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Suzaki Aya - Dramatic Market Ride (TV Size)

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Sure
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Sure
[General]
  1. 원래 제목이 다 영어니까 굳이 카타카나로 적을 필요가 없다고 봐요. 일본어 못 읽는 외국인은 엄청 많지만 영어 못 읽는 일본인은 거의 없을테니...

[Rika]
00:01:507 (11) - x:248 y:260
00:05:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - 리듬이 트럼펫이랑 섞은거 같은데 이렇게 바꾸는게 더 잘 어울릴것 같네요. http://puu.sh/1RsGm
00:21:594 (2,3,4,5,6) - 별 모양이 찌그러졌어요. 아래처럼 예쁘게 다듬어 보세요.
Screenshot and codes

148,168,21594,2,0,P|240:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,176,21945,1,0,0:0:0
280,60,22120,1,0,0:0:0
320,236,22296,1,8,0:0:0
388,68,22471,1,0,0:0:0
00:39:752 (3) - 이 구간은 스네어 드럼이 워낙 강한 파트라서 랜덤 3연타 넣으면 중간 노트 존재감이 거의 없어서 지우는 편이 더 깔끔한 리듬을 선사할거예요.
00:46:506 (1) - 3/4로 늘려도 괜찮을 거 같네요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580613
00:49:576 (2) - 00:39:752 (3)이랑 같은 경우이므로 역시 삭제 추천.
01:02:647 (3) - 01:02:647랑 01:02:998를 노멀샘플셋으로 바꾸고 클랩 제거한 뒤 휘슬 넣어보세요.


[Normal]
00:12:120 (3) - 이런건 어때요? 싫음 말구... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580641
00:21:594 (1,2) - 겹치는걸 최소화 했으면 좋겠네요.
Screenshot and codes

492,168,21594,6,0,P|492:200|480:224,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,216,21945,2,0,P|400:236|392:268,1,60
00:36:682 (3,4) - S자 슬라이더 넣으면 흐름에서 이득을 볼 수 있어요.
Screenshot and codes

292,132,36682,2,0,P|258:147|212:135|183:103|183:103|155:70|108:58|75:74,1,240
100,192,37734,1,8,0:0:0
01:02:647 (5,6) - 클랩제거하고 노멀휘슬로. 인세인에서 설명했음.
01:05:454 (3) - 이 부분은 노래에서 강조된 박자가 없어요. 앞에 슬라이더를 수정해서 이런식으로 바꾸면 리듬이 더 나아질거예요. http://puu.sh/1RtiM
01:24:576 - 쓸모없는 타이밍 포인트는 제거.


[alacat's Hard]
HP 6 / OD 6
Since Normal diff has OD 4, so OD 5 doesn't make big difference to Normal.


[alcat's Easy]
01:02:647 (2) - Don't you add finishes? Because you added it in your Hard diff.



영어번역은 좀 이따가 고치고 나면... ㅇㅅㅇ



EDIT : supa simple English ver.
[Rika]
00:01:507 (11) - x:248 y:260
00:05:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/1RsGm
00:21:594 (2,3,4,5,6) - Refine star shape, it's a bit ugly now.
Screenshot and codes

148,168,21594,2,0,P|240:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,176,21945,1,0,0:0:0
280,60,22120,1,0,0:0:0
320,236,22296,1,8,0:0:0
388,68,22471,1,0,0:0:0
00:39:752 (3) - Delete the circle, because there is nothing emphasized
00:46:506 (1) - 3/4 slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580613
00:49:576 (2) - Same with 00:39:752 (3)
01:02:647 (3) - Put normal-hitwhistle at 01:02:647 and 01:02:998


[Normal]
00:12:120 (3) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580641
00:21:594 (1,2) - Avoid overlapping
Screenshot and codes

492,168,21594,6,0,P|492:200|480:224,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,216,21945,2,0,P|400:236|392:268,1,60
00:36:682 (3,4) - S-shape slider would give better flow.
Screenshot and codes

292,132,36682,2,0,P|258:147|212:135|183:103|183:103|155:70|108:58|75:74,1,240
100,192,37734,1,8,0:0:0
01:02:647 (5,6) - Add normal whistles
01:05:454 (3) - Change rhythm like this http://puu.sh/1RtiM
01:24:576 - Delete this useless timing point
Last edited by Sure , edited 1 time in total.
alacat
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alacat

ykcarrot wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
HP 6 / OD 6
Since Normal diff has OD 4, so OD 5 doesn't make big difference to Normal.
ok ~ set OD 6 , But I dont want to change HP >.< Because This map is high bpm :3


[alcat's Easy]
01:02:647 (2) - Don't you add finishes? Because you added it in your Hard diff. okey , added :3
Thank you for modding :3 !!

