fixed 好mod
Niva wrote:
Well, my opinion:
As I said in forum PM, what I'm worried about isn't the difficulty gap, but there are three Insanes...
Well, these suggestions are meant to lower the diffs (not hitsounding mod/aesthetic mod/etc) :
[General]
-> Rename Hard to Challenging (or something like that) and Insane to Hard, it's not that hard imo... Fixed~
-> Also, just mentioning, I don't think you should include skin creator in tags (:Fixed. thanks for remind :p
[Insane][Lunatic]
- 00:33:488 (1) - Add circle here, and:
- 00:34:150 (x) - Start the spinner here
- 00:36:802 (x) - Start the second spinner here, it should follow the piano (: changed~
- 00:42:567 (1,2) - ...maybe you can start (1) in the center here and put (2) around ~y:244? (or a manual stacking from the bottom or bottom-right should flow well also, because your next pattern are flowing upward) changed~
- 01:23:967 (1,2,3) - ...simplify the rhythm like this? I don't hear much instrument o.o nice>< fixed
- 01:37:017 (7) - ...not really a suggestion to keep the diff lower, but I feel this will be much more intuitive if put in ~x:170 y:348 (more to the left) because (7,1)'s spacing is quite tricky here (: ok~
- 01:56:367 (6) - New combo, again for intuitivity added
- 02:14:067 (4) - Replace into a single circle? The instrument isn't that hectic... i think it's ok to follow the rings from instrument, and it is also symmetrical with the last slider. no change for now
- 02:49:167 (1,2) - This spacing looks too far o.o decreased~
- 03:10:617 (4) - Well, I believe splitting this into two separate circles (possibly stacked) will give a better feeling from the instrument (also more intuitive spacing)... fixed~ and stacked
- 03:28:167 (1) - Err, I don't really get this slider, symmetry like this plays better imo: good. changed :p
- 03:43:617 (1,2) - Try to get these two stacked in ~x:139 y:288 instead? imo it'll be more intuitive because there's no sudden jump (like you currently did in (1,2)) stacked~
(again, they're just suggestion for diff spread)
- 00:33:488 (1,1) - Same as Insane all fixed~
- 00:45:417 (2) - This note can be deleted though (and remove (1)'s new combo afterwards) i think it's fun to play because the intrument is furious
- 00:57:417 (9,1) - Uhm, I do believe you can make this triangle jump smaller by stacking (1) to (7) instead of (5)... But I don't think it'll be more fun to play ._. yea fixed
- 01:11:742 (2) - Remove this note to kill the triple? imo it'll play better if no triple here because of your next blue (1,2)'s jump~ i think it follows the music better
- 01:23:367 (1) - For me it's better if you put this around ~y:293 (vertical formation) because you're somehow forcing a player to do a stack after jump here, which plays quite unnatural... fixed~ but swapped (1,2) for a more comfy spacing :3
- 01:35:742 (6) - Err, this quintuple is definitely too much here orz, the fourth note isn't required imo to fit the music... the flute is continuous down, so i think it is fine for now, and it is also more interesting and fluency imo :3
- 01:40:617 (1,1) - Hmm, why new combo so early? (it may be beautiful, yep, but it's kinda hard to see especially for HR players because there are no followpoint) forgot to remove it >_< fixed
- 02:02:442 (3) - ...definitely not very intuitive to read orz, at least make this slider face another direction (up-right or up-left) face to up-right~
- 02:05:667 (9,10,11) - Uhm, I don't think this triple plays really well here, it's kinda hard (I prefer a jump here without (10), it plays much better before the spinner imo) removed (10) and made a jump between (8,9,10,11) :3
- 02:08:592 (1) - Start the spinner either here or 02:08:667? I'm very sure there's nothing on 1/4 after previous spinner... yes but i like this pattern ;-;
- 02:30:042 (7) - Again, this note can be deleted because no instrument here... Your call though (: same as above~
- 03:53:667 (1) - This is just personal issue, but I think light blue combo color will be more intuitive (because previously it was blue) changed~
- 04:06:267 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (uhm, yes, I think this is the hardest part orz ._.) - maybe change into repeating slider? (or circle + short 1/4 slider) i think the slider can not express well for the ardent part
- 04:13:783 (3,4) - Err, what happened to spacing here o.o reduced a bit to make them looks reasonable :3
I'm still tired after OWC orz... I'm not happy with this mod to be honest >_<
I hope this helps, good luck Strawberry~ it's a great help! thank you Niva-Chan ^^
All fixed:3wcx19911123 wrote:
[A32's Hard]
02:00:567 (1) - I'd like to volume this slider up a bit, it's kinda quiet now
02:11:217 - make this slider repeat at here and end at 02:11:667 - , fit the song much better
02:17:067 (4) - move this note to 02:17:217 - ? fit the song better imo
02:19:467 (4) - and move this one to 02:19:617 - if you fixed ^
03:53:817 (5) - this slow down is really hard to read, I suggest use special shape with 1.0x speed. and please make the spacing between 4 and 5 is the same as between 5 and 1(don't see number but see pattern itself)
336,192,230067,2,0,B|296:102|400:56,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,56,230967,1,0,0:0:0
400,268,32814,2,0,B|448:240|504:272|504:272|484:232,1,149
抱歉回复晚了>< 学校好多事情。。没有说的就是改了~非常感谢mod><spboxer3 wrote:
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.general
Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
- BPM/offset (red timing section) must be consistency.
