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Tommy Heavenly6 - PAPERMOON (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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riffy
/me stalks BCI

here to encode mp3 for you :3 and also i decided to check easy diff

[General]
remow katti piewe from tags [Hard] remove ichigun from tags since he didn't mapped any of diffs? o.o
comboburst.png's должен быть 500x767 (cейчас 499x768). (АиБат десу)
битрейт мп3 слишком высокий D: надо уменьшить лол файлообменник ссылка мп3 высокая скорость онлайн без регистрации

а еще у тебя в харде можно сделать вот так 01:17:682 (3) - nazi corner

[Easy]
00:04:328 (1) - прикрыт хитбрстом спиннера. что в самой-легкой-дифе не ок. ;_;
00:21:157 (3) - ну не то это. Для изи такие слайдеры совсем не ок. Новичок он как баран, идет по слайдеру прямо и все. Откуда му знать, что слайдеры могут так гнуться? Ниоткуда. Может сделать что-то почитабельнее?
00:28:474 (3) - "ОМФГ, Я СЛОМАЛ СЛАЙДЕР" скажет новичок ;_; то же что и выше.
00:44:572 (1) - ^ orz.
00:51:889 (3) - why don't you curve it like 00:47:499 (3) - т.к. слайдер на 00:47:499 (3) выглядит таким няшным-милым. А первый похож на жертву скриллекса ~.~
00:49:694 (1,1) - не многовато ли нк? мне кажется многовато. попробуй обрать одно, ладно? слишком много нк пугают днища новичков
01:03:230 (2) - уголок нази http://puu.sh/19oZA зато без оверлапа \:D/
01:10:548 (5,1) - нк переставить. Ну по вокалу и т.д. подходит + не будет похоже на джамп.
Pagliaccio
Хотелось бы увидеть инсейн в мапсете T_T
Stefan

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

you still may to map any kind of GD / do a mod here :</
GD: I don't think, one more is neccessary.
Mod: darrrrrnn yeah

[General]

[Easy]
Is it just me, or are all Sliders and Circles aren't right at the Distance? x1,2 as DS would fix this.
00:00:670 (1) - To be honest, the Spinner is bad here. I don't have any good feeling at spinning here. I would remove it and set instead of the Spinner some sliders. Maybe this?: http://puu.sh/19pg3
00:06:889 (1) - The Clap sounds a bit oversounded, the Guitar and Claps does not fit so much like at 00:04:328 (1) - or 00:05:791 (3) - at the Start Points. I hope you understand what I mean. orz
00:15:212 - Move the Point at 00:15:304 since you can hear a bit the soft Sliderslide in the normal Hitsound Area.
00:27:011 (1) - Finish at the Start to emphasize the next part?
00:50:426 (1) - Move the last Sliderpoint for two grids right.
01:15:304 (3) - Finish at the End to emphasize?
01:19:694 (1,2,3) - (This should just made if you agree with 00:00:670 (1)): Instead of these Hitobjects, remove them and set Spinner from 01:19:511 to 01:21:157, that Easy have at least one Spinner. (You may want to add at 01:21:889 a Circle, but it's just an Idea.

[Normal]
00:25:913 (5) - Finish sounds awful here, it let makes this part that loud.
00:40:913 (5) - Maybe Finish at the Middle Point?
00:48:230 - I think it's worth enough to add a Circle here.

[Hard]
00:27:011 (1) - Finish at the Start to emphasize the next part?
01:18:962 (5,1) - Remove Finish at (1) and set it at the End of (5), sounds better.
01:28:291 (1,2,3,4) - Set at 01:29:023 a Inherited Point with a Sound Volume of 40%, for now it is way too loud. And please remove all four Claps, they fits in no way here..

