1. Hard (4.5 stars, 151 notes)
2. Insane (4.99 stars, 256 notes)
3. Normal (2.98 stars, 102 notes)

Normal - Done
Hard - Done
Insane - Done

Beren wrote:

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JJ/


[Easy]
00:40:143 (1,2,3) - 节奏感觉怪怪的 0.0b
01:05:395 (1) - 删nc 没有意义


[Normal]
fine


[Hard]
00:11:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 2/4白线可以用N的默认音效
00:32:589 (1) - 开始同上
01:29:136 (4) - 比较喜欢直接一个note在01:29:352 ~.~

加油

lkx_Shore wrote:

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[Hard]
00:52:877 (6) - x172 y84

[Normal]
00:03:884 (1) - Nc,然后这里用转盘会好点(00:04:316起)

[Easy]
HP-1

[Other]
歌好好听>.>

Goodluck to you
是发的这图的mod req吧？没存好有点乱

1. 其实感觉视频用480p有点过了.. 再加上这凶残的帧率。。嘛~ 为了避免麻烦还是缩一点吧。。23.5mb..总觉得要被挑。。试试360p或者压一下帧率? (虽然咱不太懂这些东西 lol
2. 然后就是想吐槽一下中文歌词 xDD 感觉有点别扭诶.. 不过应该也没什么关系吧 :3
3. tv edit啥的。。虽然不知道是什么理由>_> 建议还是改成tv size吧..
   
4. wired diff spread.. the Easy and Normal diff make me feel a bit hard for the primary difficults... it will be much better if you change the diff spread as Easy-->Normal Normal-->Hard Hard-->Insane.~
5. and.. if you fixed above, don't forget to balance the difficulty on song setup. :3
6. the PreviewTime is bit late for me, it will be better if you move it to 65287.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:28:489 (4) - umm..the slider works not very well here with only 2-repeat..because you can heard a note here00:29:136 - and there has nothing. it's easy to improve and you just need to add a repeat on that slider~(with whistles on the start and end. really suitable~~~!)
   2. 00:39:496 (3) - how about to move the circle to x:340 y:136?..has a better flow imo. :3
   3. 00:43:381 - i have no idea why you not add NC here but the next circle.. the new chapter has already begin here~ so you need to move the nc which on (2) to this circle~~!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:15:323 (3) - add a whistle on that tail make me feel more suitable, a bit empty imo~
   2. 00:16:618 (4) - since there has three downbeats, i'd prefer to add finished on that head and tail~ try it?
   3. 00:22:229 (1) - the sounds of sliderticks make me feel awkward.. maybe you can try to silence them via add green lines(to adjust hitsounds volume.)
   4. 00:26:762 (2) - it will be really equal if you add a whistle on that end~
   5. 00:27:625 (3) - yea if you followed above, same thing here~
   6. 00:38:632 (2) - sounds wired because the hitsounds miss a downbeat(hitnormal) on that end..just change the sampleset to normal and remove the clap on that end~
   7. 00:48:992 (4) - i'd prefer to use clap here(Auto Sampleset), to consistent with (1).
   8. 00:52:014 (1) - sounds wired also here.. maybe you can try to change the Sampleset to Normal and just with finish, more suitable imo.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:01:510 (1,2) - it's fine for a Hard..yea i say "Hard"..the circle (2) is too sudden catch the previous note since (1) is a repeat slider~ 如果我做normal，起码这里会加一个repeat然后拿掉(2)~~不过综合后面的难度..还是改Hard吧(即使这是个Easy Hard..
   2. 00:03:129 (1) - 其实我觉得可以把这个spin提前到00:03:129 - ，然后终止在00:04:100 - ，然后在00:04:748 - 和00:05:395 - 分别+circle. 这样更合音乐，而且两个circle感觉可以更强调后面的重音 :3
   3. 00:13:596 (1) - move the anchor which on that tail to x:124 y:60, to make it symmetrical.
   4. 00:15:971 - 个人认为这里应当塞个circle（+whistle）连贯下，虽然你可能是想前面这里break了保持一致吧，但因为这个小节后面又是一个新的chapter，所以这里加一个circle的话整体会让人感觉气氛不那么平淡，而且也不影响前面的consistency imo~（其实你可以参考下00:37:769 (3) - 这里，和vocal一口气连下来道理一样的
   5. 01:01:510 (5) - i'd prefer to add a repeat here and delay the spinner 1/4 tick.(don't forget to short the spin 1/4 tick~) :3
   6. 01:01:942 - and remove the green line here, it makes the beat silence..sure if you don't want to change above, just ignore this point.~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:17:265 (1) - whistle
   2. 00:40:575 (3) - 这个whistle听着多余。。
   3. 00:41:870 (3) - 同上。。

