thanks ><Wolf wrote:
Hi.
I'm a member in -Cloudchaser's Modding Queue, so I'll be taking your request.
Let's go!
General
All kiais should finish at 01:25:624 -, it doesn't make sense ending in 01:26:224 - because of the vocals. Only in AsprikaQ's Hard the kiai is correct, so take a look on that. fixed
Easy
00:07:224 (4) - New Combo to match with vocals and previous patterns? fixed
00:29:624 (3) - Also suggesting New Combo here for the sudden change of volume. fixed
00:56:824 (1) - Extend to 00:59:224 - ? no, the rhymth a bit weird and the note will approach while it spin
Normal
00:31:224 (5,6,1) - I quite don't like those notes here because it kinda ruins the flow. Would be nice if you do something like 00:32:424 (2,3,4) - .fixed to another thing
00:52:824 - Add a note here? fixed
00:53:624 - ^ fixed
SSS
Excessively clap hitsounds on this diff. Consider reworking on overall hitsounding of it.
Besides that, I couldn't find anything wrong here. fixed
Insane
00:07:124 - I'd delete this note, it quite doesn't match with the song imo. fixed
00:13:624 (4) - New Combo fixed
00:14:024 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:16:824 (8) - New Combo fixed
00:17:624 (1) - Remove New Combo fixed
00:18:424 (3) - New Combo fixed
Nothing much I can add here. Your patterns are quite good. fixed
Good luck!
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Topic Starter
from #modreqs
Take me hours god.
[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help.
[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good.
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same.
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
Hard... With 00:00:424 (1,2,3,4), that's more than a insane. Remove them.
I guess you like to put most difficult in front. OK, your will is permitted.
00:04:624 (2,3,4) - Death pattern which I'd like to call. Even that 3 didn't catch the accents! Pass it is able ,but rhythm is terrible
00:10:224 (7) - Right down make it same distant to 6 and to next tag.
00:16:295 - (6,7) put them in the end of slider or drag 7 out. No such pattern before.
00:41:624 (2) - Vocal in 00:41:824 but tag end in 00:41:924
01:03:224 (1) - 01:06:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK these are fun. And others are boring in Kiai.
[SSS]
You can't change the pattern in everywhere of the map. Hitcircle and slider type is good in the beginning. But strangely changed after.
00:15:124 (4,5) - 00:16:745 - 00:29:934 - 00:51:124 - 00:51:524 - 00:55:124
I guess it will feel better if you put the slider back the same position of circle.
00:52:224 (1) - Not good flow.
01:13:224 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 is easier to read to be together imo.
[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability
00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset?
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume.
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound.
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4.
A random place suggestion
01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns.
I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
Take me hours god.
[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help.
[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good.
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same.
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
Hard... With 00:00:424 (1,2,3,4), that's more than a insane. Remove them.
I guess you like to put most difficult in front. OK, your will is permitted.
00:04:624 (2,3,4) - Death pattern which I'd like to call. Even that 3 didn't catch the accents! Pass it is able ,but rhythm is terrible
00:10:224 (7) - Right down make it same distant to 6 and to next tag.
00:16:295 - (6,7) put them in the end of slider or drag 7 out. No such pattern before.
00:41:624 (2) - Vocal in 00:41:824 but tag end in 00:41:924
01:03:224 (1) - 01:06:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK these are fun. And others are boring in Kiai.
[SSS]
You can't change the pattern in everywhere of the map. Hitcircle and slider type is good in the beginning. But strangely changed after.
00:15:124 (4,5) - 00:16:745 - 00:29:934 - 00:51:124 - 00:51:524 - 00:55:124
I guess it will feel better if you put the slider back the same position of circle.
00:52:224 (1) - Not good flow.
01:13:224 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 is easier to read to be together imo.
[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability
00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset?
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume.
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound.
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4.
SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224
256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85
01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns.
I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
Topic Starter
thank you niceplayerniceplayer wrote:
from #modreqs
Take me hours god.
[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help. thanks but i'm afraid the postion of note will bad (lazy to remap D:)
[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good. m-maybe u not update normal yet? D:
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same. fixed
[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability
00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset? fixed
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume. fixed
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound. fixed
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4. no its look a bit weirdA random place suggestion SPOILERI like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85
01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns. fixed
I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
Topic Starter
Easy Normal SSS and Insane Updated
Hello
Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder
Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better
Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH
AsprikaQ's Hard:
this is too overmapped to be hard, I won't mod this, sorry orz
Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) -
SSS:
seems fine
Good Luck!
Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder
Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better
Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH
AsprikaQ's Hard:
this is too overmapped to be hard, I won't mod this, sorry orz
Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) -
SSS:
seems fine
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
thank for modding Sieg ><Sieg wrote:
Hello
Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder ok delete
Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm ok
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better ok
Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2 ok
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH ok
Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1 ok
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc ok
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit ok
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) - fixed
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
All Update!
Topic Starter
Topic Starter
Yo! From my modding Queue~
[General]
Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.
Love the difficulties too~~
[Easy]
I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x?
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error
00:08:024 (2,1) - ^
00:12:824 (3,1) - ^
00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance
00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error
01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^
[Normal]
00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape
00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell
00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error
00:31:624 (1) - remove NC
00:32:824 (3) - NC
00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:28:024 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle would look better
00:29:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket
00:40:624 (5,6,1,2) - square would fit better
00:47:224 (1,2) - this blanket doesnt fit imo
01:12:024 (1) - Remove NC
01:12:824 (3) - NC
01:18:824 (1) - remove NC
01:19:224 (3) - NC
[SSS]
00:53:624 (1) - ctrl+g
00:54:024 (2) - ^
00:54:424 (3) - ^
00:54:824 (4) - ^
01:20:024 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - slanted shape
[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered
01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical
nice diff
[General]
Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.
Love the difficulties too~~
[Easy]
I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x?
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error
00:08:024 (2,1) - ^
00:12:824 (3,1) - ^
00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance
00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error
01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^
[Normal]
00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape
00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell
00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error
00:31:624 (1) - remove NC
00:32:824 (3) - NC
00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:28:024 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle would look better
00:29:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket
00:40:624 (5,6,1,2) - square would fit better
00:47:224 (1,2) - this blanket doesnt fit imo
01:12:024 (1) - Remove NC
01:12:824 (3) - NC
01:18:824 (1) - remove NC
01:19:224 (3) - NC
[SSS]
00:53:624 (1) - ctrl+g
00:54:024 (2) - ^
00:54:424 (3) - ^
00:54:824 (4) - ^
01:20:024 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - slanted shape
[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered
01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical
nice diff
Hii~
m4m ^w^
m4m ^w^
Insane
- 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders.
- 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
- 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack
- 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924
- 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
- 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion
- 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section.
- 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong.
- 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^
- 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from
to
- 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency.
- 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider.
AsprikaQ's Hard
- 01:12:024 (1) - Remove this note
- There's honestly nothing else I can see that could be improved, good job all around.
Topic Starter
sorry for delay but I will come to fix it and give u kds, please wait ><
Topic Starter
thank you for mod ><-iCo- wrote:
Yo! From my modding Queue~
[General]
Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.
Love the difficulties too~~
thank you
[Easy]
I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x? I want 1.0x because it look basic? I think..
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error fixed
00:08:024 (2,1) - ^ fixed
00:12:824 (3,1) - ^ fixed
00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance the (2) is flip horizontally from 00:25:624 (3) - already
00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error fixed
01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed
[Normal]
00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape ok I will wait for another one talk about this the i will fix
00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell ok
00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error no
00:31:624 (1) - remove NC ok
00:32:824 (3) - NC ok
00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error no
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^ no
I dont want to fix the distance of Normal because I have Easy already and thank you :3
[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered ok
01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical how to symmetrical D:
nice diff
thanks both for modding ><AzerFrost wrote:
Hii~
m4m ^w^Insane
- 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders. b-but I love this
- 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little :(
- 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack ok
- 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924 ok
- 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
- 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion ok
- 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section. ok
- 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong. :/
- 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^ ok
- 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from
ok
- 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency. ok
- 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider. hmm.. I think it's ok :/
AsprikaQ
http://puu.sh/2BQ5F Everything from -iCo- and AzerFrost's mod fixed.
Topic Starter
All Updated!!
Hi P A N (:
from m4m in game
[General]
1. use Choose me♡ダーリン (TV Size) in title? and Romanised title is Choose me Darling (TV Size)
2. Remove letterbox during breaks in all diff , no need this because this map without break time
3. in SSS diff. Rename become SSS's Hard+? First i think it's Insane+ (read as S.S diff oh lol)
4. 00:13:624 - kiai on and off in 00:13:724 - (kiai fountain)
[Easy]
00:02:024 (2) - 1 grid left?
00:08:424 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:11:924 - clap?
00:11:624 - ^
00:15:624 (2) - 1 grid left or remap the position, i think newbie hard to catch if circle in up on slider's tail
00:20:824 (2) - ^
00:17:224 (4) - NC and remove 00:18:424 (1) -
00:20:024 (2) - NC this
00:24:024 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712806 , if yes 00:25:224 (2) - x:116 y:64
00:36:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:48:824 (4,1) - ^
00:39:624 (4) - NC
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - hard to catch. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712818?
00:55:224 (1) - whistle in slider's body?
01:05:624 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712826?
01:16:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:19:624 (3) - NC for consistency
01:22:424 (1) - x:156 y:188 for same line with 01:20:824 (4) -, fix the spacing after this note if you follow this
[Normal]
AR+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:824 (2) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712834 imo
00:05:624 (3) - last node x:312,y:316
00:06:824 - clap?
00:09:224 (4) - curved for consistent with 00:08:424 (3) - ?
00:12:824 (1) - curved? ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712861
00:15:224 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:23:624 (6,1) - ^
00:19:624 (4) - 1 grid right
00:22:824 (5) - straight same as 00:21:224 (3) - ?
00:26:824 (1) - spacing issue (1,04x)
00:31:424 (6) - spacing issue (1,22)
00:32:624 (9) - x:56 y:144
00:48:824 (4) - NC for consistency
00:51:624 (4) - 1 grid right better imo
00:53:224 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:54:624 - add note for follow vocal?
01:00:024 - kiai time on in here, in timing point 01:00:044 (unsnapped)
01:09:624 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:28:624 - finish
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
HP+1 and OD+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:624 (2) - x:280 y:332, better flow imo
00:05:824 (6) - x: 380 y:160?
00:05:424 (5,1) - swap NC? because you NC always in downbeat
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:07:824 (3) - remove clap?
00:08:624 (1,2) - use 0,6 spacing same as 00:07:824 (3,4) - ?
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - you can make jump in here.. ex : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713004
00:13:624 (4) - NC? because you NC in every downbeat
00:24:824 (4) - ^
00:15:824 (4) - unstack please, maybe in x:392 y:40 for make jump too
00:15:024 (1,3) - swap NC?
00:23:624 (1) - spacing issue (0,87x)
00:38:424 (4) - ctrl+G? better imo
00:56:024 (2) - ^
00:46:424 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713017
00:47:224 - remove finish.. i think not follow the music
01:04:424 (3) - spacing issue (1,04x)
01:12:224 (4) - ctrl+G? to avoid jump 2,74x too QAQ
01:15:224 (1) - better if stacked with 01:14:024 (3) -
NC problem which must give NC in every downbeat (long white tick) or every 2 downbeat
[SSS]
hmmm little crazy normal spacing is 2,00 (opinion)
00:00:824 - Finish
00:08:824 (5,6) - omg... jump 4,17x (more than insane imo)
00:13:624 - Finish and remove clap
01:00:024 - ^
in here too. NC problem.. if you NC every downbeat. NC them.. like 00:13:624 - until 00:20:024 - you NC every 2 downbeat.
