Frostmourne wrote:

ยังไม่แรงค์อีกหรอครับ ._.

1. 01:11:342 (2) - D here, goes really well with 01:08:964 (1) - and 01:09:696 (1) - .

1. 01:06:769 (2,1) - Please think of an alternative for these, I don't think they fit very well and can be done better.
2. 01:25:976 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Tough time playing. Do like in Hard or another way with sliders; it helps with the bpm change preparation.

1. 01:06:769 (1,2,3) - Cannot agree with the usage of this at all, I'm afraid.
2. 01:10:061 - Add a circle here; it helps bring the rhythm off the off-beats in 01:08:964 (4,5) - .

1. 01:25:976 (1) - Don't have sliders crossing red lines that change bpm. Doing what you did in Normal is fine for this diff.

those wrote:

[Taiko Oni]

1. 01:11:342 (2) - D here, goes really well with 01:08:964 (1) - and 01:09:696 (1) - .
   - Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:06:769 (2,1) - Please think of an alternative for these, I don't think they fit very well and can be done better.
   - Fixed
2. 01:25:976 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Tough time playing. Do like in Hard or another way with sliders; it helps with the bpm change preparation.
   - Since it's Insane diff, I want to keep them

[Hard]

1. 01:06:769 (1,2,3) - Cannot agree with the usage of this at all, I'm afraid.
   - Fixed
2. 01:10:061 - Add a circle here; it helps bring the rhythm off the off-beats in 01:08:964 (4,5) - .
   - Fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:25:976 (1) - Don't have sliders crossing red lines that change bpm. Doing what you did in Normal is fine for this diff.
   - Fixed

1. 00:47:013 (1) - I'd use a don here, it'd emphasize 00:47:196 (2) more.
2. 01:17:013 (1) - I don't understand why you have a note here, there is neither beat nor vocals. I'd personally move it to 01:17:196.

1. 00:10:244 (1,2) - too much consecutive stacked fruit patterns is quite boring, give them a little effect like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:635 (13,14,15,1) - Same here :
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:257 (2,3,4) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:04:025 (5,6) - ^
5. 01:17:561 (1) - I would revert this slider (ctrl+G) because it needs to be epic however you are just stacking fruits :/

Kurai wrote:

[STAC's Platter]

1. 00:10:244 (1,2) - too much consecutive stacked fruit patterns is quite boring, give them a little effect like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   - Fixed
2. 00:14:635 (13,14,15,1) - Same here :
   
   SPOILER

   
   - Fixed
3. 00:27:257 (2,3,4) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
   - Fixed
4. 01:04:025 (5,6) - ^
   - Fixed
5. 01:17:561 (1) - I would revert this slider (ctrl+G) because it needs to be epic however you are just stacking fruits :/
   - Fixed

Kurai wrote:

[Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:47:013 (1) - I'd use a don here, it'd emphasize 00:47:196 (2) more.
   - Fixed
2. 01:17:013 (1) - I don't understand why you have a note here, there is neither beat nor vocals. I'd personally move it to 01:17:196.
   - It's clearly snapped on vocal D:

1. 00:21:586 (5,6) - I find it awkward that this phrase has a jump here (especially from 00:21:220 (4) - ), but the phrase at 00:25:427 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - with the piano chords don't when in nature they are much sharper than just a vocal passage.
2. 00:34:025 (2,3) - I'm not too sure I find the spacing here to be optimal. I agree with the symmetry, but I think you can arrange these sliders to get a smoother flow pattern.
3. 00:39:879 (1) - This is narrow enough to all fit into the plate without moving it, nullifying the effect of the accented "youni" in the lyrics. I'd use something more along the lines of http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538700.
4. 01:22:501 (15) - To follow drums more closely, perhaps something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538711.
5. 01:25:976 (21) - Instead of having 01:26:343 (1) - jerk around in the same direction, perhaps this may be more suitable (spacing for you to determine if you take this route) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538715

those wrote:

The rest of the difficulties check out. I'm only a little bit concerned about the CTB diff. Mind you, I'm not a regular CTB player by any means, but there are a few things I'd like to get clarified:

1. 00:21:586 (5,6) - I find it awkward that this phrase has a jump here (especially from 00:21:220 (4) - ), but the phrase at 00:25:427 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - with the piano chords don't when in nature they are much sharper than just a vocal passage.
2. 00:34:025 (2,3) - I'm not too sure I find the spacing here to be optimal. I agree with the symmetry, but I think you can arrange these sliders to get a smoother flow pattern.
3. 00:39:879 (1) - This is narrow enough to all fit into the plate without moving it, nullifying the effect of the accented "youni" in the lyrics. I'd use something more along the lines of http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538700.
4. 01:22:501 (15) - To follow drums more closely, perhaps something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538711.
5. 01:25:976 (21) - Instead of having 01:26:343 (1) - jerk around in the same direction, perhaps this may be more suitable (spacing for you to determine if you take this route) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/538715

Frostmourne wrote:

I will just congratz \:D/

Flask wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

I will just congratz \:D/

Ibuki Suika wrote:

more djpop please;_;

Faust wrote:

Good to see you around, DJPop.

Flask wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

I will just congratz \:D/