rrtyui wrote:

Not very fond of the rhythm...

PandaRoflmao wrote:

Hi, here's my mod

Standard
02:16:679 you shouldn't put hidden sliders on easy/normal diffs I think it's accettable, if anoher modder points this out I'll fix

Riki
02:26:627 to 02:27:559 you should also make it more dynamic the end it's kinda boring

Another
02:26:627 the same that the riki diff I love those staks :C

rrtyui wrote:

plz "BOF2011" "THE BMS OF FIGHTERS 2011 - Intersection of conflict -" "Black Funeral Group" add tag

http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... 2&event=74

• 00:07:267 (3) - CTRL-G didn't work out perfectly here, adjust it so it has the exact same path as 1 (CTRL-H, then align the points so it is exactly the same path, then CTRL-H back)
  00:15:660 (2) - I'd place this on 58|207 to have more of an oval flow between 1-2-3
  00:18:458 (3) - the bow in-before the red tick is a bit clunchy, better use 2 sliderpoints (these could be placed at 379|190 and 381|235)
  00:19:702 (1) - you could make this curve more interesting if you place the sliderpoints (2nd + end) at 258|194 and 172|209 (also, why is the spacing here 1.2x all of a sudden?
  00:20:945 (3) - similar, 2nd sliderpoint to 260|66 will do
  00:38:044 (2) - feels better at 79|161 to me, as it continues 1's directional flow
  00:40:842 (2) - similar to previous examples the curve could be better; for this, place 2nd sliderpoint at 438|182 and end at 359|187
  00:41:774 (3) - putting this to 283|187 will continue 2's bow and give a better transition
  00:43:329 (2) - similar to the first thing mentioned, CTRL-G didn't work out as expected, mirror and align manually
  00:48:303 (3) - the blanket in the ending bow could be better, putting the first sliderpoint after the red one on 136|169 and the following on 183|198 will do
  00:53:277 (2) - i'd prefer if you used a new slidershape here that goes around 1, example below
  
  
  note that this is a quick example

  
  
  01:14:417 (3) - why is this 1.0x spacing while others are 1.1x?
  01:14:417 (3,5) - both of these could blanket 4 better
  01:24:443 (4) - not exactly symmetric
  01:25:686 (1) - that blanket around 2 could be better
  01:26:930 (1) - feels better if this spinner ends 1/2 later
  01:29:417 (1) - I suggest deleting the 2nd last sliderpoint and dragging the one after the red one to 169|79 as that will make the slider look smoother and more bowy
  01:34:391 (1) - 2nd last sliderpoint to 151|88 will make it feel more smooth and balanced
  01:39:365 (1) - add finish on start
  01:40:608 (2) - I don't know why this is spaced 1.5x; would suggest putting it to 185|216
  01:41:852 (1) - please just do a curve here, the red point and white point-combo appears to be kinda unnecessary and weird to me
  01:46:826 (1) - about this, I suggest adding a sliderpoint in-before the red one, at 78|237 and also moving the first after the red one to 135|271 - that will create more smooth bowy movement, image below (also, you might delete the new combo?)
  
  
  here

  
  
  01:50:557 (2) - to me, the red point kind of messes this slider's flow up, try to use 3 white ones instead (my try below)
  
  
  quick example goes here

  
  
  01:53:044 (1) - as I do not like straight lines of objects, I suggest putting this to 152|355, also follows the curve of 1-2 better
  01:59:261 (1) - this curve is a bit meeh, not sure how to explain, it looks bad; put the second sliderpoint to 412|181, that'll do
  02:00:194 (2) - similar, put second sliderpoint to 352|118
  02:01:437 (2) - I'd like to see this one at 245|108 as that leads better into 3's curve and generates more of a flow
  02:01:748 (3,4) - same as for previous combo's 1,2 - reuse the fixed versions here
  02:04:235 (2,3) - both of these bows could be more balanced out, just put the sliderpoints more in the middle (as of heigth)
  02:14:184 (1,1) - you had 1.1x spacing in-between the sliders before, why are these stacked now?
  02:19:624 (2) - this curve feels a bit dull, move the 2nd point to 132|297 and the end to 72|281 for a better one
  02:22:111 (1) - similar, I don't like these kind of curves

