Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. video is way too huge, I encoded it to 9MB and plz replace yours and update. http://puu.sh/1Rd6L ok, changed, but the quality looks a bit low~ ;_;
2. btw this is the bg without the tracklist (I think this is better as a background) take it if you think so too http://puu.sh/1RdPr looks nice, changed~

[Insane]

1. 00:23:946 (1) - cancel new combo and set it on 00:25:025 (3) ok
2. 00:25:457 (1) - cancel new combo ok
3. 00:29:558 (2) - remove this note, or try to reduce the spacing between 00:29:558 (2,3). a jump like this is not fitting the soft part at all. reduce spacing
4. 00:32:148 (5) - suggest you make this a slider which ends at 00:32:363 and maybe rearrange 00:32:579 (1,2) for a better flow feels weird after change to slider
5. 00:37:112 (4,5,1) - as you're already doing symmetric patterns then try let 'takai' and 'tokoro' be the symmetric part? i'm saying move 00:37:543 (1) - to 00:37:112 and rearrange the left notes if change to this, i can't find a better flow, so maybe keep it?
6. 00:39:486 (3) - suggest new combo on this not the former (1) ok
7. 00:50:925 (4) - this is an example of missing heavy/drum beat to follow the lyrics. I'd suggest you use a slider starting at 00:50:709 and end at 00:50:925. but it's up to you as you see, i remake the rhythm by myself from 00:46:392 to 00:51:356, so i'll not change this
8. 00:56:968 (2,3,4) - a triple here is kind of overmapped, try keep 1/2 ok
9. 01:01:068 (4,5,6,7) - how about make them as separated? like tiny jumps ok
10. 01:27:615 (4,1) - exchange new combo, or at least new combo on (4) ok
11. 01:13:155 (4,5) - 'te' is better as the start of a slider or a note. but it will broke the pattern of one circle+slider, i'll consider changed if it must

[Hard]

1. 00:02:148 (1,2,3) - keep them normal spacing? don't know how to placed it, and don't wanna make jump...so i prefer current one

[Normal]

1. 00:03:874 (3) - new combo ok
2. 01:01:068 (2) - one more repeat, don't forget the hitsounds ok

send me a PM after your fixing~

YGOkid8 wrote:

quick thing with source, take out CAN'T TAKE MY EYES OFF YOU, should just be Hayate no Gotoku!
album names don't go in source. removed

Colin Hou wrote:

原来的source就是对的啊 为什么要改o.o

-Kirito wrote:

Bless \:D/

Colin Hou wrote:

bubbled

note: the source is correct as the 3rd season of hayate.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

good work Bless baka \:D/

Can't wait to see it ranked ww

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. 為甚麼是TV EDIT?
   专辑里的官方名称就叫TV EDIT
   

[Normal]

1. 00:38:622 (4) - How about changing the hitsound of the end of the slider to normal hitsound with a soft-clap by using the simpleset-additions panel in the editor? sounds little weird, so not change this
2. 00:58:047 (1) - Add a new combo here and then remove the new combo at 00:58:263 (2) - so that the color of the circle stack won't be so ugly during gameplay. fixed~
3. 01:01:932 (1) - How about changing the end of the spinner to 40% volume? It should be enough, 70% is too loud for it. Btw, you can add a whistle on the spinner if you like. balance this spinner volume to 40%,35%,40%,50% now
4. 01:07:975 (4) - Same as 00:38:622 (4) - use normal hitsound instead of this two soft-clap now

[Hard]

1. 00:42:939 (1) - Please close the grid snap and then snap this note again, it can be a more beautiful blanket. fixed
   
   ~

   
2. 00:54:809 - I would like to add a note here if I were you because there is a vocal present there. Therefore, a note can fit the music there. added note and remaked this part
3. 00:55:241 - ^ ^
4. 01:01:932 (1) - How about changing the end of the spinner to 40% volume? It should be enough, 70% is too loud for it. Btw, you can add a whistle on the spinner if you like. balance this spinner volume to 40%,35%,40%,50% now

[Insane]

1. 00:45:313 (3) - I would slightly change the position of this slider if I were you. Since this way can flow better in my opinion. Also the arrangement will look neatly. 00:45:313 (3) - make better flow with 00:45:961 (4,5,6,7) - so not change this
   
   Recommendation

   
2. 01:27:615 (1) - I would suggest changing the end of the slider to 5% volume and then back to 30% volume at 01:28:263 - change the end of the slider to 5% volume, but 30% volume is too small due to 00:03:874 - also used 60% volume, so i reduce the end of this song to 50% volume, i think is fine now

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

No_Gu wrote:

恩这首真的不错

Flask wrote:

哇~

-Kirito wrote:

Bless congratulations \o/

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

congrats your first rank~

Strawberry wrote:

gratz

ykcarrot wrote:

Oh, Bless.
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap!

Sekai-nyan wrote:

ohhh ~ Blessss <333

Gratz on ranking your moe map >w<

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

grats

yurunneram wrote:

YES finally this song is ranked

lkx_Shore wrote:

gx

bossandy wrote:

恭喜!!! First Ranked beatmap!!!!

vivicat wrote:

哇 JJ终于长大了好感动
congrats~

Mythol wrote:

gratz!