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niceplayer
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niceplayer
from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help.

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good.
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same.

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
Hard... With 00:00:424 (1,2,3,4), that's more than a insane. Remove them.
I guess you like to put most difficult in front. OK, your will is permitted.
00:04:624 (2,3,4) - Death pattern which I'd like to call. Even that 3 didn't catch the accents! Pass it is able ,but rhythm is terrible
00:10:224 (7) - Right down make it same distant to 6 and to next tag.
SPOILER
00:16:295 - (6,7) put them in the end of slider or drag 7 out. No such pattern before.
00:41:624 (2) - Vocal in 00:41:824 but tag end in 00:41:924
01:03:224 (1) - 01:06:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OK these are fun. And others are boring in Kiai.


[SSS]
You can't change the pattern in everywhere of the map. Hitcircle and slider type is good in the beginning. But strangely changed after.
00:15:124 (4,5) - 00:16:745 - 00:29:934 - 00:51:124 - 00:51:524 - 00:55:124
I guess it will feel better if you put the slider back the same position of circle.

00:52:224 (1) - Not good flow.
01:13:224 (2,3,4) - 2 and 4 is easier to read to be together imo.

[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset?
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume.
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound.
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4.

A random place suggestion

SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns.


I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
P A N
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niceplayer wrote:

from #modreqs

Take me hours god.

[Easy]
Slider circle slider-------->Slider with reverse. I guess this will help. thanks but i'm afraid the postion of note will bad (lazy to remap D:)

[Normal]
00:52:824 (5) - Half beat later is good. m-maybe u not update normal yet? D:
01:25:224 (4) - Well, Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024. Make it start from 01:25:024 and take 1.5 beat to end same. fixed


[Insane]
Hitsound remains lots to do. But such suggestion is out of my ability

00:06:024 (1,2,3) - offset? fixed
00:45:624 - Audio in timing. Soft or lower the volume. fixed
00:48:224 (7) - Clap. Or clap in 8 won't sound. fixed
01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Not a good pattern, especailly the slider start at 3/4. no its look a bit weird

A random place suggestion

SPOILER
I like the big stream before this, especially the combo sound.So I make the slider tend to make full sound and let the NC slider start at 01:08:224

256,72,67424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,72,67824,2,0,P|264:40|260:28,2,42.5
176,124,68224,6,0,P|172:200|200:212,1,85
252,248,68624,2,0,P|296:208|332:216,1,85
332,300,69024,2,0,P|264:360|248:356,1,85

01:25:224 (9,10) - Dareka pronounced from 01:25:024, and this two should't be accented though music sound so. Hardest pattern for me to pass.Easy change them to circle or take better patterns. fixed


I can only help that far. Hitsound ,clean tag NC , better patterns ,better flow and so on. Still far from good imo.
thank you niceplayer
P A N
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Easy Normal SSS and Insane Updated
Sieg
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Sieg
Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH

AsprikaQ's Hard:
this is too overmapped to be hard, I won't mod this, sorry orz

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) -

SSS:
seems fine

Good Luck!
P A N
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Sieg wrote:

Hello

Genral:
remove newtubedark.zip from map folder ok delete

Easy:
AR+1? 2 is kinda low for 150bpm ok
01:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/2yuM5 sounds much better ok

Normal:
00:04:024 (1) - for better flow http://puu.sh/2yuP2 ok
00:14:024 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/2yuQH ok

Insane:
AR9 feels too fast, consider to -1 ok
00:10:024 (1,2) - swap nc ok
00:26:024 (3,1) - this 1.2 DS after jumps plays not so good, increase a bit ok
01:14:024 (3,4,5) - strange direction after 01:13:424 (2) - fixed

Good Luck!
thank for modding Sieg ><
P A N
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P A N
All Update!
P A N
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P A N
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83699

ah fail wating someone to delete it
Last edited by P A N , edited 1 time in total.
P A N
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:)
Totoro
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Joined November 2012
Totoro
Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x?

