Modmodmodmodmodmodmodmod~50th post yay~[General]FIRST Kiai time should end right here 02:16:082
The colors are not the same for pimpG and Collab.
[Easy]00:17:116 (4) - Eh.. this could be NC.. or not.
00:22:289 (1,2,3) - An uneven combo to me imo. Maybe 00:26:427 (3) - on its own as a NC or you can include it with the next combo 00:27:461 (1,2,3,4) -
OR you can put 00:29:530 (1) - with 00:27:461 (1,2,3,4) -
00:24:013 (2) - Could it be that this could be a circle and have a slider just like the previous ones? It looks better like that
00:28:496 (4) - Finish?
00:51:944 - Could add a note here all by itself stacking 00:52:289 (1) -
01:06:599 (1) - I don't like this short spinner. Yes it's recovering, but it's so short. You could add some beats in here instead of just a short spinner.
01:21:254 (1,1) - Something like this?
http://puu.sh/1zuus (Sounds better imo)
01:28:840 (4) - Remove this slider. Unless you were actually following the vocals, then skip this.
01:41:944 (3) - End at 01:42:978 -
02:19:530 (3) - Add Whistle
02:20:220 (4) - Remove whistle
02:25:047 - Add note?
02:44:013 (1) - Remove whistle and add a finish at the slider begin.
03:06:771 (3) - Slider should end at 03:07:806 -
03:10:909 (2) - Should end at 03:11:944 -
[pimpG]00:37:806 (3) - You don't really need the extra two points next to the slider begin/end and slider repeat.
00:43:323 - Could add a note here
00:43:668 - And here for the rhythm because 00:42:978 (6) - as a background part.
00:51:944 - Add note?
00:59:875 - ^
01:00:220 - ^
01:03:496 (6) - I feel like this should be a circle at 01:03:668 - Although I'm not sure.
01:18:151 (4) - A point in the center of a slider when it already has its shape with the other 4 points makes it worse.
01:27:461 (1) - Remove finish
01:34:702 (10) - Finish
01:36:771 (2) - Something like this?
http://puu.sh/1zv8w01:50:047 - Could map until here.......... maybe
02:02:978 (1) - Remove NC?
02:14:875 (4) - Eh... maybe remove whistles for the repeat
02:23:496 (1) - Why this extremely short spinner that doesn't really flow? I would remove it and add some beats in here.
02:33:668 (1) - Extend this spinner to 02:35:737 - and remove finish
02:54:702 (1) - Remove NC
02:59:530 (1) - Remove this spinner and add some beats.
03:07:806 (1) - Remove new combo and let 03:08:840 (2) - be on its own for a combo?
[Collab]TVO00:28:496 (6) - Remove whistle and add finish?
01:23:323 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Could have this symmetrical as in 3 on one side and 4 on the other side. Still would make the same hexagon. Or you don't have to.
03:02:633 (7) - Could extend this to end at 03:03:668 (8) - and removing that circle.
03:37:806 (2) - Finish?
pimpG01:05:047 (3) - Something a bit wider like this?
http://puu.sh/1zvBd01:07:806 (5) - Finish
02:11:254 (4,5,6) - Could be a better triangle. 02:11:944 (6) - could be brought down to 1.19 spacing. Much better triangle~
02:38:151 (2,3,4) - Spacing could be brought up just a little bit