Niva wrote:
Well, my opinion:
As I said in forum PM, what I'm worried about isn't the difficulty gap, but there are three Insanes...
Well, these suggestions are meant to lower the diffs (not hitsounding mod/aesthetic mod/etc) :
[General]
-> Rename Hard to Challenging (or something like that) and Insane to Hard, it's not that hard imo... Fixed~
-> Also, just mentioning, I don't think you should include skin creator in tags (:Fixed. thanks for remind :p
[Insane][Lunatic]
- 00:33:488 (1) - Add circle here, and:
- 00:34:150 (x) - Start the spinner here
- 00:36:802 (x) - Start the second spinner here, it should follow the piano (: changed~
- 00:42:567 (1,2) - ...maybe you can start (1) in the center here and put (2) around ~y:244? (or a manual stacking from the bottom or bottom-right should flow well also, because your next pattern are flowing upward) changed~
- 01:23:967 (1,2,3) - ...simplify the rhythm like this? I don't hear much instrument o.o nice>< fixed
- 01:37:017 (7) - ...not really a suggestion to keep the diff lower, but I feel this will be much more intuitive if put in ~x:170 y:348 (more to the left) because (7,1)'s spacing is quite tricky here (: ok~
- 01:56:367 (6) - New combo, again for intuitivity added
- 02:14:067 (4) - Replace into a single circle? The instrument isn't that hectic... i think it's ok to follow the rings from instrument, and it is also symmetrical with the last slider. no change for now
- 02:49:167 (1,2) - This spacing looks too far o.o decreased~
- 03:10:617 (4) - Well, I believe splitting this into two separate circles (possibly stacked) will give a better feeling from the instrument (also more intuitive spacing)... fixed~ and stacked
- 03:28:167 (1) - Err, I don't really get this slider, symmetry like this plays better imo: good. changed :p
- 03:43:617 (1,2) - Try to get these two stacked in ~x:139 y:288 instead? imo it'll be more intuitive because there's no sudden jump (like you currently did in (1,2)) stacked~
(again, they're just suggestion for diff spread)
- 00:33:488 (1,1) - Same as Insane all fixed~
- 00:45:417 (2) - This note can be deleted though (and remove (1)'s new combo afterwards) i think it's fun to play because the intrument is furious
- 00:57:417 (9,1) - Uhm, I do believe you can make this triangle jump smaller by stacking (1) to (7) instead of (5)... But I don't think it'll be more fun to play ._. yea fixed
- 01:11:742 (2) - Remove this note to kill the triple? imo it'll play better if no triple here because of your next blue (1,2)'s jump~ i think it follows the music better
- 01:23:367 (1) - For me it's better if you put this around ~y:293 (vertical formation) because you're somehow forcing a player to do a stack after jump here, which plays quite unnatural... fixed~ but swapped (1,2) for a more comfy spacing :3
- 01:35:742 (6) - Err, this quintuple is definitely too much here orz, the fourth note isn't required imo to fit the music... the flute is continuous down, so i think it is fine for now, and it is also more interesting and fluency imo :3
- 01:40:617 (1,1) - Hmm, why new combo so early? (it may be beautiful, yep, but it's kinda hard to see especially for HR players because there are no followpoint) forgot to remove it >_< fixed
- 02:02:442 (3) - ...definitely not very intuitive to read orz, at least make this slider face another direction (up-right or up-left) face to up-right~
- 02:05:667 (9,10,11) - Uhm, I don't think this triple plays really well here, it's kinda hard (I prefer a jump here without (10), it plays much better before the spinner imo) removed (10) and made a jump between (8,9,10,11) :3
- 02:08:592 (1) - Start the spinner either here or 02:08:667? I'm very sure there's nothing on 1/4 after previous spinner... yes but i like this pattern ;-;
- 02:30:042 (7) - Again, this note can be deleted because no instrument here... Your call though (: same as above~
- 03:53:667 (1) - This is just personal issue, but I think light blue combo color will be more intuitive (because previously it was blue) changed~
- 04:06:267 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (uhm, yes, I think this is the hardest part orz ._.) - maybe change into repeating slider? (or circle + short 1/4 slider) i think the slider can not express well for the ardent part
- 04:13:783 (3,4) - Err, what happened to spacing here o.o reduced a bit to make them looks reasonable :3
I'm still tired after OWC orz... I'm not happy with this mod to be honest >_<
I hope this helps, good luck Strawberry~ it's a great help! thank you Niva-Chan ^^
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All fixed:3wcx19911123 wrote:
[A32's Hard]
02:00:567 (1) - I'd like to volume this slider up a bit, it's kinda quiet now
02:11:217 - make this slider repeat at here and end at 02:11:667 - , fit the song much better
02:17:067 (4) - move this note to 02:17:217 - ? fit the song better imo
02:19:467 (4) - and move this one to 02:19:617 - if you fixed ^
03:53:817 (5) - this slow down is really hard to read, I suggest use special shape with 1.0x speed. and please make the spacing between 4 and 5 is the same as between 5 and 1(don't see number but see pattern itself)
Thanks for modding~
http://puu.sh/1tTpA
Thank you Taiko Mod! completion~!
i'll give changed map to StrawberryXD
i'll give changed map to StrawberryXD
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
general
Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
- BPM/offset (red timing section) must be consistency.
Twice's Normal
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- duplicate timeline:
04:13:221 - (not change slider velocity. only change hitsound/volume so please remove green line.)
