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inconsistency in combo colorseasy00:15:030 (1) - move to x136 y112
00:16:436 (2) - move to x472 y184
00:16:905 (3) - move to x360 y232, 2nd curve point to x384 y296, 3rd curve point x448 y304
00:18:311 (1) - move to x240 y208
00:18:780 (2) - move to x176 y312
00:19:249 (3) - move to x56 y288
00:19:952 (4) - move to x144 y144
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00:28:154 (3) - try this?
and maybe clap at repeat/tail?
00:30:029 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 grid right, 3rd curve point 1 grid up, and ctrl j?
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00:43:153 (3) - same as 00:28:154 (3)
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00:51:121 (1,2) - tiny grid is required to fix the shape
(1) 1st x104 y328, 2nd x128 y292, 3rd x184 y292, 4th x208 y328
(2) copy paste (1) and ctrl j ....
btw i think moving (1) to x136 y184 looks better
00:52:996 (3) - new combo?
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00:53:699 (4,5) - spacing
00:56:277 (1,2) - ^
01:00:496 (2) - looks better if you move it away from previous (2), try x128 y168
01:07:526 (1,3) - try to avoid this overlap, try this:
01:06:589 (6) - ctrl j and move to x128 y352
01:07:526 (1) - x184 y248
01:07:995 (2) - x256 y152
01:08:932 (3) - x448 y248
01:09:870 (4) - x208 y248
01:10:339 (5) - x104 y304
01:11:276 (1) - x24 y96
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01:30:962 (1) - 2nd curve point x144 y160, 3rd x160 y224
01:31:899 (2) - 2nd curve point x280 y272, 3rd x265 y208
01:32:837 (1,2) - the current style does not fits the previous note imo, try this:
01:34:243 (3) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids left
01:58:147 (3) - same as 00:28:154 (3)
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02:06:115 (1,2) - copy paste 00:51:121 (1,2) and ctrl j?
02:09:865 (1,2) - spacing
02:15:490 (2) - looks better if you move it away from previous (2), try x128 y216
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02:21:583 (6) - ctrl j and move to x152 y48?
02:22:520 (1) - x208 y152?
02:22:989 (2) - x280 y248?
02:23:927 (3) - x472 y152?
02:24:864 (4) - x232 y152?
02:25:333 (5) - x128 y96?
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02:44:316 (2) - slider end in red tick or white tick
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02:51:581 (1) - remove clap, sounds bad imo, because the next white tick was suposed to use a clap, try whistle at slider start?
normal00:15:030 (1) - just imo, but this note current place does not fits the next slider shape, try x280 y104?
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00:25:811 (3,4,5) - i think you should keep 1/1 rhythm here or at least make it a repeat slider
btw keep in mind you are killing the spacing in this section, (3) is too far from previous note and (5) from next note,
i gess you can do that for symmetry but... this song is long (what a long song : D), you should consider making this diff a bit more simple
if you want to keep this 3 circles you can also try this:
(3) x312 y224
(4) x256 y264
(5) x200 y224
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00:27:686 (2,3,4,5,1) - i dont like how it currently looks, i hope its just for me, i dont know what to sugest, any idea?
00:33:310 (7) - remove clap?
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01:00:496 (2,3,4,5) - small spacing issues, (2) 1 grid left, (4) 1 grid lerft 1 grid down, (5) 1 grid left
01:02:839 (6) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids down
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01:12:213 (2) - ctrl j, rotate by -45 and move to x216 y24?
01:13:151 (3) - x0 y192?
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01:20:181 (4) - x296 y336 looks better imo
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01:27:564 (5) consider avoiding the sudden 1/4 note, i sugest you start a slider at 01:27:212 and slider tail at 01:27:564 and add repeat? it will need a small remap in this section....
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01:55:335 (3,4,5) - i think you should keep 1/1 rhythm here or at least make it a repeat slider...
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01:56:272 (1,3) - try to avoid this overlap
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02:06:584 (2) - ctrl h and move to x360 y224
02:07:522 (3) - move this note 1 grid up, and 3rd curve point 1 grid down
02:08:459 (4) - x168 y168
02:09:396 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids left
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02:18:771 (1,2,3) - would be nice if you create something like that:
btw
(1) x184 y352
(2) x216 y288
(3) x248 y224
02:20:646 (4) - would need to move to x360 y88 if you use the previous sugestions
02:21:114 (5) - would need to move to x224 y56,
btw the current place makes a small spacing issue to the next note:
02:22:052 (1,2) - move (1) to x16 y176, (2) to x72 y176
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02:37:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - hmm lets try irc mod it, ok?