Sorry about Hard, I suck at modding high Diffs. orz
riffy

Pagliaccio wrote:

Хотелось бы увидеть инсейн в мапсете T_T
а мне кажется, что тут хард и так звучит по битам отлично. Инсу неоткуда взять новых битов, а инс по ритму равный харду = не инс. Хотя это дело NyanCI
Topic Starter
BCI

Pagliaccio wrote:

Хотелось бы увидеть инсейн в мапсете T_T
есть готовый, но на ранк не поведу, т.е он уг D: энивей поставлю ссыль в словах создателя

Stefan wrote:

[Easy]
Is it just me, or are all Sliders and Circles aren't right at the Distance? x1,2 as DS would fix this. b-but these are all in 1,2..
00:00:670 (1) - To be honest, the Spinner is bad here. I don't have any good feeling at spinning here. I would remove it and set instead of the Spinner some sliders. Maybe this?: http://puu.sh/19pg3 you're right, i agree, but I don't fix this (read below)
00:06:889 (1) - The Clap sounds a bit oversounded, the Guitar and Claps does not fit so much like at 00:04:328 (1) - or 00:05:791 (3) - at the Start Points. I hope you understand what I mean. orz removed claps at these objects owo/
00:15:212 - Move the Point at 00:15:304 since you can hear a bit the soft Sliderslide in the normal Hitsound Area.
00:27:011 (1) - Finish at the Start to emphasize the next part?
00:50:426 (1) - Move the last Sliderpoint for two grids right.
01:15:304 (3) - Finish at the End to emphasize? all yeap
01:19:694 (1,2,3) - (This should just made if you agree with 00:00:670 (1)): Instead of these Hitobjects, remove them and set Spinner from 01:19:511 to 01:21:157, that Easy have at least one Spinner. (You may want to add at 01:21:889 a Circle, but it's just an Idea. i try this, but this time isn't for spinner and spinner sound looks awful. i agree with first suggestion but i want to have one spinner at easy for balance in scores ;w;

Sorry about Hard, I suck at modding high Diffs. orz lol no, I was fixed this all.
thaaanks >w<~

-Bakari- wrote:

comboburst.png's должен быть 500x767 (cейчас 499x768). (АиБат десу) ну в один пиксель ж разница :[
[Easy]
00:04:328 (1) - прикрыт хитбрстом спиннера. что в самой-легкой-дифе не ок. ;_; не знаю как пофиксить ;w;
00:44:572 (1) - ^ orz. у меня там стак с концом, менять не буду :с
01:10:548 (5,1) - нк переставить. Ну по вокалу и т.д. подходит + не будет похоже на джамп. тогда весь комбопаттерн к чертям D:
other fixed ofc ^^
Pagliaccio

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

Pagliaccio wrote:

Хотелось бы увидеть инсейн в мапсете T_T
есть готовый, но на ранк не поведу, т.е он уг D: энивей поставлю ссыль в словах создателя
поставьпоставь

а вдруг там годнота

будем убеждать тебя запилить на ранк \:D/
Topic Starter
BCI

Pagliaccio wrote:

поставьпоставь
а вдруг там годнота
будем убеждать тебя запилить на ранк \:D/
уже же D:
kosiga

crabovan wrote:

kosiga's Normal

こんにちわ。:3 :3

All what i can say:
00:51:157 (2) - not see the point in curve slider, because slider too short for this, remade to standard two-points flat slider.  It is a little monotonous. so I changed it in kiai time.
00:51:157 (2,5,6) - ^^^
01:02:865 (3,4) - ^^^
01:28:291 - Change slider to spinner. I think that it is slightly sudden, and it is short in normal diff

Stefan wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:913 (5) - Finish sounds awful here, it let makes this part that loud. have to emphasize finishsound here :P
00:40:913 (5) - Maybe Finish at the Middle Point? do not have finishsound there. sorry, no change
00:48:230 - I think it's worth enough to add a Circle here. it's ok. added~
thank you~ :)

http://puu.sh/19wF7
riffy

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

[Easy]
00:04:328 (1) - прикрыт хитбрстом спиннера. что в самой-легкой-дифе не ок. ;_; не знаю как пофиксить ;w;
ctrl+j весь паттерн \:D/

