lolcubes wrote:

First of all:
The timing is wrong. 00:43:229 - Here you need a 5/4 red section because the time signature changes to 5/4. Next, you need a 4/4 red section at 00:51:801 because it goes back to 4/4 here. This also happens before other choruses later in the map.

Wishy wrote:

1/4 plss

Garven wrote:

Delays... sorry...

[Nyaten]
OD +1 or 2 please. 7 is too low for this level of difficulty. Lower the HP Drain if you feel that will be a deciding factor, but free 300s on a map of this level is just stupid.

Garven wrote:

Delays... sorry... its ok lol

[General]
Sorry I forgot to mention this, but in the artist, set it to 妖精帝國 and leave the unicode as "Yousei Teikoku" ok fixed

Apply Melo's quote of lolcubes please. This will apply to the quoted section as well as 01:48:586 - and 02:41:729 - ok fixed

[Level 6]
The new combos are alright since they're not several single note new combos in a row - it's just that super-short combos mess with the HP Drain metric.

The current alignments are readable - I just felt that it was a little tacky since it looked like you weren't quite sure what pattern you were trying to stick to, hehe. xD kk

[Origin]
OD7 against AR9 is pretty odd since you get 300's very very easily. It's okay, but not preferred. You want to set it to the tone of the map, not just because you always set it that way. fine od8 then one thing i find wierd though, once i increased the OD...the star rating drops from 5.00 to 4.90 for some reason, and now Level 6 is in front o_O ..

Garven wrote:

Delays... sorry...

[General]
Sorry I forgot to mention this, but in the artist, set it to 妖精帝國 and leave the unicode as "Yousei Teikoku"
I would leave the Artist as it is since the Title itself is in English

Apply Melo's quote of lolcubes please. This will apply to the quoted section as well as 01:48:586 - and 02:41:729 -

[Saten]
Same commentary on the OD from Origin. I think OD 7 is pretty ideal for this


Not that harsh, no, but in comparison with the rest of the intro? Yes. It feels unbalanced having a strong start, then pittering out with the same intensity of music.

You should set it to a slider to slider jump then - right now the pacing feels off since you start this off with jumps between each phrase, and this distanced snapped part breaks that flow. I kinda fixed it. Took a while to find something fitting.

[Nyaten]
OD +1 or 2 please. 7 is too low for this level of difficulty. Lower the HP Drain if you feel that will be a deciding factor, but free 300s on a map of this level is just stupid. Keep in mind that this isn't a short map. It is already difficult enough imo. And read what I mentioned above. OD is nothing I wanna change just like that. And what Kynan mentioned. Lowering the HPD would make it much easier

Saten wrote:

[General]
Sorry I forgot to mention this, but in the artist, set it to 妖精帝國 and leave the unicode as "Yousei Teikoku"
I would leave the Artist as it is since the Title itself is in English

What? In what world would this make any sense at all?

[Nyaten]
OD +1 or 2 please. 7 is too low for this level of difficulty. Lower the HP Drain if you feel that will be a deciding factor, but free 300s on a map of this level is just stupid. Keep in mind that this isn't a short map. It is already difficult enough imo. And read what I mentioned above. OD is nothing I wanna change just like that. And what Kynan mentioned. Lowering the HPD would make it much easier

Saten wrote:

And there's always HardRock

Aqo wrote:

If anybody thinks 300s are free on this map with OD7, please post a scoreboard of yourself SSing the map.

Melophobia wrote:

Sorry for the delay

[Nyaten]
00:46:873 (2) - unsnapped

[Origin]
00:39:372 (1) - remove newcombo
03:05:301 (7,8,1) - spacings can be more consistent imo

i think there can be some more finishes; consider adding it at:

SPOILER

00:08:944 (1) -
00:45:586 (4) -
00:46:658 (2) -
00:49:925 -
00:58:658 (5) -
01:11:086 (3) -
01:13:122 (3) -
01:50:729 (1) -
01:51:586 -
01:51:800 -
01:52:872 -
01:53:729 -
01:55:871 -
02:03:801 -
02:41:729 -
02:42:586 -
02:43:872 -
02:44:729 (4,5) -
02:45:372 (7) -
02:46:015 (2) -
02:46:872 -
02:48:157 -
02:49:229 (3) -
03:10:658 -
03:39:800 -