And in00:21:824 - until 00:26:424 - you NC every downbeat.
And also about Finish.. you need them heavy music. you can look which one need finish in Easy diff
[Insane]
00:08:824 - NC please because u NC in everydownbeat
00:24:824 (6) - ^
00:34:424 (5) - ^
00:47:224 (4) - ^
00:58:424 (5) - ^
01:09:424 (5) - ^
01:14:424 (5) - ^
01:24:024 (6) - ^
00:21:624 (8,1) - swap NC
00:36:024 (10,1) - ^
00:39:824 (1,6) - ^
00:45:624 (9,1) - ^
00:53:624 (8,1) - ^
00:52:024 (7,1) - ^
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
01:17:624 (5,1) - ^
here SS that i play.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713036
Comment : nice insane.. fun to play.. i enjoy play this diff
Well, i love this song.. Star for it
Good Luck All!! >3<
from m4m in game
[General]
1. use Choose me♡ダーリン (TV Size) in title? and Romanised title is Choose me Darling (TV Size)
2. Remove letterbox during breaks in all diff , no need this because this map without break time
3. in SSS diff. Rename become SSS's Hard+? First i think it's Insane+ (read as S.S diff oh lol)
4. 00:13:624 - kiai on and off in 00:13:724 - (kiai fountain)
[Easy]
00:02:024 (2) - 1 grid left?
00:08:424 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:11:924 - clap?
00:11:624 - ^
00:15:624 (2) - 1 grid left or remap the position, i think newbie hard to catch if circle in up on slider's tail
00:20:824 (2) - ^
00:17:224 (4) - NC and remove 00:18:424 (1) -
00:20:024 (2) - NC this
00:24:024 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712806 , if yes 00:25:224 (2) - x:116 y:64
00:36:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:48:824 (4,1) - ^
00:39:624 (4) - NC
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - hard to catch. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712818?
00:55:224 (1) - whistle in slider's body?
01:05:624 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712826?
01:16:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:19:624 (3) - NC for consistency
01:22:424 (1) - x:156 y:188 for same line with 01:20:824 (4) -, fix the spacing after this note if you follow this
[Normal]
AR+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:824 (2) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712834 imo
00:05:624 (3) - last node x:312,y:316
00:06:824 - clap?
00:09:224 (4) - curved for consistent with 00:08:424 (3) - ?
00:12:824 (1) - curved? ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712861
00:15:224 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:23:624 (6,1) - ^
00:19:624 (4) - 1 grid right
00:22:824 (5) - straight same as 00:21:224 (3) - ?
00:26:824 (1) - spacing issue (1,04x)
00:31:424 (6) - spacing issue (1,22)
00:32:624 (9) - x:56 y:144
00:48:824 (4) - NC for consistency
00:51:624 (4) - 1 grid right better imo
00:53:224 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:54:624 - add note for follow vocal?
01:00:024 - kiai time on in here, in timing point 01:00:044 (unsnapped)
01:09:624 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:28:624 - finish
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
HP+1 and OD+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:624 (2) - x:280 y:332, better flow imo
00:05:824 (6) - x: 380 y:160?
00:05:424 (5,1) - swap NC? because you NC always in downbeat
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:07:824 (3) - remove clap?
00:08:624 (1,2) - use 0,6 spacing same as 00:07:824 (3,4) - ?
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - you can make jump in here.. ex : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713004
00:13:624 (4) - NC? because you NC in every downbeat
00:24:824 (4) - ^
00:15:824 (4) - unstack please, maybe in x:392 y:40 for make jump too
00:15:024 (1,3) - swap NC?
00:23:624 (1) - spacing issue (0,87x)
00:38:424 (4) - ctrl+G? better imo
00:56:024 (2) - ^
00:46:424 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713017
00:47:224 - remove finish.. i think not follow the music
01:04:424 (3) - spacing issue (1,04x)
01:12:224 (4) - ctrl+G? to avoid jump 2,74x too QAQ
01:15:224 (1) - better if stacked with 01:14:024 (3) -
NC problem which must give NC in every downbeat (long white tick) or every 2 downbeat
[SSS]
hmmm little crazy normal spacing is 2,00 (opinion)
00:00:824 - Finish
00:08:824 (5,6) - omg... jump 4,17x (more than insane imo)
00:13:624 - Finish and remove clap
01:00:024 - ^
in here too. NC problem.. if you NC every downbeat. NC them.. like 00:13:624 - until 00:20:024 - you NC every 2 downbeat.
And in00:21:824 - until 00:26:424 - you NC every downbeat.
And also about Finish.. you need them heavy music. you can look which one need finish in Easy diff
[Insane]
00:08:824 - NC please because u NC in everydownbeat
00:24:824 (6) - ^
00:34:424 (5) - ^
00:47:224 (4) - ^
00:58:424 (5) - ^
01:09:424 (5) - ^
01:14:424 (5) - ^
01:24:024 (6) - ^
00:21:624 (8,1) - swap NC
00:36:024 (10,1) - ^
00:39:824 (1,6) - ^
00:45:624 (9,1) - ^
00:53:624 (8,1) - ^
00:52:024 (7,1) - ^
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
01:17:624 (5,1) - ^
here SS that i play.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713036
Comment : nice insane.. fun to play.. i enjoy play this diff
Well, i love this song.. Star for it
Good Luck All!! >3<
Topic Starter
thanks Xinely for modding ><
Update my diffs!
Update my diffs!
Hi P A N (:3 」_)=3
From my m4m queue
Good luck
From my m4m queue
[General]
Tag conflict with SSS's Hard+ diff
SSS's Hard Tag = asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
All diff Tag = asprikaq imouto meensss
Hit sound used in the song does not go with the song,
please put the sound and hit
Tag conflict with SSS's Hard+ diff
SSS's Hard Tag = asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
All diff Tag = asprikaq imouto meensss
Hit sound used in the song does not go with the song,
please put the sound and hit
[Easy]
00:00:824 remove green line why this line volume 40% red line volume down here
00:03:624 i think this part add note because very awkward sound is feels hollow.
00:26:424 (6,7,1) hmm.. In my opinion, this pattern is hard.
I wish you smooth flow a little more, making the slider example this -> http://puu.sh/2E2iW
00:30:824 (1,2) If you have the above modifications, equally.
00:48:824 (1) This is slider unbalance i think 2 red point move x:220 y:32 is really perfect here
00:00:824 remove green line why this line volume 40% red line volume down here
00:03:624 i think this part add note because very awkward sound is feels hollow.
00:26:424 (6,7,1) hmm.. In my opinion, this pattern is hard.
I wish you smooth flow a little more, making the slider example this -> http://puu.sh/2E2iW
00:30:824 (1,2) If you have the above modifications, equally.
00:48:824 (1) This is slider unbalance i think 2 red point move x:220 y:32 is really perfect here
[Normal]
00:16:024 (2,3) I think this pattern blanket here -> http://puu.sh/2E2rr
00:20:824 (1,2,3) hmm this pattern can make a more unique shape -> http://puu.sh/2E2uf <- Triangular-shape
00:24:024 (2) This is slider move please x:344 y:96 really pretty Triangular-shape
00:27:624 (2,3) Ineligible pattern read by normal users i think this pattern change here -> http://puu.sh/2E2yi
00:31:224 (5) New combo
01:15:624 (4,1) Please this pattern normal users read is hard i think change this pattern -> http://puu.sh/2E2CS
01:19:424 (4,5,1,2,3) I think this pattern shape is pentagon? -> http://puu.sh/2E2EN
00:16:024 (2,3) I think this pattern blanket here -> http://puu.sh/2E2rr
00:20:824 (1,2,3) hmm this pattern can make a more unique shape -> http://puu.sh/2E2uf <- Triangular-shape
00:24:024 (2) This is slider move please x:344 y:96 really pretty Triangular-shape
00:27:624 (2,3) Ineligible pattern read by normal users i think this pattern change here -> http://puu.sh/2E2yi
00:31:224 (5) New combo
01:15:624 (4,1) Please this pattern normal users read is hard i think change this pattern -> http://puu.sh/2E2CS
01:19:424 (4,5,1,2,3) I think this pattern shape is pentagon? -> http://puu.sh/2E2EN
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:45:224 (1) remove NC
00:51:624 (6,7,8,9,10) hmm.. This is pattern distance check please i don't understand this pattern specing
00:55:024 (2,3) I think this pattern beat awkward because 00:55:124 make sure to adjust the tempo to match lyrics
00:45:224 (1) remove NC
00:51:624 (6,7,8,9,10) hmm.. This is pattern distance check please i don't understand this pattern specing
00:55:024 (2,3) I think this pattern beat awkward because 00:55:124 make sure to adjust the tempo to match lyrics
[SSS's Hard]
00:54:824 (4,5,1) Please change the direction of the slider to the natural flow Ctrl+G
01:21:624 (1) ^
00:54:824 (4,5,1) Please change the direction of the slider to the natural flow Ctrl+G
01:21:624 (1) ^
[Insane]
00:31:924 I think this part add note becasue this part of the drum sound is heard
00:46:224 (7,8,1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern really awkward
It is recommended that you change the tempo -> http://puu.sh/2E30G
00:47:824 (1,2,3,4,5) Don't go with the beat of the song. please this beat change here -> http://puu.sh/2E33U
00:31:924 I think this part add note becasue this part of the drum sound is heard
00:46:224 (7,8,1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern really awkward
It is recommended that you change the tempo -> http://puu.sh/2E30G
00:47:824 (1,2,3,4,5) Don't go with the beat of the song. please this beat change here -> http://puu.sh/2E33U
Good luck
Hi P A N
mafia here
[General]
Why different bg for all diffs? Just curios.
[Easy]
00:25:624 (6) - Male this slider straight? dunno, that shape looks ugly imo.
00:30:824 - Add note w/ clap
Hitounds:
[Normal]
00:11:624 (3) - Add clap here.
00:12:824 (1) - Add clap at slider's arrow.
00:15:624 (2) - Move to x:320 y:140
00:16:024 (3) - Move to x:364 y:240
00:16:824 (4) - Move to x:160 y:248
Whit those 3 you make a better triangle there.
00:50:824 (3) - Add clap at slider's head.
01:06:024 (1) - Ctrl + J? Better flow.
01:18:424 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - How about this pattern? The current one looks akward imo
The code:
Hitsounds:
Nice map o.o Good luck with it, Bye~
mafia here
[General]
Why different bg for all diffs? Just curios.
[Easy]
00:25:624 (6) - Male this slider straight? dunno, that shape looks ugly imo.
00:30:824 - Add note w/ clap
Hitounds:
It's really empty without these claps imo. At least you can add a few of them.
00:18:824 - Add clap in slider tick.
00:24:424 - ^
00:26:024 -
00:27:625 - ^
00:30:024 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:38:024 - ^
00:38:824 - ^
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:024 - ^
00:47:624 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:51:624 - ^
00:55:624 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:11:624 - ^
01:13:224 - ^
01:18:024 - ^
01:26:024 - ^
01:28:424 - ^
00:18:824 - Add clap in slider tick.
00:24:424 - ^
00:26:024 -
00:27:625 - ^
00:30:024 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:38:024 - ^
00:38:824 - ^
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:024 - ^
00:47:624 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:51:624 - ^
00:55:624 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:11:624 - ^
01:13:224 - ^
01:18:024 - ^
01:26:024 - ^
01:28:424 - ^
[Normal]
00:11:624 (3) - Add clap here.