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:12:517 (3,4,5,6) - the flow will be much better if you swap the position of (3,4,5) and (6). just like
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:14:243 (3,4,5) - also about a better flow~ try to make them to stack with head of (1) rather than tail?
   3. 00:15:323 (1) - 有点丑。。; _;不过咱也拉条苦手。。看看能不能自己修修~
   4. 00:34:316 (1,2) - ctrl+G? flows better if you don't mind the spacing of (6) and (1)~
   5. 00:36:258 (2) - 也是觉得ctrl+G好一点~ 你可以都试试然后自己觉得哪种更舒服一些然后决定 :3
   6. 00:37:553 (3) - 同上!!
   7. 00:47:265 (3,4,1) - so crowded and a bit confused for me~~.. maybe you can try this ;3
      SPOILER

      
   8. 01:01:078 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉(4,5)和(6,7)对换位置以后打起来舒服很多……
   9. 01:17:481 (4) - 虽然和 00:15:323 一样的形状，但至少有个blanket, 看起来舒服不少。。（我的意思是这里不用改~
   10. 01:27:625 - add a green line here with 0.5x sv.
   11. 01:27:841 - if you followed above, move the green line which on here to 01:28:057 - .
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:02:589 (4) - noisy..remove the whistle.
   2. 00:04:316 (3) - if you like~ add whistle here. :3
   3. 00:39:927 (6) - move the whistle which on that head to end~
   4. 00:40:575 (1) - if you followed above, remove whistle here.
      
      略鬼畜 ;DD

Strawberry wrote:

Hey here~~!
req via pm in-game. ;3

[ General]
　

1. 其实感觉视频用480p有点过了.. 再加上这凶残的帧率。。嘛~ 为了避免麻烦还是缩一点吧。。23.5mb..总觉得要被挑。。试试360p或者压一下帧率? (虽然咱不太懂这些东西 lol 据说在规格内所以没问题><
2. 然后就是想吐槽一下中文歌词 xDD 感觉有点别扭诶.. 不过应该也没什么关系吧 :3 超喜欢下边这个日文字幕
3. tv edit啥的。。虽然不知道是什么理由>_> 建议还是改成tv size吧.. 因为从专辑里掏出来的时候就带着TV Edit...而且问过BAT说没问题
   
4. wired diff spread.. the Easy and Normal diff make me feel a bit hard for the primary difficults... it will be much better if you change the diff spread as Easy-->Normal Normal-->Hard Hard-->Insane.~ fixed~
   
5. and.. if you fixed above, don't forget to balance the difficulty on song setup. :3 fixed~
6. the PreviewTime is bit late for me, it will be better if you move it to 65287. fixed