00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC

00:32:824 (3) - NC

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:28:024 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle would look better

00:29:624 (1,2) - make a better blanket

00:40:624 (5,6,1,2) - square would fit better

00:47:224 (1,2) - this blanket doesnt fit imo

01:12:024 (1) - Remove NC

01:12:824 (3) - NC

01:18:824 (1) - remove NC

01:19:224 (3) - NC

[SSS]

00:53:624 (1) - ctrl+g

00:54:024 (2) - ^

00:54:424 (3) - ^

00:54:824 (4) - ^

01:20:024 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - slanted shape

[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical

nice diff
Azer
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Azer
Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
  1. 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders.
  2. 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  3. 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack
  4. 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924
  5. 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  6. 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion
  7. 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section.
  8. 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong.
  9. 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^
  10. 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to
  11. 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency.
  12. 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider.

AsprikaQ's Hard
  1. 01:12:024 (1) - Remove this note
  2. There's honestly nothing else I can see that could be improved, good job all around.
P A N
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sorry for delay but I will come to fix it and give u kds, please wait ><
P A N
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-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

[General]

Song is so Kawaii~~ >w<☆ i love it.

Love the difficulties too~~

thank you

[Easy]

I have a feeling that the notes are too close to each other... why don't you use 1.2x? I want 1.0x because it look basic? I think..
00:02:424 (3,1) - distance error fixed

00:08:024 (2,1) - ^ fixed

00:12:824 (3,1) - ^ fixed

00:29:624 (1,2) - why don't you make these pararell for better appearance the (2) is flip horizontally from 00:25:624 (3) - already

00:33:224 (1,2,3) - distance error fixed

01:19:624 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed

[Normal]

00:05:624 (3) - this kind of slider might confuse players. make it into more simpler shape ok I will wait for another one talk about this the i will fix

00:16:824 (1,2,3) - make these pararell ok

00:26:024 (3,1) - distance error no

00:31:624 (1) - remove NC ok

00:32:824 (3) - NC ok

00:50:824 (6,7) - distance error no

01:04:824 (4,1) - ^ no

I dont want to fix the distance of Normal because I have Easy already and thank you :3


[Insane]

00:11:924 (6) - i think this note should be centered ok

01:14:024 (3,4,5,6) - it would look better if this shape was symmetrical how to symmetrical D:

nice diff
thank you for mod ><

AzerFrost wrote:

Hii~
m4m ^w^

Insane
  1. 00:01:424 (2,5) 00:03:024 (3) 00:04:624 (2,5) - I feel like some of these should be circles and not sliders. b-but I love this :(
  2. 00:07:924 (3) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little :(
  3. 00:11:924 (6) - Unstack ok
  4. 00:31:824 (4) - Replace with circle, start 00:32:024 (5) at 00:31:924 ok
  5. 00:32:724 (7) - The offbeat slider kills the flow a little
  6. 00:33:424 (2,3) - Make these further apart to avoid confusion ok
  7. 00:48:824 (1,2) - Optional to change but I feel these are too far apart when you compare them to the other similar patterns in this section. ok
  8. 00:51:024 (3) - Feels wrong. :/
  9. 00:55:024 (5,1) - ^ ok
  10. 01:07:424 (3,4,5,6) - Change from to ok
  11. 01:14:424 (5,6,1,2) - These are the only notes in this section that don't have sliders corresponding to the singer's voice, I'd recommend adjusting it for consistency. ok
  12. 01:22:824 (1,2) - Space these apart OR add a note at 01:23:024 OR make 01:22:824 (1) a slider. hmm.. I think it's ok :/
thanks both for modding ><
AsprikaQ
AsprikaQ
http://puu.sh/2BQ5F Everything from -iCo- and AzerFrost's mod fixed. :)
P A N
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All Updated!!
Xinely
5,014 posts
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Xinely
Hi P A N (:
from m4m in game

[General]
1. use Choose me♡ダーリン (TV Size) in title? and Romanised title is Choose me Darling (TV Size)
2. Remove letterbox during breaks in all diff , no need this because this map without break time
3. in SSS diff. Rename become SSS's Hard+? First i think it's Insane+ (read as S.S diff oh lol)
4. 00:13:624 - kiai on and off in 00:13:724 - (kiai fountain)