00:12:824 (1) - Add clap at slider's arrow.
00:15:624 (2) - Move to x:320 y:140
00:16:024 (3) - Move to x:364 y:240
00:16:824 (4) - Move to x:160 y:248
Whit those 3 you make a better triangle there.
00:50:824 (3) - Add clap at slider's head.
01:06:024 (1) - Ctrl + J? Better flow.
01:18:424 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - How about this pattern? The current one looks akward imo
The code:
132,96,78424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,78824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,79224,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,120,79624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80024,2,0,L|344:296,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,80824,2,0,L|208:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,81624,2,0,L|128:288,2,99.9999999999999,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Hitsounds:
Same as easy diff.
00:24:424 - Add clap in slider's tick.
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:824 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:57:224 - ^
00:58:824 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:05:224 - ^
01:12:424 - ^
01:24:424 - ^
01:25:224 -
00:24:424 - Add clap in slider's tick.
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:824 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:57:224 - ^
00:58:824 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:05:224 - ^
01:12:424 - ^
01:24:424 - ^
01:25:224 -
Nice map o.o Good luck with it, Bye~
Topic Starter
thank GG and Zero hentai for modding ><
Update my Diff ! (again)
Edit: Update SSS's Hard diff
Update my Diff ! (again)
Edit: Update SSS's Hard diff
Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^
>>>> OVERALL <<<<
I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator
this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall
>>>> INSANE <<<<
00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2)
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too
01:15:724 Add circle?
>>>> SSS's Hard+ <<<<
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you separate them a bit? hmm... dunno... something like this?
>>>> AsprikaQ's Hard <<<<
00:23:624 (1) - Move down y=288
01:07:224 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
01:25:624 (1,2) - hmmm this is ok but you can follow the other pattern like 01:26:824 (3,4) - (1 slider only)
That's all i think, i can't mod more cause it's almost done
Good luck with your map P A N^^
>>>> OVERALL <<<<
I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator
this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall>>>> INSANE <<<<
00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2)
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too
01:15:724 Add circle?
>>>> SSS's Hard+ <<<<
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you separate them a bit? hmm... dunno... something like this?
>>>> AsprikaQ's Hard <<<<
00:23:624 (1) - Move down y=288
01:07:224 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
01:25:624 (1,2) - hmmm this is ok but you can follow the other pattern like 01:26:824 (3,4) - (1 slider only)
That's all i think, i can't mod more cause it's almost done
Good luck with your map P A N^^
Topic Starter
Drianel wrote:
Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^
>>>> OVERALL <<<<
I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator
>>>> INSANE <<<<
00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? ok
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell ok
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid I think this one is ok :/
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2) ok
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too ok
01:15:724 Add circle? ok
thanks for modding Drianel
by the way thanks for the Shana pic
Update Insane!
m4m~
[General]
[Insane]
Good luck for Rank
[General]
- Kiai 1 start on 01:00:024 ~ 01:11:224
Kiai 2 start on 01:12:824 ~ 01:25:624
- 00:20:024 ~ 00:29:424 - nothing hitsound?! add some hitsound like whistle..like here whistle00:20:024,00:21:624,00:23:224,00:24:024....
- 00:53:224 (2) - move to (388,268)
- 01:15:224 (1) - overlap on 01:14:024 (3)
- 00:24:024 (4) - Clap on start of slider
[Insane]
- 00:21:624 (1) - Perfectly Overlap on 00:20:024 (1)
- 00:26:424 (3) - finish
- 00:29:624 (1,2,3,4) - add finish on start slider
- 01:02:824 (5) - add whistle start slider
- 01:05:624 (4) - add whistle
- 01:06:424 (11) - finish
- 01:09:424 (5) - NC
- 01:22:224 (5) - add whistle body slider
Good luck for Rank
Topic Starter
thank for modding Pisces ><
Insane and SSS update
Easy Normal update for kial time
Insane and SSS update
Easy Normal update for kial time
Erylex
Hi.
Mod via my queue.
I think offset=820
Resnap kiai.
Easy Diff
Normal
AsprikaQ's Hard
Change circle stack to http://puu.sh/2G5FF.png
00:42:824 (5) - NC
00:45:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:424 (7) - Add NC
SSS`Hard
Many hard spacing.
Good luck. :3
Mod via my queue.
I think offset=820
Resnap kiai.
Easy Diff
00:25:220 (5) - NC
00:29:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:820 (4) - Add NC
01:02:820 (4) - ^
01:03:220 (1) - Remove NC
00:29:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:820 (4) - Add NC
01:02:820 (4) - ^
01:03:220 (1) - Remove NC
Normal
00:19:624 (7) - Move to x=408 y=228
00:30:024 (2) - Move to x=312 y=216
00:32:424 (4) - NC
00:32:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:624 (4) - NC
00:54:624 (6) - NC
00:54:824 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:224 (3) - Move to x=160 y=168 (For symmetric)
00:30:024 (2) - Move to x=312 y=216
00:32:424 (4) - NC
00:32:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:624 (4) - NC
00:54:624 (6) - NC
00:54:824 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:224 (3) - Move to x=160 y=168 (For symmetric)
AsprikaQ's Hard
Change circle stack to http://puu.sh/2G5FF.png
00:42:824 (5) - NC
00:45:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:424 (7) - Add NC
SSS`Hard
Many hard spacing.
Good luck. :3
DeletedUser_1574070
okay lets go
from my queue
kinda good map so I found few points sorry..
MAKE YOUR AUDIO LEAD-IN SAME BY OPENING YOUR OSU FILE IN NOTEPAD
http://puu.sh/2G60O.png MATCH ALL OF YOUR DIFFS 1000
Easy
00:14:424 (1) - spacing
00:15:624 (2) - ^
00:36:424 (2,3) - ^
00:50:824 (3,1) - ^
Normal
00:09:224 (4,5) - spacing
omg good diff
Hard
00:23:624 (1,2,3) - make this more smooth-ly.. a bit too straight
01:14:024 (3,1) - stack you can move circle 3
01:16:624 (4,1) - make these same?
01:26:824 (3,4) - to give more fun, consistency, why don't you put same rhythm with the former one? 01:25:624 (1,2) - here
Hard+
00:12:024 (1) - just giving time for players to rest is better idea. remove
00:54:824 (4) - ctrl G? im not sure
Insane
00:10:024 (5,5) - stack you can move former slider
00:49:424 (2,1,3) - stack
kinda good job hope your map ranked
from my queue
kinda good map so I found few points sorry..
MAKE YOUR AUDIO LEAD-IN SAME BY OPENING YOUR OSU FILE IN NOTEPAD
http://puu.sh/2G60O.png MATCH ALL OF YOUR DIFFS 1000
Easy
00:14:424 (1) - spacing
00:15:624 (2) - ^
00:36:424 (2,3) - ^
00:50:824 (3,1) - ^
Normal
00:09:224 (4,5) - spacing
omg good diff
Hard
00:23:624 (1,2,3) - make this more smooth-ly.. a bit too straight
01:14:024 (3,1) - stack you can move circle 3
01:16:624 (4,1) - make these same?
01:26:824 (3,4) - to give more fun, consistency, why don't you put same rhythm with the former one? 01:25:624 (1,2) - here
Hard+
00:12:024 (1) - just giving time for players to rest is better idea. remove
00:54:824 (4) - ctrl G? im not sure
Insane
00:10:024 (5,5) - stack you can move former slider
00:49:424 (2,1,3) - stack
kinda good job hope your map ranked
Topic Starter
thank Clique and Erylex for modding ><
Easy Normal SSS Insane Updated
Easy Normal SSS Insane Updated
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion
General
you dont need to put another source name into the tag. remove Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
Easy
HP drain - 1 . beat is pretty dense for easy difficult. if any newbie miss a part . he / she will fail the mapให้คนที่บ้านเล่นแล้วเฟล พลาดสไลตัวเดียวหายทั้งแถบ
AR-1
00:10:424 (1,2) - use 1 long slider
00:24:024 (4) - slightly unsymetrical
00:55:224 (1) - remove this and start spinner from there. end at 00:58:424
Normal
00:54:624 (6) - better nc here
00:54:824 (1) - and remove nc here
AsprikaQ's Hard
sliders shapes can still be improve, i'm not going to point it out. you should know it well
the first part note arrangement is kinda random, would be great of you arrange it in a symetrical way
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - good to avoid this pattern in hard dif
00:45:624 (1) - remove nc
01:11:224 (5,1,2,3) - pretty cunfusing jump. nc ing would fix
01:22:424 (5) - nc
SSS's Hard+
better like this. old one disrupt the flow
Insane
00:04:624 (2) - point this head to the another slider head
00:15:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - form star shape jump? like this ? 00:32:324 (6) - add note here. flow better
00:53:624 (9) - remove nc
00:53:824 (1) - nc
nothing much to say. this map were modded many time and most error are fixed. a bat attention would rank this soon\
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edited : spelling check
Topic Starter
thanks for modding
Easy Normal and Insane Updated
Easy Normal and Insane Updated
hi P A N
General
add SSS in tags
Inconsistency in Tags:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
- [Easy] : asprikaq meensss
- [Insane] : asprikaq meensss
- [Normal] : asprikaq meensss
- [SSS's Hard+] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [SSS's Hard+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:014, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
[easy]
00:03:624 (4) - Move to x:132 y:160
00:04:024 (1) - Move node to x:64 y:160
00:05:224 (2) - Move node to x:124 y:316 , move node #2 to {x:192 y:328}.
[normal]
00:05:624 (3) - Move node #2 to x:440 y:132, move node #3 to x:428 y:172, move node #9 to x:324 y:316
00:22:824 (5) - is out of the screen
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:20:424 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:42:424 (4) - Add NC.
01:14:424 (5) - Add NC.
01:15:224 (1) - remove NC.
01:16:024 (3) - Add NC.
[Insane]
01:00:024 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
[SSS's Hard+]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:06:814 - snap to 00:06:824
00:20:214 - snap to 00:20:224
00:25:014 - snap to 00:25:024
00:26:614 - snap to 00:26:624
01:00:014 - snap to 01:00:024
nice mapset *.*
General
add SSS in tags
Inconsistency in Tags:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
- [Easy] : asprikaq meensss
- [Insane] : asprikaq meensss
- [Normal] : asprikaq meensss
- [SSS's Hard+] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
- [SSS's Hard+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:014, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624
[easy]
00:03:624 (4) - Move to x:132 y:160
00:04:024 (1) - Move node to x:64 y:160
00:05:224 (2) - Move node to x:124 y:316 , move node #2 to {x:192 y:328}.
[normal]
00:05:624 (3) - Move node #2 to x:440 y:132, move node #3 to x:428 y:172, move node #9 to x:324 y:316
00:22:824 (5) - is out of the screen
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:20:424 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:42:424 (4) - Add NC.
01:14:424 (5) - Add NC.
01:15:224 (1) - remove NC.
01:16:024 (3) - Add NC.
