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StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
P A N
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 พฤษภาคม 2556 at 16:09:18

Artist: StylipS
Title: Choose me Darling (TV Size)
Source: Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags: asprikaq opening
BPM: 150
Filesize: 15667kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. AsprikaQ's Hard (4.89 stars, 232 notes)
  2. Easy (2.21 stars, 92 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 299 notes)
  4. Normal (3.84 stars, 123 notes)
Download: StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size)
Download: StylipS - Choose me Darling (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap ><
Easy - me
Normal - me
AsprikaQ's hard - AsprikaQ
Insane - me
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special thank MEENSSS for offset
and scanter for video !!
redownload if you download it before 05/02/13
vey_old_1
some suggestion:
offset:790
maybe better. :)
Topic Starter
P A N
It's better, thanks :D
Fluabu
The song's bitrate is pretty high


Audio

The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT; they will be more than happy to help find an mp3 for you.
Source: http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
Topic Starter
P A N
ok will fix it
KantoKun
Oh!! I like this map. Can I do Insane GD? ;w;
Topic Starter
P A N
เดี๋ยวขอตัดสินใจก่อนนะคับ
Topic Starter
P A N
The song's bitrate is pretty high

is it ok? :3 i'm not sure
xHappy-
http://puu.sh/2lIdD
เอาอันใหม่ไปนะครับ พี่ปัง ^^
xHappy-
ระดับ SSS นี่่ผมขอmodก่อนเสร็จนะ อิอิ
00:03:990(1) - Nc
00:05:590(1) - อันนี้ใส่ nc ก็ได้ไม่ใส่ก็ได้แล้วแต่
00:07:190(1) - Nc
00:08:790(1) - Nc
00:10:390(1) - Nc
00:15:190(1) - Nc
00:16:990(1) - Nc
00:19:390 - add note
ที่เหลือทำต่อเลยครับ ^^
Topic Starter
P A N
ใจเยนสิเผื่อเขาทำใหม่อีก

Edit: easy 00:12:810 (1) - จบที่เส้นขาวนะครับ หรือที่ 00:13:610
StickyPicky
hi ~ :) #modreqs

:arrow: EASY

01:26:210 finish your Kiai Time here ~
00:29:610 / 00:50:410 (1) - / add finish here ~

:arrow: NORMAL

00:29:590 (1) - add finish ~
00:31:110 / 00:31:190 remove this 2 "green line" (Inherited Points) then Add Finish here 00:31:190 (5) - ~

:arrow: AsprikaQ's HARD

01:26:790 / 01:27:990 a whistle here please >.<

:arrow: INSANE

none ~ good job! XD

:arrow: SSS

SPOILER
i just notice, why is the Kiai Time here are not the same with the other diffs? >.<

