HeatKai wrote:

I LOVE YOU FOR MAPPING THIS.

XinCrin wrote:

Hola DakeDekaane Random Mod ~

[General]

• No me gusta mucho la calidad del BG , mira te recomiendo escoger entre uno
de estos dos , son mas lindos :

BGs

Los dos tienen el tamaño rankeable de 1024x768 /*Esos dos BG los usa este mapa, se que no hay regla en contra de eso, pero quiero intentar con otro diferente, espero sea de tu agrado.

[Easy]

• 00:00:682 (1) - Ponle un Whistle al comienzo del slider , suena bien /*No me gusta, ya que el inicio es algo suave
• 00:03:758 (3) - Este Finish suena muy alto con respecto a la musica /*Volumen decrementado
Te recomendaria que uses un Whistle o que le bajes el vol. a este Finish
• 00:05:297 (1) - Whistle al comienzo del slider /*Hecho
• 00:06:835 (1) - Inicia con Whistle /*Hecho
• 00:17:220 (1) - Whistle guiado por la musica /*Hecho
• 01:06:451 (1) - Solo ponle el Whistle en el comienzo al final no en todo el cuerpo /*Gracias por este, supuestamente había corregido todos los sliders asi x3
Sinceramente suena mal

[Normal]

• 00:00:682 (1) - Al igual que en easy un Whistle le cae bien /*Misma razón que en Easy
• 00:03:374 (4) - 1 Grid a la izquierda /*No entiendo el por qué de esto, asi que lo dejaré pasar (el blanket está bien y el spacing igual)
• 00:05:682 (2) - Realmente este slider no sigue la musica , te recomendaria hacerlo en 1/1: /*Hecho

SPOILER

• 01:10:682 (1,2) - Espacio muy cerrado entre estos dos slider ,mueve (2) a x:300 y:220 y arreglas el espacio de las notas que vienen /*Ups, corregido
• 01:14:912 (3) - 1 Grid arriba /*Hecho

[Hard]
• 00:11:066 (6) - Whistle , el Finish suena mal /*Estaba aun indeciso sobre el finish, corregido
• 00:36:066 (8) - 1 Grid a la izquierda para alinearlo /*.w. (Esta alineado a 00:35:489 (6,7) si es lo que quieres decir)
• 00:41:451 (1) - Arregla el spacing /*Hecho
• 00:43:374 (6) - Muevelo a x:236 y:296 , para darle mejor forma a tu hexagono /*Reaacomode las notas del hexagono con lo anterior

Buena Suerte y toma mi Star ~

Yuuki Katsuki wrote:

Here's my mod4mod
[General]

I think that the colors are too diferent, if you know what i mean, try using other order to the colors or adding a color before the orange that is more in the middle in the palette

[Easy]

It follows very good the rythm but i think there's too many new combos

SPOILER

00:06:835 (1) - 00:09:528 (1) - 00:14:143 (1) - Delete New Combo /*Deleted all but not deleted in 00:06:835 (1) as both follows different instrument.
00:14:528 (2) - Delete Whistle, Add whistle in 00:15:297 (3) -
00:15:682 (4) - Delete Whistle
Suggestion for rythm: put a whistle in 00:19:143 (1) - Delete Whistle in 00:20:297 (2) - And Add whistle in 00:23:374 (5) - /*Deleted all but not in 00:20:297 (2), it sounds empty without whistle :c
00:23:374 (5) - Add new combo (for map style?)
00:26:835 (4) - Delete Whistle, 00:26:835 (4) - Add Whistle, 00:27:989 (5) - Delete Whistle /*Deleted all but not in 00:27:989 (5), it sounds empty without whistle :c
Suggestion about these 2 00:44:143 (2,3) - Add a Return in 00:44:143 (2) - delete 00:44:912 (3) - and put a circle in 00:44:912 -
Same as before in 00:46:451 (1,2,3) -
01:14:528 (1) - Delete New Combo /*The combo will be too long D:
01:19:912 (1) - Delete New Combo

/*Nice hitsounds suggestions /o/

[Normal]

I think this is pretty good, hard to find ''errors''

SPOILER

00:15:682 (4) - Delete return for better rythm
00:27:989 (3) - Same thing here /*This likely will be like leading the players to miss, as this is based on piano
00:49:143 (5) - Add new combo
00:52:605 (1) - Delete New combo /*I'm unsure about this, I'll wait to see what people suggest for this

[Hard]

