hibarirailwayz wrote:

via my PM
You shouldn't follow all my opinion; This is your MAP!

[249's Easy]
This is not problem for Rank but, I think, it had better unify Kiai Mode with other diff. no kiai times can be different if there's a guest diff in the map.

1. 00:50:309 (1,2,3) - this curve is not beautiful. I suggest this=00:51:958 (2) move x=340,Y=72.(this keep distance) Fixed it myself.
2. 02:45:035 ~ you use Normal whistle in this part, but This is not match for this song. I suggest you unify other diff. alright, but i'm gonna use custom whistles, not the claps.
3. 03:02:178 (5) - this is hidden by 03:00:200 (2). so this may be too difficult for easy map. ahh fixed.

This diff use little hard rhythm, but I can't find matters more.

sorry for this short mod. Good luck!

• [General]

1. For all difficulties, you have an unsnapped inherited (green) section at 03:04:144. Please resnap to 03:04:156!

hibarirailwayz wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:55:914 (3,4) - I think this rhythm confuse beginner player, different rhythm from other part such as this=00:36:463 (3,4). I think, using slider is the best! sure
2. 02:43:057 (3,4) - this is same contents as previous opinion. yeah

sorry for this short mod. Good luck!

01:16:353 (3,3) - for this kind of sliders, I offer using not-that-loud normal-whistle for slider-slides

UnderminE wrote:

OH SHIT SABER <3

[Easy]
Excuse me, where is kiai? kiai isn't in this diff because i don't find it exciting compared to kiai bursts.
00:55:914 (1,3) - not symmetrical and looks kinda ugly because of that ooh fixed...
02:12:068 - loud finish i don't see any problem with this. it shows that a new pattern is starting and a new pattern is gonna come up.
02:14:375 (1) - better shape it like 02:12:727 (2) - this one hmm...i find the flow awkward during gameplay if i do make this slider like (2).
02:31:848 (1) - make it symmetrical i don't see any problems with this, so i'm keeping it.


Okay I am done, good luck! \:D/

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

01:11:408 (1) - Add Finish at the end? no it sounds too loud and it feels unfitting during gameplay.
02:12:068 (1) - Finish sounds quite loud after soft hitsounds same reply as underminE.
02:24:925 (2) - (112,212) For distance it wouldn't be a problem. as long as the spacing is close to 1.00, then it's fine.


~

UnderminE wrote:

OH SHIT SABER <3


[normal]
01:16:353 (3,3) - wanna stack? nah
02:22:617 - pretty weird kiai start cant be helped, the beatpattern will be awkward if im not set it like this orz


[Hard]
Also same suggestion from Normal diff

01:16:353 (3,3) - for this kind of sliders, I offer using not-that-loud normal-whistle for slider-slides

i dont think this is quite effective for this part, almost same for each other so im not chaning this >_<

[Insane]
00:26:573 (1,1,1) - hm hm low-volumed whistle slider-slide on them? nah, the difference is kinda unnoticable so ill not add it >_<
01:00:035 (2,3) - how about stacking? no, the angle between 01:00:035 (2,3,1) - is a bit awkward later if i need to stack that 2

Okay I am done, good luck! \:D/

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal:

02:43:057 (3) - Finish doesn't sound well i dont think so, that finish is actually there on the song lol
02:46:353 (1) - ^ same as above >_<

1. fine

1. many ticks was larger than clap. so should change tick.wav volume. or change timing sections volume to 10% lower than now.
2. 00:22:947 (3,4) - [nazi] these actual distance is not same as before notes. 0.9x is better.
   
   
3. 01:19:320 (2) - [nazi] mistake? position of the section is not a straight.
4. 02:10:419 - add note here. this place has large volume on vocal imo.
5. 02:33:496 (3) - [nazi] same as 01:19:320 (2).

2. 02:22:617 - two inherited timing sections. You must remove one.
3. 02:40:090 (4,5,6) - placement suggestion
   
   
   this map had many stack. so this suggestion will be fit.

1. 00:18:331 (7,8,4) - [stupid]stack here.
2. 00:41:573 (6,1,2) - [nazi]these stack makes misalignment. move (1,2) to x475 y181. this will be fit.
3. 00:46:601 - two inherited timing sections. You must remove one.
4. 00:45:694 (3) - placement suggestion
   
   
   this placement makes good balance imo.
5. 02:15:364 (3,5,6) - [nazi]same as 00:41:573 (6,1,2). move to x86 y154.