[Insane]
01:00:024 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
[SSS's Hard+]
Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:06:814 - snap to 00:06:824
00:20:214 - snap to 00:20:224
00:25:014 - snap to 00:25:024
00:26:614 - snap to 00:26:624
01:00:014 - snap to 01:00:024
nice mapset *.*
Topic Starter
thanks for modding eLtigreXXx
my diff Update
Edit: Update SSS's Hard+
my diff Update
Edit: Update SSS's Hard+
ดีครับ
จาก #thai นะ
General
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - พี่น่าจะทำเสียงให้เบาลงหน่อย ให้เข้ากับอารมณ์เพลงนิสนึง แล้วค่อยๆ ดังขึ้น
Easy
แค่แนะนำนะๆ
00:29:624 (1) - ทำเป็นครึ่งนึง แล้วย้อนเอา มันเข้ากับเนื้อร้องฝ่านะ
Normal
00:53:824 (5) - เอ้ะ ? จงใจให้เบี้ยว หรือยังไง
00:37:224 (3) - เลื่อนขึ้น ช่องนึง จะได้ดูดีขึ้นหน่อย มั้ง ?
พอจบแต่ละท่อน ใส่ Finish เข้าไปหน่อย น่าจะดูดีนะ(ทุกดิฟเลยแหล่ะ )
Asprika's Hard
00:20:224 (1) - ใส่โน้ตตัวนี้ตัวนึงไหม ? เนื้อร้องมามาตรงนี้ (หรือติ้กสีฟ้าก็ได้)
SSS's Hard
01:26:224 (2,2) - Finish หน่อย น่าจะดูดี
Insane
ดูดีแล้วแหล่ะ
เด่วลองเล่นก่อง เด่วมาแปะ Test Play ให้ดูนะพี่ปัง
Edit :
ทำไมเล่นไม่ผ่านฟระะะะ
จาก #thai นะ
General
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - พี่น่าจะทำเสียงให้เบาลงหน่อย ให้เข้ากับอารมณ์เพลงนิสนึง แล้วค่อยๆ ดังขึ้น
Easy
แค่แนะนำนะๆ
00:29:624 (1) - ทำเป็นครึ่งนึง แล้วย้อนเอา มันเข้ากับเนื้อร้องฝ่านะ
Normal
00:53:824 (5) - เอ้ะ ? จงใจให้เบี้ยว หรือยังไง
00:37:224 (3) - เลื่อนขึ้น ช่องนึง จะได้ดูดีขึ้นหน่อย มั้ง ?
พอจบแต่ละท่อน ใส่ Finish เข้าไปหน่อย น่าจะดูดีนะ(ทุกดิฟเลยแหล่ะ )
Asprika's Hard
00:20:224 (1) - ใส่โน้ตตัวนี้ตัวนึงไหม ? เนื้อร้องมามาตรงนี้ (หรือติ้กสีฟ้าก็ได้)
SSS's Hard
01:26:224 (2,2) - Finish หน่อย น่าจะดูดี
Insane
ดูดีแล้วแหล่ะ
เด่วลองเล่นก่อง เด่วมาแปะ Test Play ให้ดูนะพี่ปัง
Edit :
ทำไมเล่นไม่ผ่านฟระะะะ
Hi
from #mod request
I very like your map
good lucky
from #mod request
easy
very good
Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525
AsprikaQ's Hard
00:23:224 (4) - stack on 00:22:424 (3) tail
00:23:624 (1) - y:288
00:31:224 (5) - y:340
00:31:424 (6) - y:356
01:11:224 (5) - y:28
00:23:624 (1) - y:288
00:31:224 (5) - y:340
00:31:424 (6) - y:356
01:11:224 (5) - y:28
Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332
done
done
I very like your map
good lucky
Topic Starter
thanks for modding and checking >_>wmtokok wrote:
Hi
from #mod requesteasyvery goodNormal00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525 I make a star there, so not fix >_>Insane00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332 that's on my purpose
done
I very like your map
good lucky
Topic Starter
Update HS and SSS
Edit: Update AsprikaQ's Hard and Insane !!
Edit: Update AsprikaQ's Hard and Insane !!
[Insane]
at this time 00:29:624 it looks like 2 note pressed at same time ..
i thinks you must change that
at this time 00:29:624 it looks like 2 note pressed at same time ..
i thinks you must change that
Topic Starter
omg.. that is not press at the same time 0.0
anyway thanks for check ><
anyway thanks for check ><
Hello , from M4M
Good lock~
General
suggest to make hitsound more louder , I feel a little bit hard to hear the hitsound.
It may need to add "Opening" in Tag.
Easy
Seems great.
Normal
00:47:624 - Try this?
01:26:824(2) - Add NC
01:28:024(3) - ^
AsprikaQ's Hard
This diff didn't set viedo yet. Need to fix.
01:26:824(2) - Add NC
01:28:024(3) - ^
SSS's Hard+
Seems great.
Insane
00:10:424(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use whisle or special hitsound on this part?
00:53:024 - Add NC here.
00:55:424(2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too straight this part. I think it isn't a good flow.
01:22:824(1) - Maybe change this note by a slider from 01:22:824 - 01:23:024
Nice map.suggest to make hitsound more louder , I feel a little bit hard to hear the hitsound.
It may need to add "Opening" in Tag.
Easy
Seems great.
Normal
00:47:624 - Try this?
01:26:824(2) - Add NC
01:28:024(3) - ^
AsprikaQ's Hard
This diff didn't set viedo yet. Need to fix.
01:26:824(2) - Add NC
01:28:024(3) - ^
SSS's Hard+
Seems great.
Insane
00:10:424(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use whisle or special hitsound on this part?
00:53:024 - Add NC here.
00:55:424(2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too straight this part. I think it isn't a good flow.
01:22:824(1) - Maybe change this note by a slider from 01:22:824 - 01:23:024
Good lock~
Hey! From my queue~
sorry for delay, shit exams are shit
Easy
Replay
Not much to say from a play I guess hehe, just some nazi patterning things
00:02:424 (3) - should be the same slider as (1), you can just copy+paste and rotate 180 and it'll be in basically the right place
00:20:024 (1,2,3) - This could be a little more interesting, try this maybe?
00:24:024 (4) - node 1 to x320 y84, node 2 to x256 y112, node 3 to x180 y80, little better symmetry (adjust notes around for spacing)
00:33:224 (1,3) - symmetry on these two is off too, I'd recommend using ^this slider to improve them
01:03:624 (2) - move up to y324, looks a bit better compared to (3,4,1)
01:15:224 (3,1,2) - x412 y92, x428 y228, x344 y316 in that order for symmetry over x axis
01:21:224 (3) - one grid right
Normal
Replay
oh noes, a couple 100's. I'm so bad ;_;
00:03:624 (4) - oh why not, grid right, pattern/spacing
00:08:424 (3) - x164 y144 for the triangle
00:09:824 (5) - second point to x480 y48, so that it's on the same angle as (1) after
00:16:024 (3) - grid space left for blanket
00:52:824 (2,3,4) - x212 y264, x304 y208, x376 y124 in that order. This puts 5 along a similar upwards curve as (1,2,3,4) which I think makes more sense
01:04:824 (4) - clap on tick here is considerably softer than the claps around it
01:07:224 (2,3,4) - clean up the blanket pattern here, it's off and not symmetrical
01:25:024 (4,1) - I would recommend ending (4) on 01:25:424 (silenced if you want) and starting (1) on the downbeat for consistency
AsprikaQ's Hard
Replay
Very nice, some of the early stacking beats are just a little uncomfortable to play, specifically 00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5), but overall great
00:00:224 (1) - I think you could start this on the blue tick where the actual drum starts, there's no tempo beforehand so it shouldn't make that big of a difference
00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend this rhythm to ease up on this part
00:22:424 (3) - up a grid for patterning
00:32:424 (6) - x228 y120 for triangle
01:01:424 (4,1) - Jump seems a little out of place. I'd recommend having (3,4) be x164 y260 and x140 y180, so it's less jarring
01:12:224 (5,1) - While this does fit well with the music, I feel like for this being the "easier" hard, it might be a bit much, and a lot of less skilled players will end up breaking combo here. Consider taking it down to around 2.20x or so
01:25:624 (1,2) - why don't you do this rhythm for all three closing notes? so 01:26:824 and 01:28:024
SSS's Hard+
Replay
Hmm..not sure what to think of this diff. Imo it's very nearly harder than the insane, due to the jumps here being more jarring and quite a bit higher. Couple spacing things that didn't agree with me either
00:09:624 (2,3) - Didn't like this at all. I'd suggest rotating it 90 so that it leads to and from the previous notes better
00:31:224 (1,2,3) - mmmmmmmmm rough to play. and not exactly fun either. the slow slider speed contrasts the pretty quick jump
00:59:824 (8,1) - this doesn't flow well, I think a ctrl+g on (1) feels better
01:07:224 (2,1) - still isn't fun to play this
01:22:224 (2,3,4) - this jump would make sense if you delete (2) and shift (3,4) over a red tick, so that the jump happens on the trumpet note
Insane
Replay
Some nice things happening here. I like the use of short slider to long slider like 00:01:424 (2,3), plays well and gives it a pretty interesting rhythm without resorting to excessive triplet streams
00:03:024 (3,4) - Here I would recommend going with this rhythm, as it fits better with the vocal and gives you a little more variation. (feel free to apply this wherever you feel it fits well)
00:28:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here, this pattern should have two clean-looking stars :3
01:26:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have less spacing than you did for 01:25:624 (1,2,3,4)! it's so anti-climatic haha
All I got. Good luck!
sorry for delay, shit exams are shit
Easy
Replay
Not much to say from a play I guess hehe, just some nazi patterning things
00:02:424 (3) - should be the same slider as (1), you can just copy+paste and rotate 180 and it'll be in basically the right place
00:20:024 (1,2,3) - This could be a little more interesting, try this maybe?
00:24:024 (4) - node 1 to x320 y84, node 2 to x256 y112, node 3 to x180 y80, little better symmetry (adjust notes around for spacing
)00:33:224 (1,3) - symmetry on these two is off too, I'd recommend using ^this slider to improve them
01:03:624 (2) - move up to y324, looks a bit better compared to (3,4,1)
01:15:224 (3,1,2) - x412 y92, x428 y228, x344 y316 in that order for symmetry over x axis
01:21:224 (3) - one grid right
Normal
Replay
oh noes, a couple 100's. I'm so bad ;_;
00:03:624 (4) - oh why not, grid right, pattern/spacing
00:08:424 (3) - x164 y144 for the triangle
00:09:824 (5) - second point to x480 y48, so that it's on the same angle as (1) after
00:16:024 (3) - grid space left for blanket
00:52:824 (2,3,4) - x212 y264, x304 y208, x376 y124 in that order. This puts 5 along a similar upwards curve as (1,2,3,4) which I think makes more sense
01:04:824 (4) - clap on tick here is considerably softer than the claps around it
01:07:224 (2,3,4) - clean up the blanket pattern here, it's off and not symmetrical
01:25:024 (4,1) - I would recommend ending (4) on 01:25:424 (silenced if you want) and starting (1) on the downbeat for consistency
AsprikaQ's Hard
Replay
Very nice, some of the early stacking beats are just a little uncomfortable to play, specifically 00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5), but overall great
00:00:224 (1) - I think you could start this on the blue tick where the actual drum starts, there's no tempo beforehand so it shouldn't make that big of a difference
00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend this rhythm to ease up on this part
00:22:424 (3) - up a grid for patterning
00:32:424 (6) - x228 y120 for triangle
01:01:424 (4,1) - Jump seems a little out of place. I'd recommend having (3,4) be x164 y260 and x140 y180, so it's less jarring
01:12:224 (5,1) - While this does fit well with the music, I feel like for this being the "easier" hard, it might be a bit much, and a lot of less skilled players will end up breaking combo here. Consider taking it down to around 2.20x or so
01:25:624 (1,2) - why don't you do this rhythm for all three closing notes? so 01:26:824 and 01:28:024
SSS's Hard+
Replay
Hmm..not sure what to think of this diff. Imo it's very nearly harder than the insane, due to the jumps here being more jarring and quite a bit higher. Couple spacing things that didn't agree with me either
00:09:624 (2,3) - Didn't like this at all. I'd suggest rotating it 90 so that it leads to and from the previous notes better
00:31:224 (1,2,3) - mmmmmmmmm rough to play. and not exactly fun either. the slow slider speed contrasts the pretty quick jump
00:59:824 (8,1) - this doesn't flow well, I think a ctrl+g on (1) feels better
01:07:224 (2,1) - still isn't fun to play this
01:22:224 (2,3,4) - this jump would make sense if you delete (2) and shift (3,4) over a red tick, so that the jump happens on the trumpet note
Insane
Replay
Some nice things happening here. I like the use of short slider to long slider like 00:01:424 (2,3), plays well and gives it a pretty interesting rhythm without resorting to excessive triplet streams
00:03:024 (3,4) - Here I would recommend going with this rhythm, as it fits better with the vocal and gives you a little more variation. (feel free to apply this wherever you feel it fits well)
00:28:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here, this pattern should have two clean-looking stars :3
SPOILER
00:52:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^224,320,28024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,352,28224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,269,28424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,186,28624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,218,28824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,139,29024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,55,29224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,83,29424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
SPOILER
00:55:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't you gradually increase the spacing here, like the first set one 1.2 like it is and maybe the second at 1.4? would work with the buildup in music254,104,52224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,80,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,139,52624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,202,52824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,178,53024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,239,53224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,301,53424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,279,53624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:26:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have less spacing than you did for 01:25:624 (1,2,3,4)! it's so anti-climatic haha
All I got. Good luck!
