AkonFreak
It's safe to update if you are unsure whether I've updated your difficulty. I made some small fixes to your difficulty. I will fix several small spacing gaps as I see them. I am willing to make certain changes based off some of the things I've mentioned below. Most of the things I've mentioned are very recommended.
Overall: The flow in this map NEEDS to be improved. When I tell you that x snap plays better, please do it. I want to get rid of as many flow issues in this map as possible. Flow problems I've noticed are in areas where 1/1 beat long gaps are set at 0.6 snap. Even if the 1/2th notes are set to 0.6, it flows badly when you make the 1/1 gaps 0.6 as well.
Another thing I'm really concerned with is pattern consistency throughout the difficulty. The start of the difficulty is mapped one way, but at some point you shift to mapping it a completely different way. It really would be nice if there wasn't such a large shift in the way its mapped. If you kept it simple, it wouldn't have had so many issues. This is a structural issue that doesn't have to be fixed, but it does negatively affect the quality of the final product. Your beatmap wont ever reach its full potential with this issue in it.
00:06:828 (1) - You didn't start the combo here in the other patterns.
00:11:281 - First off, this gap and strange. There's no cutoff in the beat so there's really no reason for the notes to pause before the next section. I highly recommend this gap be mapped.
00:15:499 (2,3,4) - I'm fixing this small spacing issue.
00:22:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing was starting off smaller and slowly got larger, I made that part better, but I still feel this pattern needs work, beyond keeping the spacing a consistent number. I went ahead and made the two triples more even looking in spacing and added a little rounder opening.
00:27:451 - Optional but recommended. You should add a note here, because it is the start of a triple. There is a triple here 00:26:514 - too if you listen, so it makes sense.
00:30:498 (2,3,4,5) - I fixed this spacing for you.
00:31:435 (5) - Really should have a new combo here.
00:32:841 (8) - I think you should delete. It will be more consistent to have a gap here (because it follows your start on a red tick mapping style). You will need to reposition 00:33:076 (1) - , but that doesn't seem like it will be too much of an issue. It should be moved up in the top left corner. http://puu.sh/19K5A
00:34:248 (3,4,1,2) - Consider 0.8 through here with alternate angled transitions. This is one way it can be done. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446454 I had to remove some of the notes, because distance snap wasn't allowing a proper transition into the center. This allows for a cleaner transition.
00:42:450 - I suggest a similar note here, because of the same triple start. It makes more sense to start here.
00:42:919 (1) - Add a finish? I have a finish here in the other difficulties.
00:52:527 (1,2,3) - This was slightly off and could use some hitsounds. I fixed it.
01:00:027 (1) - Add finish to start?
01:02:136 (5,6,7) - Okay you need to find a better looking pattern here. This looks so bad. Try having the sliders go downward in a more consistent position. http://puu.sh/19KNF The only concern I have is this transition 01:03:542 (8,1) -. I think it plays nicely as a jump. or just delete note 8, which works too, possibly even better.
01:05:183 (4,5,6) - Fixing this spacing discrepancy.
01:07:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There was some spacing inconsistencies. I fixed them. I brought most of the spacing down to 0.7 which you used heavily through these combos.
01:12:213 (3) - Perhaps add a whistle to the end to break up the silence?
01:14:088 (5) - ^ (to follow pattern)
01:18:775 (1) - You forgot to change the combo here, so I fixed it.
01:16:900 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is a really nice pattern.
01:27:212 (4,5,6,7,8) - Aren't centered and I suggest you move these down some units for best flow.
01:28:150 (1,2,3,4) - Spacings should be equal. I suggest you move 2 3 units to the left and then 01:29:556 (4) - move one unit to the left. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446513 This is really so recommended I will probably do this to your map if you don't.
01:30:024 (1) - Finish would go well here.
01:29:556 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think 0.7 would play better. Or if you dislike how 0.7 plays in the stream, just lower 01:31:431 (1,2,3) - , so that 01:30:962 (5,1) - is at least 0.7. It will play better. I don't consider this optional. It needs to be this way.
01:31:899 (2) - This was too high in the pattern. I fixed it.
01:33:071 (1) - I felt the curve of this was off. I changed it to a more fitting curve.
01:34:946 (5) - New combo? It would fit how earlier combos were formed. You know I'm just going to add a new combo here, and if you have a problem with it tell me.
01:40:102 (10,1) - I'm fixing this gap.
01:41:274 (3,4) - I'm making this spacing consistent.
01:48:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - Made all spacings 0.56 and also fixed a slider design flaw in your pattern.
01:52:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This design feel crushed into this spot. I made it 0.7 snap like the spacing later on.
01:57:913 (1) - Add finish?