1. fine!

1. good

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

mods

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[249's Easy]

1. many ticks was larger than clap. so should change tick.wav volume. or change timing sections volume to 10% lower than now. for now i'll keep it. i'd like to hear more opinions about this.
2. 00:22:947 (3,4) - [nazi] these actual distance is not same as before notes. 0.9x is better. ahh so that's the spacing. i've been trying to find the correct DS for this .
   
   
3. 01:19:320 (2) - [nazi] mistake? position of the section is not a straight. whoops...fixed ><.
4. 02:10:419 - add note here. this place has large volume on vocal imo. i was thinking about this...fixed.
5. 02:33:496 (3) - [nazi] same as 01:19:320 (2). orz fixed ;_;

stupid mod...orz don't say that, you helped me

awesome maps

good luck

CrestRising wrote:

Hi there. As by your (the mapper's) request.
* = Slightly more suggested than others.

249's Easy:
00:18:661 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) These don't use a 1.0X distance spacing. Was this intentional? yes because of the slowdown to 0.75, i have to increase the spacing.
01:04:815 (2,3,1) Not too big of a deal but, the spacing here looks a bit odd to me. You could try lining the endpoint of 2, 3, and 1 into a line or a recognizable pattern. i wouldn't find it exciting if i do that, so that's why it isn't aligned.
* 01:12:562 (2) You could make this symmetrical with 1, or you could copy the slider from 1 and rotate it 120 degrees sideways like http://puu.sh/1LQez no this is intentional. i'd rather do something different rather than make the sliders the same. it woulsn't look that exciting IMO.
01:27:562 (1,2) You could change the rhythm to http://puu.sh/1LQmT to keep consistency with 3 and 4. no it'll break the flow in the vocal if i do that.
01:36:134 (1) The sliders kind of short. I think it might be better if the spinner went across the entire time the artist says "begin", ending at around 01:39:678 or 01:39:430 fixed this myself. i extended the spinner a bit longer that you suggested and added a slider to make it flow smoother to the song.

Nice skin & SB. Good luck with mapping.

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

249's Easy
00:04:156 (3) - NC? no the combo would be too short for this part
01:07:452 (2) - NC? it'd be too hard for beginners considering the previous note is a (1).
01:19:320 (2) - This rhythm is kinda odd to me,I recommend to used like this? no because i feel that the repeat slider follows the vocals nicely. the slidertick going back follows the vocals nicely and the hitsound goes along with it IMO.

SPOILER

01:27:562 (1) - remove NC no this is where the lyrics change in this part of the song.
01:28:551 (2) - NC
02:02:837 (3) - NC? same as 00:04:156.
02:30:200 (4) - NC fixed.

good luck~

CrestRising wrote:

General:
03:03:496 (1) Just a thought, but maybe try ending it at maybe 03:07:782 nah, for this part i prefer to following the end of the piano instead the videos, since i feel it was more intuitive to follow piano instead


Normal:
00:12:068 (2) It would look better if you relocated it to x:256 y:128 not at all, i think this isnt really necessary since i dont feel any big change of the flow movement, and i kinda like a non symmetrical patterns like this >_<
00:33:496 (2) Just a thought, but maybe add a finish or a hit sound on the slider's head? nah, doesnt really fit since there is no strong voice that can emphasized with finsih at all on there
01:51:958 (2) It might look better if you copied the slider (1), move it to where this slider (2) currently was, and just reverse it. nah, i think the flow is better this way, yeah i know that maybe it will looks good by make the slidershape similar with (1) but i kinda uneasy with the slider direction if i make the (2) with the S shape too. >_<

Hard:
02:34:485 (5) Just a thought, but maybe you could make it look something like this? (Not exactly perfect, but you'll get the idea.) nah, im not really like the flow of (4) and (5) since it was cutted from the previous pattern flow, yeah, i know that this can makes a nice blanked on the (4) and (5) but i think the flow is a better this way >_<

Insane:
* 00:09:430 (1) You should split it into two circles and stack them to keep consistency with 00:09:760 (2,3,4,5,6,7) hmm this is good but i kinda like this slider better, aside from it was already forming a good flow, i think it was not a bad idea to make the beatpattern not so polar at all

sorry if i like to put a different beatpattern here and there for each stanza, it happens that i love making a variety of the beat patterns and than being consistent with the polarity of the beats, since i find that it was way more interesting to play >_<

