yep~
since.. its an old style map :> it'd probably so much things that can be pointed out OAO but remember, all my mod with "?" is a suggestion, without "?" up to you, because I don't find any unrankable :3 but recommended maybe
sorry my mod is messy[General]
~ Audio lead in maybe? 1 or 1.5 sec ; even tho it didn't played at the start, but I really think you should add it if you don't want to make a heart attack to player
~ Offset should be 00:15:030 - I think, it affect to NC mode a lot, and it won't be problem cause you start mapping at there on all diff I guess
~ My Mod is in tiny grid
[Easy]
:3
00:15:030 (1) - try somethine like this?
http://i.cubeupload.com/abDopv.jpg its following the vocal
00:21:124 (2) - change into 2/1 slider maybe? :> as I said ingame ;; too much 1/1
00:27:217 - add whistle
00:25:342 (2,3,1) - err.. spacing? ; also, 00:27:217 (1) - touching with 00:24:405 (1) - ; would be good if it didn't touched, so move 00:26:748 (3) - x324 y384 ; 00:27:217 (1) - should be at x232 y272 (will form polygonal pattern)
Sudden change of DistanceSnap 1.2x -> 1.0x00:28:154 (2) - turn into long slider maybe? (what you got now is also good btw) on the sliderslide add whistle X)
00:30:029 (1) - instead of curve slider, I might want to see this a line slider i guess.. somehow reflect the music+vocal alot
00:35:654 (1,2,1) - make polygonal pattern? or,
http://i.cubeupload.com/ElcJ8E.jpg try this slider on 00:36:122 (2) - ?
00:42:216 - add whistle ; she squeaked ._.
00:43:622 (4) - add whistle on sliderslide ^
00:52:059 - somehow this sounds strange.. not a good idea if I suggest you to put drum addition tho.. you might want to try it maybe?
00:52:996 - add clap (should be both clap on head and end of the slider now) ; I don't why, just leaving the 2nd tick without any clap is kinda strange for me , same goes for others too
00:53:699 (2,3) - too hard... but nvm..
got something good here, maybe ;; 00:53:699 - add drum-hitfinish, same goes to the other too, probably untill 00:59:558 -
00:54:402 - ^
01:00:496 (2) - S slider would be good here owo;; 01:01:199 - her voice was flowing S here
01:19:713 (3,1,2) - make this slider looked the same
01:24:400 (2) - ctrl+H and move to x248 y276 ; remove 01:25:337 (3) - ; 01:25:806 (4) - ctrl+H ctrl+J x348 y116 ; will flow much better I think (with DS 1.0x)
01:26:743 (1) - move to 01:26:275 - , end it 01:28:150 -
add break 01:28:267
01:30:024 - add something ofc if change ^
01:50:648 (1) - nice one XD
02:37:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - hmm... i found this good if you make it horizontally , also 02:41:503 (1,2) - this beat is tricky, not recommended in easy tho.. then, select 02:37:519 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - and ctrl+shift+r insert 5, Idk what does that pattern called.. err 15degree? 02:43:378 (1,2) - this one too but with -5 , would looks good imo XD
~others should be the same by now.. o.o try to relook again and change whats same (if you change tho) www
[Normal]
00:17:374 (4) - turn into a circle and a slider maybe? 00:17:374 - this sounded same with 00:16:905 (3) -
00:19:952 (3) - give this slider a lil curve and polygonal pattern with 00:20:655 (4,5) - :3 flow better imo
00:24:873 (2) - slicer look please :3 new pythagoras , change other too
00:25:811 (3,4,5) - I'm not that agree with this tho.. maybe 1/2 slider reverse?