04:15:481 - ^
04:16:308 - ^
04:17:196 - ^
04:17:657 - ^
04:18:157 - ^
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 02:26:967 (2) - [rhythm issue] remove this reverse and let this slider end at 02:27:417 - ? It's more suitable for this part. (correspond other part like:02:29:817 - ,02:32:217 - 02:37:017 - ...etc)
- 03:50:067 (3) - [nazi] I'm so sorry to nazi it. but it's a awkward slider~you can make it smooth more. I will give you code:code
於是把這個反轉後會與(1)的形狀貼齊336,192,230067,2,0,B|296:102|400:56,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,56,230967,1,0,0:0:0 - 04:16:297 (1) - unsnap slider.
- 04:17:196 (2) - ^
A32's Challenging
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- duplicate timeline:
04:13:221 - (not change slider velocity. only change hitsound/volume so please remove green line.)
04:15:481 - ^
04:16:308 - ^
04:17:196 - ^
04:17:657 - ^
04:18:157 - ^
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:32:814 (5) - unsnap slider end (
手動算吧...算好了給你吧↓):400,268,32814,2,0,B|448:240|504:272|504:272|484:232,1,149
- 00:48:267 (2) - back 1/2 rhythm? (looks you follow the flute before, so... keep it. :>)
- 01:21:567 (1,2,3,4) - pattern shape...
- 00:48:267 (2) - obvious rhythm. recommend to this sentence (2 at 01:43:767 - ):
- 02:43:017 - rhythm issue. move 02:43:167 (4) - to 02:43:017 - ? 可以明顯的看出02:43:017 - 是重音 而02:43:167 - 是沒有打擊(鼓/vocal)的 所以建議改一下
- 02:49:167 (6,1) - actually, It's not a good pattern (reverse cover by 02:49:767 - )
- 03:32:367 (2) - wrong rhythm. it's 3/4 not 1/3 rhythm. it must be fixed.
Hard
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
- 01:33:867 (6) - (move to x124,y172 avoid overlaps.)
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:49:617 (3,4) - 說實話的 這個pattern讓我感覺到flow 缺角了Orz... 試試看這樣吧:
Lunatic
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:11:217 (7,8,9,10) - Err... a bit confuse rhythm for play. after all, it's a calm part. so you can try to used slider avoid this issue:
- 00:47:767 (8,9) - 對這種自創的節奏(非音樂本身的 1/6 or 1/3)強烈建議使用slider slider的好處是好打 而且對player也可以了解你所想表達的節奏
- 00:57:567 (1) - 遮得我都看不到了(combo color+300.png)... 給幾個方案:
1.) move to x172,y88 ((這地方是重音 用finish及jump來表現這個位置
2.) remove this note ((事實上 這個位置的聲音本來就不大 而不加note本來就很適合 - 01:13:842 - & 01:13:917 - add note? make it consistent with 01:09:342 (7,8) - ,01:11:742 (2,3) -
- 01:46:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - :< (2,5)reverse section & (3,4)reverse section to make it counterclockwise flow.
抱歉我是右撇子 突然轉成順時鐘的打法實在很不流順 而且非常拗手...>_> - 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - same as 00:47:767 (8,9) -
- 03:33:042 - (rhythm issue) obvious have a beat. give you 2 possible solutions:
BakaNA
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 01:19:917 (3,4) - 讓位置相反感覺會比較好打 說實話就是繞圈吧...
- 01:26:667 (1) - 拿掉這個NC 這個NC是多餘的而且會妨礙讀圖 事實上擺在這個位置上就會妨礙讀圖了
- 01:34:017 (3,1) - 讓位置相反感覺會比較好打
- 02:59:667 (3,1,2) - 間距過於confuse. 02:57:717 (5,6,2,3) - 節奏不同 間距卻十分相近 而且要用NC提示應該加在02:59:667 (3) - 才對吧lol
- 03:31:167 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 說實話...這誰看的懂啦ヾ(*`Д´*)ﾉ (摔) 這diff跳這麼多 而03:32:367 (1,2,3,4,1) - 間距隨時在變 這節奏已經無法用間距看出來了。
哭哭喔~Challenging難度還需要多加強...
就這樣了Orz...
Topic Starter
抱歉回复晚了>< 学校好多事情。。没有说的就是改了~非常感谢mod><spboxer3 wrote:
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
- BPM/offset (red timing section) must be consistency.
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)mapping
- 01:33:867 (6) - (move to x124,y172 avoid overlaps.)
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)說說對這個diff的看法吧 事實上這diff做的不錯 音效和節奏的部分都挺合音樂 但是關於排列的地方就相對比較沒有這麼突出了. 注意各個物件之間的連結flow 例如:01:25:017 (4,5,6) - 5,6之間連結的不錯 但是4,5之間看來就不是那麼好了 再稍微調整下吧.
