Soul Eater <3
[General]
Good Luck!
[General]
- Huh...shouldn't the maximum res of the comboburst be 500x767? Well,the actual one is 499x768... It's just a pixel,but it's anyway suggested to resize it at 500x767.
- 00:03:962 - Add a note here to start the phrase by following the drum here as you did on the following patterns? You could blanket it with 00:04:328 (1) - by adding it at x:272 y:192. Your choice,though
- 00:12:743 (1,2) - Honestly,I think that the flow here could be continued in a better way. What about instead on modifying the pattern in this way? It flows actually way more natural than before,imho.SPOILERAlso,as you can crearly hear a drum being played at 00:12:743 (1) - ,you should add a clap on both the top and the end of this slider to make it follow properly those drums.
32,308,12743,6,0,B|64:356|124:368|184:340,1,160,0|0
I modified 00:16:035 (1) - 's position to fix the spacing too,but if you want you can modify them in the way you want
248,296,13840,2,0,B|298:272|358:284|390:332,2,160,8|8|4
356,156,16035,5,8 - 00:15:304 - Why are you using a normal finish here? A soft one (not custom!) fits much better within the part being quiet :<
- 00:47:499 (3) - A new combo should be added here to follow the vocals properly
- 00:54:084 (4) - What about moving it 1/1 before? As there is a drum being played there,it fits really good! (and you did the same on the other patterns,so ^^)
- 01:10:913 (1) - You forgot to add a clap at the beginning of this slider (remove the clap on 01:11:645 (2) - if you do this!)
- 00:15:121 - As I said in the easy diff,you should change this as a soft hitsound inherited section (not custom!) to make the finish play much more better here.
- 00:19:694 (1,2,3) - What about using a vocal based rhythm like this? This is pretty good and varies the rhythm a bit :3
- 00:32:865 (4) - Same as above
- 01:19:877 - Add a note here? As i see,the phrase starts better here,and fits better within the instrumentals!
That's all. Talking about flow,this map is really solid and fells really good to play. Good job!
- 00:05:791 (8) - What about using claps on the end and the repeat of this slider,as kosiga did in his diff? They fit really well to start a new phrase here! :3
- 00:08:718 (9) - CTRL+R here? That's a pretty much a subjective thing,and you might not agree with this,but as now imho this flows better by doing so,and the jump created with 00:09:267 (1) - fits quite well! Also,what about adding a clap here to make the sound consistent with 00:07:987 (7) - ?
- 00:14:206 (6,7,8) - What about creating a triplet stacked under the slider? It follows pretty good the drums that are being played,and it isn't that difficult to play.
- 00:31:401 (1) - That's a very little aestetical thing,but anyway you should make it just like 00:32:133 (3) - : it looks pretty good as it's linked with 00:32:133 (3) - and blankets 00:31:950 (2) - in a better way than the first wave-slider!SPOILER
100,60,31401,6,0,B|122:75|150:71|150:71|188:38|231:46,1,140,8|2
- 00:32:682 (4) - NC here to delimitate a new vocal phase?
- 00:47:133 (8) - Please,consider shortening this 1/2 or deleting this and creating a new note at 00:47:316 - ,maybe with adding another note at 00:47:499 - . Why? Because that 1/1 slider,even id it follows the guitar well,does really fit strange again because of the vocals. I think that following both the parts would solve this problem.
Good Luck!