[Easy]
00:02:024 (2) - 1 grid left?
00:08:424 (1) - remove NC for consistency
00:11:924 - clap?
00:11:624 - ^
00:15:624 (2) - 1 grid left or remap the position, i think newbie hard to catch if circle in up on slider's tail
00:20:824 (2) - ^
00:17:224 (4) - NC and remove 00:18:424 (1) -
00:20:024 (2) - NC this
00:24:024 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712806 , if yes 00:25:224 (2) - x:116 y:64
00:36:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:48:824 (4,1) - ^
00:39:624 (4) - NC
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - hard to catch. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712818?
00:55:224 (1) - whistle in slider's body?
01:05:624 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712826?
01:16:024 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:19:624 (3) - NC for consistency
01:22:424 (1) - x:156 y:188 for same line with 01:20:824 (4) -, fix the spacing after this note if you follow this

[Normal]
AR+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:824 (2) - better if https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712834 imo
00:05:624 (3) - last node x:312,y:316
00:06:824 - clap?
00:09:224 (4) - curved for consistent with 00:08:424 (3) - ?
00:12:824 (1) - curved? ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/712861
00:15:224 (4,1) - swap NC for consistency
00:23:624 (6,1) - ^
00:19:624 (4) - 1 grid right
00:22:824 (5) - straight same as 00:21:224 (3) - ?
00:26:824 (1) - spacing issue (1,04x)
00:31:424 (6) - spacing issue (1,22)
00:32:624 (9) - x:56 y:144
00:48:824 (4) - NC for consistency
00:51:624 (4) - 1 grid right better imo
00:53:224 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:54:624 - add note for follow vocal?
01:00:024 - kiai time on in here, in timing point 01:00:044 (unsnapped)
01:09:624 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency
01:28:624 - finish

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
HP+1 and OD+1 for same spread with other diff
00:04:624 (2) - x:280 y:332, better flow imo
00:05:824 (6) - x: 380 y:160?
00:05:424 (5,1) - swap NC? because you NC always in downbeat
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:07:824 (3) - remove clap?
00:08:624 (1,2) - use 0,6 spacing same as 00:07:824 (3,4) - ?
00:06:824 (2) - clap?
00:10:424 (1,2,3) - you can make jump in here.. ex : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713004
00:13:624 (4) - NC? because you NC in every downbeat
00:24:824 (4) - ^
00:15:824 (4) - unstack please, maybe in x:392 y:40 for make jump too
00:15:024 (1,3) - swap NC?
00:23:624 (1) - spacing issue (0,87x)
00:38:424 (4) - ctrl+G? better imo
00:56:024 (2) - ^
00:46:424 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713017
00:47:224 - remove finish.. i think not follow the music
01:04:424 (3) - spacing issue (1,04x)
01:12:224 (4) - ctrl+G? to avoid jump 2,74x too QAQ
01:15:224 (1) - better if stacked with 01:14:024 (3) -
NC problem which must give NC in every downbeat (long white tick) or every 2 downbeat

[SSS]
hmmm little crazy normal spacing is 2,00 (opinion)
00:00:824 - Finish
00:08:824 (5,6) - omg... jump 4,17x (more than insane imo)
00:13:624 - Finish and remove clap
01:00:024 - ^
in here too. NC problem.. if you NC every downbeat. NC them.. like 00:13:624 - until 00:20:024 - you NC every 2 downbeat.
And in00:21:824 - until 00:26:424 - you NC every downbeat.
And also about Finish.. you need them heavy music. you can look which one need finish in Easy diff

[Insane]
00:08:824 - NC please because u NC in everydownbeat
00:24:824 (6) - ^
00:34:424 (5) - ^
00:47:224 (4) - ^
00:58:424 (5) - ^
01:09:424 (5) - ^
01:14:424 (5) - ^
01:24:024 (6) - ^
00:21:624 (8,1) - swap NC
00:36:024 (10,1) - ^
00:39:824 (1,6) - ^
00:45:624 (9,1) - ^
00:53:624 (8,1) - ^
00:52:024 (7,1) - ^
01:04:824 (4,1) - ^
01:17:624 (5,1) - ^
here SS that i play.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713036
Comment : nice insane.. fun to play.. i enjoy play this diff :oops:

Well, i love this song.. Star for it
Good Luck All!! >3<
P A N
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P A N
thanks Xinely for modding ><

Update my diffs!
Gloria Guard
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Gloria Guard
Hi P A N (:3 」_)=3

From my m4m queue :)


[General]

Tag conflict with SSS's Hard+ diff
SSS's Hard Tag = asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
All diff Tag = asprikaq imouto meensss
Hit sound used in the song does not go with the song,
please put the sound and hit


[Easy]