- 00:49:617 (3,4) - 說實話的 這個pattern讓我感覺到flow 缺角了Orz... 試試看這樣吧:
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:11:217 (7,8,9,10) - Err... a bit confuse rhythm for play. after all, it's a calm part. so you can try to used slider avoid this issue:
- 00:47:767 (8,9) - 對這種自創的節奏(非音樂本身的 1/6 or 1/3)強烈建議使用slider slider的好處是好打 而且對player也可以了解你所想表達的節奏 感觉这里spacing还蛮好认啊。。><而且改成slider的话感觉有点太简单(PIA
- 00:57:567 (1) - 遮得我都看不到了(combo color+300.png)... 給幾個方案:
1.) move to x172,y88 ((這地方是重音 用finish及jump來表現這個位置 √
2.) remove this note ((事實上 這個位置的聲音本來就不大 而不加note本來就很適合- 01:13:842 - & 01:13:917 - add note? make it consistent with 01:09:342 (7,8) - ,01:11:742 (2,3) -
- 01:46:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - :< (2,5)reverse section & (3,4)reverse section to make it counterclockwise flow.
抱歉我是右撇子 突然轉成順時鐘的打法實在很不流順 而且非常拗手...>_>- 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - same as 00:47:767 (8,9) -
- 03:33:042 - (rhythm issue) obvious have a beat. give you 2 possible solutions:
spboxer3 wrote:
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)mapping
- duplicate timeline:
04:13:221 - (not change slider velocity. only change hitsound/volume so please remove green line.)
04:15:481 - ^
04:16:308 - ^
04:17:196 - ^
04:17:657 - ^
04:18:157 - ^诶...还要换vol于是就先不改了..
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:32:814 (5) - unsnap slider end (
手動算吧...算好了給你吧↓):400,268,32814,2,0,B|448:240|504:272|504:272|484:232,1,149fixed!- 00:48:267 (2) - back 1/2 rhythm? (looks you follow the flute before, so... keep it. :>)nice~
- 01:21:567 (1,2,3,4) - pattern shape...changed a bit :3
- 00:48:267 (2) - obvious rhythm. recommend to this sentence (2 at 01:43:767 - ):
fixed~- 02:43:017 - rhythm issue. move 02:43:167 (4) - to 02:43:017 - ? 可以明顯的看出02:43:017 - 是重音 而02:43:167 - 是沒有打擊(鼓/vocal)的 所以建議改一下
- 02:49:167 (6,1) - actually, It's not a good pattern (reverse cover by 02:49:767 - )changed a bit
- 03:32:367 (2) - wrong rhythm. it's 3/4 not 1/3 rhythm. it must be fixed.fixed!(
话说刚才那个unsnap居然没用红字!
http://puu.sh/1zlOD Thanks for modding a lot~~
Topic Starter
Milkshake wrote:
irc moddo
long long log
22:47 Strawberry: thanks ^^
22:48 Milkshake: 00:13:617- cancel repeat, it doesn't fit the music
22:48 Strawberry: yea
22:48 Strawberry: done
22:48 Strawberry: :3
22:48 Milkshake: 00:16:488- RNC,
22:48 Milkshake: 00:17:983-NC
22:49 Strawberry: k
22:49 Milkshake: 00:19:331- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522094 i think it'd make nice flow to curve those sliders
22:51 Strawberry: umm~~i'd prefer to keep my idea~ sry~
22:52 Milkshake: 00:43:167- you know, the angle of those sliders is pretty high, i don't know how i didn't combobreak.. i mean, they look cool, but it ruins
22:52 Milkshake: the whole flow if you ask mr
22:52 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522098 i think slider like this could help since it gives more fast to the next one, or something like that
22:52 Milkshake: but i think you can keep it since it looks nice
22:54 Strawberry: k. i'll try to make it plays better~
22:55 Milkshake: 00:51:417(7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522101 maybe like this? this jump was kinda difficult
22:55 Milkshake: the bpm is kinda fast and.. i think it ruined the flow.
22:56 Milkshake: 00:53:142- a bit overmapped. same goes to 00:55:542-
22:56 Milkshake: since you made lot of streams and stacks, kinda overused them at some points
22:57 Strawberry: yea you got it
22:57 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1znp1 ~
22:58 Milkshake: 00:56:292- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522105 please make it like this. the flow from 4 to 1,2,3 is totally broken like that
22:59 Strawberry: done~
23:00 Milkshake: 01:09:342- i find those blue-tick notes very overmapped too
23:00 Milkshake: you made it some more times
23:00 Milkshake: maybe i'm deaf but i think it's kinda hard ;_;"
23:02 Strawberry: umm
23:02 Milkshake: 01:16:392(6,7,8)- maybe stack to 01:16:767-? it looks and plays better
23:02 Strawberry: but it plays fun and not very overmapped imo~
23:03 Milkshake: yeah, i think you can keep it where i mentioned but delete in 01:11:742, can't explain why it plays better
23:04 Milkshake: 01:13:842- sounds out of rhythm..
23:04 Strawberry: yea~
23:04 Strawberry: ok
23:04 Milkshake: 01:13:917- same. i think you can stack 1 to the end of 7
23:05 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522113 :3 like this
23:05 Milkshake: create cool pattern with the next combo too~
23:06 Milkshake: 01:19:917- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522114 maybe like this? sorry for lame stacking lol, just wanted to give the idea
23:06 Strawberry: nice x3
23:07 Strawberry: umm, i want to make a repeat move here~
23:09 Milkshake: 01:26:367(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- this pattern is pretty hard, i did something else
23:09 Milkshake: sec, i'll take some screenshots
23:10 Strawberry: np
23:10 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522118 like this maybe? 8 i stacked with the othesr
23:14 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522126 maybe like this? (3 stacked under 2- and (3,4,5,6,1) creates a pattern of >
23:14 Milkshake: which is a bit better
23:15 Milkshake: 01:29:817- blue ticks isn't good here. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522128
23:16 Strawberry: ok~
23:16 Milkshake: 01:30:717- maybe a little slider+reverse here? it throws you back to 1 and it plays better
23:16 Milkshake: if need a screenshot tell me
23:18 Strawberry: changed :3
23:18 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522130 also make 1 more like that, better connection to 2. i got the triple of 3,4,5 upper too
23:18 Milkshake: 01:34:617- blue tick doesn't fit ;_;
23:19 Milkshake: 01:35:517(3,4,5,6,7)- why here 5 notes but in next combo only 3? i think you better delete 6 and move 7 a bit down ofc because
23:19 Milkshake: spacing
23:21 Strawberry: i think it plays well ;_; keep for now..