Topic Starter
thanks leon1341414
fix 75% of your mod
and thanks captin1 for test play and mod
change most of your mod
Update my diff! (Easy Normal Insane)
and SSS diff
fix 75% of your mod
and thanks captin1 for test play and mod
change most of your mod
Update my diff! (Easy Normal Insane)
and SSS diff
Ok let's go,
From my queue.
[General]
You have to put the same tags on all of your diffs !
[Insane]
00:04:624 (2,3) - What about a better blanket, like this : http://puu.sh/2LW4M.jpg
00:34:424 (1) - A bit offscreen, but it's maybe not a problem
00:40:424 (6) - Strange, when you use 2 beats with 1/4 of time time spacing, you always take more space between them. What about something like this :
http://puu.sh/2LW9T.jpg Like this, you have a better flow, and you respect the spacing you used all along the map
00:44:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern has no real reason, i mean the music doesn't really change, ans star patterns are generally used when it's the case.
But this is just my personnal opinion.
01:12:824 (1) - Personnal opinion : Put this slider a bit to the left, so the (3) is totally blanketed
01:14:224 (4) - If you did what i wrote just before, stack this scircle with the start of the slider.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
[SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS's Hard +]
00:08:824 (1,2) - It's me, or the two sliders should have their reverse arrow on a white tick to fit with the vocal ? Listen carefully, i think this will look better.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
01:01:624 (1) - NAZI : Place this slider a bit down so it's stacked with 01:00:024 (1) -
Nice diff here
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
01:24:424 (3) - What about place this circle like this : http://puu.sh/2LWnV.jpg , i find this better than 3 stacks
01:25:624 (1,2) - Here you can do a "two reverses slider" like you do here : 01:26:824 (3) - and here 01:28:024 (4) - , or change the two lasts sliders with a "circle-slider reverse", like this : http://puu.sh/2LWq7.jpg
Really nice diff !
[Normal]
00:31:424 (2) - A bit offscreen
00:39:624 (1,2,3) - I think you can do a better blanket on (2) here
[Easy]
00:14:424 (1,2,3) - A bit offcreen, try to respect the area of play.
That's all o/
Really nice mapset, it won't take time to be ranked anymore imo !
From my queue.
[General]
You have to put the same tags on all of your diffs !
[Insane]
00:04:624 (2,3) - What about a better blanket, like this : http://puu.sh/2LW4M.jpg
00:34:424 (1) - A bit offscreen, but it's maybe not a problem
00:40:424 (6) - Strange, when you use 2 beats with 1/4 of time time spacing, you always take more space between them. What about something like this :
http://puu.sh/2LW9T.jpg Like this, you have a better flow, and you respect the spacing you used all along the map
00:44:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern has no real reason, i mean the music doesn't really change, ans star patterns are generally used when it's the case.
But this is just my personnal opinion.
01:12:824 (1) - Personnal opinion : Put this slider a bit to the left, so the (3) is totally blanketed
01:14:224 (4) - If you did what i wrote just before, stack this scircle with the start of the slider.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
[SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS's Hard +]
00:08:824 (1,2) - It's me, or the two sliders should have their reverse arrow on a white tick to fit with the vocal ? Listen carefully, i think this will look better.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
01:01:624 (1) - NAZI : Place this slider a bit down so it's stacked with 01:00:024 (1) -
Nice diff here
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
01:24:424 (3) - What about place this circle like this : http://puu.sh/2LWnV.jpg , i find this better than 3 stacks
01:25:624 (1,2) - Here you can do a "two reverses slider" like you do here : 01:26:824 (3) - and here 01:28:024 (4) - , or change the two lasts sliders with a "circle-slider reverse", like this : http://puu.sh/2LWq7.jpg
Really nice diff !
[Normal]
00:31:424 (2) - A bit offscreen
00:39:624 (1,2,3) - I think you can do a better blanket on (2) here
[Easy]
00:14:424 (1,2,3) - A bit offcreen, try to respect the area of play.
That's all o/
Really nice mapset, it won't take time to be ranked anymore imo !
Topic Starter
thanks Arrival for modding
fix 78% of your mod
tags fixed
Update : Easy Normal SSS Insane
fix 78% of your mod
tags fixed
Update : Easy Normal SSS Insane
from my queue
[Hard]
don't you think it too difficult?
00:00:824 (2) - NC
00:07:824 (3,4) - change into slider
00:16:424 (5) - delete
00:28:424 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:38:124 (3,4,5) - make them closer
00:46:424 (3) - delete finish and add clap at 00:46:824
00:55:224 (1) - move the head of this slider to 00:55:124
01:12:224 (5,1) - it's not fun
01:01:524 and01:03:124 and01:04:724 - add notes
01:14:324 and01:15:924 and01:17:524 - add notes
01:26:824 (3,4) - don't use too many reverses
[SSS]
hard+ --> insane
SV up
00:13:524 - miss a note
00:31:424 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:31:924 - ^
00:32:224 - ^
00:32:424 - ^
01:05:924 - ^
01:22:424 (3,4) - offbeat
need more work
GL
[Hard]
don't you think it too difficult?
00:00:824 (2) - NC
00:07:824 (3,4) - change into slider
00:16:424 (5) - delete
00:28:424 (2) - Ctrl+G
00:38:124 (3,4,5) - make them closer
00:46:424 (3) - delete finish and add clap at 00:46:824
00:55:224 (1) - move the head of this slider to 00:55:124
01:12:224 (5,1) - it's not fun
01:01:524 and01:03:124 and01:04:724 - add notes
01:14:324 and01:15:924 and01:17:524 - add notes
01:26:824 (3,4) - don't use too many reverses
[SSS]
hard+ --> insane
SV up
00:13:524 - miss a note
00:31:424 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:31:924 - ^
00:32:224 - ^
00:32:424 - ^
01:05:924 - ^
01:22:424 (3,4) - offbeat
need more work
GL
>.< forgot to mention a couple things, no kd
AsprikaQ's Hard
00:20:424 (2) - nc bug cause it's after a spinner, Q on it (even though it's already there lol)
Insane
01:00:024 (2) - same thing as ^
AsprikaQ's Hard
00:20:424 (2) - nc bug cause it's after a spinner, Q on it (even though it's already there lol)
Insane
01:00:024 (2) - same thing as ^
Topic Starter
ok fixed ><
Hi! From my queue.
I'm a new modder so you can choose if follow my advice. It's ok.
General
Pls fix the tags the same as different difficult.
http://puu.sh/2MFUy.jpg
Pls reference about AIMOD(you don't need to fix some special promblems be shown on it)
actually I even can't come up with any problem. An excellent map!
Sorry :X
Hope your map can be ranked soon! :3
I'm a new modder so you can choose if follow my advice. It's ok.
General
Pls fix the tags the same as different difficult.
http://puu.sh/2MFUy.jpg
Pls reference about AIMOD(you don't need to fix some special promblems be shown on it)
actually I even can't come up with any problem. An excellent map!
Sorry :X
Hope your map can be ranked soon! :3
Topic Starter
thanks for checking :3
xD
[Easy]
ช่วงเริ่มเพลงตั้งแต่ 00:00:824 - 00:04:824 รู้สึกว่าเสียงสไลติกมันเบากว่าเสียงตบมือที่ใส่แยกตั้งห่าง (ลองเพิ่มเสียงที่ใส่สไลติกสัก 5-8 %)
[Normal]
เรื่องเสียงสไลติกเหมือนของดิฟeasy
00:58:424 : try add spin to 01:00:024 (ถ้าไม่ใช้สปินก้ลบเสียงตบมือในสไลติกออก ตรงนี้ไม่ต้องใช้ ใส่เสียงแค่ 15 %)
[Insane]
00:29:624 : สไลเดอร์ลงเส้นแดงดีกว่าไหม (อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ)
00:30:024 : ^
00:30:424 : ^
00:30:824 : ^
ม๊อดแค่นี้แหละ 
[Easy]
ช่วงเริ่มเพลงตั้งแต่ 00:00:824 - 00:04:824 รู้สึกว่าเสียงสไลติกมันเบากว่าเสียงตบมือที่ใส่แยกตั้งห่าง (ลองเพิ่มเสียงที่ใส่สไลติกสัก 5-8 %)
[Normal]
เรื่องเสียงสไลติกเหมือนของดิฟeasy
00:58:424 : try add spin to 01:00:024 (ถ้าไม่ใช้สปินก้ลบเสียงตบมือในสไลติกออก ตรงนี้ไม่ต้องใช้ ใส่เสียงแค่ 15 %)
[Insane]
00:29:624 : สไลเดอร์ลงเส้นแดงดีกว่าไหม (อันนี้แล้วแต่นะ)
00:30:024 : ^
00:30:424 : ^
00:30:824 : ^
ม๊อดแค่นี้แหละ
Topic Starter
thanks indyinyou for modding ><
[Generel]
- Please change background of [SSS's Hard+] and [Easy]. (They're NFSW)
- Make sure all tag are same, maybe you don't need to add 'opening', but if you do, please do it on [SSS's Hard+] too.
- จริงๆ silence "normal-sliderslide" มันไม่ได้อ่ะ แต่เห็นมีคนได้แมพแรงค์ไปเร็วๆนี้ก็มี ไม่รู้ยังใส่ใจกันอยู่เปล่า
- Maybe use 824 as offset, so first note on [AsprikaQ's Hard] won't place before timing.
- New soft-slidertick2.wav
• Tips: Try to make slidetick volume when you hear it as same level as normal one,ปรับเสียงให้มันฟังดูแล้วความดังเท่าๆกับโน๊ตปกติด้วยนะ
- In fact, you don't have to use another green line 'on' red line, you can change volume and custom sound on red line too.
[Easy]
Neat ~
[Normal]
00:09:224 (4) - Missing clap at the start of slider?
00:11:624 (3) - Try finish instead of clap? It's like clap out of nowhere when there was kinda silence.
