Okay, let's do this.
Request taken from Loctav's and p3n's modding queue!
Inconsistency in Kiaitimes, go over that.
Unsnapped stuff:
Another:
02:13:897 (1) - Unsnapped sliderend.
02:14:208 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
Heaven:
00:53:923 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
00:54:079 (3) - Unsnapped sliderend.
I found 煉獄 being used in the title of the song often, so I translated it and found that the meaning of it is purgatory. I'm pretty sure that this is the original title, so please use it as the title and add purgatorium as the romanised version.
IMO, 45% vol. throughout the song fit better than switching between 45% and 30%.
Gridsnap made some weird-looking spacings, I'd like you to turn it off and keep the spacing consistent this way.
00:12:654 - from here, you use whistles on every 8th white line (00:14:830 (4) for example), and that doesn't fit at all. The claps are fine, but please remove the whistles.
00:20:115 (1,3) - why do you suddently break the mirrorpatterns? I would stick to it, so use the shape of (3) for (1) and flip it.
01:22:369 (4) - add clap on sliderend.
01:24:545 (2) - remove whistle.
01:24:856 (1,1) - IMO the gap between them is a bit huge for the easiest map, maybe reduce spinnerlength by 1/2?
01:43:508 (2) - to keep the hitsounding consistent, add whistles on start and end of the slider. You could also remove the clap from sliderend.
01:44:441 (3) - if you did the prev. thing, remove whistle here.
00:12:654 (1) - replace clap on sliderend with whistle.
01:04:571 (5,1) - I would prefer (5) in the next combo, so add NC on (5) and remove it from (1)?
01:37:291 - the hitsounding was much better with claps, maybe change it?
02:18:949 (5,6) - they should stand on their own, so NC on (5). This also makes the rhythm easier to read.
02:21:436 (5,6) - ^
02:23:923 (5,6) - ^
00:02:706 - you use a stable 2/4 clap pattern here, which usually is fine, but since the music goes in 3-note patterns, you should adapt the hitsoundpattern correspondingly, meaning you should use a clap every 3rd 1/2 note.
00:07:058 (7,8) - where are the whistles?
00:41:566 (1,2) - the spacing is weird for me, I would prefer either consistent spacing or a jump here (ctrl+g on (2)).
00:42:809 (1,2) - remove claps.
01:13:275 (3) - NC
01:23:301 (4,5) - I prefer them not hidden under the Hitburst of (2).
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:08:146 (2,4) - they should be curved in the other direction.
01:59:286 (5) - move to 01:58:845 and adjust spacing (it should still be snapped on 1/3 here)
02:03:949 (2,4) - ^
02:18:949 (1,2) - no. You can't just stack notes in the most thrilling part of the song. Use jumps instead.
02:21:436 (1,2,1) - ^
02:23:923 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:25:555 (3) - remove clap from sliderend.
00:48:716 (1,2,3) - Please use a pattern where the sliders are more visible.
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - snap all on 1/3.
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:09:001 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:19:260 (5,1) - again, don't use stacks here. Screenjumps fit much better.
02:21:747 (6,1) - ^
02:24:545 (1,2,3) - ^
02:17:084 - kiaiflashes are not allowed in Taiko
OD +1
00:39:156 (3,4,1) - no 1/8.
00:43:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - use a 1/3 pattern instead.
00:47:472 (1) - don
00:49:104 (2,3,4) - no 1/8.
00:54:001 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - this part is 1/3 again. delete one don and use kddkdd on 1/3. The last three kats are on 1/4 again.
00:54:933 - this kiai is just bad. It looks like you didn't want to map that part for whatever reason. You can use some nice 1/4 streams here, following the drum-like sound in the background. It would be such a waste for this awesome part of the song.
01:15:762 - 01:17:161 - add a spinner.
01:26:099 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,1) - here it's 1/3 again. Use kddkddkddk.
01:36:047 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - 1/3 again.
01:45:996 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
01:58:742 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
02:01:229 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:03:716 (2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:06:203 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:17:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - they all should be big.
To be honest, you gave away a lot of potential of that taiko.
Good luck.~
Request taken from Loctav's and p3n's modding queue!