23:21 Milkshake: 01:37:017- same issue with blue tick..i think there are only some points in the song where it fits. but it ruins the rhyhm like that imo. if
23:21 Milkshake: you wanna change, this- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522134 could be good
23:21 Milkshake: oh wait
23:21 Milkshake: ignore it
23:21 Milkshake: it's fine nvm @_@;; heard again
23:22 Milkshake: 01:39:042- overmapped :v
23:22 Strawberry: yeah it's really a overmapped diff :p
23:22 Milkshake: yeah lol it's not so nice D:
23:22 Milkshake: sometimes it's fun
23:23 Milkshake: but it's a bit too much, i hardly could pass it with A
23:23 Milkshake: hehe
23:23 Milkshake: and i passed it once already
23:23 Strawberry: xp
23:23 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522138 maybe likes this could be nice (01:39:417)
23:24 Strawberry: good :3
23:24 Milkshake: 01:44:142- delete maybe?
23:25 Strawberry: there has a beat i think Q_Q
23:25 Milkshake: nah there isn't, but okay
23:26 Strawberry: :p
23:26 Milkshake: 01:50:967(3,4)- did those on 1/3 rhythm like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522143 but i'm not sure if it's alright
23:26 Milkshake: i somewhat think it fits, but check this
23:27 Strawberry: ok~
23:27 Milkshake: it fits?
23:27 Strawberry: i see~
23:28 Milkshake: 01:52:767- maybe make this stream as 1 like? like, straighten? it's a bit hard :d
23:29 Strawberry: nope Q_Q, i test in playback rate 50% and 1/3 rhythm is out
23:29 Milkshake: oh
23:29 Milkshake: idk why it sounds okay with 100% aha
23:29 Strawberry: lol
23:30 Milkshake: 01:56:667-http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522148 maybe like this?
23:31 Strawberry: done~
23:31 Milkshake: 01:56:967- whistle and not clap
23:31 Milkshake: 01:57:267- clap not whistle lol
23:32 Strawberry: x3 fixed
23:32 Milkshake: you did more hitsounds mistakes here
23:32 Milkshake: wait
23:32 Milkshake: @_@
23:32 Strawberry: oh ><
23:33 Milkshake: 01:58:767-clap
23:33 Milkshake: 01:59:367- whistle only
23:34 Strawberry: done~
23:34 Milkshake: 01:58:467- clap
23:36 Milkshake: 02:04:917- i think long stream would fit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522154 ignore the ugly stream, just example lol
23:37 Milkshake: 02:08:067- end spinner here, 02:08:217- start new one here~
23:37 Milkshake: 02:09:867- just suggestion, i think you better stack 1,2 with the others aswell
23:38 Strawberry: fixed~
23:38 Strawberry: and 02:09:867 (1,2) - , i think the pattern is fun to play~
23:38 Milkshake: 02:15:267(1,2)- it's silent here, i think you should delete both.
23:39 Milkshake: i know you wanted to create more rhythm here but i think it's kinda useless
23:39 Milkshake: lol
23:39 Milkshake: well not exactly silent but i think a pause here is nice
23:40 Strawberry: x3 umm~hesitate this
23:40 Milkshake: 02:15:867- lol big jump, big big yeah but i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522159 is better
23:40 Milkshake: it's not 1/1 rhythm so it's a bit hard
23:41 Milkshake: ah about the silent part, i think it's just nice
ofc you don't have to change it, but idk how to explain why it sounds better
23:41 Strawberry: well :3
23:42 Milkshake: if you wanna keep them, i think stacking them to 1 is a good idea
23:42 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522161 like this~~
23:42 Strawberry: nice~ changed~
23:43 Milkshake: :3 okay
23:45 Milkshake: 02:18:417- i think this jump is kinda too big.. i did this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522169
23:45 Milkshake: created a star, it looks cool and plays better hehe
23:46 Milkshake: 02:25:992- overmapped ;_______;
23:46 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522171 did like this
23:46 Strawberry: changed~
23:47 Milkshake: 02:26:217(1,2,3,4,5,6)- cool pattern haha
23:47 Strawberry: ok deleted 7 and moved the next circle to 2's tail
23:47 Milkshake: okay~~
23:47 Strawberry: xp
23:48 Milkshake: 02:28:167- stack 9,10 with 11
23:48 Milkshake: better cool jump ;D
23:48 Strawberry: k~
23:49 Milkshake: 02:30:867- remove clap
23:50 Milkshake: 02:30:792- overmappu >~<
23:50 Strawberry: ~removed
23:50 Milkshake: 02:33:267- stack 1,2 with 3, next combo stack 5,6 under 4
23:50 Milkshake: it's kinda annoying pattern..
