jonathanlfj wrote:

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00:09:084 (4,1) - overlap here looks better not stack here ==
00:36:157 (5,6,1) - that plays very confusing, try this good. ok~ change it

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00:44:755 (1) - use a finish here? sorry, no finish
01:11:096 (1) - clap here not clap
01:13:840 (1) - add finish Since it is a quiet part, this is not placed deliberately　
01:25:182 (5,1) - overlap if you did it for 00:09:084 (4,1)

Lally wrote:

HI~ Req in game~
~because friendship is moe~ nya~

[Easy]
00:31:401 (1) - remove nc here
00:32:499 (2) - new combo here < ^ but why? D:

1. You need muzu...nah you know it.

1. 00:32:865 (1,2) - What's wrong on spacing D:?
2. 01:26:279 (2) - If you're making a blanket, I'll suggest you to put on x:244,y:108. That's more blanket I think. Don't forget to fix the spacing on the following objects if you except it (:
   Seems really awesome.

1. meh, fine.

1. 00:13:474 (4) - It would be great if you use 1/2 slider. I don't here any sound on the blue tick o3o
2. 01:13:109 (7,8,1) - Maybe use the same spacing? 1.0 > 1.0 > 0.6 is weird D;
3. 01:26:462 (3) - You can clap at the begin to instead clap on the third tick (there's nothing on the third tick D;)

Flask wrote:

Hi BCI :3 Mod Request via In-Game PM \o

[General]

1. You need muzu...nah you know it. Stefan is doing it atmi hope

[Easy]

1. 00:32:865 (1,2) - What's wrong on spacing D:? idk owo
2. 01:26:279 (2) - If you're making a blanket, I'll suggest you to put on x:244,y:108. That's more blanket I think. Don't forget to fix the spacing on the following objects if you except it (: not following these x/y but remade the slider
   Seems really awesome. wow thanks

[Hard]

1. 01:26:462 (3) - You can clap at the begin to instead clap on the third tick (there's nothing on the third tick D;) ..added at the end of 01:25:913 (2) - owo /misunderstood

[/list]

Awesome. Take my star!
Good luck BCI u3u! big-big thanks for mod and star ;;|

1. Why do you make you transparent sliderscorepoint?
   I think this is unnecessary. should remove it.
2. BG.jpg is 1.3MB. This is a large waste.
3. offset may be early. but can not suggest it. I am not good at checking about it....sorry

1. 00:11:645 (4,1) - not like this flow.
   
   
   I suggest this. this flow makes more natural flow.
2. 00:21:157 (3) - add NC
   Consistent with 00:16:767 (1) -
3. 00:28:474 (3) - ^

1. 00:06:340 - 音量がそれ以前のnoteと比較して小さく、私はそれに違和感を感じました
   70%のほうが曲にも音量変化的にも合います
2. 00:12:194 - ^
3. 00:14:480 - 緑線を00:14:663に移動
   00:14:572 - のヒットサウンドはnormalのほうが曲に合います
4. 00:35:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ダブルスタックを使用した配置は初心者を混乱させます
   この配置はDSに沿って置くだけでは(3,4)以降のタイミングが見切りにくく、初心者には大きな難易度を持ちます
   00:35:060 - 00:35:609 - にそれぞれ1/2スライダーを起き、その影響を無くす配置を私は提案します
5. 00:36:615 - 不必要な緑線
6. 00:51:157 (2) - この難易度はボーカルをフォローした音取りが多いです
   ですがこの箇所はボーカルを十分にフォローすることができていません
   私はこれを1/2前の00:50:974 - に置くほうがボーカルをフォローできると思いました
7. 00:52:255 (4) - ^
   1/2後の00:52:438 - への移動を提案
8. 01:03:962 (6) - ^
   1/2後の01:04:145 - への移動を提案
9. 01:16:035 (4) - このターン数の異なる短いスライダーが一貫性を持っておらず、プレイヤーを混乱させる可能性があるように思えました
   こだわりがないならば1/2スライダーを2つ使用した音取りの方が無難で良いと思います

1. AR+1
   I think AR7 is low. any note
2. 000:15:304 (1) - I felt strange rhythm of this note. Many of the rhythm of this difficulty has been covering the vocal, but this note does not follow vocal.
   I would suggest this slider move to 00:15:121.
3. 00:22:255 (1,2,3) - ^ suggesion of rhythem.
   