SPOILER
Nice Beatmap! Goodluck ~ For rank! :)
Topic Starter
P A N
All fixed, thanks :)
Betsuto
SPOILER
20:44 Betsuto: [Easy]
20:45 Betsuto: ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้ LOL
20:45 P A N: - -
20:47 Betsuto: [Normal]
20:47 Betsuto: 00:29:590 - ลองวางโน๊ตรูปดาวใหม่ ให้มันงามกว่านี้นิดนึง =,=(มันเบี้ยวนิดนึง)
20:49 Betsuto: 00:49:990 - แก้เป็นแบบนี้ดีปะ http://puu.sh/2n5g3
20:50 Betsuto: 01:17:990 - ลองวางรูปดาวใหม่ มันเบี้ยวนิดหน่อย
20:51 Betsuto: หมดละ Normal
20:53 Betsuto: [AsprikaQ's Hard]
20:54 Betsuto: 00:15:990 - ตรงรัว 2 ตัว ท้ายสไลด์มันอยู่สูง มันเลยดูยาก เอาโน๊ต 7 ตัวสุดท้ายเลื่อนออกมาจาก 6
20:55 Betsuto: 00:38:690 - ย้าย (5) มาที่ x:296 y:288
20:58 Betsuto: 01:26:490 - ลองเปลี่ยนเป็นแบบนี้ดูน่าจะดี http://puu.sh/2n5rH ตัวข้างหลังด้วยนะด้วยนะ
21:00 P A N: normal 00:49:990 งี้ปะ http://puu.sh/2n5wD
21:04 Betsuto: แปปนะ
21:07 Betsuto: อืม งั้นก็ได้อยู่
21:07 Betsuto: Hard หมดละ
21:07 P A N: โอเคๆ
21:07 P A N: เช
21:07 Betsuto: [Insane]
21:14 Betsuto: โทษที แม่ดราม่า เลยมาช้า.. ต่อ
21:14 P A N: omg
21:15 Betsuto: 00:18:890 - New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:19:390 - Del New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:19:990 - New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:20:990 - Del New Combo
21:16 Betsuto: 00:21:790 - New Combo
21:17 Betsuto: 00:23:390 - New Combo
21:17 Betsuto: 00:23:790 - Del New Combo
21:18 Betsuto: 00:50:390 - ลองเปลี่ยนเป็นอย่างนี้ http://puu.sh/2n5Xe แล้วใส่ New Combo ด้วย
21:19 Betsuto: 01:12:190 - New Combo
21:19 Betsuto: 01:12:390 - Del New Combo
21:19 Betsuto: 01:12:790 - New Combo
21:19 Betsuto: 01:13:990 - Del New Combo
21:20 Betsuto: 01:14:990 - Newcombo
21:20 Betsuto: 01:15:590 - Del New Combo
21:20 Betsuto: 01:15:990 - New Combo
21:22 Betsuto: 01:21:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - กด Ctrl + H แล้วก็ Ctrl + J จะกลับด้าน แล้วเอา (1) เลื่อนมาที่ x:252 y:204
21:22 Betsuto: 01:27:990 - New Combo
21:23 Betsuto: แค่นี้แหละ Insane
21:24 Betsuto: [SSS]
21:24 Betsuto: 00:02:790 - New Combo
21:25 Betsuto: 00:05:990 - New Combo
21:26 Betsuto: 00:44:990 (5) - เลื่อนมาทางซ้าย 1 ช่อง
21:26 Betsuto: 00:46:390 - Del New Combo
21:27 Betsuto: 00:47:990 - Del New Combo
21:27 Betsuto: 00:50:590 - Del New Combo
21:27 Betsuto: 00:53:590 - New Combo
21:28 Betsuto: 01:11:390 - New Combo
21:28 Betsuto: 01:25:590 - New Combo
แมพดีอ้ะ !
เดี๋ยวปั๊ดแปะดาวซะเลย lol
// แปะ
Topic Starter
P A N
แปะสิ 5555

All fixed, thanks! :3

edit: thanks!!! star :)
aonkub555
แวะมาช่วยดูครับPAN

hitsound
เพลงนี้เสียงนกหวีดท่าจะเข้าได้ดี sampelset normal ใช้ เสียงhit กับ whistleสลับกันในช่วงที่เพลงมีเสียงกลอง
เสียงclapมันได้ยินตรงช่วงไม่มีเสียงกลอง อย่าง 00:20:410 ถึง 00:29:210 ส่วนช่วงเสียงกลองใส่เสียงนกหวีดอย่างที่ว่าดูเหมาะกว่า

Easy
เลื่อนสไลเดอร์ตรง 00:02:410 มาไว้ตรง 00:02:010 ดีกว่ามั้งคับ คำร้องเพลงมันเริ่มไปแล้วรู้สึกมันขาดช่วง แล้วใส่sliderเพิ่มตรงนี้? 00:03:210
ใส่โน๊ตเพิ่ม 00:08:010 ตรงนี้00:10:410เปลี่ยนเป็นสไลเดอร์สั้นๆ เข้ากับคำร้องดี http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670136
ช่วง 00:29:610 เปลี่ยนเป็นสไลเดอร์2สั้น2อัน http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670169 add finish 00:30:410 กับ 00:31:210 และ 00:32:010 มันยังอยู่ในช่วงส่งเสียงฉาบอะ

Normal
ช่วง00:56:790 ถึง 00:59:590 เปลี่ยนเป็นspinก็เข้าดี
ช่วงkiai time เพิ่มความไวไสเดอร์เป็นx1.10 น่าจะดี

AsprikaQ's Hard
หนุกดี แต่MVหายปายหนาย :cry:

Insane
nothing say :D

SSS
MV หายปายหนาย too :)

ทั้งหมดนี้แค่ความคิดเห็นผมนะครับ ถ้าไม่ถูกใจก็Ignoreเลย :)
Wataru
Hi modding
General : วิดีโอ easy ไม่มีครับ แก้ที

EASY
:idea: *พยายามทำให้จุดต้นและจุดจบอยู่บน y หรือ x เดียวกันนะครับ เพื่อความสมมาตรและสวยงาม*
00:00:824 (1) - เลื่อนจุดจบมาที่ y 256
00:02:424 (2) - y 124