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

Insane
00:14:375 (4) - change like this? no, since i think that can break the flow because the direction of (4) will be to left while the (1) is on the right
01:10:254 (7) - NC no, too keep the combo pattern on that part
02:43:057 (5) - add reverse？ nah, because the percussion stop on the endslider, i think this way can emphasize the song feel more

Nichiyouki wrote:

Normal

1. 00:33:167 - Add circle? nah, i wanna make a bit of spaced spot for the starter part XD

HelloSCV wrote:

Normal
01:16:683 - is it ok kiai starts on middle of slider? i don't really know, there's no exact rule that we cant put the kiai in the middle of slider (or maybe its there, but i still dont know about it lol) the beats is way more suite if i make it like this, so i cant do much about it >_<
02:22:287 (5) - ^ ^


Insane
00:31:436 (6) - add note ( like before ) no, not really suited on that part imo
02:21:793 (9) - add note no, since i wanna follow the drum voice here
02:43:386 (6) - add note here? no, same as above [/spoilerbox]

Nichiyouki wrote:

Comment: Good job. I don't find problem more than this.[/list][/notice]

Haku's Normal+

1. 00:20:639 (1) - why? I see NO reasons to move this, and I can't see WHY is better
2. 01:05:804 (1,2) - Difference: this have "so(1) - (2...)stand up! stand up!", the other is "(1...)never give up!"
3. 02:19:815 (2,3) - Used a different rhythm
   Comment: It's between Normal and Hard, more on the normal side (i would've used more jumps, 1/4 sliders or 1/4 doublets if it was an Hard)

[/notice]

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

Haku's Normal+
Normal+ name seems old, just Normal is good i think It's still between Normal and Hard, And i would used some harder pattern if it was an hard

01:02:013 (1) - I would've use it if the combo ended in a different place in the music. The angle don't fit there since there is nothing that musically make it flow better
01:09:265 (2) - Nope ^
02:33:991 (3,5) - In this case, There are red tick vocal notes
02:36:298 (3) - ^

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Kuria

My mod from your request in pm in-game

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

249's Easy

1. 00:54:925 (3) - Add finish in slider end. fixed.
2. 01:36:463 (2) - Remove clap in slider begin. It doesn't fit with the rhythm of song for me. whoops fixed ><.
3. 02:12:068 (1) - Finish sound in slider begin is too loud. You should remove finish or reduce volume about 60~70%. since so many people mentioned this i'll reduce the volume of the finish. 70% sounds better.
4. 02:18:331 - Add circle? no because the rhythm would feel really awkward and the drums and cymbals would ruin that calm feeling to the song during gameplay.
   
   Comment: I think that 00:02:837 - 00:23:276 may have to add whistle more than this. In addition to the above, nice diff.

Good luck~

1. 03:07:947 - Maybe consider ending the last spinner here instead for all the diffs just like in Haku's diff. I think it's a better place to end it because the vocals stop at that point.
   
   
2. 80% volume is much too loud for the soft section until 00:23:112. 60 or 70% would be much better.

1. This diff doesn't have kiai times. Mistake? o.o
   Maybe you forgot to check kiai at 01:16:848 and 02:22:782.
   
   
2. 00:23:276 (4) - How about adding a NC here just like Kuria has done in the normal and hard diffs? I think it might fit this guitar transition a bit better.
   
   
3. 01:14:046 (1) - Hm, maybe bend this slider upwards a bit to setup a nicer flow for the spinner.
   
   

1. 00:02:837 to 00:23:936 - Consider adding some offbeat whistles just like is done in all the other diffs. This section has no hitsounds atm and is very boring because of it imo.
   
   
2. 01:10:090 (2,3) - Hm, maybe add some claps to the end of these sliders just like you did at 01:07:782 and 01:08:441. That' just a repeated section of music, I'm not sure why the offbeat clapping would stop here.
   
   
3. 00:50:969 - Maybe switch over to NC:1 here so that we could have a clap at 00:51:134 and one at 00:51:463 to hit along with claps the music. Then switch back to N at 00:51:628. Also make the tick at 00:51:298 a normal tick.
   
