Good map! The only one thing is: Kiai Time is a little bit often in the Map.
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Awesome, so what about giving me a bubble? ;_;
Edit: Ignore this ^
just why ;w;
Because Star Rating is the biggest troll ever \:D/
Dance girl: Thank you a lot!
Waiting for re-rank D:
Also, thank you LKs for the rebubble
Riki: http://puu.sh/1G8N3wcx19911123 wrote:
[Roxas' Advanced]
00:07:058 (5,6) - I highly suggest change them into 2 1/2 sliders, or the pattern is kinda hard to read/play as a Normal diff. do something like what you did at 00:12:032 (5,6) - please They're already 2 1/2 sliders what the hell... o.0
00:21:980 (5) - it can change into 2 1/2 sliders, will fit the song better imo. or keep this but move 00:22:602 (1) - this circle a bit far, use 1.0x spacing would be nice Not fixed, I like the reverse there
01:03:327 (4,5) - could you please avoid of using anti-jump here? this is hard to read and doesn't fit the song here imo There aren't antijump
01:27:343 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard to play for this diff imo, too many circles together is really hard to play, hope you can change some of them into sliders Done
01:28:431 (1,2) - short sliders start at heavy beat(white beat line) will be much better to read and play, what you did at 01:22:369 (2) - is much better imo. anyway there's lots of same patterns after this, if you want to fix this I tihnk you need to remap this part I don't want to make all same patterns
01:48:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - this partten is really too hard to play, make then into sliders please. if you want to keep this then the diff is not a usual Normal diff now, the mapset's diff spread will be broken. also you need to remap all same patterns in this part Done
02:07:135 - I'm opposed to use 1.25x speed here in a Normal diff, this is too hard to play imo Lol no I've seen normal with some antijumps and some sv changing and this is perfectly readable
02:18:949 (5,6,1) - the anti-jumps are really too hard to read for newbies, use normal spacing plz I don't agree... But done
02:21:436 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
this diff is nearly a Hard diff imo(especially the end), it broke the mapset's diff spread cuz the Standard diff is really an easy one It's a diff between normal and hard. It's an Advanced.
Okay, let's do this.
Request taken from Loctav's and p3n's modding queue!
Inconsistency in Kiaitimes, go over that.
Unsnapped stuff:
Another:
02:13:897 (1) - Unsnapped sliderend.
02:14:208 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
Heaven:
00:53:923 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
00:54:079 (3) - Unsnapped sliderend.
I found 煉獄 being used in the title of the song often, so I translated it and found that the meaning of it is purgatory. I'm pretty sure that this is the original title, so please use it as the title and add purgatorium as the romanised version.
IMO, 45% vol. throughout the song fit better than switching between 45% and 30%.
Gridsnap made some weird-looking spacings, I'd like you to turn it off and keep the spacing consistent this way.
00:12:654 - from here, you use whistles on every 8th white line (00:14:830 (4) for example), and that doesn't fit at all. The claps are fine, but please remove the whistles.
00:20:115 (1,3) - why do you suddently break the mirrorpatterns? I would stick to it, so use the shape of (3) for (1) and flip it.
01:22:369 (4) - add clap on sliderend.
01:24:545 (2) - remove whistle.
01:24:856 (1,1) - IMO the gap between them is a bit huge for the easiest map, maybe reduce spinnerlength by 1/2?
01:43:508 (2) - to keep the hitsounding consistent, add whistles on start and end of the slider. You could also remove the clap from sliderend.
01:44:441 (3) - if you did the prev. thing, remove whistle here.
00:12:654 (1) - replace clap on sliderend with whistle.
01:04:571 (5,1) - I would prefer (5) in the next combo, so add NC on (5) and remove it from (1)?
01:37:291 - the hitsounding was much better with claps, maybe change it?
02:18:949 (5,6) - they should stand on their own, so NC on (5). This also makes the rhythm easier to read.
02:21:436 (5,6) - ^
02:23:923 (5,6) - ^
00:02:706 - you use a stable 2/4 clap pattern here, which usually is fine, but since the music goes in 3-note patterns, you should adapt the hitsoundpattern correspondingly, meaning you should use a clap every 3rd 1/2 note.
00:07:058 (7,8) - where are the whistles?
00:41:566 (1,2) - the spacing is weird for me, I would prefer either consistent spacing or a jump here (ctrl+g on (2)).
00:42:809 (1,2) - remove claps.
01:13:275 (3) - NC
01:23:301 (4,5) - I prefer them not hidden under the Hitburst of (2).