/me runs
Reiji-RJ
Привет о/

General

  1. Мне кажется, оффсет чуть спешит Или мне кажется о\ Но лучше уточнить
Easy

  1. 00:04:328 (1) - Заметила, что у тебя везде клапы стоят на даунбите и соответственно на каждом втором от него (3 по счету). Лучше их переставить на каждый второй (даже в песне так, послушай), ибо звучит лучше. А то как-то не на своем месте
  2. 00:05:426 (2) - ^ ну и сюда клап
  3. 00:13:840 (2) - попробуй такой ритм:
  4. 00:19:694 (1,2,3) - чуть-чуть неравный спейсинг, не очень красиво
  5. 00:38:718 (1) - клап и финиш - неочень же! К тому же клап на даунбите. Убери его :< Вообще исправь все клапы (или я уже это говорила?)
  6. 00:44:572 (1) - ох не нравится мне, как он играется.. Эти красные фоллоупоинты. Может так?
  7. 00:47:499 (3) - нью комбо, по логике
kogisa's Normal

  1. 00:18:230 (4) - finish on the beginning
  2. 00:29:938 (6) - ^
  3. 00:44:755 (1) - maybe remove this spinner and map this part? I think, spinner is not good here
  4. 00:53:352 (1) - finish
  5. 01:05:060 (1) - ^
  6. 01:28:291 (1) - maybe nc? Will be epic!
Hard

  1. Опять хс :<
  2. 00:00:670 (1) - может убрать лучше клап и поставить финиш?
  3. 00:01:035 (3) - а вот сюда клапик
  4. 00:03:413 (1) - опять убери с начала
  5. 00:03:962 (2) - поставь на начало клап (ну ты поняла, да? как в изе. Еще можешь глянуть в нормал, там правильно они расставлены)
  6. 00:14:755 (8,1) - что-то тут не то.. Можно и так, конечно, но играться будет лучше как-нибудь так:
  7. 00:15:304 - не знаю, в этой части как-то хс звучат.. слишком громко что ли :С может громкость уменьшить?
  8. 01:08:535 (2,3) - перемести (3) на 01:09:267 - , а на 01:09:084 - ноту
  9. 01:11:462 (3,4) - ^ то же самое
  10. 01:14:938 (6) - раздели на 1/2, а то не очень, когда красный тик пропущен тут
  11. 01:16:401 (10) - опять же, перенеси на 01:16:584 - , а на 01:16:401 - ноту
  12. 01:17:682 (3,4,5) - не нравится мне тут ритм... Сделай так:
Хорошая мапка :3
Удачи!
Topic Starter
BCI

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Привет о/

Easy

  1. 00:04:328 (1) - Заметила, что у тебя везде клапы стоят на даунбите и соответственно на каждом втором от него (3 по счету). Лучше их переставить на каждый второй (даже в песне так, послушай), ибо звучит лучше. А то как-то не на своем месте да. только не на софт части :<

    Hard

    1. Опять хс :< ну я не про ;w;
    2. 01:11:462 (3,4) - ^ то же самое нет, потому что первое тут реально нормально звучит, а второе я просто не знаю куда пихать ноту, весь паттерн к чертям :<
Хорошая мапка :3
Удачи! спасибо с:
kosiga

Reiji-RJ wrote:

kogisa's Normal

  1. 00:18:230 (4) - finish on the beginning ok. fixed~
  2. 00:29:938 (6) - ^ ^
  3. 00:44:755 (1) - maybe remove this spinner and map this part? I think, spinner is not good here I will not change now. look at other mod
  4. 00:53:352 (1) - finish no change
  5. 01:05:060 (1) - ^ ^
  6. 01:28:291 (1) - maybe nc? Will be epic! fixed~

-kevincela- wrote:

[kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:15:121 - As I said in the easy diff,you should change this as a soft hitsound inherited section (not custom!) to make the finish play much more better here. It does not match at other places when I use finish here. 00:18:230 (4) - 00:21:157 (3) - etc. so I think enough as now :D
  2. 00:19:694 (1,2,3) - What about using a vocal based rhythm like this? This is pretty good and varies the rhythm a bit :3 It is fit to vocal. but I thought that it was the rhythm that it was hard to play a little. and use simplify this part here  :P
  3. 00:32:865 (4) - Same as above ^
  4. 01:19:877 - Add a note here? As i see,the phrase starts better here,and fits better within the instrumentals! sorry, vocal「月のように」 I do not put it to emphasize this.
    That's all. Talking about flow,this map is really solid and fells really good to play. Good job!
thank you~ :)

http://puu.sh/1axHM
-kevincela-
Soul Eater <3

[General]

  1. Huh...shouldn't the maximum res of the comboburst be 500x767? Well,the actual one is 499x768... It's just a pixel,but it's anyway suggested to resize it at 500x767.
[Easy]

  1. 00:03:962 - Add a note here to start the phrase by following the drum here as you did on the following patterns? You could blanket it with 00:04:328 (1) - by adding it at x:272 y:192. Your choice,though :D
  2. 00:12:743 (1,2) - Honestly,I think that the flow here could be continued in a better way. What about instead on modifying the pattern in this way? It flows actually way more natural than before,imho.
    SPOILER

    32,308,12743,6,0,B|64:356|124:368|184:340,1,160,0|0
    248,296,13840,2,0,B|298:272|358:284|390:332,2,160,8|8|4
    356,156,16035,5,8
    I modified 00:16:035 (1) - 's position to fix the spacing too,but if you want you can modify them in the way you want :D
    Also,as you can crearly hear a drum being played at 00:12:743 (1) - ,you should add a clap on both the top and the end of this slider to make it follow properly those drums.
  3. 00:15:304 - Why are you using a normal finish here? A soft one (not custom!) fits much better within the part being quiet :<
  4. 00:47:499 (3) - A new combo should be added here to follow the vocals properly
  5. 00:54:084 (4) - What about moving it 1/1 before? As there is a drum being played there,it fits really good! (and you did the same on the other patterns,so ^^)
  6. 01:10:913 (1) - You forgot to add a clap at the beginning of this slider (remove the clap on 01:11:645 (2) - if you do this!)
[kosiga's Normal]

  1. 00:15:121 - As I said in the easy diff,you should change this as a soft hitsound inherited section (not custom!) to make the finish play much more better here.
  2. 00:19:694 (1,2,3) - What about using a vocal based rhythm like this? This is pretty good and varies the rhythm a bit :3
  3. 00:32:865 (4) - Same as above
  4. 01:19:877 - Add a note here? As i see,the phrase starts better here,and fits better within the instrumentals!
    That's all. Talking about flow,this map is really solid and fells really good to play. Good job!
[Hard]

  1. 00:05:791 (8) - What about using claps on the end and the repeat of this slider,as kosiga did in his diff? They fit really well to start a new phrase here! :3
  2. 00:08:718 (9) - CTRL+R here? That's a pretty much a subjective thing,and you might not agree with this,but as now imho this flows better by doing so,and the jump created with 00:09:267 (1) - fits quite well! Also,what about adding a clap here to make the sound consistent with 00:07:987 (7) - ?
  3. 00:14:206 (6,7,8) - What about creating a triplet stacked under the slider? It follows pretty good the drums that are being played,and it isn't that difficult to play.
  4. 00:31:401 (1) - That's a very little aestetical thing,but anyway you should make it just like 00:32:133 (3) - : it looks pretty good as it's linked with 00:32:133 (3) - and blankets 00:31:950 (2) - in a better way than the first wave-slider!
    SPOILER

    100,60,31401,6,0,B|122:75|150:71|150:71|188:38|231:46,1,140,8|2
  5. 00:32:682 (4) - NC here to delimitate a new vocal phase?
  6. 00:47:133 (8) - Please,consider shortening this 1/2 or deleting this and creating a new note at 00:47:316 - ,maybe with adding another note at 00:47:499 - . Why? Because that 1/1 slider,even id it follows the guitar well,does really fit strange again because of the vocals. I think that following both the parts would solve this problem.
Well,that's it. Sorry for my quite useless mod,don't kd me if you didn't find that useful >w<
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
BCI
fixed almost all (my internet was broken and i upload without replay) so sorry, and anyway thanks ^^
jonathanlfj
mod by request, srry for the delay
nice song :)