:idea: ทำเท่าที่ทำได้ อันไหนคิดว่าไม่เวิร์คก็ไม่ต้องทำ

01:19:624 (3) - จุดจบ y 124
01:19:624 (3) - จุดจบ y 264 แล้วเลื่อนคอมโบถัดมาให้มันถูก Distance
ไม่มีอะไรมาก easy

NORMAL
00:06:224 (1) - เอาโค้งลงดีกว่าครับ จุดตรงกลางเลื่อนลงมา x 364 y 252
ไม่มีอะไรจริงๆ -____- แมพดีเกิน

HARD
เป็น hard ที่เกิน hard ไปนิด
00:52:424 (2,3) - แบบนี้ดีกว่านะ แบบเก่าเดี๋ยวคนงง ลืมโดด
ไม่มีอะไรจะแก้จริงๆ

SSS
ลด Approach Rate เหลือ 8 พอ
00:08:424 (3,4,5,6) - Hitsound แปลกชะมัด แก้ที
00:37:424 (6,7,8) - รัวห่างไปม้างงงงงงงงงง
00:59:824 (6) - x392 y100
ไม่มีอะไรละแต่ยากเว่ออออออออออ แนะนำให้ทำแมพแข่งกับ 0108 ฮา

insane
00:06:024 (1,2,3) -
ไม่มีอะไรแก้ละ

Thanks
Topic Starter
P A N
ok fixed something D:, thanks
AsprikaQ
http://puu.sh/2pBjZ

Fixed something.
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks star ><
nattap_old
//ลอยมาหาพร้อมถือดาวมาด้วย
โหลดแบบ no video มาครับไม่ได้เช็ค video ให้นา
ถ้าผิดภาษาไปแปลเอาเองละกัน :P

[Easy]
ไม่อยากทำให้เละนะ

[Normal]
tick rate 1?

[Hard]
00:24:990 (5) - make the red waypoint centered to the slider or make it parallel with 00:25:990 (6,7) but If it's just visual aid that 4 is longer than 3 It's okay
00:57:190 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion : can you make a square with 00:56:390 (3) tail as a starting point and make it like this http://puu.sh/2pZG1
01:26:790 (3,4) - a circle stack on 3 beat repeat slider may be better.

[SSS]
01:20:590 (1,1) - ต้องการ NC เหรอ ผมว่าไม่นะ
01:28:590 (2) - finish sound มั้ย

[Insane]
01:15:390 (2,3,4) - 2ไป3 กับ 3ไป4 มันคนละระยะกันอะ

จะเก่งไปไหนเนี่ย
//ยิงดาวใส่หัว P A N //เผ่น
Topic Starter
P A N
Normal, Insane, SSS all fixed !

คนทำ hard คนไทยคับ 55

thanks!
AsprikaQ

nattap wrote:

[Hard]
00:24:990 (5) - make the red waypoint centered to the slider or make it parallel with 00:25:990 (6,7) but If it's just visual aid that 4 is longer than 3 It's okay
I don't really get what you mean but it's okay the it looks now.
00:57:190 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion : can you make a square with 00:56:390 (3) tail as a starting point and make it like this http://puu.sh/2pZG1 Fixed.
01:26:790 (3,4) - a circle stack on 3 beat repeat slider may be better. It's okay the way it's now

Thx for modding!

http://puu.sh/2q1Vb Fixed diff
Topic Starter
P A N
Updated !
Mikkuri
~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
combo color ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
audio lead in ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
จะเอา countdown ใส่หรือออกให้มันเหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย
ใส่ tag ให้เหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย
offset ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย
ปรับ offset แล้วอย่าลืม resnap เส้นเขียว โดยเฉพาะ kiai time
Easy Normal ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปดิ ตรง break อะ

[Easy]
hitsound ไม่มีปัญหา
แต่เสียงช่วง 20 วิแรกที่มันเพลงมันเบาๆก็ลดเสียงเส้นเขียวหน่อยดิ เสียง hitsound มันดัง