02:08:459 (4,1) - Should really be 0.7. There's plenty of room to move the next part to the left. Adjust the curve of 02:09:396 (1,2,3) - to make a nice looking curve with 02:10:099 (1) - . Oh and you'll save a lot of effort if you move 02:10:099 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - as one unit to fix the alignment. Please make 0.7 work or I'll do it my way. http://puu.sh/19MIJ < This kind of pattern leaves your next part completely intact.
02:12:209 (3) - Slider is such a different shape than the previous one. It might be better if both sliders are more similar in shape. http://puu.sh/19MMw ?
02:14:318 (5) - Okay this slider is bad. If you really want that slider shape then the points should look like this http://puu.sh/19MSX . I think that this pattern could be improved. You could try something like this instead http://puu.sh/19MW6 or http://puu.sh/19N5k would interfere even less with your transition after. http://puu.sh/19Ndm < Even better.
02:22:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here we are again with the spacing discrepancies. I touched up the spacings here.
02:24:161 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Squished streams here are awkward. I fixed the flow by increasing the spacing slightly.
02:29:452 - Finish?
02:52:518 (1) - Curve should be designed so that the end is lined up with the notes after it. Something like this http://puu.sh/19NJs You can choose a more vertical slider if you want, but increase the distance snap to 0.6/7 Check this slider out: http://puu.sh/19NOv
02:54:862 (6,7) - Should be at least 0.6 snap. You can move this 02:55:799 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - back all at once to match 0.6 snap.
If you do this parts after may need to be adjusted slightly. I can't accurately predict the outcome until it's done.
03:02:830 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Small adjustments to spacing throughout this part.
03:13:141 (5,6,7,8) - Sliders aren't perfectly ending in the right places. I will try to fix it later.
03:22:516 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't play right to me. I suggest doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446625 It plays a lot more naturally because the triple is a beat instead of a vocal.
03:29:078 (7) - Slider could be symmetrical.
03:29:546 (8,9,1) - I don't understand the positioning off of 7. It looks random to me. You should fix this transition.
03:30:484 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 0.9 felt out of place through here. I changed to 0.8 because it was overall better.
03:34:468 (5,6) - This should be 0.8 IMO. I'm just going to move it down for you.
03:41:264 (2,3) - 0.7 would be better.
03:41:967 (4,5) - ^^^
03:42:905 (6,7,8) - Plays weird. Something is wrong with the flow here. This format would be more proper IMO http://puu.sh/19OBF
It's safe to update if you are unsure whether I've updated your difficulty. I made some small fixes to your difficulty. I will fix several small spacing gaps as I see them. I am willing to make certain changes based off some of the things I've mentioned below. Most of the things I've mentioned are very recommended.
Overall: The flow in this map NEEDS to be improved. When I tell you that x snap plays better, please do it. I want to get rid of as many flow issues in this map as possible. Flow problems I've noticed are in areas where 1/1 beat long gaps are set at 0.6 snap. Even if the 1/2th notes are set to 0.6, it flows badly when you make the 1/1 gaps 0.6 as well.
Another thing I'm really concerned with is pattern consistency throughout the difficulty. The start of the difficulty is mapped one way, but at some point you shift to mapping it a completely different way. It really would be nice if there wasn't such a large shift in the way its mapped. If you kept it simple, it wouldn't have had so many issues. This is a structural issue that doesn't have to be fixed, but it does negatively affect the quality of the final product. Your beatmap wont ever reach its full potential with this issue in it.
00:06:828 (1) - You didn't start the combo here in the other patterns.
00:11:281 - First off, this gap and strange. There's no cutoff in the beat so there's really no reason for the notes to pause before the next section. I highly recommend this gap be mapped.
00:15:499 (2,3,4) - I'm fixing this small spacing issue.
00:22:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing was starting off smaller and slowly got larger, I made that part better, but I still feel this pattern needs work, beyond keeping the spacing a consistent number. I went ahead and made the two triples more even looking in spacing and added a little rounder opening.
00:27:451 - Optional but recommended. You should add a note here, because it is the start of a triple. There is a triple here 00:26:514 - too if you listen, so it makes sense.
00:30:498 (2,3,4,5) - I fixed this spacing for you.
00:31:435 (5) - Really should have a new combo here.
00:32:841 (8) - I think you should delete. It will be more consistent to have a gap here (because it follows your start on a red tick mapping style). You will need to reposition 00:33:076 (1) - , but that doesn't seem like it will be too much of an issue. It should be moved up in the top left corner. http://puu.sh/19K5A
00:34:248 (3,4,1,2) - Consider 0.8 through here with alternate angled transitions. This is one way it can be done. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446454 I had to remove some of the notes, because distance snap wasn't allowing a proper transition into the center. This allows for a cleaner transition.
00:42:450 - I suggest a similar note here, because of the same triple start. It makes more sense to start here.