Easy : http://puu.sh/1Rtxt

Hard : http://puu.sh/1Rtxq
Kawayi Rika
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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
ykcarrot

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
  1. 원래 제목이 다 영어니까 굳이 카타카나로 적을 필요가 없다고 봐요. 일본어 못 읽는 외국인은 엄청 많지만 영어 못 읽는 일본인은 거의 없을테니... :arrow: 오리지날 제목이라 보류할게요 :3

[Rika]
00:01:507 (11) - x:248 y:260 :arrow: 직선하기 시러서 보류할게요.
00:05:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - 리듬이 트럼펫이랑 섞은거 같은데 이렇게 바꾸는게 더 잘 어울릴것 같네요. http://puu.sh/1RsGm :arrow: 확실이 더 잘어울리네요.
00:21:594 (2,3,4,5,6) - 별 모양이 찌그러졌어요. 아래처럼 예쁘게 다듬어 보세요. :arrow: fixed.

148,168,21594,2,0,P|240:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,176,21945,1,0,0:0:0
280,60,22120,1,0,0:0:0
320,236,22296,1,8,0:0:0
388,68,22471,1,0,0:0:0
00:39:752 (3) - 이 구간은 스네어 드럼이 워낙 강한 파트라서 랜덤 3연타 넣으면 중간 노트 존재감이 거의 없어서 지우는 편이 더 깔끔한 리듬을 선사할거예요. :arrow: fixed.
00:46:506 (1) - 3/4로 늘려도 괜찮을 거 같네요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580613 :arrow: 괜찮네요 :3
00:49:576 (2) - 00:39:752 (3)이랑 같은 경우이므로 역시 삭제 추천. :arrow: fixed.
01:02:647 (3) - 01:02:647랑 01:02:998를 노멀샘플셋으로 바꾸고 클랩 제거한 뒤 휘슬 넣어보세요.


[Normal]
00:12:120 (3) - 이런건 어때요? 싫음 말구... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/580641 :arrow: ㅋㅋ 보류.
00:21:594 (1,2) - 겹치는걸 최소화 했으면 좋겠네요. :arrow: fixed.

492,168,21594,6,0,P|492:200|480:224,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,216,21945,2,0,P|400:236|392:268,1,60
00:36:682 (3,4) - S자 슬라이더 넣으면 흐름에서 이득을 볼 수 있어요. :arrow: fixed.

292,132,36682,2,0,P|258:147|212:135|183:103|183:103|155:70|108:58|75:74,1,240
100,192,37734,1,8,0:0:0
01:02:647 (5,6) - 클랩제거하고 노멀휘슬로. 인세인에서 설명했음. :arrow: ^
01:05:454 (3) - 이 부분은 노래에서 강조된 박자가 없어요. 앞에 슬라이더를 수정해서 이런식으로 바꾸면 리듬이 더 나아질거예요. http://puu.sh/1RtiM :arrow: fixed.
01:24:576 - 쓸모없는 타이밍 포인트는 제거. :arrow: ^


영어번역은 좀 이따가 고치고 나면... ㅇㅅㅇ

Thanks for nice mod ~ carrot sama ><

Update all diff.
Last edited by Kawayi Rika , edited 1 time in total.
Sure
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Sure
Alright then.
Flanster
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Flanster
Took a look at the map as you asked so I'll post it here since im lazy and its small as it can be!

[General]
lookin good (you dont say)

[alacat's Hard]
00:06:506 - this empty space feels meh....why not put a note here?

[Rika]
00:14:576 (5,6,7,8,9) - somehow I can't feel this pattern fitting in at all. It makes my head go @.@

Instead of this


This


Looks good for ranking to me, but im not an expert modder afterall

no kd thanks.
Kawayi Rika
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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Lolicore Flandre

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Took a look at the map as you asked so I'll post it here since im lazy and its small as it can be!

[Rika]
00:14:576 (5,6,7,8,9) - somehow I can't feel this pattern fitting in at all. It makes my head go @.@ :arrow: after tested sometimes rhythm is fine,i silenced 00:14:840 - ,they sound much better now :3

Instead of this


This


Looks good for ranking to me, but im not an expert modder afterall

no kd thanks.

Thanks for mod lolifan ~ ;)
alacat
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2011
alacat

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
00:06:506 - this empty space feels meh....why not put a note here? follow the sound of the trumpet here (5,6,7) >.<
Thank you for modding ;)
Pokie
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Pokie
LoliFlan did a mod (again!) :o

Gogo Rika~
Flanster
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Flanster
Since im not experienced enough to rank maps
Rebubbled!

Good Luck ;)
minyeob
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minyeob
Ranked after minor fix o.o//
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
moe Rika! :)
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
yay this song \:D/

it's been a while since i called you this, but congratz on the rank moe Rika ;)
Satellite
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Satellite
congratz~~
Aurele
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Aurele
Congratz Rika♥
B2IN
B2IN
빠빠빠빠빠빰 ~ 츅츅 ~\ o /
alacat
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alacat


(「・ω・)「congrats!!
Kawayi Rika
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Thanks minyeab and everyone ~ <3
B2IN
B2IN

alacat wrote:



(「・ω・)「congrats!!

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meiikyuu
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meiikyuu
grats :) !
hoLysoup
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hoLysoup

:>
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
congrats rikka~~~
Fumika
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Fumika
Finally ww =w=b
Pokie
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Pokie
Grats~
/me pokes Rika
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gratz_(:з」∠)_
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Congratz :P
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