00:00:824 remove green line why this line volume 40% red line volume down here
00:03:624 i think this part add note because very awkward sound is feels hollow.
00:26:424 (6,7,1) hmm.. In my opinion, this pattern is hard.
I wish you smooth flow a little more, making the slider example this -> http://puu.sh/2E2iW
00:30:824 (1,2) If you have the above modifications, equally.
00:48:824 (1) This is slider unbalance i think 2 red point move x:220 y:32 is really perfect here


[Normal]

00:16:024 (2,3) I think this pattern blanket here -> http://puu.sh/2E2rr
00:20:824 (1,2,3) hmm this pattern can make a more unique shape -> http://puu.sh/2E2uf <- Triangular-shape
00:24:024 (2) This is slider move please x:344 y:96 really pretty Triangular-shape
00:27:624 (2,3) Ineligible pattern read by normal users i think this pattern change here -> http://puu.sh/2E2yi
00:31:224 (5) New combo
01:15:624 (4,1) Please this pattern normal users read is hard i think change this pattern -> http://puu.sh/2E2CS
01:19:424 (4,5,1,2,3) I think this pattern shape is pentagon? -> http://puu.sh/2E2EN


[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:45:224 (1) remove NC
00:51:624 (6,7,8,9,10) hmm.. This is pattern distance check please i don't understand this pattern specing
00:55:024 (2,3) I think this pattern beat awkward because 00:55:124 make sure to adjust the tempo to match lyrics


[SSS's Hard]

00:54:824 (4,5,1) Please change the direction of the slider to the natural flow Ctrl+G
01:21:624 (1) ^


[Insane]

00:31:924 I think this part add note becasue this part of the drum sound is heard
00:46:224 (7,8,1,2,3,4) hmm.. i think this pattern really awkward
It is recommended that you change the tempo -> http://puu.sh/2E30G
00:47:824 (1,2,3,4,5) Don't go with the beat of the song. please this beat change here -> http://puu.sh/2E33U



Good luck
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax
Hi P A N

mafia here

[General]
Why different bg for all diffs? Just curios.

[Easy]
00:25:624 (6) - Male this slider straight? dunno, that shape looks ugly imo.
00:30:824 - Add note w/ clap

Hitounds:
It's really empty without these claps imo. At least you can add a few of them.
00:18:824 - Add clap in slider tick.
00:24:424 - ^
00:26:024 -
00:27:625 - ^
00:30:024 - ^
00:31:624 - ^
00:38:024 - ^
00:38:824 - ^
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:024 - ^
00:47:624 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:51:624 - ^
00:55:624 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:11:624 - ^
01:13:224 - ^
01:18:024 - ^
01:26:024 - ^
01:28:424 - ^

[Normal]
00:11:624 (3) - Add clap here.
00:12:824 (1) - Add clap at slider's arrow.
00:15:624 (2) - Move to x:320 y:140
00:16:024 (3) - Move to x:364 y:240
00:16:824 (4) - Move to x:160 y:248
Whit those 3 you make a better triangle there.
00:50:824 (3) - Add clap at slider's head.
01:06:024 (1) - Ctrl + J? Better flow.
01:18:424 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - How about this pattern? The current one looks akward imo

The code:
132,96,78424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,32,78824,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,79224,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,120,79624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,80024,2,0,L|344:296,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,276,80824,2,0,L|208:176,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,81624,2,0,L|128:288,2,99.9999999999999,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:



Hitsounds:
Same as easy diff.
00:24:424 - Add clap in slider's tick.
00:42:824 - ^
00:44:424 - ^
00:46:824 - ^
00:49:224 - ^
00:57:224 - ^
00:58:824 - ^
01:02:024 - ^
01:05:224 - ^
01:12:424 - ^
01:24:424 - ^
01:25:224 -

Nice map o.o Good luck with it, Bye~
P A N
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P A N
thank GG and Zero hentai for modding ><

Update my Diff ! (again)

Edit: Update SSS's Hard diff
Drianel
38 posts
Joined July 2011
Drianel
Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator ;) this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2)
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too
01:15:724 Add circle?