00:28:623 (4,5,6) - choose one and copy paste to all
00:34:248 (2) - 1/2 slider, constant with the other part or, you might want to try add 1/1 slider 00:33:779 - , 1/1 slider 00:34:482 - too
00:37:997 (2,3) - turn into 1/2 slider reverse , vocal
00:40:810 (5) - just add circle maybe? make it same with 00:40:341 (4) -
00:44:559 (2) - ctrl+j would flow better
01:20:181 (3) - try to stack it under 01:18:307 (1) - 's end
01:24:400 (1) - ^ 01:22:994 (2) -
01:53:460 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - umm.. I do think this looks messy
02:06:115 (1,2) - 1/1 slider reverse maybe? with line slider
02:41:269 - add circle because it'll be too tricky..
02:44:316 (4) - this one also tricky because slider before it was with 1 reverse, and this one have 2 reverse, how about long slider?
~should be the same with others now :3
[Hard]
~ hm.. I think its just lack of creativity a bit :> lets see..
00:18:780 (4,5) - change into 1/1 slider, would sound good XD cause, maybe I do think too much 1/2 at hard isn't a good idea tho.. follow vocal too btw ; same goes to the other too
00:20:655 (2,3) - ^
00:55:574 (3,4) - slider reverse (3) and turn (4) into a circle, because the vocal on (3) end 00:56:043 - , and 00:56:277 - should be a new combo because new vocal , if you change this, 00:57:215 (1) - remove NC , then 00:58:386 (4) - NC here
01:05:651 (5) - ctrl+G this, would flow better imo
01:07:292 (2) - would be better if you put this at x4 y104 I think :3
01:07:995 (3,4) - too.. blank? add note 01:08:229 - and (4) move to 01:08:698 -
01:09:401 (6,7) - 1/1 slider for consistency beat
01:10:104 - remove (8) and add 1/1 slider here
01:15:026 - add a note here, heavy beat is very important, or add slider there untill 01:15:377 (1) -
01:15:729 - remove things here , add 1/2 slider ; 01:16:080 - add 1/2 slider too here, to follow the vocal, what you are currently using, I think its kinda mess up
~and why starting here, your hitsound starting unconstant? if you want to add something else, you could use whistle and its fit nicely there, specially at the blue ticks one
~ 01:16:666 (12) - err.. hitsound change again? @A@;;;
01:55:335 (1,2,3) - would be nice if you keep one slider and copy paste 'em :3 err... like this one 01:40:336 (1,2,3) -
02:30:020 - add spinner here?
02:37:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this one does good o.o
02:57:440 (5) - err ctrl +h ctrl+j from this 02:56:971 (4) - would flow better
02:58:377 (2,3,4) - add whistle, :3 I can hear something...er, squeaked
03:14:548 (3) - ctrl +h 03:13:610 (1) - ? ; 03:14:079 (2) - a line vertical slider maybe?
03:22:516 (1) - I think Anti-Jump would fit here owo
~other are the same :3
[Insane]
~ Was hoping for more hooked beat :/ but well...
00:27:686 (11) - 1/2 slider without reverse then 00:28:154 - add a 1/2 slider too here , 00:28:389 (1,2,3) - delete this, turn them into 1/2 slider all with a finish on each white tick, if you think its too noisy, use soft finish, I think would be more catchy that way
00:34:013 (2) - make a small V shapped slider maybe?
00:35:888 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 slider and a 1/1 slider maybe? I think you are too much using xxx x ;;;;
00:43:153 - add finish on each white tick, I can hear it on the background sound o.o
01:24:400 (1,2) - curve this more, its just looked so half assed...
01:29:556 (5) - end it 01:29:966 - :3
01:40:336 (1,2,3) - err polygonal pattern maybe... :>
02:15:490 (5) - I think you should curve this :3 and make the slider end (reverse) aline with 02:14:787 (1,2,3,4) -
~others are the same XD
Its totally because I don't want to make this too long ;w;)a;; and once again sorry for the messy modding
overall :/ yea its a so-so map.. not too good, but not bad too.. so its a soso good , But I really suggest you to change some random pattern into some nice pattern o_o;;