• 00:12:249 (1) - I don't like how this overlaps with previous 4
  00:14:736 (1) - not exactly symmetric; adjust the point that is on the X-axis and put it onto 75|192
  00:32:611 (4) - not symmetric again, please work out
  00:35:098 (5) - ^
  00:37:119 (1) - not sure how much this shape fits the sound you are following
  00:40:072 (2) - this'll look better at 49|171
  00:41:782 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this part is VERY hard for a normal/normal+ diff, I suggest you take a look at what you could make easier here; for example, the stacks are somewhat "breaking" the flow which will confuse newer players
  01:09:451 (1) - that cluster of red sliderpoints is not so pretty, why not just use one? it'd feel better
  01:11:938 (1,2) - not symmetric as they should be
  01:14:425 (1,3) - why do you use red points here, white ones will do
  01:23:673 (3) - that curve feels unbalanced and a bit ugly, place 2nd sliderpoint at 146|120 and end at 96|162 for a better one
  01:43:569 (3) - ^ just mirror that one and use it here again
  01:48:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is another very hard pattern for a normal-ish diff
  01:53:363 (4) - this should be at 335|52, leads better into 5 and has a smoother angle

• 00:08:674 (6,7,8) - these sliders should start 1/2 earlier, right now they are awkward to click and hold because they start on red ticks
  00:14:736 (1) - that could blanket 2 better
  00:16:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this pattern is very fast and somewhat confusing on AR7, also, very mean for a hard diff
  00:28:725 (1) - this could blanket 2's end better
  00:38:363 (1) - I'd welcome if this would blanket previous 1
  00:41:782 (1) - the finish hitsound at the end and the strong beat in the music make the player want to hit something there, so shorten by one tick and place a circle there?
  00:42:249 (2,3,4,5) - these are awkward to play as they start on red ticks, start 1/2 later and add a circle on 00:42:249, that'll be better
  00:43:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - these are very mean
  00:46:446 (3,4) - that jump is kinda unexpected, suggesting to put 4 in-between 3 and 1 instead of stacking it
  00:51:109 (6) - that should be 1/8 as previous ones at similar spots in the song, shouldn't it?
  00:52:041 (5,1) - the slider should start at where 5 is as there is a new soundpattern starting off
  00:52:508 - there should be a circle here
  00:53:207 - add circle because of piano
  00:54:218 (1,2) - swap NC
  01:03:233 (1) - not symmetric
  01:04:477 (2) - ^
  01:05:409 (3) - ^
  01:19:787 (1,2,3,4) - I find this pattern too wide for a hard/hyper diff, also, there should be a new combo starting at 4
  01:21:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is very fast and hard to play; too hard for a hard diff to me
  01:21:964 (1) - could blanket 2 better
  01:45:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is VERY mean because of the 90° angles here, I suggest using something more fluent as I myself hate to play such kind of object arrangements
  01:57:093 (1) - feels better if you start this 1/1 earlier
  02:00:513 (4) - this will be likely misshit as a 1/2 since 2 was spaced in a similar way and was a 1/2

• 00:19:399 (2) - this one's a bit close to 1
  00:30:124 (3) - I don't like this slidershape as it is somewhat... meeh
  
  
  this feels a bit better to me

  
  
