YGOkid8 wrote:

combo modded by irc. actual mod here, with a few tiny more combo mods.

General:
- Words with less than 3 characters don't work in search, so "op" in tags is meaningless. Change it to "opening" instead~ changed~
- Offset 1500. Doesn't change anything except for two things: offset change to -220 now, the reason i said in IRC

• 1) This is where the offset should be
  2) The offset is -10ms of your original one, so be sure to move all your timing sections (except this one) back by 10ms

Also remember to snap all your beats to new timing.
- Even though I can see TV EDIT is in official name, most people go with TV Size anyway... not sure what to do with this. But anyway, official name is TV EDIT, not TV Edit :p will try to find out what to do about this. change to TV EDIT now~

Normal:
00:04:100 (4) - can you silence the slidertick like you did in other sections? ok
00:28:488 (4) - found this a bit confusing for a normal, people would expect only one return, but there's two. any way you can change it somehow? changed
00:29:783 (1,2,3) - this too i found a bit confusing, and sounds a bit odd. i suggest deleting the (2), move the (1) one red tick forward, then add a hitcircle on 00:29:784 - ok
00:42:301 (5,1,2,3) - position like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/578309 ok
01:28:488 (4,5) - new combo the (4). also, as there's nothing in the music at 01:29:138 - , i don't really like how this part is mapped. maybe copy 00:03:884 (3,4) - and silence the tick as well? add new combo, and i mapped this part cuz there has vocal, changed

Hard:
00:28:488 (3,1) - flow here is kinda weird, move (1) to x:12 y:196, then fix the rest up~ fixed
01:01:510 (3) - take off one return then add a hitcircle at 01:01:942 - ok
01:28:488 (1,2) - as long as you don't have anything at 01:29:138 - , i don't mind how you do this. this has vocal, right? o.o you can hear the vocal sing "kure nai ka", "i" at here

Insane:
00:04:532 (4) - yeahhh same thing as past two diffs. follow vocal
00:21:798 (3) - nothing in song = should not have anything yeah there really has nothing, but i add a circle here make it play more comfortable~
00:25:467 (1,2) - flow here kinda weird, though don't have any suggestions how to change. maybe replace with a 1/2 slider + hitcircle? i think this flow is fine in Insane~
01:28:704 (2,3) - same thing vocal~

1. Offset : -6ms from current
2. Disable letter box during break time. Since osu! supports 16:9 ratio video in wide screen and you added wide video, so it needs to be disabled.
3. Add tags : the combat butler
4. 01:01:938 - According to the pitch in the song, I think the audio volume should be louder than 01:02:585

Screenshot and codes

324,296,82657,5,4,0:0:0
256,52,83089,1,0,1:0:0
256,184,83305,1,4,0:0:0
188,296,83736,5,2,0:0:0
324,296,83952,1,0,1:0:0
256,184,84168,1,4,0:0:0

Screenshot and codes

320,184,86326,6,0,P|372:168|424:184,1,110,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,252,86758,1,0,1:0:0
256,16,87190,1,0,1:0:0
140,252,87621,2,0,P|88:268|36:252,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Offset : -6ms from current
2. Disable letter box during break time. Since osu! supports 16:9 ratio video in wide screen and you added wide video, so it needs to be disabled.
3. Add tags : the combat butler
4. 01:01:938 - According to the pitch in the song, I think the audio volume should be louder than 01:02:585

[Insane]
00:36:038 (1) - Put a whistle instead of finish. There is no cymbal in the song.
00:52:010 (2) - Feels like random jump, because there is nothing emphasized in the song.
00:54:815 (1) - Add finish, there is a cymbal sound in the song.
01:04:744 (1,2,3,1) - They are not symmetry.
01:22:657 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Like this?

