thanks for modding :D and star!!
Kodora
Kodora
[General]

How nice bg! /me saves

*Anyway, i strongly recommend ask some BATs how much NSFW is it (and video too, it might be a problem).
*Audio Lead-In in all diffs - 2000, fix it manually using notepad
*Add to tags: noto arisa ogura yui ishihara kaori matsunaga maho
*adding to tags meensss just because he found offset for you is not nesessary, remove it
*also offset is slighty late for me, i'd use 822. if you will use id dont forget resnap all notes, green lines etc.

[Easy]

*HP Drain +1 for better ballance between diffs

00:12:824 (2) - NC since new part of song
00:14:024 - add a note, you missing strong beat here, sounds empty for me
00:14:424 (1) - if you will add note remove nc here then
01:26:824 (2) - remove clap

[Normal]

00:12:824 (1) - remove clap from reverse
00:20:024 (1,2) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:24:024 (2) - default slidertick sounds here better for me
00:25:224 (3,4) - really dont like how claps sounds here nvm i cant imagine better way
00:28:824 (4,1) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:30:024 (2,3) - spacing issue, close to 1.20
00:31:424 (2,3) - ^
00:32:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
00:39:624 (1,2) - ^
00:48:424 (4) - missed clap
00:48:424 (4,1) - stacked notes is always bad thing in relax diffs, try to avoid it
00:54:624 (1,2) - spacing issue, 1.20
00:58:424 (2,1) - spacing issue, 1.06
01:19:624 (2) - same about stacked note
01:21:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
01:25:024 (4) - nc should begins here, not at 01:25:624 (1) -
01:26:824 (2,3) - remove all claps from those sliders, thaey sounds just weird

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:00:224 (1) - slider should begins at 00:00:224 -
00:03:024 (3) - remove clap. really bad idea to create two rhytms with one clap, it sounds just bad.
00:03:124 (4) - ^
00:06:224 (4,1) - ^
00:08:224 (5) - ^,also nc should begins here, not at 00:08:624 (1) - follow your pattern and new part in music
00:09:424 (4,7) - ^
00:10:224 (7) - ^

imho it will be much better if you will replace all claps what i mentiored with default normal whistle

00:10:424 (1,2,3) - i'd add default whistles at the beginning of those sliders too
00:12:024 (1) - too suddenly spinner what really not fit here as well. just remove it and add short break
00:17:224 - add note here + clap for better rhytm
00:17:624 (4) - clap to the end of slider
00:20:224 - add note. vocals on this part is much stronger, so i suggest you focused on it
00:21:824 - ^
00:23:424 - ^
00:27:624 - add note + clap for better rhytm
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part is just called for normal default whistles, why you dont use it here? :\
00:45:024 - note for better rhytm
00:50:624 (3) - nc since you ended slowdown part here
00:53:624 - rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

00:56:424 (4) - strongly recommend delete repeat and add note at 00:56:824 - for better rhytm
01:06:324 - delete note here, it unneeded
01:12:224 (5) - nc since new part of music and for better readability
01:16:024 (1,3) - with such low ar it looks like pretty bad overlap, try to avoid it
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - delete all claps from here. also whistles fits more instead as for me

placement is pretty nice, i like it. just need some hitsounds & rhytm work :p

[Insane]

*Decrease AR and OD by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability
*Tickrate 1 sounds much better for me

00:45:024 (2) - rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

00:48:024 (2) - forgot clap at the end?
00:51:424 (4) - remove clap
00:57:224 (2,3,4,5) - just suggestion:

SPOILER

01:19:824 (6,2) - bad overlap, please try to avoid it
01:21:224 (5,2) - ^
01:26:024 (3) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - ^
01:28:424 (3) - ^

probably all. pretty solid mapset, good luck with rank
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for modding Kodora ><