23:51 Milkshake: 02:34:767- move to x:448 y:344
23:52 Milkshake: 02:39:942- remove maybe?
23:56 Milkshake: that's it i guess
23:56 Milkshake: want me to go over NC?
23:57 Strawberry: yes plz~ ^^
23:57 Milkshake: okay
23:57 Milkshake: 00:20:679- RNC
23:58 Milkshake: 00:22:702- RNC 00:23:376-NC
23:58 Strawberry: done :>
23:59 Milkshake: 00:26:072- RNC
23:59 Milkshake: 00:33:488- i think you should remove the note
00:00 Strawberry: ok~
00:00 Milkshake: 00:44:367-RNC
00:01 Milkshake: 00:45:267-RNC if you want
00:01 Milkshake: 00:46:767- RNC
00:02 Milkshake: 00:53:517-RNC
00:03 Milkshake: 00:55:167 NC
00:03 Milkshake: 00:55:467-RNC
00:03 Strawberry: done~
00:04 Milkshake: 01:08:367-RNC
00:04 Milkshake: 01:10:767-RNC
00:04 Milkshake: 01:11:367-RNC too
00:05 Strawberry: done~
00:05 Milkshake: 01:14:667-RNC
00:05 Milkshake: 01:15:567-NC
00:05 Strawberry: done~
00:06 Milkshake: 01:17:667-RNC
00:06 Milkshake: 01:18:117-RNC
00:06 Milkshake: 01:19:917-RNC
00:06 Strawberry: done~
00:06 Milkshake: 01:22:167-RNC
00:07 Milkshake: 01:23:367-RNC
00:07 Milkshake: lol so many RNC D::::::
00:07 Strawberry: yea a bit abuse ;_;
00:08 Milkshake: i think it's better with long combos at those parts but dw
00:08 Milkshake: the chorus is better :v
00:08 Strawberry: yap :3
00:08 Milkshake: 01:39:417-NC
00:09 Milkshake: 01:40:017-RNC
00:09 Strawberry: i used to set nc randomly lool
00:09 Strawberry: done~
00:09 Milkshake: yeahhhh
00:09 Milkshake: it's very random lol
00:09 Milkshake: suggestion:
00:09 Strawberry: huh
00:09 Milkshake: 01:46:167-RNC
00:09 Milkshake: 01:46:767- NC
00:09 Milkshake: i think it's cool
00:09 Milkshake: :O
00:09 Milkshake: but it's fine like that too
00:10 Milkshake: 01:50:367-RNC
00:10 Milkshake: 01:50:967-NC
00:10 Strawberry: maybe a bit confuse if i rnc here 01:46:167 - ? ;_;
00:11 Milkshake: yeah i told you it's suggestion
00:11 Milkshake: it's fine
00:11 Strawberry: gotcha~
00:11 Milkshake: 02:01:017-NC
00:11 Milkshake: 02:01:467-RNC
00:11 Milkshake: 02:01:917-RNC
00:12 Strawberry: done :3
00:13 Milkshake: nice that in the end the combos are good
00:13 Milkshake: lol
00:14 Strawberry: xp
00:14 Milkshake: yeah all is fine
00:14 Milkshake: that's it~~~~~~
22:48 Milkshake: 00:13:617- cancel repeat, it doesn't fit the music
22:48 Strawberry: yea
22:48 Strawberry: done
22:48 Strawberry: :3
22:48 Milkshake: 00:16:488- RNC,
22:48 Milkshake: 00:17:983-NC
22:49 Strawberry: k
22:49 Milkshake: 00:19:331- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522094 i think it'd make nice flow to curve those sliders
22:51 Strawberry: umm~~i'd prefer to keep my idea~ sry~
22:52 Milkshake: 00:43:167- you know, the angle of those sliders is pretty high, i don't know how i didn't combobreak.. i mean, they look cool, but it ruins
22:52 Milkshake: the whole flow if you ask mr
22:52 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522098 i think slider like this could help since it gives more fast to the next one, or something like that
22:52 Milkshake: but i think you can keep it since it looks nice
22:54 Strawberry: k. i'll try to make it plays better~
22:55 Milkshake: 00:51:417(7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522101 maybe like this? this jump was kinda difficult
22:55 Milkshake: the bpm is kinda fast and.. i think it ruined the flow.
22:56 Milkshake: 00:53:142- a bit overmapped. same goes to 00:55:542-
22:56 Milkshake: since you made lot of streams and stacks, kinda overused them at some points
22:57 Strawberry: yea you got it
22:57 Strawberry: http://puu.sh/1znp1 ~
22:58 Milkshake: 00:56:292- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522105 please make it like this. the flow from 4 to 1,2,3 is totally broken like that
22:59 Strawberry: done~
23:00 Milkshake: 01:09:342- i find those blue-tick notes very overmapped too
23:00 Milkshake: you made it some more times
23:00 Milkshake: maybe i'm deaf but i think it's kinda hard ;_;"
23:02 Strawberry: umm
23:02 Milkshake: 01:16:392(6,7,8)- maybe stack to 01:16:767-? it looks and plays better
23:02 Strawberry: but it plays fun and not very overmapped imo~
23:03 Milkshake: yeah, i think you can keep it where i mentioned but delete in 01:11:742, can't explain why it plays better
23:04 Milkshake: 01:13:842- sounds out of rhythm..