00:42:919 (1) - Add a finish? I have a finish here in the other difficulties.
00:52:527 (1,2,3) - This was slightly off and could use some hitsounds. I fixed it.
01:00:027 (1) - Add finish to start?
01:02:136 (5,6,7) - Okay you need to find a better looking pattern here. This looks so bad. Try having the sliders go downward in a more consistent position. http://puu.sh/19KNF The only concern I have is this transition 01:03:542 (8,1) -. I think it plays nicely as a jump. or just delete note 8, which works too, possibly even better.
01:05:183 (4,5,6) - Fixing this spacing discrepancy.
01:07:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There was some spacing inconsistencies. I fixed them. I brought most of the spacing down to 0.7 which you used heavily through these combos.
01:12:213 (3) - Perhaps add a whistle to the end to break up the silence?
01:14:088 (5) - ^ (to follow pattern)
01:18:775 (1) - You forgot to change the combo here, so I fixed it.
01:16:900 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is a really nice pattern.
01:27:212 (4,5,6,7,8) - Aren't centered and I suggest you move these down some units for best flow.
01:28:150 (1,2,3,4) - Spacings should be equal. I suggest you move 2 3 units to the left and then 01:29:556 (4) - move one unit to the left. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446513 This is really so recommended I will probably do this to your map if you don't.
01:30:024 (1) - Finish would go well here.
01:29:556 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I think 0.7 would play better. Or if you dislike how 0.7 plays in the stream, just lower 01:31:431 (1,2,3) - , so that 01:30:962 (5,1) - is at least 0.7. It will play better. I don't consider this optional. It needs to be this way.
01:31:899 (2) - This was too high in the pattern. I fixed it.
01:33:071 (1) - I felt the curve of this was off. I changed it to a more fitting curve.
01:34:946 (5) - New combo? It would fit how earlier combos were formed. You know I'm just going to add a new combo here, and if you have a problem with it tell me.
01:40:102 (10,1) - I'm fixing this gap.
01:41:274 (3,4) - I'm making this spacing consistent.
01:48:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - Made all spacings 0.56 and also fixed a slider design flaw in your pattern.
01:52:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This design feel crushed into this spot. I made it 0.7 snap like the spacing later on.
01:57:913 (1) - Add finish?
02:08:459 (4,1) - Should really be 0.7. There's plenty of room to move the next part to the left. Adjust the curve of 02:09:396 (1,2,3) - to make a nice looking curve with 02:10:099 (1) - . Oh and you'll save a lot of effort if you move 02:10:099 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - as one unit to fix the alignment. Please make 0.7 work or I'll do it my way. http://puu.sh/19MIJ < This kind of pattern leaves your next part completely intact.
02:12:209 (3) - Slider is such a different shape than the previous one. It might be better if both sliders are more similar in shape. http://puu.sh/19MMw ?
02:14:318 (5) - Okay this slider is bad. If you really want that slider shape then the points should look like this http://puu.sh/19MSX . I think that this pattern could be improved. You could try something like this instead http://puu.sh/19MW6 or http://puu.sh/19N5k would interfere even less with your transition after. http://puu.sh/19Ndm < Even better.
02:22:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here we are again with the spacing discrepancies. I touched up the spacings here.
02:24:161 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Squished streams here are awkward. I fixed the flow by increasing the spacing slightly.
02:29:452 - Finish?
02:52:518 (1) - Curve should be designed so that the end is lined up with the notes after it. Something like this http://puu.sh/19NJs You can choose a more vertical slider if you want, but increase the distance snap to 0.6/7 Check this slider out: http://puu.sh/19NOv
02:54:862 (6,7) - Should be at least 0.6 snap. You can move this 02:55:799 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - back all at once to match 0.6 snap.
If you do this parts after may need to be adjusted slightly. I can't accurately predict the outcome until it's done.
03:02:830 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Small adjustments to spacing throughout this part.
03:13:141 (5,6,7,8) - Sliders aren't perfectly ending in the right places. I will try to fix it later.
03:22:516 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't play right to me. I suggest doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446625 It plays a lot more naturally because the triple is a beat instead of a vocal.
03:29:078 (7) - Slider could be symmetrical.
03:29:546 (8,9,1) - I don't understand the positioning off of 7. It looks random to me. You should fix this transition.
03:30:484 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 0.9 felt out of place through here. I changed to 0.8 because it was overall better.
03:34:468 (5,6) - This should be 0.8 IMO. I'm just going to move it down for you.
03:41:264 (2,3) - 0.7 would be better.
03:41:967 (4,5) - ^^^
03:42:905 (6,7,8) - Plays weird. Something is wrong with the flow here. This format would be more proper IMO http://puu.sh/19OBF