>>>> SSS's Hard+ <<<<

01:25:624 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - can you separate them a bit? hmm... dunno... something like this?
SPOILER



>>>> AsprikaQ's Hard <<<<

00:23:624 (1) - Move down y=288
01:07:224 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up?
01:25:624 (1,2) - hmmm this is ok but you can follow the other pattern like 01:26:824 (3,4) - (1 slider only)

That's all i think, i can't mod more cause it's almost done :P

Good luck with your map P A N^^

P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Drianel wrote:

Hello P A N from my mod queue ^^

>>>> OVERALL <<<<

I WANT THIS RANKED!!!! great song, great note placement and great creator ;) this map is almost perfect so i mod some circles to be fixed overall thanks ><

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:04:024 (1) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? ok
00:03:624 (5) - move up this one aswell ok
00:53:224 (7) - move down 1 grid I think this one is ok :/
00:53:424 (8) - move up to y=296 to be in same "y" as 00:53:824 (2) ok
01:02:824 (5) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up? you may need to move 01:02:624 (4,1) too ok
01:15:724 Add circle? ok

thanks for modding Drianel :D
by the way thanks for the Shana pic :D
Update Insane!
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
m4m~

[General]
  1. Kiai 1 start on 01:00:024 ~ 01:11:224
    Kiai 2 start on 01:12:824 ~ 01:25:624
[AsprikaQ's Hard]

  1. 00:20:024 ~ 00:29:424 - nothing hitsound?! add some hitsound like whistle..like here whistle00:20:024,00:21:624,00:23:224,00:24:024....
  2. 00:53:224 (2) - move to (388,268)
  3. 01:15:224 (1) - overlap on 01:14:024 (3)
[SSS's Hard+]

  1. 00:24:024 (4) - Clap on start of slider
i can't find any problem!

[Insane]

  1. 00:21:624 (1) - Perfectly Overlap on 00:20:024 (1)
  2. 00:26:424 (3) - finish
  3. 00:29:624 (1,2,3,4) - add finish on start slider
  4. 01:02:824 (5) - add whistle start slider
  5. 01:05:624 (4) - add whistle
  6. 01:06:424 (11) - finish
  7. 01:09:424 (5) - NC
  8. 01:22:224 (5) - add whistle body slider
Easy and Normal Diff is good
Good luck for Rank :D
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thank for modding Pisces ><
Insane and SSS update
Easy Normal update for kial time
Erylex
Erylex
Hi.

Mod via my queue.

I think offset=820
Resnap kiai.

Easy Diff
00:25:220 (5) - NC
00:29:620 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:820 (4) - Add NC
01:02:820 (4) - ^
01:03:220 (1) - Remove NC

Normal
00:19:624 (7) - Move to x=408 y=228
00:30:024 (2) - Move to x=312 y=216
00:32:424 (4) - NC
00:32:824 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:624 (4) - NC
00:54:624 (6) - NC
00:54:824 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:224 (3) - Move to x=160 y=168 (For symmetric)

AsprikaQ's Hard

Change circle stack to http://puu.sh/2G5FF.png
00:42:824 (5) - NC
00:45:624 (1) - Remove NC

01:21:624 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:424 (7) - Add NC


SSS`Hard

Many hard spacing.

Good luck. :3
DeletedUser_1574070
DeletedUser_1574070
okay lets go

from my queue

kinda good map so I found few points sorry..

MAKE YOUR AUDIO LEAD-IN SAME BY OPENING YOUR OSU FILE IN NOTEPAD
http://puu.sh/2G60O.png MATCH ALL OF YOUR DIFFS 1000

Easy

00:14:424 (1) - spacing
00:15:624 (2) - ^
00:36:424 (2,3) - ^
00:50:824 (3,1) - ^

Normal

00:09:224 (4,5) - spacing

omg good diff

Hard

00:23:624 (1,2,3) - make this more smooth-ly.. a bit too straight
01:14:024 (3,1) - stack you can move circle 3
01:16:624 (4,1) - make these same?
01:26:824 (3,4) - to give more fun, consistency, why don't you put same rhythm with the former one? 01:25:624 (1,2) - here

Hard+

00:12:024 (1) - just giving time for players to rest is better idea. remove
00:54:824 (4) - ctrl G? im not sure

Insane

00:10:024 (5,5) - stack you can move former slider
00:49:424 (2,1,3) - stack



kinda good job hope your map ranked :)
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thank Clique and Erylex for modding ><

Easy Normal SSS Insane Updated
mercury2004
615 posts
Joined February 2010
mercury2004
M&M oops M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
you dont need to put another source name into the tag. remove Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!