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03:08:454 (2,4) - try to avoid this overlap
03:11:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - nice
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03:28:609 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids down
03:32:827 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 grid left, 3rd curve point 1 or 2 grids left
03:34:234 (2,3,4) - this shape looks random, i dont know what to sugest atm, lets try irc mod it too
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03:36:108 (1) - 2nd curve point 2 grids right
03:37:515 (1) - 1 grid up?
03:38:452 (2) - x400 y328?
03:38:921 (3) - x304 y224?
03:39:389 (4) - x440 y200?
03:40:327 (5) - x312 y24?
03:40:796 (1) - x184 y72?
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03:43:608 (5,6,7) - strange placing/shape imo, lets try irc mod it
03:45:951 (3) - 2nd curve point x328 y352
03:49:232 (4,5) - spacing/strange placing/strange shape imo
AkonFreak's hardyour BG is not the recommended resolution, and not even 4:3, consider changing it00:05:187 (3,4) - spacing
00:06:828 - why new combo? you are not using in 00:04:953 (3), remove or use in both, for consistency
00:07:765 (3) - new combo
00:07:062 (1,2) - spacing
00:08:937 (5,6) - ^
00:10:812 (3,4) - ^
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00:15:968 (4) - not perfectly symmetric with the previous notes, move to x320 y64
00:18:077 (1,2,3,4,5) - its nice, but make sure you fix the spacing with tiny grid
00:22:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is really weird
00:23:702 (7) - 2nd curve point x176 y352
00:24:405 (8,9,10) - spacing. it was suposed to be all 0.80x, right?
00:24:873 (11,1) - spacing
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00:26:983 - consider mapping this part too
00:27:920 (1) - strange slider shape imo, btw you are using spinner at 00:42:919 and its a lot better imo, use here too?
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00:30:498 (2,3,4) spacing
00:31:435 (5,7) - the shape was suposed to be "mirrored" right? copy one of them and ctrl j, replace the other?
00:33:076 (1) - 3rd curve point x8 y128
00:33:076 (1,2,3,4) - btw this sudden spacing change looks bad
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00:37:997 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
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00:41:981 - same as 00:26:983
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00:52:527 (1,2,3,4) - this shape is not ok (imo) try this:
(1) 1st curve point x448 y200, 2nd curve point x352 y112, 3rd curve point x280 y336, 4th curve point x160 y216
(2) x104 y192
(3) x72 y264
(4) 1st curve point x128 y320, 2nd x224 y360, 3rd x328 y320
00:54:637 (5) - would need to move 5 to x400 y296
00:54:871 (6) - would need to move 6 to x440 y224
00:55:105 (7) - would need to move 7 to x424 y144
00:55:574 (8) - would need to move 8 to x324 y164
00:56:043 (9) - would need to move 9 to x200 y136
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00:58:152 (3) move 1st curve point to x344 y352, 2nd to x256 y264, 3rd to x168 y352
00:58:855 (4,5) - the symmetry could be better, remove 5, copy 4, and replace 5, ctrl h...
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01:02:136 (5) - remove the 2nd curve point
01:05:183 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:07:292 (2,3,4) - spacing, 4 should 1 grid up, but keep in mind you will need to fix the next notes spacing too
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01:12:213 (3,4) - ugly overlap (imo)
01:15:026 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:15:494 (3) - 2nd curve point x456 y256
01:16:432 (7,8,9,10) - spacing
01:16:900 (10) - imo this long slider is ugly, try
01:19:478 - note here?
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01:20:650 (7) - i still dont like long slider like that but...2nd curve point x456 y-56, 4th curve point x48 y280
01:22:525 (1) - 1 grid up
01:22:994 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - weird spacing
01:24:400 (10) - same as 01:16:900 (10)
01:26:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - weird spacing
01:28:150 (1,2,3,4) - ^
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01:31:431 (1,2,3) try this:
(1) 2nd curve point x280 y328, 3rd curve point x224 y384
(2) 2nd curve point x320 y240, 3rd curve point x376 y272
(3) 2nd curve point x192 y264, 3rd curve point x168 y192
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01:34:243 (3,4) - clap should be in 3 for consistency?? just saying
01:34:946 (5) - 1st curve point x192 y352, 2nd 128 y352, 3rd x128 y280
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01:42:914 (1) - same as 00:27:920 (1)
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01:48:070 (1) - 1st curve point x136 y136, 2nd x144 y72, 3rd x208 y72
01:48:539 (2) - x256 y72
01:48:773 (3) - 1st curve point x312 y72, 2nd 376 y72, 3rd x376 152
01:49:476 (5) - 1st curve point x376 y248, 2nd x368 y312, x304 y312
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01:50:648 (4,5,6) the current shape is already symmetric but i gess people would prefer something like that: !?