Screenshot and codes

324,296,82657,5,4,0:0:0
256,52,83089,1,0,1:0:0
256,184,83305,1,4,0:0:0
188,296,83736,5,2,0:0:0
324,296,83952,1,0,1:0:0
256,184,84168,1,4,0:0:0

01:26:110 (8,1) - Flow isn't good due to slider direction. Maybe flip the slider vertically?
01:27:621 (4) - Spacing. It will look better if it is symmetrized with 01:26:758 (2)
If you take those two suggestions above, the result may be similar with this.

Screenshot and codes

320,184,86326,6,0,P|372:168|424:184,1,110,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,252,86758,1,0,1:0:0
256,16,87190,1,0,1:0:0
140,252,87621,2,0,P|88:268|36:252,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:28:592 - How about adding a circle at here? Because you put the slider in Hard diff, thus for consistency?


[Hard]
00:26:974 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:36:038 (1) - Add a whistle to head
01:01:938 (4) - You'd better delete this like Insane diff.


[Normal]
00:22:549 and 00:22:981 - They don't need to be 5% volume. It's same with 00:18:772 (1,2)
00:37:333 (2) - I feel empty at 00:37:765, because it's a downbeat. Replacing it with a tick isn't so good idea.


Good luck!

1. video is way too huge, I encoded it to 9MB and plz replace yours and update. http://puu.sh/1Rd6L
2. btw this is the bg without the tracklist (I think this is better as a background) take it if you think so too http://puu.sh/1RdPr

1. 00:23:946 (1) - cancel new combo and set it on 00:25:025 (3)
2. 00:25:457 (1) - cancel new combo
3. 00:29:558 (2) - remove this note, or try to reduce the spacing between 00:29:558 (2,3). a jump like this is not fitting the soft part at all.
4. 00:32:148 (5) - suggest you make this a slider which ends at 00:32:363 and maybe rearrange 00:32:579 (1,2) for a better flow
5. 00:37:112 (4,5,1) - as you're already doing symmetric patterns then try let 'takai' and 'tokoro' be the symmetric part? i'm saying move 00:37:543 (1) - to 00:37:112 and rearrange the left notes
6. 00:39:486 (3) - suggest new combo on this not the former (1)
7. 00:50:925 (4) - this is an example of missing heavy/drum beat to follow the lyrics. I'd suggest you use a slider starting at 00:50:709 and end at 00:50:925. but it's up to you
8. 00:56:968 (2,3,4) - a triple here is kind of overmapped, try keep 1/2
9. 01:01:068 (4,5,6,7) - how about make them as separated? like tiny jumps
10. 01:27:615 (4,1) - exchange new combo, or at least new combo on (4)
11. 01:13:155 (4,5) - 'te' is better as the start of a slider or a note.

1. 00:02:148 (1,2,3) - keep them normal spacing?

1. 00:03:874 (3) - new combo
2. 01:01:068 (2) - one more repeat, don't forget the hitsounds

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. video is way too huge, I encoded it to 9MB and plz replace yours and update. http://puu.sh/1Rd6L ok, changed, but the quality looks a bit low~ ;_;
2. btw this is the bg without the tracklist (I think this is better as a background) take it if you think so too http://puu.sh/1RdPr looks nice, changed~

[Insane]

1. 00:23:946 (1) - cancel new combo and set it on 00:25:025 (3) ok
2. 00:25:457 (1) - cancel new combo ok
3. 00:29:558 (2) - remove this note, or try to reduce the spacing between 00:29:558 (2,3). a jump like this is not fitting the soft part at all. reduce spacing
4. 00:32:148 (5) - suggest you make this a slider which ends at 00:32:363 and maybe rearrange 00:32:579 (1,2) for a better flow feels weird after change to slider
5. 00:37:112 (4,5,1) - as you're already doing symmetric patterns then try let 'takai' and 'tokoro' be the symmetric part? i'm saying move 00:37:543 (1) - to 00:37:112 and rearrange the left notes if change to this, i can't find a better flow, so maybe keep it?
6. 00:39:486 (3) - suggest new combo on this not the former (1) ok
7. 00:50:925 (4) - this is an example of missing heavy/drum beat to follow the lyrics. I'd suggest you use a slider starting at 00:50:709 and end at 00:50:925. but it's up to you as you see, i remake the rhythm by myself from 00:46:392 to 00:51:356, so i'll not change this
8. 00:56:968 (2,3,4) - a triple here is kind of overmapped, try keep 1/2 ok
9. 01:01:068 (4,5,6,7) - how about make them as separated? like tiny jumps ok
10. 01:27:615 (4,1) - exchange new combo, or at least new combo on (4) ok
11. 01:13:155 (4,5) - 'te' is better as the start of a slider or a note. but it will broke the pattern of one circle+slider, i'll consider changed if it must