  00:35:565 (6) - I'd CTRL-G this for a move oval flow within 5,6
  00:37:119 - the following part is hardly audible, please do something about this
  00:39:917 (1,2) - swap NC
  00:40:539 (1) - remove NC
  00:41:782 (1) - remove NC
  00:43:026 (7) - the whistles here do not fit imo
  00:45:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same in this pattern, do something about the whistles as in, arrange them in another way
  00:47:067 (1) - that should be stacked on previous 1's point
  00:47:067 - again hardly audible, please change this
  00:51:109 (2) - I miss the 1/8 sliders as in Hyper here, please use them
  00:52:974 (7) - too much whistle in one slider
  00:55:461 (1,2,3) - too much whistles
  00:55:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part should be 1/3, I suggest using only circles here (!)
  00:56:705 (1) - remove NC
  01:01:368 (1) - remove NC
  01:06:342 (1) - remove NC
  01:16:290 (1) - remove NC
  01:31:912 (1) - this could blanket 2 better, please do that
  01:33:777 (3) - this sliderbow is a bit meeh, place the 2nd sliderpoint at 221|157
  01:34:088 (4) - similar, mirror the fixed version of 3 here
  01:42:249 - add circle and connect stream and tripplet
  01:44:891 - same, there is a piano sound here
  01:44:969 (4,5,6) - reshape these a bit so they lead into 7 from the left
  01:45:901 (2) - CTRL-G
  01:46:523 (4) - ^
  01:51:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this bow is a bit ugly, redesign it please (without gridsnap on)
  01:53:363 (2) - should be 1/8 here
  01:54:684 (2,3,4) - nononononono, do not do this; shorten 1 by 1/4, then put 2 on the white tick, let it have 4 reverse arrows and so on but NEVER let a kickslider end on a white tick because the following one will have to be hit on a blue one which feels horribly off and unnatural (Himiko reference...)
  01:55:539 (1,2,3,4) - you could arrange these so they lead into each other; currently they feel a bit point-to-point-ish which is not too great of a flow
  01:59:425 (2,3,4,5) - not good, the sliders start on red ticks and thus feel bad to play
  02:00:824 (2,3) - remove these and add 1/3 circles from where 2 starts to where 4 is
  02:01:912 (1,2,3,4) - redtick sliders again, do not do this; better put a circle on the red one and then use 3 sliders - suggestion below
  
  
  here is the so called "below"

  
  
  02:04:399 (1,2,3,4) - redtick sliders are bad again; the first slider should start on where 13 is (which should be next 1 then, so NC there because of big white tick)
  02:05:798 (1,2) - similar as with an example before, replace these with breakless 1/3 circles
  02:06:886 (1,2) - redtick sliders are bad :<
  02:15:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should be 1/3s here again

• 00:15:047 (4,5) - I don't understand the redpoint-bow combo in these, is there a point for them?
  00:27:637 (3) - the last red point in this makes the slider look ugly; do something like a bow there instead
  00:41:161 (2) - why is there no 1/8 kickslider here? :<
  00:45:824 (5) - that should be 1/4 because of the piano
  00:46:135 - add circle
  00:46:212 - ^
  00:49:554 (7,1) - swap NC (also, 7's bow is clunchy and ugly, fix by setting 2nd sliderpoint to 244|52 and end to 143|109)
  00:51:731 (1) - remove NC?
  00:52:974 (1) - remove NC.
  00:53:751 (4) - I am sure this is at least partly overlapped by previous 3's hitburst and thus unrankable
  00:53:907 (1) - hard to see because of 2,3's hitbursts, thus probably unrankable aswell
  00:54:528 (1) - same
  00:56:005 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part should be 1/3
  00:56:705 (11) - new combo here since that is where the real 1/4s start
  01:00:435 (3) - I don't like this clunchy bow at the end, so move 2nd sliderpoint to 197|311
  01:23:207 (1,3) - not sure about these self-overlaps, you could do better on them tho
  01:40:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this shape is kind of uneven; have more steady angles between the single objects; turn gridsnap off - showing some solution below
  
  
  this took me 7 seconds

  
  