23:04 Strawberry: yea~
23:04 Strawberry: ok
23:04 Milkshake: 01:13:917- same. i think you can stack 1 to the end of 7
23:05 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522113 :3 like this
23:05 Milkshake: create cool pattern with the next combo too~
23:06 Milkshake: 01:19:917- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522114 maybe like this? sorry for lame stacking lol, just wanted to give the idea
23:06 Strawberry: nice x3
23:07 Strawberry: umm, i want to make a repeat move here~
23:09 Milkshake: 01:26:367(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- this pattern is pretty hard, i did something else
23:09 Milkshake: sec, i'll take some screenshots
23:10 Strawberry: np
23:10 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522118 like this maybe? 8 i stacked with the othesr
23:14 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522126 maybe like this? (3 stacked under 2- and (3,4,5,6,1) creates a pattern of >
23:14 Milkshake: which is a bit better
23:15 Milkshake: 01:29:817- blue ticks isn't good here. maybe like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522128
23:16 Strawberry: ok~
23:16 Milkshake: 01:30:717- maybe a little slider+reverse here? it throws you back to 1 and it plays better
23:16 Milkshake: if need a screenshot tell me
23:18 Strawberry: changed :3
23:18 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522130 also make 1 more like that, better connection to 2. i got the triple of 3,4,5 upper too
23:18 Milkshake: 01:34:617- blue tick doesn't fit ;_;
23:19 Milkshake: 01:35:517(3,4,5,6,7)- why here 5 notes but in next combo only 3? i think you better delete 6 and move 7 a bit down ofc because
23:19 Milkshake: spacing
23:21 Strawberry: i think it plays well ;_; keep for now..
23:21 Milkshake: 01:37:017- same issue with blue tick..i think there are only some points in the song where it fits. but it ruins the rhyhm like that imo. if
23:21 Milkshake: you wanna change, this- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522134 could be good
23:21 Milkshake: oh wait
23:21 Milkshake: ignore it
23:21 Milkshake: it's fine nvm @_@;; heard again
23:22 Milkshake: 01:39:042- overmapped :v
23:22 Strawberry: yeah it's really a overmapped diff :p
23:22 Milkshake: yeah lol it's not so nice D:
23:22 Milkshake: sometimes it's fun
23:23 Milkshake: but it's a bit too much, i hardly could pass it with A
23:23 Milkshake: hehe
23:23 Milkshake: and i passed it once already
23:23 Strawberry: xp
23:23 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522138 maybe likes this could be nice (01:39:417)
23:24 Strawberry: good :3
23:24 Milkshake: 01:44:142- delete maybe?
23:25 Strawberry: there has a beat i think Q_Q
23:25 Milkshake: nah there isn't, but okay
23:26 Strawberry: :p
23:26 Milkshake: 01:50:967(3,4)- did those on 1/3 rhythm like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522143 but i'm not sure if it's alright
23:26 Milkshake: i somewhat think it fits, but check this
23:27 Strawberry: ok~
23:27 Milkshake: it fits?
23:27 Strawberry: i see~
23:28 Milkshake: 01:52:767- maybe make this stream as 1 like? like, straighten? it's a bit hard :d
23:29 Strawberry: nope Q_Q, i test in playback rate 50% and 1/3 rhythm is out
23:29 Milkshake: oh
23:29 Milkshake: idk why it sounds okay with 100% aha
23:29 Strawberry: lol
23:30 Milkshake: 01:56:667-http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522148 maybe like this?
23:31 Strawberry: done~
23:31 Milkshake: 01:56:967- whistle and not clap
23:31 Milkshake: 01:57:267- clap not whistle lol
23:32 Strawberry: x3 fixed
23:32 Milkshake: you did more hitsounds mistakes here
23:32 Milkshake: wait
23:32 Milkshake: @_@
23:32 Strawberry: oh ><
23:33 Milkshake: 01:58:767-clap
23:33 Milkshake: 01:59:367- whistle only
23:34 Strawberry: done~
23:34 Milkshake: 01:58:467- clap
23:36 Milkshake: 02:04:917- i think long stream would fit http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522154 ignore the ugly stream, just example lol
23:37 Milkshake: 02:08:067- end spinner here, 02:08:217- start new one here~
23:37 Milkshake: 02:09:867- just suggestion, i think you better stack 1,2 with the others aswell
23:38 Strawberry: fixed~
23:38 Strawberry: and 02:09:867 (1,2) - , i think the pattern is fun to play~
23:38 Milkshake: 02:15:267(1,2)- it's silent here, i think you should delete both.