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:08:146 (2,4) - they should be curved in the other direction.
01:59:286 (5) - move to 01:58:845 and adjust spacing (it should still be snapped on 1/3 here)
02:03:949 (2,4) - ^
02:18:949 (1,2) - no. You can't just stack notes in the most thrilling part of the song. Use jumps instead.
02:21:436 (1,2,1) - ^
02:23:923 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:25:555 (3) - remove clap from sliderend.
00:48:716 (1,2,3) - Please use a pattern where the sliders are more visible.
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - snap all on 1/3.
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:09:001 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:19:260 (5,1) - again, don't use stacks here. Screenjumps fit much better.
02:21:747 (6,1) - ^
02:24:545 (1,2,3) - ^
02:17:084 - kiaiflashes are not allowed in Taiko
OD +1
00:39:156 (3,4,1) - no 1/8.
00:43:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - use a 1/3 pattern instead.
00:47:472 (1) - don
00:49:104 (2,3,4) - no 1/8.
00:54:001 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - this part is 1/3 again. delete one don and use kddkdd on 1/3. The last three kats are on 1/4 again.
00:54:933 - this kiai is just bad. It looks like you didn't want to map that part for whatever reason. You can use some nice 1/4 streams here, following the drum-like sound in the background. It would be such a waste for this awesome part of the song.
01:15:762 - 01:17:161 - add a spinner.
01:26:099 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,1) - here it's 1/3 again. Use kddkddkddk.
01:36:047 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - 1/3 again.
01:45:996 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
01:58:742 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
02:01:229 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:03:716 (2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:06:203 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:17:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - they all should be big.
To be honest, you gave away a lot of potential of that taiko.
Good luck.~
Request taken from Loctav's and p3n's modding queue!
General
Inconsistency in Kiaitimes, go over that.
Unsnapped stuff:
Another:
02:13:897 (1) - Unsnapped sliderend.
02:14:208 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
Heaven:
00:53:923 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
00:54:079 (3) - Unsnapped sliderend.
I found 煉獄 being used in the title of the song often, so I translated it and found that the meaning of it is purgatory. I'm pretty sure that this is the original title, so please use it as the title and add purgatorium as the romanised version.
IMO, 45% vol. throughout the song fit better than switching between 45% and 30%.
Gridsnap made some weird-looking spacings, I'd like you to turn it off and keep the spacing consistent this way.
Standard
00:12:654 - from here, you use whistles on every 8th white line (00:14:830 (4) for example), and that doesn't fit at all. The claps are fine, but please remove the whistles.
00:20:115 (1,3) - why do you suddently break the mirrorpatterns? I would stick to it, so use the shape of (3) for (1) and flip it.
01:22:369 (4) - add clap on sliderend.
01:24:545 (2) - remove whistle.
01:24:856 (1,1) - IMO the gap between them is a bit huge for the easiest map, maybe reduce spinnerlength by 1/2?
01:43:508 (2) - to keep the hitsounding consistent, add whistles on start and end of the slider. You could also remove the clap from sliderend.
01:44:441 (3) - if you did the prev. thing, remove whistle here.
Advanced
00:12:654 (1) - replace clap on sliderend with whistle.
01:04:571 (5,1) - I would prefer (5) in the next combo, so add NC on (5) and remove it from (1)?
01:37:291 - the hitsounding was much better with claps, maybe change it?
02:18:949 (5,6) - they should stand on their own, so NC on (5). This also makes the rhythm easier to read.
02:21:436 (5,6) - ^
02:23:923 (5,6) - ^
Hyper
00:02:706 - you use a stable 2/4 clap pattern here, which usually is fine, but since the music goes in 3-note patterns, you should adapt the hitsoundpattern correspondingly, meaning you should use a clap every 3rd 1/2 note.
00:07:058 (7,8) - where are the whistles?
00:41:566 (1,2) - the spacing is weird for me, I would prefer either consistent spacing or a jump here (ctrl+g on (2)).
00:42:809 (1,2) - remove claps.
01:13:275 (3) - NC
01:23:301 (4,5) - I prefer them not hidden under the Hitburst of (2).
Another
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:08:146 (2,4) - they should be curved in the other direction.
01:59:286 (5) - move to 01:58:845 and adjust spacing (it should still be snapped on 1/3 here)
02:03:949 (2,4) - ^
02:18:949 (1,2) - no. You can't just stack notes in the most thrilling part of the song. Use jumps instead.
02:21:436 (1,2,1) - ^
02:23:923 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^
Heaven
00:02:706 - Same as in Hyper.