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy เบา hitsound ช่วงนั้นหน่อย
ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อดเหมือนกัน
  1. 00:25:190 (2) - add clap head
  2. 00:25:790 (3) - add clap tail
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
เบาเสียง hitsound ช่วง 20 วิแบบที่เพิ่งม็อด Easy Normal ไป
เริ่มโน้ตให้มันเหมือนชาวบ้านหน่อย วางหลังเส้นแดงไม่ได้นะแจ้ะ :3
ม็อด hitsound ยากสัส
จะ remix ใช่ปะ? ก็ได้ จัดไป ม็อดแบบ remix
  1. 00:06:790 (2) - add clap
  2. 00:08:590 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:490 (5) - remove clap tail
  4. 00:17:190 - add note แล้วใส่ clap ไปก็ได้ เสียงมันหาย
  5. 00:17:590 (5) - add clap tail
  6. 00:39:990 (4) - remove whistle tail
  7. 00:57:590 (2) - remove finish มันไม่ได้เข้ากับเพลงเลย -_-
  8. 01:27:990 (4) - remove clap at 2nd reverse
[SSS]
clap แรกๆก็โอเคอยู่หรอก หลังๆทำไมมันหนวกหูจัง 5555 ให้ปังใส่ให้ก็ได้
  1. 00:07:190 (1) - add finish head
  2. 00:08:390 (3) - add clap
  3. 00:45:590 (2) - add finish head
โอยปวดตับ

[Insane]
เบาช่วง 20 วิเหมือนที่ม็อดมา
  1. 00:05:990 (1,2,3) - แปลกๆว่ะไอ 3 ตัวนี้ ก็อบโค้ดนี่ไปลง
    256,72,5990,6,0,L|280:24,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,148,6390,2,0,L|256:192,3,42.5
    352,120,6790,2,0,L|372:80,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:17:990 (2) - add clap
  3. 00:19:390 (3) - add clap tail
  4. 00:18:390 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - จังหวะแม่งมั่วไปหมด ขี้เกียจทำโค้ดให้ จัดเองละกัน
  5. 00:31:790 (4) - remove finish tail
  6. 00:31:990 (5) - add finish head
  7. 00:42:390 (1) - ^
  8. 00:50:590 (2) - add clap tail
  9. 00:58:590 (1) - add clap? เหมือนจะไม่เข้า ปล่อยไว้งั้นแหละ
  10. 01:16:590 (2) - add whistle tail
  11. 01:22:190 (5) - ^
  12. 01:25:190 (9) - add clap head
  13. 01:25:390 (10) - add whistle head
  14. 01:25:790 (2) - remove whistle
That's all
Topic Starter
P A N

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
combo color ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
audio lead in ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย เท่ากันอยู่เเล้วหนิ -0-
จะเอา countdown ใส่หรือออกให้มันเหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
ใส่ tag ให้เหมือนกันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
offset ปรับให้เท่ากันทุกดิฟด้วย fixed
ปรับ offset แล้วอย่าลืม resnap เส้นเขียว โดยเฉพาะ kiai time fixed
Easy Normal ใส่โน้ตเพิ่มไปดิ ตรง break อะ fixed

[Easy]
hitsound ไม่มีปัญหา
แต่เสียงช่วง 20 วิแรกที่มันเพลงมันเบาๆก็ลดเสียงเส้นเขียวหน่อยดิ เสียง hitsound มันดัง fixed

[Normal]
เหมือน Easy เบา hitsound ช่วงนั้นหน่อย fixed
ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อดเหมือนกัน
  1. 00:25:190 (2) - add clap head fixed
  2. 00:25:790 (3) - add clap tai fixed
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
เบาเสียง hitsound ช่วง 20 วิแบบที่เพิ่งม็อด Easy Normal ไป
เริ่มโน้ตให้มันเหมือนชาวบ้านหน่อย วางหลังเส้นแดงไม่ได้นะแจ้ะ :3
ม็อด hitsound ยากสัส
จะ remix ใช่ปะ? ก็ได้ จัดไป ม็อดแบบ remix
  1. 00:06:790 (2) - add clap
  2. 00:08:590 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:490 (5) - remove clap tail
  4. 00:17:190 - add note แล้วใส่ clap ไปก็ได้ เสียงมันหาย
  5. 00:17:590 (5) - add clap tail
  6. 00:39:990 (4) - remove whistle tail
  7. 00:57:590 (2) - remove finish มันไม่ได้เข้ากับเพลงเลย -_-
  8. 01:27:990 (4) - remove clap at 2nd reverse
[SSS]
clap แรกๆก็โอเคอยู่หรอก หลังๆทำไมมันหนวกหูจัง 5555 ให้ปังใส่ให้ก็ได้
  1. 00:07:190 (1) - add finish head fixed
  2. 00:08:390 (3) - add clap fixed
  3. 00:45:590 (2) - add finish headfixed
โอยปวดตับ