nsfw - nah, maybe not :D
audio leadin - fixed
tags - will fix
offset - fix

Easy - 100% fixed
Normal - 50% fixed (don't fix spacing, I think its ok)
Hard - 90% fixed
Insane 85% fixed
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
second mod and irc ~
15:56 Xinely: btw irc mod?
15:56 P A N: ok
15:56 Xinely: easy 
15:56 Xinely: 00:46:822 (2) - x:152 y:320 better imo
15:56 Xinely: sorry
15:56 Xinely: i mean x:156 y:316
15:57 P A N: ok fix
15:57 Xinely: btw you need softsliderslide for avoid aa sound like "sreeeeet" in 00:47:622 - 00:48:022 - 
15:57 Xinely: to make it clear
15:58 Xinely: yap need softsliderslide2
15:59 Xinely: you can take in my map about sliderslide and rename soft-sliderslide2
15:59 P A N: ok
16:02 Xinely: 01:18:822 (4) - move it 88,212
16:02 Xinely: it's hard to catch for newbie, straight better
16:02 Xinely: fix spacing after this :P
16:03 P A N: oh god D:
16:03 Xinely: ;3;
16:03 Xinely: easy done
16:05 Xinely: still in easy? i will wait ~
16:06 P A N: ok
16:06 P A N: spacing fix
16:06 Xinely: go to normal~
16:06 Xinely: 00:11:622 - remove finish ><
16:07 P A N: ok
16:07 Xinely: 00:20:822 (2) - 252, 236? spacing 1,05x is it okay but if i were you i will avoid that :P
16:08 P A N: hm.. I think i not fix about spacing in normal
16:08 Xinely: ok
16:08 P A N: because i have easy already? D: is it okay
16:08 Xinely: ok ok
16:10 Xinely: 00:26:822 (1,3) - make this same shape slider 
16:10 Xinely: it's better xD
16:10 Xinely: you can remove (3) and copy paste from (1)
16:10 P A N: omg
16:10 P A N: how can i miss this
16:11 Xinely: ctrl+H and ctrl+G XD
16:13 Xinely: 00:52:822 (2) - 208,260
16:14 P A N: fix
16:14 Xinely: 00:54:822 (2) - spacing 1,20?
16:15 Xinely: 1,21 i mean
16:16 Xinely: and 00:58:422 (2) - spacing 1,16 <-- fix this~
16:17 P A N: ok
16:19 Xinely: 01:17:222 (3) - 164,176 for branket :3
16:20 Xinely: 01:22:822 (1) - ctrl+H this for better flow?
16:20 Xinely: wait, ctrl+J i mean X_X
16:20 P A N: lol
16:21 Xinely: bakanely -w-
16:21 P A N: ahh no ><
16:21 Xinely: normal done
16:22 P A N: ok
16:23 Xinely: hard, irc with you or with Guest diff mapper?
16:23 P A N: me
16:23 Xinely: ok
16:24 P A N: the own mapper nearly to quit osu >_>
16:24 Xinely: 00:00:822 (2) - NC this for consistency
16:24 Xinely: Q_Q
16:24 P A N: k nc
16:25 Xinely: 00:06:322 - remove finish?
16:25 P A N: ok
16:27 Xinely: 00:12:822 - i really suggest for add slider from here until 00:13:022 - 
16:27 Xinely: feels empty 
16:28 P A N: and swap nc with 00:13:222 - ? 0.0
16:29 Xinely: yap
16:33 Xinely: 00:20:222 (1) - ctrl+h and put in 248,112
16:33 Xinely: so far after spin suddenly in that
16:33 Xinely: make insta miss ~
16:34 Xinely: 00:25:022 (5) - add note in 116,184.. feel empty
16:36 Xinely: 00:53:222 (4) - ctrl+H
16:37 P A N: 00:25:022 - nah is this ok http://puu.sh/2SxDw.jpg
16:37 Xinely: 00:56:822 (1) - finish
16:37 Xinely: okay ~
16:40 Xinely: 01:04:422 (3) - personally, i want to add jump in here with ctrl+G 
16:40 P A N: ok ctrl g done
16:41 Xinely: 01:09:222 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - btw why spacing suddenly different (1,00x) in here?
16:41 Xinely: i don't think it's fit 
16:41 Xinely: i prefer still with normal spacing 1,1x
16:42 P A N: oh... god
16:42 Xinely: 01:17:622 - finish ~
16:42 Xinely: fix that spacing ~ it's awkward 
16:43 Xinely: and last 01:27:222 (4) - NC for consistency
16:43 P A N: ok, maybe when u mod Insane
16:43 P A N: I will fix hard's spacing? D:
16:44 Xinely: fix that first
16:44 Xinely: i will wait (:
16:44 P A N: oh thank you
16:44 Xinely: yw (:
16:46 Xinely: tell me when done in hard ~
16:46 P A N: ok ><
16:48 P A N: meh what do think about this jump http://puu.sh/2SxOE.jpg
16:48 P A N: is it to hard for hard?
16:48 Xinely: it's okay imo
16:48 P A N: ok then
16:49 Xinely: eh submit?
16:50 P A N: submit hard D:
16:50 P A N: or no
16:50 P A N: I cancle it now
16:50 Xinely: omg lol
16:50 Xinely: i didn't finish mod
16:50 Xinely: insane now?
16:50 P A N: ok I cancle it
16:50 P A N: lol
16:50 P A N: sure
16:50 Xinely: insane 
16:50 Xinely: 00:01:422 (2) - ctrl+G this, deathly 1/4 jump Q_Q
16:51 P A N: haha
16:51 P A N: ok done
16:52 Xinely: 00:14:622 (4) - deathly 1/4 jump too Q_Q
16:52 P A N: A_A
16:53 Xinely: 00:26:222 (1,3) - swap NC please
16:53 Xinely: ~
16:54 Xinely: 00:28:822 (1) - remove NC
16:55 Xinely: 00:32:222 - maybe add note here
16:56 Xinely: 00:36:022 (1) - ctrl+G better flow imo
16:56 Xinely: 00:42:422 (1) - ctrl+H~
16:57 Xinely: 00:58:422 (5) - NC for consistency ~
16:58 Xinely: 01:14:422 (5) - same as above
16:58 Xinely: 01:17:222 (3) - i think prefer ctrl+G 
16:59 Xinely: 01:27:422 (4) - oh lol 1 grid left
16:59 Xinely: eh? i mean right Q_Q
17:00 P A N: lol
17:00 Xinely: 01:28:622 (4) - 1 grid left
17:00 Xinely: done it