Easy
HP drain - 1 . beat is pretty dense for easy difficult. if any newbie miss a part . he / she will fail the mapให้คนที่บ้านเล่นแล้วเฟล พลาดสไลตัวเดียวหายทั้งแถบ
AR-1
00:10:424 (1,2) - use 1 long slider
00:24:024 (4) - slightly unsymetrical
00:55:224 (1) - remove this and start spinner from there. end at 00:58:424

Normal
00:54:624 (6) - better nc here
00:54:824 (1) - and remove nc here

AsprikaQ's Hard
sliders shapes can still be improve, i'm not going to point it out. you should know it well
the first part note arrangement is kinda random, would be great of you arrange it in a symetrical way
00:37:424 (1,2,3,4,5) - good to avoid this pattern in hard dif
00:45:624 (1) - remove nc
01:11:224 (5,1,2,3) - pretty cunfusing jump. nc ing would fix
01:22:424 (5) - nc

SSS's Hard+
better like this. old one disrupt the flow
SPOILER

Insane
00:04:624 (2) - point this head to the another slider head
00:15:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - form star shape jump? like this ?
SPOILER
00:32:324 (6) - add note here. flow better
00:53:624 (9) - remove nc
00:53:824 (1) - nc

nothing much to say. this map were modded many time and most error are fixed. a bat attention would rank this soon\
แปะคุโด้ตามมารยาท

edited : spelling check
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for modding :D

Easy Normal and Insane Updated
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
hi P A N :P
General
add SSS in tags

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [AsprikaQ's Hard] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!
- [Easy] : asprikaq meensss
- [Insane] : asprikaq meensss
- [Normal] : asprikaq meensss
- [SSS's Hard+] : asprikaq meensss Kono_Naka_ni_Hitori Imouto_ga_Iru!

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [AsprikaQ's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:024, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

- [SSS's Hard+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:13:624, ends on 00:13:724
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:014, ends on 01:12:724
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:12:824, ends on 01:25:624

[easy]
00:03:624 (4) - Move to x:132 y:160
00:04:024 (1) - Move node to x:64 y:160
00:05:224 (2) - Move node to x:124 y:316 , move node #2 to {x:192 y:328}.

[normal]
00:05:624 (3) - Move node #2 to x:440 y:132, move node #3 to x:428 y:172, move node #9 to x:324 y:316
00:22:824 (5) - is out of the screen

[AsprikaQ's Hard]

00:20:424 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:42:424 (4) - Add NC.
01:14:424 (5) - Add NC.
01:15:224 (1) - remove NC.
01:16:024 (3) - Add NC.

[Insane]

01:00:024 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

[SSS's Hard+]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:06:814 - snap to 00:06:824
00:20:214 - snap to 00:20:224
00:25:014 - snap to 00:25:024
00:26:614 - snap to 00:26:624
01:00:014 - snap to 01:00:024

nice mapset *.*
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for modding eLtigreXXx :D

my diff Update
Edit: Update SSS's Hard+
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
ดีครับ
จาก #thai นะ

General
00:45:624 (1,2,3) - พี่น่าจะทำเสียงให้เบาลงหน่อย ให้เข้ากับอารมณ์เพลงนิสนึง แล้วค่อยๆ ดังขึ้น

Easy
แค่แนะนำนะๆ
00:29:624 (1) - ทำเป็นครึ่งนึง แล้วย้อนเอา มันเข้ากับเนื้อร้องฝ่านะ

Normal
00:53:824 (5) - เอ้ะ ? จงใจให้เบี้ยว หรือยังไง
00:37:224 (3) - เลื่อนขึ้น ช่องนึง จะได้ดูดีขึ้นหน่อย มั้ง ?
พอจบแต่ละท่อน ใส่ Finish เข้าไปหน่อย น่าจะดูดีนะ(ทุกดิฟเลยแหล่ะ )

Asprika's Hard
00:20:224 (1) - ใส่โน้ตตัวนี้ตัวนึงไหม ? เนื้อร้องมามาตรงนี้ (หรือติ้กสีฟ้าก็ได้)

SSS's Hard
01:26:224 (2,2) - Finish หน่อย น่าจะดูดี

Insane
ดูดีแล้วแหล่ะ

เด่วลองเล่นก่อง เด่วมาแปะ Test Play ให้ดูนะพี่ปัง :D

Edit :
ทำไมเล่นไม่ผ่านฟระะะะ
wmtokok
490 posts
Joined January 2012
wmtokok
Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good :)