  01:42:482 (9,10,11) - the slider should start at 9
  01:42:948 (12) - move 1/2 earlier in time as with change above
  01:43:725 (5) - this is where a sped up 1/2 slider should start (1.33x multiplier or smth)
  01:44:736 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - similar as with 01:40:616, you should make this move smooth and even the angles more out
  01:48:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - all of this should be 1/3
  01:49:010 (13) - New Combo as this is where the 1/4s start
  01:49:710 (2) - I am sure this is overlapped by previous stream's hitbursts and thus unrankable
  01:49:787 (3) - put this to 329|161; netpicky but it continues 1's flow better
  01:51:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - again, smooth this stream out
  01:54:684 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
  01:59:425 (2,3,4,5) - I like how these sound, however, I am unsure whether they really play good as they start on red ticks
  02:00:824 - 02:01:368 - there should be 1/3s here
  02:01:912 (2,3,4,5) - similar as with 01:59:425
  02:03:622 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - smooth stream out
  02:04:399 (2,3,4,5) - again the sliderthing with the redticks
  02:05:798 - 02:06:031 - there should be 1/3 here
  02:06:886 (2,3,4,5) - sliders, red ticks, unsure, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
  02:08:285 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this should be 1/3s
  02:11:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ + smooth out
  02:13:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  02:15:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Jenny wrote:

Advanced:

• 00:12:249 (1) - I don't like how this overlaps with previous 4 Fixed
  00:14:736 (1) - not exactly symmetric; adjust the point that is on the X-axis and put it onto 75|192 Fixed
  00:32:611 (4) - not symmetric again, please work out Fixed
  00:35:098 (5) - ^ Fixed
  00:37:119 (1) - not sure how much this shape fits the sound you are following I think it's ok
  00:40:072 (2) - this'll look better at 49|171 Fixed
  00:41:782 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this part is VERY hard for a normal/normal+ diff, I suggest you take a look at what you could make easier here; for example, the stacks are somewhat "breaking" the flow which will confuse newer players Fixed
  01:09:451 (1) - that cluster of red sliderpoints is not so pretty, why not just use one? it'd feel better Fixed
  01:11:938 (1,2) - not symmetric as they should be Fixed
  01:14:425 (1,3) - why do you use red points here, white ones will do Not fixed
  01:23:673 (3) - that curve feels unbalanced and a bit ugly, place 2nd sliderpoint at 146|120 and end at 96|162 for a better one Fixed
  01:43:569 (3) - ^ just mirror that one and use it here again Fixed
  01:48:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is another very hard pattern for a normal-ish diff Fixed
  01:53:363 (4) - this should be at 335|52, leads better into 5 and has a smoother angle Fixed

Judgement: This diff is pretty nice though I think it is a tad too hard for a normal-ish diff, though I'd like to see this ranked. It's not a "Normal" but a "Advanced", so a Normal/Hard, so I mapped like a Normal+ Anyway thanks for mpd :3

cirno- wrote:

General
Roxas' Advanced
After playing this, I think Standard is inbetween a normal and easy diff, and advanced is inbetween normal and hard. Not exactly sure if that's what you want, but that's how it felt to me.
It's hard to mod for that reason. There are streams and jumps that are usually never in normal diffs, but it's fine in hard. But the diff settings are like the average normal diff. Advanced IS a diff between normal and hard lolol

01:54:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't look as nice as the others Fixed
00:54:933 through 01:14:830 - Add soft hitsounds during this time? No

-[NYAN]- wrote:

[Roxas' Advanced]

00:07:524 (6) - remove it
00:39:234 (2) - move to 00:39:389 (2) -
01:22:058 - Add a note and add clap
01:32:006 (4) - ^ ,if you do it ,add clap in 01:32:161 -
01:41:954 (4,1) - clap
01:51:902 - same as 01:22:058

Didn't fix nothing LOL anyway I think you modded the map with old mp3 lel

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
I don't know how you add the kiai time, seems the kiai part is not the upsurge