00:12:824 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? (The start of Kiai).
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- Resnap all notes.
00:00:224 (1) - This, a little bit off. Maybe start at 00:00:324 instead?
[SSS's Hard+]
Not bad.
[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - Anti-jump?
00:20:824 (5) - Add new combo? Make it easier to tell spacing changed.
00:44:824 (5) - ^
01:04:424 (3) - Suggestion, remove new combo and add new combo here 01:04:824 (1)? It's like wrong spacing to me, plus it looks better with song too.
01:22:824 (1) - Add clap at the start of slider? Like missing sound here.
Overall looks good, good luck!
- Please change background of [SSS's Hard+] and [Easy]. (They're NFSW)
- Make sure all tag are same, maybe you don't need to add 'opening', but if you do, please do it on [SSS's Hard+] too.
- จริงๆ silence "normal-sliderslide" มันไม่ได้อ่ะ แต่เห็นมีคนได้แมพแรงค์ไปเร็วๆนี้ก็มี ไม่รู้ยังใส่ใจกันอยู่เปล่า
- Maybe use 824 as offset, so first note on [AsprikaQ's Hard] won't place before timing.
- New soft-slidertick2.wav
• Tips: Try to make slidetick volume when you hear it as same level as normal one,ปรับเสียงให้มันฟังดูแล้วความดังเท่าๆกับโน๊ตปกติด้วยนะ
- In fact, you don't have to use another green line 'on' red line, you can change volume and custom sound on red line too.
[Easy]
Neat ~
[Normal]
00:09:224 (4) - Missing clap at the start of slider?
00:11:624 (3) - Try finish instead of clap? It's like clap out of nowhere when there was kinda silence.
00:12:824 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? (The start of Kiai).
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- Resnap all notes.
00:00:224 (1) - This, a little bit off. Maybe start at 00:00:324 instead?
[SSS's Hard+]
Not bad.
[Insane]
00:11:924 (6) - Anti-jump?
00:20:824 (5) - Add new combo? Make it easier to tell spacing changed.
00:44:824 (5) - ^
01:04:424 (3) - Suggestion, remove new combo and add new combo here 01:04:824 (1)? It's like wrong spacing to me, plus it looks better with song too.
01:22:824 (1) - Add clap at the start of slider? Like missing sound here.
Overall looks good, good luck!
Topic Starter
thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><
fix 99.9% of your mod
fix 99.9% of your mod
แล้ว 0.1 คือตรงไหน - -*P A N wrote:
thank orioncomet so muchhh for modding ><
fix 99.9% of your mod
Topic Starter
anti-jump งับไม่รู้เปลี่ยนดีไหมเพราะ mod ที่ผ่านมาเขาก็บอกให้วาง 6 ไว้ตรงกลางดาว
m4m
Insane
OD8 ;omg; -1 please ;w;
02:22:224 - looks bad maybe try with the 00:21:024 -
01:25:624 - clap maybe
01:26:824 - ^
01:28:024 - ^
SSS's Hard+
i suggest to change the SSS's to SSS' or Meen's
01:25:624(1,2) - clap maybe (end of slider) and the (2) delete finish and clap
01:26:824 - clap (end of slider) and delete clap at (2)
you just ask me to mod 2 diffs so there is it
Insane
OD8 ;omg; -1 please ;w;
02:22:224 - looks bad maybe try with the 00:21:024 -
01:25:624 - clap maybe
01:26:824 - ^
01:28:024 - ^
SSS's Hard+
i suggest to change the SSS's to SSS' or Meen's
01:25:624(1,2) - clap maybe (end of slider) and the (2) delete finish and clap
01:26:824 - clap (end of slider) and delete clap at (2)
you just ask me to mod 2 diffs so there is it
Topic Starter
sorry not fix ><
thanks for checking !
thanks for checking !
Topic Starter
LOLLLLL
thanks for checking
thanks for checking
hi hi from #Friends :3
- 00:54:024 (3,4) - align
- 00:55:224 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:824 (4,2) - align
nothing else
- 00:26:824 (1) - ^ 108,76
- 00:28:824 (4) - ^ 400,192
- 00:36:424 (2,3) - align
- 00:56:824 (1,2) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748304
- 01:08:024 (3) - move to 176,180
- 01:14:024 (3) - move to 320,120 and so adjust 01:15:224 (3) - for stack
That's all, really love this map take this (>'-')>
go go ranked
Easy
- Well, really good diff, just 2-3 suggestion- 00:54:024 (3,4) - align
- 00:55:224 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:824 (4,2) - align
nothing else
Normal
- 00:05:624 (3) - move to 408,88- 00:26:824 (1) - ^ 108,76
- 00:28:824 (4) - ^ 400,192
- 00:36:424 (2,3) - align
- 00:56:824 (1,2) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748304
- 01:08:024 (3) - move to 176,180
Hard
- 00:07:824 (3,4) - little slider ?- 01:14:024 (3) - move to 320,120 and so adjust 01:15:224 (3) - for stack
Insane
Fiuu - my favorite diff, just nothing to say >.< good job :3That's all, really love this map take this (>'-')>
Haii ~
You requested via queue ~
[Normal]
- This difficulty should at least have one spinner to have some differences in score.
00:24:024 (2) - Line with (5) (x:68) 2nd point on x:372 y:148 and 3rd point on x:300 y:240
00:28:024 (3) - Make it the same as (1)
[Hard]
00:24:824 (1) - Remove new combo to keep the same pattern as the previous one.
00:25:224 (5) - New combo.
[Insane]
00:10:024 (5) - Place at the same place 00:11:624 (5) is? owo
00:24:024 (3) - New combo to follow your pattern.
00:27:024 (5) - ^
00:31:924 (5) - Place where 00:30:424 (3) was and move the last point up one grid.
00:35:024 (3) - Make this a staight slider and mvoe two grids to the right.
00:35:424 (4) - Move to x:312 y:204
00:35:624 (5) - One grid down.
01:05:824 (5) - New combo? owo
Nicely mapped!
Good luck and star! >w<
Topic Starter
thanks -Umi- and xXCrystalMoonAnimXx for modding ><
-Umi- fix some
xXCrystalMoonAnimXx fix about 70%
-Umi- fix some
xXCrystalMoonAnimXx fix about 70%
Caught this map at #modreqs! I only test played the map! Some unique patterns you got there!
NO kudosu please!
/me runs
NO kudosu please!
/me runs
Topic Starter
thanks for play BeatofIke ><
Topic Starter
thanks for starrrrrr ><
M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears.
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.)
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music.
[Insane]
Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely
01:05:424(2,3)^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this?
already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears.
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.)
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music.
[Insane]
Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely
01:05:424(2,3)^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this?
already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
Topic Starter
thanks for moddingkajiyatta wrote:
M4M from PM
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:36:424(2) y:240 better same as previous (3)'s height fixed
Rhythm
00:29:624 unnecessary green line fixed
00:14:024 add a note here since the music enough hears. no, it will break the pattern after this
[Normal]
Placement
01:16:824(2,4) stack better and move notes like this no, the current one maybe easier for FL player
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:024(4) stacked on slider's end may stop the flow of map, maybe move away better. e.g.) fixed
Rhythm
00:13:024 add notes here to follow the music. no, I want to have break after spinner
[Insane]
Placement
00:01:424(2) Ctrl+G, the tiny jump makes the flow more nicely no, I don't want it more hard D:
01:05:424(2,3)^ ^
01:17:224(3,4) stack notes seems a bit weird, so replace slider and jumping. like this? sure
already so many mods... so I son't have to say much more. good luck & star
and star!!
Kodora
[General]
How nice bg!/me saves
*Anyway, i strongly recommend ask some BATs how much NSFW is it (and video too, it might be a problem).
*Audio Lead-In in all diffs - 2000, fix it manually using notepad
*Add to tags: noto arisa ogura yui ishihara kaori matsunaga maho
*adding to tags meensss just because he found offset for you is not nesessary, remove it
*also offset is slighty late for me, i'd use 822. if you will use id dont forget resnap all notes, green lines etc.
[Easy]
*HP Drain +1 for better ballance between diffs
00:12:824 (2) - NC since new part of song
00:14:024 - add a note, you missing strong beat here, sounds empty for me
00:14:424 (1) - if you will add note remove nc here then
01:26:824 (2) - remove clap
[Normal]
00:12:824 (1) - remove clap from reverse
00:20:024 (1,2) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:24:024 (2) - default slidertick sounds here better for me
00:25:224 (3,4) -really dont like how claps sounds here nvm i cant imagine better way
00:28:824 (4,1) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:30:024 (2,3) - spacing issue, close to 1.20
00:31:424 (2,3) - ^
00:32:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
00:39:624 (1,2) - ^
00:48:424 (4) - missed clap
00:48:424 (4,1) - stacked notes is always bad thing in relax diffs, try to avoid it
00:54:624 (1,2) - spacing issue, 1.20
00:58:424 (2,1) - spacing issue, 1.06
01:19:624 (2) - same about stacked note
01:21:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
01:25:024 (4) - nc should begins here, not at 01:25:624 (1) -
01:26:824 (2,3) - remove all claps from those sliders, thaey sounds just weird
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:00:224 (1) - slider should begins at 00:00:224 -
00:03:024 (3) - remove clap. really bad idea to create two rhytms with one clap, it sounds just bad.
00:03:124 (4) - ^
00:06:224 (4,1) - ^
00:08:224 (5) - ^,also nc should begins here, not at 00:08:624 (1) - follow your pattern and new part in music
00:09:424 (4,7) - ^
00:10:224 (7) - ^
imho it will be much better if you will replace all claps what i mentiored with default normal whistle
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - i'd add default whistles at the beginning of those sliders too
00:12:024 (1) - too suddenly spinner what really not fit here as well. just remove it and add short break
00:17:224 - add note here + clap for better rhytm
00:17:624 (4) - clap to the end of slider
00:20:224 - add note. vocals on this part is much stronger, so i suggest you focused on it
00:21:824 - ^
00:23:424 - ^
00:27:624 - add note + clap for better rhytm
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part is just called for normal default whistles, why you dont use it here? :\
00:45:024 - note for better rhytm
00:50:624 (3) - nc since you ended slowdown part here
00:53:624 - rhytm suggestion:
00:56:424 (4) - strongly recommend delete repeat and add note at 00:56:824 - for better rhytm
01:06:324 - delete note here, it unneeded
01:12:224 (5) - nc since new part of music and for better readability
01:16:024 (1,3) - with such low ar it looks like pretty bad overlap, try to avoid it
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - delete all claps from here. also whistles fits more instead as for me
placement is pretty nice, i like it. just need some hitsounds & rhytm work :p
[Insane]
*Decrease AR and OD by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability
*Tickrate 1 sounds much better for me
00:45:024 (2) - rhytm suggestion:
00:48:024 (2) - forgot clap at the end?
00:51:424 (4) - remove clap
00:57:224 (2,3,4,5) - just suggestion:
01:19:824 (6,2) - bad overlap, please try to avoid it
01:21:224 (5,2) - ^
01:26:024 (3) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - ^
01:28:424 (3) - ^
probably all. pretty solid mapset, good luck with rank
How nice bg!
*Anyway, i strongly recommend ask some BATs how much NSFW is it (and video too, it might be a problem).
*Audio Lead-In in all diffs - 2000, fix it manually using notepad
*Add to tags: noto arisa ogura yui ishihara kaori matsunaga maho
*adding to tags meensss just because he found offset for you is not nesessary, remove it
*also offset is slighty late for me, i'd use 822. if you will use id dont forget resnap all notes, green lines etc.