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525

AsprikaQ's Hard
00:23:224 (4) - stack on 00:22:424 (3) tail

00:23:624 (1) - y:288

00:31:224 (5) - y:340

00:31:424 (6) - y:356

01:11:224 (5) - y:28

SSS's Hard+
00:33:624 (2) - too down can do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/726370

01:15:224 (2) - y:232

Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332

done :)

I very like your map
good lucky :)
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

wmtokok wrote:

Hi
from #mod request

easy
very good :) thanks :D

Normal
00:29:624 (1) - this note feeling not good,stack on 00:28:824 (4) -tail <<<<<<http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/725525 I make a star there, so not fix >_>


Insane
00:34:424 (1) - too down,go to y:332 that's on my purpose

done :)

I very like your map
good lucky :)
thanks for modding and checking >_>
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
Update HS and SSS

Edit: Update AsprikaQ's Hard and Insane !!
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Sorarei
[Insane]
at this time 00:29:624 it looks like 2 note pressed at same time ..
i thinks you must change that
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
omg.. that is not press at the same time 0.0

anyway thanks for check ><
Xinchii
1,240 posts
Joined January 2011
Xinchii
Hello , from M4M

General

suggest to make hitsound more louder , I feel a little bit hard to hear the hitsound.

It may need to add "Opening" in Tag.


Easy

Seems great.


Normal

00:47:624 - Try this?
SPOILER
01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^


AsprikaQ's Hard

This diff didn't set viedo yet. Need to fix.

01:26:824(2) - Add NC

01:28:024(3) - ^


SSS's Hard+

Seems great.


Insane

00:10:424(1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe use whisle or special hitsound on this part?

00:53:024 - Add NC here.

00:55:424(2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too straight this part. I think it isn't a good flow.

01:22:824(1) - Maybe change this note by a slider from 01:22:824 - 01:23:024
Nice map.

Good lock~
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
Hey! From my queue~
sorry for delay, shit exams are shit

Easy

Replay
Not much to say from a play I guess hehe, just some nazi patterning things

00:02:424 (3) - should be the same slider as (1), you can just copy+paste and rotate 180 and it'll be in basically the right place
00:20:024 (1,2,3) - This could be a little more interesting, try this maybe?
SPOILER
00:24:024 (4) - node 1 to x320 y84, node 2 to x256 y112, node 3 to x180 y80, little better symmetry (adjust notes around for spacing ;))
00:33:224 (1,3) - symmetry on these two is off too, I'd recommend using ^this slider to improve them
01:03:624 (2) - move up to y324, looks a bit better compared to (3,4,1)
01:15:224 (3,1,2) - x412 y92, x428 y228, x344 y316 in that order for symmetry over x axis
01:21:224 (3) - one grid right

Normal

Replay
oh noes, a couple 100's. I'm so bad ;_;

00:03:624 (4) - oh why not, grid right, pattern/spacing
00:08:424 (3) - x164 y144 for the triangle
00:09:824 (5) - second point to x480 y48, so that it's on the same angle as (1) after
00:16:024 (3) - grid space left for blanket
00:52:824 (2,3,4) - x212 y264, x304 y208, x376 y124 in that order. This puts 5 along a similar upwards curve as (1,2,3,4) which I think makes more sense
01:04:824 (4) - clap on tick here is considerably softer than the claps around it
01:07:224 (2,3,4) - clean up the blanket pattern here, it's off and not symmetrical
01:25:024 (4,1) - I would recommend ending (4) on 01:25:424 (silenced if you want) and starting (1) on the downbeat for consistency

AsprikaQ's Hard
Replay
Very nice, some of the early stacking beats are just a little uncomfortable to play, specifically 00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5), but overall great

00:00:224 (1) - I think you could start this on the blue tick where the actual drum starts, there's no tempo beforehand so it shouldn't make that big of a difference
00:08:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend this rhythm to ease up on this part
SPOILER
00:22:424 (3) - up a grid for patterning
00:32:424 (6) - x228 y120 for triangle
01:01:424 (4,1) - Jump seems a little out of place. I'd recommend having (3,4) be x164 y260 and x140 y180, so it's less jarring
01:12:224 (5,1) - While this does fit well with the music, I feel like for this being the "easier" hard, it might be a bit much, and a lot of less skilled players will end up breaking combo here. Consider taking it down to around 2.20x or so
01:25:624 (1,2) - why don't you do this rhythm for all three closing notes? so 01:26:824 and 01:28:024