   
   
   
4. 00:52:782 - You could also make this tick a clap to hit with the clap in the music just like in the hard diff. Honestly you could do this all over this section because there are a lot of loud claps that happen on red ticks, like at 00:46:189 or 00:54:430. It would sound really nice imo. Right now it's a bit bland to me because you don't even use whistles like the other diffs use.

1. 01:49:980 (2) - I believe to follow the music better here, we should have this slider starting at 01:49:815 and ending at 01:50:309. This would make a consistent rhythm with 01:50:969 (1,2) and 01:53:606 (1,2) and would play much better.
   
   
2. 02:26:243 (6) - Maybe add a NC here to be consistent with 01:20:309 (1).

1. 00:41:738 (5) - Maybe add a clap on the end of this slider to hit with the one in the music just like you did at 00:31:518 (4).
   
   
2. 00:43:881 (2) - I feel like a clap is missing on the end of this slider to create a nice two clap and finish pattern just like we have in the insane diff.
   
   
3. 01:16:683 - Consider making the normal-slidertick2 a finish sound so that we could have a finish in the middle of this slider to start the kiai time better.
   
   
4. 01:22:947 (3) - Hm, maybe add a clap on the head to keep consistent with your offbeat clapping here.
   
   
5. 02:54:265 (1) - It would also be nice to have a finish in the middle of this slider.

1. Since you're the only one that maps anything before 00:02:837 you should maybe add a lead-in time because it looks bad right now to see the 00:01:189 (1) appear before draining time even starts. 1 second should be fine, maybe even less.
   
   
2. I'm sorry, I don't want to mod this diff because I don't think Haku is very fond of me and I don't want to get yelled at. It will make me sad face.

1. 01:06:134 (8) - Hm, maybe NC here instead of at 01:06:298 (1) to follow the vocals better as you have been doing and to be consistent with 01:08:771 (1).
   
   
2. 02:16:353 (5,6,7,8) - This would be more readable to me if spacing was 1.2. The jump makes it hard to read the rhythm imo.
   
   
3. 02:21:958 (6) - Again maybe NC here like in the insane diff to make this transition a little more epic.

1. 00:36:463 - You're missing out of having a clap on the slider tick here. Consider using slider tick 2 for this diff so that you could have claps on the ticks of these sliders all over the map where they are missing. It will sound much better.

1. 00:23:276 (3) - Maybe have a NC here like you do in the hard diff. I think it makes this transition much more intense.
   
   
2. 00:47:507 (4,1) - Really awkward rhythm to me. I hear a triplet in the music, and the slider should be on the white tick at 00:47:672. Can you move the 00:47:590 (1) to there and shorten it and add a circle at 00:47:590?
   
   
   Fits much better imo. Just like at 00:52:782 (1,2,3) it's the same sound. You could also NC there on the 00:47:507 (4).
   Honestly I really hate 00:46:189 (4,1) also, but I guess that one is sort of following the music.
   
   
3. 02:12:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm, these seem a bit weirdly placed. Maybe try and place them in a star formation.
   
   
   I'm terrible at making stars.

1. 00:39:430 (5) - Missing clap on the head according to your pattern.
   
   
2. 01:04:485 - Again I think slider tick 2 would be better here so we could have claps on these offbeats in the middle of the slider.
   
   
3. 02:14:623 (2) - Maybe have a clap on the 2 here also to hit with the double clap in the music.

Dark Fang wrote:

[Haku's Normal+]

00:01:848 (3) - It will sound stranger, since that note is low pitched
01:45:200 (5) - a normal person will be able to see the arrow. Since that person got all the time to see it
02:00:200 - I'm following vocal after, it won't be good as now.

1. I don't like the skin having black borders on the circles, this looks ugly imo. It would be fine without these borders.
2. Sometimes it's a bit hard to recognize return arrows on the white combo colour.

1. 01:08:771 - with this rhythm I suggest doing it like this (circle-slider-circle-slider-returnslider instead of circle-circle-circle-slider-circle-returnslider):
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:45:364 (8) - I like the shape of ctrl+h+j much more, it flows way better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:27:232 (3,4) - for me it feels weird to have to click on (4) (timing wise I mean). What about slider-slider instead of returnslider-circle?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:43:057 (5) - maybe add repeat? This little break right there feels a bit weird.