   00:22:255 - add circle
   00:22:438 - add 1/1 slider
   00:22:987 - ^
   00:23:535 - add circle
4. 00:34:328 (1) - same as 000:15:304 (1)
5. 00:39:267 (3,4,5,6,7) - I dont like this placement. felt coarse....
   00:39:633 (5,6,7) - move to x:412 y:220, and adjust 00:39:724 (6,7)
6. 00:57:743 (4) - same as 000:15:304 (1)
7. 01:06:523 (5) - ^

1. 01:29:389 - remove this green line. not hear hit sound the influence of this.

1. Need 1 more taiko diff but I'm sure others already mention it Good

1. 00:10:913 (3) - copy/paste from 2 and ctrl+h,j
2. 00:30:304 (4) - NC?
3. 00:43:840 (4) - clap
4. 00:47:499 (1) - hope you would make perfect slider for something like this
5. 01:01:401 (2) - why not just copy/paste from 1?
6. 01:25:365 (1) - 1 or 2grid up for better blanket

1. 00:35:060 (1,2,3,4) - combine as 1/2 sliders?
2. 01:19:328 (3,4) - ^

1. 00:01:035 (3,4) - ctrl+g

1. Offset +10 maybe? I am not quite sure, maybe ask someone else about the timing.
2. reversearrow.png is so inconspicuous, I missed the very first repeat because I didn't notice it. I am bit tired though, maybe that is the reason ^_^

1. 00:28:119 (3) - maybe use a different shape for this? Right know it is the same as 00:28:484 (1,2,3,4) although they shouldn't be similar (the music doesn't sound as if these parts should be connected).

1. 00:21:157 (3) - I suggest shortening it with ctrl+shift+s 0,80x. This way it would fit the music better. Because right now the repeat is mapped on nothing, it is just there and doesn't really fit. If you do this then you can add circles at 00:22:987 and 00:23:352 or something else, idk.
2. 00:32:865 (4) - ^
3. 00:40:913 (5) - ^ but with 0,667x. Again I cannot hear what the repeat is mapped to.
4. 00:50:974 - this beat is very strong imo, I feel something should be mapped here.
5. 01:16:035 (4) - I don't like double repeats, I think they are too surprising if they aren't used frequently.

1. 00:04:328 (2) - could be better:
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   192,128,4328,2,0,B|160:160|160:200|168:248|216:272,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:44:572 (1) - I think ctrl+g would be better since 00:42:743 (3,4,5,1) will form a nice bow then. Right now it goes a bit against the flow. You will have to rearrange 00:46:035 (2,3,1) though.

Tshemmp wrote:

[General]

1. reversearrow.png is so inconspicuous, I missed the very first repeat because I didn't notice it. I am bit tired though, maybe that is the reason ^_^ specially found inconspicuous repeat, because i didn't like repeats at all lol

[Hard]

1. 00:28:119 (3) - maybe use a different shape for this? Right know it is the same as 00:28:484 (1,2,3,4) although they shouldn't be similar (the music doesn't sound as if these parts should be connected). urghm misunderstood. atleast ctrl+g this slider

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

[Hard]

The Jumps are too big for the slider velo imo a bit of challenge, also i can pass the map and flow is saved. don't worry, go and play ranked version then.

[Easy]

Maybe add the clapsound as Tick so u don't have to break the claprythm all the time. there will be alot of timing sections ;; gonna change it if says another modder

Pagliaccio wrote:

Hope I help you, BCI-nyan~ of course~

1. Offset +12ms. 680ms seems too early.
2. Please add some words to taiko diff.
   

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   General and Metadata
   
   Inconsistency in Tags:
   - [Easy] : chiffon brownie defstar records opening op2 kosiga bci mintong89 stefan thenutritiousguy tng
   - [Hard] : chiffon brownie defstar records opening op2 kosiga bci mintong89 stefan thenutritiousguy tng
   - [kosiga's Normal] : chiffon brownie defstar records opening op2 kosiga bci mintong89 stefan thenutritiousguy tng
   - [mint's Taiko] : chiffon brownie defstar records opening op2 kosiga bci mintong89

• 00:51:533 (2) - Hmm...when this circle appears, it's covered with a hitburst of previous circle and it may cause to newbie players missing this note.
  Consider to move this circle to other place.
  00:51:899 (3) - Up side down? it flows well imo.
  01:28:301 (1) - Hm, I don't know it's rankable or not, but I want to say no to this. So suddenly slider reduce it's speed and it will cause mistake easily for newbie players. What do you feel if you were cut your combo at the last note? I recommend you to remove this 0.5x line.