23:39 Milkshake: i know you wanted to create more rhythm here but i think it's kinda useless
23:39 Milkshake: lol
23:39 Milkshake: well not exactly silent but i think a pause here is nice
23:40 Strawberry: x3 umm~hesitate this
23:40 Milkshake: 02:15:867- lol big jump, big big yeah but i think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522159 is better
23:40 Milkshake: it's not 1/1 rhythm so it's a bit hard
23:41 Milkshake: ah about the silent part, i think it's just nice
ofc you don't have to change it, but idk how to explain why it sounds better23:41 Strawberry: well :3
23:42 Milkshake: if you wanna keep them, i think stacking them to 1 is a good idea
23:42 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522161 like this~~
23:42 Strawberry: nice~ changed~
23:43 Milkshake: :3 okay
23:45 Milkshake: 02:18:417- i think this jump is kinda too big.. i did this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522169
23:45 Milkshake: created a star, it looks cool and plays better hehe
23:46 Milkshake: 02:25:992- overmapped ;_______;
23:46 Milkshake: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/522171 did like this
23:46 Strawberry: changed~
23:47 Milkshake: 02:26:217(1,2,3,4,5,6)- cool pattern haha
23:47 Strawberry: ok deleted 7 and moved the next circle to 2's tail
23:47 Milkshake: okay~~
23:47 Strawberry: xp
23:48 Milkshake: 02:28:167- stack 9,10 with 11
23:48 Milkshake: better cool jump ;D
23:48 Strawberry: k~
23:49 Milkshake: 02:30:867- remove clap
23:50 Milkshake: 02:30:792- overmappu >~<
23:50 Strawberry: ~removed
23:50 Milkshake: 02:33:267- stack 1,2 with 3, next combo stack 5,6 under 4
23:50 Milkshake: it's kinda annoying pattern..
23:51 Milkshake: 02:34:767- move to x:448 y:344
23:52 Milkshake: 02:39:942- remove maybe?
23:56 Milkshake: that's it i guess
23:56 Milkshake: want me to go over NC?
23:57 Strawberry: yes plz~ ^^
23:57 Milkshake: okay
23:57 Milkshake: 00:20:679- RNC
23:58 Milkshake: 00:22:702- RNC 00:23:376-NC
23:58 Strawberry: done :>
23:59 Milkshake: 00:26:072- RNC
23:59 Milkshake: 00:33:488- i think you should remove the note
00:00 Strawberry: ok~
00:00 Milkshake: 00:44:367-RNC
00:01 Milkshake: 00:45:267-RNC if you want
00:01 Milkshake: 00:46:767- RNC
00:02 Milkshake: 00:53:517-RNC
00:03 Milkshake: 00:55:167 NC
00:03 Milkshake: 00:55:467-RNC
00:03 Strawberry: done~
00:04 Milkshake: 01:08:367-RNC
00:04 Milkshake: 01:10:767-RNC
00:04 Milkshake: 01:11:367-RNC too
00:05 Strawberry: done~
00:05 Milkshake: 01:14:667-RNC
00:05 Milkshake: 01:15:567-NC
00:05 Strawberry: done~
00:06 Milkshake: 01:17:667-RNC
00:06 Milkshake: 01:18:117-RNC
00:06 Milkshake: 01:19:917-RNC
00:06 Strawberry: done~
00:06 Milkshake: 01:22:167-RNC
00:07 Milkshake: 01:23:367-RNC
00:07 Milkshake: lol so many RNC D::::::
00:07 Strawberry: yea a bit abuse ;_;
00:08 Milkshake: i think it's better with long combos at those parts but dw
00:08 Milkshake: the chorus is better :v
00:08 Strawberry: yap :3
00:08 Milkshake: 01:39:417-NC
00:09 Milkshake: 01:40:017-RNC
00:09 Strawberry: i used to set nc randomly lool
00:09 Strawberry: done~
00:09 Milkshake: yeahhhh
00:09 Milkshake: it's very random lol
00:09 Milkshake: suggestion:
00:09 Strawberry: huh
00:09 Milkshake: 01:46:167-RNC
00:09 Milkshake: 01:46:767- NC
00:09 Milkshake: i think it's cool
00:09 Milkshake: :O
00:09 Milkshake: but it's fine like that too
00:10 Milkshake: 01:50:367-RNC
00:10 Milkshake: 01:50:967-NC
00:10 Strawberry: maybe a bit confuse if i rnc here 01:46:167 - ? ;_;
00:11 Milkshake: yeah i told you it's suggestion
00:11 Milkshake: it's fine
00:11 Strawberry: gotcha~
00:11 Milkshake: 02:01:017-NC
00:11 Milkshake: 02:01:467-RNC
00:11 Milkshake: 02:01:917-RNC
00:12 Strawberry: done :3
00:13 Milkshake: nice that in the end the combos are good
00:13 Milkshake: lol
00:14 Strawberry: xp
00:14 Milkshake: yeah all is fine
00:14 Milkshake: that's it~~~~~~
thanks very much ><
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感觉草莓在我的心中就要超过LKs
AIBAT说红线还是不一致，最好自己检查下然后改改再找我，注意snap 0.0
Topic Starter
感谢提醒!~ 红线都修一致了~(wcx19911123 wrote:
AIBAT说红线还是不一致，最好自己检查下然后改改再找我，注意snap 0.0
nice
[A32's Challenging]
02:02:667 (2,1) - wrong spacing here
[jom's Taiko Oni]
00:41:967 - this section's volume in is tooooooo low.. use normal volume please..
[BakaNA]
03:41:217 (3,4) - ctrl+g, flow will be much better
call me back then
02:02:667 (2,1) - wrong spacing here
[jom's Taiko Oni]
00:41:967 - this section's volume in is tooooooo low.. use normal volume please..
[BakaNA]
03:41:217 (3,4) - ctrl+g, flow will be much better
call me back then
Topic Starter
All fixed. updated. :3wcx19911123 wrote:
[A32's Challenging]
02:02:667 (2,1) - wrong spacing here √
[jom's Taiko Oni]
00:41:967 - this section's volume in is tooooooo low.. use normal volume please.. √
[BakaNA]
03:41:217 (3,4) - ctrl+g, flow will be much better √
call me back then
泡了泡了!!