(4) 1st curve point x112 y216, 2nd x96 y88, 3rd x200 y56
(5) x256 y104
(6) 1st curve point x312 y56, 2nd x416 y88, 3rd x400 y216
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01:52:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - weird spacing
01:53:694 (7) - 2nd curve point x136 y136, 3rd x192 y112
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01:55:335 (1,2,3) - the current shape is too ugly, i dont know how to deal with this style so i'll sugest you another one:
(1) 1st curve point x128 y128, 2nd x80 y152, 3rd x80 y208
(2) copy (1) and ctrl h, move to x160 200
(3) copy (1) move to x128 y272
01:56:975 - consider mapping this part too
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02:10:099 (4,5,6) - same as 01:55:335 (1,2,3) - and you can use the same sliders, but "ctrl <" them
02:11:740 (2) - 2nd curve point x456 y176 3rd x440 y120
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02:15:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - weird spacing
02:15:958 (3) - 2nd curve point x84 y96
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02:17:599 (3,4) - would be better if the sliders dont touch themselves, try this:
(3) 2nd curve point x336 y352, 3rd x264 y360
(4) move to x264 y280, 2nd curve point x272 y224, 3rd curve point x320 y200
02:18:536 (5) - would need to move 5 to x400 y192
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02:21:583 (9) - delete this note, copy (7) ctrl j
02:22:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - weird spacing
02:23:223 (8) - 2nd corve point x184 y24
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02:23:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - weird spacing
02:25:098 (8) - 1st curve point x420 y272, 2nd x488 y264, 3rd x488 y192?
02:25:567 (9) - 1st curvr point x408 y192, 2nd x420 y132, 3rd x360 y104?
02:26:036 (10) - x328 y176?
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02:26:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - you need to create something better than this, its too simple (imo)
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02:37:988 (2,3,4) - spacing
02:38:925 (4,6) - try to avoid this overlap
02:39:863 (6,7,8) - spacing
02:41:503 (1,2,3) - spacing
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02:52:518 (1) - delete 2nd curve point and move this slider 5 grids right
02:54:862 (6) - move 1grid right remove 4th curve point, move 2nd curve point to x368 y112 and 3rd to x392 y184
02:57:205 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - the shape could be better, they are too close imo
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03:00:955 (5,6,7) - the shape could be better, you can also try something like that:
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03:02:361 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird spacing
03:03:767 (8,9,1) - weird spacing
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03:06:345 (8) 1st curve point x240 y320, 2nd x312 y352, 3rd x344 y264
03:06:814 (9) 1st curve point x272 y264, 2nd x304 y216, 3rd x368 y240
03:07:282 (10) x 424 y240
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03:07:986 (2,3) - would be better if the slider dont touch themselves, you can copy 03:06:345 (8,9) - ctrl j ctrl h....
03:09:392 (7,8) - ^ but "ctrl >"
03:13:141 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:12:907 (4,6) - try to avoid this overlap
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03:22:633 (2,3,4) - spacing
03:23:922 (7) - 2nd curve point x168 y24, 3rd curve point x112 y48
03:24:859 (9) - 2nd curve point x176 y120, 3rd curve point x120 y144, then select (8,9) and 1 grid down
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03:26:265 (3,4,5,1) - weird spacing
03:30:484 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
03:31:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
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03:33:296 (2,3) - select this notes and move 1 grid left
03:34:234 (4) - x64 y88?