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Timing feels off, try +26ms. Ask some others to check it too
make all diffs end at the same time, atleast easy and hard
nice skin~

[Easy]
00:03:962 (1) - add clap here
00:13:840 (2) - try to overlap this right under 00:11:645 (4)
00:15:121 (1) - whistle on slider end
00:32:499 (2) - overlap not recommended on easy, especially when its the only one
00:44:572 (1) - add finish to slider head
00:53:718 (4) - add clap
01:10:913 (1) - add finish to slider head
01:17:499 (4) - add a note here

[Normal]
00:09:084 (4,1) - overlap here looks better
00:36:157 (5,6,1) - that plays very confusing, try this 00:44:755 (1) - use a finish here?
01:11:096 (1) - clap here
01:13:840 (1) - add finish
01:25:182 (5,1) - overlap if you did it for 00:09:084 (4,1)

[Hard]
00:00:852 (2) - one grid down, do that to 00:02:682 (8) as well and adjust spacing/shape of other stuff accordingly
00:14:206 (6) - plays better if you reverse this
00:41:645 (1,2,3,4) - clap every 2nd and 4th white line? its inverted here
00:50:426 (1) - i got all confused by the clap patterns you have during the kiai...
01:13:840 (1) - make a better blanket here, and overlap 01:14:755 (4) properly
01:17:682 (3) - reverse this and make the curve downwards 01:24:084 (1) - take off NC?
01:27:011 (1) - ^

Great mapset! Good luck on ranking ^_^
kosiga

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:084 (4,1) - overlap here looks better not stack here ==
00:36:157 (5,6,1) - that plays very confusing, try this good. ok~ change it

00:44:755 (1) - use a finish here? sorry, no finish
01:11:096 (1) - clap here not clap
01:13:840 (1) - add finish Since it is a quiet part, this is not placed deliberately  :P
01:25:182 (5,1) - overlap if you did it for 00:09:084 (4,1)
thank you~ :)

http://puu.sh/1eBAr
Topic Starter
BCI
sorry again, don't remember what was fixed.. anyway updated ^^
Lally
HI~ Req in game~
~because friendship is moe~

[General]
Hmm i dunno if actualy is a problem or not but
easy finish at 01:28:291
normal at 01:29:389
and hard at 01:29:298

[Easy]

00:31:035 (x) - add a circle here
00:31:401 (1) - remove nc here
00:32:499 (2) - new combo here
00:44:572 (1) - you can do a better blanket with this slider :V

00:57:011 (x) - add a circle here or add a reversearrow slider from 00:56:645


[Normal]
00:19:328 (x) - circle here (?)
00:31:401 (1) - stalk end of this slider with 00:29:572 (5)
00:32:133 (2) - stalk this with this one 00:29:938 (6)
00:35:060 (1,2,3,4) - what about a 2 little slider here (?)

00:38:352 (2,3) - what do you think about a little slider here

[Hard]
00:13:474 (4,5) - stalk this two

01:28:291 (1,2,3,4) - what is this ò3ò ; what about to change this to a spinner that start from 01:28:291 and finish 01:29:389 + volume 5%
if you decide to keep what you did stalk better che circles to the slider

[★Stars★]
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Topic Starter
BCI

Lally wrote:

HI~ Req in game~
~because friendship is moe~ nya~

[Easy]
00:31:401 (1) - remove nc here
00:32:499 (2) - new combo here < ^ but why? D:
everything i didn't mention was fixed. thanks for stars Lally-nyan ^^'
mintong89
hi~

you requested taiko diff is finish: http://puu.sh/1loK0 ;)
Topic Starter
BCI
thanks ^^ gonna call some ppl for bg and muzu~
Flask
Hi BCI :3 Mod Request via In-Game PM