[Hard]

1. 00:02:148 (1,2,3) - keep them normal spacing? don't know how to placed it, and don't wanna make jump...so i prefer current one

[Normal]

1. 00:03:874 (3) - new combo ok
2. 01:01:068 (2) - one more repeat, don't forget the hitsounds ok

send me a PM after your fixing~

YGOkid8 wrote:

quick thing with source, take out CAN'T TAKE MY EYES OFF YOU, should just be Hayate no Gotoku!
album names don't go in source. removed

Colin Hou wrote:

原来的source就是对的啊 为什么要改o.o

-Kirito wrote:

Bless \:D/

Colin Hou wrote:

bubbled

note: the source is correct as the 3rd season of hayate.

Sekai-nyan wrote:

good work Bless baka \:D/

Can't wait to see it ranked ww

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi~

[General]

1. 為甚麼是TV EDIT?
   专辑里的官方名称就叫TV EDIT
   

[Normal]

1. 00:38:622 (4) - How about changing the hitsound of the end of the slider to normal hitsound with a soft-clap by using the simpleset-additions panel in the editor? sounds little weird, so not change this
2. 00:58:047 (1) - Add a new combo here and then remove the new combo at 00:58:263 (2) - so that the color of the circle stack won't be so ugly during gameplay. fixed~
3. 01:01:932 (1) - How about changing the end of the spinner to 40% volume? It should be enough, 70% is too loud for it. Btw, you can add a whistle on the spinner if you like. balance this spinner volume to 40%,35%,40%,50% now
4. 01:07:975 (4) - Same as 00:38:622 (4) - use normal hitsound instead of this two soft-clap now

[Hard]

1. 00:42:939 (1) - Please close the grid snap and then snap this note again, it can be a more beautiful blanket. fixed
   
   ~

   
2. 00:54:809 - I would like to add a note here if I were you because there is a vocal present there. Therefore, a note can fit the music there. added note and remaked this part
3. 00:55:241 - ^ ^
4. 01:01:932 (1) - How about changing the end of the spinner to 40% volume? It should be enough, 70% is too loud for it. Btw, you can add a whistle on the spinner if you like. balance this spinner volume to 40%,35%,40%,50% now

[Insane]

1. 00:45:313 (3) - I would slightly change the position of this slider if I were you. Since this way can flow better in my opinion. Also the arrangement will look neatly. 00:45:313 (3) - make better flow with 00:45:961 (4,5,6,7) - so not change this
   
   Recommendation

   
2. 01:27:615 (1) - I would suggest changing the end of the slider to 5% volume and then back to 30% volume at 01:28:263 - change the end of the slider to 5% volume, but 30% volume is too small due to 00:03:874 - also used 60% volume, so i reduce the end of this song to 50% volume, i think is fine now

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

No_Gu wrote:

恩这首真的不错

Flask wrote:

哇~

-Kirito wrote:

Bless congratulations \o/

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

congrats your first rank~

Strawberry wrote:

gratz

ykcarrot wrote:

Oh, Bless.
Congrats on your first ranked beatmap!

Sekai-nyan wrote:

ohhh ~ Blessss <333

Gratz on ranking your moe map >w<

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

grats

yurunneram wrote:

YES finally this song is ranked

lkx_Shore wrote:

gx