Good Luck again ~
P A N
2,349 posts
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Topic Starter
P A N
ahh thanks ><
fixed 94%
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
[เจเนหรา]

ไม่มีอะ

[Insane]

ดิฟนี้ มีการ NC ทุกๆ 4 beat ไม่แนะนำ เพราะว่า เวลาโดนโน๊ตที่ นิวคอมโบตัวใหม่มันจะได้เลือด ถ้ามันได้เลือดบ่อยๆแล้วมันจะง่ายเกิน
แนะนำให้ไล่ nc ที่ 8 beats จะดีกว่านี้
แนะนำว่าเพิ่ม AR อีกหนึ่งจะมันกว่าเยอะเล่นง่ายกว่าด้วย
00:11:922 (6) - นิวคอมโบตัวนี้ เพราะ โดน trap หลายรอบมาก ระยะ 4>5 5>6 มันไม่เท่ากัน

[หอยกาบดิฟ]

ถ้าอินเซนเป็น ar 9 ดิฟนี้ ar 8 ไปก็ดี เพราะโน๊ตแน่นเหมือนกัน (ไม่เปลี่ยนก็ดี คนม๊อดจะได้เล่น HR HD เก็บ PP ได้ <<

00:16:722 (7,1) - ลดสเปชระหว่างรัวให้เหลือ 0.6 เท่าโน๊ตก่อนๆซะ
00:45:622 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ไอ้ช่วงนี้อะ ถ้าจะเสมือนว่า โน๊ตตรงนี้เป็น bpm หารสองแบบไอ้ที่ทำอยู่เนี่ย
เขาใส่แคลปกันเส้นตรงกลาง คือ บีทที่สาม ของห้องเพลง
00:45:622 (1) - ขยับไปอีกบีท ไปทำเสียงแคลปตรงนี้แทน 00:46:422 (3) - ส่วนไอ้ที่เหลืออีกสองอันก็เหมือนๆกัน
ขยับไปอีก หนึ่งช่วง


[normal]

00:54:622 (1,2) - เรียงตรงนี้ให้ตรงๆหน่อยสไลเดอร์เฉไปทางขวาอีกนิด
01:25:622 (2,3,4) - แตกเป็น สไลเดอร์ 1/2 สองอันบ้างก็ได้

[Easy]


00:31:222 (3) - สไลเดอร์ตัวนี้ 00:31:922 จบตรงนี้ดีกว่า ตรงเสียงด้วย ไม่ต้องกลัวว่าลง 1/4 แล้ว player จะกดไม่ได้โน๊ตต่อไปสไลเดอร์ ระยะห่างก็เหลือเฟือ
00:37:622 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบ นี้ http://puu.sh/2SHqZ.jpg
01:25:622 (1,2,3) - ตรงนี้ ใช้ เสียงนกหวีดแบบ default normal ใส่ตรงหางของสไลเดอร์ทั้งสามอัน ถ้าคิดว่าเจ๋งก็ใส่ดิฟอื่นๆด้วย


แมพดีไม่ค่อยมีที่ให้ติ ให้ดาว
P A N
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P A N
thanks regenz
almost all fixed
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