I find little things about rythm

SPOILER

00:09:912 (3) - delete this note, it sounds strange for me
00:12:220 (7) - add new combo? /*Deleted the note -_-
00:16:066 (1) - delete new combo /*Added a note 1/2 beat before, and this circle is following piano
00:18:470 (4) - add new combo
00:22:220 (6) - delete this one, sounds strange for me /*The piano sounds loudly here, so I decide to let the circle here

I don't see more things in this

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello DakeDekaane~
Modding via M4M. <3

When I saw your avatar I couldn't stop laughing for like 10 minutes. In fact I'm still laughing now. /* ;_;

This song is short so I'll try and give a lot of suggestions with lots of pictures cause pictures R fun. :3
Do with them what you will in your own style.
Such a nice song, I'm going to be singing it for weeks. ._.

[General]

I hear this song as more like 78 BPM ._. /*Ok, changed, before I didn't feel it but now it's the time, dupped SV btw

In general I think one of the largest things that's holding this mapset back is the hitsounding. It's just too loud at a lot of sections, and the slidertick is SO loud and ugly and it drives me insane because this is a really soft and beautiful song.
I suggest adding a silenced slidertick like this.
http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
Rename it "soft-slidertick" and place it in the song folder.
It's like night and day with this mapset without that annoying slidertick, trust me. /*I don't notice the change >_< but totally silent now

I recommend reducing volume in all sections by 20-25%. /*Done by 20%~ sounds nice
Soft is nice here.
It's not Pokemon. <3 /*You~ >.>

[Easy]

00:03:762 (3) - I don't think we should use finishes until the kiai time. They really stand out because there's nothing like it in the music. Replace with whistle imo, or lower volume by a lot. /*I like how finishes sound, decreased de volume :c

00:36:868 (1,2,3) - Make better flow? /*Made something alike

00:51:081 - Vocals miss followed here imo. We start the heart slider earlier than we should. Here's I suggest. /*Changed this part for one of mine.

00:51:081 (1) to 00:56:081 = end of heart slider.
Here I used the scale feature to shrink the heart slider so that it's 8 beats long.
Here what it looks like:

Also maybe make the heart slider a NC and remove the NC at 00:57:619 (1).

Then maybe NC at 01:05:296 and delete NC at 01:06:450 and NC at 01:07:989. /*I keep as I have now, follows better the verses.

You should go through here and reposition everything in 1.0 DS. The map will look SO much better. /*\:D/

[Normal]

00:03:762 (5) - Again not sure about the finishes before kiai time. Would be better as whistles imo. /*I like how finishes sound, decreased de volume :c

00:38:791 (1) - Maybe remove NC /*Different phrases

00:57:619 (1) - No need for this NC I don't think. /*I think it's ok as it's only a phrase .w.

01:10:670 - Here also maybe like this: /*Something alike

01:10:670 (1) to 01:12:786 (5)

[Hard]

No circle size 5? :O.........jk <3 /*I used to use CS 5 in Insane, not Hard >.>

In general here. Not enough sliders imo. It's not bad or anything, I just enjoy the normal difficulty more because the sliders fit the song better imo.

00:20:329 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't some sliders mixed in here feel nicer? /*Added some.

00:50:696 - Just a suggestion here because I don't like the rhythm. /*Made something alike
Move the 1 to 00:51:465 and add a circle stacked on it at 00:51:081. Then add a slider at 00:52:042 and ending at 00:52:427 flowing down into that heart slider.

01:14:516 - NC? /*Put in 01:14:132 (1) (former 4) instead

Geez I wish the chorus had more than one verse. ;_; It's so epic.

Anyways, I hope it's helpful.

M4M map in case you forgot <3

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/68399

I leave star.

Byakugan249 wrote:

alrighty let's get started. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or curiousity about something.

[General]
replace opening for ending because this is the ending of the anime. /*Oops, I haven't noticed that, fixed now.
why are overflow, and 0verflow in the tags? /*0verflow is the correct name of the VN developer, and I put overflow as this can be searched by this way too (it is known as that too, although is wrong).