[Standard]
00:31:307 (3,1) - the slider can blanket the circle much better
01:09:856 (1,2) - hope you can try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen
01:24:856 (1,1) - the slider is too far from the spinner, this is really too hard to play as an Easy diff now, need to fix this
02:16:462 (2,3,1) - the spacing is a bit large here, use 1.1x spacing plz
02:30:762 - I highly suggest use soft hitsound here, or the spinner end is too loud imo, doesn't fit the song well

[Roxas' Advanced]
00:07:058 (5,6) - I highly suggest change them into 2 1/2 sliders, or the pattern is kinda hard to read/play as a Normal diff. do something like what you did at 00:12:032 (5,6) - please
00:21:980 (5) - it can change into 2 1/2 sliders, will fit the song better imo. or keep this but move 00:22:602 (1) - this circle a bit far, use 1.0x spacing would be nice
01:03:327 (4,5) - could you please avoid of using anti-jump here? this is hard to read and doesn't fit the song here imo
01:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard to play for this diff imo, too many circles together is really hard to play, hope you can change some of them into sliders
01:28:431 (1,2) - short sliders start at heavy beat(white beat line) will be much better to read and play, what you did at 01:22:369 (2) - is much better imo. anyway there's lots of same patterns after this, if you want to fix this I tihnk you need to remap this part
01:48:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this partten is really too hard to play, make then into sliders please. if you want to keep this then the diff is not a usual Normal diff now, the mapset's diff spread will be broken. also you need to remap all same patterns in this part
02:07:135 - I'm opposed to use 1.25x speed here in a Normal diff, this is too hard to play imo
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - the anti-jumps are really too hard to read for newbies, use normal spacing plz
02:21:436 (5,6,1) - ^
this diff is nearly a Hard diff imo(especially the end), it broke the mapset's diff spread cuz the Standard diff is really an easy one

[Pie's Hyper]
00:10:167 (1,2) - this 2 sliders can blanket each other better imo
01:11:099 (4) - ctrl+g is better imo, the anti-jump between 01:10:167 (3,4) - doesn't fit the song well
01:34:027 - add a note here will fit the song better imo
02:09:001 (4) - the rhyme here is 1/3 not 1/4, must fix this wrong snap. and there's some same rhyme after this, also should be fixed
it's nearly an Insane diff imo

[Another]
00:50:892 (7) - I suggest remove some whistle on this sldier, sound kinda odd and doesn't fit the song imo (00:49:649 (4) - this one fit the song much better than it)
01:30:451 (3) - this slider is really hard to read where it start imo, change a direction, or change the combo color to make its color is different from 01:29:830 (1) - please
02:13:664 (6,1,2) - the rhyme is really odd to me, it should be 3/4 sldier+3/4 sldier+1/2 slider imo, to make the sldier start at heavy beat is better
02:30:762 - same as Standard here

[Heaven]
00:07:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest stack all the circles on slider end, or this pattern is kinda confusing to read
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sound be 1/3 beats
00:53:923 (2) - unsnapped slider end
00:54:079 (3) - ^
01:14:830 - need to add finish here, also it's better to volume up a bit here, it's not too quiet imo
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - also 1/3 beats here
02:09:001 (1,2,3) - ^, and please fix same patterns after this one
02:30:762 - same as Standard