Lunatic Red Eyes Invisible Full Moon Imperishable Night th08 in tags pls (original theme + game)
Topic Starter
thanks for remind.!~ updatedBCI wrote:
Lunatic Red Eyes Invisible Full Moon Imperishable Night th08 in tags pls (original theme + game)
no kd
remove taiko bg please
taiko bg现在好像unrankable了
其他没啥了，删了叫我
edit: removed taiko bg, all other stuffs checked out, so
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remove taiko bg please
taiko bg现在好像unrankable了
其他没啥了，删了叫我
edit: removed taiko bg, all other stuffs checked out, so
bubbled
Topic Starter
thankyou wcx~
rank了rank了
Talked in IRC...
I don't feel very healthy today though, I hope I didn't miss anything while observing the map (:
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I don't feel very healthy today though, I hope I didn't miss anything while observing the map (:
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20:32 Niva: hi Strawberry, are you here? I'm checking your Rabbit map currently
20:32 Strawberry: yeayea i'm here~niva
20:32 Strawberry: thank you>< really
20:33 Niva: umm, I found something in Twice's Normal...
20:33 Strawberry: ok
20:33 Niva: 04:04:167 (2) - should be repeating 3/2 slider imo...
20:34 Niva: then 04:05:067 (3,1) - just move 1/2 after, and shorten the slider by 1/2
20:34 Niva: *spinner
20:34 Strawberry: yea
20:35 Strawberry: fixed~
20:35 Niva: well, I'll PM you again if I found something else though (:
20:35 Strawberry: alright~
20:40 Niva: A32's challenging:
20:40 Niva: the mapping is fine, but there are some places like
20:40 Strawberry: get
20:40 Strawberry: um
20:40 Niva: 02:45:567 (1) -
20:41 Niva: you can't stack inherit section and timing section at one time, except for slider speed change
20:41 Niva: just merge it into one red timing section
20:41 Strawberry: i see
20:42 Strawberry: so i just need to remove the inherit section right?
20:42 Niva: yep
20:42 Niva: and apply the volume/sampleset setting in the timing section (:
20:43 Strawberry: fixed~
20:43 Strawberry: i checked other place
20:44 Niva: (don't change that one on Twice's Normal though, it's used for 0.75x :3)
20:44 Strawberry: ok~
20:45 Niva: oh, Hard also uses .75x...
20:45 Strawberry: i saw~ kept them :p
20:45 Niva: change 00:33:488 (1) - on Hard and Lunatic though
20:46 Strawberry: changed :3
20:47 Niva: hmm, BakaNA also (33:488)
20:47 Niva: plus 02:59:967 (3) - on BakaNA
20:48 Niva: oh, BakaNA also have few places like that in the end...
20:48 Strawberry: i saw
20:49 Niva: okay (:
20:49 Strawberry: ok~ fixed xD
20:49 Niva: ok~ checking the map again now
20:52 Strawberry: ><
20:58 Niva: Lunatic:
20:59 Niva: 02:09:867 (1,2) - move higher to ~y:54
20:59 Niva: umm wait, I'm not sure where...
20:59 Niva: but it's just to make (1,2,3) spaced correctly in play mode (due to stacking's nature)
20:59 Strawberry: the spacing seems not balance ;_;
21:00 Strawberry: isee
21:00 Niva: (:
21:00 Strawberry: the notes passed so fast in test @@
21:00 Niva: yeah...
21:00 Niva: BakaNA looks so evil imo o.o
21:01 Strawberry: seems better that moving higher to y:54~ i changed
21:01 Strawberry: xD
21:01 Niva: okay
21:03 Niva: 42 million max score... orz o.o
21:03 Strawberry: yea but BakaNA is less than Lunatic /o/
21:19 Niva: yep, you can upload now~
21:19 Strawberry: x3 fine
21:19 Niva:
21:20 Strawberry: done~ :p
21:20 Niva: ok then, I have to redownload again (:
21:21 Strawberry: ^^
21:21 Niva: oh btw give me some cooldown time before recheck pls, I'm dizzy o.o
21:21 Strawberry: sure~ thank you
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共洗你啊！~
我是草莓腦殘粉
Topic Starter
thanks Niva.~ not only this time ><
and also thanks others who give me help about this map. arikatoo!!~
and also thanks others who give me help about this map. arikatoo!!~
www reisenn grats strawberry-san :3
屌毛为啥我泡的图全部隔天就rank
Gratz :3
哇 恭喜 :3
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the title has a terrible translation and obviously wrong. needs to be changed.
and wrong artist coincides too. Nakamura Masaki is the flutist so i think it cannot be artist.
Artist: Ranko (ランコ)
Title: Yoru Naku Usagi wa Yume wo Miru (夜啼く兎は夢を見る)
and wrong artist coincides too. Nakamura Masaki is the flutist so i think it cannot be artist.
Artist: Ranko (ランコ)
Title: Yoru Naku Usagi wa Yume wo Miru (夜啼く兎は夢を見る)
Confirmed. Please fix this and I will rerank this. Score won't be deleted.Melophobia wrote:
the title has a terrible translation and obviously wrong. needs to be changed.
and wrong artist coincides too. Nakamura Masaki is the flutist so i think it cannot be artist.
Artist: Ranko (ランコ)
Title: Yoru Naku Usagi wa Yume wo Miru (夜啼く兎は夢を見る)