[General]
  1. You need muzu...nah you know it.
[Easy]
  1. 00:32:865 (1,2) - What's wrong on spacing D:?
  2. 01:26:279 (2) - If you're making a blanket, I'll suggest you to put on x:244,y:108. That's more blanket I think. Don't forget to fix the spacing on the following objects if you except it (:
    Seems really awesome.
[kosiga's Normal]
  1. meh, fine.
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:474 (4) - It would be great if you use 1/2 slider. I don't here any sound on the blue tick o3o
  2. 01:13:109 (7,8,1) - Maybe use the same spacing? 1.0 > 1.0 > 0.6 is weird D;
  3. 01:26:462 (3) - You can clap at the begin to instead clap on the third tick (there's nothing on the third tick D;)
[/list]

Awesome. Take my star!
Good luck BCI u3u!
Topic Starter
BCI

Flask wrote:

Hi BCI :3 Mod Request via In-Game PM \o

[General]
  1. You need muzu...nah you know it. Stefan is doing it atmi hope
[Easy]
  1. 00:32:865 (1,2) - What's wrong on spacing D:? idk owo
  2. 01:26:279 (2) - If you're making a blanket, I'll suggest you to put on x:244,y:108. That's more blanket I think. Don't forget to fix the spacing on the following objects if you except it (: not following these x/y but remade the slider
    Seems really awesome. wow thanks
[Hard]
  1. 01:26:462 (3) - You can clap at the begin to instead clap on the third tick (there's nothing on the third tick D;) ..added at the end of 01:25:913 (2) - owo /misunderstood
[/list]

Awesome. Take my star!
Good luck BCI u3u! big-big thanks for mod and star ;;|
NewRulerNA
hi

[General]
  1. Why do you make you transparent sliderscorepoint?
    I think this is unnecessary. should remove it.
  2. BG.jpg is 1.3MB. This is a large waste.
  3. offset may be early. but can not suggest it. I am not good at checking about it....sorry
[Easy]
  1. 00:11:645 (4,1) - not like this flow.
    I suggest this. this flow makes more natural flow.
  2. 00:21:157 (3) - add NC
    Consistent with 00:16:767 (1) -
  3. 00:28:474 (3) - ^
[kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:06:340 - 音量がそれ以前のnoteと比較して小さく、私はそれに違和感を感じました
    70%のほうが曲にも音量変化的にも合います
  2. 00:12:194 - ^
  3. 00:14:480 - 緑線を00:14:663に移動
    00:14:572 - のヒットサウンドはnormalのほうが曲に合います
  4. 00:35:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ダブルスタックを使用した配置は初心者を混乱させます
    この配置はDSに沿って置くだけでは(3,4)以降のタイミングが見切りにくく、初心者には大きな難易度を持ちます
    00:35:060 - 00:35:609 - にそれぞれ1/2スライダーを起き、その影響を無くす配置を私は提案します
  5. 00:36:615 - 不必要な緑線
  6. 00:51:157 (2) - この難易度はボーカルをフォローした音取りが多いです
    ですがこの箇所はボーカルを十分にフォローすることができていません
    私はこれを1/2前の00:50:974 - に置くほうがボーカルをフォローできると思いました
  7. 00:52:255 (4) - ^
    1/2後の00:52:438 - への移動を提案
  8. 01:03:962 (6) - ^
    1/2後の01:04:145 - への移動を提案
  9. 01:16:035 (4) - このターン数の異なる短いスライダーが一貫性を持っておらず、プレイヤーを混乱させる可能性があるように思えました
    こだわりがないならば1/2スライダーを2つ使用した音取りの方が無難で良いと思います
[Hard]
  1. AR+1
    I think AR7 is low. any note
  2. 000:15:304 (1) - I felt strange rhythm of this note. Many of the rhythm of this difficulty has been covering the vocal, but this note does not follow vocal.
    I would suggest this slider move to 00:15:121.
  3. 00:22:255 (1,2,3) - ^ suggesion of rhythem.