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:28:489 (4) - umm..the slider works not very well here with only 2-repeat..because you can heard a note here00:29:136 - and there has nothing. it's easy to improve and you just need to add a repeat on that slider~(with whistles on the start and end. really suitable~~~!)
   2. 00:39:496 (3) - how about to move the circle to x:340 y:136?..has a better flow imo. :3
   3. 00:43:381 - i have no idea why you not add NC here but the next circle.. the new chapter has already begin here~ so you need to move the nc which on (2) to this circle~~!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:15:323 (3) - add a whistle on that tail make me feel more suitable, a bit empty imo~
   2. 00:16:618 (4) - since there has three downbeats, i'd prefer to add finished on that head and tail~ try it?
   3. 00:22:229 (1) - the sounds of sliderticks make me feel awkward.. maybe you can try to silence them via add green lines(to adjust hitsounds volume.)
   4. 00:26:762 (2) - it will be really equal if you add a whistle on that end~
   5. 00:27:625 (3) - yea if you followed above, same thing here~
   6. 00:38:632 (2) - sounds wired because the hitsounds miss a downbeat(hitnormal) on that end..just change the sampleset to normal and remove the clap on that end~ it sounds fine for me o.o
   7. 00:48:992 (4) - i'd prefer to use clap here(Auto Sampleset), to consistent with (1).
   8. 00:52:014 (1) - sounds wired also here.. maybe you can try to change the Sampleset to Normal and just with finish, more suitable imo. it's also fine for me :3

fixed all the others~

Kiai段都挺好的，不过这真的不是Easy啊.. lol
改Normal吧.

[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:01:510 (1,2) - it's fine for a Hard..yea i say "Hard"..the circle (2) is too sudden catch the previous note since (1) is a repeat slider~ 如果我做normal，起码这里会加一个repeat然后拿掉(2)~~不过综合后面的难度..还是改Hard吧(即使这是个Easy Hard..
   2. 00:03:129 (1) - 其实我觉得可以把这个spin提前到00:03:129 - ，然后终止在00:04:100 - ，然后在00:04:748 - 和00:05:395 - 分别+circle. 这样更合音乐，而且两个circle感觉可以更强调后面的重音 :3 感觉这么改之后00:04:748 - 的circle显得很突兀，直接把spin 提前了然后00:05:395 - 加了circle
   3. 00:13:596 (1) - move the anchor which on that tail to x:124 y:60, to make it symmetrical.
   4. 00:15:971 - 个人认为这里应当塞个circle（+whistle）连贯下，虽然你可能是想前面这里break了保持一致吧，但因为这个小节后面又是一个新的chapter，所以这里加一个circle的话整体会让人感觉气氛不那么平淡，而且也不影响前面的consistency imo~（其实你可以参考下00:37:769 (3) - 这里，和vocal一口气连下来道理一样的
   5. 01:01:510 (5) - i'd prefer to add a repeat here and delay the spinner 1/4 tick.(don't forget to short the spin 1/4 tick~) :3
   6. 01:01:942 - and remove the green line here, it makes the beat silence..sure if you don't want to change above, just ignore this point.~ i fixed previous one, but i think this silence beat is better
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:17:265 (1) - whistle
   2. 00:40:575 (3) - 这个whistle听着多余。。
   3. 00:41:870 (3) - 同上。。

fixed all the others~

[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:12:517 (3,4,5,6) - the flow will be much better if you swap the position of (3,4,5) and (6). just like
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:14:243 (3,4,5) - also about a better flow~ try to make them to stack with head of (1) rather than tail?
   3. 00:15:323 (1) - 有点丑。。; _;不过咱也拉条苦手。。看看能不能自己修修~ 实在是不会拉条QAQ，不过我觉得虽然难看但是还挺带感的><
   4. 00:34:316 (1,2) - ctrl+G? flows better if you don't mind the spacing of (6) and (1)~ 感觉有些别扭...
   5. 00:36:258 (2) - 也是觉得ctrl+G好一点~ 你可以都试试然后自己觉得哪种更舒服一些然后决定 :3 同上
   6. 00:37:553 (3) - 同上!! ^
   7. 00:47:265 (3,4,1) - so crowded and a bit confused for me~~.. maybe you can try this ;3
      SPOILER

      
   8. 01:01:078 (4,5,6,7) - 感觉(4,5)和(6,7)对换位置以后打起来舒服很多……
   9. 01:17:481 (4) - 虽然和 00:15:323 一样的形状，但至少有个blanket, 看起来舒服不少。。（我的意思是这里不用改~
   10. 01:27:625 - add a green line here with 0.5x sv.
   11. 01:27:841 - if you followed above, move the green line which on here to 01:28:057 - .
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:02:589 (4) - noisy..remove the whistle.
   2. 00:04:316 (3) - if you like~ add whistle here. :3 wired ;_;
   3. 00:39:927 (6) - move the whistle which on that head to end~
   4. 00:40:575 (1) - if you followed above, remove whistle here.
      fixed all the others~
      
      略鬼畜 ;DD

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Goodjob and GoodLuck then~~!