SSS's Hard+

Replay
Hmm..not sure what to think of this diff. Imo it's very nearly harder than the insane, due to the jumps here being more jarring and quite a bit higher. Couple spacing things that didn't agree with me either

00:09:624 (2,3) - Didn't like this at all. I'd suggest rotating it 90 so that it leads to and from the previous notes better
00:31:224 (1,2,3) - mmmmmmmmm rough to play. and not exactly fun either. the slow slider speed contrasts the pretty quick jump
00:59:824 (8,1) - this doesn't flow well, I think a ctrl+g on (1) feels better
01:07:224 (2,1) - still isn't fun to play this
01:22:224 (2,3,4) - this jump would make sense if you delete (2) and shift (3,4) over a red tick, so that the jump happens on the trumpet note

Insane

Replay
Some nice things happening here. I like the use of short slider to long slider like 00:01:424 (2,3), plays well and gives it a pretty interesting rhythm without resorting to excessive triplet streams

00:03:024 (3,4) - Here I would recommend going with this rhythm, as it fits better with the vocal and gives you a little more variation. (feel free to apply this wherever you feel it fits well)
SPOILER
00:28:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Here, this pattern should have two clean-looking stars :3
SPOILER
224,320,28024,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,352,28224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,269,28424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,186,28624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,218,28824,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,139,29024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,55,29224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,83,29424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:52:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
SPOILER
254,104,52224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,80,52424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,139,52624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,202,52824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,178,53024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,239,53224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,301,53424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,279,53624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:55:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why don't you gradually increase the spacing here, like the first set one 1.2 like it is and maybe the second at 1.4? would work with the buildup in music
01:26:824 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Don't have less spacing than you did for 01:25:624 (1,2,3,4)! it's so anti-climatic haha

All I got. Good luck!
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks leon1341414

fix 75% of your mod

and thanks captin1 for test play and mod :D

change most of your mod

Update my diff! (Easy Normal Insane)

and SSS diff
Arrival
1,418 posts
Joined June 2012
Arrival
Ok let's go,
From my queue.

[General]
You have to put the same tags on all of your diffs !

[Insane]
00:04:624 (2,3) - What about a better blanket, like this : http://puu.sh/2LW4M.jpg
00:34:424 (1) - A bit offscreen, but it's maybe not a problem
00:40:424 (6) - Strange, when you use 2 beats with 1/4 of time time spacing, you always take more space between them. What about something like this :
http://puu.sh/2LW9T.jpg Like this, you have a better flow, and you respect the spacing you used all along the map
00:44:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - This star pattern has no real reason, i mean the music doesn't really change, ans star patterns are generally used when it's the case.
But this is just my personnal opinion.
01:12:824 (1) - Personnal opinion : Put this slider a bit to the left, so the (3) is totally blanketed
01:14:224 (4) - If you did what i wrote just before, stack this scircle with the start of the slider.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?

[SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS's Hard +]
00:08:824 (1,2) - It's me, or the two sliders should have their reverse arrow on a white tick to fit with the vocal ? Listen carefully, i think this will look better.
01:00:024 (1) - What about 60% volume sample here ?
01:01:624 (1) - NAZI : Place this slider a bit down so it's stacked with 01:00:024 (1) -
Nice diff here

[AsprikaQ's Hard]
01:24:424 (3) - What about place this circle like this : http://puu.sh/2LWnV.jpg , i find this better than 3 stacks
01:25:624 (1,2) - Here you can do a "two reverses slider" like you do here : 01:26:824 (3) - and here 01:28:024 (4) - , or change the two lasts sliders with a "circle-slider reverse", like this : http://puu.sh/2LWq7.jpg
Really nice diff !

[Normal]
00:31:424 (2) - A bit offscreen
00:39:624 (1,2,3) - I think you can do a better blanket on (2) here

[Easy]
00:14:424 (1,2,3) - A bit offcreen, try to respect the area of play.
That's all o/

Really nice mapset, it won't take time to be ranked anymore imo !
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