[Insane]
เบาช่วง 20 วิเหมือนที่ม็อดมา fixed
  1. 00:05:990 (1,2,3) - แปลกๆว่ะไอ 3 ตัวนี้ ก็อบโค้ดนี่ไปลง fixed
    256,72,5990,6,0,L|280:24,3,42.5,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,148,6390,2,0,L|256:192,3,42.5
    352,120,6790,2,0,L|372:80,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:17:990 (2) - add clap fixed
  3. 00:19:390 (3) - add clap tail fixed
  4. 00:18:390 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - จังหวะแม่งมั่วไปหมด ขี้เกียจทำโค้ดให้ จัดเองละกัน fixed
  5. 00:31:790 (4) - remove finish tail fixed
  6. 00:31:990 (5) - add finish head fixed
  7. 00:42:390 (1) - ^ fixed
  8. 00:50:590 (2) - add clap tail fixed
  9. 00:58:590 (1) - add clap? เหมือนจะไม่เข้า ปล่อยไว้งั้นแหละ D:
  10. 01:16:590 (2) - add whistle tail fixed
  11. 01:22:190 (5) - ^ fixed
  12. 01:25:190 (9) - add clap head fixed
  13. 01:25:390 (10) - add whistle head fixed
  14. 01:25:790 (2) - remove whistlefixed
That's all
Thank you Mickey ><
moonlightleaf
From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

General
if has not special meaning ,suggest using one BG

Easy
00:11:624(2) end at 00:12:024

00:45:624(1) a general silder is better than this

01:17:624(1) ^

01:20:824 add note

00:02:039 ^ ?

00:08:024 ^

00:26:824 ^

00:34:424 ^

00:40:824 ^ pefer 00:36:024(3)

Normal
AR-1

00:05:624(3)(1) is not so link up,just try → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681006

00:15:624(5) change to note , 00:16:224(6) move to 00:16:024

00:25:824(3)(4) pefer ↑

00:31:224(5)(1)(2) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681023

put note at 00:37:624 and 00:38:024 and 00:38:424 replace00:37:624(1)(2)

00:50:643(6)delete,00:51:024(7) move to 00:50:824

01:26:824overlap is not so good, just pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681093

Insane
00:02:224(5) it's head and end exchange (Ctrl+G)

00:05:424(5) ^

00:14:624(3) ^

00:35:424(8) ^

01:12:424(2) ^

00:04:624(2) rotate80((Ctrl+Shift+R) then move to x|128 y|320

00:19:809(13)delete 00:19:424(12) add a return

00:20:824(5) five-pointed star , maybe movt to x|188 y|316 ? acc can use Polygon Creator(Crtl+Shift+D)

00:21:424(7) the same place as (5)

00:21:624(8) x|104 y|172

00:28:024to00:29:424five-pointed star can make better

00:44:024 ^

00:53:024(5)(6)(7)(8) ^

01:09:824(6) move behind (4) ?

SSS
00:45:424(1) 2notes replace

01:05:924(9)delete http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681257

01:20:024to01:21:424 maybe better → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681269

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:424(2)(4) delete

00:03:124(4) move to 00:03:224 end at00:03:424

00:04:624(2)(3) http://puu.sh/2qHIL

00:05:424(5)(6)(7)(1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681289

00:08:124(5) delete

00:33:624(1) end at 00:33:824

00:35:224(4) end at 00:35:424

00:40:024(4) end at 00:40:224

00:41:624(1) end at 00:41:824

don't hide slider's head and end
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moonlightleaf wrote:

From my queue,some suggestion hope can help you >w<

General
if has not special meaning ,suggest using one BG

Easy
00:11:624(2) end at 00:12:024 the rhymth a bit weird

00:45:624(1) a general silder is better than this fixed

01:17:624(1) ^ fixed

01:20:824 add note fixed

00:02:039 ^ ? fixed

00:08:024 ^ fixed

00:26:824 ^ fixed

00:34:424 ^ fixed

00:40:824 ^ pefer 00:36:024(3) I like the old one

Normal
AR-1 fixed

00:05:624(3)(1) is not so link up,just try → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681006 fixed

00:15:624(5) change to note , 00:16:224(6) move to 00:16:024 fixed

00:25:824(3)(4) pefer ↑ I like the old one ><

00:31:224(5)(1)(2) pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681023 fixed

put note at 00:37:624 and 00:38:024 and 00:38:424 replace00:37:624(1)(2) the rhymth a bit weird

00:50:643(6)delete,00:51:024(7) move to 00:50:824 hmm I try the new rhymth

01:26:824overlap is not so good, just pefer → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681093fixed