03:34:468 - consider mapping this part too
03:35:405 (1) - same as 00:27:920 (1)
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03:38:921 (6,7,8) would be better if the sliders dont touch themselves
03:40:561 (1) 2nd curve point x152 y224, 3rd x152 y144
03:45:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
03:46:654 (7,8,9,10,11) - spacing
03:49:467 - consider mapping this part too
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lets talk about this dificulty....
as you can see there is a lot of spacing issues and some of them are really weird...
i pointed all that i found but of course could be more, at some point i got lazy to try to fix it for you and just pointed what should be fixed, sorry
is up to you to find and fix
remember if you are using 0.8x distance snap, the notes are suposed to be 0.80 spaced.. so dont let the notes be more than 0.82 or less than 0.78 (try to use small grid as much as possible to fix it and use tiny grid when needed)
of course you can ignore the spacing in hard for symmetry and jumps, slow downs but.... is not a good idea to switch between 0.80 0.70 0.60 in the same combo for no reason, hmm, how can i explain it..
keep in mind you have a lot of weird shape sliders..okay...
i'll mod the other two after some sleep
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hardsliderspeed 1.93? i see your current slider speed (2.0) does not fits the grids, that makes a bit difficult to keep a consistent spacing to circles even in a straight line.. for exemple 00:19:717 (5,6,7) this notes was suposed to be 1.0x spaced, right? but they are not, 1.93 would fix it but you would need to fix all notes spacing, they will increase about 0.05 i gessbtw i'm modding with your current slider speed:
00:17:843 (1) x96 y200 to fix the spacing to the next note?
00:23:233 (4) - spacing, move 1 grid down in you fix the next sugestion
00:23:467 (5,8) - take a look at
this overlap, highly sugest you to fix it. try this: ?
(5) ctrl J "ctrl <" and move to x232 y72
you will need to change the next notes a bit ;_;
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00:25:342 (1,2,3) - not perfectly aligned/spaced, use tiny grid move (2) to 428 104. and you should copy (1) and replace (3), move it to x280 y192
00:28:154 (1) - 2nd curve point 2 grids right 1 grid down, 3rd curve point 1 grid down?
00:29:092 (2) - 2nd curve point 2 grids left 1 grid down, 3rd curve point 1 grid down??
00:30:029 (1,2) - spacing
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00:31:904 (5) - 3rd curve point 2 grids down
00:32:607 (6) - x64 y216
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00:33:310 (4) - 3rd curve point 1 grid down, 2 grids left?
00:33:779 (5) - 3rd curve point 1 grid up
00:34:248 (6,7) - x456 y136
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00:36:122 (3,4) - it was suposed to be 1 tiny grid left imo, but would need to move the next notes a bit
00:36:591 (5) - ctrl h, move to x72 y296 and 3rd curve point 1 grid right
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00:37:997 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 grid left, 3rd curve point 1 grid down
00:39:872 (5,6) - x128 y248
00:40:341 (1,2,3,1) - spacing
00:43:153 (1,2) - same as 00:28:154 (1,2)
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00:51:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
00:53:934 (3,4,5) -spacing, and imo this shape makes no sense, try something like that: ?
btw
(3) x368 y240
(4) 1st curve point x280 y192, 2nd
RED curve point x264 y240, 3rd x280 y288
(5) x184 y320
(1) x88 y280
not the best shape but at least it plays better and the spacing is fine
00:56:980 (6,1) - spacing
00:57:683 (3,4) - spacing, (4) is suposed to be x304 y292 (tiny grid)
00:59:792 (8) - it was suposed to be x16 y248
01:00:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you agree with the previous sugestion select all this notes and move 1 grid left 1 grid up
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01:00:730 (3,4,5) - same as
EASY 01:32:837 (1,2) - and you can use the same shape
01:02:136 (1,2) - spacing
01:02:839 (3,4,5) - this notes looks random placed because of the next and previous slider shapes i gess, try:
(3) x304 y112
(4) x256 y128
(5) x208 y112
(6) x128 y48
01:03:777 (1,2,3) - spacing.. btw this part is suposed to be 1/3
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01:08:229 - 1/2 beat slider with 1 repeat?
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01:09:401 (6,7) - spacing
01:10:104 - same as 01:08:229
01:10:807 (1,2) - spacing
01:12:916 (7,8,9,1) - spacing
01:13:151 (8,9) - btw, looks strange without a circle in the red tick. add a circle in red tick or remove (9)?
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01:18:775 - note here?
01:14:088 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:15:026 - consider adding a note here with finish
01:15:377 (1,2) - spacing
01:18:072 (1,2,3) - looks bad and the shape does not makes sense imo, try this: ?
(1) x120 y368
(2) x48 y272
(3) x80 y136
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01:19:010 (1) - 1 grid down?