[Easy]
00:02:605 (2) - i think making this a straight slider would increase the flow in this part during gameplay IMO. /*Done
00:17:223 (1) - for the purpose of consistency with the previous note that follows the piano, remove the NC for this note. /*Done
00:23:406 (1) - ^ /*Done
00:34:945 (2) - same as 00:02:605. /*Made a mirror of 00:34:945 (2) and put in a proper place, making the flow lead better to 00:36:868 (3)

[Normal]
00:02:220 (2) - align this across from (1). moving it there makes the flow play awkwardly during gameplay. if you align it across from each other, it'll be smoother as it's going in a straight line. /*v
00:03:762 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, put this note at the middle. it'll look like a triangle if you look at the beginnng/end of (1,2) and (3) during gameplay. it'll make a shape that will make the transition smoother that way. it should look like this /*Done something similar (same but flipped vertically).
00:09:531 (4) - make this a straight slider and stack this on (1). it'll look like that this pattern is going around in a circle during gameplay./*Done
00:09:531 (4,5,6) - same issue as the 2nd suggestion. make a triangle out of this if you follow the suggestion above. it should look like this. i feel that the flow would increase and it'll make the diff fun for players during gameplay. /*Done
01:11:824 (6) - NC here. although the lyrics change on the end of (5), this note follows it up from the long hold in the vocals during gameplay. /*I was thinking about putting NC in (4) but listened carefully and did as you said.

[Hard]
00:07:415 (3) - for a smoother transition in the song, make this note a straight slider instead of a curved slider. i feel that the flow with the curved slider feels awkward during gameplay. /*Done

and that's all. i'm gonna leave a star. you're almost there for a bubble, this is a nice a calm map. GL /*Yay /o/

pimpG wrote:

hi there, random mod o/

general

your timing is a bit off, i promise its the last time i'll sugest timing for this map.i hope you like it /*Taken all not commented, but some was different

00:00:682 bpm 78
00:16:883 bpm 78 /*Used 16114, aesthetical purpose, the notes still land in the same place as having this.
00:19:143 bpm 78
00:59:140 bpm 78,200 /*Used 78.15
01:16:065 bpm 78

easy

00:53:004 (3) - would be better as symmetric heart shape imo /*But it is symmetrical now .w. oh, I get your point~ did the most I could do
01:07:989 (3) - this slider starts before the next timeline and ends after it, that makes it unsnapped in the slider end. its unrankeable stuff /*Fixed with new timing

normal

00:15:685 (4,1) - better make it a repeat slider to make it more playble for new mappers /*o3o
00:41:483 (1,2,3) - its a nice mirror shape, you should move it to the centre at x204 y96, dont worry about the ds here, it will look alot better /*Found a similar placement while conserving DS :3
01:02:796 (4) - remove this circle? it looks like "hard difficulty" stream, a bit difficult for normal, and this song is slow... /*v
01:02:989 (5) - make the slider end at 01:03:373 for the same reason above? /*I made 01:02:786 (4) begin there instead, following better the vocals.
01:07:989 (3) - same as easy /*Fixed with new timing

hard

00:39:945 (3) - clap at slider start? /*Sounds better a whistle, retired the whistle in the end.

thats all good luck

1. 01:19:141 - I think you should end the kiai time here...

1. 00:00:682 - Add whistle here? I don't see any reason to not apply one.
2. 00:06:835 (1) - Remove the NC? It's so jarring to see a 1-object combo (00:05:297 (1)) here, for me...
3. 00:09:912 - Add whistle to follow the music?
4. 00:10:297 - If you follow the suggestion above, remove whistle.
5. 00:11:066 (5) - Add whistle? A combination of whistle and clap works good here, IMO.
6. 00:14:528 - Add whistle?
7. 00:15:681 - ^
8. 00:16:066 - If you follow the suggestion above, remove the whistle here.
9. 00:25:329 - Add whistle?
10. 00:31:483 - ^
11. 00:32:252 (3) - Add clap?
12. 00:35:329 - ^
13. 00:37:252 (1) - Remove NC?
14. 00:37:637 (2) - Add NC?
15. 00:38:791 (1) - Remove NC?
16. 00:39:945 - Add clap?
17. 00:40:329 - Add whistle?
18. 00:42:252 - Add clap?
19. 00:44:175 - Add whistle?
20. 00:47:235 - ^
21. 00:49:927 - ^
22. 00:51:466 - ^
23. 00:52:043 - ^
24. 00:52:620 - ^
25. 00:56:851 (4) - ^
26. 00:57:620 (1) - Remove NC?
27. 01:00:291 (2) - Add whistle?
28. 01:20:295 - Add clap? (I'm tired of modding the hitsounds and NC stuff, so if you apply them, do them on the other diffs.)

1. 00:14:335 - Add whistle to emphasize the vocal.
2. 01:02:786 - ^
3. 01:04:898 (4) - ^

1. 00:31:483 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm... I think this pattern can be pretty confusing for players. Making a triangle like this should do, IMO.