1. 00:26:738 (2,4) - would be better if these returnsliders would start on 00:26:573 and 00:27:562 (because of the guitar in the background)
2. 00:41:738 - there should be a beat here (I can hear a drum, so I want to click there or at least don't hold a slider)
3. 01:42:397 (5,6,7) - would do slider-circle-circle instead of circle-circle-slider, clicking these circles doesn't feel "right" atm

1. The audio lead-in may be a bit too short, I suggest 1500ms.
2. 00:03:331 (6) - this rhythm is awkward
3. 00:05:969 (4) - ^
4. 00:28:716 (7,8) - these sliders starting on red ticks doesn't feel good
5. 00:33:661 (5,6,1) - ^ sometimes they can be nice but I here I think they are just awkward
6. 00:36:298 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:45:035 (2,3) - again strange rhythm. What did you map to? It's clearly not the vocals so I assume you mapped to the instruments but I can't hear anything fitting there.

1. 01:27:892 (1) - not a perfect blanket, move the second node to grids to the right
2. 01:39:760 (5) - make this slider end 01:40:090 and add a circle 01:40:254
3. 02:00:200 (1,2,3) - are you sure about these? I would either delete them or map the whole part.
4. 02:42:232 (1,2,3) - instead of slider-slider-circle I'd do circle-slider-slider here, this moves the sliders away from the red ticks and fits the music better at the same time

1. 02:17:342 (1) - I prefer wave slider with a "symmetry point" in the centre like this, it makes them look nicer:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   184,88,137342,6,0,P|136:88|120:128|104:168|48:168,1,165.000006294251,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 02:19:650 - this breaks disrupts the flow imo, instead of break-slider-slider I would use slider-slider-circle. This also makes possible to do a click on "JUST":
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Are you sure about the kiai time? It should really be consistent among the diffs: first kiai time should end 01:37:782 (for consistency)
2. second kiai time should end 02:43:716
3. 01:14:046 (1) - would end the slider 01:14:705 so that the player won't get surprised by the spinner too much (should be an Easy diff), right now the time span between these two objects is relatively low
4. 02:19:650 (2) - again I would end the spinner earlier, either 02:20:309 or 02:20:639, I don't really know which option is better
5. 02:33:167 - instead of here, there should be a beat at 02:32:507
6. 02:33:496 (3) - this slider touches the bottom border of my screen which doesn't look nice. You can fix that by turning it into a curved slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:42:068 (3) - remove

Tshemmp wrote:

Sorry for the big delay. Catch me in-game if you have any questions.

[Haku's Normal+]

1. The audio lead-in may be a bit too short, I suggest 1500ms. Do the math: 1000 + 1189 = ????
2. 00:03:331 (6) - this rhythm is your ears are awkward.
3. 00:05:969 (4) - ^
4. 00:28:716 (7,8) - these sliders starting on red ticks kind of mods doesn't feel good
5. 00:33:661 (5,6,1) - ^ sometimes they can be nice but I here I think they you are just awkward
6. 00:36:298 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:45:035 (2,3) - again strange rhythm. What did you map[/strike ]mod to? It's clearly [strike]not the vocals so I must assume you mapped to the instruments but I can't hear anything fitting there but i'll say I don't.

Really, this diff feels like a Hard or so due to the rather complex rhythm. Therefor you should also increase the AR from 5 to 6. This makes it way clearer. I also won't mention more rhythm "errors" from now on. Man, it's better you hear the music better.

1. 01:27:892 (1) - not a perfect blanket, move the second node to grids to the right I won't completely submit it for this micy change
2. 01:39:760 (5) - make this slider end 01:40:090 and add a circle 01:40:254 What the slidertick hitsounds are for?
3. 02:00:200 (1,2,3) - are you sure about these? I would either delete them or map the whole part. nope
4. 02:42:232 (1,2,3) - instead of slider-slider-circle I'd do circle-slider-slider here, this moves the sliders away from the red ticks and fits the music better at the same time It fit both vocals and drums BETTER as now.

Sorry, I don't like this diff. Increasing the AR makes it a bit better but you should rename it to [Light Hard] or [Hard-] then, lol.

.

Tshemmp wrote:

Sorry for the big delay. Catch me in-game if you have any questions.

[General]

1. I don't like the skin having black borders on the circles, this looks ugly imo. It would be fine without these borders.
2. Sometimes it's a bit hard to recognize return arrows on the white combo colour.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

I won't do anything just for an AR+1 (someone arleady suggested AR-1) and other useless rants.
Excuse me, but I must do this to every mod that hurt my feelings as a modder.