[Level 6]
01:10:979 (1) - should start at 01:10:711 - for the sake of consistency with the next spinner

also same as Origin;

SPOILER

00:44:301 (4) -
00:45:586 -
00:46:443 -
00:47:729 (1) -
00:48:587 (5) -
00:50:728 -
00:58:658 -
01:50:729 -
01:55:871 -
02:03:801 -
02:15:801 (1) -
02:46:015 -
03:10:657 -
03:39:801 (1) -

[Level 3]
needs more finishes

SPOILER

00:58:658 -
02:00:371 -
02:03:801 -
02:06:372 -
02:08:086 -
02:14:085 (3) -
03:03:799 -
03:04:121 -
03:04:443 -
03:13:228 -
03:14:085 -
03:14:943 -
03:17:835 -
03:18:157 -
03:29:514 -
03:36:371 -
03:39:800 -

00:51:801 - fill in here like 01:56:944 - ?

[Level 1]
same with other diffs

SPOILER

00:27:801 -
00:38:086 -
00:41:515 -
01:02:943 -
01:50:729 -
02:00:372 -
02:03:801 -
02:06:372 -
02:44:942 (2) -
02:45:372 -
03:07:228 -
03:10:657 -
03:18:371 -

01:37:658 - this section is quite boring to be honest. it would be more exciting if there was a note here
01:56:944 - fill in here like 00:51:801 - ?

00:48:373 (1) - unsnapped
00:49:230 (2) -
02:48:370 (2) -

i'm fine with the rest of the mapset so contact me via forum PM when you're done with this mod. I'll rebubble

Melophobia wrote:

..there are still some minor things you might need to take into consideration. no kds !

SPOILER

[Level 6]
02:42:586 (4) - finish
02:51:801 (1) - remove clap from the beginning and add it to the end
02:52:658 (2) - ^
03:01:228 - finish
03:10:657 - ^
03:11:944 (1) - remove newcombo for the sake of consistency with 03:08:514 (8) - ?

[Origin]
00:09:694 (1) - there shouldn't be the newcombo here considering your comboing pattern. remove it please
00:53:086 (3) - maybe newcombo here?
00:55:229 - finish
01:03:800 - ^
01:22:122 (9,10) - considering that the previous spacing is quite large maybe players read this rhythm as 1/2. i think you need to space them at a higher DS
02:36:372 - finish
03:02:086 (3) - finish
03:03:801 (5) - how about adding finishes to both begin and end? just suggestion tho~

[Level 3]
00:46:443 - finish
00:50:943 - ^
00:51:371 (2) - ^
00:55:229 - ^

[Level 1]
00:46:657 - finish
00:50:193 (3) - move this slider backward by 1/2 beat and add finish to 00:51:371 -
00:55:229 - finish
00:58:658 - ^
01:51:800 - ^
01:56:514 - ^
01:56:943 (2) - remove this circle please
01:58:658 (4) - add newcombo here
02:15:801 (1) - finish
02:35:515 - ^
02:38:943 - ^
03:39:371 - it may be just me but feels much better if there's a note here

i hope that's all > < poke me once again after fixes~

Kynan wrote:

-Kirito wrote:

omg bpm280 congratz

calm down there's no 1/4 streams x( (sadly D:)

Kynan wrote:

-Kirito wrote:

omg bpm280 congratz

calm down there's no 1/4 streams x( (sadly D:)

jesus1412 wrote:

Which makes it wrongly timed, which is stupid. Do this on a slower map and there's no way it would be allowed.

Zarerion wrote:

Be prepared for HT scoreboard

LunarSakuya wrote:

K finally hng

Zarerion wrote:

Be prepared for HT scoreboard

Wishy wrote:

1/4 play better because of how intense this map is

Zarerion wrote:

Wishy wrote:

1/4 play better because of how intense this map is

I'm glad this statement isn't only your opinion, but common se-

Oh wait.

Kynan wrote:

gimme my S damn it ! (Aqo so pro BTW <3)