[Easy]
*HP Drain +1 for better ballance between diffs
00:12:824 (2) - NC since new part of song
00:14:024 - add a note, you missing strong beat here, sounds empty for me
00:14:424 (1) - if you will add note remove nc here then
01:26:824 (2) - remove clap
[Normal]
00:12:824 (1) - remove clap from reverse
00:20:024 (1,2) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:24:024 (2) - default slidertick sounds here better for me
00:25:224 (3,4) -
00:28:824 (4,1) - spacing not perfect (1.15 between notes)
00:30:024 (2,3) - spacing issue, close to 1.20
00:31:424 (2,3) - ^
00:32:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
00:39:624 (1,2) - ^
00:48:424 (4) - missed clap
00:48:424 (4,1) - stacked notes is always bad thing in relax diffs, try to avoid it
00:54:624 (1,2) - spacing issue, 1.20
00:58:424 (2,1) - spacing issue, 1.06
01:19:624 (2) - same about stacked note
01:21:624 (5,1) - spacing not perfect
01:25:024 (4) - nc should begins here, not at 01:25:624 (1) -
01:26:824 (2,3) - remove all claps from those sliders, thaey sounds just weird
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
00:00:224 (1) - slider should begins at 00:00:224 -
00:03:024 (3) - remove clap. really bad idea to create two rhytms with one clap, it sounds just bad.
00:03:124 (4) - ^
00:06:224 (4,1) - ^
00:08:224 (5) - ^,also nc should begins here, not at 00:08:624 (1) - follow your pattern and new part in music
00:09:424 (4,7) - ^
00:10:224 (7) - ^
imho it will be much better if you will replace all claps what i mentiored with default normal whistle
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - i'd add default whistles at the beginning of those sliders too
00:12:024 (1) - too suddenly spinner what really not fit here as well. just remove it and add short break
00:17:224 - add note here + clap for better rhytm
00:17:624 (4) - clap to the end of slider
00:20:224 - add note. vocals on this part is much stronger, so i suggest you focused on it
00:21:824 - ^
00:23:424 - ^
00:27:624 - add note + clap for better rhytm
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this part is just called for normal default whistles, why you dont use it here? :\
00:45:024 - note for better rhytm
00:50:624 (3) - nc since you ended slowdown part here
00:53:624 - rhytm suggestion:
00:56:424 (4) - strongly recommend delete repeat and add note at 00:56:824 - for better rhytm
01:06:324 - delete note here, it unneeded
01:12:224 (5) - nc since new part of music and for better readability
01:16:024 (1,3) - with such low ar it looks like pretty bad overlap, try to avoid it
01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - delete all claps from here. also whistles fits more instead as for me
placement is pretty nice, i like it. just need some hitsounds & rhytm work :p
[Insane]
*Decrease AR and OD by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability
*Tickrate 1 sounds much better for me
00:45:024 (2) - rhytm suggestion:
00:48:024 (2) - forgot clap at the end?
00:51:424 (4) - remove clap
00:57:224 (2,3,4,5) - just suggestion:
01:19:824 (6,2) - bad overlap, please try to avoid it
01:21:224 (5,2) - ^
01:26:024 (3) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - remove clap
01:26:824 (1) - ^
01:28:424 (3) - ^
probably all. pretty solid mapset, good luck with rank
Topic Starter
thanks for modding Kodora ><
nsfw - nah, maybe not
audio leadin - fixed
tags - will fix
offset - fix
Easy - 100% fixed
Normal - 50% fixed (don't fix spacing, I think its ok)
Hard - 90% fixed
Insane 85% fixed
nsfw - nah, maybe not
audio leadin - fixed
tags - will fix
offset - fix
Easy - 100% fixed
Normal - 50% fixed (don't fix spacing, I think its ok)
Hard - 90% fixed
Insane 85% fixed
second mod and irc ~
15:56 Xinely: btw irc mod?
15:56 P A N: ok
15:56 Xinely: easy
15:56 Xinely: 00:46:822 (2) - x:152 y:320 better imo
15:56 Xinely: sorry
15:56 Xinely: i mean x:156 y:316
15:57 P A N: ok fix
15:57 Xinely: btw you need softsliderslide for avoid aa sound like "sreeeeet" in 00:47:622 - 00:48:022 -
15:57 Xinely: to make it clear
15:58 Xinely: yap need softsliderslide2
15:59 Xinely: you can take in my map about sliderslide and rename soft-sliderslide2
15:59 P A N: ok
16:02 Xinely: 01:18:822 (4) - move it 88,212
16:02 Xinely: it's hard to catch for newbie, straight better
16:02 Xinely: fix spacing after this :P
16:03 P A N: oh god D:
16:03 Xinely: ;3;
16:03 Xinely: easy done
16:05 Xinely: still in easy? i will wait ~
16:06 P A N: ok
16:06 P A N: spacing fix
16:06 Xinely: go to normal~
16:06 Xinely: 00:11:622 - remove finish ><
16:07 P A N: ok
16:07 Xinely: 00:20:822 (2) - 252, 236? spacing 1,05x is it okay but if i were you i will avoid that :P
16:08 P A N: hm.. I think i not fix about spacing in normal
16:08 Xinely: ok
16:08 P A N: because i have easy already? D: is it okay
16:08 Xinely: ok ok
16:10 Xinely: 00:26:822 (1,3) - make this same shape slider
16:10 Xinely: it's better xD
16:10 Xinely: you can remove (3) and copy paste from (1)
16:10 P A N: omg
16:10 P A N: how can i miss this
16:11 Xinely: ctrl+H and ctrl+G XD
16:13 Xinely: 00:52:822 (2) - 208,260
16:14 P A N: fix
16:14 Xinely: 00:54:822 (2) - spacing 1,20?
16:15 Xinely: 1,21 i mean
16:16 Xinely: and 00:58:422 (2) - spacing 1,16 <-- fix this~
16:17 P A N: ok
16:19 Xinely: 01:17:222 (3) - 164,176 for branket :3
16:20 Xinely: 01:22:822 (1) - ctrl+H this for better flow?
16:20 Xinely: wait, ctrl+J i mean X_X
16:20 P A N: lol
16:21 Xinely: bakanely -w-
16:21 P A N: ahh no ><
16:21 Xinely: normal done
16:22 P A N: ok
16:23 Xinely: hard, irc with you or with Guest diff mapper?
16:23 P A N: me
16:23 Xinely: ok
16:24 P A N: the own mapper nearly to quit osu >_>
16:24 Xinely: 00:00:822 (2) - NC this for consistency
16:24 Xinely: Q_Q
16:24 P A N: k nc
16:25 Xinely: 00:06:322 - remove finish?
16:25 P A N: ok
16:27 Xinely: 00:12:822 - i really suggest for add slider from here until 00:13:022 -
16:27 Xinely: feels empty
16:28 P A N: and swap nc with 00:13:222 - ? 0.0
16:29 Xinely: yap
16:33 Xinely: 00:20:222 (1) - ctrl+h and put in 248,112
16:33 Xinely: so far after spin suddenly in that
16:33 Xinely: make insta miss ~
16:34 Xinely: 00:25:022 (5) - add note in 116,184.. feel empty
16:36 Xinely: 00:53:222 (4) - ctrl+H
16:37 P A N: 00:25:022 - nah is this ok http://puu.sh/2SxDw.jpg
16:37 Xinely: 00:56:822 (1) - finish
16:37 Xinely: okay ~
16:40 Xinely: 01:04:422 (3) - personally, i want to add jump in here with ctrl+G
16:40 P A N: ok ctrl g done
16:41 Xinely: 01:09:222 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - btw why spacing suddenly different (1,00x) in here?
16:41 Xinely: i don't think it's fit
16:41 Xinely: i prefer still with normal spacing 1,1x
16:42 P A N: oh... god
16:42 Xinely: 01:17:622 - finish ~
16:42 Xinely: fix that spacing ~ it's awkward
16:43 Xinely: and last 01:27:222 (4) - NC for consistency
16:43 P A N: ok, maybe when u mod Insane
16:43 P A N: I will fix hard's spacing? D:
16:44 Xinely: fix that first
16:44 Xinely: i will wait (:
16:44 P A N: oh thank you
16:44 Xinely: yw (:
16:46 Xinely: tell me when done in hard ~
16:46 P A N: ok ><
16:48 P A N: meh what do think about this jump http://puu.sh/2SxOE.jpg
16:48 P A N: is it to hard for hard?
16:48 Xinely: it's okay imo
16:48 P A N: ok then
16:49 Xinely: eh submit?
16:50 P A N: submit hard D:
16:50 P A N: or no
16:50 P A N: I cancle it now
16:50 Xinely: omg lol
16:50 Xinely: i didn't finish mod
16:50 Xinely: insane now?