00:25:555 (3) - remove clap from sliderend.
00:48:716 (1,2,3) - Please use a pattern where the sliders are more visible.
00:53:690 (1,2,3,4,5) - snap all on 1/3.
02:06:203 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:09:001 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:19:260 (5,1) - again, don't use stacks here. Screenjumps fit much better.
02:21:747 (6,1) - ^
02:24:545 (1,2,3) - ^
Taiko Oni
02:17:084 - kiaiflashes are not allowed in Taiko
OD +1
00:39:156 (3,4,1) - no 1/8.
00:43:742 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - use a 1/3 pattern instead.
00:47:472 (1) - don
00:49:104 (2,3,4) - no 1/8.
00:54:001 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - this part is 1/3 again. delete one don and use kddkdd on 1/3. The last three kats are on 1/4 again.
00:54:933 - this kiai is just bad. It looks like you didn't want to map that part for whatever reason. You can use some nice 1/4 streams here, following the drum-like sound in the background. It would be such a waste for this awesome part of the song.
01:15:762 - 01:17:161 - add a spinner.
01:26:099 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,1) - here it's 1/3 again. Use kddkddkddk.
01:36:047 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - 1/3 again.
01:45:996 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
01:58:742 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - ^
02:01:229 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:03:716 (2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:06:203 (3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - ^
02:17:084 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - they all should be big.
To be honest, you gave away a lot of potential of that taiko.
Good luck.~
[General]
- I think you should mark the difficulty spread in your creator's word since it's not displayed in diff name, as you see, [Heaven] suppose to be the hardest diff but star system doesn't seem say that
- 02:12:110 (1) - This slider looked a bit strange, I mean the head of tail part, that tiny curve played weird
- 00:53:923 (2,3) - Those two slider must be snap wrong, they should be 1/3 snapped
- 01:02:084 (6) - (nazi)It's not totally stack under the end point of 01:01:151 (4)
- 01:20:814 (5) - I think this slider may confuse player, it's hidden by previous 01:19:882 (1), it would read as only one slider from 01:20:503 (4) to here, so maybe move this slider downward make its end not stack under the end of 01:20:503 (4) would be better?
- 00:25:555 (3) - you wrong to put clap on the end of this slider? I think it should be a whistle
- 00:56:177 (2) - This finish seems no need
- 02:13:897 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
- 02:14:208 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Topic Starter
Fixed.
Breeze: Why you didn't mod all diffs? D:
Breeze: Why you didn't mod all diffs? D:
It means I didn't see anything wrong in those diffs
Topic Starter
Breeze wrote:
It means I didn't see anything wrong in those diffs
Edit: Ignore this ^
Topic Starter
Updated, thank you inaba :3
M4M!
Standard
It is good
01:17:395 / Change volume to 70%
Advanced
No further modding needed IMO.
(Sorry, I cannot mod hard-insanes like this.)
Good Luck!
Standard
It is good
01:17:395 / Change volume to 70%
Advanced
No further modding needed IMO.
(Sorry, I cannot mod hard-insanes like this.)
Good Luck!
Hi there
[Normal]
* AR +1 or +2?
[Roxas' Advanced]
01:43:975 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
[Heaven]
01:21:125 (1) - Add clap at head slider
01:21:747 (3) - ^
[Pie's Hyper]
* AR +2. Your current AR is slow
Sorry, you need more than 10 or 15 stars in order to bubble this map NVM, i'm bit blind. Call me when you done
[Normal]
* AR +1 or +2?
[Roxas' Advanced]
01:43:975 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen
[Heaven]
01:21:125 (1) - Add clap at head slider
01:21:747 (3) - ^
[Pie's Hyper]
* AR +2. Your current AR is slow
Topic Starter
Oh, thank you a lotLeorda wrote:
Hi there
[Normal]
* AR +1 or +2? AR +1
[Roxas' Advanced]
01:43:975 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen Fixed
[Heaven]
01:21:125 (1) - Add clap at head slider
01:21:747 (3) - ^ Ops, I forgot them, fixed both
[Pie's Hyper]
* AR +2. Your current AR is slow FixedSorry, you need more than 10 or 15 stars in order to bubble this mapNVM, i'm bit blind. Call me when you done
Well, before bubble....
[Standard]
02:07:135 (1) - Not extend to 02:09:312? Like the next slider?
02:14:597 (1) - Extend to 02:16:151?
[Roxas' Advanced]
00:44:364 (1) - Why new combo?