Hard
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)mapping
- 01:33:867 (6) - (move to x124,y172 avoid overlaps.)
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)說說對這個diff的看法吧 事實上這diff做的不錯 音效和節奏的部分都挺合音樂 但是關於排列的地方就相對比較沒有這麼突出了. 注意各個物件之間的連結flow 例如:01:25:017 (4,5,6) - 5,6之間連結的不錯 但是4,5之間看來就不是那麼好了 再稍微調整下吧.
- 00:49:617 (3,4) - 說實話的 這個pattern讓我感覺到flow 缺角了Orz... 試試看這樣吧:
Lunatic
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:11:217 (7,8,9,10) - Err... a bit confuse rhythm for play. after all, it's a calm part. so you can try to used slider avoid this issue:
- 00:47:767 (8,9) - 對這種自創的節奏(非音樂本身的 1/6 or 1/3)強烈建議使用slider slider的好處是好打 而且對player也可以了解你所想表達的節奏 感觉这里spacing还蛮好认啊。。><而且改成slider的话感觉有点太简单(PIA
- 00:57:567 (1) - 遮得我都看不到了(combo color+300.png)... 給幾個方案:
1.) move to x172,y88 ((這地方是重音 用finish及jump來表現這個位置 √
2.) remove this note ((事實上 這個位置的聲音本來就不大 而不加note本來就很適合- 01:13:842 - & 01:13:917 - add note? make it consistent with 01:09:342 (7,8) - ,01:11:742 (2,3) -
- 01:46:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - :< (2,5)reverse section & (3,4)reverse section to make it counterclockwise flow.
抱歉我是右撇子 突然轉成順時鐘的打法實在很不流順 而且非常拗手...>_>- 03:14:067 (7,8,9) - same as 00:47:767 (8,9) -
- 03:33:042 - (rhythm issue) obvious have a beat. give you 2 possible solutions:
spboxer3 wrote:
A32's Challenging
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)mapping
- duplicate timeline:
04:13:221 - (not change slider velocity. only change hitsound/volume so please remove green line.)
04:15:481 - ^
04:16:308 - ^
04:17:196 - ^
04:17:657 - ^
04:18:157 - ^诶...还要换vol于是就先不改了..
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:32:814 (5) - unsnap slider end (
手動算吧...算好了給你吧↓):400,268,32814,2,0,B|448:240|504:272|504:272|484:232,1,149fixed!- 00:48:267 (2) - back 1/2 rhythm? (looks you follow the flute before, so... keep it. :>)nice~
- 01:21:567 (1,2,3,4) - pattern shape...changed a bit :3
- 00:48:267 (2) - obvious rhythm. recommend to this sentence (2 at 01:43:767 - ):
fixed~- 02:43:017 - rhythm issue. move 02:43:167 (4) - to 02:43:017 - ? 可以明顯的看出02:43:017 - 是重音 而02:43:167 - 是沒有打擊(鼓/vocal)的 所以建議改一下
- 02:49:167 (6,1) - actually, It's not a good pattern (reverse cover by 02:49:767 - )changed a bit
- 03:32:367 (2) - wrong rhythm. it's 3/4 not 1/3 rhythm. it must be fixed.fixed!(
话说刚才那个unsnap居然没用红字!