General
Inconsistency in Kiaitimes, go over that.
Unsnapped stuff:
Another:
02:13:897 (1) - Unsnapped sliderend.
02:14:208 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
Heaven:
00:53:923 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
00:54:079 (3) - Unsnapped sliderend.
I found 煉獄 being used in the title of the song often, so I translated it and found that the meaning of it is purgatory. I'm pretty sure that this is the original title, so please use it as the title and add purgatorium as the romanised version.
IMO, 45% vol. throughout the song fit better than switching between 45% and 30%.
Gridsnap made some weird-looking spacings, I'd like you to turn it off and keep the spacing consistent this way.
Standard
00:12:654 - from here, you use whistles on every 8th white line (00:14:830 (4) for example), and that doesn't fit at all. The claps are fine, but please remove the whistles.
00:20:115 (1,3) - why do you suddently break the mirrorpatterns? I would stick to it, so use the shape of (3) for (1) and flip it.
01:22:369 (4) - add clap on sliderend.
01:24:545 (2) - remove whistle.
01:24:856 (1,1) - IMO the gap between them is a bit huge for the easiest map, maybe reduce spinnerlength by 1/2?
01:43:508 (2) - to keep the hitsounding consistent, add whistles on start and end of the slider. You could also remove the clap from sliderend.
01:44:441 (3) - if you did the prev. thing, remove whistle here.
Advanced
00:12:654 (1) - replace clap on sliderend with whistle.
01:04:571 (5,1) - I would prefer (5) in the next combo, so add NC on (5) and remove it from (1)?
01:37:291 - the hitsounding was much better with claps, maybe change it?
02:18:949 (5,6) - they should stand on their own, so NC on (5). This also makes the rhythm easier to read.
02:21:436 (5,6) - ^
02:23:923 (5,6) - ^
Hyper
00:02:706 - you use a stable 2/4 clap pattern here, which usually is fine, but since the music goes in 3-note patterns, you should adapt the hitsoundpattern correspondingly, meaning you should use a clap every 3rd 1/2 note.
00:07:058 (7,8) - where are the whistles?
00:41:566 (1,2) - the spacing is weird for me, I would prefer either consistent spacing or a jump here (ctrl+g on (2)).
00:42:809 (1,2) - remove claps.
01:13:275 (3) - NC
01:23:301 (4,5) - I prefer them not hidden under the Hitburst of (2).
Another
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:08:146 (2,4) - they should be curved in the other direction.
01:59:286 (5) - move to 01:58:845 and adjust spacing (it should still be snapped on 1/3 here)
02:03:949 (2,4) - ^
02:18:949 (1,2) - no. You can't just stack notes in the most thrilling part of the song. Use jumps instead.
02:21:436 (1,2,1) - ^
02:23:923 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
Heaven
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:25:555 (3) - remove clap from sliderend.
00:48:716 (1,2,3) - Please use a pattern where the sliders are more visible.
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - snap all on 1/3.
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:09:001 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:19:260 (5,1) - again, don't use stacks here. Screenjumps fit much better.
02:21:747 (6,1) - ^
02:24:545 (1,2,3) - ^
Taiko Oni
02:17:084 - kiaiflashes are not allowed in Taiko
OD +1
00:39:156 (3,4,1) - no 1/8.
00:43:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - use a 1/3 pattern instead.
00:47:472 (1) - don
00:49:104 (2,3,4) - no 1/8.
00:54:001 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - this part is 1/3 again. delete one don and use kddkdd on 1/3. The last three kats are on 1/4 again.
00:54:933 - this kiai is just bad. It looks like you didn't want to map that part for whatever reason. You can use some nice 1/4 streams here, following the drum-like sound in the background. It would be such a waste for this awesome part of the song.
01:15:762 - 01:17:161 - add a spinner.
01:26:099 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,1) - here it's 1/3 again. Use kddkddkddk.
01:36:047 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - 1/3 again.
01:45:996 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
01:58:742 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
02:01:229 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:03:716 (2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:06:203 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:17:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - they all should be big.
To be honest, you gave away a lot of potential of that taiko.
Good luck.~
