from my queue
[General]
I don't know how you add the kiai time, seems the kiai part is not the upsurge
[Standard]
00:31:307 (3,1) - the slider can blanket the circle much better
01:09:856 (1,2) - hope you can try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen
01:24:856 (1,1) - the slider is too far from the spinner, this is really too hard to play as an Easy diff now, need to fix this
02:16:462 (2,3,1) - the spacing is a bit large here, use 1.1x spacing plz
02:30:762 - I highly suggest use soft hitsound here, or the spinner end is too loud imo, doesn't fit the song well
[Roxas' Advanced]
00:07:058 (5,6) - I highly suggest change them into 2 1/2 sliders, or the pattern is kinda hard to read/play as a Normal diff. do something like what you did at 00:12:032 (5,6) - please
00:21:980 (5) - it can change into 2 1/2 sliders, will fit the song better imo. or keep this but move 00:22:602 (1) - this circle a bit far, use 1.0x spacing would be nice
01:03:327 (4,5) - could you please avoid of using anti-jump here? this is hard to read and doesn't fit the song here imo
01:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard to play for this diff imo, too many circles together is really hard to play, hope you can change some of them into sliders
01:28:431 (1,2) - short sliders start at heavy beat(white beat line) will be much better to read and play, what you did at 01:22:369 (2) - is much better imo. anyway there's lots of same patterns after this, if you want to fix this I tihnk you need to remap this part
01:48:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this partten is really too hard to play, make then into sliders please. if you want to keep this then the diff is not a usual Normal diff now, the mapset's diff spread will be broken. also you need to remap all same patterns in this part
02:07:135 - I'm opposed to use 1.25x speed here in a Normal diff, this is too hard to play imo
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - the anti-jumps are really too hard to read for newbies, use normal spacing plz
02:21:436 (5,6,1) - ^
this diff is nearly a Hard diff imo(especially the end), it broke the mapset's diff spread cuz the Standard diff is really an easy one
[Pie's Hyper]
00:10:167 (1,2) - this 2 sliders can blanket each other better imo
01:11:099 (4) - ctrl+g is better imo, the anti-jump between 01:10:167 (3,4) - doesn't fit the song well
01:34:027 - add a note here will fit the song better imo
02:09:001 (4) - the rhyme here is 1/3 not 1/4, must fix this wrong snap. and there's some same rhyme after this, also should be fixed
it's nearly an Insane diff imo
[Another]
00:50:892 (7) - I suggest remove some whistle on this sldier, sound kinda odd and doesn't fit the song imo (00:49:649 (4) - this one fit the song much better than it)
01:30:451 (3) - this slider is really hard to read where it start imo, change a direction, or change the combo color to make its color is different from 01:29:830 (1) - please
02:13:664 (6,1,2) - the rhyme is really odd to me, it should be 3/4 sldier+3/4 sldier+1/2 slider imo, to make the sldier start at heavy beat is better
02:30:762 - same as Standard here
[Heaven]
00:07:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest stack all the circles on slider end, or this pattern is kinda confusing to read
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sound be 1/3 beats
00:53:923 (2) - unsnapped slider end
00:54:079 (3) - ^
01:14:830 - need to add finish here, also it's better to volume up a bit here, it's not too quiet imo
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - also 1/3 beats here
02:09:001 (1,2,3) - ^, and please fix same patterns after this one
02:30:762 - same as Standard
[inaba's Taiko Oni]
00:39:142 (3) - unsnapped circle
00:49:091 (2) - ^
the map still need much more works now imo, the quality still has a huge room to be improved
anyway, good luck
[General]
I don't know how you add the kiai time, seems the kiai part is not the upsurge
[Standard]
00:31:307 (3,1) - the slider can blanket the circle much better
01:09:856 (1,2) - hope you can try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen
01:24:856 (1,1) - the slider is too far from the spinner, this is really too hard to play as an Easy diff now, need to fix this
02:16:462 (2,3,1) - the spacing is a bit large here, use 1.1x spacing plz
02:30:762 - I highly suggest use soft hitsound here, or the spinner end is too loud imo, doesn't fit the song well
[Roxas' Advanced]
00:07:058 (5,6) - I highly suggest change them into 2 1/2 sliders, or the pattern is kinda hard to read/play as a Normal diff. do something like what you did at 00:12:032 (5,6) - please
00:21:980 (5) - it can change into 2 1/2 sliders, will fit the song better imo. or keep this but move 00:22:602 (1) - this circle a bit far, use 1.0x spacing would be nice
01:03:327 (4,5) - could you please avoid of using anti-jump here? this is hard to read and doesn't fit the song here imo
01:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard to play for this diff imo, too many circles together is really hard to play, hope you can change some of them into sliders
01:28:431 (1,2) - short sliders start at heavy beat(white beat line) will be much better to read and play, what you did at 01:22:369 (2) - is much better imo. anyway there's lots of same patterns after this, if you want to fix this I tihnk you need to remap this part
01:48:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this partten is really too hard to play, make then into sliders please. if you want to keep this then the diff is not a usual Normal diff now, the mapset's diff spread will be broken. also you need to remap all same patterns in this part
02:07:135 - I'm opposed to use 1.25x speed here in a Normal diff, this is too hard to play imo
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - the anti-jumps are really too hard to read for newbies, use normal spacing plz
02:21:436 (5,6,1) - ^
this diff is nearly a Hard diff imo(especially the end), it broke the mapset's diff spread cuz the Standard diff is really an easy one
[Pie's Hyper]
00:10:167 (1,2) - this 2 sliders can blanket each other better imo
01:11:099 (4) - ctrl+g is better imo, the anti-jump between 01:10:167 (3,4) - doesn't fit the song well
01:34:027 - add a note here will fit the song better imo
02:09:001 (4) - the rhyme here is 1/3 not 1/4, must fix this wrong snap. and there's some same rhyme after this, also should be fixed
it's nearly an Insane diff imo
[Another]
00:50:892 (7) - I suggest remove some whistle on this sldier, sound kinda odd and doesn't fit the song imo (00:49:649 (4) - this one fit the song much better than it)
01:30:451 (3) - this slider is really hard to read where it start imo, change a direction, or change the combo color to make its color is different from 01:29:830 (1) - please
02:13:664 (6,1,2) - the rhyme is really odd to me, it should be 3/4 sldier+3/4 sldier+1/2 slider imo, to make the sldier start at heavy beat is better
02:30:762 - same as Standard here
[Heaven]
00:07:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest stack all the circles on slider end, or this pattern is kinda confusing to read
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sound be 1/3 beats
00:53:923 (2) - unsnapped slider end
00:54:079 (3) - ^
01:14:830 - need to add finish here, also it's better to volume up a bit here, it's not too quiet imo
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - also 1/3 beats here
02:09:001 (1,2,3) - ^, and please fix same patterns after this one
02:30:762 - same as Standard
[inaba's Taiko Oni]
00:39:142 (3) - unsnapped circle
00:49:091 (2) - ^
the map still need much more works now imo, the quality still has a huge room to be improved
anyway, good luck