[inaba's Taiko Oni]
00:39:142 (3) - unsnapped circle
00:49:091 (2) - ^

the map still need much more works now imo, the quality still has a huge room to be improved
anyway, good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Roxas' Advanced]
00:07:058 (5,6) - I highly suggest change them into 2 1/2 sliders, or the pattern is kinda hard to read/play as a Normal diff. do something like what you did at 00:12:032 (5,6) - please They're already 2 1/2 sliders what the hell... o.0
00:21:980 (5) - it can change into 2 1/2 sliders, will fit the song better imo. or keep this but move 00:22:602 (1) - this circle a bit far, use 1.0x spacing would be nice Not fixed, I like the reverse there
01:03:327 (4,5) - could you please avoid of using anti-jump here? this is hard to read and doesn't fit the song here imo There aren't antijump
01:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard to play for this diff imo, too many circles together is really hard to play, hope you can change some of them into sliders Done
01:28:431 (1,2) - short sliders start at heavy beat(white beat line) will be much better to read and play, what you did at 01:22:369 (2) - is much better imo. anyway there's lots of same patterns after this, if you want to fix this I tihnk you need to remap this part I don't want to make all same patterns
01:48:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this partten is really too hard to play, make then into sliders please. if you want to keep this then the diff is not a usual Normal diff now, the mapset's diff spread will be broken. also you need to remap all same patterns in this part Done
02:07:135 - I'm opposed to use 1.25x speed here in a Normal diff, this is too hard to play imo Lol no I've seen normal with some antijumps and some sv changing and this is perfectly readable
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - the anti-jumps are really too hard to read for newbies, use normal spacing plz I don't agree... But done
02:21:436 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
this diff is nearly a Hard diff imo(especially the end), it broke the mapset's diff spread cuz the Standard diff is really an easy one It's a diff between normal and hard. It's an Advanced.

1. I think you should mark the difficulty spread in your creator's word since it's not displayed in diff name, as you see, [Heaven] suppose to be the hardest diff but star system doesn't seem say that

1. 02:12:110 (1) - This slider looked a bit strange, I mean the head of tail part, that tiny curve played weird

1. 00:53:923 (2,3) - Those two slider must be snap wrong, they should be 1/3 snapped
2. 01:02:084 (6) - (nazi)It's not totally stack under the end point of 01:01:151 (4)
3. 01:20:814 (5) - I think this slider may confuse player, it's hidden by previous 01:19:882 (1), it would read as only one slider from 01:20:503 (4) to here, so maybe move this slider downward make its end not stack under the end of 01:20:503 (4) would be better?

1. 00:25:555 (3) - you wrong to put clap on the end of this slider? I think it should be a whistle
2. 00:56:177 (2) - This finish seems no need
3. 02:13:897 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
4. 02:14:208 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Breeze wrote:

It means I didn't see anything wrong in those diffs

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Normal]
* AR +1 or +2? AR +1


[Roxas' Advanced]
01:43:975 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen Fixed


[Heaven]
01:21:125 (1) - Add clap at head slider
01:21:747 (3) - ^ Ops, I forgot them, fixed both


[Pie's Hyper]
* AR +2. Your current AR is slow Fixed


Sorry, you need more than 10 or 15 stars in order to bubble this map NVM, i'm bit blind. Call me when you done

Leorda wrote:

Well, before bubble....

[Standard]
02:07:135 (1) - Not extend to 02:09:312? Like the next slider?
02:14:597 (1) - Extend to 02:16:151?


[Roxas' Advanced]
00:44:364 (1) - Why new combo?


[Heaven]
00:20:426 (2) - Why not stack with tail slider? Like 00:20:581 (3,4)?


[Pie's Hyper]
00:12:654 - Why this part is suddenly turn into normal samplesoft?
01:23:612 (1) - Why spinner? Shouldn't you replace this with another pattern?


[Another]
00:35:970 (1) - Why new combo?
00:53:379 (1) - ^


That's all

Leorda wrote:

Looks good to me

Bubbled

1. 00:19:959 (7) - I was thought you misput whistle on this note, it should be on 00:19:493 (5) slider head right?

Breeze wrote:

[Another]

1. 00:19:959 (7) - I was thought you misput whistle on this note, it should be on 00:19:493 (5) slider head right?

And maybe you can write "Heaven is the most hard diff in this map", since it shows another is the last diff in song select screen

Love wrote:

just why ;w;

MMzz wrote:

The 2nd timing point is way off. Change it to 77416. (That's 21ms off)

MasterLetsPlay wrote:

great map! but not ranked

RikiH_ wrote:

Seriously, people, what is your problem?

Roxas wrote:

RikiH_ wrote:

Seriously, people, what is your problem?

kanpakyin wrote:

Boom!

Reranked.