1. Kiai times is Inconsistency only for easy at 01:19:136 should be consistency another diff's (Normal and hard) is 01:19:141
2. Red Timing is Inconsistency only for easy at 01:16:065, BPM of 78.150 should be consistency another diff's (Normal and hard) is 01:16:065, BPM of 78.000 when fix don't forget resnap all notes
3. 00:46:868 (T) - The timing green why is same place with timing red ? because the custom hitsound is same and volume is different (volume 45% is better) so the timing green need remove for all diff as is nothing and red stay
4. The grey combo is not fit this song and bad when test play imo better change to pink or brown or white this is fit for song IMO

1. 00:46:483 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end)
2. 01:16:834 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
3. 01:17:603 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
4. 01:19:911 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
5. 01:19:911 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end)
6. 01:20:680 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start)
7. 01:20:680 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)

1. 00:05:297 (1) - should be add whistle in end slider i feel the melody is very strong that will be fit, the melody is really same 00:12:220 (1) that fit lot imo
2. 01:10:656 (1) - missing change the sampleset Auto to Normal in start slider if you keep it consistency
3. 01:11:807 (2) - remove whistle in end slider, don't sense also missing change the sampleset Auto to Normal if you keep it consistency

1. 00:28:791 (6) - don't fit follow piano, better do it slider repeat like this http://puu.sh/1KzSz because, the slider long don't fit piano as is random that not fit, so better add slider repeat that will fit with piano a lot IMO also if you fix this need add whistle in repeat slider is really good
2. 00:34:945 (2) - do CTRL+ H and fix spacing like this http://puu.sh/1KA04 this is good to flow and gameplay when i test play
3. 01:21:823 at 01:25:278 (T) - all timing need resnapp

1. 00:05:297 (1) - is same happened at easy at 00:05:297 (1) also missing add whistle in start slider look diff easy have it
2. 00:28:791 (4) - need add whistle in repeat slider is really good to listen and fit lot
3. 00:30:329 (5) - add whistle in end slider is fit with piano IMO
4. 01:11:807 (1) - forget change the sampleset Auto to Normal in end slider if you keep it consistency
5. 01:13:727 (4) - again forget change the sampleset Auto to Normal in start slider if you keep it consistency
6. 01:17:603 (2) - again forget change the sampleset Auto to Normal in end slider if you keep it consistency

1. 00:21:099 (1) - This don't fit new combo becayse lyrics or something still continue, just remove new combo that fit lot because lyricis or something is still continue
2. 00:24:560 (1) - not fit follow lyrics try externd at 00:25:137 like this http://puu.sh/1KAwd this will be fit lot to follow with lyrics if you don't like my suggestion try remap this part you owm IMO
3. 00:46:099 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:46:483 (2) - put new combo is sense lot because the lyricis is change here like you did at 00:33:791 (5,1)

1. 00:05:297 (1) - is same happened at easy and normal at 00:05:297 (1) also missing add whistle in start slider look diff easy have it
2. 00:28:791 (4) - need add whistle in end slider is really good to listen and fit lot (same happened normal)
3. 00:30:329 (5) - add whistle in repeat slider is fit with piano (same happened normal
4. 01:13:727 (3) - missing change the sampleset Auto to Normal if you keep it consistency

1. 00:19:945 (4) - why no try same shape with 00:20:714 (2)? will be good for gameplay imo also if you fix this be carefully spacing
2. 00:26:868 (3) - need grid 2 down to better align with 00:26:099 (1)
3. 00:31:483 (1,2,3,4) - this is confuse for gameplay when i test play try more easier IMO
4. 00:46:851 (3) - this need grid 1 right to perfect align with 00:48:004 (5)

Gero wrote:

School Days OMG *O*! *¬*

Apenas me di cuenta que hablas español XD AJAJAJAJA hubiera echo el mod en español jajaja :3

Hi Hi, :3/ My Mod Of Your Request From My Queue

[Easy]

00:17:267 (7) - check the distance snap /*Oops, I thought it would be in a weird place but don't, done~.
00:46:483 (1) - ^ /*I want to keep 00:44:176 (2) and 00:47:252 (2) mirrored, so no change here.
00:51:466 (2,3) - would recommend moving the slider to the end of X: 224 Y: 180 To form a perfect triangle /*Moved 00:51:466 (2) instead, suggesting to change the form of my heart slider was brave >.>

SPOILER

[Normal]

Good Diff *O* /*Thanks :3

[Hard]

00:43:406 (6) - move the circle to x: 272 Y: 192 To make a perfect hexagon :3 /*It was perfect, I wonder what happened, thanks for notice.