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01:20:299 (6,7) - suposed to be 1x right? try tiny grid
01:20:885 (9) - 1 grid right
01:21:353 (1) - 1 grid up
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01:23:814 (5,6,7) - select all, 1 grid right 1 grid down
01:24:400 (1) - would need to move to x48 y120
01:26:509 (1) - 1 grid down
01:26:978 (2) x176 y344
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01:31:548 (6,7,8) - spacing. select (6,7) 1 grid left and (8) 1 grid up
01:32:368 (9) - 1 grid right?
01:32:837 (1,2,3) - spacing, as explained in the start of this dificulty mod. try tiny grid? or try something like that:
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01:36:352 (2) - 1 grid down?
01:37:290 (1) - ^
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lets try irc mod it too ok?
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01:40:336 (1) - 1st curve point x112 y360, 2nd x56 y336, 3rd x48 y272 ?
01:40:805 (2) - 1st curve point x136 y232, 2nd x112 y176, 3rd x146 y120 ?
01:41:274 (3) - 1st curve point x240 y144, 2nd x248 y88, 3rd x312 y64 ?
01:41:742 (1) x400 y88
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01:44:086 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:46:429 (6) - move 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids right? looks better imo
01:46:429 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing ;_;
01:49:945 (3,4,5) - spacing
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01:55:335 (1,2,3) - copy paste 01:40:336 (1,2,3) and ctrl j...
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02:07:522 (5,6,7,8,1) - spacing
02:09:631 (5,6) - spacing
02:11:974 (11,1) - spacing
02:12:677 (3,4,5,6) - spacing
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02:15:490 (2) - 1 grid down
02:15:958 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:16:661 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
02:16:896 (4,6) - btw try to avoid this overlap? try something like that:
(5) 1 grid up
(6) 1st curve point x144 y48, 2nd
RED curve point x192 y48 3rd curve point x240 y64
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02:19:005 (4,5) - looks strange without a circle in the white tick. add a circle in white tick or remove (5)?
02:19:474 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
02:20:646 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:22:755 (3) - move 1 grid up, and 2nd curve point 1 grid left?
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02:23:692 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing
02:24:630 (4,5) - strange imo, but i dont know what to sugest atm, lets try irc mod
02:25:684 (7,8) - spacing
02:26:622 (3,4,5) - spacing
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02:28:614 (4) suposed to be a " ~ " slider to work with the next notes:
(4) 1st curve point x304 y176. 2nd x224 y224. 3rd x184 y144. 4th x96 y184
(5) x64 y200
(6) x48 y248
(7) x184 y312
(8) x320 y248
(9) x360 y280
(10) x360 y328 < needs to fix spacing with tiny grid
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02:38:691 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:40:566 (4,5,6) - ^
02:41:972 (3) - 1 grid right
02:42:909 (6,1) - spacing
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..........huge changes here..........02:51:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - select this notes move 1 (holding the other notes too) to x168 y176
02:52:987 (1) - 1st curve point x152 y336. 2nd x56 y256. 3rd x112 y144
02:53:690 (2) - x168 y88
02:53:807 (3) - x208 y60 (tiny grid)
02:53:924 (4) - 1st curve point x252 y36. 2nd x372 y44. 3rd x404 y156 (all tiny grid)
02:54:627 (5) - x384 y248
02:54:862 (6) - 1st curve point x296 y296. 2nd x248 y320. x200 y296
02:55:330 (7) - copy paste (6) ctrl j and move to x248 y208
02:55:799 (8) - 1st curve point x104 y120. 2nd x200 y72. 3rd s296 y120
in the end we have:
^ this is just to try to deal with the next notes
this is the main point of the huge change:
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02:56:971 (4,5) - this " ) ( " shape allways bother me. try this:?
(4) 2nd curve point x336 y272, 3rd x352 y336
(5) 1st curve point x224 y360, 2nd x184 y320, 3rd x192 y256
(6) x80 y200
(7) x120 y80
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02:58:377 (1,2,3) - spacing
03:00:955 (2,3,4) - spacing
03:01:424 (5) - 2nd curve point 2 grids left
03:02:361 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 grid down
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03:06:111 (5,6,7,8) - spacing
03:07:986 (5) - 2nd curve point 1 grid down
03:09:392 (6) - x112 y176
03:09:626 (7) - x160 y296
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03:11:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nice
03:13:376 (9) - suposed to be x272 y64 i gess
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03:21:578 (3,4,5) - spacing
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03:23:219 (3,4) - spacing
03:23:922 (6) - 1 grid down
03:24:859 (8) - ^
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03:25:328 (1,2,3) - spacing
03:26:265 (5) - 3rd curve point 1 grid left
03:27:203 (8,9,10) - spacing
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03:27:672 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 grid right
03:28:257 (3) - spacing
03:30:015 (3) - spacing
03:30:953 (6,7,8,9,10) - spacing
03:32:359 (3,4,1) - spacing
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03:38:218 (2) - spacing
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03:41:616 (8) - spacing. 2 grids up?