16:50 P A N: ok I cancle it
16:50 P A N: lol
16:50 P A N: sure
16:50 Xinely: insane
16:50 Xinely: 00:01:422 (2) - ctrl+G this, deathly 1/4 jump Q_Q
16:51 P A N: haha
16:51 P A N: ok done
16:52 Xinely: 00:14:622 (4) - deathly 1/4 jump too Q_Q
16:52 P A N: A_A
16:53 Xinely: 00:26:222 (1,3) - swap NC please
16:53 Xinely: ~
16:54 Xinely: 00:28:822 (1) - remove NC
16:55 Xinely: 00:32:222 - maybe add note here
16:56 Xinely: 00:36:022 (1) - ctrl+G better flow imo
16:56 Xinely: 00:42:422 (1) - ctrl+H~
16:57 Xinely: 00:58:422 (5) - NC for consistency ~
16:58 Xinely: 01:14:422 (5) - same as above
16:58 Xinely: 01:17:222 (3) - i think prefer ctrl+G
16:59 Xinely: 01:27:422 (4) - oh lol 1 grid left
16:59 Xinely: eh? i mean right Q_Q
17:00 P A N: lol
17:00 Xinely: 01:28:622 (4) - 1 grid left
17:00 Xinely: done it
Good Luck again ~
Topic Starter
ahh thanks ><
fixed 94%
fixed 94%
[เจเนหรา]
ไม่มีอะ
[Insane]
ดิฟนี้ มีการ NC ทุกๆ 4 beat ไม่แนะนำ เพราะว่า เวลาโดนโน๊ตที่ นิวคอมโบตัวใหม่มันจะได้เลือด ถ้ามันได้เลือดบ่อยๆแล้วมันจะง่ายเกิน
แนะนำให้ไล่ nc ที่ 8 beats จะดีกว่านี้
แนะนำว่าเพิ่ม AR อีกหนึ่งจะมันกว่าเยอะเล่นง่ายกว่าด้วย
00:11:922 (6) - นิวคอมโบตัวนี้ เพราะ โดน trap หลายรอบมาก ระยะ 4>5 5>6 มันไม่เท่ากัน
[หอยกาบดิฟ]
ถ้าอินเซนเป็น ar 9 ดิฟนี้ ar 8 ไปก็ดี เพราะโน๊ตแน่นเหมือนกัน (ไม่เปลี่ยนก็ดี คนม๊อดจะได้เล่น HR HD เก็บ PP ได้ <<
00:16:722 (7,1) - ลดสเปชระหว่างรัวให้เหลือ 0.6 เท่าโน๊ตก่อนๆซะ
00:45:622 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ไอ้ช่วงนี้อะ ถ้าจะเสมือนว่า โน๊ตตรงนี้เป็น bpm หารสองแบบไอ้ที่ทำอยู่เนี่ย
เขาใส่แคลปกันเส้นตรงกลาง คือ บีทที่สาม ของห้องเพลง
00:45:622 (1) - ขยับไปอีกบีท ไปทำเสียงแคลปตรงนี้แทน 00:46:422 (3) - ส่วนไอ้ที่เหลืออีกสองอันก็เหมือนๆกัน
ขยับไปอีก หนึ่งช่วง
[normal]
00:54:622 (1,2) - เรียงตรงนี้ให้ตรงๆหน่อยสไลเดอร์เฉไปทางขวาอีกนิด
01:25:622 (2,3,4) - แตกเป็น สไลเดอร์ 1/2 สองอันบ้างก็ได้
[Easy]
00:31:222 (3) - สไลเดอร์ตัวนี้ 00:31:922 จบตรงนี้ดีกว่า ตรงเสียงด้วย ไม่ต้องกลัวว่าลง 1/4 แล้ว player จะกดไม่ได้โน๊ตต่อไปสไลเดอร์ ระยะห่างก็เหลือเฟือ
00:37:622 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบ นี้ http://puu.sh/2SHqZ.jpg
01:25:622 (1,2,3) - ตรงนี้ ใช้ เสียงนกหวีดแบบ default normal ใส่ตรงหางของสไลเดอร์ทั้งสามอัน ถ้าคิดว่าเจ๋งก็ใส่ดิฟอื่นๆด้วย
แมพดีไม่ค่อยมีที่ให้ติ ให้ดาว
ไม่มีอะ
[Insane]
ดิฟนี้ มีการ NC ทุกๆ 4 beat ไม่แนะนำ เพราะว่า เวลาโดนโน๊ตที่ นิวคอมโบตัวใหม่มันจะได้เลือด ถ้ามันได้เลือดบ่อยๆแล้วมันจะง่ายเกิน
แนะนำให้ไล่ nc ที่ 8 beats จะดีกว่านี้
แนะนำว่าเพิ่ม AR อีกหนึ่งจะมันกว่าเยอะเล่นง่ายกว่าด้วย
00:11:922 (6) - นิวคอมโบตัวนี้ เพราะ โดน trap หลายรอบมาก ระยะ 4>5 5>6 มันไม่เท่ากัน
[หอยกาบดิฟ]
ถ้าอินเซนเป็น ar 9 ดิฟนี้ ar 8 ไปก็ดี เพราะโน๊ตแน่นเหมือนกัน (ไม่เปลี่ยนก็ดี คนม๊อดจะได้เล่น HR HD เก็บ PP ได้ <<
00:16:722 (7,1) - ลดสเปชระหว่างรัวให้เหลือ 0.6 เท่าโน๊ตก่อนๆซะ
00:45:622 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ไอ้ช่วงนี้อะ ถ้าจะเสมือนว่า โน๊ตตรงนี้เป็น bpm หารสองแบบไอ้ที่ทำอยู่เนี่ย
เขาใส่แคลปกันเส้นตรงกลาง คือ บีทที่สาม ของห้องเพลง
00:45:622 (1) - ขยับไปอีกบีท ไปทำเสียงแคลปตรงนี้แทน 00:46:422 (3) - ส่วนไอ้ที่เหลืออีกสองอันก็เหมือนๆกัน
ขยับไปอีก หนึ่งช่วง
[normal]
00:54:622 (1,2) - เรียงตรงนี้ให้ตรงๆหน่อยสไลเดอร์เฉไปทางขวาอีกนิด
01:25:622 (2,3,4) - แตกเป็น สไลเดอร์ 1/2 สองอันบ้างก็ได้
[Easy]
00:31:222 (3) - สไลเดอร์ตัวนี้ 00:31:922 จบตรงนี้ดีกว่า ตรงเสียงด้วย ไม่ต้องกลัวว่าลง 1/4 แล้ว player จะกดไม่ได้โน๊ตต่อไปสไลเดอร์ ระยะห่างก็เหลือเฟือ
00:37:622 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็นแบบ นี้ http://puu.sh/2SHqZ.jpg
01:25:622 (1,2,3) - ตรงนี้ ใช้ เสียงนกหวีดแบบ default normal ใส่ตรงหางของสไลเดอร์ทั้งสามอัน ถ้าคิดว่าเจ๋งก็ใส่ดิฟอื่นๆด้วย
แมพดีไม่ค่อยมีที่ให้ติ ให้ดาว
Topic Starter
thanks regenz
almost all fixed
almost all fixed
Hello P A N !
General
so clean o_O !
Easy
00:31:222 (3) - end this slider at 00:32:422 , the current slider doesn't sound good enough. Do not forget adjust spacing + clap on the tail of this slider too
Normal
00:18:422 (6) - finish only the first of this slider (00:18:422) because it sounds exactly the same with 00:20:022 (1) -
00:31:622 (3) - heh, almost same problem with the Easy, I would suggest you in this way to be the most suitable for this diff.
something like this ! , don't forget to add clap on the head of this slider too 00:32:422 (4) -
00:50:622 (x) - add a note here , it's so much important because the music is obviously emphasized at this point !
AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:422 (1) - I highly suggest you delete this one because it is not recommended to place a note before the first offset. Also I think you can remove it without any problem since other diffs didn't use it as well. The sound on this slider is quite vague too :\
00:37:422 (1) - whistle should be on the last point (00:37:622) so that this sound would fit with these 00:37:822 (2,3,4,5) - better
00:50:622 (1,2,3) - the "drum" sampleset sounds :\\\ odd ._. , I would change to this screenshot, It would make much more sense when you use this at some points of the map such as 00:03:022 (3,4) - , 00:06:222 (4,1) -
Insane
Some slider jumps are hard to be noticed, I will point out those sliders in question.
00:02:222 (5) - You can move it closer like this to make it proper and possible to hit the next slider more comfortably like this.
00:06:022 (1,3,5) - I really don't like repeat sliders like this because they play bad. It's hard to notice for the first time and people usually get x100 easily from the last repeat. I would change to something like this
but what I think it can play best is normal stream , just that
00:35:422 (4) - ctrl+g makes this slider read easier and doesn't ruin the way people play at all also move to x:268 y:188 to make the blanket look proper
00:58:422 (1) - remove NC here please, it's formed as a square and you ruined it
01:19:222 (4) - finish head would be nice to fit with the music
great map you have there
call me back in-game or forum or whatever you are comfortable
General
so clean o_O !
Easy
00:31:222 (3) - end this slider at 00:32:422 , the current slider doesn't sound good enough. Do not forget adjust spacing + clap on the tail of this slider too
Normal
00:18:422 (6) - finish only the first of this slider (00:18:422) because it sounds exactly the same with 00:20:022 (1) -
00:31:622 (3) - heh, almost same problem with the Easy, I would suggest you in this way to be the most suitable for this diff.
something like this ! , don't forget to add clap on the head of this slider too 00:32:422 (4) -
00:50:622 (x) - add a note here , it's so much important because the music is obviously emphasized at this point !
AsprikaQ's Hard
00:00:422 (1) - I highly suggest you delete this one because it is not recommended to place a note before the first offset. Also I think you can remove it without any problem since other diffs didn't use it as well. The sound on this slider is quite vague too :\
00:37:422 (1) - whistle should be on the last point (00:37:622) so that this sound would fit with these 00:37:822 (2,3,4,5) - better
00:50:622 (1,2,3) - the "drum" sampleset sounds :\\\ odd ._. , I would change to this screenshot, It would make much more sense when you use this at some points of the map such as 00:03:022 (3,4) - , 00:06:222 (4,1) -
Insane
Some slider jumps are hard to be noticed, I will point out those sliders in question.
00:02:222 (5) - You can move it closer like this to make it proper and possible to hit the next slider more comfortably like this.
00:06:022 (1,3,5) - I really don't like repeat sliders like this because they play bad. It's hard to notice for the first time and people usually get x100 easily from the last repeat. I would change to something like this
but what I think it can play best is normal stream , just that
00:35:422 (4) - ctrl+g makes this slider read easier and doesn't ruin the way people play at all also move to x:268 y:188 to make the blanket look proper
00:58:422 (1) - remove NC here please, it's formed as a square and you ruined it
01:19:222 (4) - finish head would be nice to fit with the music
great map you have there
call me back in-game or forum or whatever you are comfortable
Topic Starter
All fixed, thanks so much frostmourne ><
Updated!!
Updated!!
จิ๊บไปหลับเดี๋ยวมาคงดูให้แหละ lol ดิฟหอยกาบ Clam ASP's HARDP A N wrote:
All fixed, thanks so much frostmourne ><
Updated!!
Recheck
Easy
00:32:822 (4) - finish
guess that I can bubble after this
Easy
00:32:822 (4) - finish
guess that I can bubble after this
Topic Starter
yes fixed!
updated
updated
จะได้ฟองแล้ว O_O ดีใจด้วยล่วงหน้า
อื้อCrystilonZ wrote:
จะได้ฟองแล้ว O_O ดีใจด้วยล่วงหน้า
I wish you best of luck for the first rank !
EDIT: rebubble due to accident updating
Topic Starter
อร๊างงงงงงงง
thanks for bubble frostmourne ><
thanks for bubble frostmourne ><
gratz on first bubble
Video have a NSFW ponit ~ please use this map video ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/75687
Topic Starter
video fixed ! ><
OK, i'll finish full mod later , please wait me :3
Kodora
Finished mod ~!
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
Call me back ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
[AsprikaQ's Hard]
- 00:39:022 (6) - The spacing a bit suddenly,move to X:392 Y:384,it's followed 1.5 distance.
- 00:56:822 (1,2,3,4) - Missing symmetrical,please use this code.
256,324,56822,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,192,57222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,57622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,58022,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 01:26:822 (3) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:27:222 (1).
[Normal]
- 00:08:422 (3) - Move 1 gird right,symmetrical 00:07:222 (1) - .
- 00:47:622 - You are forgot add clap to here.
- 01:08:022 (3) - How about move to X:24 Y:192,flow much better.
- 01:25:622 (2) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:25:022 (1).
[Easy]
- 01:09:222 (4,2) - Move 1 gird left,symmetrical 01:07:622 (2) - .
Call me back ~
Topic Starter
ALLFIXEDDD !!!!!!!!!!!!Kawayi Rika wrote:
Finished mod ~!
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions[AsprikaQ's Hard]
fixed
- 00:39:022 (6) - The spacing a bit suddenly,move to X:392 Y:384,it's followed 1.5 distance. fixed
- 00:56:822 (1,2,3,4) - Missing symmetrical,please use this code. fixed
256,324,56822,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,192,57222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,57622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,192,58022,1,0,0:0:0:0:- 01:26:822 (3) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:27:222 (1).
[Normal]
fixed
- 00:08:422 (3) - Move 1 gird right,symmetrical 00:07:222 (1) - . fixed
- 00:47:622 - You are forgot add clap to here. fixed
- 01:08:022 (3) - How about move to X:24 Y:192,flow much better. fixed
- 01:25:622 (2) - Add new combo and Remove new combo 01:25:022 (1).
[Easy]
fixed
- 01:09:222 (4,2) - Move 1 gird left,symmetrical 01:07:622 (2) - .
Call me back ~
thank you rika ^^
OK ~ Nice job ~
Congratulation for 1st Rank ~ <3
Congratulation for 1st Rank ~ <3
Yeah \o/ !!!! congrats P A N :3
Congratz PAN
AsprikaQ
Topic Starter
thanks all \^0^/
Gratz for first ranked :3/
โอ้ววว~~ ยินดีด้วยกับแมพแรงค์แรก =w=!!
I love Pan
Congratz! P A N pro!! ^^
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