Nice Map :'3 I love The Song X'D
Good Luck With The Map /*Thanks

1. "normal-sliderslide.wav" and "normal-slidertick.wav" are both the silent. You must delete one
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

1. 00:56:851 (4) - unsnaped note
2. 00:57:620 (1) - ^

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue! /*Hi /o/

Easy
00:04:528 - Add a circle and then remove the NC on next slider, to make a better transition /*Flipped 00:00:682 (1,2,3), and made a repeat for the next slider, moving it here.
00:11:066 (5) - Might cause a miss since its not common to put a single circle on a red tick when so much space, move it to the preview white tick and add another circle on 00:11:451 - , but if you really want keep it /*Added a 1/2 beat slider instead, adding that the piano sounds great and there should be something there.
00:59:140 (1) - Remove NC /*I'd say no, but after months of this I finally realized that, done.

Normal
/*All done here.

Hard

00:04:528 - Add a circle and then remove the NC on next slider, to make a better transition /*Done.
00:12:220 - Add a circle for Piano /*Originally there was a circle for piano there, but then removed it because it doesn't play good as I'm following vocals most of the time.

Good luck

DakeDekaane wrote:

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

I really can't find anything to mod

No video? I can provide you one if you want

If you can, that would be nice x3

Leorda wrote:

I remember this map before.... /*o3o

[General]
* About your custom soft-finish, I prefer the default one rather than the current one. Because the sound is doesn't fit to the song.... Well, it's up to you then.... /*You're right, deleted the custom

* According to this page, replace the title to "ウソツキ (TV Size)" and the Romanised Title should "Usotsuki (TV Size)" /*Thanks >_< done


[Easy]
00:32:637 (4) - Move 1 grid up to make the spacing looks consistent (nazi) /*Done
00:37:637 (2) - Move 1 grid down to make the spacing looks consistent (nazi) /*Done
00:53:004 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern? /*Done
00:57:618 (1,2) - Swap new combo? /*They are in the same phrase, swapping would look weird.
01:06:433 (1) - Why normal-sampleset in tail slider? It breaks your hitsound pattern /*Changed for soft whistle


[Normal]
00:46:099 (5) - Add finish and remove finish at the next object /*I'm using the very low volume finishes here due to emphasis in vocals, and if I put finish in (5) It would be too noisy
00:49:158 (5) - ^ /*^
00:56:849 (3) - Finish here doesn't fit, IMO /*Put Normal hit


[Hard]
00:55:503 (4) - Putting finish here is doesn't fit.... /*Put Normal hit
01:07:969 (4) - New combo for your combo pattern? /*Done


Well, good luck then~

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

See if the video is ok, otherwise I'll find another one.

1. 00:37:252 (2) I think this NC is not good. The better option (for me) is to put NC on 00:36:868 (3)
2. 01:14:495 (1,2) You were following the singer, why did you stop? Try this : http://puu.sh/20mtY (finish on (3))
3. 01:16:834 (1,2,3) ^ http://puu.sh/20mvR

1. 00:03:758 (3,1) reverse NC (moreover you put a finish on this circle so why not :p)
2. 00:05:297 (3) distance from your previous point is x1.03 which is a bit far. Move a little bit closer (x1.01 is fine) your slider from (2) (this is a suggestion)
3. 00:12:989 (2,1) ^ spacing
4. 00:30:329 (5) ^ (suggestion)
5. 00:50:696 (2) ^ spacing
6. 01:15:646 (4) flow (moves to x:428,y:168 (distance ~x1.0)
7. 01:19:141 (3) delete circle and put a 1/4 slider which starts at 01:18:949 (you're following the singer)

1. 00:20:714 (5) It makes sense if you were following the piano but you were following the singer. Try this : http://puu.sh/20mYT
2. 00:43:406 (6) Try to put 1/4 slider here (you can skip this one if you don't like xD but I think that this is less boring than 6 circles for a hard difficulty)
3. 01:06:241 (6,1) reverse NC. I think this is better to put NC here because you've done this thing just before 01:02:978 (5,1) even if I agree that she doesn't sing at this moment. As you want here, that's optionnal ^^
4. 01:17:988 (6) If you don't want to be a boring stream and following strings, put a 1/4 slider instead of this circle

1. 00:05:297 (1) remove NC
2. 00:29:560 (4) keep the same spacing than 00:28:406 (1,2,3)
3. 01:10:848 (3,4) not funny at all ^^ try something like this instead : http://puu.sh/20nQq