[Heaven]
00:20:426 (2) - Why not stack with tail slider? Like 00:20:581 (3,4)?
[Pie's Hyper]
00:12:654 - Why this part is suddenly turn into normal samplesoft?
01:23:612 (1) - Why spinner? Shouldn't you replace this with another pattern?
[Another]
00:35:970 (1) - Why new combo?
00:53:379 (1) - ^
That's all
[Standard]
02:07:135 (1) - Not extend to 02:09:312? Like the next slider?
02:14:597 (1) - Extend to 02:16:151?
[Roxas' Advanced]
00:44:364 (1) - Why new combo?
[Heaven]
00:20:426 (2) - Why not stack with tail slider? Like 00:20:581 (3,4)?
[Pie's Hyper]
00:12:654 - Why this part is suddenly turn into normal samplesoft?
01:23:612 (1) - Why spinner? Shouldn't you replace this with another pattern?
[Another]
00:35:970 (1) - Why new combo?
00:53:379 (1) - ^
That's all
Topic Starter
Fixed all, now waiting for the bubble lolLeorda wrote:
Well, before bubble....
[Standard]
02:07:135 (1) - Not extend to 02:09:312? Like the next slider?
02:14:597 (1) - Extend to 02:16:151?
[Roxas' Advanced]
00:44:364 (1) - Why new combo?
[Heaven]
00:20:426 (2) - Why not stack with tail slider? Like 00:20:581 (3,4)?
[Pie's Hyper]
00:12:654 - Why this part is suddenly turn into normal samplesoft?
01:23:612 (1) - Why spinner? Shouldn't you replace this with another pattern?
[Another]
00:35:970 (1) - Why new combo?
00:53:379 (1) - ^
That's all
Looks good to me
Bubbled
Bubbled
Topic Starter
YayLeorda wrote:
Looks good to me
Bubbled
yeaaaaahh man gratz :3
:Q_ Thanks
[Another]
- 00:19:959 (7) - I was thought you misput whistle on this note, it should be on 00:19:493 (5) slider head right?
Topic Starter
Yep, I misput it, now I've fixed allBreeze wrote:
[Another]And maybe you can write "Heaven is the most hard diff in this map", since it shows another is the last diff in song select screen
- 00:19:959 (7) - I was thought you misput whistle on this note, it should be on 00:19:493 (5) slider head right?
Sorry for the late reply
RANKED! Congratulations
RANKED! Congratulations
gratz~
Congratz!!!!!!
Hi I modded this and made the mapper revive it, so pat me!
Good job (:
AWW YEA
Topic Starter
I noticed it just now, thank you guys <3 Especially Jenny
One of the best instrumental songs I´ve ever heard. 
Congrats and thank you.
Congrats and thank you.
just why ;w;
Topic Starter
Love wrote:
just why ;w;
Because Star Rating is the biggest troll ever \:D/
Dance girl: Thank you a lot!
You´re welcome. <3<3
amazing map ! gz with ranked..
More maps with that music and that style...
More maps with that music and that style...
nice song
Timing is just off zzz
full of snapping mistakes zzz
?
The 2nd timing point is way off. Change it to 77416. (That's 21ms off)
Topic Starter
Fixed. zzz people stop annoying me zzzMMzz wrote:
The 2nd timing point is way off. Change it to 77416. (That's 21ms off)
Waiting for re-rank D:
Topic Starter
Don't worry, this is going to be re-rankedMasterLetsPlay wrote:
great map! but not ranked
02:13:062 (4) - This slider is bugged. Re-copypaste it.
QUALITY MODPOST DON
i did best rank map in my osu hystory at this map...looks like i have to do this again ?
So sad
((
So sad
((
Topic Starter
Seriously, people, what is your problem?
musoraninn: I'm sorry for this :/
musoraninn: I'm sorry for this :/
RikiH_ wrote:
Seriously, people, what is your problem?
Roxas wrote:
RikiH_ wrote:
Seriously, people, what is your problem?
reb
to next BAT: don't forget to reset scores
to next BAT: don't forget to reset scores
Boom!
Reranked.
Reranked.
Regratz \o/
Topic Starter
Yay, thank youkanpakyin wrote:
Boom!
Reranked.
Also, thank you LKs for the rebubble
reranked congratulation
i hope that last time !
now i am top1 and that is my best one in osu
Be fair..i am top 1 on the next may be hour !)) but i am still happy ! ! ! !
now i am top1 and that is my best one in osu
Be fair..i am top 1 on the next may be hour !
)) but i am still happy ! ! ! !