Insane
00:02:224(5) it's head and end exchange (Ctrl+G) fixed

00:05:424(5) ^ fixed

00:14:624(3) ^ fixed

00:35:424(8) ^ fixed

01:12:424(2) ^ fixed

00:04:624(2) rotate80((Ctrl+Shift+R) then move to x|128 y|320 fixed but a bit left

00:19:809(13)delete 00:19:424(12) add a return fixed

00:20:824(5) five-pointed star , maybe movt to x|188 y|316 ? acc can use Polygon Creator(Crtl+Shift+D) fixed

00:21:424(7) the same place as (5) fixed

00:21:624(8) x|104 y|172 fixed

00:28:024to00:29:424five-pointed star can make better fixed

00:44:024 ^ fixed

00:53:024(5)(6)(7)(8) ^ fixed

01:09:824(6) move behind (4) ?fixed
ok thanks for your mod ><
xHappy-
Easy
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
Normal
01:10:824- 01:11:424- มือใหม่กดไม่ทันแน่ๆ =__=
AsprikaQ's Hard
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
SSS
ไม่มีอะไรให้แก้
Insane
01:23:024- add note
Good luck อาจ mod ได้แค่นี้ =w=
Foxxer_old
SSS

00:08:624 (4,5,6) - These notes are strange, change this.
00:14:824 (3,4,5) - Approach these notes a little bit.
00:16:424 (8,9,1) - ^
00:44:624 (2,3,4) - ^
00:50:624 (3) - Its far on the time line, so, its confused if it is on the slider. Move this.
01:02:824 (9,1) - I think its very far.
01:21:624 (1,2,3) - A slider with reverse arrow will be better.

Good Luck~
787B
Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that.

Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns?
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume.
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ?

Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .
00:52:824 - Add a note here?
00:53:624 - ^

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - Even though this is an Hard, I wouldn't recommed doing this in the very beginning of the map. As far as I know, on 00:00:224 - is the first beat I can hear, so this is actually confusing to read.
00:16:324 (6,7) - I wouldn't stack those notes, they kinda ruin the flow here, consider doing a triplet: http://puu.sh/2vQBn
00:20:224 (1,2,3) - Try placing them on a different line, feels kinda weird to play them after the spin.

SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here.

Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo.
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good.

Good luck!
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ok, I will come to fix it >< thanks
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Wolf wrote:

Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!

General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that. fixed

Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns? fixed
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume. fixed
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ? no, the rhymth a bit weird and the note will approach while it spin

Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .fixed to another thing
00:52:824 - Add a note here? fixed
00:53:624 - ^ fixed

SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here. fixed

Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo. fixed
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo fixed
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo fixed
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo fixed
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good. fixed

Good luck!
thanks ><
niceplayer
from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help.

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good.
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same.

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
Hard... With 00:00:424 (1,2,3,4), that's more than a insane. Remove them.
I guess you like to put most difficult in front. OK, your will is permitted.
00:04:624 (2,3,4) - Death pattern which I'd like to call. Even that 3 didn't catch the accents! Pass it is able ,but rhythm is terrible
00:10:224 (7) - Right down make it same distant to 6 and to next tag.
00:16:295 - (6,7) put them in the end of slider or drag 7 out. No such pattern before.
00:41:624 (2) - Vocal in 00:41:824 but tag end in 00:41:924
01:03:224 (1) - 01:06:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK these are fun. And others are boring in Kiai.


[SSS]
You can't change the pattern in everywhere of the map. Hitcircle and slider type is good in the beginning. But strangely changed after.
00:15:124 (4,5) - 00:16:745 - 00:29:934 - 00:51:124 - 00:51:524 - 00:55:124
I guess it will feel better if you put the slider back the same position of circle.

00:52:224 (1) - Not good flow.
01:13:224 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 is easier to read to be together imo.

[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset?
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume.
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound.
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4.

A random place suggestion

SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns.


I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
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niceplayer wrote:

from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help. thanks but i'm afraid the postion of note will bad (lazy to remap D:)

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good. m-maybe u not update normal yet? D:
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same. fixed


[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset? fixed
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume. fixed
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound. fixed
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4. no its look a bit weird

A random place suggestion

SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns. fixed


I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
thank you niceplayer
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Easy Normal SSS and Insane Updated
Sieg
Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH

AsprikaQ's Hard:
this is too overmapped to be hard, I won't mod this, sorry orz

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) -

SSS:
seems fine

Good Luck!
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Sieg wrote:

Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder ok delete

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm ok
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better ok

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2 ok
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH ok

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1 ok
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc ok
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit ok
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) - fixed

Good Luck!
thank for modding Sieg ><
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All Update!
Topic Starter
P A N
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83699

ah fail wating someone to delete it
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:)
Totoro
Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x?