• 00:26:289 - add note　繋ぎのノリが良い所なので、切られるとちょっと抜けた感じがしました。
  00:44:765 (1) - 1/2遅らせて00:44:948 (1)から始めたほうが拍としてもいいかなと思いますし、スライダーが終わってから回し始める感じがちゃんとするので落ち着いてスピナーに移れると思います。現状でも問題ありませんがスライダーが終わった直後から回せてしまうので、ちょっと急かされてる感じがします。
  01:05:984 (3) - このスライダーの音取りは十分理解できますが、前後に開いた空間が少し大きくリズムが不安定になる気がしました。01:05:801 にノートを追加するとかなり印象が変わると思うのですがどうでしょう。
  01:11:106 (1) - ここはスピナーをこのような形で置いてしまうより、他のノートで曲をfollowした方が合っている気がします。
  01:14:948 - 01:15:679 - 音が極端に少なく、寂しい感じがします。また、01:16:045 (4) に1/2で音が入っている為少し浮いてしまっている感じがするので、これらの部分に音を追加した方がいいと思います。

• 00:05:801 (8) - I prefer to do ctrl+G to this note. You see, when we hit 00:05:070 (6,7), the cursor will go upward. So it's natural for me to make a rainbow flow like this.
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  00:39:826 (7) - When I see this slider first time, I couldn't understand where this slider will start and go immediately. How about to use the same form of 00:41:106 (10)?
  01:16:960 (1,2,3) - How about to make a triangle with these notes more clearly?
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Stefan wrote:

Durrr, I also planned to map this. orz

Star Stream wrote:

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1. 00:35:060 (1,2,3,4) - combine as 1/2 sliders?
2. 01:19:328 (3,4) - ^

no change ==

Tshemmp wrote:

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[kosiga's Normal]

1. 00:21:157 (3) - I suggest shortening it with ctrl+shift+s 0,80x. This way it would fit the music better. Because right now the repeat is mapped on nothing, it is just there and doesn't really fit. If you do this then you can add circles at 00:22:987 and 00:23:352 or something else, idk. I do not think that this is really not fit. I reconsider that I change it if feel that other people do not really fit
2. 00:32:865 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:913 (5) - ^ but with 0,667x. Again I cannot hear what the repeat is mapped to. ^
4. 00:50:974 - this beat is very strong imo, I feel something should be mapped here. I do not think it is very ==;
5. 01:16:035 (4) - I don't like double repeats, I think they are too surprising if they aren't used frequently. The use of the double repeat does not have a problem for normal. I do not think that this is extreme. In this regard, I wait to hear an opinion of MAT/BAT

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

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[kosiga's Normal]
00:35:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - those stacks are stealing the flow :c what do you mean o.o?
00:44:765 (1) - remove clap no change
01:05:801 add note to keep rythm and flow ok. added
01:06:533 ^ no change
01:16:045 (4) - multiple reverse can easyly confuse refer to mod above

h-728 wrote:

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[kosiga's Normal]

• 00:26:289 - add note　繋ぎのノリが良い所なので、切られるとちょっと抜けた感じがしました。 00:25:935 (5) - のfinish音で止めていますので、私的には問題ないかなと
  00:44:765 (1) - 1/2遅らせて00:44:948 (1)から始めたほうが拍としてもいいかなと思いますし、スライダーが終わってから回し始める感じがちゃんとするので落ち着いてスピナーに移れると思います。現状でも問題ありませんがスライダーが終わった直後から回せてしまうので、ちょっと急かされてる感じがします。 スピナーを遅らせますとvocalの伸びに少し合わないかなと感じます。スピナー自体も長めなのでこのままでも特に問題ないかなと
  01:05:984 (3) - このスライダーの音取りは十分理解できますが、前後に開いた空間が少し大きくリズムが不安定になる気がしました。01:05:801 にノートを追加するとかなり印象が変わると思うのですがどうでしょう。 good :3 changed~
  01:11:106 (1) - ここはスピナーをこのような形で置いてしまうより、他のノートで曲をfollowした方が合っている気がします。 note置いた方がリズム的には良くなりますが、スピナー後のリズム変更に合わせスピナーで調整しております故、今回はこのままでいきたいと思っております。>_<
  01:14:948 - 01:15:679 - 音が極端に少なく、寂しい感じがします。また、01:16:045 (4) に1/2で音が入っている為少し浮いてしまっている感じがするので、これらの部分に音を追加した方がいいと思います。^

thank you~

and >Black_Cherry_Ita sorry, for late

http://puu.sh/1t1tw

1. Honestly, I broke my combo several times just because of that repeat arrow. It is barely visible due to changed hitcircle and messy BG. Make it more disintiguishable please, all game elements must be clearly readable, that's an obvious rule.
2. AIBat is clear o:

1. 00:07:643 (4) - This flow feels like too cutted. It could be better imo to place the circle like that:
   
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2. 00:08:557 (8) - This rather looks like a spacing error than a jump. Place it here for a better look:
   
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3. 00:22:277 (1) - 00:39:838 (7) - 00:47:155 (9) - 01:12:033 (4) - 01:16:423 (10) - These sliders end at a downbeat and miss an important sound at their middle. These all sliders miss a vocal and a bass/drum sound at once, so cut them to 1/2 and place a circle afterwards, this will make rhythm a bit better and also add a bit of variety since you use "too much" 1/1 sliders in most of that sections.
4. 00:23:740 (4) - Honestly, it looks like placed too far from prev. slider. Move it a bit.
5. 00:32:887 (1) - till 00:38:374 (7) - This section feels like... too circular? I just move the cursor across the circle and all sliders compliment it and... It looks boring. I think you should add a bit of alternating, variety, so try to curve 00:35:813 (1) - and/or 00:37:094 (4) - in different direction.
6. 00:45:143 (2) - Maybe encircle last slider end with this?
7. 00:45:143 (2,3,4,5) - This looks like a spacing error, I mean 2-3, they are too far away from each other. Make a proper rhomb there please.
8. 00:42:216 (2,3) - These are placed too close.
9. Actually, I can't understand your spinners' purpose. Why are they placed at the places they are? Song doesn't change at all there, well... I'd remove spinners and would map all that parts.
10. 00:54:289 (3,4) - Their ends almost touch, place them at least at standard 1.1x distance.
11. 00:54:655 (4,5,6) - And also this, 4 and 5 are far closer to each other than 5 and 6, so a bit redo spacing in this part to make it neater please.
12. 01:05:813 (3) - It would be nice to copy (2)'s shape here and Ctrl+HJ it.
13. 01:25:204 (4) - 2 grids left for a better spacing pls.
14. 01:28:496 - Please move spinner's start to THIS point and add a circle at 01:28:313. 01:28:313 lacks of emphasizement, really. There is a loud guitar note there, but you don't have to press anything, that's strange.
15. 01:29:320 - Last drum is at this blue tick, so maybe end the spinner here, like I did?

1. 00:26:484 - Move the circle here, for a vocal sound.
2. 00:26:850 - And probably move slider start here or add a circle at this point, but compliment this vocal too please.
3. 00:35:082 - I'd like to remove this note. It will sound better to place notes on two similar snares only at 00:34:716 and 00:35:265 and will be better played for a Normal diff imo. That extra note there doesn't sound fine for me, small bass doesn't worth emphasizement here, especially when you follow mostly vocals here.
4. 00:42:765 (2) - Move this to 00:42:582, vocal lands there.
5. 01:16:057 (4) - This was quite unexpected. I can't say how many reverses are there while playing. Divide this into two sliders or into one repeating and a circle.
6. 01:16:423 - And add a clap here.
7. 01:29:320 - Same as Hard, end the slider at this point, where drums end.

1. 00:13:862 (2) - Fix this slightly wrong spacing.
2. 00:46:423 (3) - Such a stack can be "wtf" for beginner players, better make something prettier like:
   
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3. 00:54:472 (1,2) - Well.. Vocal is so strong here, so I think you can forget about your "white-tick-style" here and place this slider at 00:54:289-, and move next slider's start to 00:55:387 - but leave it's end at 00:56:301 as before. This fits vocal better, but it's up to you if you want to use red ticks.
4. 01:00:326 (3,1,2) - Same here. Move everything 1/2 earlier except of last slider's end:
   
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5. 01:05:996 (5,1) - Same action here.
6. 01:10:387 (5,1,2,3) - Same here.
7. 01:29:320 - Again, end the slider here, as in Hard.

1. 00:35:082 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - This was the only part that felt strange I think. I can't hear almost anything at 00:35:996. Move this note to 00:36:362.
2. Also parts like this 00:47:155 (56,57,58,59) - were too hard for me. kat triple and then big don is asdfasdkjfa. But maybe that's just me too noob, so don't mind.
3. 01:29:320 - I'd also suggest to place last note here as in all previous diffs, but lol, that would be quite hard to hit.

1. 00:50:448 (4) - Try a kat here, it sounds like a good start for kiai c:
2. 01:14:228 (1,2,1) - From here, try one interesting pattern: guitar sound is repeating here, so strictly repeating drums would fit too I guess. Try this: (added dons at 01:14:685 and 01:15:417)
   
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3. Also if you change stuff above, would be good to make contrast my removing 01:16:515 (2) -