03:43:608 (4,5) - spacing
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03:45:483 (2) - move to x360 y144 and 2nd curve point 1 grid up
03:46:420 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing
03:49:232 (1) - spacing
okay....
i dont think you will change the sliderslpeed to 1.93 so i pointed all spacing issues that i found, try to fix with tiny gridinsanemy mod allways sucks in insanes but lets see....00:17:374 (8) - consider avoiding
this overlap 00:18:311 (4) - 1st curve point x200 y240, 2nd x256 y264, 3rd x312 y240
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00:21:827 - consider using a circle here, i sugest you move it to x160 y360. and stack the next (1)
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00:23:467 (7) - x424 y160
00:23:936 (8) - x304 y192
00:24:170 (1) - x304 y336
00:24:405 (2) - x168 y288
00:24:522 (3) - x128 y288
00:24:639 (4) - x88 y288
00:24:873 (5) - 1st curve point x224 y232, 2nd x264 y280, x224 y344
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00:25:342 (1) - x376 y336?
00:25:811 (2) - x208 y56?
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00:27:451 (7,8,9) - i think the current shape does not mekes sense, try something like that: ?
(7) x368 y176
(8) x320 y148 (tiny grid)
(9) 1st curve point x272 y176, x240 y224, 3rd x168 y224
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00:29:326 (3) - 3rd curve point 1 grid right?
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00:30:381 (3,4,5,9) - 345's hitbursts overlaps 9's tail. does not affects gameplay but looks bad imo, try this:
(8) x120 y288
(9) x256 y240
(1) x400 y120
(2) x400 y264
00:32:373 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - imo, this part is not suposed to be a long stream, remove 8 and 6?
00:33:427 - if you agree with the previous sugestion you could make a circle here
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00:35:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no idea what to sugest here, lets try irc mod, but how about this: ?
(1) x96 y48
(2) x216 y128
(3) x256 y128
(4) x296 y128
(5) x448 y40
(6) x296 y224
(7) x256 y224
(8) x216 y224
(1) x96 y48
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00:41:747 (1,2,3) - looks random aligned, try (2) 2nd curve point x464 y304 3rd x416 y352 ?
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00:51:590 (2) - "ctrl >" and move to x360 y40?
00:52:293 (4) - looks random aligned, try 2nd curve point x128 y288, 3rd x112 y224 ?
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01:00:496 (2) - imo not a good idea to use a long slider with a repeat here, try
01:01:902 (5,6,7) - strange alignment imo, try this:
(6) 1st curve point x256 y296, 2nd x200 y264,3rd x144 y296
(7) 1st curve point x56 y240, 2nd x24 y296, 3rd x64 y352
(8) x200 y360 ?
(9) x264 y224 ?
(1) x224 y88 ?
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01:18:775 (1) 2nd curve point 1 grid left
01:19:244 (2) 2nd curve point 1 grid down
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01:24:400 (1,2) - imo ugly
overlap try this:
(2) 1st curve point x144 y104, 2nd x136 y168, 3rd x192 y200
(3) x272 y32
(4) x88 y64
01:25:806 (5) - 2nd curve point x32 y304?
01:26:743 (7) - 2ns curve point x352 y304, 3rd x416 y312?
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01:42:680 (9) - 2nd curve point 1 grid up
01:50:648 (1) - 3rd curve point 1 grid right
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02:16:193 - consider adding note here
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02:53:690 - consider adding a note here stacked to 2
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02:54:862 (6) - x408 y48 ?
02:55:096 (7) - consider adding a note here in x472 y192
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03:00:486 (1,2,3) - too simple for insane imo
03:04:236 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 grid down
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03:47:826 (1,2,3) - use same shape as 03:32:827 (1,2,3) ? the current makes no sense imo
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this is finished, hope you like it
star, and good luck Vile and Freak : D