00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC

00:32:824 (3) - NC

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:28:024 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle would look better

00:29:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket

00:40:624 (5,6,1,2) - square would fit better

00:47:224 (1,2) - this blanket doesnt fit imo

01:12:024 (1) - Remove NC

01:12:824 (3) - NC

01:18:824 (1) - remove NC

01:19:224 (3) - NC

[SSS]

00:53:624 (1) - ctrl+g

00:54:024 (2) - ^

00:54:424 (3) - ^

00:54:824 (4) - ^

01:20:024 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - slanted shape

[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical

nice diff
Azer
Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
  1. 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders.
  2. 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  3. 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack
  4. 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924
  5. 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  6. 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion
  7. 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section.
  8. 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong.
  9. 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^
  10. 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to
  11. 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency.
  12. 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider.

AsprikaQ's Hard
  1. 01:12:024 (1) - Remove this note
  2. There's honestly nothing else I can see that could be improved, good job all around.
Topic Starter
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sorry for delay but I will come to fix it and give u kds, please wait ><
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-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

thank you

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x? I want 1.0x because it look basic? I think..
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error fixed

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^ fixed

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^ fixed

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance the (2) is flip horizontally from 00:25:624 (3) - already

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error fixed

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape ok I will wait for another one talk about this the i will fix

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell ok

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error no

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC ok

00:32:824 (3) - NC ok

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error no

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^ no

I dont want to fix the distance of Normal because I have Easy already and thank you :3


[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered ok

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical how to symmetrical D:

nice diff
thank you for mod ><

AzerFrost wrote:

Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
  1. 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders. b-but I love this :(
  2. 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little :(
  3. 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack ok
  4. 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924 ok
  5. 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  6. 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion ok
  7. 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section. ok
  8. 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong. :/
  9. 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^ ok
  10. 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to ok
  11. 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency. ok
  12. 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider. hmm.. I think it's ok :/
thanks both for modding ><
AsprikaQ
http://puu.sh/2BQ5F Everything from -iCo- and AzerFrost's mod fixed. :)
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All Updated!!
Xinely
Hi P A N (:
from m4m in game

[General]
1. use Choose me♡ダーリン (TV Size) in title? and Romanised title is Choose me Darling (TV Size)
2. Remove letterbox during breaks in all diff , no need this because this map without break time
3. in SSS diff. Rename become SSS's Hard+? First i think it's Insane+ (read as S.S diff oh lol)
4. 00:13:624 - kiai on and off in 00:13:724 - (kiai fountain)

[Easy]
00:02:024 (2) - 1 grid left?
00:08:424 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:11:924 - clap?
00:11:624 - ^
00:15:624 (2) - 1 grid left or remap the position, i think newbie hard to catch if circle in up on slider's tail
00:20:824 (2) - ^
00:17:224 (4) - NC and remove 00:18:424 (1) -
00:20:024 (2) - NC this
00:24:024 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712806 , if yes 00:25:224 (2) - x:116 y:64
00:36:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:48:824 (4,1) - ^
00:39:624 (4) - NC
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - hard to catch. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712818?
00:55:224 (1) - whistle in slider's body?
01:05:624 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712826?
01:16:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:19:624 (3) - NC for consistency
01:22:424 (1) - x:156 y:188 for same line with 01:20:824 (4) -, fix the spacing after this note if you follow this

[Normal]
AR+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:824 (2) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712834 imo
00:05:624 (3) - last node x:312,y:316
00:06:824 - clap?
00:09:224 (4) - curved for consistent with 00:08:424 (3) - ?
00:12:824 (1) - curved? ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712861
00:15:224 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:23:624 (6,1) - ^
00:19:624 (4) - 1 grid right
00:22:824 (5) - straight same as 00:21:224 (3) - ?
00:26:824 (1) - spacing issue (1,04x)
00:31:424 (6) - spacing issue (1,22)
00:32:624 (9) - x:56 y:144
00:48:824 (4) - NC for consistency
00:51:624 (4) - 1 grid right better imo
00:53:224 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:54:624 - add note for follow vocal?
01:00:024 - kiai time on in here, in timing point 01:00:044 (unsnapped)
01:09:624 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:28:624 - finish