    00:22:255 - add circle
    00:22:438 - add 1/1 slider
    00:22:987 - ^
    00:23:535 - add circle
  4. 00:34:328 (1) - same as 000:15:304 (1)
  5. 00:39:267 (3,4,5,6,7) - I dont like this placement. felt coarse....
    00:39:633 (5,6,7) - move to x:412 y:220, and adjust 00:39:724 (6,7)
  6. 00:57:743 (4) - same as 000:15:304 (1)
  7. 01:06:523 (5) - ^
Placement is good. but this diff have problem about rhythm.

[mint's Taiko]
  1. 01:29:389 - remove this green line. not hear hit sound the influence of this.

gl
kosiga
SPOILER

Lally wrote:

[Normal]
00:19:328 (x) - circle here (?)
00:31:401 (1) - stalk end of this slider with 00:29:572 (5)
00:32:133 (2) - stalk this with this one 00:29:938 (6)
00:35:060 (1,2,3,4) - what about a 2 little slider here (?)

00:38:352 (2,3) - what do you think about a little slider here

sorry..no change my part ><

SPOILER

NewRulerNA wrote:

[kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:06:340 - 音量がそれ以前のnoteと比較して小さく、私はそれに違和感を感じました ok. fixed~
    70%のほうが曲にも音量変化的にも合います
  2. 00:12:194 - ^ ^
  3. 00:14:480 - 緑線を00:14:663に移動 NCで合わせて音変えたかったのですが、normalの方がやはり合うようなのでchange
    00:14:572 - のヒットサウンドはnormalのほうが曲に合います
  4. 00:35:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ダブルスタックを使用した配置は初心者を混乱させます
    この配置はDSに沿って置くだけでは(3,4)以降のタイミングが見切りにくく、初心者には大きな難易度を持ちます
    00:35:060 - 00:35:609 - にそれぞれ1/2スライダーを起き、その影響を無くす配置を私は提案します 私的には許容範囲内。少し様子見ます :3
  5. 00:36:615 - 不必要な緑線 fixed
  6. 00:51:157 (2) - この難易度はボーカルをフォローした音取りが多いです
    ですがこの箇所はボーカルを十分にフォローすることができていません
    私はこれを1/2前の00:50:974 - に置くほうがボーカルをフォローできると思いました vocalだけをフォローすると少しリズムが取りにくく感じるのと、勢いが弱くなると思ったのでno change
  7. 00:52:255 (4) - ^ ^
    1/2後の00:52:438 - への移動を提案
  8. 01:03:962 (6) - ^ ^
    1/2後の01:04:145 - への移動を提案
  9. 01:16:035 (4) - このターン数の異なる短いスライダーが一貫性を持っておらず、プレイヤーを混乱させる可能性があるように思えました
    こだわりがないならば1/2スライダーを2つ使用した音取りの方が無難で良いと思います ここはスライダー2個使うよりも1個のスライダーを使ったほうがまとまりが付くと思いこれを使っています。 保留でMAT/BAT次第で変更します ><

thank you~ :)

http://puu.sh/1lVD6
Topic Starter
BCI
removed one nc in easy and some rhytmn suggestions in hard. thanks for mod~
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. Need 1 more taiko diff but I'm sure others already mention it Good
[Eays]
  1. 00:10:913 (3) - copy/paste from 2 and ctrl+h,j
  2. 00:30:304 (4) - NC?
  3. 00:43:840 (4) - clap
  4. 00:47:499 (1) - hope you would make perfect slider for something like this
  5. 01:01:401 (2) - why not just copy/paste from 1?
  6. 01:25:365 (1) - 1 or 2grid up for better blanket
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:060 (1,2,3,4) - combine as 1/2 sliders?
  2. 01:19:328 (3,4) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:035 (3,4) - ctrl+g

Really nice map~
Good luck with rank~
Topic Starter
BCI
fixed all except one NC (removed at another place) thanks ^^'
Tshemmp
[General]
  1. Offset +10 maybe? I am not quite sure, maybe ask someone else about the timing.
  2. reversearrow.png is so inconspicuous, I missed the very first repeat because I didn't notice it. I am bit tired though, maybe that is the reason ^_^
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:119 (3) - maybe use a different shape for this? Right know it is the same as 00:28:484 (1,2,3,4) although they shouldn't be similar (the music doesn't sound as if these parts should be connected).
Great diff, I really like your mapping style, I really do.

[kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:21:157 (3) - I suggest shortening it with ctrl+shift+s 0,80x. This way it would fit the music better. Because right now the repeat is mapped on nothing, it is just there and doesn't really fit. If you do this then you can add circles at 00:22:987 and 00:23:352 or something else, idk.
  2. 00:32:865 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:913 (5) - ^ but with 0,667x. Again I cannot hear what the repeat is mapped to.
  4. 00:50:974 - this beat is very strong imo, I feel something should be mapped here.
  5. 01:16:035 (4) - I don't like double repeats, I think they are too surprising if they aren't used frequently.
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:328 (2) - could be better:
    192,128,4328,2,0,B|160:160|160:200|168:248|216:272,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 00:44:572 (1) - I think ctrl+g would be better since 00:42:743 (3,4,5,1) will form a nice bow then. Right now it goes a bit against the flow. You will have to rearrange 00:46:035 (2,3,1) though.
Great mapset, there is really nothing to improve here. Star.
Topic Starter
BCI

Tshemmp wrote:

[General]
  1. reversearrow.png is so inconspicuous, I missed the very first repeat because I didn't notice it. I am bit tired though, maybe that is the reason ^_^ specially found inconspicuous repeat, because i didn't like repeats at all lol
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:119 (3) - maybe use a different shape for this? Right know it is the same as 00:28:484 (1,2,3,4) although they shouldn't be similar (the music doesn't sound as if these parts should be connected). urghm misunderstood. atleast ctrl+g this slider
other was fixd for me. big thanks for mod and star~
SC-DrawerX3
Reqest from My Modding Queue!

[Hard]

The Jumps are too big for the slider velo imo

Nothing else, nice map! :3

[kosiga's Normal]

00:35:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - those stacks are stealing the flow :c
00:44:765 (1) - remove clap
01:05:801 add note to keep rythm and flow
01:06:533 ^
01:16:045 (4) - multiple reverse can easyly confuse

[Easy]

Maybe add the clapsound as Tick so u don't have to break the claprythm all the time.

00:00:680 (1) - remove clap


Good luck! :3
Topic Starter
BCI

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

[Hard]

The Jumps are too big for the slider velo imo a bit of challenge, also i can pass the map and flow is saved. don't worry, go and play ranked version then.

[Easy]

Maybe add the clapsound as Tick so u don't have to break the claprythm all the time. there will be alot of timing sections ;; gonna change it if says another modder
clap was fixed. thanks ^^
Pagliaccio
nyan~

Modding via in-game PM, you know, what to do \:D/

BTW

[mint's Taiko]


I strongly recommend you use only normal hitsounds sampleset and keep 70-80% loud, 'cuz it confused players when changing. However, it's only suggestion.

Mabye try to add some finish notes?...

---------------------------------------------

Hope I help you, BCI-nyan~
Topic Starter
BCI

Pagliaccio wrote:

Hope I help you, BCI-nyan~ of course~
too lazy to put log here (XATs if you want to denied call me and i give you a log) owo

thanks for mod, updated~
Stefan
Ohshi-- there was something.. ;w;

Gonna make it done today, I p-promise it!
Topic Starter
BCI
take as much time as you need, don't worry [123124345325412321434] :3
ConanCloud
I am a fan of this song and i like your beatmap. The skin is good and the spinners are perfect, but only 1 or 2? I think more spinners are better.
Last question: Can you make a ctb difficult? :)
Topic Starter
BCI
i like the spinners, but in this song its got ninja'd. (auto got less points than can be in beatmap going for rank)
i really can't because idk how to map this owo maay~be i ask someone. thanks for positive feedback~ с:

dat new page
riffy
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OD -1 к спиннерам? \:D/

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Topic Starter
BCI
lol u mad
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