All skipped here were fixed.UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello DakeDekaane~
Modding via M4M. <3
When I saw your avatar I couldn't stop laughing for like 10 minutes. In fact I'm still laughing now. /* ;_;
This song is short so I'll try and give a lot of suggestions with lots of pictures cause pictures R fun. :3
Do with them what you will in your own style.
Such a nice song, I'm going to be singing it for weeks. ._.
[General]
I hear this song as more like 78 BPM ._. /*Ok, changed, before I didn't feel it but now it's the time, dupped SV btw
In general I think one of the largest things that's holding this mapset back is the hitsounding. It's just too loud at a lot of sections, and the slidertick is SO loud and ugly and it drives me insane because this is a really soft and beautiful song.
I suggest adding a silenced slidertick like this.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
Rename it "soft-slidertick" and place it in the song folder.
It's like night and day with this mapset without that annoying slidertick, trust me. /*I don't notice the change >_< but totally silent now
I recommend reducing volume in all sections by 20-25%. /*Done by 20%~ sounds nice
Soft is nice here.
It's not Pokemon. <3 /*You~ >.>
[Easy]
00:03:762 (3) - I don't think we should use finishes until the kiai time. They really stand out because there's nothing like it in the music. Replace with whistle imo, or lower volume by a lot. /*I like how finishes sound, decreased de volume :c
00:36:868 (1,2,3) - Make better flow? /*Made something alike
00:51:081 - Vocals miss followed here imo. We start the heart slider earlier than we should. Here's I suggest. /*Changed this part for one of mine.
00:51:081 (1) to 00:56:081 = end of heart slider.
Here I used the scale feature to shrink the heart slider so that it's 8 beats long.
Here what it looks like:
Also maybe make the heart slider a NC and remove the NC at 00:57:619 (1).
Then maybe NC at 01:05:296 and delete NC at 01:06:450 and NC at 01:07:989. /*I keep as I have now, follows better the verses.
You should go through here and reposition everything in 1.0 DS. The map will look SO much better. /*\:D/
[Normal]
00:03:762 (5) - Again not sure about the finishes before kiai time. Would be better as whistles imo. /*I like how finishes sound, decreased de volume :c
00:38:791 (1) - Maybe remove NC /*Different phrases
00:57:619 (1) - No need for this NC I don't think. /*I think it's ok as it's only a phrase .w.
01:10:670 - Here also maybe like this: /*Something alike
[Hard]
No circle size 5? :O.........jk <3 /*I used to use CS 5 in Insane, not Hard >.>
In general here. Not enough sliders imo. It's not bad or anything, I just enjoy the normal difficulty more because the sliders fit the song better imo.
00:20:329 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't some sliders mixed in here feel nicer? /*Added some.
00:50:696 - Just a suggestion here because I don't like the rhythm. /*Made something alike
Move the 1 to 00:51:465 and add a circle stacked on it at 00:51:081. Then add a slider at 00:52:042 and ending at 00:52:427 flowing down into that heart slider.
01:14:516 - NC? /*Put in 01:14:132 (1) (former 4) instead
Geez I wish the chorus had more than one verse. ;_; It's so epic.
Anyways, I hope it's helpful.
I leave star.
Thanks for mod and star, I got a bit sick and I'll be updating later or maybe tomorrow, when I finish all stuff with Hard diff /o/