Colin Hou wrote:
[General][Insane]
- video is way too huge, I encoded it to 9MB and plz replace yours and update. http://puu.sh/1Rd6L ok, changed, but the quality looks a bit low~ ;_;
- btw this is the bg without the tracklist (I think this is better as a background) take it if you think so too http://puu.sh/1RdPr looks nice, changed~
[Hard]
- 00:23:946 (1) - cancel new combo and set it on 00:25:025 (3) ok
- 00:25:457 (1) - cancel new combo ok
- 00:29:558 (2) - remove this note, or try to reduce the spacing between 00:29:558 (2,3). a jump like this is not fitting the soft part at all. reduce spacing
- 00:32:148 (5) - suggest you make this a slider which ends at 00:32:363 and maybe rearrange 00:32:579 (1,2) for a better flow feels weird after change to slider
- 00:37:112 (4,5,1) - as you're already doing symmetric patterns then try let 'takai' and 'tokoro' be the symmetric part? i'm saying move 00:37:543 (1) - to 00:37:112 and rearrange the left notes if change to this, i can't find a better flow, so maybe keep it?
- 00:39:486 (3) - suggest new combo on this not the former (1) ok
- 00:50:925 (4) - this is an example of missing heavy/drum beat to follow the lyrics. I'd suggest you use a slider starting at 00:50:709 and end at 00:50:925. but it's up to you as you see, i remake the rhythm by myself from 00:46:392 to 00:51:356, so i'll not change this
- 00:56:968 (2,3,4) - a triple here is kind of overmapped, try keep 1/2 ok
- 01:01:068 (4,5,6,7) - how about make them as separated? like tiny jumps ok
- 01:27:615 (4,1) - exchange new combo, or at least new combo on (4) ok
- 01:13:155 (4,5) - 'te' is better as the start of a slider or a note. but it will broke the pattern of one circle+slider, i'll consider changed if it must
[Normal]
- 00:02:148 (1,2,3) - keep them normal spacing? don't know how to placed it, and don't wanna make jump...so i prefer current one
- 00:03:874 (3) - new combo ok
- 01:01:068 (2) - one more repeat, don't forget the hitsounds ok
send me a PM after your fixing~
thank you Colin and YGO~YGOkid8 wrote:
quick thing with source, take out CAN'T TAKE MY EYES OFF YOU, should just be Hayate no Gotoku!
album names don't go in source. removed