1. 00:38:964 (4) - stack to 00:38:232 (2) - 's head?
2. 00:59:635 (1,2) - i'd like to change (1) to a repeat slider, and remove repeat from (2) due to vocal~
3. 01:02:561 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:17:196 (7) - move to next red tick (01:17:379 - ) ? heard better i suppose ~

gokugohan12468 wrote:

How do ya???
This took a week
Ok,This is the most good

General:
Kiai Time: The beginning is slightly different than the others. It should start in 00:47:927, -1 ms to the current one.
Preview Time: Same as that kiai, it should be 1 ms before to be the same as the other diffs.
Difficulty Settings: Taking into account the level of difficulty of the patterns of this map and how calm the melody is, I'd say it fits better with AR/OD8. Platter = Hard, and tbh the majority of the map is easier to read at a slower AR. However, ask another players or testers if you're not 100% confident with it.
^fixed Kiai Time and
Preview time. and setting, I ask another player to play it. They accept faster difficulty.Then They said It's too easy for slower than.
Timeline:
00:12:988 - According to the melody, those notes belong to a 1/3 rhythm and so, they should be placed at 00:12:927 - and 00:13:049 - .
01:18:293 - This slider should end in 01:18:476 - and notes should be added in 01:18:568 - and 01:18:659 - to make a longer stream.
01:24:147 - ^
01:21:403 - Similar case as before. In this case, this slider should be removed. I suggest you to add the 1st note of the new stream at X:392, to avoild the stack you had before and add a lil jump there. Fill that blank with notes at 01:21:403 - 01:21:403 - and 01:21:586 - trying to keep the same direction of the original stream.

Gameplay:
00:29:269 - Move this slider a few grids to the right. Avoid the stack you had before, to make players move a bit more :p
00:29:818 - In this case, move it to the left, to avoid the stack with the next notes and create a slight dash with (4).
01:23:415 - Ctrl-H. Looks funnier and gives more important to the strong beat of the music.

Sweet is Fantasic

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod for request
and sorry for my late >.<

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:38:964 (4) - stack to 00:38:232 (2) - 's head?
   - Fixed
2. 00:59:635 (1,2) - i'd like to change (1) to a repeat slider, and remove repeat from (2) due to vocal~
   - Fixed
3. 01:02:561 (1,2) - ^
   - Fixed
4. 01:17:196 (7) - move to next red tick (01:17:379 - ) ? heard better i suppose ~
   - Fixed

that's all what i can find >.<

call me back to recheck when you're ready ~

Thanks for modding >.<

Frostmourne wrote:

ยังไม่แรงค์อีกหรอครับ ._.

1. 01:11:342 (2) - D here, goes really well with 01:08:964 (1) - and 01:09:696 (1) - .

1. 01:06:769 (2,1) - Please think of an alternative for these, I don't think they fit very well and can be done better.
2. 01:25:976 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Tough time playing. Do like in Hard or another way with sliders; it helps with the bpm change preparation.

1. 01:06:769 (1,2,3) - Cannot agree with the usage of this at all, I'm afraid.
2. 01:10:061 - Add a circle here; it helps bring the rhythm off the off-beats in 01:08:964 (4,5) - .

1. 01:25:976 (1) - Don't have sliders crossing red lines that change bpm. Doing what you did in Normal is fine for this diff.

those wrote:

[Taiko Oni]

1. 01:11:342 (2) - D here, goes really well with 01:08:964 (1) - and 01:09:696 (1) - .
   - Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:06:769 (2,1) - Please think of an alternative for these, I don't think they fit very well and can be done better.
   - Fixed
2. 01:25:976 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Tough time playing. Do like in Hard or another way with sliders; it helps with the bpm change preparation.
   - Since it's Insane diff, I want to keep them

[Hard]

1. 01:06:769 (1,2,3) - Cannot agree with the usage of this at all, I'm afraid.
   - Fixed
2. 01:10:061 - Add a circle here; it helps bring the rhythm off the off-beats in 01:08:964 (4,5) - .
   - Fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:25:976 (1) - Don't have sliders crossing red lines that change bpm. Doing what you did in Normal is fine for this diff.
   - Fixed

1. 00:47:013 (1) - I'd use a don here, it'd emphasize 00:47:196 (2) more.
2. 01:17:013 (1) - I don't understand why you have a note here, there is neither beat nor vocals. I'd personally move it to 01:17:196.

1. 00:10:244 (1,2) - too much consecutive stacked fruit patterns is quite boring, give them a little effect like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:635 (13,14,15,1) - Same here :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:257 (2,3,4) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:025 (5,6) - ^
5. 01:17:561 (1) - I would revert this slider (ctrl+G) because it needs to be epic however you are just stacking fruits :/

Kurai wrote:

[STAC's Platter]

1. 00:10:244 (1,2) - too much consecutive stacked fruit patterns is quite boring, give them a little effect like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   - Fixed
2. 00:14:635 (13,14,15,1) - Same here :
   
   SPOILER

   
   - Fixed
3. 00:27:257 (2,3,4) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
   - Fixed
4. 01:04:025 (5,6) - ^
   - Fixed
5. 01:17:561 (1) - I would revert this slider (ctrl+G) because it needs to be epic however you are just stacking fruits :/
   - Fixed

Kurai wrote:

[Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:47:013 (1) - I'd use a don here, it'd emphasize 00:47:196 (2) more.
   - Fixed
2. 01:17:013 (1) - I don't understand why you have a note here, there is neither beat nor vocals. I'd personally move it to 01:17:196.
   - It's clearly snapped on vocal D:

1. 00:21:586 (5,6) - I find it awkward that this phrase has a jump here (especially from 00:21:220 (4) - ), but the phrase at 00:25:427 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - with the piano chords don't when in nature they are much sharper than just a vocal passage.
2. 00:34:025 (2,3) - I'm not too sure I find the spacing here to be optimal. I agree with the symmetry, but I think you can arrange these sliders to get a smoother flow pattern.
3. 00:39:879 (1) - This is narrow enough to all fit into the plate without moving it, nullifying the effect of the accented "youni" in the lyrics. I'd use something more along the lines of http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538700.
4. 01:22:501 (15) - To follow drums more closely, perhaps something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538711.
5. 01:25:976 (21) - Instead of having 01:26:343 (1) - jerk around in the same direction, perhaps this may be more suitable (spacing for you to determine if you take this route) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538715

those wrote:

The rest of the difficulties check out. I'm only a little bit concerned about the CTB diff. Mind you, I'm not a regular CTB player by any means, but there are a few things I'd like to get clarified:

1. 00:21:586 (5,6) - I find it awkward that this phrase has a jump here (especially from 00:21:220 (4) - ), but the phrase at 00:25:427 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - with the piano chords don't when in nature they are much sharper than just a vocal passage.
2. 00:34:025 (2,3) - I'm not too sure I find the spacing here to be optimal. I agree with the symmetry, but I think you can arrange these sliders to get a smoother flow pattern.
3. 00:39:879 (1) - This is narrow enough to all fit into the plate without moving it, nullifying the effect of the accented "youni" in the lyrics. I'd use something more along the lines of http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538700.
4. 01:22:501 (15) - To follow drums more closely, perhaps something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538711.
5. 01:25:976 (21) - Instead of having 01:26:343 (1) - jerk around in the same direction, perhaps this may be more suitable (spacing for you to determine if you take this route) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538715

Frostmourne wrote:

I will just congratz \:D/

Flask wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

I will just congratz \:D/

Ibuki Suika wrote:

more djpop please;_;

Faust wrote:

Good to see you around, DJPop.

Flask wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

I will just congratz \:D/