Hola! Vi tu map en #modreqs y veo que ya tiene 9 meses, mucha prioridad y estabas buscando MAT. Asi, que aca vamos (lo hago en Ingles para que me entiendan todos lo que sugiero)[Easy:]
• 00:03:758 (3,1) - I think that fits better with the song if the New Combo were in (3). So, add the new combo in (3) and remove it in (1), in addition an object with a combo alone looks weird imo.
• 00:16:883 (6) - If you follow the next suggestion, I'd add a New Combo in this Slider
• 00:18:421
(x) - The spacing (in the timeline) between 00:17:267 - 00:19:176 is kinda big even in this difficulty. So, to reduce that, add a 1/4 Slider in 00:18:421 (this Slider has to finish in 00:18:614 of course
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• 00:28:791 (5) - At the end of this Slider, the piano is in a really high pitch. Emphasize that with a Whistle, please
• 00:29:752 - 00:31:291 - Again, the spacing in the timeline is way to big, this kind of things make the difficulty boring even in an Easy diff. Try adding some beat in this section
• 00:39:945 (4) - I will suggest you a pattern for a better comboing and Rhythm. Remove the Reverse Arrow in this Slider and add a Note in 00:40:714 instead, after that add a New Combo in this new Note
• 00:45:137 - 00:46:291 - I think that you know what I'm going to suggest you here. Add some beats, the diff. becomes boring if you don't do that
• 00:48:214 - 00:49:350 - (^)
• 00:49:542 (1) - Hmm.. A Whistle at the beginning follow properly the Vocal
• 00:57:618 (1) - The Whistles at the beginning and at the end of this Slider don't sound really fitting here. Listening properly the music, I think that a Normal Sampleset will fit better here.
• 00:57:618 (1,2) - In this case, it is better if you start the Kiai time with a New Combo because the kiai it is the most important part of the map. So, swap the Combo placement between these Notes
• 01:10:656 (1) - This pattern will flow better if you do a Flip Vertically in this Slider (Ctrl+J), and then move this Slider to
x:224 y:52• 01:12:959 (4) - A Whistle at the beginning is pretty necessary to emphasize that sound in the instrumental, so give it a try
• 01:19:911 (4) - Add a Whistle at the Slider end, because this pattern sounds empty actually.
- Actually, this difficulty is good but these empty places bother me a bit. If you can add some bit at least in some of the mentioned placed this difficulty will be ready to go [Normal:]
• 00:00:682 (1,2) - Sounds better if you replace the claps to Whistles, the Claps don't sound coherent at the end of these Sliders, really.
• 00:12:220
(x) - Add a Note here, it follow properly the piano. Remember that tip: Map all the things in the music when you can, not just the Vocal
• 00:23:406 (7) - To emphasize the piano, add a Whistle in this Note. You did that in Easy btw
• 00:28:791 (4) - A whistle at the Slider end is really necessary to follow the piano properly, so add it one please.
• 00:42:252 (2) - Add a Whistle in this note because is consistent with your hitsounding (and sound proper of course xD)
• 00:52:811 (2)- *Nazi*- Comparing this 'Heart Sliders' with the others on the other difficulties, this is a bit unperfect. The end of this Slider is touching the Sliderbody, but in the other diffs don't occure that. So, If I were you, I'd move the last point in this Slider some grids to the left so I'd move it to
x:192 y:252 • 00:57:618 (1,2) - Swap the Combo placement as I said in Easy
• 01:17:603 (2) - You are missing a 'Normal Sampleset' at the Slider end, so add it please.
• 01:20:295 (2) - Add a Whistle at the Slider beginning, the pattern sounds empty without it.
- Wow, You did a very good job in this difficulty [Hard:]
• 00:01:451 (4) - Sincerely, I don't understand the usage of a Clap here at the beginning. I think that a Whistle is more than enough, the clap doesn't sound coherent.
• 00:02:605 (2) - Same as above, about this Clap at the end of this Slider.
• 00:05:297 (1) - Two things to point out in this Slider:
1- The new combo is unnecessary here, you didn't add one in Normal diff. for example. So, remove this New Combo please.
2- I think that a Whistle at the beginning sounds really fitting, so, give it a try.
• 00:10:681
(x) - Add a Note here to follow properly the piano
• 00:28:214
(x) - And here, add a Note to follow the Vocal on a correct way
• 00:29:560 (2) - Add a Whistle in this Note please, I think I mention that before in the other difficulties.
• 00:42:252 (3) - (^)
• 00:44:945 (3,4) - Actually, the way that you placed (3), it provokes a bad flow looking the next Notes. For a better flow, try doing a Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) in the Slider mentioned
• 01:16:449 (1) - A Whiste sounds fitting here
• 01:20:295 (2) - And.. Whistle at the Slider beginning as I explained in Normal.
- Another good diff. Almost hitsounds in this diff. other than that, I don't have problems :3[Dekaane:]
• 00:01:451 (3) - Weird clap at the beginning as I said in the previous difficulties. Replace it with a Whistle pls.
• 00:02:989 (3) - (^)
• 00:07:220 (3,4) - The spacing change is weird here, It is not necessary in my opinion. With a Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) in (4) I think that the pattern will flow better.
• 00:07:989 (1,2) - (^)
• 00:18:421 (1,2) - Try reducing a bit the spacing between these Notes, it is weird because previously you have a 1/2 pattern with the same distance as here, and this is an 1/4 pattern (the pattern mentioned is the one in 00:16:883), so yeah, will flow much better if you reduce the spacing a bit
• 00:29:560 (4) - As I said in the previous diffs. Add a Whistle here please
• 00:31:868 (2,3) - Wow, this flow bad and it is a bit confusing in the 1st play. I don't know why you increase the spacing between these Notes, try reducing it
• 00:32:637 (5) - Add a Whistle at the Slider beginning
• 00:42:252 (3) - Whistle in this note (explained in the other diffs.)
• 01:03:746 (2,3) *Nazi*- Stack them properly, will look better during the gameplay
• 01:10:272 (1) - This New Combo is kinda useless, if I were you I'd remove it from this object
• 01:20:295 (2) - And.. Whistle at the beginning as always
- Fine too. Sometimes is lack of flow in some parts and some spacing changes look random but anyways it is fun to play.And.. That's all!
In general you did a good job, just the Insane need a bit more.
Anyways, send me a Forum PM for a recheck when you are ready (forum because I'm kinda slow in the rechecks xD, and I can forget you )