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
HP+1 and OD+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:624 (2) - x:280 y:332, better flow imo
00:05:824 (6) - x: 380 y:160?
00:05:424 (5,1) - swap NC? because you NC always in downbeat
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:07:824 (3) - remove clap?
00:08:624 (1,2) - use 0,6 spacing same as 00:07:824 (3,4) - ?
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - you can make jump in here.. ex : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713004
00:13:624 (4) - NC? because you NC in every downbeat
00:24:824 (4) - ^
00:15:824 (4) - unstack please, maybe in x:392 y:40 for make jump too
00:15:024 (1,3) - swap NC?
00:23:624 (1) - spacing issue (0,87x)
00:38:424 (4) - ctrl+G? better imo
00:56:024 (2) - ^
00:46:424 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713017
00:47:224 - remove finish.. i think not follow the music
01:04:424 (3) - spacing issue (1,04x)
01:12:224 (4) - ctrl+G? to avoid jump 2,74x too QAQ
01:15:224 (1) - better if stacked with 01:14:024 (3) -
NC problem which must give NC in every downbeat (long white tick) or every 2 downbeat

[SSS]
hmmm little crazy normal spacing is 2,00 (opinion)
00:00:824 - Finish
00:08:824 (5,6) - omg... jump 4,17x (more than insane imo)
00:13:624 - Finish and remove clap
01:00:024 - ^
in here too. NC problem.. if you NC every downbeat. NC them.. like 00:13:624 - until 00:20:024 - you NC every 2 downbeat.
And in00:21:824 - until 00:26:424 - you NC every downbeat.
And also about Finish.. you need them heavy music. you can look which one need finish in Easy diff

[Insane]
00:08:824 - NC please because u NC in everydownbeat
00:24:824 (6) - ^
00:34:424 (5) - ^
00:47:224 (4) - ^
00:58:424 (5) - ^
01:09:424 (5) - ^
01:14:424 (5) - ^
01:24:024 (6) - ^
00:21:624 (8,1) - swap NC
00:36:024 (10,1) - ^
00:39:824 (1,6) - ^
00:45:624 (9,1) - ^
00:53:624 (8,1) - ^
00:52:024 (7,1) - ^
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
01:17:624 (5,1) - ^
here SS that i play.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713036
Comment : nice insane.. fun to play.. i enjoy play this diff :oops:

Well, i love this song.. Star for it
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[General]

Tag conflict with SSS's Hard+ diff
SSS's Hard Tag = asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
All diff Tag = asprikaq imouto meensss

Hit sound used in the song does not go with the song,
please put the sound and hit


[Easy]

00:00:824 remove green line why this line volume 40% red line volume down here
00:03:624 i think this part add note because very awkward sound is feels hollow.
00:26:424 (6,7,1) hmm.. In my opinion, this pattern is hard.
I wish you smooth flow a little more, making the slider example this -> http://puu.sh/2E2iW
00:30:824 (1,2) If you have the above modifications, equally.
00:48:824 (1) This is slider unbalance i think 2 red point move x:220 y:32 is really perfect here


[Normal]

00:16:024 (2,3) I think this pattern blanket here -> http://puu.sh/2E2rr
00:20:824 (1,2,3) hmm this pattern can make a more unique shape -> http://puu.sh/2E2uf <- Triangular-shape
00:24:024 (2) This is slider move please x:344 y:96 really pretty Triangular-shape
00:27:624 (2,3) Ineligible pattern read by normal users i think this pattern change here -> http://puu.sh/2E2yi
00:31:224 (5) New combo
01:15:624 (4,1) Please this pattern normal users read is hard i think change this pattern -> http://puu.sh/2E2CS
01:19:424 (4,5,1,2,3) I think this pattern shape is pentagon? -> http://puu.sh/2E2EN


[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:45:224 (1) remove NC
00:51:624 (6,7,8,9,10) hmm.. This is pattern distance check please i don't understand this pattern specing
00:55:024 (2,3) I think this pattern beat awkward because 00:55:124 make sure to adjust the tempo to match lyrics


[SSS's Hard]

00:54:824 (4,5,1) Please change the direction of the slider to the natural flow Ctrl+G
01:21:624 (1) ^


[Insane]

00:31:924 I think this part add note becasue this part of the drum sound is heard
00:46:224 (7,8,1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern really awkward
It is recommended that you change the tempo -> http://puu.sh/2E30G
00:47:824 (1,2,3,4,5) Don't go with the beat of the song. please this beat change here -> http://puu.sh/2E33U



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