Milkshake wrote:
irc moddo
感谢提醒!~ 红线都修一致了~(wcx19911123 wrote:
AIBAT说红线还是不一致,最好自己检查下然后改改再找我,注意snap 0.0
All fixed. updated. :3wcx19911123 wrote:
[A32's Challenging]
02:02:667 (2,1) - wrong spacing here √
[jom's Taiko Oni]
00:41:967 - this section's volume in is tooooooo low.. use normal volume please.. √
[BakaNA]
03:41:217 (3,4) - ctrl+g, flow will be much better √
call me back then
thanks for remind.!~ updatedBCI wrote:
Lunatic Red Eyes Invisible Full Moon Imperishable Night th08 in tags pls (original theme + game)
20:32 Niva: hi Strawberry, are you here? I'm checking your Rabbit map currently
20:32 Strawberry: yeayea i'm here~niva
20:32 Strawberry: thank you>< really
20:33 Niva: umm, I found something in Twice's Normal...
20:33 Strawberry: ok
20:33 Niva: 04:04:167 (2) - should be repeating 3/2 slider imo...
20:34 Niva: then 04:05:067 (3,1) - just move 1/2 after, and shorten the slider by 1/2
20:34 Niva: *spinner
20:34 Strawberry: yea
20:35 Strawberry: fixed~
20:35 Niva: well, I'll PM you again if I found something else though (:
20:35 Strawberry: alright~
20:40 Niva: A32's challenging:
20:40 Niva: the mapping is fine, but there are some places like
20:40 Strawberry: get
20:40 Strawberry: um
20:40 Niva: 02:45:567 (1) -
20:41 Niva: you can't stack inherit section and timing section at one time, except for slider speed change
20:41 Niva: just merge it into one red timing section
20:41 Strawberry: i see
20:42 Strawberry: so i just need to remove the inherit section right?
20:42 Niva: yep
20:42 Niva: and apply the volume/sampleset setting in the timing section (:
20:43 Strawberry: fixed~
20:43 Strawberry: i checked other place
20:44 Niva: (don't change that one on Twice's Normal though, it's used for 0.75x :3)
20:44 Strawberry: ok~
20:45 Niva: oh, Hard also uses .75x...
20:45 Strawberry: i saw~ kept them :p
20:45 Niva: change 00:33:488 (1) - on Hard and Lunatic though
20:46 Strawberry: changed :3
20:47 Niva: hmm, BakaNA also (33:488)
20:47 Niva: plus 02:59:967 (3) - on BakaNA
20:48 Niva: oh, BakaNA also have few places like that in the end...
20:48 Strawberry: i saw
20:49 Niva: okay (:
20:49 Strawberry: ok~ fixed xD
20:49 Niva: ok~ checking the map again now
20:52 Strawberry: ><
20:58 Niva: Lunatic:
20:59 Niva: 02:09:867 (1,2) - move higher to ~y:54
20:59 Niva: umm wait, I'm not sure where...
20:59 Niva: but it's just to make (1,2,3) spaced correctly in play mode (due to stacking's nature )
20:59 Strawberry: the spacing seems not balance ;_;
21:00 Strawberry: isee
21:00 Niva: (:
21:00 Strawberry: the notes passed so fast in test @@
21:00 Niva: yeah...
21:00 Niva: BakaNA looks so evil imo o.o
21:01 Strawberry: seems better that moving higher to y:54~ i changed
21:01 Strawberry: xD
21:01 Niva: okay
21:03 Niva: 42 million max score... orz o.o
21:03 Strawberry: yea but BakaNA is less than Lunatic /o/
21:19 Niva: yep, you can upload now~
21:19 Strawberry: x3 fine
21:19 Niva:
21:20 Strawberry: done~ :p
21:20 Niva: ok then, I have to redownload again (:
21:21 Strawberry: ^^
21:21 Niva: oh btw give me some cooldown time before recheck pls, I'm dizzy o.o
21:21 Strawberry: sure~ thank you
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