Enormus wrote:

In my opinion it is quite good map. Maybe little mistakes but i think he will fix them fast . Summing that all, in my opinion he did really nice job :3

Strawberry wrote:

Enormus wrote:

In my opinion it is quite good map. Maybe little mistakes but i think he will fix them fast . Summing that all, in my opinion he did really nice job :3

agreement

BakaHuang wrote:

lol 好棒 好怀念的风格

bless总受好棒

phaZ wrote:

offset -2 or -3ms was a lot better to play for me
[Normal]

00:03:884 (1) - because the vocals alrdy starts here every normal-player will hit it too early. before, you followed the vocals so it would be logic to do the same here. maybe add a circle (it increases the star-rating by ,03 which is ok) ok
00:16:402 - same as above. make (3) going until 00:16:402 ok
00:52:014 (1,2,3,4) - this plays very weird. because the vocals are not there (1,4)... wah it plays so ugly. plz remap it and follow the vocals. its easier to play like ^ than just "make 1/2 on every white tick" through the whole song fixed (1)
01:28:488 (1,2) - move it more down. its just too close to (4) ok
[Hard]

00:01:294 - hmm i really want to hit something here add circle
00:03:884 (1)- the spinner is so loud d>.<b i would add a inherit section with 5% or 30% used 5%
00:31:078 (1,2,3) - thisi or this feels much better for me than a double stack fixed
[Insane]

ar+1? it fits more to the song imo i think AR8 is the best for this BPM
00:48:129 (3,4) - is there a special reason to to this? not special reason, just cuz it's fit in there
00:49:855 (1,2) - ^ . the beat starts on the red tick. maybe change this too?
00:55:899 (6) - i really dislike not symmetric "S-slider". i would move the first and the second slider-waypoint 1grid down (tiny) fixed
01:12:301 (4,5) - the curve of (4) is so extreme :\ and again is there a special reason to make such a doublet? i prefer a 1/2-slider here http://puu.sh/1LBtS after i tried this it didnt sound so well
01:28:704 (2,3) - lower distance since the end is very quiet? ok

Mythol wrote:

[Normal]
HP +1
01:05:395 (2) - NC!
all fixed~

[Hard]
00:03:884 (1) - Move to 00:03:237
00:21:582 (1,2) - Too close, use regular spacing here but I think this part can be mapped better 00:21:150 (5) -

SPOILER

00:25:899 (2,3) - I don't like these notes here and there should be a note 00:25:683 imo so maybe try this?

SPOILER

highlighted notes are what I changed~

00:31:942 - Add triple here for guitar!
00:33:453 (2,3,4) - eeeee make this symmetrical plz :<
00:35:179 (2,3,4) - 1 grid left
00:42:949 (2) - NC here instead of slider before
00:59:136 (2) - Whistle on repeat
01:25:683 (3) - Whistle head
all fixed~

[Insane]
00:01:510 (2) - Remove whistle tail? fixed~
00:03:884 (1) - Change to short repeat slider for piano? but I know this star pattern will be ruined ;_; yeah, so i just wanna keep that ;_;
00:52:337 (4) - I think you should remove this note and make jumps with 00:51:798 (1,2,3) i think this need a triple~00:52:229 (3,4,5) - so i make (1,2) jump now~
01:27:625 (1) - I think it's better without the SV change :/ maybe i'll change this if someone point out again :3

01:28:596 - Note! in fact i did this before, but it works not good as expect...so i change it to current one

Great! ^^

1. 00:19:640 - add note? i can hear voice.

1. 01:22:661 (2,3) - not perfect blanket?

1. 00:28:488 (4,1) - spacing is very large.